YODHA
"Engage your brain before you engage your weapon.”
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First of all congratulations Cosimo bhai for new story.
story is so good its just start but your grip on language is so good and hope it get better as story proceed.
stories plot based on fantasy, sci-fi, and super powers, and magic which I personally don't like. But unlike other fantasy story on this forum you have created some good dramatic and interesting scenes and conversation between character in these two Updates which took my interest.
It seems that many such things have happened in the past due to which the family members are rude towards AHAN. I think we get to know the reason soon when ISHANA will tell JUHI.
keep it up bhai.
waiting for another fabulous update.
story is so good its just start but your grip on language is so good and hope it get better as story proceed.
stories plot based on fantasy, sci-fi, and super powers, and magic which I personally don't like. But unlike other fantasy story on this forum you have created some good dramatic and interesting scenes and conversation between character in these two Updates which took my interest.
It seems that many such things have happened in the past due to which the family members are rude towards AHAN. I think we get to know the reason soon when ISHANA will tell JUHI.
keep it up bhai.
waiting for another fabulous update.
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