Fantasy DARD

[LionHeart007]

Yaar mega update bolte ho to mega update hi do yeh chota sa update nahi

Khair update theak theak tha par ek baat hai yeh is hawas ko itni jaldi mat lao kahani mein

Haan yrr ye story me sex ko add nahi krna chahiye ,thora bohot romance thk gai jo normal ho but sex bilkul bhi add na kre to acha hai wrna story ka saara mazaa khraab ho jaigaa.

 

[A.A.G.]

zabardast update..!!
swara ki halat ka bahot bura lag raha hai lekin shikha aur janhvi ke liye nahi..muze toh yeh shikha reyansh ki maa bhi nahi lagti..!! ab dekhte aage kaisa action hota hai..!!

 

[Calm_777]

Haan yrr ye story me sex ko add nahi krna chahiye ,thora bohot romance thk gai jo normal ho but sex bilkul bhi add na kre to acha hai wrna story ka saara mazaa khraab ho jaigaa.

Bhai story ka theme dark hai to sex add karna zaroori hai warna aage build up me problem aayegi

 

[Junaid devil😈]

Bhai story ka theme dark hai to sex add karna zaroori hai warna aage build up me problem aayegi

Waiting for Update bro

 

[LionHeart007]

Bhai story ka theme dark hai to sex add karna zaroori hai warna aage build up me problem aayegi

Nahi yrr agr ap try kro to nhi hogi bcz agr hero aisa kare gaa to ye sahi nahi hai uska romance only heroin ke saath hona chahiye kisi aur ke saath kuch naa hi ho to acha hogaa ,ya ap aisa kr sakte ho ke dark energy ki wajah se hero sex ki traf jaane wala hota hai pr wo hamesh khud ko control krta hai aur sirf heroin ki saath bhi only romantic scene hi hon to acha hai wrna bhai agr sex add kr diya to XF pr adult material to bohot hai pr romantic thriller, aur action kam hai is liye meri to yehi suggestion hai ke sex add na hi kro .

 

[Don$mahi]

Nahi yrr agr ap try kro to nhi hogi bcz agr hero aisa kare gaa to ye sahi nahi hai uska romance only heroin ke saath hona chahiye kisi aur ke saath kuch naa hi ho to acha hogaa ,ya ap aisa kr sakte ho ke dark energy ki wajah se hero sex ki traf jaane wala hota hai pr wo hamesh khud ko control krta hai aur sirf heroin ki saath bhi only romantic scene hi hon to acha hai wrna bhai agr sex add kr diya to XF pr adult material to bohot hai pr romantic thriller, aur action kam hai is liye meri to yehi suggestion hai ke sex add na hi kro .

Bhai apna dimag mat lagao. Jaisa writer likh raha hai likhne do. Aur story ko enjoy Karo.

 

[LionHeart007]

Bhai apna dimag mat lagao. Jaisa writer likh raha hai likhne do. Aur story ko enjoy Karo.

Ok sir g

 

[Don$mahi]

Ok sir g

Main kisi ko hurt nhi karna chahta sirf writer ka paksh le raha hu but sabke apne apne opinion hote hai. Yadi bura laga ho toh sorry.
Mai v thoda bahut likhta hu. Writer joh hai jab story start karta hai tab maximum plot uske dimag me ban jata hai. Yadi thoda idhar udhar hota hai. Toh fir story likhne me interest kam hone lagta hai. Aur yeh story aise hi sahi jaa rahi hai. So bass writer ko apne hisab se likhne do.

Aur writer bhai aapse v request hai. Aap bahut hi chote update dete ho broo. Week me aap 2 update dete ho. But yadi usko 6k-7k word ka kar doge toh hame v accha lagega.

Sab readers se v darkhast hai ki aap sab v writer sahab ko bole thode update bade dene ke liye. Sayad sab bole toh Maan Jaye .

 

[LionHeart007]

Main kisi ko hurt nhi karna chahta sirf writer ka paksh le raha hu but sabke apne apne opinion hote hai. Yadi bura laga ho toh sorry.
Mai v thoda bahut likhta hu. Writer joh hai jab story start karta hai tab maximum plot uske dimag me ban jata hai. Yadi thoda idhar udhar hota hai. Toh fir story likhne me interest kam hone lagta hai. Aur yeh story aise hi sahi jaa rahi hai. So bass writer ko apne hisab se likhne do.

Aur writer bhai aapse v request hai. Aap bahut hi chote update dete ho broo. Week me aap 2 update dete ho. But yadi usko 6k-7k word ka kar doge toh hame v accha lagega.

Sab readers se v darkhast hai ki aap sab v writer sahab ko bole thode update bade dene ke liye. Sayad sab bole toh Maan Jaye .

Sorry ki koi baat nahi ,bcz bura lagne ka to sawaal hi nahi aata , mene apni baat kahi thi jo mujhe acha lagta hai wo mene bataya aur jo apki sahi laga wo apne bola to bura lagne.ki kya baat hai so don't feel sorry,
Mene sex add na krne ka is liye bola bcz us se story gandi ho jaati hai aur mujhe wo pasand nahi pr sabki apni rayee hoti hai apki bhi hai pehle me bhi sex stories prhta tha but ab mene chor diya hai is liye.

AUR JAHAN TK BAAT hai UPDATE KE SIZE KI TO ISME TO ME BHI APKE SAATH HUN WRITER SIR PLEASE IS BAAT PR THORA DHEHAAN DEN bcz Apki Updates ka size bohot kam hota hai aur late bhi aate hain to please is pr thora focus kren .

 

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