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Daastan-ae-aladdin
Ab tak,
Ali- aapka bahut bahut shukriya....
Paan wala- shukriya kaisa hujur insan hee to insan ke kaam aata hai.....aap do min. rukiye....mai aapko uss tak le chalta hu....wo bechari pure samay yahi bat karti rahti hai.... aur bas ak hee ratt lagati rahti hai....ki.....
"mera bhai aayega aur mujhe yaha se le jayega"
Ye baate sun kar ali ka dil bhar aaya aur wo apni yaado mai kho gaya....
ye baat kabir samajh gaya tha aur usne baat sambhalte hue kaha...
Kabir- ji bhai aap jab tak kahenge ham intezar karne ke liye taiyar hai.....bas aap hame uss ladki tak le jaaiye....
Paan wala- bas abhi lo....
ye kah kar paan wale ne dukaan band kar di aur wo ali aur kabir ko apne piche aane ka kah kar unke sath chal diya...
Ab aage,
Khuch der bade vo paanwala ek jagah aakr ruka aur use dekh kr ali aur kabir bhi ruke gae aur idhar udhar sana ko dhundane lage pr unhe vo kahi bhi nahi dekhae de
Es pr ali pareshane ho gaya ....aur bola
Ali- aap to hme use ladki k pass lekr ja rahai the na...to yaha kyu ruke gae...yaha to dure dure tke koe nahi hai
Y sune kr paanewala mushkuraya aur bola
Paanewala- sahi kaha janabe ....yaha dure dure tke koe nahi hai....aur hoga bhi kese ???
Kabir- Mtlb??
Es bate pr paane wala hasa aur bola
Paanewala- vo board dekhey (aur ye kah kr usne samne bane ek sunsane maidane ke aur ishara kiya )
Ali aur kabir ke nigaho ne paane wale k isharo ka picha kiya aur jo dekha use dekh kr dange rah gae kyuki unke samne jo sune sane jagha the ...uska naam tha Kabristane
Y dekh kr ali thoda ghusa huva aur bola
Ali- kya mazake hai ye ....aap hame use ladki se milane la rahe the taki hme hmare abujaan ke aakhre khawes pure kr sake .....pr aap to hme es kabristane k pass le aae
Ali ke bato ko sune kr paanewale ko uske ghuse ka eshsaas ho chuka tha aur vo bola
Paanewala- Maaf karna mia...agar aapko mera majake pasande na aaya ho....mai to bse mahole ko thoda halka karna chahta tha....aur mai aapko yaha ese leye laya hu kyuke vo ladki yaha hai
Kabir- mtlb??
Paanewala- Mtlb y ke vo ladki es kabristane k andar hai aur..
panewala ese se aage aur khuch bole pata ali bhech mai bole padae
Ali- aapke kahne ka mtlb kya hai......jo bhi kahana hai saaf saaf kahey
Paanewala- Are janab aap to baate baate pr ghusha ho rahai ho....kam se kam maire pure bate to suen lo ....mai ye kah raha hu ke vo ladki es kabristane k andar hai aur bichare apne pariware walo ke mayate(vo jagah jaha uske pariware walo ko dhafnaya gaya hai) pr bete rahte hai
Unse bate karte hai....kabhi hase te hai...to kabhi jor jore se rote hai.....pata nahi bichare ko kise bate ke saza mile rahe hai
Y sune kr ali ke dil mai ek ese thes lage....jesnai uske sare purane jakham hare kr diye aur en jakhmo ka dard uske aakho mai utar aaya tha
Y bate paane wala to nahi samjhe paya pr kabir jane chuka tha...aur es situation ko sambhale nai k liye vo bola
Kabir- Shukriya bhaijaan ......aap agar nahi hote to hme hmare makshade ki aur phala kadam nahi utha pate
Paanewala- are shukriya ke kya abte hai janab....insane insane k kaam nahi aae ga to aur kone aae ga...aur wesi bhi aapka makshade kaafi nek hai....mujhe to ese bate ki khushii hai ki kam se kam mai bhi es makshade ko pura karne mai aapke kaam aa paya
Kabir- vo to aapka badapne hai janab....kyuki aaj kle es mtlabe duniya mai koe kise ke madade nahi karta
Es bate pr pane wla hse diya aur bola
Paanewala- ab aap hme shrminda kr rahe hai...ek kaam kigey aap use ladki se mile legey ...hme chlete hai...kyuki agar hme yaha khuch aur der rahe to aap hme u he shrminda karte rahegay
Kabir- je tke hai...jesa aap tke samjhe
Phire paanewala apne dukane ki aur wapas chle diya aur kabir kabristane ki aur pr ali abhi bhi vahi khada tha y dekh kr kabir bola
Kabir- Arey ali bhai , aap ese kyu khade ho ....sana aape se nahi milna hey kya??
Ali- Tumne suna use paane wale ne kya kaha.....ki na jane vo bichare kise chize ki saza pa rahi hai....mai janta hu....vo saza pa rahi hai maire bhen hone ki
Ali-y uske badkismate hai ki mai uska bhai hu
Aur ye kah kr vo rone laga
Ali(rote huve)- sbe mair galte hai....sbe maire galte....aur maire galtiyo ke saza mair bhen bhog rahi hai
Uske y halate dkeh kr kabir bhi bhavuke ho gaya pr usne apne bhavnao pr kabu rakha aur kaha
Kabir- ali bhai..aapke koe galti nahi the...
Ali- galit maire he hai na mai yasmine se milta aur na y sbe hota
Ali k ese utaar ko sune kr kabir samjhe gaya tha ke es samye vo ali se khuch bhi kahega ali use apne tarko se hara dega es liye vo bola
Kabir- ali bhai galti kise ke the y hme bade mai decide karegay abhi hme sana aape ko yaha se lejana hai ......kyuki na jane unke halte kise hoge
Kabir ke ese bate pr ali ko koe fhark nahi pad aur vo vese hi khude ko kose ja raha tha
Ali(rote huve)- sbe mair galte hai....sbe maire galte....aur maire galtiyo ke saza mair bhen bhog rahi hai
Y dekh kr kabir bola
Kabir- sahi kaha tumne ali galti tumhare he hai.....galti kya tum khude he galate ho....pr jante ho tum galate kyu ho....ese liye nahi ki tumnai yasmine se pyar kiya......balki es liye ke aaj jabe tumhare bahen ko tumhare sabe se jayada jarurate hai...tbe tum uske pass hone ki jagah yaha beth ro rahi ho....aur khude ko kos rahe ho
Aur tumnai paanewale ki es bate pr to dhyaan diya ke na jane vo ladki kise chize ke saza bhugate rahe hai ...pr y nahi suna ke unke halate kya hai.....unke mental state kise hai....aur ese situation mai jabe unhe tumhare sabe se jayada jarurate hai tbe tum y soch rahe ho ke aakhir galti kise ke hai......dekho ali past mai jo bhi huva hme chakr bhi nahi badale sakte ....so tume chahiye kitna bhi khude ko kose lo jo ho gaya vo ho gaya...tumhare ya maire aashu bahane se vo nahi badalega
Pr present hmare hath mai hai ali ....y vese hi betega jesa hme chahte hai.....lekine agar tume se present mai bhi past ke bate karogay to y present bhi past ki tarha hoga...ese liye y rona dhona chodo aur chlo maire sath
Y sabe sune kr bhi ali apne jagah se nahi hila .....aur y dekh kr kabir bola
Kabir- okay fine....tum yaha galtiya dhuned te raho...mai chla sana aapne ke pass....tume chahiye apne bhai hone ka farz bhule gae ho...pr mai nahi
Y kah kr kabir kabristane k aur chle diya
ABHI K LIYE ITNA HI
AAGE KA PART NEXT UPDATE MAI
AAPKA SURYAA
(NOTE:-
1.Dosto abhi lunch ka time ho gaya hai so pahale mai lunch karlu uske bade es episode ka next part likhne bethuga....aur phire jese hi vo pura hoga mai use post kar duga
2. Kar readers ko story thode slow lage sakti hai pr uske liye mai maafe chahta hu, and eska reason y hai ke aap sabhi characters ke mindset uske emotions ko samjhe sako
3. Jalde hi ek naya thrill aane wala hai so sath bane rahe
4. Ek bate aur y story x-forum ke sbe se bade thrill hone wale hai...so sath bane rahe)
Episode ~ 5A
Ab tak,
Ali- aapka bahut bahut shukriya....
Paan wala- shukriya kaisa hujur insan hee to insan ke kaam aata hai.....aap do min. rukiye....mai aapko uss tak le chalta hu....wo bechari pure samay yahi bat karti rahti hai.... aur bas ak hee ratt lagati rahti hai....ki.....
"mera bhai aayega aur mujhe yaha se le jayega"
Ye baate sun kar ali ka dil bhar aaya aur wo apni yaado mai kho gaya....
ye baat kabir samajh gaya tha aur usne baat sambhalte hue kaha...
Kabir- ji bhai aap jab tak kahenge ham intezar karne ke liye taiyar hai.....bas aap hame uss ladki tak le jaaiye....
Paan wala- bas abhi lo....
ye kah kar paan wale ne dukaan band kar di aur wo ali aur kabir ko apne piche aane ka kah kar unke sath chal diya...
Ab aage,
Khuch der bade vo paanwala ek jagah aakr ruka aur use dekh kr ali aur kabir bhi ruke gae aur idhar udhar sana ko dhundane lage pr unhe vo kahi bhi nahi dekhae de
Es pr ali pareshane ho gaya ....aur bola
Ali- aap to hme use ladki k pass lekr ja rahai the na...to yaha kyu ruke gae...yaha to dure dure tke koe nahi hai
Y sune kr paanewala mushkuraya aur bola
Paanewala- sahi kaha janabe ....yaha dure dure tke koe nahi hai....aur hoga bhi kese ???
Kabir- Mtlb??
Es bate pr paane wala hasa aur bola
Paanewala- vo board dekhey (aur ye kah kr usne samne bane ek sunsane maidane ke aur ishara kiya )
Ali aur kabir ke nigaho ne paane wale k isharo ka picha kiya aur jo dekha use dekh kr dange rah gae kyuki unke samne jo sune sane jagha the ...uska naam tha Kabristane
Y dekh kr ali thoda ghusa huva aur bola
Ali- kya mazake hai ye ....aap hame use ladki se milane la rahe the taki hme hmare abujaan ke aakhre khawes pure kr sake .....pr aap to hme es kabristane k pass le aae
Ali ke bato ko sune kr paanewale ko uske ghuse ka eshsaas ho chuka tha aur vo bola
Paanewala- Maaf karna mia...agar aapko mera majake pasande na aaya ho....mai to bse mahole ko thoda halka karna chahta tha....aur mai aapko yaha ese leye laya hu kyuke vo ladki yaha hai
Kabir- mtlb??
Paanewala- Mtlb y ke vo ladki es kabristane k andar hai aur..
panewala ese se aage aur khuch bole pata ali bhech mai bole padae
Ali- aapke kahne ka mtlb kya hai......jo bhi kahana hai saaf saaf kahey
Paanewala- Are janab aap to baate baate pr ghusha ho rahai ho....kam se kam maire pure bate to suen lo ....mai ye kah raha hu ke vo ladki es kabristane k andar hai aur bichare apne pariware walo ke mayate(vo jagah jaha uske pariware walo ko dhafnaya gaya hai) pr bete rahte hai
Unse bate karte hai....kabhi hase te hai...to kabhi jor jore se rote hai.....pata nahi bichare ko kise bate ke saza mile rahe hai
Y sune kr ali ke dil mai ek ese thes lage....jesnai uske sare purane jakham hare kr diye aur en jakhmo ka dard uske aakho mai utar aaya tha
Y bate paane wala to nahi samjhe paya pr kabir jane chuka tha...aur es situation ko sambhale nai k liye vo bola
Kabir- Shukriya bhaijaan ......aap agar nahi hote to hme hmare makshade ki aur phala kadam nahi utha pate
Paanewala- are shukriya ke kya abte hai janab....insane insane k kaam nahi aae ga to aur kone aae ga...aur wesi bhi aapka makshade kaafi nek hai....mujhe to ese bate ki khushii hai ki kam se kam mai bhi es makshade ko pura karne mai aapke kaam aa paya
Kabir- vo to aapka badapne hai janab....kyuki aaj kle es mtlabe duniya mai koe kise ke madade nahi karta
Es bate pr pane wla hse diya aur bola
Paanewala- ab aap hme shrminda kr rahe hai...ek kaam kigey aap use ladki se mile legey ...hme chlete hai...kyuki agar hme yaha khuch aur der rahe to aap hme u he shrminda karte rahegay
Kabir- je tke hai...jesa aap tke samjhe
Phire paanewala apne dukane ki aur wapas chle diya aur kabir kabristane ki aur pr ali abhi bhi vahi khada tha y dekh kr kabir bola
Kabir- Arey ali bhai , aap ese kyu khade ho ....sana aape se nahi milna hey kya??
Ali- Tumne suna use paane wale ne kya kaha.....ki na jane vo bichare kise chize ki saza pa rahi hai....mai janta hu....vo saza pa rahi hai maire bhen hone ki
Ali-y uske badkismate hai ki mai uska bhai hu
Aur ye kah kr vo rone laga
Ali(rote huve)- sbe mair galte hai....sbe maire galte....aur maire galtiyo ke saza mair bhen bhog rahi hai
Uske y halate dkeh kr kabir bhi bhavuke ho gaya pr usne apne bhavnao pr kabu rakha aur kaha
Kabir- ali bhai..aapke koe galti nahi the...
Ali- galit maire he hai na mai yasmine se milta aur na y sbe hota
Ali k ese utaar ko sune kr kabir samjhe gaya tha ke es samye vo ali se khuch bhi kahega ali use apne tarko se hara dega es liye vo bola
Kabir- ali bhai galti kise ke the y hme bade mai decide karegay abhi hme sana aape ko yaha se lejana hai ......kyuki na jane unke halte kise hoge
Kabir ke ese bate pr ali ko koe fhark nahi pad aur vo vese hi khude ko kose ja raha tha
Ali(rote huve)- sbe mair galte hai....sbe maire galte....aur maire galtiyo ke saza mair bhen bhog rahi hai
Y dekh kr kabir bola
Kabir- sahi kaha tumne ali galti tumhare he hai.....galti kya tum khude he galate ho....pr jante ho tum galate kyu ho....ese liye nahi ki tumnai yasmine se pyar kiya......balki es liye ke aaj jabe tumhare bahen ko tumhare sabe se jayada jarurate hai...tbe tum uske pass hone ki jagah yaha beth ro rahi ho....aur khude ko kos rahe ho
Aur tumnai paanewale ki es bate pr to dhyaan diya ke na jane vo ladki kise chize ke saza bhugate rahe hai ...pr y nahi suna ke unke halate kya hai.....unke mental state kise hai....aur ese situation mai jabe unhe tumhare sabe se jayada jarurate hai tbe tum y soch rahe ho ke aakhir galti kise ke hai......dekho ali past mai jo bhi huva hme chakr bhi nahi badale sakte ....so tume chahiye kitna bhi khude ko kose lo jo ho gaya vo ho gaya...tumhare ya maire aashu bahane se vo nahi badalega
Pr present hmare hath mai hai ali ....y vese hi betega jesa hme chahte hai.....lekine agar tume se present mai bhi past ke bate karogay to y present bhi past ki tarha hoga...ese liye y rona dhona chodo aur chlo maire sath
Y sabe sune kr bhi ali apne jagah se nahi hila .....aur y dekh kr kabir bola
Kabir- okay fine....tum yaha galtiya dhuned te raho...mai chla sana aapne ke pass....tume chahiye apne bhai hone ka farz bhule gae ho...pr mai nahi
Y kah kr kabir kabristane k aur chle diya
ABHI K LIYE ITNA HI
AAGE KA PART NEXT UPDATE MAI
AAPKA SURYAA
(NOTE:-
1.Dosto abhi lunch ka time ho gaya hai so pahale mai lunch karlu uske bade es episode ka next part likhne bethuga....aur phire jese hi vo pura hoga mai use post kar duga
2. Kar readers ko story thode slow lage sakti hai pr uske liye mai maafe chahta hu, and eska reason y hai ke aap sabhi characters ke mindset uske emotions ko samjhe sako
3. Jalde hi ek naya thrill aane wala hai so sath bane rahe
4. Ek bate aur y story x-forum ke sbe se bade thrill hone wale hai...so sath bane rahe)
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