Fantasy DARD

[Rahat200]

nice update..!!
bahot hi emotional update tha..noor ammi toh mar gayi hai aur noor ke abbu ne reyansh se wada manga hai ki reyansh noor se shaadi kar le aur hamesha noor ke sath rahe..waise noor toh reyansh se pyaar karti hai toh usse kuchh problem nahi hogi..aur reyansh ko bhi noor ke liye feelings thi lekin usne daba ke rakhi thi toh woh bhi noor se pyaar ka ijhar kar dega aur apna wada jarur nibhayega..lekin shaadi karne se pehle reyansh ko noor ko sara sach batana chahiye apni zindagi ke bare me..uske sath uske gharwalo ne kya kiya..fir usko pyaar me kaise dhoka mila..aur woh kya hai matlab uski shaktiya..aur russia me kya kiya hai usne..fir ella aur ivy bhi uske sath zindagi bhar rahengi..kyunki noor ka yeh sab janane ka haq hai..aur noor bhi reyansh ko samajh legi aur ella aur ivy ko bhi..ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai..!!

Very nice update thanks
Waiting for next

 

[Dark.King]

Emotional and nice Update

 

[Vipul]

Update -26​

Ye bol reyansh un dono ko lekar us car me baith gya .

Aabbb aaaggggeee.........

Mujhe kuch kuch andaza tha ki Michael kya bolne wala tha. Mujhe bas chinta iss baat ki thi ki agar usne ella aur ivy ke samne mujhe kuch bol diya to uska kya haal hoga.

Khair kuch hi der me hum waha pohoch gye. Michael ka headquarter .mai ella aur ivy car se utar kar sidha Michael ke office me chale gye Michael samne chair pe baitha tha kafi khauf me aur shayad mera hi intezaar kar rha tha .

Michael : (chillate hue ) ye tumne kyaa kar diya reyansh maine tumhe sirf ek base khatm karne ko kaha tha par tumne...

Wo bolte gye mere karib aa rha tha jo ivy or ella ko katai bardasht nhi tha .isliye ivy ne sidha uske main part pe laat de mari wo bechara wahi niche baith gya dard ke karan.

Ivy : himmat kaise hui inke karib bhi ane ki.
Ella : agli baar aisa hua to tumhe iski kimat apni jaan dekar chukani hogi.
Mai : (Michael ki aur dekhte hue ) tum bhul rahe ho ki mai kisi ke orders nhi leta. Ivy jane do use.
Michael : mere hi base pe hoke mujhse hi dushmani mol lena chahte ho.
Mai : Michael Michael.. Tum bhul rahe ho mai abhi kuch din pehle pura west command destroy karke aya hu aur tum mujhe dhamki de rahe ho..

(third person's perspective)
Michael ko ye sab baate yaad ate hi uske pasine chutne lagte hai .

Michael : dekho reyansh tum aisa nhi kar sakte maine tumhari madad.
Reyansh : to iske badle maine bhi to tumhara itna bada kaam kiya hai.
Michael : sidha sidha bolo tum kya chahte ho.
Ella : ab ki na mudde ki baat to suno..
Ivy : hume chahiye ek ready made clothes company jiska market me pehle se hi accha naam ho with 1000+ crore turnover per year.
Reyansh : sun liya.
Michael : but ye sab itna asan nhi hai.
Reyansh : ye sab tumhari problem hai. Waise bhi ye sab tumhare liye itna bhi mushkil nhi hai after all now you own the whole west command of Russia.
Michael : deal. 5 din me sab set ho jayega.
Ella : we hope so par agar aisa nhi hua to tum jante hi ho ke aage kya hoga...
Reyansh : let's go now , we have lot work today.

Michael ko jhatka deke Reyansh or dono hasinaye nikal chuki thi reyansh ke flat ki aor.

Aiye tabtak chalte hai noor sahiba ki aur.....

Noor reyansh ke Moscow jane ke baad kuch shant si rehne lagi thi. Jab bhi wo reyansh ko call karti use koi jawab nhi milta . Use ab reyansh ki kaami bohot jada khal rhi thi. Use iss tarah shant rehta dekh ek din us ke abbu ne usse puch hi liya.
Abbu : kya baat hai aaj kal hamari beti bohot shant shant rehti hai??
Noor : nhi abbu aisi koi baat nhi hai bas tabiyat kuch kharab hai iss liye...
Abbu : kamse kam khudse to jhut mat bolo mujhe pata hai tum reyansh ko pasand karti ho aur uski yaad me aisi ban baithi ho. Use aa jane do to mai usse uske aur tumhare nigah ki baat karta hu.

Ye baat sunte hi jaise noor ke pet me titliya udne lagi. Uske safed gaal surkh gulabi ho gye aur sharm ke mare wo waha se bhaag gyi.

Agle din noor ke ammi aur abbu ko kisi kaam se dusre sheher jana tha. Noor bhi unke sath jane ki zidd kar rhi thi.

Noor : mujhe bhi aap ke sath jana hai. Mai yaha akele bore ho jaungi .
Abbu : ye kya bachcho ki tarah zid kar rahi ho noor hum kal subeh hi laut aayenge.
Ammi : ha beta tum tab tak tum apne abbu ke gair haziri me hospital ka kaam sambhalo.
Noor : (bujhe man se) thik hai ammi.
Ammi : (noor ke sar pe hath ferte hue) meri samajhdaar beti.
Abbu : chalo beta ab hum nikalte hai.

Ye bol noor ke ammi abbu nikal gye apni manzil ki aur ab ghar me akeli noor hi bachi thi to time pass karne ke liye tv dekhne baith gyi .
Abhi noor ke ammi abbu ko gye sirf 3 ghante hi hue the ki noor ke phone ki ghanti bajne lagi jo uske abbu ka tha . Noor ne phone uthaya aur jo usne suna wo sunke uske rongte khade ho gye aur akhon me asu umad aaye.
(call)
Noor : hello abbu aap pohoch gye kya.
Unknown : kya aap noor baat kar rhi
Hai.
Noor : ha par aap kon aur aap hamare abbu ke phone ke sath kya kar rhe hai.
Unknown : ji mai empire mall ke samne se guzar raha tha toh paya ki ek car ki bhidant ek truck se ho gyi. Mai waha ke halat dekhne pohocha to paya app ke abbu aur ammi khun se sarabor the toh maine inka phone liya ispe pehela number aapka tha to aap ko hi call kardi.

Ye sunne ke baad to noor ke pairo ne uska jaise sath hi chod diya wo niche gir gyi aur jor jor se rone lagi.

Unknown : aap jaldi se yaha aa jaiye mai tab tak ambulance ko call karta hu.
Aur call cut ho gya.

Noor ko kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha ki wo kya kre aur kya nhi wo bas jor jor se roye ja rhi thi. Use ye bhi samajh nhi aa rha tha ki wo ab kisse madad mange kyuki abhi uski manodasha kuch thik nhi thi. Tabhi uske dil me sirf ek hi naam aya jisse wo madad mang skti thi aur wo tha " REYANSH" . Usne turant phone uthaya aur reyansh ka number dial kar diya aur uperwale se prathna krne lagi ki reyansh phone utha le.

Reyansh ki taraf

Iss waqt reyansh couch pe baitha kuch soch rha tha ella aur ivy kitchen me khana bna rhi thi .tabhi reyansh ka phone baj utha usne phone dekha to noor ka phone tha jisse dekh kar reyansh ke chehre pe halki muskurahat aa gyi. Usne call uthayi.
Reyansh : hello Noor kaisi ho.
Noor roote /siskte hue) RRReyansh wo... Wo.....
Reyansh : (chinta me) kya hua noor kyu ro rhi ho.
Noor : Reyansh wo abbu ammii........

Ye bol ke noor phur jor jor se rone lagi. Reyansh is wajah se kafi pareshan ho gya..

Reyansh : (thoda serious tone me) noor pehele rona band karo aur thik tarah se batao kya hua hai.
Noor : (khud ko thoda sambhal ke ) reyansh wo wo ammi abbu ka accident ho gya hai empire mall ke samne mujhe kuch samajh nhi aa rha hai ki mai kya karoo.

Ye sunke reyansh bhi ek pal ko shant pad gya kyuki noor ke ammi abbu ne reyansh ko bohot apnapan diya tha. Phir reyansh normal ho kar bola.

Reyansh : noor shant ho jao mai bas 2 min me aya.

Ye bol ke reyansh ne phone rakh diya . Ella aur ivy kitchen se ye sab sun rhi thi phone rakhte hi dono reyansh ke samne aa gyi aur pochne lagi.

Ella : kya hua bohot pareshan lag rhe ho.
Reyansh : noor ka phone tha Uske Ammi Abbu ka accident Ho Gaya hai mujhe abhi jana hoga.
Ivy : Ham bhi Chalte Hain.
Reyansh : nahin tum Yahi ruko main Dekh Kar Aata hun .

Yah bol kar reyansh ne car ki keys uthai aur nikal Pada Noor Ke Ghar Ki aur. Raste Bhar Priyansh ko sirf Noor ki fikra ho rahi thi.
Reyansh full speed mein drive karte hue Noor Ke Ghar Ki or ja raha tha. Karib 5 min me reyansh noor ke ghar pohoch gya.
Phir reyansh Ne Noor ke ghar ka darvaja khatkhataya. Jaise hi darvaja Khula Noor bhagate Hue reyansh ke Gale Lag Gai aur jor jor se rone lagi.
Reyansh : Noor yah Rone ka Waqt Nahin Hai Hamen pahle jakar Tumhare Abbu ko Bachana hoga isliye Rona band karo aur jaldi se gadi mein baitho.
Noor : hhhaan jaldi chalo.
Yah Bolkar noor reyansh ke gadi Mein baith gai. Reyansh bhi gadi Mein Aakar baith Gaya aur gadi Aage Badha D.
Reyansh : tumhare abbu ka accident kaha hua tha.
Noor : (sisakte hue) empire mall ke samne.

phir Reyansh ne Bina Kuchh Bole gadi Empire Mall ke aage dauda Di. Kareeb 10 minut bad Reyansh Aur Noor Empire Mall ke aage pahunch gaye. Jahan unhone Kafi Bheed Jama Dekhi. Reyansh Aur Noor jaldi se car se utare aur Bheed ko hatate Hue Aage badhane Lage. Bheed hatane ke bad Jab Noor aur reyansh vahan pahunche to Samne ka Manjar dekh ke noor Zameen Pe Gir Padi.

Samne Noor ke Ammi Abbu Khoon Se Latpat Jameen per Pade hue the Jise Noor dekh na Saki aur Vahi per behosh ho gai.
Reyansh Noor ko girta dekh Uske Taraf bhaga aur apni Bahon Mein pakadkar Wapas car mein Bithakar Noor ke ammi Abbu ke paas gya aur bari bari dono ko utha kar car me le aya aur car sidha sabse paas wale hospital ki aur badha di.
Jald hi reyansh hospital pohoch gaya aur do stretchers le kar noor ko ammi abbu ko uspar leta diya aur noor ko apni bahon me liye counter tak aa gya aur receptionist se bola.
Reyansh : sister inhen jaldi se ICU Mein shift kar dijiye yah Ek urgent case hai.

Receptionist ne ek nazar noor ke ammi abbu pe dali aur boli.

Receptionist : sorry but dekhne me ek police case lagta hai to hum isme kuch nhi kar sakte.
Reyansh : ye kaisi befkoofi wali baate kar rhi ho sister yaha do log mar rahe hai aur aapko police case ki padi hai.
Receptionist : sorry sir but ye hospital ke rules hai .
Reyansh : yaha ke main in charge se mai baat karta hoon tab tak aap inhe ICU me shift kare. Aur agar ab na bola to ye aap ke liye acha nhi hoga.

Nurse ne sirf haan me gardan hila di kyuki. Reyansh ne last line kafi gusse me nurse ke ser pe gun tante hue kahi thi aur reyansh ki aakhen kafi had tak kali thi tab.

Aaj ke liye itna hi .......

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[Bhupinder Singh]

Update - 27​

Nurse ne sirf haan me gardan hila di kyuki. Reyansh ne last line kafi gusse me nurse ke ser pe gun tante hue kahi thi aur reyansh ki aakhen kafi had tak kali thi tab.

Abbb aaagggeee.......

Reyansh ki iss pratikriya ke baad doctor ne jaldi se Noor ke ammi abbu ko ICU me shift karwaya uske baad reyansh ne nurse se kaha.

Reyansh : sorry for my this type of behavior. Par situation hi kuch aisi thi ki ye sab ho gaya. Again my apologies for what happened.
Nurse : it's ok i understand.
Reyansh : ab please aap inhe check kar dijiye. (apni bahon me leti noor ke taraf ishara karte hue)
Nurse : ji aap unhe room no 102 ke bed pe lita dijiye mai abhi aa kar check karti hu.

Reyansh ne bhi thik waise hi kiya aur noor ko room no 102 ke bed pe lita diya aur nurse ka wait karne laga. Thodi hi der me nurse apne equipment leke room me enter hui aur noor ko check karna start kiya. Jab usne check karliya to reyansh ne usse pucha.
Reyansh : ise kya hua hai nurse.
Nurse : inhe bohot bada sadma laga hai jinhe ye jhel nhi payi aur behosh ho gyi. Maine inhe injection de diya hai aur abhi glucose ki drip bhi laga di hai 1 ghante me inhe hosh ajaye ga.
Reyansh : thank you sister.
Nurse : it's our duty.

Ye bol ke nurse waha se chali gyi. Reyansh noor ke ser ke paas baith gaya aur uska ser sehelane laga aur khud se baate karne laga.

Reyansh : kyu? Akhir kyu aache logo ke sath hi aisa hota hai.
Reyansh ko noor ke liye bohot jada bura lag rha tha kyuki wo maa baap na hone ke dard se achchi tarah wakif tha aur nhi chahta tha ki noor bhi usi dard ka shikar ho. Phir reyansh utha aur ICU ward ki traf badh gaya jaha Noor ke abbu ka operation ho rha tha. Reyansh ICU ke saamne wale sofe pe baith gaya. Thodi der baad jab ek doctor ICU ward se bahar aya to Reyansh turant usje pass pohocha aur pucha.
Reyansh : doctor ander jo hai abhi unki halat kaisi hai.
Doctor : aap unke kyaa lagte hai .
Reyansh : (kuch sochte hue) ji mai unka beta hu.
Doctor : dekhiye aap unke bete hai iss liye aapse jhut nhi bol sakta. Unki halat bohot jada critical hai .unki condition abhi out of danger nhi hai .
Reyansh : (hath jodte hue) please doctor aap kisi bhi tarah unhe bacha lijiye. Paiso ki fikr mat kariyega aap jinte paise mangenge de dunga bas unhe bacha lijiye.
Doctor : dekhiye Mr. Reyansh hum apni tarf se puri koshish kar rhe hai baki uper wale ki marzi.

Ye bol ke wo doctor waha se chala gya. Reyansh ye sab sun kar waha bas butt sa ban gaya. Uske man me bas yhi chal raha tha ke agar noor ke ammi aabu ko kuch ho gaya to wo kya jawab dega noor ko kaise sambhalega use. Yahi sab sawal uske zehen me ghum rhe the.
Tabhi nurse bhagte hue Reyansh ke paas aayi.
Nurse : mr. Reyansh jiss ladki ko aap ne admit karaya tha use hosh aa gya hai aur jabse use hosh aya hai wo bas roye jaa rhi hai.
Reyansh : aap jaiye mai use dekhta hu.

Ye bol reyansh noor ke room ki taraf jane laga. Wo room me pohocha to dekha noor bed pe lash ki trah padi hui hai aur jor jor ammi abbu bolte hue roye jaa rhi hai. Ye dekh ke Reyansh ka dil pasijh gaya aur usne aage badh ke noor ko uthaya aur gale laga ke uski peeth sehlane laga. To noor ne khud ko chudaya aur reyansh ko khich ke ek jordar thappad laga diya.
Ccchhhaaakkkaaatttkk....
Noor : himmat kaisi hui tumhari mere ammi aabu ko wahi chod diya aur mujhe yaha hospital le aaye.

Reyansh ko iski umeed nhi thi phir bhi usne khud pe control kiya aur bola.
Reyansh : noor tum galat samjh rahi ho tum behosh thi isiliye tumhe kuch pata nhi mai unhe bhi hospital le aya tha unki halat critical thi iss liye unhe ICU me shift kiya hai. Tum behosh thi iss liye tumhe yaha le aya.

Yah sunkar Noot butt ban gai aur yah sab bolane ke bad reyansh Wapas Palat Gaya jaane ke liye per jaise hi reyansh Aage Badha
Noor Uske Pairon Ko Main Gir gai aur mafi mangne Lagi Ro Ro Kar.

Noor : Reyansh mujhe maaf kar do Maine Tumhen galat samajh liya. Jis Insan Ne Mere Ammi Abbu Ki jaan bachai Maine Use hi thappad Maar Diya. Main bahut Buri ho reyansh mujhe maaf kar do please mujhe maaf kar do.

Yah sab bolkar vah jor jor Se Khud Ko hi thappad Marne Lag. reyansh ne Uske Hath pakad kar khud ko thappad Marne se roka aur Gale Laga Liya aur bola.

Reyansh : look Noor it was just an misunderstanding so don't worry about it.
Ab ye rona band karo aur chalo tumhare ammi abbu ko dekh ke aate .

Reyansh ke ye bolte hi noor ne uska hath pakda aur khichte hue use ICU ki aur le jane lagi. Jab wo log ICU ke saamne pohoche to ICU ki red light abhi bhi jal rhi thi matlab operation abhi khatam nhi hua tha. ICU ke samne pohoch ke noor ne phir apna saiyam kho diya aur aakhon me aasun liye bad badane lagi.
Noor : aee mere khuda chahe to meri jaan lele par mere ammi abbu ko baksh de.
Reyansh : noor agar tum yu hi roti rhi to tumhari tabiyat phir kharab ho jayegi isliye ab rona band karo.
Noor : kitni bhi koshish karlu reyansh par ye asoon nikal hi aate hai.
Reyansh : agar tumhare ammi abbu tumhe yu rota hua dekhte to kya unhe acha lagta batao??

Ye sunkar noor chup ho gyi. Par phir bhi halke halke subak rhi thi. Reyansh noor ke sath jake sofe pe baith gya aur noor ka ser apni gaud me liye sehlane laga. Noor ko bhi isse kafi rahat mil rhi thi. Karib 40 min dono aise hi rahe na noor kuch boli na hi reyansh kuch bola. Ek ajib si khaamoshi thi dono ke beech me jise dono samajh nhi paa rahe the.

Achanak ICU ke ot ka light band ho gya aur doctors bahar aa gye . Noor aur reyansh doctors ke bahar aate hi unke paas gye aur apne sawal dagne shuru kar diye.
Noor : mere ammi abbu kaise hai? Wo thik to hai na? Mai unse kab mil paungi? Bataiye.
Reyansh : haa doctor bataiye hum unse kab mil sakte hai.
Doctor : ( apni gardan niche jhukate hue ) sorry to say but hum inki ammi ko nhi bacha paye aur inke abbu bhi kuch der ke hi mehman hai.
Noor (chikhte hue) : ye aap kya keh rehe hai doctor aisa nhi ho sakta mere ammi abbu mujhe choodke nhi ja sakte keh dijiye jhut hai.
Reyansh : (gusse se) ye aap kya keh rehe hai.
Doctor : dekhiye mujhpe chillane se kuch nhi hoga aur inke abbu inse akhri baar milna chahte hai to aap plz unse mil lijiye.

Ye aunte hi noor apne dono hath se apne aasun pochte hue ICU ward me apne abbu ke paas bhagi. Reyansh bhi uske piche piche chal gya. Noor aur reyansh ander pohoche to unhone dekha ander do beds the ek pe noor ki ammi ki dead body dhak ke rakhi hui thi aur dusre pe noor ke abbu gambhir halat me ukhadti hui chand sason ke sath lete hue the.
Noor apne abbu ko dekhte hi control khodi aur rote hue unke paas gyi.
Noor : ye sab kya ho gaya abbu. Humara hasta khelta pariwar bikhar gaya.
N abbu : (ukhadti sason ke sath) bbbbeta khuda ke kaam me ek aadmi kar hi kya sakta hai jaise aaj mera samay khatam ho gaya to mai ja rha hu. ..
Noor : (siskiya leke rote hue) plz abbu aap bhi mujhe chood ke mat jaiye plz ammi to ja chuki hai.
N abbu : beta kisi ke chale jane se zindagi nhi rukti. Mujhse wada karo ke mere jane ke baad tum mujhe aur apni ammi ko yaad karke rogi nhi balki hamare hath ki achi yaade yaad rakhogi aur muskuraogi ...wada karo beta .mere pass jada waqt nhi hai.
Noor : wada karti hue abbuuu..

Isse jada noor kuch bol na saki. Reyansh jo ek kone me bhigi palke liye khada tha uski aur dekhte hue noor ke abbu bole.
N abbu : Reyansh beta yaha aao.
Reyansh : ji uncle boliye.
N abbu : uncle nhi beta tum bhi abbu bolo tum bhi mere bete ki tarah ho.
Reyansh : ji abbu .
N abbu : beta ab mera akhri samay hai to mai tumse ek wada chahta hu aur tumhe ek zimedari saupna chahta hu.
Reyansh : kahiye abbu kya zimedari hai mai apna wada jaroor pura karunga ye ek RAJPUT ki zuban hai.
N abbu : beta mere jane ke baad meri beti ka hath thaam lena usse nikah kar lena aur use hamesha khush rakhna nhi to wo kgud ko sambhal nhi payegi. Bohot bholi aur nadan hai meri beti noor.

.........aaj ke liye itna hi.............

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Nice update

 

[Shahrukh]

Awesome update bhai keep posting

 

[Calm_777]

Agla update Wednesday ko aayega

 

[Calm_777]

nice update..!!
bahot hi emotional update tha..noor ammi toh mar gayi hai aur noor ke abbu ne reyansh se wada manga hai ki reyansh noor se shaadi kar le aur hamesha noor ke sath rahe..waise noor toh reyansh se pyaar karti hai toh usse kuchh problem nahi hogi..aur reyansh ko bhi noor ke liye feelings thi lekin usne daba ke rakhi thi toh woh bhi noor se pyaar ka ijhar kar dega aur apna wada jarur nibhayega..lekin shaadi karne se pehle reyansh ko noor ko sara sach batana chahiye apni zindagi ke bare me..uske sath uske gharwalo ne kya kiya..fir usko pyaar me kaise dhoka mila..aur woh kya hai matlab uski shaktiya..aur russia me kya kiya hai usne..fir ella aur ivy bhi uske sath zindagi bhar rahengi..kyunki noor ka yeh sab janane ka haq hai..aur noor bhi reyansh ko samajh legi aur ella aur ivy ko bhi..ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai..!!

Shukriya bhai.
Reyansh noor ko accept karega nhi ye to aage pata chalega. Reyansh to noor ki khushi chahta hai.

☝hint

 

[Naik]

Update -26​

Ye bol reyansh un dono ko lekar us car me baith gya .

Aabbb aaaggggeee.........

Mujhe kuch kuch andaza tha ki Michael kya bolne wala tha. Mujhe bas chinta iss baat ki thi ki agar usne ella aur ivy ke samne mujhe kuch bol diya to uska kya haal hoga.

Khair kuch hi der me hum waha pohoch gye. Michael ka headquarter .mai ella aur ivy car se utar kar sidha Michael ke office me chale gye Michael samne chair pe baitha tha kafi khauf me aur shayad mera hi intezaar kar rha tha .

Michael : (chillate hue ) ye tumne kyaa kar diya reyansh maine tumhe sirf ek base khatm karne ko kaha tha par tumne...

Wo bolte gye mere karib aa rha tha jo ivy or ella ko katai bardasht nhi tha .isliye ivy ne sidha uske main part pe laat de mari wo bechara wahi niche baith gya dard ke karan.

Ivy : himmat kaise hui inke karib bhi ane ki.
Ella : agli baar aisa hua to tumhe iski kimat apni jaan dekar chukani hogi.
Mai : (Michael ki aur dekhte hue ) tum bhul rahe ho ki mai kisi ke orders nhi leta. Ivy jane do use.
Michael : mere hi base pe hoke mujhse hi dushmani mol lena chahte ho.
Mai : Michael Michael.. Tum bhul rahe ho mai abhi kuch din pehle pura west command destroy karke aya hu aur tum mujhe dhamki de rahe ho..

(third person's perspective)
Michael ko ye sab baate yaad ate hi uske pasine chutne lagte hai .

Michael : dekho reyansh tum aisa nhi kar sakte maine tumhari madad.
Reyansh : to iske badle maine bhi to tumhara itna bada kaam kiya hai.
Michael : sidha sidha bolo tum kya chahte ho.
Ella : ab ki na mudde ki baat to suno..
Ivy : hume chahiye ek ready made clothes company jiska market me pehle se hi accha naam ho with 1000+ crore turnover per year.
Reyansh : sun liya.
Michael : but ye sab itna asan nhi hai.
Reyansh : ye sab tumhari problem hai. Waise bhi ye sab tumhare liye itna bhi mushkil nhi hai after all now you own the whole west command of Russia.
Michael : deal. 5 din me sab set ho jayega.
Ella : we hope so par agar aisa nhi hua to tum jante hi ho ke aage kya hoga...
Reyansh : let's go now , we have lot work today.

Michael ko jhatka deke Reyansh or dono hasinaye nikal chuki thi reyansh ke flat ki aor.

Aiye tabtak chalte hai noor sahiba ki aur.....

Noor reyansh ke Moscow jane ke baad kuch shant si rehne lagi thi. Jab bhi wo reyansh ko call karti use koi jawab nhi milta . Use ab reyansh ki kaami bohot jada khal rhi thi. Use iss tarah shant rehta dekh ek din us ke abbu ne usse puch hi liya.
Abbu : kya baat hai aaj kal hamari beti bohot shant shant rehti hai??
Noor : nhi abbu aisi koi baat nhi hai bas tabiyat kuch kharab hai iss liye...
Abbu : kamse kam khudse to jhut mat bolo mujhe pata hai tum reyansh ko pasand karti ho aur uski yaad me aisi ban baithi ho. Use aa jane do to mai usse uske aur tumhare nigah ki baat karta hu.

Ye baat sunte hi jaise noor ke pet me titliya udne lagi. Uske safed gaal surkh gulabi ho gye aur sharm ke mare wo waha se bhaag gyi.

Agle din noor ke ammi aur abbu ko kisi kaam se dusre sheher jana tha. Noor bhi unke sath jane ki zidd kar rhi thi.

Noor : mujhe bhi aap ke sath jana hai. Mai yaha akele bore ho jaungi .
Abbu : ye kya bachcho ki tarah zid kar rahi ho noor hum kal subeh hi laut aayenge.
Ammi : ha beta tum tab tak tum apne abbu ke gair haziri me hospital ka kaam sambhalo.
Noor : (bujhe man se) thik hai ammi.
Ammi : (noor ke sar pe hath ferte hue) meri samajhdaar beti.
Abbu : chalo beta ab hum nikalte hai.

Ye bol noor ke ammi abbu nikal gye apni manzil ki aur ab ghar me akeli noor hi bachi thi to time pass karne ke liye tv dekhne baith gyi .
Abhi noor ke ammi abbu ko gye sirf 3 ghante hi hue the ki noor ke phone ki ghanti bajne lagi jo uske abbu ka tha . Noor ne phone uthaya aur jo usne suna wo sunke uske rongte khade ho gye aur akhon me asu umad aaye.
(call)
Noor : hello abbu aap pohoch gye kya.
Unknown : kya aap noor baat kar rhi
Hai.
Noor : ha par aap kon aur aap hamare abbu ke phone ke sath kya kar rhe hai.
Unknown : ji mai empire mall ke samne se guzar raha tha toh paya ki ek car ki bhidant ek truck se ho gyi. Mai waha ke halat dekhne pohocha to paya app ke abbu aur ammi khun se sarabor the toh maine inka phone liya ispe pehela number aapka tha to aap ko hi call kardi.

Ye sunne ke baad to noor ke pairo ne uska jaise sath hi chod diya wo niche gir gyi aur jor jor se rone lagi.

Unknown : aap jaldi se yaha aa jaiye mai tab tak ambulance ko call karta hu.
Aur call cut ho gya.

Noor ko kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha ki wo kya kre aur kya nhi wo bas jor jor se roye ja rhi thi. Use ye bhi samajh nhi aa rha tha ki wo ab kisse madad mange kyuki abhi uski manodasha kuch thik nhi thi. Tabhi uske dil me sirf ek hi naam aya jisse wo madad mang skti thi aur wo tha " REYANSH" . Usne turant phone uthaya aur reyansh ka number dial kar diya aur uperwale se prathna krne lagi ki reyansh phone utha le.

Reyansh ki taraf

Iss waqt reyansh couch pe baitha kuch soch rha tha ella aur ivy kitchen me khana bna rhi thi .tabhi reyansh ka phone baj utha usne phone dekha to noor ka phone tha jisse dekh kar reyansh ke chehre pe halki muskurahat aa gyi. Usne call uthayi.
Reyansh : hello Noor kaisi ho.
Noor roote /siskte hue) RRReyansh wo... Wo.....
Reyansh : (chinta me) kya hua noor kyu ro rhi ho.
Noor : Reyansh wo abbu ammii........

Ye bol ke noor phur jor jor se rone lagi. Reyansh is wajah se kafi pareshan ho gya..

Reyansh : (thoda serious tone me) noor pehele rona band karo aur thik tarah se batao kya hua hai.
Noor : (khud ko thoda sambhal ke ) reyansh wo wo ammi abbu ka accident ho gya hai empire mall ke samne mujhe kuch samajh nhi aa rha hai ki mai kya karoo.

Ye sunke reyansh bhi ek pal ko shant pad gya kyuki noor ke ammi abbu ne reyansh ko bohot apnapan diya tha. Phir reyansh normal ho kar bola.

Reyansh : noor shant ho jao mai bas 2 min me aya.

Ye bol ke reyansh ne phone rakh diya . Ella aur ivy kitchen se ye sab sun rhi thi phone rakhte hi dono reyansh ke samne aa gyi aur pochne lagi.

Ella : kya hua bohot pareshan lag rhe ho.
Reyansh : noor ka phone tha Uske Ammi Abbu ka accident Ho Gaya hai mujhe abhi jana hoga.
Ivy : Ham bhi Chalte Hain.
Reyansh : nahin tum Yahi ruko main Dekh Kar Aata hun .

Yah bol kar reyansh ne car ki keys uthai aur nikal Pada Noor Ke Ghar Ki aur. Raste Bhar Priyansh ko sirf Noor ki fikra ho rahi thi.
Reyansh full speed mein drive karte hue Noor Ke Ghar Ki or ja raha tha. Karib 5 min me reyansh noor ke ghar pohoch gya.
Phir reyansh Ne Noor ke ghar ka darvaja khatkhataya. Jaise hi darvaja Khula Noor bhagate Hue reyansh ke Gale Lag Gai aur jor jor se rone lagi.
Reyansh : Noor yah Rone ka Waqt Nahin Hai Hamen pahle jakar Tumhare Abbu ko Bachana hoga isliye Rona band karo aur jaldi se gadi mein baitho.
Noor : hhhaan jaldi chalo.
Yah Bolkar noor reyansh ke gadi Mein baith gai. Reyansh bhi gadi Mein Aakar baith Gaya aur gadi Aage Badha D.
Reyansh : tumhare abbu ka accident kaha hua tha.
Noor : (sisakte hue) empire mall ke samne.

phir Reyansh ne Bina Kuchh Bole gadi Empire Mall ke aage dauda Di. Kareeb 10 minut bad Reyansh Aur Noor Empire Mall ke aage pahunch gaye. Jahan unhone Kafi Bheed Jama Dekhi. Reyansh Aur Noor jaldi se car se utare aur Bheed ko hatate Hue Aage badhane Lage. Bheed hatane ke bad Jab Noor aur reyansh vahan pahunche to Samne ka Manjar dekh ke noor Zameen Pe Gir Padi.

Samne Noor ke Ammi Abbu Khoon Se Latpat Jameen per Pade hue the Jise Noor dekh na Saki aur Vahi per behosh ho gai.
Reyansh Noor ko girta dekh Uske Taraf bhaga aur apni Bahon Mein pakadkar Wapas car mein Bithakar Noor ke ammi Abbu ke paas gya aur bari bari dono ko utha kar car me le aya aur car sidha sabse paas wale hospital ki aur badha di.
Jald hi reyansh hospital pohoch gaya aur do stretchers le kar noor ko ammi abbu ko uspar leta diya aur noor ko apni bahon me liye counter tak aa gya aur receptionist se bola.
Reyansh : sister inhen jaldi se ICU Mein shift kar dijiye yah Ek urgent case hai.

Receptionist ne ek nazar noor ke ammi abbu pe dali aur boli.

Receptionist : sorry but dekhne me ek police case lagta hai to hum isme kuch nhi kar sakte.
Reyansh : ye kaisi befkoofi wali baate kar rhi ho sister yaha do log mar rahe hai aur aapko police case ki padi hai.
Receptionist : sorry sir but ye hospital ke rules hai .
Reyansh : yaha ke main in charge se mai baat karta hoon tab tak aap inhe ICU me shift kare. Aur agar ab na bola to ye aap ke liye acha nhi hoga.

Nurse ne sirf haan me gardan hila di kyuki. Reyansh ne last line kafi gusse me nurse ke ser pe gun tante hue kahi thi aur reyansh ki aakhen kafi had tak kali thi tab.

Aaj ke liye itna hi .......

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[Naik]

Update - 27​

Nurse ne sirf haan me gardan hila di kyuki. Reyansh ne last line kafi gusse me nurse ke ser pe gun tante hue kahi thi aur reyansh ki aakhen kafi had tak kali thi tab.

Abbb aaagggeee.......

Reyansh ki iss pratikriya ke baad doctor ne jaldi se Noor ke ammi abbu ko ICU me shift karwaya uske baad reyansh ne nurse se kaha.

Reyansh : sorry for my this type of behavior. Par situation hi kuch aisi thi ki ye sab ho gaya. Again my apologies for what happened.
Nurse : it's ok i understand.
Reyansh : ab please aap inhe check kar dijiye. (apni bahon me leti noor ke taraf ishara karte hue)
Nurse : ji aap unhe room no 102 ke bed pe lita dijiye mai abhi aa kar check karti hu.

Reyansh ne bhi thik waise hi kiya aur noor ko room no 102 ke bed pe lita diya aur nurse ka wait karne laga. Thodi hi der me nurse apne equipment leke room me enter hui aur noor ko check karna start kiya. Jab usne check karliya to reyansh ne usse pucha.
Reyansh : ise kya hua hai nurse.
Nurse : inhe bohot bada sadma laga hai jinhe ye jhel nhi payi aur behosh ho gyi. Maine inhe injection de diya hai aur abhi glucose ki drip bhi laga di hai 1 ghante me inhe hosh ajaye ga.
Reyansh : thank you sister.
Nurse : it's our duty.

Ye bol ke nurse waha se chali gyi. Reyansh noor ke ser ke paas baith gaya aur uska ser sehelane laga aur khud se baate karne laga.

Reyansh : kyu? Akhir kyu aache logo ke sath hi aisa hota hai.
Reyansh ko noor ke liye bohot jada bura lag rha tha kyuki wo maa baap na hone ke dard se achchi tarah wakif tha aur nhi chahta tha ki noor bhi usi dard ka shikar ho. Phir reyansh utha aur ICU ward ki traf badh gaya jaha Noor ke abbu ka operation ho rha tha. Reyansh ICU ke saamne wale sofe pe baith gaya. Thodi der baad jab ek doctor ICU ward se bahar aya to Reyansh turant usje pass pohocha aur pucha.
Reyansh : doctor ander jo hai abhi unki halat kaisi hai.
Doctor : aap unke kyaa lagte hai .
Reyansh : (kuch sochte hue) ji mai unka beta hu.
Doctor : dekhiye aap unke bete hai iss liye aapse jhut nhi bol sakta. Unki halat bohot jada critical hai .unki condition abhi out of danger nhi hai .
Reyansh : (hath jodte hue) please doctor aap kisi bhi tarah unhe bacha lijiye. Paiso ki fikr mat kariyega aap jinte paise mangenge de dunga bas unhe bacha lijiye.
Doctor : dekhiye Mr. Reyansh hum apni tarf se puri koshish kar rhe hai baki uper wale ki marzi.

Ye bol ke wo doctor waha se chala gya. Reyansh ye sab sun kar waha bas butt sa ban gaya. Uske man me bas yhi chal raha tha ke agar noor ke ammi aabu ko kuch ho gaya to wo kya jawab dega noor ko kaise sambhalega use. Yahi sab sawal uske zehen me ghum rhe the.
Tabhi nurse bhagte hue Reyansh ke paas aayi.
Nurse : mr. Reyansh jiss ladki ko aap ne admit karaya tha use hosh aa gya hai aur jabse use hosh aya hai wo bas roye jaa rhi hai.
Reyansh : aap jaiye mai use dekhta hu.

Ye bol reyansh noor ke room ki taraf jane laga. Wo room me pohocha to dekha noor bed pe lash ki trah padi hui hai aur jor jor ammi abbu bolte hue roye jaa rhi hai. Ye dekh ke Reyansh ka dil pasijh gaya aur usne aage badh ke noor ko uthaya aur gale laga ke uski peeth sehlane laga. To noor ne khud ko chudaya aur reyansh ko khich ke ek jordar thappad laga diya.
Ccchhhaaakkkaaatttkk....
Noor : himmat kaisi hui tumhari mere ammi aabu ko wahi chod diya aur mujhe yaha hospital le aaye.

Reyansh ko iski umeed nhi thi phir bhi usne khud pe control kiya aur bola.
Reyansh : noor tum galat samjh rahi ho tum behosh thi isiliye tumhe kuch pata nhi mai unhe bhi hospital le aya tha unki halat critical thi iss liye unhe ICU me shift kiya hai. Tum behosh thi iss liye tumhe yaha le aya.

Yah sunkar Noot butt ban gai aur yah sab bolane ke bad reyansh Wapas Palat Gaya jaane ke liye per jaise hi reyansh Aage Badha
Noor Uske Pairon Ko Main Gir gai aur mafi mangne Lagi Ro Ro Kar.

Noor : Reyansh mujhe maaf kar do Maine Tumhen galat samajh liya. Jis Insan Ne Mere Ammi Abbu Ki jaan bachai Maine Use hi thappad Maar Diya. Main bahut Buri ho reyansh mujhe maaf kar do please mujhe maaf kar do.

Yah sab bolkar vah jor jor Se Khud Ko hi thappad Marne Lag. reyansh ne Uske Hath pakad kar khud ko thappad Marne se roka aur Gale Laga Liya aur bola.

Reyansh : look Noor it was just an misunderstanding so don't worry about it.
Ab ye rona band karo aur chalo tumhare ammi abbu ko dekh ke aate .

Reyansh ke ye bolte hi noor ne uska hath pakda aur khichte hue use ICU ki aur le jane lagi. Jab wo log ICU ke saamne pohoche to ICU ki red light abhi bhi jal rhi thi matlab operation abhi khatam nhi hua tha. ICU ke samne pohoch ke noor ne phir apna saiyam kho diya aur aakhon me aasun liye bad badane lagi.
Noor : aee mere khuda chahe to meri jaan lele par mere ammi abbu ko baksh de.
Reyansh : noor agar tum yu hi roti rhi to tumhari tabiyat phir kharab ho jayegi isliye ab rona band karo.
Noor : kitni bhi koshish karlu reyansh par ye asoon nikal hi aate hai.
Reyansh : agar tumhare ammi abbu tumhe yu rota hua dekhte to kya unhe acha lagta batao??

Ye sunkar noor chup ho gyi. Par phir bhi halke halke subak rhi thi. Reyansh noor ke sath jake sofe pe baith gya aur noor ka ser apni gaud me liye sehlane laga. Noor ko bhi isse kafi rahat mil rhi thi. Karib 40 min dono aise hi rahe na noor kuch boli na hi reyansh kuch bola. Ek ajib si khaamoshi thi dono ke beech me jise dono samajh nhi paa rahe the.

Achanak ICU ke ot ka light band ho gya aur doctors bahar aa gye . Noor aur reyansh doctors ke bahar aate hi unke paas gye aur apne sawal dagne shuru kar diye.
Noor : mere ammi abbu kaise hai? Wo thik to hai na? Mai unse kab mil paungi? Bataiye.
Reyansh : haa doctor bataiye hum unse kab mil sakte hai.
Doctor : ( apni gardan niche jhukate hue ) sorry to say but hum inki ammi ko nhi bacha paye aur inke abbu bhi kuch der ke hi mehman hai.
Noor (chikhte hue) : ye aap kya keh rehe hai doctor aisa nhi ho sakta mere ammi abbu mujhe choodke nhi ja sakte keh dijiye jhut hai.
Reyansh : (gusse se) ye aap kya keh rehe hai.
Doctor : dekhiye mujhpe chillane se kuch nhi hoga aur inke abbu inse akhri baar milna chahte hai to aap plz unse mil lijiye.

Ye aunte hi noor apne dono hath se apne aasun pochte hue ICU ward me apne abbu ke paas bhagi. Reyansh bhi uske piche piche chal gya. Noor aur reyansh ander pohoche to unhone dekha ander do beds the ek pe noor ki ammi ki dead body dhak ke rakhi hui thi aur dusre pe noor ke abbu gambhir halat me ukhadti hui chand sason ke sath lete hue the.
Noor apne abbu ko dekhte hi control khodi aur rote hue unke paas gyi.
Noor : ye sab kya ho gaya abbu. Humara hasta khelta pariwar bikhar gaya.
N abbu : (ukhadti sason ke sath) bbbbeta khuda ke kaam me ek aadmi kar hi kya sakta hai jaise aaj mera samay khatam ho gaya to mai ja rha hu. ..
Noor : (siskiya leke rote hue) plz abbu aap bhi mujhe chood ke mat jaiye plz ammi to ja chuki hai.
N abbu : beta kisi ke chale jane se zindagi nhi rukti. Mujhse wada karo ke mere jane ke baad tum mujhe aur apni ammi ko yaad karke rogi nhi balki hamare hath ki achi yaade yaad rakhogi aur muskuraogi ...wada karo beta .mere pass jada waqt nhi hai.
Noor : wada karti hue abbuuu..

Isse jada noor kuch bol na saki. Reyansh jo ek kone me bhigi palke liye khada tha uski aur dekhte hue noor ke abbu bole.
N abbu : Reyansh beta yaha aao.
Reyansh : ji uncle boliye.
N abbu : uncle nhi beta tum bhi abbu bolo tum bhi mere bete ki tarah ho.
Reyansh : ji abbu .
N abbu : beta ab mera akhri samay hai to mai tumse ek wada chahta hu aur tumhe ek zimedari saupna chahta hu.
Reyansh : kahiye abbu kya zimedari hai mai apna wada jaroor pura karunga ye ek RAJPUT ki zuban hai.
N abbu : beta mere jane ke baad meri beti ka hath thaam lena usse nikah kar lena aur use hamesha khush rakhna nhi to wo kgud ko sambhal nhi payegi. Bohot bholi aur nadan hai meri beti noor.

.........aaj ke liye itna hi.............

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Noor ki zindagi ke do sabse ahem sadsy ek jhatke m khatam ho gaye ab Reyansh hi uska sahara h dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya update bhai

 

[Pal bhai]

Nice update brother waiting for the next