Thriller Dastan-ae-aladdin=》X~FORUM no.1 Thriller story

[Think]

Nice update

 

[Sona]

Daastan-ae-aladdin

Episode ~ 5B​

Ab tak,

Kabir- sahi kaha tumne ali galti tumhare he hai.....galti kya tum khude he galate ho....pr jante ho tum galate kyu ho....ese liye nahi ki tumnai yasmine se pyar kiya......balki es liye ke aaj jabe tumhare bahen ko tumhare sabe se jayada jarurate hai...tbe tum uske pass hone ki jagah yaha beth ro rahi ho....aur khude ko kos rahe ho

Aur tumnai paanewale ki es bate pr to dhyaan diya ke na jane vo ladki kise chize ke saza bhugate rahe hai ...pr y nahi suna ke unke halate kya hai.....unke mental state kise hai....aur ese situation mai jabe unhe tumhare sabe se jayada jarurate hai tbe tum y soch rahe ho ke aakhir galti kise ke hai......dekho ali past mai jo bhi huva hme chakr bhi nahi badale sakte ....so tume chahiye kitna bhi khude ko kose lo jo ho gaya vo ho gaya...tumhare ya maire aashu bahane se vo nahi badalega

Pr present hmare hath mai hai ali ....y vese hi betega jesa hme chahte hai.....lekine agar tume se present mai bhi past ke bate karogay to y present bhi past ki tarha hoga...ese liye y rona dhona chodo aur chlo maire sath

Y sabe sune kr bhi ali apne jagah se nahi hila .....aur y dekh kr kabir bola
Kabir- okay fine....tum yaha galtiya dhuned te raho...mai chla sana aapne ke pass....tume chahiye apne bhai hone ka farz bhule gae ho...pr mai nahi

Y kah kr kabir kabristane ki aur chle diya

Ab aage,

Vaha pahoch kr usne dekha ek ladki mayate k pass bethe hai aur kabhi hase rahi hai aur kabhi ro rahi hey

Kabhi unse bate krne lagti hai to kabhi chupe ho gate hai....aur phire achanake se hasne lagte hai...aur phire hase te hase te rone lagte hai

[Y ladki aur koe nahi balke sana he the]

Bhale he Kabir sana se kabhi nahi mila...milna to dure ke bate hai usne aaj tke sana ko kabhi dekha bhi nahi tha pr uske samne jo khuch chle raha tha use dekh kr uske mann mai bhi vahi thesh uthe jo khuch der pahale ali ke dil mai uthe the

Aur phire ese thesh nai kabir k mann ko bhi jhak-jode kr rakh diya aur use bhi ruwasa kr diya aur dekh te hi dekhte uske mann ka y dhuk uski aakho se bah kr bahar aa gaya

Vo chahta to tha sana se milna pr ...sana ki ese halate nai ....uske mann ko dard se bhar diya aur ese dard k karn uske pave jame gae

Vo bse ek take sana ko dekh raha tha aur ro raha tha

Uske aakhe nirasha k andhkare se bhar gae the ki tabhi khuch esa huva jese dekh kr uske aaakho mai ek aasha ki umeed jage

Uske mann mai khushi k ek nae lahar jage

Aur es lahar ka naam tha ali
Kyuki Ali sana k taraf ja raha tha

Mai aap sabhi ko bata du k umeed ka karn ali ka sana k pass jana nahi balki uska manobhave tha jo uske chahre pr saaf dekh raha tha....jo ali khuch der pahale apne emotions pr se apna control kho chuka tha vo ali abe sana ke es halate ko dekh kr bhi ek dam sante tha

Y dekh kr Kabir ko ek nae umeed aur khushi mile

Vaahi ek taraf kabir apne umeed ke kiran pakr use nirasha bhare andhakare se bahare niklane ki kosise kr raha tha vahe dusre tarf ali sana ke aur badh raha tha

Sana k pass jakr ali bola

Ali- Tum yaha kya kr rahi ho....itne der ho gae...ghar nahi chlna hai kya???

Pr sana pr eska koe asar nahi huva vo abhi bhi bs apne dhune mai magane the

Y dekh kr ali sana k pass gaya aur uska hath pakda aur use hilaya aur bola

Ali- Tumhara dhyaan kaha hai...mai tume se khuch kah raha hu....tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...itne der ho gae hai....ghar nahi chlna hai kya??

Ali k u hilane se sana ko shudh aae aur vo bole

Sana- Tumhare himate kise hue mujhe chune ke...dekhna abhi maire bhai aage aur tumhare putae karegay.....aur phire mujhe yaha se dure lejaegay samjhe ...ab tum yaha se jaao aur mujhe maire amme se bate krne do samjhe

Sana ke es bate pr Ali bola

Ali- Sahi kaha mai tumhe yaha se bhoute dure le jaoga...mair nakchadi pari

Ali ke y bate sune kr sana bole

Sana- kya kaha tumne???

Ali- "Maangee thee dua hamane rab se dena mujhe, ek pyaaree bahan jo alag ho sabase,
us khuda ne de dee ek pyaaree see Pari aur kaha sambhaalon ye anamol hai sabase"

"Aaj din bahut khaas hain, maire nakchadi pari ke lie kuchh mere paas hai, tere sukoon ke khaatir o bahana , tera bhai hamesha tere aas – paas hai"

Y kah kr ali chup ho gaya ke tabhi sana bole

Sana-"Mera dushman bhee too aur dost bhee too, mere lie musibat bhee too usaka hal bhee too, kar de mera jo haal bura bhai too, merai pare bhi too , mere khusheeyon kee dastak bhee too"

Y sune kr ali k aakho mai aashu aa gae aur vo bola

Ali-"Kabhee mujhe se ladatee hai, Kabhi mujhe se jhagadate hain, lekin bina kahe maire har baat ko, samajhane ka hunar bhee maire nakchadi pari rakhatee hai"

"Khoobasoorat ek rishta tira mera, hoon jis pe bas khushiyon ka pahara, najar na lage kabhee is rishte ko, kyonki duniya kee sabase pyaaree meree bahana "

Y kah kr ali ne apne bahey fhilae aur sana se kaha

Ali(ruvasa hote huvi)- Aaja maire pari......

Y sune kr sana k bhi aakho se aashu aa gae aur vo rote huve ja kr ali k gale lag gae
aur jor jor se rone lage

Ali- Ro lay maire bhen ....je bhar k rolay....jo dard etne deno se tune apne andar daba rakha hai use aaj aashuo k jarye bahe jane de

Aaj en aasuo ko roke mate .....bs je khol kr rolay....apne andar ka pura dard en aashuo k jarye bahar nikale de

Ali ke bato ko sune kr sana jor jor se rone lage .....kyuki etnai dino se jab se vo hadsa huva tbe se lekr aaj tke vo roe nahi....kyuki use hadsae k karn ese bhoute bada sadma laga jes k karn vo apne andar k dard ko bahar nahi nikale pae

Aur sadma lagna bhi zayaj tha ek hi pale mai eska sbe khuch chine gaya tha....khuch nahi bacha...vo to upar wale ka karm tha jo hadse se thoda pahale ese kise karn bahar bhej diya varna to y bhi use hadse mai upar wale ko pyare ho jate

Ese liye ali k kahne pr vo aaj je bhar k ro rahi the

Thode der bade jabe vo thode normal hue tabe vo bole

Sana(rote huve)- kaha chle gae the mujhe akela chode kr

Ali(rote huve)- kahi nahi...esa ho sakta hai ke mai apne pari ko akela chode du...vo to halato nai mujhe tum se dur kar diya

Sana(rote huve)- Wapas mujhe chode kr nahi jaogay na bhai....es bare gae na to mai...to mai...mar..

Ese se pahle sana aage bolete ali ne use roke diya aur uske hoto pr apne anguli rakhte huve bola

Ali- chuppp.....ek kaan pr maruga agar ese fhaltu bate bole to...are pagli ter bina tera y bhai kise zinda rah sakta hai....mai aaj zinda ese liye hu kyuki tu zinda hai....varna mai to kab ka mar gaya tha

Ali ke ese bate pr sana bole

Sana- Chuup ....agar bday ho to khuch bhi bologay ....ese bare marne ki bate bole na to dekh lena....abe mujhe promise karo ki mujhe kabhi bhi nahi chode kr jao gay chahiye khuch bhi ky na ho gae

Ali- Mai vada karta hu....pr ek vada tum bhi mujhe se karo tum bhi mujhe kabhi chode kr nahi jao ge

Sana- Mai vada karte hu bhai....jharunam mai bhi aapka phicha nahi chhodu ge

Sana ke es bate pr ali hse diya aur bola

Ali- y aae na maire purane pari wapas

Tabhi ek awaaz aae

"Mai bhi tum dono ka picha jharunam tke nahi chhodu ga"

Y awwaz sune kr ali ne kaha

Ali- ha tu bhi mate chhodye kabir ....ab vahi khada rahega ya gale bhi lage ga

Y sune kr kabir bhi un dono k pass aa gaya

Kabir ko dekh kr sana nai aakho k isharo se ali se pucha y kone hai tbe ali bola

Ali- Y kabir hai...maira doste....ya u kahu to bhai

Tabhi kabir bola

Kabir-Doste mai aapka hu ali bhai...pr sana ka mai bhai hu

Kabir ke es bate pr ali bola

Ali- tke hai....tujhe jo bane na hai tu bane ....ha vese maire ek aur bhen hote na to bilkule tare jese hote aur uska naam hota karishma

Ali ke es bate pr sana jor jor se hase de

Jese dekh kr Ali bola

Ali- hmesa ese hi khush raha kr....tujhe pata hai agar taire khshi k liye kabir karishma bane k liye bhi tayar hai....kyu kabir

Kabir- kya ali bhai aap to maire taang khichnae lage ho...vo bhi sana k samnae

Es bate pr sana bole

Sana- Ha ali bhaiya y bilkul galate bate hai

Y sune kr kabir bola

Kabir- tabhi duniya kahte hai bahan bahan hote hai aur bhai bhai he hota hai

Tabhi sana bole

Sana-Ali bhaiya agar aage se aapne maire karishma ko pareshane kiya na to mai aapse naraz ho jao ge

Y kah kr sana hasne lage vahi y sune kr ali jor jor se hasne laga

aur haste haste vahi zamine pr beth gae

Khuch der dono hase te rahe phire sana bole

Kahne ko to y kabristane tha jaha kevale dhukh hota hai....ek ese jagah jaha kevle chahre pr gum hota hai....pr aaj yaha gum k jagah khshi the

Aaj dhukh ki jagah etne dino se dabi hasi the ...jesne ek pure vatavarn mai cha rakhe nakaratmakta ko naste kr diya

Pr y jayada der tke nahi chlle saka kyuki tabhi sana bole

Sana- Aaj kitne dine bade hme khule kr hase hai

Ali- Sahi kaha....pr ab hmare hasne ka samye aa chuka hai....kyuki hme zitna rona tha...hme ro chuke hai.....abe rone ki bare un logo ke hai jen k karn hmare y halate hue hai

Ali- Zin logo nai hmse hmara sbe khuch chine liya ...abe hme unse unka sbe khuch chine lage.....zindagi ka zahreela khel unhone shuru kiya tha....pr ese khatam hme kargay

Kabir- Sahi kaha ek khel unhone khela tha.....ab ek khel hme khailegay.....unhone jo hmare sath kiya uska badla hme lekr rahegay

Sana- Nahi hme unse badla nahi lage...balki unhe he badale degay

Kabir- Mtlb??

Ali- Mtlb y ke hme unka past present future sbe mita degay....kevale unhey barbade nahi karegay balki unka name...unka fame sbe khuch mita degay

Kabir- Mtlb???

Sana- Mtlb hme kah kr nahi karke dee khaegay...kyu bhai sahi kaha na

Ali- bilkul sahi kaha.....pr abhi hme yaha se chlna hoga

Sana- Pr kaha??

Ali- Abhi k liye hmare liye sbe se mahfhoose jagah bulbul chacha ka ghar hai....so hme vahi jaegay

Sana- tke hai

Kabir- pr vaha pr bhi jayada dine rukna khatre ko amntrane de sakta hai....kyuki logo ko dout ho sakta hai ke achank bulbul chacha jo akele rahna pasande karte hai.....unke ghar mai y 3 loge kaha se aa gae

Ali- Tumnae sahi kaha....lekine abhi k liye vo jagah hmare liye mahfhoose hai....es liye abhi to hme vaha chle te hai....uske bade hme aage kya karna hai aur kya nahi ....y sbe hme vaha sochegay

Kabir- Tke hai....jesa aap kaho

Y sbe bate kr Ali, Sana aur Kabir bulbul chacha k ghar k aur nikale gae

AAJ K LIYE ITNA HI
AAPKA SURYAA

Wonderful update suryaa
Waiting for next

 

[Suryaa]

Hmmmm
Very good update.....both....

Finally aladdin ka apni bahan mil hee gayi....ab dekhne hai ki wo revenge kaise leta hai....

Ye bhai bahan ke Milan wala scene or bhi achcha ho sakta tha....agar jyada describe kiya jata.....
Anyways
Thanks

First of all thanks vikram bhaiya
Aapke comment k liye
Aapka comment padh kr hare bare bhoute accha lagta hai kyuki aap review detail mai karte hai jes k karn read karne pr accha lagta hai kyuki detailed review ka mtlb hai ke aapne update ko dhyaan se read kiya and ese k sath aap y bhi bata te hai ke kaha aur shudhare ho sakta hai
So y second reason hai
Once again thanks vikram bhaiya

 

[Suryaa]

Waiting

Thanks asif bhaiya

 

[Suryaa]

Nice update

Thanks bday bhaiya

 

[Suryaa]

Wonderful update suryaa
Waiting for next

Thanks sona ji

 

[Rahul]

Thanks rahul bhaiya
aap read kar ligey
kyuki finally sana aur ali mile chuke hai
jesa aap chahte the

han padh liya sana ko itna jaldi theek nahi karna tha abhi khair koi baat nahi sab mil gaye hain ab inko kisi kisi achchi jagah fit karke yani ghar makaan me fir koi paise ka bandobast jaise job ya kuch bhi fir ladai suru karao

 

[Amir]

Nice bro

 

[Suryaa]

han padh liya sana ko itna jaldi theek nahi karna tha abhi khair koi baat nahi sab mil gaye hain ab inko kisi kisi achchi jagah fit karke yani ghar makaan me fir koi paise ka bandobast jaise job ya kuch bhi fir ladai suru karao

Yes boss
first mai bhi soch raha tha ke sana ko bade mai theek karu lekine phire socha agar jayada time lagaya to story slow ho jae ge
es liye thoda fast forward kar diya
and jalde he es kahani ka mastikhoore badalne wala hai

 

[Suryaa]

Nice bro

Thanks brother