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Fantasy DAIVIK -- God of The Universe
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story ka first update aaj 3 se 4 ke bich post hoga
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INTRODUCTION
AMRIT CHAUHAN-FATHER OF HEROANJALI CHAUHAN - MOTHER OF HERO
SIMRAN CHAUHAN (SIMMI) -HERO KI BADI BAHAN.
DAIVIK CHAUHAN -HERO
ANANYA CHAUHAN (ANNU)-HERO KI CHHOTI BAHAN .
OTHER CHARACTER
SURYA PRATAP SINGH -AMRIT KE BACHPAN KA DOST
PALAK PRATAP SINGH -SURYA KI PATNI
RAJ PRATAP SINGH-SURYA KA BARA BETA
PUJA PRATAP SINGH-RAJ KI JUDWA BAHAN
BHARATENDU PRATAP SINGH-SURYA KA DUSRA BETA
NISHA PRATAP SINGH(HEROIN)-SURYA KI SABSE CHHOTI BETI
AGE OF SOME CHARACTER
SIMRAN (SIMMI)-20 YEAR
DAIVIK- 19 YEAR
ANANYA (ANNU) -18 YEAR
RAJ-21 YEAR
PUJA -21 YEAR
BHARATENDU- 19 YEAR
NISHA-18 YEAR
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Mere teenon story
Raj--king off time and dimension
Bharatendu-- creator of solar system time and dimension
And and
Daivik--God of the universe
Ke sabhi character lagbhag same hai
But mai readers ko yah batana Chahta Hu ki in teenon story ke concept alag-alag hai.
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Chauhan villa
Mumbai shahar mein sthit ek Ghar dur se hi dekhne par pata chal raha tha ki yahan Kisi jasn ki taiyari ho rahi hai. Pure Chauhan villa koi itne Bhavy tarike se Sjaya gaya tha ki shahar ke har EK news channel per Uske Hain charcha bane hue the.
In sabhi baton ko yahan chhore ham chalte Hain Chauhan villa ke andar jahan per ek mahila sabhi naukaro se kuchh baten kar rahe thi
Mahila -main tum logon ko kaha hai ki aaj ghar ka pura khana mein banaungi. Aaj mera beta 13 Saal baad Apne Ghar laut raha hai aaj main usse Apne haathon se hi khilaungi.
Tabhi sidhiyon ke upar se ek vyakti niche utarta hai aur us mahila se Kahata hai
Vyakti-Anjali tumhe jo karna hai karo lekin jaldi karo hamare bete ke aane ka time ho gaya hai .
Tabhi vahan per ek ladki aati Hain aur kahati hai
Ladki-papa abhi tak bhaiya kyon Nahin Aaye.
Vyakti-beta main to khud use laane Jana Chahta tha lekin Guruji ne Kaha tha ki vah khud b khud ho jaega.
Ab tak aap logon ko pata chal hi Gaya hoga. Ki yah Mera parivar hai. Vah vyakti aur koi nahin mere pita aur mahila meri Mata aur jo ladki hai vah meri chhoti behan hai
Vahi dusri taraf
Gurukul
Main is waqt Apne gurudev ke samne Hain aur gurudev mujhe kuchh baten bata rahe the
Gurudev-daivik pratigya karo ki tumne yahan jo bhi sikha hai uska upyog Kabhi burai ke liye Nahin karoge
Main- gurudev mein pratigya karta hoon ki main apni Kisi bhi Shakti ka prayog burai ke liye Nahin karunga.
Aaj main 13 salo baad Apne ghar jaane wala tha mujhe Ghar pahunch ne ki jitni Khushi thi usse jyada garm yahan se jaane ka tha maine gurudev ko Kabhi bhi Apne pita se Kabhi Nahin samjha tha aur unhone bhi hamesha mujhe Apne bacche ki tarah hi samjha tha.
Thodi der baad gurudev mere liye kuchh kapre lekar aate Hain aur kahate Hain ise jakar pahan lo main jab vah kapde pehan kar dobara gurudev ke pass aata hu to gurudev mujhe kuchh paise aur ek mobile dete Hain tatha kahate Hain tumhen iski ki insan duniya mein bahut jarurat padegi. Thodi der ke bad ham log gurukul se bida Hoga Apne Ghar ki aur nikal padte Hain. Main apni Shakti Ka prayog Nahin Karke ek ek cab ko book kar usse apne ghar jaane ke liye nikal pada. Abhi main apne ghar ke pass pahuncha hi tha ki mere mobile per ek call aata hai.
Main call uthata Hun Tu samne se awaaz aata hai
Dev 2 Apne Ghar pahunch gaya
Main is awaaz ko acchi Tarah pahchan tha yah mere gurukul ke hi ek dost bharatendu ki thi
Main -tujhe mera number kahan se mila aur to pahunch Gaya.
Wo-abhi thodi der pahle hi pahuncha hun main gurukul se nikalte samay gurudev se tumhara number mang liya tha.
Khair ISI Tarah hamari kuchh baten hoti hain aur FIR call disconnect ho jata hai.
Thodi thodi der ke bad main Apne Ghar pahunch Hu.
Jab main Apne Ghar ke andar ja raha tha tab mujhe vahan bachpan mein batai baten yad aane lagti hai main Kahan khela karta tha kahan shrarte karta tha aise hi bahut sari baten yad Karke meri aankhon mein Khushi ke aansu aa jaate Hain main abhi yahi Soch Raha tha ki koi daurkar mere gale lag jata hai. Main jab uski taraf dhyan Diya to vah meri chhoti bahan thi.
Main main uske sar par hath fera aur uske sath Ghar ke andar jaane lage tabhi Maine Dekha ki maa Aarti ki thali liye gait ke andar khadi thi.
Unhone meri Aarti utari Uske bare main maa aur papa ko pranam Kiya. Thodi der ke bare mein apni bahan ke sath Apne kamre mein Chala Gaya
Chauhan villa
Mumbai shahar mein sthit ek Ghar dur se hi dekhne par pata chal raha tha ki yahan Kisi jasn ki taiyari ho rahi hai. Pure Chauhan villa koi itne Bhavy tarike se Sjaya gaya tha ki shahar ke har EK news channel per Uske Hain charcha bane hue the.
In sabhi baton ko yahan chhore ham chalte Hain Chauhan villa ke andar jahan per ek mahila sabhi naukaro se kuchh baten kar rahe thi
Mahila -main tum logon ko kaha hai ki aaj ghar ka pura khana mein banaungi. Aaj mera beta 13 Saal baad Apne Ghar laut raha hai aaj main usse Apne haathon se hi khilaungi.
Tabhi sidhiyon ke upar se ek vyakti niche utarta hai aur us mahila se Kahata hai
Vyakti-Anjali tumhe jo karna hai karo lekin jaldi karo hamare bete ke aane ka time ho gaya hai .
Tabhi vahan per ek ladki aati Hain aur kahati hai
Ladki-papa abhi tak bhaiya kyon Nahin Aaye.
Vyakti-beta main to khud use laane Jana Chahta tha lekin Guruji ne Kaha tha ki vah khud b khud ho jaega.
Ab tak aap logon ko pata chal hi Gaya hoga. Ki yah Mera parivar hai. Vah vyakti aur koi nahin mere pita aur mahila meri Mata aur jo ladki hai vah meri chhoti behan hai
Vahi dusri taraf
Gurukul
Main is waqt Apne gurudev ke samne Hain aur gurudev mujhe kuchh baten bata rahe the
Gurudev-daivik pratigya karo ki tumne yahan jo bhi sikha hai uska upyog Kabhi burai ke liye Nahin karoge
Main- gurudev mein pratigya karta hoon ki main apni Kisi bhi Shakti ka prayog burai ke liye Nahin karunga.
Aaj main 13 salo baad Apne ghar jaane wala tha mujhe Ghar pahunch ne ki jitni Khushi thi usse jyada garm yahan se jaane ka tha maine gurudev ko Kabhi bhi Apne pita se Kabhi Nahin samjha tha aur unhone bhi hamesha mujhe Apne bacche ki tarah hi samjha tha.
Thodi der baad gurudev mere liye kuchh kapre lekar aate Hain aur kahate Hain ise jakar pahan lo main jab vah kapde pehan kar dobara gurudev ke pass aata hu to gurudev mujhe kuchh paise aur ek mobile dete Hain tatha kahate Hain tumhen iski ki insan duniya mein bahut jarurat padegi. Thodi der ke bad ham log gurukul se bida Hoga Apne Ghar ki aur nikal padte Hain. Main apni Shakti Ka prayog Nahin Karke ek ek cab ko book kar usse apne ghar jaane ke liye nikal pada. Abhi main apne ghar ke pass pahuncha hi tha ki mere mobile per ek call aata hai.
Main call uthata Hun Tu samne se awaaz aata hai
Dev 2 Apne Ghar pahunch gaya
Main is awaaz ko acchi Tarah pahchan tha yah mere gurukul ke hi ek dost bharatendu ki thi
Main -tujhe mera number kahan se mila aur to pahunch Gaya.
Wo-abhi thodi der pahle hi pahuncha hun main gurukul se nikalte samay gurudev se tumhara number mang liya tha.
Khair ISI Tarah hamari kuchh baten hoti hain aur FIR call disconnect ho jata hai.
Thodi thodi der ke bad main Apne Ghar pahunch Hu.
Jab main Apne Ghar ke andar ja raha tha tab mujhe vahan bachpan mein batai baten yad aane lagti hai main Kahan khela karta tha kahan shrarte karta tha aise hi bahut sari baten yad Karke meri aankhon mein Khushi ke aansu aa jaate Hain main abhi yahi Soch Raha tha ki koi daurkar mere gale lag jata hai. Main jab uski taraf dhyan Diya to vah meri chhoti bahan thi.
Main main uske sar par hath fera aur uske sath Ghar ke andar jaane lage tabhi Maine Dekha ki maa Aarti ki thali liye gait ke andar khadi thi.
Unhone meri Aarti utari Uske bare main maa aur papa ko pranam Kiya. Thodi der ke bare mein apni bahan ke sath Apne kamre mein Chala Gaya
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Shayad kuch readers ko first update thoda boring lage
I un readers Se yah kahana chahta hun ki story thodi bhi boring nahin hai thode time present mein main chalne ke bad 4th and 5th update se story flashback mein jayegi tab aapko is story ka concept pata chal jaega ki daivik kaun hai hai aur uska janm kyon hua hai
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Main readers ko yah batana chahta hun ki aapko yah story meri pichli story Raj-- king of time and dimension Bharatendu -- creator of solar system time and dimension
Se jyada Pasand aaegi
Aapke reply aur Rai Ka intezar
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