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Thank you so much bro.Writer ji apne update to mast aur woh 10 min ka suspense bhi rakha jisme raj ki mako gussa aay hai aur kyoki raj ki maa Monty se pyar karne karne lagi hai to uski jealous feel ho raha hai mujhe to abhi aise lag raha hai raj ki maa chudai karne ke liye raji ho jayengi jub raj ghar pe nahi hoga to
Ek aur plot me thoda change kiya jaye to gaav me kya chal raha hai matlab Monty ke Ghar, bade papa ki ghar pe jaise apne family intro diya tha kyuki har ek character important hota hai story me agar hero ke upar hi focus rahega to story ki jo jaan hai wahi ghum ho jayengi
Agar aap ko meri comment ka bura laga hai to tahe dil se mafi chahta hu
Apka reader
For compliment
I'll try make it lots of good