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Fantasy DARD

Hero ko aage kya karna chahiye

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Tri2010

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Doctor : koi baat nhi ye to hamara kaam hai par inhe poison diya kaise gaya aur kisne diya.
Swara : pata nhi doctor
Swara ne bhi iss baat per abhi dhyaan nhi diaya tha phir wo kuch sochne lagi...

Abb ageee.......

Swara bhi sochne lagi ke mai to ghar pe thi nhi bhai bhi itne sabere kahi bahar nhi jate. Hona ho ye kukaram karne wala ghar ka hi koi hai. Waise bhi gharwalo ka vyavhar bhai ke prati kuch thik nhi hai. Mujhe hi abb bhai ka dhyaan sakhna hoga. Wo soch hi rahi thi ki nurse aakar bolti hai ki
Nurse : mam aap ab patient se mil sakti hai.
Swara : thik hai.

Swara phir mere room me enter katri hai to mujhe fan ko ghurta hua pati hai. Aur daud ke aati hai aur gale lag ke rone lagti hai. Phir thodi der me normal hone ke baad bolti hai
Swara : ab tabiyat kaisi hai.
Mai : waisi hi hai jaisa tum chod kar gayi thi.
Swara : waise ye hua kaise, i mean kya aap ko pata hai ye kisne kiya ya kisi pe shak hai.
Mai : haa hai.
Swara : (serious tone) kispe?
Mai : apni kismat pe.
Swara : majak mat kariye yaha aap ki jaan ko khatra tha thodi der pehle aur aap majak kar rahe hai.
Mai : sahi hi to keh raha hu lagta hai uper wale ne shayad meri kismat hi " DARD " ki sihayi se likh di hai .
Swara : aisa nahi hai , waise mujhe lagta hai ye karne wala jarur ghar ka hi koi dhokebaj hoga.
Mai : ( dard bhari muskan ke sath) dhoke aur mai to milte hi rahte hai jaise we are dating.
Swara : (meri aakhon me dekhke) aisa mat boliye mai aapko kabhi dhoka nhi dungi .
Mai : logo ne dil pe itne zakhm kar diye hai ki ab to kisi se wafa ki bhi umeed chod di hai.

Ye bolte hue meri aakhon me asoon aa gye aur yaad ane laga ki kaise maa mujhe zeher khilate hue bhi nhi katrayi.
Phir swara se maine thodi der baat ki phir usne janvi didi ko phone karke abhi tak ki saari baat keh sunayi.
Janvi didi ne jaise hi ye baat suni unki aakhon se asoon ane lage phone unke haath se chooth gya aur wo zamin pe gir gyi. Girne ki awaj sun ke sab ghar wale janvi didi ke kamre me aagye. Maa janvi didi ko aise gira hua dekh ke maa aur dad ghabra gye aur maa ne unka sar apne god me liye unhe hosh me lane lagi. Thodi der baad janvi didi ko hosh aa jata hai to maa unse puchti hai
Maa : kya hua beti tu aise kaise gir gayi.
Janvi didi : (roote hue) maa kisine Reyansh ko zeher de diya tha wo to acha hua Swara sahi time pe ghar aa gyi aur use hospital le gyi warna pta nhi aaj kya ho jata.
Ye sunke sab ko saanp soongh gaya. Dad , chachi bhi pareshan ho gye. Mom ke reaction kuch tha hi nhi.

Inhe chodte hai yaha aur chalte hai reyansh ke paas.

Mai 2 din tak hospital me raha phir mujhe ghar jane ki permission mil gayi. Mai sachme ghar nhi jana chahta tha par kar bhi kya sakte the kyuki na 10th ki marksheet ab tak aayi thi na hi itne paise the ki apna gujara kar saku is liye majburi me ghar jana pada.
Jaise hi mai ghar pahucha saimaa maa ake gale lag gayi aur rone lagi phir boli.
Saima maa : kaisi abhagan maa hu mai jo apne bete ka thik tarike se khayal bhi nhi rakh saki.
Mai : nhi maa aap abhagan nhi hai balki kismat meri kharab hai ki mai aapke pet se paida nhi hua.
Saimaa maa : pagal kahika kuch bhi bolta hai.
Aise hi kuch der baate chali phir mai apne room me chala gya. Kuch din sab aise hi chalta raha ab swara mera kuch jada hi khayal rakhne lagi thi. Janvi didi mujhse baat karke mafi mangna chahti thi par mere samne aane ki unki himmat nhi ho rhi thi.
Aise hi kuch din baad mera 10th ka result aagya. Maine apne school me top kiya tha 96.8% ke sath. Swara aur saimaa maa ko chod kar isse kisiko faraq nhi pada. Mai kush tha kyuki maine padhai me bahut mehnat ki thi kyuki dadaji ne mujhse kaha tha "Knowledge is power and you should be politically knowledgeable "
Sab achcha chal raha tha par chachi se ye sab dekha nhi gaya phir ek din mai kitchen me pani pine gaya tha mai jaise hi pani pike palta aur bahar jane laga, mai chachi se takra gya aur mai aur chachi gir gye. Phir kya tha ho gya natak shuru.
Chachi : ooo ram mardiya kamine ne... Aaahh
Mai : chachi itne bhi jor se nhi lagi hai aur galti bhi aapki thi isme.
Chachi : haa kamine tu to yahi kahega apni manhusiyat to dikhti nhi tuje.
Mai aur kuch kehta usse pehele hi chachi jor jor se rone lagi aur chillane lagi. Mujhe kuch samaj nhi aya chachi ab ro kyu rahi hai. Chachi ki awaj sun kar sare ghar wale waha aa gye phir mai samajh gaya ki chachi ne jaan bujh ke kiya hai .
Chacha : kya hua Kamya? Aise niche kyo leti ho.
Chachi : iss manhus ne mujhe dhakka dekar itne jor se niche gira diya.
Dad : teri itni himmat ki tune mere ghar ke sadasay ko nuksan pohochane ki koshish ki aaj tujhe koi nhi bacha sakta.
Ye bolke dad apne room me chale gye aur apne sath ek mota danda lekar aagye. Jaise hi dad ne mujhe marne ke liye hath uthaya swara unke samne aa gyi aur boli.
Swara : koi mere bhai pe hath nhi uthayega. Mujhe to aap logo ka vyavhar dekhkar lagta hai bhai ko jeher bhi aap logo ne diya hai.
Dad : ha diya bhi ho to kya ab tu muhje sikhayegi ki mai kya karu ya kya nhi. Shikha iss apne kamre me le jao.
Mom swara ko waha se jabardasti le gyi. Phir kya tha dad ne mujhe pitna shuru kar diya. Chacha ki akhon me asoon the kyuki unko pta tha ki isme meri koi galti nhi hai. Dad mujhe mare ja rahe the kabhi pairo pe kabhi hathon pe kabhi pith pe tu kabhi chati pe. (saima maa ki tabiyat kharab thi isliye wo aaj nhi aayi thi) Aise hi aadhe ghante tak ye chalta raha bichme ek baar mere sar pe bhi lag gayi. Mai jamin pe gir gaya tha jab dad ka man bhar gya to wo bole.
Dad : ab tu mere ghar me nhi reh sakta. Mere aane se pehle tu is ghar se chala jana chahiye.
Aur wo chale gye aur reh gye mai aur chacha mera sharir khun se san gaya tha hoth fat gye the, sar fat gya tha, hath sine aur baki jagah nile nishan pad gye the. Chacha badi mushkil se mujhe mere room tak le gye aur mujhe lita ke bole. (janvi kahi bahar gyi thi)
Chacha : mai hath jod ke tumse mafi mangta hu beta ki mai kuch kar nhi saka. Mujhe pata hai isme tumhari koi galti nhi hai.
Mai : maafi mat magiye aap bade hai mujhse.
Chacha : thik hai beta ab tum aram karo.
Mai : an mujhse aram nhi hoga chacha ji aur na hi iss ghar me raha jayega.
Cahcha : ye kya keh rahe ho beta tum to iss ghar ke chirag ho.
Mai : kya aapne kabhi kisi baap ko apne ghar ke chirag ko bujhate dekha hai. Agr mai aur yaha ruka to ye log meri aatma ko noch ke kha lenge iss liye aap mujhe mat rokiye kyuki ab aur sehen nhi hota.
Chacha : thik hai beta mai samajh ta hu par ye kuch paise rakho kaam ayenge.
Maine bhi jada kuch nhi bola aur rakh liye chacha ji ke jaane ke baad jaise taise khud ko utha ke apne kuch kapde aur sare documents pack kiye aur bag me bhar ke bahar ki aur chal pada. Sidiyo se utar ke jab hall me pahucha tab waha koi nhi tha, tabhi mujhe meri princess ki yaad aayi par ab mai yaha reh kar kuch aur nhi seh sakta tha iss liye chup chap gate se ghar ke bahar aa gya. Mai abhi bhi khun se sana hua tha watchmen bhi meri ye halat dekh hairan tha. Mai usse bina kuch bole bahar aa gya aur bahar aake ghar ko dekhne laga. Phir waha se aage aagya mai bina kuch soche chala ja rha tha tabhi amit ne mujhe dekh liya aur meri halat dekh ke pareshan ho gya aur bhagte hue mere paas aagya bola.
Amit : naam bta us madarchod ka jisne tujhe hath lagane ki himmat ki. Sabo jamin ke 6 feet niche gad dunga.
Mai bina kuch bole uske sine lag ke rone laga. Meri ye halat dekh uski aakhon me bhi asoon aa gye. Wo khud ko sambhal ke bola.
Amit : ye rona band kar aur hospital chal.
Phir wo mujhe bike pe bitha ke hospital le gaya. Waha poch ke jab doctor ne mujhe dekha to uski aakhen phati ki phati rwh gayi aur wo bola.
Doctor : kis janwar ne inhe mara hai.
Mai : sir ye zakhm bhi apne hai aur dene wale bhi.
Doctor : god i can't believe ki koi kisi ko iss bedardi se maar sakta hai.
Phir unhone meri dressing ki. Hath me fracture tha. Phie hum hospital se bahar aa gye. Wo bola
Amit : ab bata ki kya hua hai
Phir maine use aaj ki saari baat bta di .
Amit : samaj nhi ata kaise maa baap hai tere acha hua jo tune ghar chod diya chal ab mere sath mere ghar.
Mai : nhi bhai mai nhi aa skta balki ab mai iss sheher me hi nhi rehna chahta
Amit : pagal ho gya hai kya ? Jaiga kaha khaiga kya.
Mai : kahi bhi jau par ab iss narak me nhi jii sakta. Aur tu mujhe nhi rokega tujhe meri kasam.
Jaise hi amit ne ye suna wo mere gale lag gaya aur rone lga maine bhi use kaske gle lga liya. Phir kuch der bad wo bola
Amit : thik hai mai tujhe nhi rokunga par wada kar mujhe kabhi nhi bhulega.
Mai : ye bhi koi bolne ki baat hai. Jab bhi kuch ban jaunga to tujhse jarur milunga.
Phir usne mujhe station chod diya. Mai bina soche jo train mujhe dikhai di usme chad gaya.



Dekhte hain ye safar ab kaha le jata haiiii.........
Sad update
 

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Mai : ye bhi koi bolne ki baat hai. Jab bhi kuch ban jaunga to tujhse jarur milunga.
Phir usne mujhe station chod diya. Mai bina soche jo train mujhe dikhai di usme chad gaya.

Abbb aaggeee.........

Mai window ke paas wali jagah par baith gaya . Train chal padi saamne ek umar daraj aurat baithi thi jo mere ghaav dekh rahi thi aakhir usne puch hi liya.
Aurat : beta ye itni sari chote kaise lagi.
Mai : ji ye to wakt ki maar hai, bhar jayegi.
Aurat : beta jada dard to nhi hai.
Mai : ji ghaav to upri hai par rooh ke zakhm zaroor "DARD" de rhe hai.
Aurat : tumhari baato se lagta hai kismat ke sataye hue ho.
Mai : (dard bhari muskuraht ke sath) kismat ka kya hai ye bhi bakiyo ki tarah sath chod gyi , sath hai to bas "DARD" ye bakiyo ki tarah dhokebaaz nhi hai.
Aurat : tum akele ho, tumhare ghar wale kaha hai. Dikhne se to 11th - 12th ke student lagte ho.
Mai : (has ke) gharwale unhone hi to ghar se nikal diya hai.
Iske baad dono ke bich shaanti cha gyi. Aurat samajh gyi ki lafke ke saath kuch bohot bura hua hai.
Mai : waise ye train kaha tak jayegi .
Aurat : ye to Delhi jaa rhi hai, tum kaha ja rhe ho.
Mai : jaha manjil le jaye.
Aurat : mera naam nitya hai.
Mai : Nitya ji mera naam Reyansh hai. Nitya : nice name.
Mai : kya faida aise naam ka jise koi lena hi nhi chahta.
Nitya : tumhari baato se lagta hai nyi shuruwat karna chahte ho aur pta hai jab nyi shuruat karni ho to har purani aur kadwi yaado ko bhulana padta hai.
Mai : ye yaade ye to mere akas hai jab bhi bhulna chahta hu to saamne aake khade ho jaate hai.
Ye bolte hue mere aakhon me aasoon aa gye. mera jawab sun ke aur mere akhon me asoon dekh ke nitya ji ka dil tadap utha unse mujhe gale laga liya aur boli.
Nitya ji : mujhe nhi pta tumhe kaunsa gum hai par itnisi umar me itni gehri baate sun ke lagta hai jaise bohot si chizo se guzre ho.
Mai unse alag hote hue kaha.
Mai : ji ab jo ho gya so ho gya . Aap batayi ye ki aap kaha ja rhi hai .
Nitya ji : beta mai to mumbai jaa rhi hu.
Mai : chalo kuch der ke liye hi sahi apka sath to mila.
Aise hi safar kata aur nitya ji bhi mumbai me utar gyi aur reh gye mai aur meri tanhayi.
Khair train ka aur mera bhi akhri station aa gya Delhi mai bhi apna saman leke utar gya.
Bhuk lagi thi to aagya ek chote se hotel me . Khana khatam karke bahar aur bahar aa gya ab sawal ye tha ki raat kaha gujare room abhi le nhi sakta tha kyuki paise kam the aur room le leta to khata kya isliye ek park me aa kar wahi ek bench par let gaya aur aaj ke baare me sochne laga phir pata hi nhi chala kab nind aa gyi.

Wahi mere ghar... sorry sorry Mr. Raghuveer Rajpuj ke ghar me.

Mai nikl gya tha uske baad sab apne apne room me the. Swara ko uske room me band kar diya tha papa ne. Jab saima maa aai to kaam nipta ke jab mere room me aayi to mujhe nahi paya


Dekhte hai aggee kya hota hai.....
Emotional update
 

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Mai nikl gya tha uske baad sab apne apne room me the. Swara ko uske room me band kar diya tha papa ne. Jab saima maa aai to kaam nipta ke jab mere room me aayi to mujhe nahi paya

Abbb aaaggggeeeee.........

Ab kahani 3rd point of view se chalegi.

Jab saima ne Reyansh ko uske room me nhi dekha to. Unka maan vichilit ho gya kyuki reyansh aksar uske room me hi rehta tha. Usne bathroom me bhi check kar liya waha bhi nhi tha kitchen me bhi dekh liya. Ab saima ko dar lagne laga to usne badi himmat juta ke shikha rajput (so called maa) ke kamre me gyi aur boli.
Saima maa : malkin kya apko pta hai reyansh kaha hai sara ghar dekh liya kahi nhi dikh rha hai??
Mummy : mujhe kya pta acha hi ho agar ghar chod ke chala jaye to.

Saima maa chup chap room se nikal jati hai aur phir se ek baar sab ke rooms me check karti hai. Sab ke room me check karne ke karan sab ko pta chal jata hai ki Reyansh mil nhi raha hai. Jab swara ko ye sab pata chala to uski to mano duniya hi ujad gyi. Wo wahi jamin pe baith ke jor jor se rone lagti hai. Jab janvi ko ye pata chala to use bhi dil me tez dardsa ho rha tha aur guilt bhi lag rha tha kyuki usne reyansh ke sath kya nhi kiya tha.
Sara ghar dhundhne ke baad saima ka sabr ka band toot gya aur wo zor zor se rone lagi. Use itne zor se rota sun sab waha jama ho gye tabhi mom boli.
Mummy : kyu us manhoos ke liye aasoon bahati ho wo to tumhara saga beta bhi nhi tha.
Saima maa (gusse me) : bas bohot ho gya ab mere bete reyansh ke liye koi ek shbd bhi nhi kahega. Kaisi maa ho tum dhikkar hai tumhari mamta pe.
Mummy : naukar ho to wo hi raho samjhi.
Saima maa : mai to yaha sirf reyansh ke liye aati thi. Naukri to mujhe kahi aur bhi mil jati.
Ab yaha mera reyansh hi nhi hai to mai yaha reh ke kya karungi. Mai aaj se hi ye naukri chodti hu.
Ye keh kar saima waha se chali gyi. Reyansh ke ghar chod ke jane ki baat se chachi, mummy aur papa kush the. Swara ka to ro ro ke bura haal tha. Janvi bhi bohot udas ho gyi thi aur rone lagi thi apne pashyatap ke karan.

Ab chalte hai Reyansh ki taraf.......
(Reyansh ki point of view se)
Jab subhe meri aaken khuli mai bench par uthkar baith gya. Sochne laga ki aaj kaam doondh na padega nhi to guzara karna mushkil hoga. Phir mai uth kar chal pada market ki aor kaam ki talash me. Mai din bhar ghumta raha kaam to nhi mila lekin logo ki dhutkar aur galiya zaroor mili. Aise hi din nikal gaya raat ke waqt thoda kuch kha liya ab paise bhi khatam hone aaye the. Ab to kaam dhoondna bhot zaroori ho gya tha. Agla din aya paise the nhi nashta karne ke liye to aise hi nikal gaya kaam doondhne ke liye. Dophar tak kaam dhoondhne ke baad kuch log dikhai diye khudayi ka kaam karne jaa rhe the ab koi kaam to mil nhi raha tha to socha yehi kaam sahi. Mai unke paas pahucha air poocha.
Mai : kaka kya mai bhi ye kaam kar sakta hu aapke sath.
Wo admi : are ye kaam koi bachcho ka nhi hai beta tum nhi kar paoge bohot kathin aur mehenat ka kaam hai.
Mai : kaka please karne dijiye mujhe bohot zaroorat hai kaam ki.
Wo admi : aisi bhi kya zaroorat beta ki itna kathin kaam bhi karne ko taiyar ho.
Mai : bas aisa samajh lijiye kaka ki agar aaj kaam nhi mila toh raat ka khana nasib nhi ho payega.
Meri baat sunke us aadmi ke paas kuch kehene ko nhi reh gaya tha isliye usne bhi apne sath kaam pe aane diya.
Hum construction site pe pahuch gye yaha bohot kaam the majdoori ke . Ab tha to ___ saal ka ladka aur itne kathin kaam ki adat bhi nhi thi to jada kaam na kar saka jis karan paise bhi kam mile. Jisse raat ke khane ke samay pura to nhi par adha pet bhar gya. Phir kya wahi apne bech par jake so gya kyuki shareer itna dukh rha tha ki bta nhi sakta tha hath bhi chil gye the .

Aise hi 6 mahine nikal gye iss beech mijhe swara aur saima maa ki bahut yaad aati thi.
In 6 mahino me kaam aur thakan me hi din nikal rahe the kuch paise bhi bacha rha tha mai. Ab mere liye acha din wo hota tha jis din pet bhar khana milta tha jaise koi tyohar ho to ma*ndir me pet bhar kha leta tha, kabhi friday ko masji*d me to kabhi gurudwar*e me.


Aggee dekhte hai kya hota hai........
Jindagi lesson update
 
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Ab mere liye acha din wo hota tha jis din pet bhar khana milta tha jaise koi tyohar ho to ma*ndir me pet bhar kha leta tha, kabhi friday ko masji*d me to kabhi gurudwar*e me.

Abbb aagggeee....


din aise hi nikal rahe the ab na khushi thi na gam , tha to bas akelapan. Thikane ke naam pe ek park ki bench thi bas.
Ek din bukhar ho gya jiss karan kaam pe naa jaa ska, mera khana pina sab rozi pe tha. Ab kaam pe nhi gya to khata kaha se. Duphar bhar to nikal li bina khane ke par shaam hote hote bhuk bardasht ke bahar hone lagi .
Aakhir bhuk itni bad gyi ki maine ek rassi ka tukda pet pe bandh liya. Phir bhi bhuk bohot lag rhi itni ki aankon se aasoon aa rhe the.
Aaj saima maa aur dadaji ki sach me bohot yaad aa rhi thi agar aaj saima maa yaha hoti to bhuke nhi rehene deti. Mai pet ko pakad ke zor se rone laga. Bhuk ke karan ab ruka nhi ja raha tha. Lag raha tha ki ab meri kahani khatam hone ka samay aa gya hai iss liye mai apne dadaji, saima maa aur swara ko yaad karne laga. Tabhi ek budha admi mere paas aya aur mere hath me bagwa*n ki prashad ki thali rakhte hue bola.
Aadmi : beta rote nhi. Jiska koi nhi hota unka bhagwa*n hota hai. Ye lo prashad aaj mandir me bat raha tha. Jada to nhi hai par tumhari bukh mit jayegi.
Aisa lag raha tha bhagwa*n ne mere dil ki pukar sun li thi. Maine us aadmi ke hath se thal liya aur sisakte hue bola.
Mai : ji.. Ji bohot boht shu.. Shukriya.

Isse jada mujhse bola nhi gya kyuki takat hi nhi bachi thi. Aadmi bhi ye baat samajh gya aur bina bole waha se chala gya. Maine thali ki taraf dekha khana jada nhi tha par mai iss wakt bohot jada bhuka tha aur roti ki kimat ek bhuka hi janta hai. Mai khana khane laga aur khate khate meri aakhon se aasoon aane lage.

Aise hi kuch din bite maine apne jama kiye hue paise se ek night school me 11th me admission krva liya. Pehele bich me admission dene se mna kr rhe the par mere percentage bohot achche the iss liye admission mil gya. Phir aise hi ek mahina aur nikal gya .
Iss bech mere andar ke feelings marti gyi logo ke rough aur bure bartav ke karan. Ek garib se vaise bhi kon achche se baat krega.

Udhar Mr. Raghuveer Rajput ke ghar pe ..
(3rd person point of view)

Mummy , dad aur chachi khush the mere jane aur ek saal bitne ke karan unhe yakin bhi ho gya tha ki ab mai wapas nhi aaunga. Swara ab kisi se jada baat nhi karti thi , raat me chup chup ke roti thi aur janvi bhi ab pehele ki tarah khush nhi rehti chup chup rehti , jab bhi aakhen band karti to Reyansh ka masoom chehera samne ata ab ye guilt ke karan tha ya kuch aur use samajh nhi aa rha tha. Divya ( chacha chachi ki beti) use to koi farak hi nhi pada kyuki use to bachpan se hi mujhse nafrat karna sikhaya gaya tha.
Saima us din ke baad raghuveer rajput ke ghar kaam karne nhi gayi. Saima kahi aur naukri karne lagi thi , wo kafi udas rehti thi, akele me roti thi aakhir usne reyansh ko bachpan se pala tha aur apni chati se doodh pilaya tha.

Khair aise hi iss ghar me din bit rhe the par yaha to tufaan ane wala tha jo kisiko pta nhi tha. Ek aise hi din sab dinning table pe baith ke breakfast kar rhe the ki koi darwaje se andar aya.
Dad : ji aap kon?
Aadmi : ji mujhe pandit ji ne bheja hai ye dene ke liye.
Usne ek letter dete hue kaha
Dad : pandit ji khud bhi to aa sakte the.
Aadmi : ji bade hi dukh ke sath kehna pad raha hai par pandit ji ab nhi rhe. Kal hi unka antim sanskar ho gya hai.
Dad : kaise hua ue sab?? Aur ye letter phir??
Aadmi : ji pandit ji ki mrutyu blood cancer ki wajahse hui hai aur ye letter pandit ji ne mujhe ye bohot pehele de diya tha aur kaha tha ki agar mujhe kuch ho jaye to ye chiththi Rajput ji ko de dena.
Dad : bura hua pandit ji ke sath.
Letter de ke wo aadmi ghar se chala gya. Sab dinning table pe baithe sab ye baat sun chuke the.
Mummy : bahot bura hua pandit ji ke saath.
Dad : haa shi kaha. Aao pehele nashta karlete hai phir ye padhlenge.

Phir sabne mil ke breakfast kiya. Phir hall me ikhattha ho gye sofe pe. Letter dad ke hath me tha. Unhone use khola aur padhna shuru kiya .

IN LETTER
(pandit ji ke words me)

"Raghuveer ji mujhe maaf kar dijiyega mai aapka gunhegaar hu maine paiso ki lalach me kuch aisa kar diya hai jo mai aapko jite ji nhi bata saka par ab bata sakta hu. Agar aap ye patr padh rahe hai to iss waqt mai jivit nhi houga. Jo paap maine kiya hai wo maafi yogya nhi hai aur na hi mai chahunga ki aap mujhe maaf kare, mai chahata hu ki aap mari ki hui galti sudhar de. Baat ye hai ki jab mai Reyansh ki janm kundali banane aya tha to maine jhut kaha tha ki Reyansh Manhoos hai aur aisa karne ke liye kisine mujhe paise diye the jise lalach me mai ye sab kar gaya.
Mai paise dene wale ko nhi janta kyuki wo
Hamesha mujhse nakab pehenke milta tha.
Aur jo apke business loss hue hai mujhe lagta hai wo bhi us aadmi ke karan hue hai.
Mujhse paap hua hai jiski saza bhi mujhe mil gyi jab maine ye paap kiya uske 3 saal baad hi mijhe pta chala ki mujhe blood cancer hai.
Mujhe pata tha ab jada ji nhi paaunga. bhagwaa*n ne mujhe meri karni ka phal de diya hai par aapke paas abhi bhi waqt hai aapne jo bhi Reyansh ke sath kiya hai uski maafi mang lijiye aur use itna pyaar dijiye ki wo sab bhul jaye. Mai bhi usse maafi mangna chahta tha par ye na ho saka aur na hi mere paas use dene ke liye kuch nhi hai . mai apne papo ka prayashchit karna chahta hu iss liye mai mere beti 'Avni' ki shaadi Reyansh se karana chahta hu aur iss aap meri aakhri ichcha samajh ke swikaar kare.
Aur ab meri beti ka khyal rakhiyega uska mere alava iss dunayi me koi nhi hai ( Avni ki maa bachpan me hi guzar gyi thi). Vo abhi uski nani ke yaha hai kal tak vo aapke ghar pohoch jayegi. Maine meri beti ko bhi marne se pehele iss bare me bataya tha vo bhi yahi chahti hai ki uske baap ke kiye paap ko sudhara jaye iss liye vo bhi Reyansh ki jii jaan lagakar seva karegi. Meri aapse akhri vinti hai ki ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dijiyega."

Iss letter ko sunne ke baad ghar me ghor sannata cha gya. Kuch hi second baad swara ki rone ki awaj se sab jaage. Swara jamin pe baith ke jor jor se rone lagi aur kuch badbadane lagi.

Swara : smmm.. Kaha tha maine bhai bekasoor hai par...
Aur sisak sisak ke rone lagi Mrs. Shikha Rajput ki aakhen bhi nam thi unhe sab yaad aa raha tha jo kuch unhone reyansh ke sath kiya tha uska wo masoom chehera unke samne aa rha tha. Janvi pe to ab guilt pori tarah havi ho gyi thi wo bhi rone lagi. Mr. Raghuveer Rajput bhi udas the par itne nhi. Kamya chachi ke expression kuch samajh nhi aa rahe the aur Divya ko koi farak nhi pada. Chacha ki akhon me gussa tha akhir wo bol uthe.
Chacha : maine kaha tha ki aap sab log galat kar rahe hai aur ab to wo ghar bhi chod kar jaa chuka hai.
Mummy : (rote hue) mujhe mera beta wapas chahiye mai usse maafi mang lungi.
Dad : mai kaise bhi karke use doondh lunga tum chinta mat karo.
Mummy : par kya wo hume maaf karega??
Dad : wo zaroor maaf karega, wo to umse baat karne ko tarasta tha jab hum khud usse baat karenge to wo zaroor maaf karega .
Swara : (cheekhte hue) bhai bhale hi maaf karde par mai aap sab ko kabhi maaf nhi karungi.
Kehete hue apne room me chali gyi.
Janvi didi : (utsukta se) haa papa Reyansh ko jaldi se dhundhiye.
Dad : mai abhi apne admi lagata hu jald hi uska pta chal jayega.
Mummy : haa jald se jald bas pata chal jaye Reyansh ka kyuki kal meri bahu bhi to aane wali hai.
Janvi didi : (chidte hue) mujhe nhi lagta Reyansh use accept karega. Kya pta kaisi shakal surat ho uski.
Dad : aise nhi bolte kal wo aane wali hai aur abse yahi rahegi. Pandit ji ne jo kuch bhi kiya uski saza unhe mil chuki hai. Aur us ladki ka ab humare alawa hai hi kon.
Mummy : sahi kaha apne.
Raghuveer ne apne sare aadmi laga diye reyansh ko dhudne ke liye.

Aise hi wo Din bhi nikal gaya. Agli subah sab dining table pe baithe nashta kar rahe the. Tabhi doorbell baji Mrs. Shikha ne darvaja khola to dekha samne ek sundar si ek ladki khadi hai.
Mummy : ji aap kon?
ladki : ji Auntie mai Avni Pandit ramcharan ki beti hu.


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Avni
Shikha darvaje se side hote hue boli.
Mummy : Aao beta andar aao hume pata hai aakhir hamari hone wali bahu jo ho.
Avni ke gaal laal ho jate hai ye sunke. Shikha ji use andar lati hai sab use dekh ke samajhne ki koshish kar rahe the ki kon hai.
Mummy : ye Avni hai pandit ji ki beti aur iss ghar ki hone wali bahu.
Avni aage badh ke sab bado ke pair chuti hai.
Par uski aakhen to kuch aur hi dhundh rahi thi aakhir usne puch hi liya.
Avni : ji.. Ji wo kaha hai.
Mummy : kon beta.
Avni : ji auntie ji Reyansh .
Mummy : wo.. Wo..
Avni : kya hua auntie kaha hai wo. Mujhe pata hai mere pitaji ke karan bohot dukh jhela hai unhone. Mai unke pair pakad ke unse maafi mangna chahti hu.
Mummy : (udasi bhari awaj me) be.. Beta wo ghar chod ke chala gaya.
Avni : (choukte hue) kkkyyyyaaaaa??????
Mummy : (rote hue) ye sab mere wajah se hua hai.
Phir mummy use rote hue sab bata deti hai. Sab sunne ke baad avni bhi naam aakhen liye boli.
Avni : jo kuch hua achcha nhi hua par ab hume unhe dhundh ke sab thik karna hoga aur unhe itna pyaar dena hai ki wo sab bhul jaye.
Swara : (jaldi se) haa mai bhai ko bohot pyaar dungi.
Janvi : (dhire se) mai bhi.
Dad : pehele use dhundh to le.
Avni : kya apke paas unki koi photo hai.
Dad : haa ye lo beta.
Dad ne apna phone dete hue kaha.


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Avni meri photo dekhte hue (maan me : hayyee kya body hai mere hone wale husband ki aur kitne hot hai. Mujhe pata hai ki aapko mere pita ke karan bohot kuch sehena pada par wada hai mera aapse bass ek baar mil jaiye phir dekhiye mai kaise aapko itna pyaar dungi ki aap apne sare dard aur takleef bhul jayenge.)

Swara Avni ko Reyansh ki tasveer aise ghurte dekh gussa ho gyi aur bol padi.

Swara : bas bhi kariye kya photo me se hi bhai ko nikal lengi.
Avni jhepn gyi
Dad : Shikha iss room dikha do
Mummy : dusra room kyu ye to Reyansh ke room me hi rahegi.
Swara : (gusse me) nhi bhai ke room me mere alava koi nhi jayega .
Mummy : kyu nhi jayega? Wo mere bete ka kamra hai.
Swara : kya mera beta? Ye mamta tab kaha gyi thi jab unko iss ki sabse jada zaroorat thi.
Avni :(baat sambhalte hue) are auntie ji chaliye mujhe koi aur kamra dikha dijiye.

Chaliye chalte hai Reyansh ki taraf....

Samay ka kata chal raha tha aur mera bhi 11th complete ho gya tha aur ab 12th me tha aur 12th ke board exam bhi ab karib the iss bich kuch khaas nhi hua wahi mehnat aur rukhi sukhi khana. Ab zindagi se koi umeed nhi reh gyi thi. Khair 12th ka exams bhi ho gye mai 97.8% se top kiya tha . 12th to ho gya par ab aage padhne ke liye paise nhi the. Aise hi 15 din bit gye. Kal tha mera 18th birthday par mujhe koi khushi nhi thi. Abhi raat ke 11:55 pm ho rahe the mera birthday shuru hone me 5 min baaki the .

Jaise hi 12 baje mujhe aajebh sa "DARD" hone laga aisa lag raha tha ki kisine mere sharir pe tezab phek diya ho. Mera sharir hawa me uthne laga. Thodi der baad jalan kam ho gyi aur sharir bhi niche aa gya. Jaise hi maine aakhen kholi kii......


Aage dekhte hai kya hota hai........ ...
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Jaise hi 12 baje mujhe aajebh sa "DARD" hone laga aisa lag raha tha ki kisine mere sharir pe tezab phek diya ho. Mera sharir hawa me uthne laga. Thodi der baad jalan kam ho gyi aur sharir bhi niche aa gya. Jaise hi maine aakhen kholi kii......

Aabb aaggeee...........

Jab maine aakhen kholi meri aakhen pori tarah se kali thi.

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Agar mujhe koi aise dekh leta to pakka heart attack se mar jata. Mai dekh pa raha tha aas paas ka andhera mera andar ho raha tha. Mai hil bhi nhi paa rha tha bas sare andhere ko apne andar jata hua dekh pa rha tha. Jab sara andhera andar aa gya meri aakhen band ho gyi aur mai wahi jamin pe behosh ho gya.
Jab savere aankh khuli tab mai wahi jamin pe pada hua tha abhi koi savere ke 5 baje honge aas paas sab sunsan tha. Mai utha aur aas paas dekhne laga. Achanak mujhe raat ki saari baate yaad aa gyi maine apne aap ko hath laga ke sab check kiya aur paya meri t shirt gayab thi aur body bohot sakt ho gyi thi 6 pack abs ke 8 pack ho gye the.

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Ander ajeeb si takat mehsus ho rhi thi par kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Tabhi mere kano me ek sard awaj sunayi di.
Awaj : ajeeb mehsus ho rha hai.
Mai idhar udhar dekhne laga
Mai : k.. Kon hai. Aur kaha hai.
Awaj : darne ki jarurat nhi hai.
Mai : par ho kaha.
Awaj : tumhare andar.
Mai : kkkkkyaa?
Awaj : mai tumhara hi ek hissa hu.
Mai : kaise.
Awaj : mai hamesha se tumhare andar tha.
Mai : aaisa nhi ho skta.
Awaj : acha to ye batao jab tumhare pita tumhe pit te to tumhare ghav itne jaldi kyu bhar jate, haa wo mai hi tha jo ye karta tha.
Aur pandit ji ne sirf wo manhoos wali jhut kahi thi par usne ek baat sach kahi thi aur wo ye thi ke "Bachcha hamesha kali shaktiyo ki chatra chaya me rahega.
Mai : (chekhte hue) ye nhi ho skta.
Awaj : kyu nhi ho skta yaad karo jab sabne tumhe chod diya tha tab tumhare sath sirf mai tha! andhera tha!.
Mai : jab itne samay se shant the to ab kyu aae ho.
Awaj : kyuki ab tum 18 ke ho gye mujhe apnane ke yogya ho gye ho to mujhe swikaro kyuki ye takat tumhe abhi nhi mili hai ye to is janm ke pehele bhi tumhare paas thi.
Mai (man me : sahi hi to keh raha hai jab sabne thukra diya to hai hi kon ab parwah karne ke liye. Waise bhi ye mera hissa hai apna leta hu agar kuch ho bhi gya to peche waise bhi koi rone wala nhi hai.)
Mai : mujhe manzur hai.
Awaj : Mujhe apnane se pehele ek baat dhyaan se sun lo tumhara sharir abhi bhi iss takat ko nhi sambhal sakta iss liye tumhe apne aap ko aur taiyaar krna hoga.
Mai : (sard leheje me) mujhe swikaar hai.

Agle hi pal meri aakhen kali ho gyi rang aur safed ho gya sharir kisi lohe ke saman ho gya chehera aur akarshak ho gya . Thodi der baad akhen normal ho gyi par bhaki sab waisa hi raha.
Phir sabse pehele maine apne saman se nyi shirt peheni .ab sochne laga ki aage kya kiya jaaye kyuki shakti istemaak abhi nhi kar skte th kyu ki pehele uspe kabu pana tha. Ab sabse bada sawaal tha paise kaise kamaye jaye ? Kuch samajh nhi aa rha tha. Par kuch to karna tha hi aur ab kal ke baad ab bina power ke bhi mera sharirik bal aam logo se kayi guna bad chuka tha aur dimaag bhi. Sath hi sath mere chehere ka aur body ka akarshan bhi bad chuka tha ek pal ke liye to mai hi apne aap ko aine me dekh ke pehchan nhi pata. Khair mai nikal pada kuch paise kamane. mai ek gali se guzar hi raha tha ki mujhe ek ladki ki cheekh sunayi di mai samajh gaya kuch gadbad hai iss liye uss disha me badh gaya . Jaise hi mai waha pohocha dekha teen ladke ek ladki ko pakad ke kahi le ja rhe the iss liye mai bina der kiya waha pohoch ek punch ek admi ke pith pe jad diya. Iss karan baki do log mujhe dekh gusse me meri aur bhadhe isse pehele wo kuch kar pate maine ek round kick ghuma ke dono ko gira diya. Wo dono to wapas uth gye par jise mai pith pe punch mara tha wo utha hi nhi ye dekh wo dono dar ke waha se bhaag gye. Phir mai us ladki ki aaur badha wo mujhe hi ghur rahi thi par ye batana mushkil tha ki wo mere looks ki wajah se mujhe ghur rhi thi ya abhi jo hua uske karan. Maine usse pucha.

Mai : kyaa aap thik hai?
Mere puchne ke karan use hosh aya wo boli
Ladki : m..mai thik hu. Aapko kahi chot to nhi lagi.?
Mai : nhi mai thik hu ab mujhe chalna chahiye.

Dekhte hai aagee kya hota hai.......
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Mere puchne ke karan use hosh aya wo boli
Ladki : m..mai thik hu. Aapko kahi chot to nhi lagi.?
Mai : nhi mai thik hu ab mujhe chalna chahiye.

Abb aaagggeee........

Ladki : aaise kaise aapne meri madat ki hai pehele mujhe thik se shukriya to kehene dijiye.
Mai : are iss ki koi jarurat nhi hai. Waise aapka naam.
Ladki: Hello my self samira sinha and you?
( Intro :
Samira Sinha = ye ek indipendent ladki hai.
Iske maa baap abhi 2 saal pehele accident
Me chal base tabse delhi me akele rehti hai
Ek private detective company chalati hai.
Age = 20
Bohot fair colour hai, tikhe nain nash aur
Katilana badan. Simple rehna pasand karti hai


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Mai : mera naam Reyansh hai.
Samira : agar abhi aap na aate to pta nhi wo log mere sath kya karte....
Aur rone lagi
Mai : par kuch hua to nhi na to ab ye rona band karo.
Maine uske aasoon pochte hue kaha. Thodi der me chup ho gyi phir boli.
Samira : mai aapka ye ehsaan kabhi nhi bhulungi agar mere liye kuch kaam ho to bta dijiye ga. Ye lijiye mera card.
Mai : agar aap sachme meri madad karna chahti ho to koi kaam dilwa dijiye.
Samira : tumhari education kitni hai .
Mai : ji abhi 12th pass out hua hua 97.8% Se.
Samira : waise grades kafi achche hai par abhi se job karne ki kya jarurat pad gyi abhi to tum sirf 18 saal ke ho.
Mai : samira ji pet ki bhi jarurate hoti hai.
Samira : kya ghar wale tumhe rokenge nhi padhai chod kaam karne se.
Mai : ji M.. Mai ANATH hu.
Samira : sorry mujhe pata nhi tha.
Mai : ji koi baat nhi.
Samira : dekho meri ek private detective company hai aur abhi tumhe dene ke liye mere pass sirf bounty hunter ki job hai. Kar paoge.
( bounty hunter : ek aisa aadmi jo paiso ke liye criminals ko pakadta hai)
Mai : ji bilkul chalega mai kar bhi lunga .
Samira : thik hai phir kal iss diye hue address par 9 baje aa jana. Milte hai phir.
Mai : ji zaroor.
Wo jane lagi tabhi wo palat gyi wo boli.
Samira : are mai ek chiz to bhul hi gyi.
Mai : kya.
Phir apne bag se kuch paise nikal kar meri aur badhate hue boli.
Samira : ye lo apni job ka advance.
Mai : ji bohot bohot shukriya.
Samira : kal time se aa jana. Bye 👋
Mai : bye .

Mai bohot kush ho gya job bhi mil gyi aur paise bhi. Phir maine paise dekhe to kuch 15 hazar the. Soch chalo ab ek kamra kiraye pe le hi liya jaye. Maine kayi jagah room dekhi aakhir me ek choti si room select ki kyuki mai akela hi tha upar se saman bhi naa ke barabar tha. Kahir ye raat thik kati baki dino se. Subah taiyaar hoke mai samira ki office ki aor nikal pada. Office ki building kafi badi thi mai gate se andar ja hi rha tha ke guard me mujhe rok diya.
Guard : yee ladke aise kaise andar jaa rha hai.
Mai : mujhe yaha job mili hai usi ke liye aya hu.
Guard : pagal samjha hai kya mujhe kapde dekhe hai apne kisi sadak chaap ki tarah lag rha hai aor keheta hai job mili hai nikal yaha se.
Ye sun mera para chad gaya aor meri aakhen kaali padne lagi isse pehele mai kuch karta waha samira aa gyi .
Samira : (guard se) tumhari himmat kaise hui inse aisi baat karne ki ye yaha ke new employee hai.
Guard : sorry mam wo sir ke kapde dekh ke confuse ho gya tha mujhe maaf kar dijiye.
Samira : aage se aaisa nhi hona chahiye. Reyansh ji chaliye andar office me baat karte hai.
Mai : haa chaliye.
Samira (chokte hue) : y.. Ye ye aakpi aakhon ko kya ho gya.
Jaise hi mujhe samjh aya mai apni aakhen cover kali aur bola.
Mai : wo wo lagta hai aakhon me mitti chali gyi hai. Abhi thodi der me thik ho jayegi.

Meri aakhen thodi der me thik ho gyi. Hum ader office me baithe the.
Mai : waise aaj mujhe ek baat samjh aagyi ki insaan ki pehchan wo kapdo se hoti hai na ki karmo se.
Samira : aisi baat nhi hai reyansh ji aaj kal aaye din yaha gunde aate hai iss liye guard ne aisa bola. Uske behavior ke liye mai hath jod ke aapse maafi mangti hu.
Mai :(unke hath pakadte hue) are are samira ji aisa mat kijiye. Waise kaam ke bare baat karle.
Samira : to humara kaam ye hai ki hum bhage hue criminals ko pakadte hai, private ki si pe nazar rakhte hai, private aur government dono hi tarah ke case solve karte hai.
Mai : to mere liye kya hukum hai bataiye.
Smira : mai jhut nhi bolungi par maine tumhe paper work ke liye nhi rha hai maine tumhe tumhari physical strength dekh ke rakha hai taki hum criminals ko easily pakd sake.
Mai : thik hai samira ji.
Samira : ye ji waghera formalities mere sath mat karo bas 2 hi saal badi hu tumse.
Mai : ok

Phir lag gye hum paper work me. Hume kal masoori nikalna tha pushkar naam ke criminal ko pakadne . Karib 4pm ko office time khatam hua mai nikalne hi wala tha ki samira ne roka aur kaha.
Samira : chalo tumhare liye kuch shopping ki jaye.
Maai : are iski koi jarurat nhi hai.
Samira : aise kaise tumne meri izzzat bachai hai aur waise bhi kal hum masoori ke liye nikalne wale hai.
Maine bhi jada behes nhi ki aur haa keh diya.

Hum mall pohoch gye samira ne dher sari shirts, t shirts aur jeans li. Maine use samjhaya phir bhi nhi mani. Shirt ki size me problem ho rhi thi iss liye sales girl boli.
Salesgirl : sir aap ise try room me ja ke check kar lijiye.
Mai : ok
Mai jaise hi trail room ki aur gaya to waha sab full the.
Salesgirl : sir aap yahi kar lijiye waise bhi shirt hi try krna hai.
Mai : mm.. Mai aisa nhi kar sakta.
Samira : are isme sharmane wali konsi baat hai karlo yahi hum konsa tumhara rape karengi.
Aur dono hasne lagi maine bhi phir apni shirt utari nayi wali try karne ke liye. Par jaise hi maine shirt utari dono ki to jaise saanse hi atak gyi meri body dekh ke.


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Dono mujhe ghur rhi thi. Salesgirl to neche se gili ho gyi thi. Yaha tak ki gents section me moujud har aurat aur ladki mujhe ghur rhi thi.
Mai : aase kya dekh rahi ho samira kabhi ladka nhi dekha kya.
Samira : jaldi se kapde peheno warna sachme tumhara yahi rape ho jayega.

Phir hum mall se nikale samira ne mujhe mere room pe drop kiya aur kal ready rehene ko kaha aur nikal gyi aaise hi ye din bhi nikal gaya.


Aaage dekhte hai kya hota haii.......
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Phir hum mall se nikale samira ne mujhe mere room pe drop kiya aur kal ready rehene ko kaha aur nikal gyi aaise hi ye din bhi nikal gaya.

Aabbb aaagggeeee.......

Khair nayi subah aaayi .maine aaj kafi din baad shave kiya phir mai naha dho k naye kapde pehen ready ho gya. Jab ready hua to kuch aisa dikh raha tha.



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Mai kuch der apne aap ko dekhta raha aur soch raha tha ki kitna badal gya hu mai. Khair mai nikal pada apne office ki aur kuch saman aur kapde bhi rakh liye the kyuki wahi se hum masoori nikalne wale the.

Jab tak reyansh sahab office pahuchte hai tabtab Mr. Raghuveer rajput ke yaha bhi najar dal li jaye.
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Mr. Raghuveer ne Reyansh ko dhundne ke liye edi choti ka zor laga diya par unhe kuch pata nhi chala. Swara ki halat bat se batar ho gyi thi ab na wo kisi se jada baat karti thi na bahar jati bas din bhar Reyansh ke room me rahti thi. Janvi bhi ab udas rehti thi kisi se jada baat nhi karti thi wo iss baat ko uski guilt samajhti thi. Mrs. Shikha Rajput ki bhi saari mamta abhi hi umad rhi thi par wo iss sab me apni galti nhi maanti thi wo samajhti thi saari galti pandit ji ko aisa karne ke liye paise dene wale ki hai. Kamya (chachi) aur divya (chachi ki beti) kuch fark nhi tha. Avni ka to kuch alag hi scene chal rha tha wo reyansh ki photo se bate karti use dekhti aur bhagwan se bas yehi dua karti ki reyansh jald se jald mil jaye aur phir use sath apne aane wale kal ki baate soch ke khush ho jati.

Ye reyansh ke 18th birthday ke din ki baat thi.
Mrs shikha janvi ke room me baithi usse baate kar rhi thi.

Mom : janvi beta kya tujhe yaad hai aaj Reyansh ka birthday hai.
Janvi (udaas man se) : haa maa yaad hai.
Mom : pta nhi kab mera reyansh wapas aayega.
Janvi : mom aap tension mat lijiye papa dhund rahe hai Reyansh jaroor mil jaye ga.
Mom: bhagwaan kare aaisa hi ho. Bas wo ek baar aa jaye use kahi nhi jane dungi.

Tabhi darwaja khula aur Avni andar aa gyi.

Avni : kise rookne ki baat ho rhi hai mummy ji.
Mom : tere hone wale pati ki ho rahi hai.
Avni niche sar jhukake sharmane lagi.
Mom : haayee! Meri bahu sharmate hue kitni pyaari lagti hai.
Avni : kya mummy ji aap bhi.

Wahi Reyansh ke kamre me swara reyansh ki purani shirt ko anpe sine se lagaye reyansh ki photo se baat kar rhi thi.


Dard to nischit hi tha uske chehre, aankhon mein mayoosi bhi saaf dikh rahi thi par fir bhi uski aankhon mein aansoon nahi the. Wo shaant thi, behadh shaant. Jaise ke khud ke andar apne saare dukhon ko samete jaa rahi ho. Kisi ke intezaar mein, kisi kandhe ke intezaar mein jispar sar rakh kar wo apne ashkon ko bahaa sake.
Uske antarmann mein bas ek hi baat chal rahi thi, ek hi tasveer chal rahi thi aur ussi tasveer ko yaad karte huye wo soch rahi thi :

“ I miss you Bhai... I miss you so much!! Kab aaoge aap, aap to mujhe bhool Gaye hona. Bhool gaye ho ke aapki ek behen bhi hai, jo aapke bina nahi reh sakti, please mere paas aa jaao bhai. Please!! ”
Usne uss tasveer ko apne seene se laga liya jaise wo uss photo se gale mil rahi ho, aur ek gehri neend mein chali gayi.

Chaliye aab wapas reyansh ji ki aur chalte hai.
( aage ki story Reyansh ki prospective se)

Mai bag lekar office pahuch gaya. Samira apne cabin me baithe mera hi intejaar kar rhi thi mujhe dekhte hi wo jaise pause ho gyi maine uski maine chutki bajate hue kaha.
Mai : kaha kho gyi madam.
Samira : wo.. Wo hame late ho raha hai chalo jaldi.
Mai : bhang wang kha liya hai kya savere savere. Mai puch kuch rha hu jawab kuch de rhi ho.
Phir hum bhi four wheeler me baith ke nikal pade. Samira drive kar rhi thi mai side me baitha hua tha. Kafi der tak car me khamoshi
Rahi jise mai todte hue baat karna start kiya.
Mai : to hame masoori me kaha se Pushkar ko dhundhna start karna hai.
Samira : according to reports wo akhri baar poison mist club me dikha tha to wahi se start karenge.

Karib 5 ghante ki driving ke baad hum masoori pahuch gye. Kafi sundar jagah thi, mai kaafi excited tha kyuki mai bachpan se kahi ghumne nhi gaya tha. Phir hum apne hotel gye aur waha check in kiya phir kya tha raat hone ka intejaar kar rhe the kyuki clubs to raat ko hi pure shabab pe hote hai. Karib shaam 7 baje mai aur samira Ready hogye pushkar ko pakadne club jane ke liye.

Samira : Reyansh taiyaar hona.
Mai : yep.
Samira : ye rakho safety ke liye.
Meri aur ek gun badhate hue kaha. Maine bhi bina sawaal kiye rakhli.
Phir hum nikal pade club ki aur. Jab club pahuche waha ka mahool to kafi rangeen ho chala tha. Mai to pehli baar club aa rha tha jada kuch pata bhi nhi tha. Khair humne andar entry li aur us gangster ka wait karne lage. Pure club me mai hi dikhne me aur looks me sabse jada hot lag raha tha to centre of attention hona to lazmi tha. Mai aur samira baar counter pe baithe the tabhi ek bhadkile aur chote kapde pehene ek sundar ladki mere paas aake baith gyi.


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Ladki : how are you handsome.
Mai : ji kya mai aapko pehchanta hu.
Ladki : my self Vanshika. Aur agar tum mujhe nhi bhi pechante to dhire dhire pechan jaoge.

Usne ye baat meri jaangh pe hath ferte hue boli. Mujhe bhi pata nhi kya ho gya mera hath apne aap uske ass pe chala gya. Per waha moujood samira sab dekh rahi thi ab usse dekha nhi gya to wo bol padi.

Samira : accuse me miss hum yaha kaaam se aaye hai to please leave us alone.

Ye sun vanshika waha se chali gyi. Phir samira ne mujhe ghoor ke dekha aur boli.

Samira : focus on the task.
Mai bhi haa me sir hila diya. Thodi der baad mujhe samajh aya maine vanshika ke sath aisa kyu kiya kyuki meri takat raat ko jada bekaboo ho jati hai ye baat mai kayi din se notice kar rha tha.

Hum baithe hi the ke tabhi waha kuch logo ka group enter hua unme wo gangster pushkar bhi tha.



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UPDATE - 15
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Hum baithe hi the ke tabhi waha kuch logo ka group enter hua unme wo gangster pushkar bhi tha.

Aabbb aaagggeee......

Humne jaise hi pushkar ko dekha waise ki chaukkanna ho gye. Samira ne mujhe ishare se darwaje ko lock karne ko kaha. Maine waisa hi kiya phir samira aage jaane lagi par maine use roka aur bola.
Mai : mai handle karta hu tum gadi ready rakho.
Samira : tum kar to loge na.
Mai : hmmmm

Ye bol mai waha chala gya jaha pushkar dance kar rha tha. Mai usse easily power ki madad se padak sakta tha par mai apni power use nhi karna chahta tha. Kyuki abhi tak mai use control nhi kar paya tha jo bhi tha mere andar bohot powerful tha aur use control karna lag bhag na munkin tha.

Mai pushkar ke piche ja ker jeb se gun nikali aur chupke se uski kamar pe tika di aur dhire se uske kaan me bola.
Mai : agar jara sa bhi chillaya ya hoshiyari dikhayi to isi ghode se teri maa chod dunga.

Pushkar bhi samajh gaya ki baat ab uske paksh se bahar hai iss liye chup rehene me hi usne apni bhalayi samjhi. Mai use leke phir darwaje tak gaya jaha samira khadi thi.
Samira ne pushkar ko dekha aur muskurayi aur mere taraf dekh ke boli.
Samira : good job. Ab ise bahar car me le chalo.
Mai ne bhi waisa hi kiya. Humne use bandh ke dikki me dala aur nikal gye wapas delhi ke liye. Phir hum delhi pahuche aur Pushkar ko police ke hawale kiya. Aur apne bounty hunting ke paise liye aur nikal liye waha se.
Samira : Reyansh tumhe pata hai tum sab chize badi jaldi seekh jate ho.
Mai : (smile)☺
Samira : tum chaho to mere sath shift ho skte ho waise bhi mai akele hi rahti hu.
Mai : nhi mai aise hi thik hu.
Samira : oh come on now we are friends.
Mai : thanks but nope.
Samira : as you wish.
(3rd person's perspective)
Aise hi 1 saal 5 mahine bit gye reyansh ki bounty hunting chalti rahi usne pehele ho ek open college me admission le liya tha to bas exam dene jata tha. Inhi bich samira aur reyansh kafi close ho gye par dono ne abhi tak ek dusre se kuch kaha nhi tha.

Mr. Raghuveer ke yaha

Raghuveer ne apni puri takat jhounk di par abhi tak reyansh ko dhundh nhi paya tha.
Swara ka apne bhai ke liye pyaar ab bhai behen se kafi aaage nikal gaya tha ab uska pyaar junoon me badal gaya tha ab reyansh se juda hoke wo pagalsi ho gyi thi wo reyansh ko iss kadar chahne lagi thi ke agar use reyansh na mila to wo apni jaan dede. Wahi janvi ki mano dasha bhi kuch thik nhi thi wo har wakt apne aap ko reyansh ka gunhegaar manti thi bas ab wo reyansh ka intezaar kar rhi thi ki kab reyansh aaye aur wo use pairo me gir ke maafi mange par shayad bhagwan abhi use ye bhi nasib nhi hone dena chahta tha. Wahi Mrs Shikha ko bhi pachtawa ho rha tha par unhe umid thi ki reyansh sab kuch bhula ke unhe maaf kar dega. Mrs. Kamya (chachi ) ki toh lafi bade maze aur aisho aram me kat rahi thi unhe na koi pachtawa tha na koi dukh. Mr. Yash (chacha) kafi dukhi rehte the par unhe afsos tha ke unhone samay rehte awaj kyo nhi uthayi yahi baat unhe sataati thi. Divya (chacha ki beti) ko koi matlab nhi tha wo to bas party aur friends me busy rehti thi use reyansh ke jane se bas ek hi baat ka gum tha wo ye tha ke uske ghar se ek naukar kam ho gya. Avni ne to Reyansh ko apne man mandir me basa liya tha balki wo to abhi se khud ko reyansh ki suhagan samajhti thi Reyansh ke liye sare warat karti thi use bas reyansh ke aane ke deri thi taki wo use apna bana sake aur apna sara pyaar uspe luta de.

Saima to reyansh ke jane ke baad khaamosh se ho gyi thi wo apne bete ki judayi sehen nhi kar pa rhi thi. Uske liye to reyansh use sage bete se bhi jada tha akhir usne reyansh ko apni chati se jo doodh pilaya tha. Wo din bhar bas bhagwan se ye dua karti ke reyansh uake paas lout aaye.

Khair aab chalte hai Reyansh ke paas.
Aaj reyansh jaldi utha tha aur taiyaar hoke office nikal gaya. Waha jaldi pohoch gaya tha abhi koyi nhi aya tha waha. Wo apne cabin me baith gaya abhi use baith kuch der hi hui thi ke samira uske cabin me aa gyi.
Samira : good morning sweetie
Mai : good morning samira lagta hai aaj kafi ache mood me ho koi khaas baat
Smira : khaas baat to hai .guess what ?
Mai : aaj tumhara birthday hai.
Samira : nope
Mai : to phir.
Samira : aaj mai apne lover ko propose karne karne wali hu.

Ye baat sunke to mujhe aisa laga jaise meri aatma mera saharir chod kar ja rha hai. Mai apne emotions ko kaabo hai sari himmat juta ke kaha.

Mai : congrats. K...kon hai wo khushnasib.
Samira : hai mera koi chahne wala.
Mai :(dard bhari smile)

Mai apne khayalo me khoya hua tha tabhi samira apne ghutno pe baith gyi aur mujhe hosh me late hue boli.
Samira : I love youuu.. Mr Reyansh
Yes reyansh you are the love of my life.
Will you accept me.

Mai :( chekhte hue) off course yes mai ye sunne ke liye tadap gaya tha samira.
Maine bhi ye uske sath ghutno pe baith te hue kaha.
Samira : mai bhi reyansh isi waqt ka inte jaar kar rhi thi.
itna bol wo seedhe Reyansh pe toot padti hai aur ek hi jhatke me uske honth apne hontho me bhar leti hai. 'Mmmmmmmmmmmmm'
Dono passionate kiss me doobe hue the.
Samira ne apni jeebh reyansh ke muh me dal di usne bhi koi virodh nhi kiya. Dono ek dusre ko chum chaat rhe the dono ka muh thuk se san gaya tha . dono to ek dusre ka thook pi rhe the 5 min baad jab wo alag hue to dono ke beech ek thook ka tar ban gaya tha. Dono
Apni saase kaaboo me kar rhe the phir ek doosre ki aakhon me dekhne lage aur phir kiss start kar di. Phir thodi der baad reyansh use apne aap alag kar bolta.
Mai : hai control karo ye office hai koi bhi aa skta hai .
Samira : ji mister lover.
Mai : hehehehe..

(Reyansh ke view se)
Aise hi waqt bit rha tha par mai aur samira physical nhi hue the mai chahta tha ki hum shadi tak ruke. Mai second year complete kar chuka tha. Mai apni takat ko lagbhag kaaboo kar chuka tha meri powers kafi bad chuki thi mujhe goli nhi lagti thi, mai andhere ko kaaboo kar skta tha, ab mai bohot jada handsome dikhne laga tha ke har mahine kam se kam 15-20 proposal aate the, mera jism to jaise faulad ban gaya tha, par powers ke side effects bhi the mujhe gussa jaldi ata tha aur gusse me mai to kisi ki jaan bhi le sakta tha halaki abhi tak aaisa kabhi hua nhi tha . Sab sahi chal raha tha par meri kismat ko shayad ye hazam nhi hua phir aa gya wo din jis din maine apna astitwa hi kho diya.
Aaj mai aur samira date par jaa rahe the mai use pick karne use uske ghar gaya mai abhi darwaje tak pohochke darwaja khat khata rha tha par koi response nhi aya to maine darwaje ko push kiya to wo khul gaya.
Mai : kitni careless ho gyi hai dawaja bhi khula chod rakha hai agar meri jagah koyi chor aa jata to. Abhi class leta hu iski jake.

Mai bina awaj kiye samira ke room ki aur chal diya abhi mai waha pohcha hi tha ke mujhe siskne ki awaj aane lagi par ye rone wala siskna nhi tha par mera dil ye maan ne ko taiyaar nhi tha maine darwaja halka khola aur jo andar dekha use dekhne ke baad man kiya ki abhi aatmahatya kar loon.
Andar samira sirf bra aur panty mera kisi ke godh me baithke use kiss kar rahi thi.
Ye dekh mera dil hazar baar toota par uski awaz kisi ko sunayi nhi di. Aur mai hazar moute mar chuka tha meri aakhon me aasoon jama ho gye the par mai apne dadaji ki kasam ke karan use baha bhi nhi sakta tha. Andar wo dono baate kar rhe the jo mai sun sakta tha.
Samira : chodo bhi mujhe jana bhi hai wo ata hi hoga.
Aadmi : kon wo reyansh.
Samira : haa wahi aur kon.
Aadmi : mujhe samajh nhi ata aakhir tum use chod kyu nhi deti pyaar to tum use waise bhi nhi karti agar karti to mujhse naa chudwati.
Samira : paisa darling paisa jabse wo aya hai tabse itna profit ho rha hai. Mai use yaha se jane nhi dena chahti thi is liye pyaar ka natak kiya aur rahi tumse chudwane ki baat to chudwa to mai usse bhi sakti hu aur uska to tumhare lund ka dugne se bhi jada lamba hai mota hhi bohot hai par sala kehta hai shaadi ke baad karenge.
Aadmi : ajib chutiya hai sala jab itni chodu maal chudne ko taiyaar hai to nakhre kar rha hai.
Ab mujhse aur nhi saha ja rha tha meri aakhen poori kaaali ho chuki thi chehre pe haivaniyat cha chuki thi mai darwaja dhakka de kar pura khol diya jaise hi samira ki najar maujh par aur meri aakhon pe padi wo sehem uthi kyuki itne samay me maine use apni takat ke bare me bata diya tha. Mai aage badh rha tha.
Samira : wo.. wo R.. Reyansh jo tum samajh rahe ho aisa kuch nhi hai. M...meri baat to suno.
Mai jake ke us aadmi ke saamne khada ho gya.
Aadmi : abe londe sidhe sidhe bahar nikal ja aur maine choda teri mehbuba ko ja jo karna hai kar le.
Mai bina koyi reaction diye speed me uski gardan pakad ke hawa me utha diya. Samira ye dekh ghabra gyi.
Samira : use chod do reyansh wo mar jayega.
Aadmi : bhai mujhe chod do mai kabhi bhi yaha nhi aaunga .chaho to badle me meri biwi chod lo par chod do.
Maine bina samira aur us aadmi ki baat sune us aadmi ki gardan dhire se dabayi jisse uska sar use jism se juda ho gya. Maine uske sar ko side me phek diya. Aur samira ki taraf dekha jo dar ke mare kamp rahi thi aur bola.
Mai : (sard lehje me) kyu ?
Samira : m.. Mujhe maaf kardo mai jism ki aag me behek gyi thi.

Maine apne gusse ko kabu kar apni aakhen normal ki aur samira ki taraf dekh ke kaha.
Mai : kya kami reh gyi thi mere pyaar me agar itni hi aag lagi thi to keh kar to dekhti.
Samira : mujhe maaf kardo .mai tumse sach me pyaar karti hu.
Mai : hahahahaha..payaar thu hai tum par ab to sach bol do. You know what you are just a bloody whore . Ye hamari aakhri mulakat hai.
Samira : (rote bilakhte hue) aisa mat kaho reyansh bas ek baar mujhe maaf kardo.
Mai : Suna hai ek sachche aashik ka dil kabhi nhi dukhate uski bad dua kabhi khali nhi jati to aaj mai tumhe dil se bad dua deta hu tum kabhi kush nhi reh paaogi , har pal tadpogi par tumhe kabhi pyaar nasib nhi hoga.
Samira : nhi reyansh mat jao maaf kardo mujhe.
Mai : agar mera pyaar sachcha tha na to aisa hi hoga tum jindagi bhar tarsogi pyaar ke liye.

Mai : aur is lash ki fikr mat karo.
Itna bol maine apna hath aage kiya aur us aadmi ka sharir aur sar kale dhue me badal ke ud gya ab mujhse waha ruka nhi gaya. Mai bas samira ko itna bola
Mai : (dard bharihasi ke sath) "ISHQ" mubarakh meri bewafa mehbuba .

Aur itna bol waha se nikal gaya .mai wapas ja rha tha ke raste me ek dargah per ruk gaya aur andar jake anpa sar niche tika ke roni si awaj me.
" mere DARD ki nhi dawa maula madad kar tera aasra to kisi se na lage darr"
Mai : pta hai aaj mera aap pe se vishwas uth gaya hai. Maine har dharm ki mana, har bhagwan ke dar pe sar tikaya par mujhe kya mila har baar dhoka fareb. Maine to kabhi kuch jada nhi manga tha aapse bachpan me chahta tha ki bas maa baap ka thoda sa pyaar mil jaye par nhi mila. Baad me chaha ki dadaji ji ka sath mahesha rahe aapne unhe bhi cheen liya. Ab to jeene ki aakhri umeed bhi aapne mujhse cheen li, mai marna chahta hu par aap marne bhi nhi dete .koi hathiyar asar nhi karta kitni bar jan dene ki koshish ki par har bar kuch nhi hota... Kyu.. Kyu kar rahe ho mere sath aisa.
1 ghante baad mai dargah se bahar aya aur maine faisla kiya ki ab yaha nhi rahunga. Mai gadi leke ghar gaya zaroori saman pack kiya aur flight book karne laga par pata nhi tha ki kaha jau. Phir maine socha ab waise bhi mere paas ab apna kehene wala koi raha nhi ab khood ko majboot banaunga. Phir maine decided kiya ki mai Russia jaunga kyuki waha ki special forces ko di jane wali training duniya ki sabse tough training kahalai jati thi aur log kwhete the ye training lene ke baad aadmi ke emotions khatam ho jate hai iss liye maine Russia ko chuna. Flight book karne ke baad mai bahar jungle ki aur nikal gaya shanti ki talash me kyuki meri flight kal ki thi. Mai ek sunaaan park me jake ke ek bench pe biath gaya aur us bewafa ke bare me sochne laga jiae mai pyaar karta tha.

Tabhi dimaag me awaj gunji
Awaj : aagya swaad bhala banke.
Mai : bolo kyaa kehena chahte ho
Awaj : yahi ki ye pyaar hum jaiso ke liye nhi hai.
Mai : tum aur mai alag alag hai.
Awaj : hum alag nhi hai hum ek hai. Mai bas tumhari fikar karta hu kyuki kisine tumhe tut te hue nhi dekha maine dekha hai tumhara dard mehsus kiya hai. Logo dhutkar dekhi hai, kaise wo hume zalil karte the. Iss liye kehta hu ye duniya tumhe kha jayegi aur agar jina hai to kudh ko us kabil banao ki puri duniya ko jhuka sako.
Mai : tum thik kehte ho. Ab badalne ka waqt aa gya hai.
(chillate hue) abbb badalne kaa waqt aa gyaa haiiii...
Tabhi meri aakhen kali ho gyi aur pith me dard uthne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte meri pith mese pankh nikal aaye.


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Mera koi reaction nhi tha iss baat par maine wapas kudko normal karne laga phir pankh gayab kiye aur wapas ghar nikal pada apna saman uthaya aur hotel nikal pada kyuki mujhe pata tha samira wapas mafi mangne aaegi aur mai ab mai use apne samne bardasht nhi kar skta tha iss liye nikal gaya hotel aur apne naye safar ki aur.......

Aab aaaggee dekhte hai kya hota hai.


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