Thriller DARK GIRL (Completed)

[Casinar]

Sab padh liya Immo bro. Weise main baitha tha apne updates likhne aur kiya kia? Aap ke saare updates padhne lage. Its so interesting k rukne ka mann hi nahin kita buss padhta chala gaya.....
Nw going to start my update to be posted tomorrow.....
Immo bro weise tumne nah meri chawla family complete padha aur nah hi meri nayi Vihaan aur Ashita....
Half way tak chawla padhe the tum phir chorr gaye.....

 

[Rahul]

waiting new update

 

[The Immortal]

too good loved it. looks all natural and true.

Yup realistic Hona hi to is story ki beauty hai .

 

[The Immortal]

Sab padh liya Immo bro. Weise main baitha tha apne updates likhne aur kiya kia? Aap ke saare updates padhne lage. Its so interesting k rukne ka mann hi nahin kita buss padhta chala gaya.....
Nw going to start my update to be posted tomorrow.....
Immo bro weise tumne nah meri chawla family complete padha aur nah hi meri nayi Vihaan aur Ashita....
Half way tak chawla padhe the tum phir chorr gaye.....

Sorry casi Bhai . Wo kya hai na Mai Apne hi threads ko run karne Mai magan ho Gaya tha . To aaj se story padhna suru karta Hu .

 

[The Immortal]

waiting new update

Posting Rahul bhai

 

[The Immortal]

"Arrey Saloni Ji aap yahan?" Maine use dekhte hue puchha.
"Haan aise hi socha ke aapse mil loon" Vo andar aati hui boli.
"Haan andar aaiye na. Ye meri assistant hai Nisha. Nisha ye Saloni hain, hamari nayi client" Maine dono ke introduce karaya. Nisha apna bag vaapis table par rakh kar apni jagah ja bethi. Maine Saloni ko apni table ke doosri taraf rakhi kursi par bethne ka ishara kiya.
"Vo aapka koi phone vagerah nahi aaya so i wasnt sure ke aapko koi information mili yanahi. Maine pehle socha ke aapko phone karun par phir milne hi aa gayi"
"Bahut achha kiya. Vaise main aaj shaam koaapko phone karne hi wala tha"
"Did you find anything yet?" Usne aas bhari nazron se meri taraf dekhte hue puchha.
"Nahi abhi tak toh nahi par koshish kar rahahoon. Aapki behen ek mahine se lapata hai aur abhi toh filhal maine haath paon maarne hi shuru kiye hain"
"Oh" Uske chehre par ab tak jo ummeed thi vo mayusi mein badal gayi.
"Main asal mein aapse kuchh puchhna bhi chahta tha. Main aapki behen ke hostel gaya tha par vahan insaan ke roop mein bethi us bhains ne mujhe kuchh bataya hi nahi. Ulta mujhe dhakke dekar nikalne par aamada ho gayi. Toh jab aap vahan gayi thi toh kya aapko apni behen ke baare mein koi information mili?"
Meri baat sunkar uske hontho par muskurahat aa gayi.
"Jab main gayi thi toh tab bhi usne mujhse kaafi rudely baat ki thi. Maine apni behen kebaare mein puchha toh kehne lagi ke use kisi se koi lena dena nahi hai and she doesnt know ke kaun si ladki kab aati hai kab jaati hai. Said that she doesnt interfere in somebody's personnal life. Uske shabdon mein kahun toh jab tak mujhe use har mahine ki pehli tareekh ko rent mil raha tha, use na toh kisi mein koi interest tha aur na kisi se koi problem"
"Now thats strange. Mujhe usne ye keh kar tarka diya ke hostel ki har ladki uski apni bachchi ki tarah hai aur vo sabka bahut khyaal rakhti hai"
"And she still refused to talk to you even though one of the girls has been missing for1 month now?" Is baar pichhe se Nisha boli.
"I know" Maine uski taraf dekhte hue kaha"Its kinda weird and ironic at the same time"
Kuchh der ke liye kamre mein khamoshi chha gayi.
"Aap Mumbai mein kisi ke yahan reh rahi hain ya hotel mein?" Maine Saloni se puchha.
"Ek hotel mein ruki hui thi. Main asal mein kal shaam ko vaaapis ja rahi hoon" Usne bataya.
"Saharanpur?"
"Ji haan. Meri bhi job hai, Mummy Daddy akele hain isliye zyada din yahan rukna afford nahi kar sakti"
"Hmmmm" Maine samajhte hue kaha "Toh ye vajah thi?"
"Ji?" Usne na samajhte hue kaha.
"Is vajah se aapne mujhe hire kiya tha kyunki aap na toh yahan ki hain aur na yahan zyada din tak ruk kar apni behen ki talash kar sakti hain. Na aapko police par itna bharosa hai. So you needed someone joyahan reh kar aapki behen ko dhoondh sake. Jo extra koshish aap karna chahti hai use anjaam de sake"
"You are right" Usne haan mein sar hilaya.
"Fair enough"
"Abhi hostel ja rahi hoon apni behen ka saman uthane ke liye. Uska vahan ka kiraya due hue ek hafte se zyada ho gaya hai aur vo moti keh rahi thi ke agar maine kiraya nahi diya toh uska saman utha kar bahar phenk degi. Toh ek hafte ke jitne paise bante hai vo dekar saman saath le jaoongi"
"Ek kaam kariye, aaj nahi kal jaiyega aur main aapke saath chalunga. Aur shayad aapki behen ke saman se kuchh main rakhna chahun jo mujhe uski talash mein madad kar sake"
"Yeah sure, but why tomorrow?"
"Kyunki main abhi vahin se hi aa raha hoon aur kuchh aur kaam bhi hai mujhe" Maine kaha.
"Ok toh main yahan aaoon subah kal?"
"Nahi aap mujhe takreeban 10 baje hostel ke paas hi mil jaaiyega" Maine kaha.
Vo uthkar ja hi rahi thi ke achanak ruk gayi.
"Ek zaroori baat aur batani thi"
"Ji kahiye"
"Ek kisi Inspector Joshi ka phone aaya tha mere paas. Meri behen ki gumshudgi ke baare mein baat karna chah raha tha. Mujhe police station bulaya hai"
"Aapki behen ka case usi ke paas hai" Maineuse bataya "Kab ja rahi hain usse milne?"
"Aaj shaam ko hi"
"2 baaton ka dhyaan rakhiyega. Ek toh galti se bhi ye mat batana ke aap mujhe janti hain ya aapne mujhe hire kiya hua hai."
"Vo toh acutally main vaise bhi nahi batane wali thi. Ab uske saamne ye toh nahi keh sakti na ke mujhe uspe bharosa nahi isliye kisi aur ko bhi hire kiya. Par aap aisa kyun keh rahe hain?" Usne sawaliya nazar se meri taraf dekha.
"Mera aur uska kaafi purana pyaar hai" Maine haste hue kaha.
"Dont worry, i wont say anything"
"Aur doosri baat, apni behen ka saman aap kal hostel lene ja rahi hain, ye bhi mat kehna"
"All right" Vo samajhti hui boli.
Vo chali gayi toh main Nisha ki taraf palta.
"Ek kaam karte hain, lunch bahar kabhi aur kha lenge. Aaj tera ghar ke khane ka dibba hi kholte hain"
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[The Immortal]

Shaam theek 5 baje main hostel ke paas bani paan ki dukaan par khada cigarette ke kash laga raha tha. Kuchh der baad hi vo chowkidaar sada kapdo mein aata hua dikhai diya. Maine use aata dekh cigarette bujha di aur uski taraf chala par vo mere kareeb se aise guzar gaya jaise pehchanta hi na ho.
Ek pal ke liye to mujhe samajh hi nahi aaya ke kya hua par phir agle hi pal dimag ki batti jali aur main palat kar uske pichhe pichhe chal diya. Vo chalta hua gali se baharmain road par aa gaya jahan meri car bhi khadi hui thi. Car ke paas aakar vo ruk gaya.
"Andar beth kar baat karte hain. Aisa khade mein kisi ne mujhe aapse baat karte dekh liya toh museebat ho jaayega" Main uske pichha chalta car tak aaya toh vo mujse bola.
Maine car ka darwaza khola aur ham dono hi front seats par aa bethe.
"Kaun ladki ka information chahiye?" Meri taraf dekh vo bola. Bolne ke andaz se hi main samajh gaya ke vo Bihar ka rehne wala tha.
"Vo sab baad mein, pehle ye batao ke kisi ne tumhein mujhse baat karte dekha toh museebat kyun ho jaayegi?"
"Abhi aap pehle ya akele toh nahi hain na jo ladki logan ke baare mein puchh rahe hain. Aaye din koi na koi aa jata hai ke vo kaun ladki hai, vo kaisi ladki hai. Ham pehle batai dete the, phir ek do baar pakde gaye. Final warning mila hai hamein ke ab kisi ladki ka information bahar diye toh naukri se jaayenge" Vo ek saans mein bola.
"Hmmmm" Maine Saloni ki tasveer nikali "Isladki ke baare mein malum karna hai, Saloni Mitra"
Tasveer dekhte hi uske chehre ke bhaav badalte chale gaye. Usne kuchh bolne ke liyemunh khola hi tha ke phir fauran band kar liya.
"Iska toh zyada lagega saahib" Vo bargain karne par aa gaya.
"Aur aisa kyun?"
Jawab nahi aaya.
"Zyada kyun lagega?" Maine phir puchha par vo meri shakal aise dekhta raha jaise main faarsi mein bol raha hoon jo uske pallenahi pad rahi.
Maine samajhte hue ek 100 ka note aur nikala.
"Ab kya hai na sahib" Usne 100 ka note liya aur jeb mein daal liye "Itna bhola toh hamko bhi mat samajhiyega na aap. Ye ladki ke zaroor koi toh bada lafda hai. Subahisko puchhte hue pehle aap aaye, phir ek policewala aur ab shaam ko phir se aap."
Main janta tha ke vo Joshi ke baare mein baat kar raha hai.
"Kya bata sakte ho iske baare mein?"
Vo phir chup chap meri shakal dekhne laga. Maine ek 100 ka note aur nikala.
"Ye ladki ko dekhte hi ham samajh gaye thena ke ye sasuri bahut lafdabaazi wali ladki hai. Always hamko ise dekh kar lagta tha ke ye uper se jitni thi, andar se usse 100 guna zyada thi"
"Matlab? Thoda detail mein batao"
Par vo phir chup ho gaya. Maine jeb se is baar 500 ka note nikala.
"Ye aakhri hai, ab chup chap rattu tuote ki tarah gana shuru kar do varna jitna diya haisab vaapis le loonga aur tumhari complaint kar doonga. Maal se bhi jaoge aur naukri se bhi"
Meri dhamki kaam kar gayi.
"Koi saal bhar pehle ye yahan rehne ko aayi thi. Ek dam sidhi saadi, dekhne se hi lagta tha ke koi gaon ya chhote shehar ki hai. Hamko toh laga ke hamre Bihar ki hi hai. Hamne baat karne ka bhi koshish kiya par ye kisi se baat karti hi nahi thi. Pehle kaafi din naukri ke chakkar mein yahan vahan ghoomti rehti thi aur phir kahin shayad kaam mil bhi gaya tha ise. 2-3 mahine tak toh sab aisan theek hi raha.
"Phir?"
"Phir kya, phir chidiya ke par nikalne lag gaye. Shakal soorat aur rangat se koi khaas nahi thi par sab saman chaukas raha inka. Toh phir dheere dheere se kapde bhi aise ho gaye ke saman aur nikhar ke bahar ko aaye. Salwar kameez se jeans aur phir jeans se oo chhote chhote lehenge pe aa gayi"
Short skirts. Mumbai jaise shehar mein ye koi badi baat nahi thi.
"Toh isse tumhein laga ke ye lafde baaz hai?"
"Arrey nahi. Vo aadhe kate hue lehenge toh ihaan sab pehenti hain par iska chakkar kachhu aur hi raha"
"Kya?"
"Ek din ham ka dekhte hain ke raat ke waqt ek police ki gaadi isko chhodke gayi"
"Police ki gaadi?"
"Ji haan. Ab aap hi sochiye, jis ladki ko uske ghar par raat ko police ki gaadi chhodke jaaye, vo kaisan rahi hogi"
"Hmmmm" Main gaur se uski baat sun raha tha "Phir?
"Phir ye ek silsila hi ho gaya. Aksar ise log gaadiyon mein chhod kar jaate the aur beech beech mein ek aadh baar aur police ki gaadi ise chhodke gayi. Ab jahan tak hamari soch jaati hai, police ki gaadiyon mein toh vahi ladkiyan milti hain jo kahin raid mein pakdi gayi hon"
"Phir?"
"Phir yahi silsila raha. Pehle toh roz raat ko aa jaati thi par phir kabhi kabhi raat bhar nahi aati thi. Kabhi kabhi 2-3 din tak gayab rehti thi"
"Gaadiyon mein kaun log hote the?"
"Ab ye toh common sense ki hi baat hai saahib ke kaun aate honge. Ham toh vahi bata rahe hain jo hamne dekha" Usne daantdikhate hue kaha.
"Hmm"
"Phir koi ek mahine se ye yahan dikhayi nahi di hai. Hamein laga ke chhod kar chali gayi hogi par phir jab aaj aap aur police puchhte hue aayi tab ham samjhe ke lafda kuchh aur hi hai"
"Yahan hostel mein rehne wali ladkiyon mein koi iske kareebi?"
"Haan ek thi, Maya. Ye dono ek hi kamre mein rehte the. Par vo koi 3 mahina pehle chhodke chali gayi. Ham suna rahe ke kahin Pune mein shaadi kar li thi usne. Uske baad se ye akeli hi rehti thi"
"Aur koi ladki?"
"Aur kisi se toh ye sidhe munh baat hi nahi karti thi"
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[pakibest]

nice story

 

[Casinar]

raat ko padhta hoon Immo bro

 

[Rahul]