Thriller Dastan-ae-aladdin=》X~FORUM no.1 Thriller story

[Amir]

Ali ko is main kafi rich or pawar Wala banana chaiy . Or ek or hirwan b aad kry mery khiyal say agy apko Jo behtar lagy bro

 

[Amir]

Update kab Dy rahy ho suryaa bro

 

[Suryaa]

Ali ko is main kafi rich or pawar Wala banana chaiy . Or ek or hirwan b aad kry mery khiyal say agy apko Jo behtar lagy bro

mai eske bare mai sochuga amir bhaiya

 

[Suryaa]

Update kab Dy rahy ho suryaa bro

abhi toda busy chle raha hu vo kya hai na doste ki shadi hai
jese hi free hota hu update post kr dunga

 

[Vikram singh rana]

Daastan-ae-aladdin

Episode ~ 4​

Ab tak,

Kabir- waise ab ham kaha chale..??...

Ali- Meri bahan ke pass.....pata nahi uski kya halat hui hogi......

Ye kah kar ali aur kabir satara ke liye ravana ho gaye.....

aur phir kuch hee ghanto mai wo dono.....satara pahuch gaye.....

Janha pahuch kar kabir bola....

Kabir- ab kaha chale bhai..??..

Ali- Aman mohalla ki tarafm....maine t.v mai wahi mohalla dekha tha.....

Kabir- thik hai.....

Ab aage,

Phir ali aur kabir aman mohalla ki taraf chle diye......phire jese hi vo vaha pahoche tb kabir bola

Kabir- Bhai aapka ghar kaha hee ????.......jalde batao mai sana aape se jalde se jalde milna chahta hu

Ali- mile lena pr pahale ....mujhe sana ko dhunde nai to do....pata nahi vo kaha hoge

Kabir- kyu aapko pata nahi???....agar nahi to hme kise se phuch sakte hee...ruke y mai use dukane wale
se phuch kr aata hu

Ali(kabir ka hath pakde te huve)- ese galti bhule kr bhi mate kr dena.....kyuki agar kise ko y bhanak lage ki koe sana k bare mai puch raha tha...to unhe y samjhne mai der nahi lage ge ki mai zinda hu.....aur agar kise ko y pata laga to hmare sare mhnate pr pani pher jae ga

Kabir- Agar esa h to aap hi batao hme sana aape ko kise dhundegay????

Ali(khuch soch kr)- chlo maire sath....mai janta hu....ab hme kya karna hai

Kabir- kaha jana hai...khuch batao to sahi???

Ali- bulbul cha-cha k pass

Kabir- bulbul cha-cha ???? (Khuch soch kr)....kahi y vahi bulbul cha-cha to nahi jo hr bate ghuma phira kr bolte hai

Ali- ha y vahi bulbul cha-cha hai....abe bate badmai aur chlo maire sath

Phir ali aur kabir bulbul cha-cha k ghar ki taraf chle diye aur khuch hi palo mai vo unke ghar k bhar pahoch gae

Phir kabir nai unka gate khate-khataya pr andar se koe jawab nahi aaya es karn usne ek bar phir gate khate-khataya pr nateja es bar bhi vahi tha jo pahle tha

Pr ab kabir thoda chide gaya tha aur usne gate khate- khatane ki jagah use pete pete ke bajana suru kr diya aur uske y chide-chadahate rang lae aur andar se awaz aae

Bulbul Chacha - Are kone kambakte hai jo maire darwaje ko tabla bana raha hai??

Andar se aae awaj ko sune kr ali aur kabir dono k hi manobhaw badale gae...ek tarf jaha kabir ki chide- chadahate kam hoe kyuki ab es chide- chadahate ki jagah ek jeet ki muskan thi

Ki aakhire kaar uske pariyas safale huve aur kise nai jawabe diya vahi ali k muh pr ek muskan aa gae aur aakho mai aasu...kyuki aaj etnai dino bade usne kise apne ki awaz sune thi

Jaha ali aur kabir dono hi apne -apne bhawnao k bhawar mai gote laga rahi the...ki tabhi bulbul chacha nai apne ghar ka darwaja khola aur bole

Bulbul Chacha- Bolo marjaneyo tum dono nai maire mastak par daste kyu de hai..??? agar koe jarure kaam hai to bolo warna apne muh ka gul dasta lekr yaha se dafa ho jaao

Y sune kabir to hiran aur pareshan tha ki y bulbul chacha kya bate kr rahi hai...pr tabhi use yaade aaya ki enki aadate hai hr bate ko ghuma phira kr kahna

Jese hi kabir ko y bate yaade aae uske manobhaw samaney hone lage....pr vahi ali ki taraf mamla khuch alag hi tha vo bs ek tk bulbul chacha ko dekh raha tha aur hse raha tha

Kabir to ali k mano bhawo se anjane tha pr bulbul chacha adhik der tk anjane nahi rahi aur unhone ali se kaha

Bulbul chacha- kyu ladke mai tujhe koe joke lagta hu jo tu mujhe dekh kr hs raha hai....dekh agar koe bate hai to use bate ki jalde se ulte kr aur nikale maire pass pura dine nahi hai

Y sune kr ali hasa aur bola

Ali- kya bulbul chacha aapke pass aapke jin k liye time nahi hai

Y sune kr bulbul chacha shock ho gae ....pr apne bhawo ko ujagar na karte huve unhone ali aur kabir ko andar aane ko kaha aur phire jese he vo andar aae unhone darwaja bande kr ali ko apne gale se laga liya

Aur kahne lage

Bulbul chacha- Kaha tha maire jin....pichle 6 mahino se maine tujhe nahi dekha....pata hai esa ek bhi dine nahi tha jes dine maine tujhe yaade na kiya ho

Ali-Maine bhi aapko hr roj yaade kiya tha bulbul chacha

Bulbul Chacha- pata nahi kise manhoos ki nazar lag gae....jo hmara hastha khelta pariwar barbade ho gaya.....tujhe pata hai use qayamate ki raat sabh khuch jale kr swah ho gaya....khuch bhi nahi bacha....sabe mare gae

Ali(rote huve)- use raat ko kese bhul sakta hu mai bulbul cha-cha .....use raat maine vo sbe kho diya jo maire liye jarure tha....maira pariwar.....maira ghar....maira naam....sbe khucH

Apko pata he pichle 6 mahino se bs zinda lase k trh ghum raha tha....pr kle maine tv pr dekha k pari zinda hai....bs y jaan kr mai khude ko roke na saka aur yaha aa gaya

Bulbul chacha(chock kr)- Kya sana zinda hai....allah ka lakh lakh sukra hai.....ki vo masum bachi zinda hai......are y to bata k vo kaha hai.???....mujhe bs abe use se milna hai

Ali- mai bhi use se milna chahta hu bulbul chacha .....ese liye mai yaha aapke pass aya hu

Bulbul chacha- kya??? tu abhi tk use se nahi mila

Ali- ha bulbul chacha.....kyuki aapke madade k bina mai use se nahi mile sakta

Bulbul chacha- bata maire bache...tujhe maire kya madade chahiye....mujhe se jo bne padega mai jarur karuga

Ali- Bulbul chacha kya aap nawabo k kapdo ka intezzam kr sakte hai

Bulbul chacha- kar to sakta hu pr...maire bache eski jarurate kya hai

Ali- Bulbul chacha vo kya hai na sana se milne k liye hme sana ko dhunde na padega....aur y kaam bina kise se phuche mumkine nahi hai.....es liye mujhe roop badale kr jana padega

Bulbul chacha- are agae logo se pata hi karna hai to ....mai kr deta hu ...use mai etna tame-jhame karne ki kya jarurate hai

Ali- jarurate hai bulbul chacha kyuki aap ghar se kam hi bhar nikale te ho.....aur vo bhi tb jab koe bhoute jarure kaam ho....aur agar aap logo se pari k bare mai phuchoge to unke dimage mai y bate jarur aae ge

Ke achank kya huva jo aap ko pari k bare mai phuchna pada...aur agar esa huva to hmare shubchintako ko y samjhe te der nahi lage ge ki mai zinda hu.....aur agar esa huva to pari ke jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai

Bulbul chacha- ohhh...maire bache maine to y socha hi nahi...tu sahi kah raha hai....mai bs abhi thode der mai sare chizo k vevasta karta hu

y kah kr bulbul chacha ek kamre mai chle gae

y dekh kr kabir hiran huva

Kabir- Ali bhai ...bulbul chacha to kah rahe the ki vo samane ki vevasta karne gae hai...to phire vo andar
kyu chle gae

Ali(hs kr)- kyuki unke pass khajana hai....aur vo use khajane mai se hmare kaam ki chez dhundenai gae hai

Kabir(soch mai pde kr)- mtlb mai kuch samjha nahi

Ali- are bulbul chacha ko kapdo ka bhoute shok hai es liye vo he trah ki phoshak ekhata karte rahte hai....es karn aaj unke pass kapdo ka khajana bne gaya hai

Kabir-ohhhhhh to y bate hai

Abhi ali aur kabir bate kr hi rahee the ki tabhi bulbul chacha aa gae aur bole

Bulbul chacha- y le maire bache ...maire kahyale se en kapdo se tumhara kaam bne jae ga

Bulbul chacha ki bate sune ali ka dhyaan vaha gaya to usne upar se niche tke un kapdo ko ek bare nihara aur kaha

Ali- Ha bulbul chacha ense kaam bne jae ga

Phire ali aur kabir nai vo kapde liye aur pahane liye ene dekh kr bulbul chacha bole

Bulbul chacha- ek dam nawabe lag rahi ho....abe jaoo mare bacho aur maire pyare bache ko lekr aao

Ali- jarur bulbul chacha

Y kah kr ali aur kabir dono bahr mohalle ki aur chle diye

bahar pahoch kr kabir bola

Kabir- ab kya ali bhai ....kaha se surrwate kare

Ali- vahi se ...jo sab aane jane wale ke khabar rakhta hai

Kabir- mtlb??

Ali- pane wale se

Kabir- thke hai

Phire ali aur kabir dono pane wale k pass gae aur phire ali bola

Ali- are o mia ek special pane bana do hme dono k liye

Paane wala- je hujur....wesi aap dono ko kabhi es mohalle mai dekha nahi

Ali- hi...hi...hi....are dekhoge tb na jabe hme yaha k hoge.....hme to yaha ek kaam se aae hai.....haina kabir mia

Kabir- ha ali mia....hme dono yaha bhoute jarure kaam se aae hai

Paane wala- esa kya jarure kaam tha hajure ....jo aap ko es mohalle mai khiche laya

Ali- Vo kya hai na hmare walde ab aakhre sase le rahai hee......aur unke y ichiya hai ke unke intekaale se pahle hme 20 manshik roop se pidete logo ko ghode le kr unka ilaze karae...take unke duwa se hmare walde jannate ko pyare ho jae

Paane wala- bada hi nek khalyale hai aapke walde ka

Ali- nek to hai pr kya kare pura nahi hoga

Paane wala- kise mai khuch samjha nahi

Ali- are kya batae bhai pure share ka chakar laga liya pr kahi bhi koe manshik roop se pidete nahi mila......pr hme dono ne hare nahi mane aur hr mohale mai ja ja kr phuch ke kya unhone kise manshik roop se pidete wekte ko dekha hai pr sbne kaha ki nahi

Vo to bhala aur use aadmae ka jesne hme bata ki es mohale mai usne ek ladki ko dekha tha jo manshik roop se pidete hai....to hme yaha chle aae....pr abhi tke hme vo ladki nahi mile....kya tumne use dekha hai kya

Paane wala- ha maine use ladki ko dekha hai....bhoute pareshane hai vo bichare pata nahi upar wale ne uske sath esa kyu kiya

Ali- kya tum mujhe uska pata bata sakte ho


Paane wala- ha hujur es nek kaam me mai bhi apna yogdane jarur dena chahuga

Ali- aapka bhoute bhote shukriya

Paane wala- shukriya kisa hujur insane hi to insane k kaam aata hai.....aap do min. ruke y mai aapko use tke le chalta hu....vo bichare pure samye vahi bate rahte hai aur bse ek rate lagate rahte hai....ki
"maira bhai aae ga aur mujhe yaha se le jae ga"

Y bate sune kr ali ka dil bhar aaya aur vo apne yaado mai kho gaya

y bate kabir samje gaya tha aur usne bate sambhale te huve kaha

Kabir- ji bhai aap jb tke kahege hme intezzar karne k liye tayaar hai.....bs aap hme use ladki tke le jae ye

Paane wala- bs abhi lo

y kah kr pane wale nai dukane bande kr de aur vo ali aur kabir ko apne piche aane ka kah kr unke sath chle diya

Aaj k liye itna hi
aapka chota bhai
Suryaa

and

Thanks for reading

Woooooo hmmmm
Good update.....

Aladdin apni bahan se milnr jaa raha hai.....dekhte hai aage kya Hota hai....

Keep it up...
Thanks




And yes one more thing.....
Iska edited version kuch der me send karta hu.....
Thanks

 

[Hayaan]

abhi toda busy chle raha hu vo kya hai na doste ki shadi hai
jese hi free hota hu update post kr dunga

Chalo Bhai Aapke Free hone ka wait karte hai....
Waiting For next.....

 

[Asif khan]

Good update

 

[Suryaa]

Good update

Thanks asif bhaiya

 

[Sona]

Daastan-ae-aladdin

Episode ~ 4​

Ab tak,

Kabir- waise ab ham kaha chale..??...

Ali- Meri bahan ke pass.....pata nahi uski kya halat hui hogi......

Ye kah kar ali aur kabir satara ke liye ravana ho gaye.....

aur phir kuch hee ghanto mai wo dono.....satara pahuch gaye.....

Janha pahuch kar kabir bola....

Kabir- ab kaha chale bhai..??..

Ali- Aman mohalla ki tarafm....maine t.v mai wahi mohalla dekha tha.....

Kabir- thik hai.....

Ab aage,

Phir ali aur kabir aman mohalla ki taraf chle diye......phire jese hi vo vaha pahoche tb kabir bola

Kabir- Bhai aapka ghar kaha hee ????.......jalde batao mai sana aape se jalde se jalde milna chahta hu

Ali- mile lena pr pahale ....mujhe sana ko dhunde nai to do....pata nahi vo kaha hoge

Kabir- kyu aapko pata nahi???....agar nahi to hme kise se phuch sakte hee...ruke y mai use dukane wale
se phuch kr aata hu

Ali(kabir ka hath pakde te huve)- ese galti bhule kr bhi mate kr dena.....kyuki agar kise ko y bhanak lage ki koe sana k bare mai puch raha tha...to unhe y samjhne mai der nahi lage ge ki mai zinda hu.....aur agar kise ko y pata laga to hmare sare mhnate pr pani pher jae ga

Kabir- Agar esa h to aap hi batao hme sana aape ko kise dhundegay????

Ali(khuch soch kr)- chlo maire sath....mai janta hu....ab hme kya karna hai

Kabir- kaha jana hai...khuch batao to sahi???

Ali- bulbul cha-cha k pass

Kabir- bulbul cha-cha ???? (Khuch soch kr)....kahi y vahi bulbul cha-cha to nahi jo hr bate ghuma phira kr bolte hai

Ali- ha y vahi bulbul cha-cha hai....abe bate badmai aur chlo maire sath

Phir ali aur kabir bulbul cha-cha k ghar ki taraf chle diye aur khuch hi palo mai vo unke ghar k bhar pahoch gae

Phir kabir nai unka gate khate-khataya pr andar se koe jawab nahi aaya es karn usne ek bar phir gate khate-khataya pr nateja es bar bhi vahi tha jo pahle tha

Pr ab kabir thoda chide gaya tha aur usne gate khate- khatane ki jagah use pete pete ke bajana suru kr diya aur uske y chide-chadahate rang lae aur andar se awaz aae

Bulbul Chacha - Are kone kambakte hai jo maire darwaje ko tabla bana raha hai??

Andar se aae awaj ko sune kr ali aur kabir dono k hi manobhaw badale gae...ek tarf jaha kabir ki chide- chadahate kam hoe kyuki ab es chide- chadahate ki jagah ek jeet ki muskan thi

Ki aakhire kaar uske pariyas safale huve aur kise nai jawabe diya vahi ali k muh pr ek muskan aa gae aur aakho mai aasu...kyuki aaj etnai dino bade usne kise apne ki awaz sune thi

Jaha ali aur kabir dono hi apne -apne bhawnao k bhawar mai gote laga rahi the...ki tabhi bulbul chacha nai apne ghar ka darwaja khola aur bole

Bulbul Chacha- Bolo marjaneyo tum dono nai maire mastak par daste kyu de hai..??? agar koe jarure kaam hai to bolo warna apne muh ka gul dasta lekr yaha se dafa ho jaao

Y sune kabir to hiran aur pareshan tha ki y bulbul chacha kya bate kr rahi hai...pr tabhi use yaade aaya ki enki aadate hai hr bate ko ghuma phira kr kahna

Jese hi kabir ko y bate yaade aae uske manobhaw samaney hone lage....pr vahi ali ki taraf mamla khuch alag hi tha vo bs ek tk bulbul chacha ko dekh raha tha aur hse raha tha

Kabir to ali k mano bhawo se anjane tha pr bulbul chacha adhik der tk anjane nahi rahi aur unhone ali se kaha

Bulbul chacha- kyu ladke mai tujhe koe joke lagta hu jo tu mujhe dekh kr hs raha hai....dekh agar koe bate hai to use bate ki jalde se ulte kr aur nikale maire pass pura dine nahi hai

Y sune kr ali hasa aur bola

Ali- kya bulbul chacha aapke pass aapke jin k liye time nahi hai

Y sune kr bulbul chacha shock ho gae ....pr apne bhawo ko ujagar na karte huve unhone ali aur kabir ko andar aane ko kaha aur phire jese he vo andar aae unhone darwaja bande kr ali ko apne gale se laga liya

Aur kahne lage

Bulbul chacha- Kaha tha maire jin....pichle 6 mahino se maine tujhe nahi dekha....pata hai esa ek bhi dine nahi tha jes dine maine tujhe yaade na kiya ho

Ali-Maine bhi aapko hr roj yaade kiya tha bulbul chacha

Bulbul Chacha- pata nahi kise manhoos ki nazar lag gae....jo hmara hastha khelta pariwar barbade ho gaya.....tujhe pata hai use qayamate ki raat sabh khuch jale kr swah ho gaya....khuch bhi nahi bacha....sabe mare gae

Ali(rote huve)- use raat ko kese bhul sakta hu mai bulbul cha-cha .....use raat maine vo sbe kho diya jo maire liye jarure tha....maira pariwar.....maira ghar....maira naam....sbe khucH

Apko pata he pichle 6 mahino se bs zinda lase k trh ghum raha tha....pr kle maine tv pr dekha k pari zinda hai....bs y jaan kr mai khude ko roke na saka aur yaha aa gaya

Bulbul chacha(chock kr)- Kya sana zinda hai....allah ka lakh lakh sukra hai.....ki vo masum bachi zinda hai......are y to bata k vo kaha hai.???....mujhe bs abe use se milna hai

Ali- mai bhi use se milna chahta hu bulbul chacha .....ese liye mai yaha aapke pass aya hu

Bulbul chacha- kya??? tu abhi tk use se nahi mila

Ali- ha bulbul chacha.....kyuki aapke madade k bina mai use se nahi mile sakta

Bulbul chacha- bata maire bache...tujhe maire kya madade chahiye....mujhe se jo bne padega mai jarur karuga

Ali- Bulbul chacha kya aap nawabo k kapdo ka intezzam kr sakte hai

Bulbul chacha- kar to sakta hu pr...maire bache eski jarurate kya hai

Ali- Bulbul chacha vo kya hai na sana se milne k liye hme sana ko dhunde na padega....aur y kaam bina kise se phuche mumkine nahi hai.....es liye mujhe roop badale kr jana padega

Bulbul chacha- are agae logo se pata hi karna hai to ....mai kr deta hu ...use mai etna tame-jhame karne ki kya jarurate hai

Ali- jarurate hai bulbul chacha kyuki aap ghar se kam hi bhar nikale te ho.....aur vo bhi tb jab koe bhoute jarure kaam ho....aur agar aap logo se pari k bare mai phuchoge to unke dimage mai y bate jarur aae ge

Ke achank kya huva jo aap ko pari k bare mai phuchna pada...aur agar esa huva to hmare shubchintako ko y samjhe te der nahi lage ge ki mai zinda hu.....aur agar esa huva to pari ke jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai

Bulbul chacha- ohhh...maire bache maine to y socha hi nahi...tu sahi kah raha hai....mai bs abhi thode der mai sare chizo k vevasta karta hu

y kah kr bulbul chacha ek kamre mai chle gae

y dekh kr kabir hiran huva

Kabir- Ali bhai ...bulbul chacha to kah rahe the ki vo samane ki vevasta karne gae hai...to phire vo andar
kyu chle gae

Ali(hs kr)- kyuki unke pass khajana hai....aur vo use khajane mai se hmare kaam ki chez dhundenai gae hai

Kabir(soch mai pde kr)- mtlb mai kuch samjha nahi

Ali- are bulbul chacha ko kapdo ka bhoute shok hai es liye vo he trah ki phoshak ekhata karte rahte hai....es karn aaj unke pass kapdo ka khajana bne gaya hai

Kabir-ohhhhhh to y bate hai

Abhi ali aur kabir bate kr hi rahee the ki tabhi bulbul chacha aa gae aur bole

Bulbul chacha- y le maire bache ...maire kahyale se en kapdo se tumhara kaam bne jae ga

Bulbul chacha ki bate sune ali ka dhyaan vaha gaya to usne upar se niche tke un kapdo ko ek bare nihara aur kaha

Ali- Ha bulbul chacha ense kaam bne jae ga

Phire ali aur kabir nai vo kapde liye aur pahane liye ene dekh kr bulbul chacha bole

Bulbul chacha- ek dam nawabe lag rahi ho....abe jaoo mare bacho aur maire pyare bache ko lekr aao

Ali- jarur bulbul chacha

Y kah kr ali aur kabir dono bahr mohalle ki aur chle diye

bahar pahoch kr kabir bola

Kabir- ab kya ali bhai ....kaha se surrwate kare

Ali- vahi se ...jo sab aane jane wale ke khabar rakhta hai

Kabir- mtlb??

Ali- pane wale se

Kabir- thke hai

Phire ali aur kabir dono pane wale k pass gae aur phire ali bola

Ali- are o mia ek special pane bana do hme dono k liye

Paane wala- je hujur....wesi aap dono ko kabhi es mohalle mai dekha nahi

Ali- hi...hi...hi....are dekhoge tb na jabe hme yaha k hoge.....hme to yaha ek kaam se aae hai.....haina kabir mia

Kabir- ha ali mia....hme dono yaha bhoute jarure kaam se aae hai

Paane wala- esa kya jarure kaam tha hajure ....jo aap ko es mohalle mai khiche laya

Ali- Vo kya hai na hmare walde ab aakhre sase le rahai hee......aur unke y ichiya hai ke unke intekaale se pahle hme 20 manshik roop se pidete logo ko ghode le kr unka ilaze karae...take unke duwa se hmare walde jannate ko pyare ho jae

Paane wala- bada hi nek khalyale hai aapke walde ka

Ali- nek to hai pr kya kare pura nahi hoga

Paane wala- kise mai khuch samjha nahi

Ali- are kya batae bhai pure share ka chakar laga liya pr kahi bhi koe manshik roop se pidete nahi mila......pr hme dono ne hare nahi mane aur hr mohale mai ja ja kr phuch ke kya unhone kise manshik roop se pidete wekte ko dekha hai pr sbne kaha ki nahi

Vo to bhala aur use aadmae ka jesne hme bata ki es mohale mai usne ek ladki ko dekha tha jo manshik roop se pidete hai....to hme yaha chle aae....pr abhi tke hme vo ladki nahi mile....kya tumne use dekha hai kya

Paane wala- ha maine use ladki ko dekha hai....bhoute pareshane hai vo bichare pata nahi upar wale ne uske sath esa kyu kiya

Ali- kya tum mujhe uska pata bata sakte ho


Paane wala- ha hujur es nek kaam me mai bhi apna yogdane jarur dena chahuga

Ali- aapka bhoute bhote shukriya

Paane wala- shukriya kisa hujur insane hi to insane k kaam aata hai.....aap do min. ruke y mai aapko use tke le chalta hu....vo bichare pure samye vahi bate rahte hai aur bse ek rate lagate rahte hai....ki
"maira bhai aae ga aur mujhe yaha se le jae ga"

Y bate sune kr ali ka dil bhar aaya aur vo apne yaado mai kho gaya

y bate kabir samje gaya tha aur usne bate sambhale te huve kaha

Kabir- ji bhai aap jb tke kahege hme intezzar karne k liye tayaar hai.....bs aap hme use ladki tke le jae ye

Paane wala- bs abhi lo

y kah kr pane wale nai dukane bande kr de aur vo ali aur kabir ko apne piche aane ka kah kr unke sath chle diya

Aaj k liye itna hi
aapka chota bhai
Suryaa

and

Thanks for reading

Fantastic update suryaa
Waiting for next update

 

[Mishri]

Fabulous updates .....aaj hi sare updates read kiye....fabulous story.....waiting for next