Nice and emotional update. Dekhte hai abb swara kya karti hai. Waiting for next update......UPDATE - 7
Mai ye sun raha tha meri aakh me aasoon the oar maine unhe rok liya kyuki kasam khai thi. Mai bhi sochne laga kal dekh hi leta hu ki ye log kitna niche gir sakte hai..
Abb ageee............
Mai waha se apne room me aa gya aur soch raha tha ki pichle janam me maine aise kaunse paap kiye jo aise maa baap mile hai .
Phir socha aaj saimaa maa aur Swara se jee bhar kar baat kar leta hu pata nhi kal ke baad rahu na rahu kyuki mujhe yakin hai ki kal wo log mujhe zeher khila hi denge. Phir mai utha aur saima maa ke pass chala gya aur jate hi unhe gale laga liya. Wo iss tarah achanak aate hi mere gale laga ne se chintit ho gyi aur pucha
Saima maa : kya hua beta. Kisine kuch kaha kya.
Mai : nhi maa.
Saima maa : phir aaise kyu gala laga hai
Mai : lag lene do maa kal kisne dekha hai kya pata hum rahe na rahe.
Saimaa maa : pagal kuch bhi bolta hai bhagwan kare tujhe meri bhi umar lag jaye.
Mai chup ho gya phir thodi der unse baat karke Swara ke room me chala gya.
Mai waha pocha aur darwaja khat khataya. Unsne darwaja khola aur mujhe dekh ke boli
Swara : aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai jo raja ji iss garib ke yaha padhare.
Mai : aree rani sahiba hum to aapke gulam hai aur aap aisi baate kar rhi hai.
Swara : anadar ayenge yaa darwaje par hi baat karenge.
Phir mai andar aa gya aur niche jamin pe baith gaya.
Swara : aree niche kyu baith gye
Mai : wo mujhe sofe pe ya bed pe baith ne ki adat nhi hai iss liye .
Ye sunke wo udas ho gayi par agle hi pal meri god me aake baith gayi
Mai : arree mere godh me kyu bith gayi
Swara : (ghur ke) meri marji .
Mai : achcha , mujh se promise kar mai tere pass rahu na rahu par tu aise hi khush rahegi.
Ye sunke use gussa aur aakhn me pani aa gya . Wo mera collar pakad kar mera muh apne paas le aayi aur meri aakhon me dekhte hue boli.
Swara : ye apne bola bhi kaise ki mai apke bina khush rahu. Jis din aap na rahe samaj lena ki maine bhi apna nata iss jindagi se tod liya.
Mai usse dur hua aur mahol halka karne ke liye bola.
Mai : kuch bhi bolti hai. Mujhe to dar lagta hai ke lahi to physco to nhi ho gyi.
Swara : aapne mujhe physco kaha
Aise hi kuch der halki fhulki baate hui phir mai apne kamre me aake let gaya aur kal ke baare me sochne laga. Kush tha agar kal mar gaya to kamse kam 2 log to yaad karenge hi.
Aise hi nind aagyi. Sabere utha to dekha ghar me sab taiyari kar rahe the aur aaj saima maa bhi nhi aayi thi. Mai naha do ke taiyaar ho gaya or bahar aa gya . Mujhe Swara dikhai nhi di wo dost ke yaha gyi thi.
Mai abhi bahar aya hi tha ki aaj pehli baar maa (shikha Rajput) ne mujhe awaj di.
Mom : Reyansh..
Mai : ji kahiye kya kaam hai
Mom : hum sab bahar ja rahe hai hamare jane se pehle ye khir kha lo..
(mai man me : chalo kuch bura hi sochkar aapne naam to liya mera)
Mai jaan gaya tha ki is khir me jahar milaya gaya hai phir bhi maine keh diya
Mai : thik hai
Mom waha se jaa hi rahi thi ki mai bola.
Mai : kya pehla niwala aap khila dengi.
Mom ke muh se koi shabd nhi nikal rahe the wo waha se apne room me chali gyi chachi bhi unke piche ho li.
In room
Chachi : kya hua bhabhi usne khir khayi ya nhi?
Mom : wo chahta hai ki mai use apne hath se khir hilau.
Chachi : to khila dijiye na konsi badi baat hai.
Mom: nhi ye mujhse nhi hoga mai apne haath se use zeher nhi de sakti
Chachi : agar aapne aisaa nhi kiya to plan fail ho jayega aur bhaisahab aap pe hi gussa honge.
Mom kuch nhi boli aur mere paas aakar chair pe baith gayi aur boli.
Mom : chola mai khila deti hu.
Mai : ji.
Mom ne khir se bhara chamach apne kapte hue hath se uthaya aur mujhe khilane lagi.
Mere aakhon me nami aa gyi kyuki aaj pehli baa mom mujhe apne hath se khila rahi thi zeher hi sahi par khila rahi thi. Mai ne asoon ko chalakne nhi diya aur khir khatam kar di phir sab jaldi se kahi bahar chale gaye.
Mai chupchap dadaji ke khursi ke paas jakar baith gaya aur ab apni maut ka intajar karne laga. Mujhe khushi thi kamse kam abb iss narak se azadi milegi aur mai apne dadaji se mil sakunga.
Thodi der baad mujhe pet me dard hone laga aur aakhon ke saamne andhera chane laga mai wahi zamin pe gir gaya mere muh se jhaag aane laga.
Tabhi Swara jo abhi dost ke yaha se lauti thi abhi upar apne room me hi jaa rhi thi uski najar mujhpe padi. Wo daudte hue mere paas aayi aur boli.
Swara : bhaiya kya ho gya aapko uthiye.... Uthiye na
Mai uth nhi rha tha ye dekh kar wo dar gyi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Achanak use kuch dhayan aya aur usne meri saans check ki saans abhi bhi chal rahi thi.
Usne jaldi se ambulance ko phone kiya. Thodi der me ambulance aagyi aur usme mujhe le jaya gaya sawara bhi sath hi aayi . raste bhar wo roye ja rahi thi aur bhagwaan se dua maang rhi thi ki mai bach jau.
Swara : aap mujhe chod ke nhi jaa sakte....
Aur rone lagi. Phir mujhe operation theater me le jaya gaya. 2 ghante ke baad doctor aaye aur bole
Doctor : shukr hai aap inhe sahi time pe le aaye nhi to ye bach nhi pate kyuki inhe bohot poisonous zeher diya gya tha.
Swara ye sunkar shock ho gyi phir boli
Swara mai kabtak unse mil sakti hu.
Doctor : Aap unse 2 ghate me mil sakti hai .
Swara : thank you Doctor so much.
Doctor : koi baat nhi ye to hamara kaam hai par inhe poison diya kaise gaya aur kisne diya.
Swara : pata nhi doctor
Swara ne bhi iss baat per abhi dhyaan nhi diaya tha phir wo kuch sochne lagi...
Dekhte hai aage kya hota haiii......
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Nice and emotional update. Dekhte hai abb swara kya karti hai. Waiting for next update......
Nitin@1998
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zabardastUPDATE - 7
Mai ye sun raha tha meri aakh me aasoon the oar maine unhe rok liya kyuki kasam khai thi. Mai bhi sochne laga kal dekh hi leta hu ki ye log kitna niche gir sakte hai..
Abb ageee............
Mai waha se apne room me aa gya aur soch raha tha ki pichle janam me maine aise kaunse paap kiye jo aise maa baap mile hai .
Phir socha aaj saimaa maa aur Swara se jee bhar kar baat kar leta hu pata nhi kal ke baad rahu na rahu kyuki mujhe yakin hai ki kal wo log mujhe zeher khila hi denge. Phir mai utha aur saima maa ke pass chala gya aur jate hi unhe gale laga liya. Wo iss tarah achanak aate hi mere gale laga ne se chintit ho gyi aur pucha
Saima maa : kya hua beta. Kisine kuch kaha kya.
Mai : nhi maa.
Saima maa : phir aaise kyu gala laga hai
Mai : lag lene do maa kal kisne dekha hai kya pata hum rahe na rahe.
Saimaa maa : pagal kuch bhi bolta hai bhagwan kare tujhe meri bhi umar lag jaye.
Mai chup ho gya phir thodi der unse baat karke Swara ke room me chala gya.
Mai waha pocha aur darwaja khat khataya. Unsne darwaja khola aur mujhe dekh ke boli
Swara : aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai jo raja ji iss garib ke yaha padhare.
Mai : aree rani sahiba hum to aapke gulam hai aur aap aisi baate kar rhi hai.
Swara : anadar ayenge yaa darwaje par hi baat karenge.
Phir mai andar aa gya aur niche jamin pe baith gaya.
Swara : aree niche kyu baith gye
Mai : wo mujhe sofe pe ya bed pe baith ne ki adat nhi hai iss liye .
Ye sunke wo udas ho gayi par agle hi pal meri god me aake baith gayi
Mai : arree mere godh me kyu bith gayi
Swara : (ghur ke) meri marji .
Mai : achcha , mujh se promise kar mai tere pass rahu na rahu par tu aise hi khush rahegi.
Ye sunke use gussa aur aakhn me pani aa gya . Wo mera collar pakad kar mera muh apne paas le aayi aur meri aakhon me dekhte hue boli.
Swara : ye apne bola bhi kaise ki mai apke bina khush rahu. Jis din aap na rahe samaj lena ki maine bhi apna nata iss jindagi se tod liya.
Mai usse dur hua aur mahol halka karne ke liye bola.
Mai : kuch bhi bolti hai. Mujhe to dar lagta hai ke lahi to physco to nhi ho gyi.
Swara : aapne mujhe physco kaha
Aise hi kuch der halki fhulki baate hui phir mai apne kamre me aake let gaya aur kal ke baare me sochne laga. Kush tha agar kal mar gaya to kamse kam 2 log to yaad karenge hi.
Aise hi nind aagyi. Sabere utha to dekha ghar me sab taiyari kar rahe the aur aaj saima maa bhi nhi aayi thi. Mai naha do ke taiyaar ho gaya or bahar aa gya . Mujhe Swara dikhai nhi di wo dost ke yaha gyi thi.
Mai abhi bahar aya hi tha ki aaj pehli baar maa (shikha Rajput) ne mujhe awaj di.
Mom : Reyansh..
Mai : ji kahiye kya kaam hai
Mom : hum sab bahar ja rahe hai hamare jane se pehle ye khir kha lo..
(mai man me : chalo kuch bura hi sochkar aapne naam to liya mera)
Mai jaan gaya tha ki is khir me jahar milaya gaya hai phir bhi maine keh diya
Mai : thik hai
Mom waha se jaa hi rahi thi ki mai bola.
Mai : kya pehla niwala aap khila dengi.
Mom ke muh se koi shabd nhi nikal rahe the wo waha se apne room me chali gyi chachi bhi unke piche ho li.
In room
Chachi : kya hua bhabhi usne khir khayi ya nhi?
Mom : wo chahta hai ki mai use apne hath se khir hilau.
Chachi : to khila dijiye na konsi badi baat hai.
Mom: nhi ye mujhse nhi hoga mai apne haath se use zeher nhi de sakti
Chachi : agar aapne aisaa nhi kiya to plan fail ho jayega aur bhaisahab aap pe hi gussa honge.
Mom kuch nhi boli aur mere paas aakar chair pe baith gayi aur boli.
Mom : chola mai khila deti hu.
Mai : ji.
Mom ne khir se bhara chamach apne kapte hue hath se uthaya aur mujhe khilane lagi.
Mere aakhon me nami aa gyi kyuki aaj pehli baa mom mujhe apne hath se khila rahi thi zeher hi sahi par khila rahi thi. Mai ne asoon ko chalakne nhi diya aur khir khatam kar di phir sab jaldi se kahi bahar chale gaye.
Mai chupchap dadaji ke khursi ke paas jakar baith gaya aur ab apni maut ka intajar karne laga. Mujhe khushi thi kamse kam abb iss narak se azadi milegi aur mai apne dadaji se mil sakunga.
Thodi der baad mujhe pet me dard hone laga aur aakhon ke saamne andhera chane laga mai wahi zamin pe gir gaya mere muh se jhaag aane laga.
Tabhi Swara jo abhi dost ke yaha se lauti thi abhi upar apne room me hi jaa rhi thi uski najar mujhpe padi. Wo daudte hue mere paas aayi aur boli.
Swara : bhaiya kya ho gya aapko uthiye.... Uthiye na
Mai uth nhi rha tha ye dekh kar wo dar gyi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Achanak use kuch dhayan aya aur usne meri saans check ki saans abhi bhi chal rahi thi.
Usne jaldi se ambulance ko phone kiya. Thodi der me ambulance aagyi aur usme mujhe le jaya gaya sawara bhi sath hi aayi . raste bhar wo roye ja rahi thi aur bhagwaan se dua maang rhi thi ki mai bach jau.
Swara : aap mujhe chod ke nhi jaa sakte....
Aur rone lagi. Phir mujhe operation theater me le jaya gaya. 2 ghante ke baad doctor aaye aur bole
Doctor : shukr hai aap inhe sahi time pe le aaye nhi to ye bach nhi pate kyuki inhe bohot poisonous zeher diya gya tha.
Swara ye sunkar shock ho gyi phir boli
Swara mai kabtak unse mil sakti hu.
Doctor : Aap unse 2 ghate me mil sakti hai .
Swara : thank you Doctor so much.
Doctor : koi baat nhi ye to hamara kaam hai par inhe poison diya kaise gaya aur kisne diya.
Swara : pata nhi doctor
Swara ne bhi iss baat per abhi dhyaan nhi diaya tha phir wo kuch sochne lagi...
Dekhte hai aage kya hota haiii......
ABHISHEK TRIPATHI
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Awesome updateUPDATE - 7
Mai ye sun raha tha meri aakh me aasoon the oar maine unhe rok liya kyuki kasam khai thi. Mai bhi sochne laga kal dekh hi leta hu ki ye log kitna niche gir sakte hai..
Abb ageee............
Mai waha se apne room me aa gya aur soch raha tha ki pichle janam me maine aise kaunse paap kiye jo aise maa baap mile hai .
Phir socha aaj saimaa maa aur Swara se jee bhar kar baat kar leta hu pata nhi kal ke baad rahu na rahu kyuki mujhe yakin hai ki kal wo log mujhe zeher khila hi denge. Phir mai utha aur saima maa ke pass chala gya aur jate hi unhe gale laga liya. Wo iss tarah achanak aate hi mere gale laga ne se chintit ho gyi aur pucha
Saima maa : kya hua beta. Kisine kuch kaha kya.
Mai : nhi maa.
Saima maa : phir aaise kyu gala laga hai
Mai : lag lene do maa kal kisne dekha hai kya pata hum rahe na rahe.
Saimaa maa : pagal kuch bhi bolta hai bhagwan kare tujhe meri bhi umar lag jaye.
Mai chup ho gya phir thodi der unse baat karke Swara ke room me chala gya.
Mai waha pocha aur darwaja khat khataya. Unsne darwaja khola aur mujhe dekh ke boli
Swara : aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai jo raja ji iss garib ke yaha padhare.
Mai : aree rani sahiba hum to aapke gulam hai aur aap aisi baate kar rhi hai.
Swara : anadar ayenge yaa darwaje par hi baat karenge.
Phir mai andar aa gya aur niche jamin pe baith gaya.
Swara : aree niche kyu baith gye
Mai : wo mujhe sofe pe ya bed pe baith ne ki adat nhi hai iss liye .
Ye sunke wo udas ho gayi par agle hi pal meri god me aake baith gayi
Mai : arree mere godh me kyu bith gayi
Swara : (ghur ke) meri marji .
Mai : achcha , mujh se promise kar mai tere pass rahu na rahu par tu aise hi khush rahegi.
Ye sunke use gussa aur aakhn me pani aa gya . Wo mera collar pakad kar mera muh apne paas le aayi aur meri aakhon me dekhte hue boli.
Swara : ye apne bola bhi kaise ki mai apke bina khush rahu. Jis din aap na rahe samaj lena ki maine bhi apna nata iss jindagi se tod liya.
Mai usse dur hua aur mahol halka karne ke liye bola.
Mai : kuch bhi bolti hai. Mujhe to dar lagta hai ke lahi to physco to nhi ho gyi.
Swara : aapne mujhe physco kaha
Aise hi kuch der halki fhulki baate hui phir mai apne kamre me aake let gaya aur kal ke baare me sochne laga. Kush tha agar kal mar gaya to kamse kam 2 log to yaad karenge hi.
Aise hi nind aagyi. Sabere utha to dekha ghar me sab taiyari kar rahe the aur aaj saima maa bhi nhi aayi thi. Mai naha do ke taiyaar ho gaya or bahar aa gya . Mujhe Swara dikhai nhi di wo dost ke yaha gyi thi.
Mai abhi bahar aya hi tha ki aaj pehli baar maa (shikha Rajput) ne mujhe awaj di.
Mom : Reyansh..
Mai : ji kahiye kya kaam hai
Mom : hum sab bahar ja rahe hai hamare jane se pehle ye khir kha lo..
(mai man me : chalo kuch bura hi sochkar aapne naam to liya mera)
Mai jaan gaya tha ki is khir me jahar milaya gaya hai phir bhi maine keh diya
Mai : thik hai
Mom waha se jaa hi rahi thi ki mai bola.
Mai : kya pehla niwala aap khila dengi.
Mom ke muh se koi shabd nhi nikal rahe the wo waha se apne room me chali gyi chachi bhi unke piche ho li.
In room
Chachi : kya hua bhabhi usne khir khayi ya nhi?
Mom : wo chahta hai ki mai use apne hath se khir hilau.
Chachi : to khila dijiye na konsi badi baat hai.
Mom: nhi ye mujhse nhi hoga mai apne haath se use zeher nhi de sakti
Chachi : agar aapne aisaa nhi kiya to plan fail ho jayega aur bhaisahab aap pe hi gussa honge.
Mom kuch nhi boli aur mere paas aakar chair pe baith gayi aur boli.
Mom : chola mai khila deti hu.
Mai : ji.
Mom ne khir se bhara chamach apne kapte hue hath se uthaya aur mujhe khilane lagi.
Mere aakhon me nami aa gyi kyuki aaj pehli baa mom mujhe apne hath se khila rahi thi zeher hi sahi par khila rahi thi. Mai ne asoon ko chalakne nhi diya aur khir khatam kar di phir sab jaldi se kahi bahar chale gaye.
Mai chupchap dadaji ke khursi ke paas jakar baith gaya aur ab apni maut ka intajar karne laga. Mujhe khushi thi kamse kam abb iss narak se azadi milegi aur mai apne dadaji se mil sakunga.
Thodi der baad mujhe pet me dard hone laga aur aakhon ke saamne andhera chane laga mai wahi zamin pe gir gaya mere muh se jhaag aane laga.
Tabhi Swara jo abhi dost ke yaha se lauti thi abhi upar apne room me hi jaa rhi thi uski najar mujhpe padi. Wo daudte hue mere paas aayi aur boli.
Swara : bhaiya kya ho gya aapko uthiye.... Uthiye na
Mai uth nhi rha tha ye dekh kar wo dar gyi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Achanak use kuch dhayan aya aur usne meri saans check ki saans abhi bhi chal rahi thi.
Usne jaldi se ambulance ko phone kiya. Thodi der me ambulance aagyi aur usme mujhe le jaya gaya sawara bhi sath hi aayi . raste bhar wo roye ja rahi thi aur bhagwaan se dua maang rhi thi ki mai bach jau.
Swara : aap mujhe chod ke nhi jaa sakte....
Aur rone lagi. Phir mujhe operation theater me le jaya gaya. 2 ghante ke baad doctor aaye aur bole
Doctor : shukr hai aap inhe sahi time pe le aaye nhi to ye bach nhi pate kyuki inhe bohot poisonous zeher diya gya tha.
Swara ye sunkar shock ho gyi phir boli
Swara mai kabtak unse mil sakti hu.
Doctor : Aap unse 2 ghate me mil sakti hai .
Swara : thank you Doctor so much.
Doctor : koi baat nhi ye to hamara kaam hai par inhe poison diya kaise gaya aur kisne diya.
Swara : pata nhi doctor
Swara ne bhi iss baat per abhi dhyaan nhi diaya tha phir wo kuch sochne lagi...
Dekhte hai aage kya hota haiii......
Jaguaar
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Superbb UpdateUPDATE - 7
Mai ye sun raha tha meri aakh me aasoon the oar maine unhe rok liya kyuki kasam khai thi. Mai bhi sochne laga kal dekh hi leta hu ki ye log kitna niche gir sakte hai..
Abb ageee............
Mai waha se apne room me aa gya aur soch raha tha ki pichle janam me maine aise kaunse paap kiye jo aise maa baap mile hai .
Phir socha aaj saimaa maa aur Swara se jee bhar kar baat kar leta hu pata nhi kal ke baad rahu na rahu kyuki mujhe yakin hai ki kal wo log mujhe zeher khila hi denge. Phir mai utha aur saima maa ke pass chala gya aur jate hi unhe gale laga liya. Wo iss tarah achanak aate hi mere gale laga ne se chintit ho gyi aur pucha
Saima maa : kya hua beta. Kisine kuch kaha kya.
Mai : nhi maa.
Saima maa : phir aaise kyu gala laga hai
Mai : lag lene do maa kal kisne dekha hai kya pata hum rahe na rahe.
Saimaa maa : pagal kuch bhi bolta hai bhagwan kare tujhe meri bhi umar lag jaye.
Mai chup ho gya phir thodi der unse baat karke Swara ke room me chala gya.
Mai waha pocha aur darwaja khat khataya. Unsne darwaja khola aur mujhe dekh ke boli
Swara : aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai jo raja ji iss garib ke yaha padhare.
Mai : aree rani sahiba hum to aapke gulam hai aur aap aisi baate kar rhi hai.
Swara : anadar ayenge yaa darwaje par hi baat karenge.
Phir mai andar aa gya aur niche jamin pe baith gaya.
Swara : aree niche kyu baith gye
Mai : wo mujhe sofe pe ya bed pe baith ne ki adat nhi hai iss liye .
Ye sunke wo udas ho gayi par agle hi pal meri god me aake baith gayi
Mai : arree mere godh me kyu bith gayi
Swara : (ghur ke) meri marji .
Mai : achcha , mujh se promise kar mai tere pass rahu na rahu par tu aise hi khush rahegi.
Ye sunke use gussa aur aakhn me pani aa gya . Wo mera collar pakad kar mera muh apne paas le aayi aur meri aakhon me dekhte hue boli.
Swara : ye apne bola bhi kaise ki mai apke bina khush rahu. Jis din aap na rahe samaj lena ki maine bhi apna nata iss jindagi se tod liya.
Mai usse dur hua aur mahol halka karne ke liye bola.
Mai : kuch bhi bolti hai. Mujhe to dar lagta hai ke lahi to physco to nhi ho gyi.
Swara : aapne mujhe physco kaha
Aise hi kuch der halki fhulki baate hui phir mai apne kamre me aake let gaya aur kal ke baare me sochne laga. Kush tha agar kal mar gaya to kamse kam 2 log to yaad karenge hi.
Aise hi nind aagyi. Sabere utha to dekha ghar me sab taiyari kar rahe the aur aaj saima maa bhi nhi aayi thi. Mai naha do ke taiyaar ho gaya or bahar aa gya . Mujhe Swara dikhai nhi di wo dost ke yaha gyi thi.
Mai abhi bahar aya hi tha ki aaj pehli baar maa (shikha Rajput) ne mujhe awaj di.
Mom : Reyansh..
Mai : ji kahiye kya kaam hai
Mom : hum sab bahar ja rahe hai hamare jane se pehle ye khir kha lo..
(mai man me : chalo kuch bura hi sochkar aapne naam to liya mera)
Mai jaan gaya tha ki is khir me jahar milaya gaya hai phir bhi maine keh diya
Mai : thik hai
Mom waha se jaa hi rahi thi ki mai bola.
Mai : kya pehla niwala aap khila dengi.
Mom ke muh se koi shabd nhi nikal rahe the wo waha se apne room me chali gyi chachi bhi unke piche ho li.
In room
Chachi : kya hua bhabhi usne khir khayi ya nhi?
Mom : wo chahta hai ki mai use apne hath se khir hilau.
Chachi : to khila dijiye na konsi badi baat hai.
Mom: nhi ye mujhse nhi hoga mai apne haath se use zeher nhi de sakti
Chachi : agar aapne aisaa nhi kiya to plan fail ho jayega aur bhaisahab aap pe hi gussa honge.
Mom kuch nhi boli aur mere paas aakar chair pe baith gayi aur boli.
Mom : chola mai khila deti hu.
Mai : ji.
Mom ne khir se bhara chamach apne kapte hue hath se uthaya aur mujhe khilane lagi.
Mere aakhon me nami aa gyi kyuki aaj pehli baa mom mujhe apne hath se khila rahi thi zeher hi sahi par khila rahi thi. Mai ne asoon ko chalakne nhi diya aur khir khatam kar di phir sab jaldi se kahi bahar chale gaye.
Mai chupchap dadaji ke khursi ke paas jakar baith gaya aur ab apni maut ka intajar karne laga. Mujhe khushi thi kamse kam abb iss narak se azadi milegi aur mai apne dadaji se mil sakunga.
Thodi der baad mujhe pet me dard hone laga aur aakhon ke saamne andhera chane laga mai wahi zamin pe gir gaya mere muh se jhaag aane laga.
Tabhi Swara jo abhi dost ke yaha se lauti thi abhi upar apne room me hi jaa rhi thi uski najar mujhpe padi. Wo daudte hue mere paas aayi aur boli.
Swara : bhaiya kya ho gya aapko uthiye.... Uthiye na
Mai uth nhi rha tha ye dekh kar wo dar gyi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Achanak use kuch dhayan aya aur usne meri saans check ki saans abhi bhi chal rahi thi.
Usne jaldi se ambulance ko phone kiya. Thodi der me ambulance aagyi aur usme mujhe le jaya gaya sawara bhi sath hi aayi . raste bhar wo roye ja rahi thi aur bhagwaan se dua maang rhi thi ki mai bach jau.
Swara : aap mujhe chod ke nhi jaa sakte....
Aur rone lagi. Phir mujhe operation theater me le jaya gaya. 2 ghante ke baad doctor aaye aur bole
Doctor : shukr hai aap inhe sahi time pe le aaye nhi to ye bach nhi pate kyuki inhe bohot poisonous zeher diya gya tha.
Swara ye sunkar shock ho gyi phir boli
Swara mai kabtak unse mil sakti hu.
Doctor : Aap unse 2 ghate me mil sakti hai .
Swara : thank you Doctor so much.
Doctor : koi baat nhi ye to hamara kaam hai par inhe poison diya kaise gaya aur kisne diya.
Swara : pata nhi doctor
Swara ne bhi iss baat per abhi dhyaan nhi diaya tha phir wo kuch sochne lagi...
Dekhte hai aage kya hota haiii......
emotional update..!!UPDATE - 7
Mai ye sun raha tha meri aakh me aasoon the oar maine unhe rok liya kyuki kasam khai thi. Mai bhi sochne laga kal dekh hi leta hu ki ye log kitna niche gir sakte hai..
Abb ageee............
Mai waha se apne room me aa gya aur soch raha tha ki pichle janam me maine aise kaunse paap kiye jo aise maa baap mile hai .
Phir socha aaj saimaa maa aur Swara se jee bhar kar baat kar leta hu pata nhi kal ke baad rahu na rahu kyuki mujhe yakin hai ki kal wo log mujhe zeher khila hi denge. Phir mai utha aur saima maa ke pass chala gya aur jate hi unhe gale laga liya. Wo iss tarah achanak aate hi mere gale laga ne se chintit ho gyi aur pucha
Saima maa : kya hua beta. Kisine kuch kaha kya.
Mai : nhi maa.
Saima maa : phir aaise kyu gala laga hai
Mai : lag lene do maa kal kisne dekha hai kya pata hum rahe na rahe.
Saimaa maa : pagal kuch bhi bolta hai bhagwan kare tujhe meri bhi umar lag jaye.
Mai chup ho gya phir thodi der unse baat karke Swara ke room me chala gya.
Mai waha pocha aur darwaja khat khataya. Unsne darwaja khola aur mujhe dekh ke boli
Swara : aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai jo raja ji iss garib ke yaha padhare.
Mai : aree rani sahiba hum to aapke gulam hai aur aap aisi baate kar rhi hai.
Swara : anadar ayenge yaa darwaje par hi baat karenge.
Phir mai andar aa gya aur niche jamin pe baith gaya.
Swara : aree niche kyu baith gye
Mai : wo mujhe sofe pe ya bed pe baith ne ki adat nhi hai iss liye .
Ye sunke wo udas ho gayi par agle hi pal meri god me aake baith gayi
Mai : arree mere godh me kyu bith gayi
Swara : (ghur ke) meri marji .
Mai : achcha , mujh se promise kar mai tere pass rahu na rahu par tu aise hi khush rahegi.
Ye sunke use gussa aur aakhn me pani aa gya . Wo mera collar pakad kar mera muh apne paas le aayi aur meri aakhon me dekhte hue boli.
Swara : ye apne bola bhi kaise ki mai apke bina khush rahu. Jis din aap na rahe samaj lena ki maine bhi apna nata iss jindagi se tod liya.
Mai usse dur hua aur mahol halka karne ke liye bola.
Mai : kuch bhi bolti hai. Mujhe to dar lagta hai ke lahi to physco to nhi ho gyi.
Swara : aapne mujhe physco kaha
Aise hi kuch der halki fhulki baate hui phir mai apne kamre me aake let gaya aur kal ke baare me sochne laga. Kush tha agar kal mar gaya to kamse kam 2 log to yaad karenge hi.
Aise hi nind aagyi. Sabere utha to dekha ghar me sab taiyari kar rahe the aur aaj saima maa bhi nhi aayi thi. Mai naha do ke taiyaar ho gaya or bahar aa gya . Mujhe Swara dikhai nhi di wo dost ke yaha gyi thi.
Mai abhi bahar aya hi tha ki aaj pehli baar maa (shikha Rajput) ne mujhe awaj di.
Mom : Reyansh..
Mai : ji kahiye kya kaam hai
Mom : hum sab bahar ja rahe hai hamare jane se pehle ye khir kha lo..
(mai man me : chalo kuch bura hi sochkar aapne naam to liya mera)
Mai jaan gaya tha ki is khir me jahar milaya gaya hai phir bhi maine keh diya
Mai : thik hai
Mom waha se jaa hi rahi thi ki mai bola.
Mai : kya pehla niwala aap khila dengi.
Mom ke muh se koi shabd nhi nikal rahe the wo waha se apne room me chali gyi chachi bhi unke piche ho li.
In room
Chachi : kya hua bhabhi usne khir khayi ya nhi?
Mom : wo chahta hai ki mai use apne hath se khir hilau.
Chachi : to khila dijiye na konsi badi baat hai.
Mom: nhi ye mujhse nhi hoga mai apne haath se use zeher nhi de sakti
Chachi : agar aapne aisaa nhi kiya to plan fail ho jayega aur bhaisahab aap pe hi gussa honge.
Mom kuch nhi boli aur mere paas aakar chair pe baith gayi aur boli.
Mom : chola mai khila deti hu.
Mai : ji.
Mom ne khir se bhara chamach apne kapte hue hath se uthaya aur mujhe khilane lagi.
Mere aakhon me nami aa gyi kyuki aaj pehli baa mom mujhe apne hath se khila rahi thi zeher hi sahi par khila rahi thi. Mai ne asoon ko chalakne nhi diya aur khir khatam kar di phir sab jaldi se kahi bahar chale gaye.
Mai chupchap dadaji ke khursi ke paas jakar baith gaya aur ab apni maut ka intajar karne laga. Mujhe khushi thi kamse kam abb iss narak se azadi milegi aur mai apne dadaji se mil sakunga.
Thodi der baad mujhe pet me dard hone laga aur aakhon ke saamne andhera chane laga mai wahi zamin pe gir gaya mere muh se jhaag aane laga.
Tabhi Swara jo abhi dost ke yaha se lauti thi abhi upar apne room me hi jaa rhi thi uski najar mujhpe padi. Wo daudte hue mere paas aayi aur boli.
Swara : bhaiya kya ho gya aapko uthiye.... Uthiye na
Mai uth nhi rha tha ye dekh kar wo dar gyi aur jor jor se rone lagi. Achanak use kuch dhayan aya aur usne meri saans check ki saans abhi bhi chal rahi thi.
Usne jaldi se ambulance ko phone kiya. Thodi der me ambulance aagyi aur usme mujhe le jaya gaya sawara bhi sath hi aayi . raste bhar wo roye ja rahi thi aur bhagwaan se dua maang rhi thi ki mai bach jau.
Swara : aap mujhe chod ke nhi jaa sakte....
Aur rone lagi. Phir mujhe operation theater me le jaya gaya. 2 ghante ke baad doctor aaye aur bole
Doctor : shukr hai aap inhe sahi time pe le aaye nhi to ye bach nhi pate kyuki inhe bohot poisonous zeher diya gya tha.
Swara ye sunkar shock ho gyi phir boli
Swara mai kabtak unse mil sakti hu.
Doctor : Aap unse 2 ghate me mil sakti hai .
Swara : thank you Doctor so much.
Doctor : koi baat nhi ye to hamara kaam hai par inhe poison diya kaise gaya aur kisne diya.
Swara : pata nhi doctor
Swara ne bhi iss baat per abhi dhyaan nhi diaya tha phir wo kuch sochne lagi...
Dekhte hai aage kya hota haiii......
ek aakhri umeed thi ki maa apne bete ko jeher nahi degi lekin woh bhi khatam kar di maa ne apne bete ko jeher de ke..ab hero kabhi bhi unke sath achhese nahi reh sakega..chun chun ke badla lega sabse..ghar hi chhod de toh achha hai..!!
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Kaise maa baap h ek masoom sa bachcha kaise manhoos ho sakta h ab ek deal cancel ho gayi tow isme iss bachche ka kia haathUPDATE-4
Aise hi samay bitta gya ab janvi didi school jane lagi thi. Maa ki maar chalti rehti thi unhe maa pukarne pe aur chachi aur janvi mujhe paresha karti rehti par dadaji ke piche. Mai ye sab dadaji ko nhi batata tha kyuki mai nhi chahta tha ki mere karan dadaji ke rishte kisise kharab ho.
Abb aggeeee.......
Aise hi din bite, mahine bite aur saal bita. Mujhe jada kuch to samaj ta nhi tha par maar ke karan maa ke pass jane se darta tha isiliye mai jadatar dadaji ke kamre me rehta tha taki kisi ke samne na jana pade aur bina wajah dhulayi na ho jaye. Jab mai maa aur papa ko janvi didi aur swara ko pyaar karte Dekh ta to mera bhi mann hota ki wo mujhe bhi pyaar aur dulhaar dihaye par aisa nhi hota .ab saima hi mere liya maa thi aur dadaji bhi bohot pyaar karte the.
Abb mai 3 saal ka ho chuka tha, abb bari aayi mere school jane ki to papa ne saaf keh diya ki unke pass kisi aur ke liye koi paise nahi hai. Dadaji pass bhi jada paise nhi the aur na hi unke naam pe jamin jayejad thi siway ek khet ke. Jaise taise unhone mera admission janvi didi ke school me karaya kyuki unka manna tha ki abb mai sirf achche se padhne likhne ke baad hi apni jindagi sudhaar sakta hu . Admission to unhone karra di par ab sawal tha ki mai jaunga kaise kyuki school harare ghar se karib 5 km dur thi to saima maa ne kuch paise de kar mujhe bus lagwa di.
Kal mere school ka pehla din tha mai bohot jada khush tha. Mai soo gaya, agli subah muhje dadaji ne uthaya. Mai jaldi se taiyar hone gaya par jab mai uniform pahenne laga tab mujhe tie bandhna nhi aa rha tha to mai dadaji ke pass jane laga tabhi janvi didi dikhi to maine socha inhi se pooch loo .
Mai : didi kya aap mujhe bataingi ki tei kaise bandhte hai? (totli awaj me)
Jaise hi didi ne mujhe uniform me dekha usne mummy ko awaj lagayi.
Janvi didi : mummmyyy.... Mummmyyyt..
Mom: kya hua beta? Kyu chilla rhi hai?
Janvi didi : Mom kya ye kutta bhi mere school me jaega?
Mom : haa beta pta nhi kyu tumhare dadaji iss manhus per paisa kharch kar rhe hai.
(Janvi phir meri taraf gusse se dekhte hue)
Janvi didi: sun kutte tu mere school to aa rha hai per mujhe didi mat kehena nahi baat krna.
Mai : par didi mai to aapka chota bhai hu na.
Janvi didi : tu aur mera bhai teri aukat to ek kutte ki bhi nhi hai.
(didi ne bhi aaj whi kaha jo aksar mummy ya chachi mujhe kehti thi)
Meri aakhen bhar aayi thi mai roote hue dadaji ke kamre me bhaga.
Dadaji ne mujhe roote dekh pucha.
Dadaji : kya hua beta kyu roo rha hai.
Phir maine dadaji ko sab roote hue bta dia. Dadaji ko bhi kaafi bura laga par mujhe sambhalne ke liye wo bole.
Dadaji : beta aukat paidaishi nhi milti use banana padta hai. Isi liye maine tumhara naam bade school me dala taki tum padh likh kar bade aadmi bano.
Mai : bada aadmi kyu dadaji? ( utsukta se)
Dadaji : beta kyuki bade aadmi ke bhut dhan sampatti hoti hai aur uske saamne sab jhukte aur uska samman karte hai.
Mai bas unhe chup chap dekh rha tha. Dadaji phir bole.
Dadaji : beta meri ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna " Is duniya mei aadmi se jada kimat paiso ki hai ".
Dadaji ki ye baat mere zehen me ghar kar gyi aur maine kaise bhi bas bada admi banne ki thani.
Khair dadaji ne phir mujhe tie bandhna sikhaya phir mai bus me baithkar school ke liye nikal gya. Kuch der me Bus school pahuch gyi, Jab mai bus se utra aur school ke gate tak pahucha tabhi mere dad ki car aayi aur usme se janvi didi utri. Mai unhe dekhte hi unki baat yaad aa gyi to mai jaldi se apni class me bhag gya jab mai class me pahucha to mujhe sirf ek jagah khali dhikhi to mai waha baith gya. Mere sath ek ladka baitha tha par mujhe usse baat karne jhijhak ho rhi thi. Mai soch hi rha tha tabhi wo bola.
Ladka : hello mera naam amit hai? Tumhara naam kya hai.
Mai : hii, mera naam Reyansh hai.
Amit: kya tum mujhse doati karoge.
Mai : haa bilkul aaj se hum dost. ( totli awaj)
Amit : are ye kya tum to tutlate ho.
Mai : haa bachpan se mai aise hi bolta hu.
Amit : koi baat nhi tum dhire dhire sahi bolna sikh jaoge.
Phir teacher aagye phir padhai shuru ho gyi. Mai mann laga kar padh rha tha kyuki ab mujhe bada aadmi banna tha. Phir aise hi school khatam ho gya mai ghar wapas aa gya. Aaj mai bohot khush tha kyuki aaj maine ek dost banaya tha jiske sath mai baat kar skta tha khel sakta tha.
Aaise hi samay nikalne laga. Iss beech meri aur amit ki dosti badhti gyi .mai ab 6th class me tha aur janvi 7th me. Janvi jada baat nhi karti thi. Aur abb meri princess swara aur chachi ki beti divya bhi badi ho gyi thi wo bhi hamate sath school jati thi. Maa mujhe swara se dur rakhti thi, kabhi kabhi maa se chup ke uske sath baat kar liya karta tha. Chachi to bachpan se divya ko sikha rahi hai ki mai manhus hu mujhse dur rhe to wo to mujhse waise bhi dur rehti thi.
( aap to jante hi hai ki bachcho ki soch bachpan me kaisi hoti hai jaisa akar use do waisa wo banjati hai.)
Chacha ko mujhse bohot humdardi thi par wo papa aur chachi ke saamne kuch nhi kar sakte the. Maa to jaise bhul hi gyi thi ki unka koi beta bhi hai jise maa ki mamta ki jaroorat hai , par unki nazar me haisiyat ek kutte se bhi kam thi Yaha tak ki wo mujhe kisise beta kehkar bhi nhi milwati thi jise pata na ho ki mai kon hu. Jab koi ghar ata aur puchta ki mai kon hu to wo bolti ki " ye hamare ghar kaam karne wali naukrani ka beta hai " ye unke dil me DARD to hota tha par ye kafi had tak sach bhi tha kyuki unhone mujhe sirf janam diya tha par saima maa ne mujhe apna doodh pilaya tha jab maa ne pilane se mana kar diya tha aur unhone mujhe pal pos kar bada kiya.
Khair ab samay badal gya tha ab mai 4th me tha to mere padhai ka kharcha badh gya tha to dadaji ne bus band karwa di thi ab mai school paidal jaya karta tha. Kabhi kabhi school pohochne me late ho jata to teacher dat deti thi par teacher ko bhi pta tha ki mai paidal ata hu to jada kuch nhi bolti thi.
Jab kabhi bhi parents teacher meeting hoti to sab ke parents aate par mere sath sirf dadji aate ye dekh mujhe dukh hota kyuki janvi didi aur swara ke sath mom dad aate the par mere sath nhi. Maa baap ke pyaar ki kami ke karan kabhi kabhi dukh hota to mai akele me baith kar ro liya karta tha.
Jaise taise din kat rhe the phir ek din mai school se wapas aya tab dadaji kahi bahar gye the. Mai saima maa ke pass jakar baith gaya aur unse baat karne laga.
Mai : maa aaj school me mujhe amit ne laddo khilaya. Sach me bohot hi achchi tha. Aaj maine pehli baar khaya.
Saima : beta ek din aisa aayega mai tujhe dher sare laddo khilaungi..
( ye kehte hue saima rone lagi. Wo soch rhi thi kaise maa baap hai itne masoom aur pyaare bachche ko maa baap hote hue bhi anath ki jindagi jine ke liye majboor kar diya hai.)
Mai : maa aap roo kyu rhi hai.
Saima : kuch nhi beta meri aankh me kuch chala gya tha. Tu yaha baith mai tere liye khana lekar aati hu.
(ek baat batana chahunga maa ko lagta tha mai manhus hu isliye unhone mera khana apni rasoyi me banwane se mana kar diya tha. Is wajah se saima maa mere liye apne ghar se khana bana kar lati thi.)
Saimaa maa khana le aayi phir mai kahana khane laga.
Mai : maa apke hath ki daal bohot achi lagti hai mujhe.
Saima maa : beta har roj ek hi dal kahata hai aur roj yehi kehta hai aisa kyu?
Mai: kyuki aap isme dher sara pyaar dalti ho.
Unhone mujhe apane sine se laga liya.
( wo man me boli : dhanya ho gyi mai aisa beta mujhe mila hai. Ek garib ke ghar ki dal roti kha kar bhi roj kehta hai ki "isse tasty kuch bhi nhi ho sakta". )
Aise hi khana khatam ho gya phir mai bhar khelne chala gya. Shaam ko jab wapas aya to dekha dadaji abhi bhi nhi aaye the. Mai jaise hi apne room me jaane laga dad gate se andar aaate dikhe.kafi gusse me dikh rhe the. Wo mummy ke room me gye.
Mummy : kya hua bohot pareshan dikh rahe hai?
Dad: meri important deal cancel ho gyi.
Mummy : kyaa?
Dad : haa , mujhe pakka yakeen hai ye us manhus ke karan hua hai.
Chachi bahar khadi ye baat sun rhi thi . Tabhi aag me ghi dalne ke liye wo boli.
Cahchi : haa bhai sahab mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai ki ye zarur usi ke karan hua hai.
Dad: hai kaha wo manhus aaj koi use mujhse nhi bacha skata.
Dad bahar aaaye aur mujhe doodhne lage.
Aage dekhte hai kya hota haiiii.. ....
Dada ji n bahot sahi seekh di h paisa h tow sab kuch h
Ab Reyansh ko apni padhai per dhian dena chahiye or dikha de inn sabko ki m manhoos nahi hu
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
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Dad: hai kaha wo manhus aaj koi use mujhse nhi bacha skata.
Dad bahar aaaye aur mujhe doodhne lage.
Abb agggeee.........
Mai bhi apne room me hi jaa rha tha tabhi dad ki nazar mujh par padi . dad mera naam chillate hue meri aur doude.
Dad: Reyanshh...
Mai dad ki jordar awaj sun kar darr gaya. Dad mere pass pohoche aur
Chaataakkkk..
Mai dar gya aur pucha
Mai : kkkya hhua dad.? (haklate hue)
Dad : mat le mera naam apni gandi zubaan se. Aaj teri manhusiyat ki wajah se meri ek important deal cancel ho gyi.
Aur phir isi ke sath
Chaataakkk.. Chatakkk....
3-4 thappad pad gye mujhe. Phir bhi dad ka gussa kam nahi hua toh belt nikal kar shuru ho gye. Wo bas bina ruke maare jaa rhe the. Meri aakhon se bass aasoon nikal rahe the. Maa, chachi, janvi waha khade the par koi kuch nhi bol rha tha. Meri bhi bass aassoon aur chikhe nikal rhi thi.
(Dadaji ghar par nhi the tab)
Mai : aahhhh... Nhhhiii... Papa... Maine. Kkkuch nhii kiyyaa.. Dadajiii..
Tabhi waha saima maa aagyi wo dad aur mere beech me aake boli
Saima maa : sahab ruk jaaiye bachcha hai
Kuch ho jayega.
Dad : naukar hai to apni aukat yaad rakh aur nikal yaha se nhi to tujhe bhi aaj hi naukri se nikal dunga.
Saima maa bichari majbur hokar waha se nikal gyi kyuki gareeb thi uska pura pariwar uske bharose tha kyuki uska pati iss duniya me rha nhi.
Dad tab tak mujhe belt sw marte rhe jabtak unka gussa thanda nhi ho gya. Mai tab tak behosh ho chuka tha. Mera pura sharir dukh rha tha har taraf se chamdi udhad chuki thi usme see khoon aa rha thaa.
Gussa thanda hone ke baad Dad, mom, chachi bina meri taraf dekhe apne room me chle gye . Unko jata dekh saima maa meri taraf aai jaise hi unki nazar meri taraf gyi unhone tezzi ke saath rona shuru kar diya.
Unhone bhaag kar mera sar apni godh me rakha aur badbadane lagi.
Saima maa : kitne nirdayi log hai mere bachche ki mar mar kar kya halat kar di. Bahgwaan kare inhe narak me bhi jagah na mile.
Phir saima maa mujhe uthake jaise taise mere room me le gyi aur mujhe bed pe ulta lita diya aur mere loya malham lene bazar chali gyi. Par koi aur bhi tha jo ye sab hote hue dekh rha tha aur roo rha tha ye aur koi nhi balki Swara thi.
Saima maa ke jaane ke baad wo chupke se kamre me aa gyi. Aur jaise hi usne mere kandhe pe hath rha mere dard ke mare chikh nikal gyi.
Mai : aaahhhhh.. Nhii... Mai ne kuch nhi kiya
Mai bad badane laga. Meri aisi halat dekh Swara ka dil roo rha tha aur apne maa baap se ghinn aa rhi thi. Wo boli
Swara : bhaiyaa apko ab koi nhi marega mai hu naa.
Swara ki awaj sun maine uss ki taraf dekha meri aakhon se aasoon nikalne lage mai bolna chah rha tha par dard ke karan meri awaj bhi nhi nikal rahi thi.usne mere aasoon ponche aur boli.
Swara : bohot dard ho rha hai kya bhaiyaa.
Mummy papa sach me bohot gande hai unhone aap ko mara. Tabhi saimaa maa aa gyi aur swara ko dekh kar boli.
Saima maa : beta aapko yaha nhi ana chahiye nhi to apko malkin daatengi aur naa hi phir reyansh ke liye achcha hoga.
Wo jana nhi chahti thi par mere bare me sunn kar chali gyi kyuki wo apne maa baap ka bartav mere sath dekh chuki thi.
Saimaa maa ne phir malham lagana shuru kiya jissee meri chikkhe nikal ne lagi par roo saima maa rhi thi. Bada hi ajeeb rishta tha unka aur mera jab sab ne aur apno ne thukra diya toh unhone apnaya aur aaj zakhm mere hai aur " DARD " unhe ho rha tha.
Unhone to har zakhm par dawa laga di par aaj zakhm sirf jism par nhi hue the aaj dad ne mere rooh par zakham kiye hai. Unhone aaj unhone meri masoomiyat ko maar dala tha.
Aaj meri jine ki ichcha hi khatam si ho gyi thi , aaj mai bas mar jana chahta tha, mai chahta tha ki ab bass hameshake liye geheri neend me chala jau. Saima maa bhi mujhe dekh kar samaj chuki thi ki ye zakhm aage chal kar nasur hone wale hai.
Dadaji bhi thodi der me aa gye saima maa ne unke jaane ke baad jo kuch hua wo sara haal keh sunaya. Phir jo dadaji dhadte hue dad ke room me pahuche aur phir karib 1 ghante tak dad aur dadaji ki behes aur jhagda hua. Phir dadji mujhe dekhne chale aaye. Mujhe dekhte hi unki aakhon me assoon aagye.
(mai tab soo rha tha)
Dadaji : maaf karde mujhe mere bachche mai kuch kar na saka, aaj mujhe khud se ghinn aa rhi hai ki maine ek aisi aulad paida ki hai jise ek masoom bachche asoon nhi dikhte, uska dard nhi dikhta.
Dadaji waise hi baith ke bohot der tak rote rhe .
Us din ke maar ke baad mai 3 din tak room se bahar nhi nikla tha.
Samay apni raftar se chalne laga. Swara ko bhi mere liye kaafi bura lagta aur uska lagav mere prati badhta hi jaa rha tha. Mujhse baat karne ke liye wo mom ki maar bhi kha leti.
School me bhi kuch ladko ko pta chal gya tha ki janvi mujhse nafrat karti hai iss liye usse impress karne ke liye wo mujhe tang kiya karte par janvi ko farak nhi padta wo muh pher kar chali jati.
Aaise hi samay bit raha tha abb mujhe dadaji , saima maa aur swara ko chod kar kisi se koi matlab nhi reh gya tha kyuki divya toh waise bhi baat nhi karti thi wo sach me mujhe naukar ki aulad samajti thi. Par mere dil me aaj bhi un sab ke liye soft corner tha. Par samay ke sath dadaji ki tabiyat unka sath chod rhi thi Ab wo jadatar bimar hi rehte the . Mera samay bhi nikal jata tha school , dadaji ki sewa phir khana pina aur sona . Aise mai 10th me pahuch gaya tha.
Phir wo din bhi aa gya jab dadaji mujhe iss narak me akela chod kar chale gaye. Mai school se wapas aa rha tabhi maine dekha ghar me logo ki bhid lagi hui thi mai adar gaya aur dekha dada ji ko safed chadar oudhaye litaya gya tha . Mai ye dekhte hi zinda laash ki tarah gir gya aur behosh ho gya. Saima maa ne mujhe sambhala aur hosh me laya. Hosh me aate hi mai dadaji ki taraf dauda aur unse lipat kar rone laga aur badbada rha tha.
Mai : ye kya ho gya dadaji, aap mujhe akele yaha kyu chod kar chale gye, ab mai kiske sahare jiyunga.
Tabhi mujhe papa ne ghasit kar dadaji se alag kiya aur bole.
Dad : aaj tu mere baap ko bhi khaa gya aur jhute aasoon baha rha hai dur hat jaa mere babuji ke pass se.
Saima maa ye sun kar mujhe waha se alag kiya par mai to jaise laash hi ban gaya tha na mujhe kuch sunayi de raha tha nahi kuch dikhayi se rha tha.
Wo mujhe jaise taise waha se le gyi. Mujhe dadaji ki arthi tak ko hath nhi lagane diya gya us din dad ke liye man se bad dua nikli thi. Aise hi dadaji ka antim sanskar bhi ho gya. Mai to bas dadaji ki kursi ke pass niche baitha rehta, mujhe kuch hosh hi nhi tha.
Aage dkhte hai kya hota hai... .......
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Chalo janvi ko samajh aa gaya ki Reyansh manhoos nahi h lekin bahot dair kerdi samajhne m kyonki ab Reyansh k dil m sentiment hone ki jagah nahi reh gayiUPDATE - 6
Aise hi dadaji ka antim sanskar bhi ho gya. Mai to bas dadaji ki kursi ke pass niche baitha rehta, mujhe kuch hosh hi nhi tha.
Aabb aaggeeee............
Saimaa maijhe aisi halat me dekh nhi paa rhi thi tabhi use yaad yada ji dadaji ne use ek letter diya tha aur kaha tha ki mere marne ke baad Reyansh ko de dena. Wo jaldi se dadaji ke room me gayi aur wo letter nikal kar mere pass kar mujhe diya aur boli.
Saima maa : Reyansh mere bachche aise rote nahi agar tum aise hi asoon bahaoge to upar tumhare dadaji ki atama ko taklif hogi.
Mai : mai kya karoo maa mujhe unki bohot yaad aati hai .
Saima maa : par kya aise roone se aur yaad karne se wo wapas aa jayenge?
Mai : kaash aisa hota toh mai jindagi bhar ke liye inn asoon aur "DARD" ko kabul kar leta.
Saimaa maa : aise nhi bolte beta chal asoon poch aur ye le tere dadaji kaha tha ki mai tujhe ye tab du jab wo iss duniya me na rahe aur kaha tha ki use ye akele padhne ko kehena.
Mai ye sunte hi assoon ponche aur wo letter leliya. Aur bhaag kar apne room me chala gaya. Aur room ka darwaja lock kar diya aur dadaji ki chair ke pass baith gaya aur wo letter khola.
IN LETTER
(ab mai dadaji ki taraf se bolunga)
Mera pyare pote Reyansh agar tum ye letter padh rahe ho to mai iss duniya mai nhi raha hounga. Mujhe andaza tha meri halat ka, pta tha ki ab kuch hi din ka mehman hu . Mujhe mout ka dar nhi hai mujhe dar hai ki mere jane ke bad tera kya hoga kyuki mujhe pta hai bakiyo se tere rishte sirf naam ke hai ek sirf saima hai jo tujhe samajti hai par wo bakiyo ke bich kuch bol nhi sakti isliye mai chahta hu ki ab tu khud ko badal le kyuki
" Anyay karna jitna bada paap hai usse bada paap Anyay sehna hai " .tujhe meri kasam ki aaj ke baad royega nhi. Janta hu tu bachcha hai aur mai tujhe ladakpan me Mard bana rha hu par ye zaruri hai kyuki ye duniya achche logo ko chain se jine nhi deti. Mai tujhe kuch na de saka iska afsoos mujhe marne ke baad bhi rahega par ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna ki tu ek Rajput hai aur Rajput kabhi nhi harte.
Aakir me bas ek baat kahunga ki agar tu mera pota hai to tu ek din inn sabko jinhone tujhe thukraya hai unhe aisa karara jawab dega ki wo marte dum tak yaad rakhenge.
(Letter end)
Aaj akhri baar mai roya tha, jee bhar ke roya tha par uske bad kabhi apne aasun chalak ne nhi diye.
Dadaji ke jane ke baad ab akele saima maa ke liye school ka karch uthana mushkil ho rha tha to maine ek coffee shop me part time job shuru kar di. School ka kharcha bhi nikal jata aur kuch paise bacha kar gym bhi ahuru kar di thi abb school me jab bhi koi mujhe pareshan karta to mai bhi uske pura dum laga kar marta isske karan abb wo log bhi mujhse dur rehte pta nhi kaise janvi didi ko pta chal gya ki mai coffee shop pe kam karta hu wo ek din janvi didi chachi ki beti Divya ko lekar waha pohoch gyi.
Janvi didi : waiter.. Waiter
Mai waha order lene poch gaya. Jaise hi maine janvi didi aur divya ko waha dekha mai samaj gya ye yaha meri bejjati karne aayi hai.
Divya : ek garib order likh.. Ek Cappuccino Aur ek latte.
Janvi didi : aur ha ye ganda table poch.
Mai bina kuch bole chala gya aur wapas aake order serve kiya. Phir mai dusre order lene chala gya. Wo cooffe pee chuke the phir mai bill leke waha gya. Unhone paise diye , mai bache hue paise wapas de hi rha tha ki wo bole.
Janvi : are waiter keep the change.
Divya : haa waise bhi hamare yaha garibo me dan karte rehte hain infact humne to wk garib ghar me bhi pal rakha hai.
Mai : janvi didi aur divya itna bhi niche naa giro ki khud ki nazron me hi uth na sako.
Mai uski baat samajh gya. Mujhse waha aur ruka nhi gaya iss liya mai chala gya. Mere dimaag me bus ek hi baat chal rhi thi ki " haa mai garib hu, par kya garib insan nhi hote ya unhe kuch mehsus nhi hota" . Ye sab richa bhi dekh rahi thi
(richa mere sath kaam coffee shop me kaam karti thi wo mujhe se 5 saal badi thi)
Wo mere paas aayi aur pucha.
Richa : kon thi ye Reyansh ? tumhe itna jalil kyu kar rahi thi aur tum sun kyu rahe the.
Mai : kya karu richa kisamat ke hatho majbur hu garib jo thehra agar kuch use bol deta toh wo owner ko bolti aur wo mujhe yaha se nikal deta?
Richa : par thi kaun wo?
Mai : wo ladki wo hai jiske ghar mai rehta hu.
Richa : matlab tumhari family .
Mai : mujhe jaise garib ki kahe ki family.
Richa : oye tu koi garib nhi hai tu to sabse aamir hai kyuki tera dil bada hai tu dil ka sabse amir hai samjha.
Mai: haa samajh gaya par aab kaam karo agar us budhhe ne dekh liya to nikal dega kaam se.
Abb life todha track par chal rhi thi agale mahine meri 10th ki board exam thi to sirf padai aur kaam hi shuru tha. Padhai me mai amit ki madat kar diya karta tha aakhir wo mera pehla aur aakhri dost tha kyuki school me janvi didi ne ye baat faila di thi ki mai manhus hu iss liye koi mujh se dosti nhi karta par amit ko iss baat se koi farak nhi pada.
Aise hi ek mahina nikal gaya. Maine board ke exam de diye aur result ka wait kar rha tha. Mujhe result ki tension nahi thi kyuki mai shuru se topper tha har subject me.
Ek din mai amit ke ghar gya tha hum baat kar rhe the.
Amit : aur ladke kaha maje kar raha hai aaj kal.
Mai : behenchod yaha kaam se fursat nhi milti aur tu maje ki baat kar rha hai.
Amit : bhai gussa kyu kar rha hai mai to aise hi puch liya.
Mai : bhai tujhe sab pata to hai mere baare me phir bhi maje aur kush rehene ki baat karta hai baar baar.
Amit : maaf karde yaar mai tera dil nhi dukhana chahta tha..
Mai : chal chod iss baat ko sale baat baat par senti kar deta hai . Chal abb mai bhi ghar jaa rha hu shaam ho gyo hai. Bye
Amit : bye.
Mai ghar aa rha tha. Tabhi mujhe ek khambe ke paas se dabi hui chikh sunayi di maine waha jakar dekha to jo ladke mujhe school me tang karte the unhone janvi didi ko pakad rakha tha muh band karke. Mai bhagte hue waha pohocha aur bina soche jis ladke ne janvi didi ko pakda tha us ke lund pe mukka de mara wo sidha chillate hue niche baith gaya aur janvi didi aake kaske mere sine se lag gyi. Wo 3 ladke the ek to gaya tha kaam se abb yani bache do. Unme se ek bola.
1 : reyansh chod de ise kyu bacha rha hai ye to tujhe waise bhi jalil karne me koi kasar nhi chodti.
Mai : abe oo randi ki aulad wo jaisi bhi hai meri behan hai.
Ye bol ke maine didi ko apne piche kiya aur pass me padi eet utha ke dhar diya uske sar pe dusra ye dekh ke dar gya aur undono ko wahi chod kar bhag gya. Phir mai didi se bas itna bola aur chal pada
Mai : chalo ab ghar.
Wo bhi piche piche sar jhuka kar aa rahi thi aab unke dimag me bas mere wo shabd ghum rahe the " itna bhi niche naa giro ki khud ki nazron me hi uth na sako" aur unki aakhon se asoon ane lage. Phir hum ghar pohochne wale the to mai bola.
Mai : waise ye hua kaise.
Janvi : wo main apni friend ke yaha gyi thi aur gadi kharab ho gyi to driver ise thik karne laga to mai chalte hue aane lagi par jaise hi mai pole ke pass se gujri un ldko ne pakad liya par isse aage wo kuch karte tum waha pohoch aye aur aage tumhe pta hi hai..
Ye bolke wo chup ho gyi aur aasoo bahane lagi par ab inn asoon ka mol mujhe nhi rha tha. Phir mai bola.
Mai : thik hai par ab apna huliya sudharo aur ghar me ye baat mat batana.
Janvi didi : thik hai.
Unhone apna huliya sudhara aur hum ghar gye. Mai thodi der baad gya agar unke saath jata to ghar me bakheda khada ho jata.
Mai apne room me gya aur fresh ho kar niche baith gya kyuki mere room me koi bed ya sofa nhi tha ab mai baitha hi tha ki meri princess Swara dodte hue aai aur meri godh me baith gayi. ( tab swara aur divya 8 th me thi aur janvi 11th me) aur mere gal chumte hue boli.
Swara: bhaiya aaj kal meri yaad nhi aati kya aap mujhse baat hi nhi karte.
Ye bol ke usne muh fulla liya.
Mai : are meri princess naraj hai apbe bhaiya se. Par meri bhi to majburi thi kyuki meri exam chal rahi thi aur uake baad ghar me mummy bhi to rehti thi.
Swara : bhaiya aap tension bohot lete ho agar mummy kuch bolti to mai unhe keh deti ki mai aapse baat karne aai thi.
Mai : aur maar khati.
Swara : haa apke liye ye bhi sahi par mai apko maar khate nhi dekh sakti. Dekhna jab mai badi ho jaungi na tab aap ko iss ghar se bhaga le jaungi.
Mujhe uski baat pe khushi bhi ho rahi thi ki ye mujh se kitna pyaar karti hai aur haasi bhi aa rahi thi ki aapne bhai ko bhaga le jaegi.
Mujhe hasta dekh usne pucha.
Swara : bhai hass kyu rahe ho?
Mai : kyuki tu apne bhai ko bhaga le jana chahti hai... Ha... Hahaha..
Swara : to kya hua app mere ho aur aap pe sabse jada hak mera hai samjhe.
Ye bol usne mere gaal ko chumke bhaag gyi aur mai sar khujlata rha.
Wahi Janvi didi ke kamre me wo bed me sar dabaye roo rhi thi aur soch rahi thi.
Janvi didi ( man mai) : mai kitni galat thi ki mai use manhus samajhti thi wo toh itna achcha hai mai use jalil karne ke liye kya kya nhi kiya yha tak ke use pitwaya bhi phir bhi usne meri ijjat bachali. Mai usse kal maffi mang lungi apne har galti ke liye chahe mujhe uski maffi ke liye kuch bhi karna pade.
Ye soch te hue uske aakhon ke saamne wo sab chal raha tha jo usne mere sath kiya aur meri wo baat uski dimag me gunj rahi thi ki
"itna bhi niche naa giro ki khud ki nazron me hi uth na sako".
Wahi chachi ke room me kuch baat chal rhi thi.
Chachi : bhabhi bhaisahab kabtak us manhus ko iss ghar pe paloge ab to bauji bhi nhi rahe.
Maummy : par kya kare agar use ghar se nikal diya to samaj hamipe thukega.
Chachi : mai to kehti hue zeher de kar maar do uss mahus ko..
Mummy : nhi nhi mai kisi ki jaan nhi le sakti bhale hi mai use pyaar nhi karti par hai to wo mera beta hi.
Papa : mujhe lagta hai ki Kamya ( chachi) thik keh rahi hai agar hamne use zeher de kar maar diya to bahar ye keh sakte hai ki saanp ke katne se mar gya.
Chacha : chii.. Kitni nich sooch hai aap logo ki ek bachche ko marna chahte hai mai isme kabhi aap ka sath nhi doonga.
Papa : soch samajh ke bol chote. Agar sath nhi dena chachta to chup chap reh.
Pgir waha ye tey ho gaya ki kal mujhe zahar de kar mar diya jaaye.
Bahar darwaje par khada mai ye sab sun raha tha ( actually mai bahar jaa rha tha par dad ke room se apne naam ki awaj aati dekh mere kaan khade ho gye aur mai sunne laga)
Mai ye sun raha tha meri aakh me aasoon the oar maine unhe rok liya kyuki kasam khai thi. Mai bhi sochne laga kal dekh hi leta hu ki ye log kitna niche gir sakte hai..
Dekhte hai aagee kya hota hai.........
Yeh kiasa baap h use kyon nahi samajh aa raha h ki woh uska khudaka khoon h itni giri huwi soch ab zaher deker maarna chahte h
Lanat h aise maa baap per