Incest Damad bana meri biwi ka Saiyya

[prkin]

Har story main first wali repeat Hoti hai

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[pankajvijaygupta]

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Ho gya hai

 

[prkin]

Ho gya hai

✌

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

ye hone wala damad aur hone wali saas kareeb kaise aaye ki undergarments tak ki shopping tak pahunch gaye?

 

[pankajvijaygupta]

Done

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

Done

Achcha likhte ho yaar, par koi kahani adhuri mat choda karo, you are liked by readers and they expect you to finish the story, it seems that you stop because you feel it is becoming a repetition of what you wrote earlier. then give a pause on your thoughts, re read your story and you will find ways to make it look a fresh. try it am sure you will never leave any story incomplete.

 

[pankajvijaygupta]

Jab wo aa gye main Chah kr bhi Kuch bol Nahi paya bajah
Sunanda kehti main uski jasusi kr Raha hu

Mere Kuch samajh Nahi aa Raha tha

Karib 3 ghante aur shopping ki aur ladki wale apne Ghar aur hum apne Ghar

The to dono he same

Ghar aate aate Karib 7 baj gye the phir sub thak gye the to bahar SE he dinner order Kiya aur apne room main zaldi aa gye

Par room main aa kr bhi sunanda mobile par busy thi chatting main

Aur muskura Rahi thi

Aur thodi Der main undergarments Ka bag le kr bathroom main chali gai
.aur Jaise he bathroom Ka darwaja band hua Maine uska mobile check kiya to wo prabash SE BAAT kr Rahi thi

Aur prabash ne usse undergarments try krne ko Bola tha

Aur jab uski chat padhi ko daily ki chats thi jis din SE prabash ko Dekha tha


Main hairan tha ki ek anjan aadmi Jo abhi damad Bana Nahi hai sunanda usse itni chat kr Rahi thi Jaise prabash ki shadi Kanika SE Nahi sunanda SE hone wali t
Hai .

Tabhi bathroom ke darwaje ke khulne ki awaz aai to Maine uska mobile Rakh Diya

Aur let gya

Sunanda ne mujhe awaz Di to Maine Jawab Nahi Diya to sunanda ne Kisi ko call ki

Sunanda ha do ek dum fit hai par ek change krni padegi

To iska matlab abhi bhi sunanda prabash SE baat kr Rahi thi

Kafi Der wo hu ha main BAAT krti Rahi aur mujhe pata Nahi kab nind aa gai

Agli subah Kanika sunanda SE bol Rahi thi ki prabash ko Kuch shopping krni hai
To ap chali jao mujhe Kuch zaruri kaam hai

Main Kanika ki BAAT sun kr

Tumhe Jana Chahiye Uske sath

Kanika dad main busy hu
Mom ap pls .

Sunanda sure beti
Aur Uske chehre par muskan thi iska matlab ye prabash aur sunanda ki planning thi..

Karib 1 ghante baad prabash car se Aaya aur bahar SE he horn bajaya to sunanda ready thi apne damad Ke sath Jane ke liye..




AJ usne suit pehna tha sayad apne ap ko prabash ki age SE match krna chahati thi

Prabash bahar SE sunanda ko le kr Chala gya

Aur Maine pehle he plan kr liya tha taxi meri bahar he khadi thi road par to main zaldi SE baitha usne aur unki car ke piche piche
.aur wo log wahi pahuche haha hum ne kal shopping ki thi

Main samajh gya ki Kam ye prabash SE baat kr Rahi ki ek set Chota hai to ye dono ussi ko change krne Aaye honge

 

[pankajvijaygupta]

Achcha likhte ho yaar, par koi kahani adhuri mat choda karo, you are liked by readers and they expect you to finish the story, it seems that you stop because you feel it is becoming a repetition of what you wrote earlier. then give a pause on your thoughts, re read your story and you will find ways to make it look a fresh. try it am sure you will never leave any story incomplete.

Thanks for your suggestions dost
As always

 

[Harshini]

Jab wo aa gye main Chah kr bhi Kuch bol Nahi paya bajah
Sunanda kehti main uski jasusi kr Raha hu

Mere Kuch samajh Nahi aa Raha tha

Karib 3 ghante aur shopping ki aur ladki wale apne Ghar aur hum apne Ghar

The to dono he same

Ghar aate aate Karib 7 baj gye the phir sub thak gye the to bahar SE he dinner order Kiya aur apne room main zaldi aa gye

Par room main aa kr bhi sunanda mobile par busy thi chatting main

Aur muskura Rahi thi

Aur thodi Der main undergarments Ka bag le kr bathroom main chali gai
.aur Jaise he bathroom Ka darwaja band hua Maine uska mobile check kiya to wo prabash SE BAAT kr Rahi thi

Aur prabash ne usse undergarments try krne ko Bola tha

Aur jab uski chat padhi ko daily ki chats thi jis din SE prabash ko Dekha tha


Main hairan tha ki ek anjan aadmi Jo abhi damad Bana Nahi hai sunanda usse itni chat kr Rahi thi Jaise prabash ki shadi Kanika SE Nahi sunanda SE hone wali t
Hai .

Tabhi bathroom ke darwaje ke khulne ki awaz aai to Maine uska mobile Rakh Diya

Aur let gya

Sunanda ne mujhe awaz Di to Maine Jawab Nahi Diya to sunanda ne Kisi ko call ki

Sunanda ha do ek dum fit hai par ek change krni padegi

To iska matlab abhi bhi sunanda prabash SE baat kr Rahi thi

Kafi Der wo hu ha main BAAT krti Rahi aur mujhe pata Nahi kab nind aa gai

Agli subah Kanika sunanda SE bol Rahi thi ki prabash ko Kuch shopping krni hai
To ap chali jao mujhe Kuch zaruri kaam hai

Main Kanika ki BAAT sun kr

Tumhe Jana Chahiye Uske sath

Kanika dad main busy hu
Mom ap pls .

Sunanda sure beti
Aur Uske chehre par muskan thi iska matlab ye prabash aur sunanda ki planning thi..

Karib 1 ghante baad prabash car se Aaya aur bahar SE he horn bajaya to sunanda ready thi apne damad Ke sath Jane ke liye..




AJ usne suit pehna tha sayad apne ap ko prabash ki age SE match krna chahati thi

Prabash bahar SE sunanda ko le kr Chala gya

Aur Maine pehle he plan kr liya tha taxi meri bahar he khadi thi road par to main zaldi SE baitha usne aur unki car ke piche piche
.aur wo log wahi pahuche haha hum ne kal shopping ki thi

Main samajh gya ki Kam ye prabash SE baat kr Rahi ki ek set Chota hai to ye dono ussi ko change krne Aaye honge

 

[Harshini]

Jab wo aa gye main Chah kr bhi Kuch bol Nahi paya bajah
Sunanda kehti main uski jasusi kr Raha hu

Mere Kuch samajh Nahi aa Raha tha

Karib 3 ghante aur shopping ki aur ladki wale apne Ghar aur hum apne Ghar

The to dono he same

Ghar aate aate Karib 7 baj gye the phir sub thak gye the to bahar SE he dinner order Kiya aur apne room main zaldi aa gye

Par room main aa kr bhi sunanda mobile par busy thi chatting main

Aur muskura Rahi thi

Aur thodi Der main undergarments Ka bag le kr bathroom main chali gai
.aur Jaise he bathroom Ka darwaja band hua Maine uska mobile check kiya to wo prabash SE BAAT kr Rahi thi

Aur prabash ne usse undergarments try krne ko Bola tha

Aur jab uski chat padhi ko daily ki chats thi jis din SE prabash ko Dekha tha


Main hairan tha ki ek anjan aadmi Jo abhi damad Bana Nahi hai sunanda usse itni chat kr Rahi thi Jaise prabash ki shadi Kanika SE Nahi sunanda SE hone wali t
Hai .

Tabhi bathroom ke darwaje ke khulne ki awaz aai to Maine uska mobile Rakh Diya

Aur let gya

Sunanda ne mujhe awaz Di to Maine Jawab Nahi Diya to sunanda ne Kisi ko call ki

Sunanda ha do ek dum fit hai par ek change krni padegi

To iska matlab abhi bhi sunanda prabash SE baat kr Rahi thi

Kafi Der wo hu ha main BAAT krti Rahi aur mujhe pata Nahi kab nind aa gai

Agli subah Kanika sunanda SE bol Rahi thi ki prabash ko Kuch shopping krni hai
To ap chali jao mujhe Kuch zaruri kaam hai

Main Kanika ki BAAT sun kr

Tumhe Jana Chahiye Uske sath

Kanika dad main busy hu
Mom ap pls .

Sunanda sure beti
Aur Uske chehre par muskan thi iska matlab ye prabash aur sunanda ki planning thi..

Karib 1 ghante baad prabash car se Aaya aur bahar SE he horn bajaya to sunanda ready thi apne damad Ke sath Jane ke liye..




AJ usne suit pehna tha sayad apne ap ko prabash ki age SE match krna chahati thi

Prabash bahar SE sunanda ko le kr Chala gya

Aur Maine pehle he plan kr liya tha taxi meri bahar he khadi thi road par to main zaldi SE baitha usne aur unki car ke piche piche
.aur wo log wahi pahuche haha hum ne kal shopping ki thi

Main samajh gya ki Kam ye prabash SE baat kr Rahi ki ek set Chota hai to ye dono ussi ko change krne Aaye honge

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