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Bhai story me jitne jyada characters hote hai story utni hi complicated ho hai hai aur readers bhi jyada confuse hote hai........baaki aap writer hai aapki marji
Bhai aap paresan na ho mai sabhi carector ko manege kar lunga or ese ese kamuk point dunga ki aap sab mast ho jaoge with pic or gif k sathBhai story me jitne jyada characters hote hai story utni hi complicated ho hai hai aur readers bhi jyada confuse hote hai........baaki aap writer hai aapki marji
Bhai gif and pics add karoPART NO:- 1
Mai ek bhot hee seedha sadha ladka tha……jinda toh aaj bhee hun….par abb seedha nahi hun….iss samaj mai jeene ke lye muje bhee samaj ke tarah tedha banna padha….mene jab hosh sambhala toh muje pata chala ki, mere mata pita ka dehaant do saal pehale ho chuka tha….mere parwrish mere dada dadi kar rahe thee…..mera naam Deepak hai……jab mai 11th class mai phuncha toh dadi ka dehaant ho gaya….dada jee bujrag thee…..govt service se retired thee…. unki pension se ghar ka kharcha chal raha tha….
Dekhane main mai kafi handsome hun…..aisa mai nahi bhot se ladkyon ne kaha hai aur aurton nee bhee…..mere hight uss samaye 5,6 inch thee…..rang gora tha. baal ek dum kaale thee. daily work out karta tha….bhale hee ghar mai karta tha par karta roj tha…body ek dum fit thee….salmaan ke body abbs dekh kar muje bhee uske jaise body banane ka janoon sawar ho gaya tha…..
Ghar bhee apna nahi tha…..tab hum kiraye ke makan par reh rahe thee….mere mata pita ke ilaaj mai dada ne sab kuch laga daya tha….dadi ke dehaant ke baad dada jee ko mere fikar rehane lagee thee…..par unhe iss baat ka santosh tha ki, abb mai apne aap ko sambhal sakta hun….par dada jee chahthe the ki, mai agge padh likh kar kuch ban jaun…tanki jo gareebi aur tangi ke din unhone ne dekhe thee……wo muje naa dekhane padhe……dadi ke dehaant ke baad dada jee ne fainsala kya ki, abb mai agge ke padhi ke lye dusre gaon jhan per sab chacha or chachi rehte the mai apne chacha chachi ke pass chala jaun……..
Dadi ke antim kriya karam ke baad dada jee ne ye baad mere chacha ramcharan singh aur chachi santi se kee…..mai ek kone mai chair par betha sun raha tha. ki agge chal kar mere sath kya hone wala hai…aur muje samaj ke asali sakal ussi din dekhane ko mil gaye thee….
Dada jee: beta ramcharan dekho abb mai bhee budha ho gaya hun…. aur deepak abhi padh raha hai….mai chatha hun ki, tum tushar ko apne sath le jao…tanki wo agge ke padhi kar sake kissi acche school collage mai….
Chachi: (beech mai tokate hue) papa jee aap toh janate hee hain….ki humane kabhi bacho mai farak nahi kaya….par aap se kaya chupana….hum toh khud badi muskil se gujara kar rahe hai….warna tushar toh mere bête jaise hai….par hum sach mai khud bhot tangi mai hai…..
Dada jee: tum paiso ke fikar naa karo…..mai jab tak hun….tab tak har mahine iske kharache ke paise bhejata rahunga….
Chachi jee: (chachi ke nazar dada jee ko har mahine milane wale pension par thee. aur iss baat ko dada jee bhee acche se janate thee ki, agar wo bhee chacha chachi ke sath chale gaye toh wo mere lye kuch bhee nahi bacha payenge…) papa jee aap bhee chalaye naa humare sath….abb yaha kon aap ki dekh bhaal karega..
Dada jee: nahi beta abb toh iss ghar se mere arthi hee uthege….bhot se yaaden hai yaha par….tum deepak ko apne sath le jao….
Chachi apne daant peesti reh gaye…..ristedaro ke majoodgi mai unhe haan kehani padhi…..aur muje dada jee ne unke sath jane par majboor kar daya…dada jee iss baat se anjaan thee ki, unka ye fainsala muj par kitna bhari padane wala hai. par muje dada je eke zidd ke agge jhukana padha…..mere jindgi kiss kadar badalne wali thee….ye toh muje bhee nahi pata tha…..agge chal kar mere sath kya hone wala hai kaise salook hoga…wo naa toh muje pata tha aur naa hee dada jee ko.
Par dil mai ek khawish thee ki, mai kuch ban jaun aur dada jee ke iss akhiri sapane ko poora kar sakhun….isslye muje chacha chachi ke sath sahar anna padha….toh aye dosto abb mai un logo se aap ko milwa dun….jinhone ne mere jindgi ka satya naash kaya aur phir unhi logo ke use karke maine aapne aap ko settle kya….
Chacha ramcharan singh jo mere sage chacha h age 47
Chachi santi age 44 figure to aap logo ko pta hi h introduction me dekh lena
Chachi ke beta ravi age: 20 saal muje 6 saal chota hai aur 8th class mai tha.
Ek beti thi jyotshana jiski saddi ho gyi h
Chachi ke behan sangita age 50 saal….wo bhee ussi sehar mai rehati thee…. unki ek beti thee salini ….jo ravi se 4 saal badi aur mujse 2 saal choti thee. uska naam salini hai….wo chachi ke ghar mai hee pali badhi hai….aur chacha chachi ke sath hee rehati hai….kyonki sangita ke ek aur beti thee….jo b.a. kar rahi thee….uski age 25 saal naam poonam hai…unka ek beta bhee tha. jo ravi ka hee hum umer tha…..aur ussi ke class mai padta tha……
Ek aur khass character iss story mai hai….uska naam rekha h jo ankur ki maa h wahi ankur jo aage chal kr Deepak ka dost banega .rekha mere chachi ke childhood friend hai....uski age 50 saal thee uss ka husband ek bhot bada contactor tha...aur chacha jee ko wo kai kaam apni sights par dilwa deta tha. abb mai jara aap logo ko chachi ke ghar ka mahol bata dun…chachi ke ghar mai kul teen bedroom thee……ek drawing room ek kitchen ek bathroom tha…..ek chacha chachi ka tha. dusra unki bhanjai salini use kar rahi thee….
Aur teesra ravi ka tha…..jo abb ravi ko mere sath share karna tha…. shuru se chacha chachi aur unka beta mujse ghula mila nahi tha….isslye wo mere sath apna room share karke khus nahi tha….uske room mai do single bed lagawa daye gaye thee…..pehale hee din usne muje jata daya tha ki, iss ghar mai mere lye koi jagah nahi hai….mene usse frank hone aur dosti karne ke bhot kosish kee, par wo aise jahir karta jaise wo muj par bhot bada ahsaan kar rahe hai….
Dada jee bhee muje chorne sath aye thee….unhone ne mera admission college class mai karwa daya….school theek thak tha…..dada jee ke jane ke baad unka rawya mere sath ek dum badal saa gaya…..abb mai waha jo kuch bhee hua sab detail mai batata hun….dada jee ke jane ke baad agle hee din ke baat hai….uss din Sunday tha….
Mai abhi so kar utha tha. aur brush kar raha tha ki, chachi mere pass aye, aur boli. “tushar ye kapdhe dhobi ko dee aa….yahi pichali gaali mai hai uska ghar. Kissi se bhee poocha lena bata dega…aur usko bolana ke mahinder singh ke ghar ke kapdhe hai……press kar dee…..”
Mai: chachi pehale nasta laga do phir jaunga…..
Chachi: tuje kaya subhe-2 hee bhool lag jati hai….jaa brush kar aur pehale ye kapdhe dee kar aa…..
Mai: (kulla karne ke baad) theek hai chachi jee…..ek cup chai de do…..
Chachi: abhi nahi banaye hai….tuje pehale kaam kaha hai wo kar…..subhe subhe order mat jhad aapna….
Mai chachi ke baat sehan kar gaya….mene kapdho ke patoli uthai. Aur dhobhi ke ghar ke taraf jane laga….pichali gaali mai phunch kar mene waha bahar khade ek ladke se dhobi ke ghar ka poocha toh, usne muje ishare se bata daya….maine uske ghar ke bahar jakar lakadi ke bane hue main door ko khatkhataya….toh ek behad kala se dikhane wala insaan ne aakar door khola…..”haan bhai kaya chahaye….”
Mai: jee wo mai mahinder singh jee ke ghar se aya hun..ye kapdhe dene thee press karne ke laye……
Dhobhi: ohh accha….mahinder jee ke ghar se aye ho…..par pehale toh kabhi nahi dekha tumhe……
Mai: jee wo mere chacha jee hai….mai kal hee aya hun…..
Dhobhi: accha toh unke mehmaan ho….kaise log hai…..mehmaano ko hee kaam par laga daya…..
Mai: jee mai mehmaan nahi hun….darsal abb mai unke ghar par hee rahunga…..
Dhobhi: accha-2 theek hai…..waise tum rehate kaha ho…matlab tumhare mummy papa……
Mai: jee wo abb iss dunaya mai nahi rahe….muje mere dada dadi ne pala hai…aur kuch din pehale dadi ka dehaant ho gaya….isslye muje yaha bej daya dada jee nee
Dhobhi: ohh sun kar dukh hua beta….chalo bhagwan ke agge kissi ke nahi chalati.. waise karte kaya ho ?
Mai: jee abhi mai padata hun….yahi admission laya hai do din pehale…..
Dhobhi: acchi baat hai beta…. Khoob maan laga kar padhana…. Padhi likhai hee aise cheez hai beta…jo adami ka marte dum tak sath nahi chorti….lao ye potali muje dee do….aur sham ko le jana….
Mai: jee theek hai mai chalata hun….
Uske baad mai ghar aa gaya….jab mai ghar phuncha toh dekha…chacha chachi sunny teeno bethe chai pee rahe thee…..priya unke behan ke bête Sunday ke wajhe se apne ghar gaye hui thee….muje dekhate hue chachi boli….” Jaa kitchen se chai laye lee jakar….” Mai kitchen ke taraf gaya….aur chai ka bartan utha kar dekha toh chai kafi thandi ho chuki thee…mai jaise hee gas on kar garam karne laga toh kitchen ke door ke theek samane bethe chachi ne unchi awaz mai kaha…”tushar kaya kar raha hai tun gas kyon jala raha hai…..”
Mai: wo chachi chai thandi ho gaye hai……
Chachi: arre abhi toh banai hai…..aise kaise thandi ho gaye….chal gas band kar aur pee lee aise hee…tumhe pata nahi gas ke daam kitne jayda hai…ooper cylinder bhee nahi milta asani see……
Mai chachi ke baat sun kar gusse mai aa gaya….par majboor tha kuch keh bhee nahi sakta tha…chup chap cup mai chai daali aur peene laga…waah ree kisamat ye din bhee dekhana tha…maan maar kar chai pee…..phir chachi ne nasta banaya. Aur maine nasta kaya…….muje jiss baat ka shaq tha wahi ho raha tha…. iss ghar maim era wajood kaya hai….kya mai yaha reh paunga yaa nahi….
Sach me bhai chutoo ki to barish hi krwa di tmne...bs update dete rhna...or sb k tarh tm v gayab nhi bhai...plzzzIntroduction
Deepak age 26 year land ka size 8.5" or 3" inch mota paka chudakad ladka h
Iske gaon me bht si chut wali h
1- Santi chachi age 44 year dekhne me ek dam bomb h figure size 36-28-40
Husband - ram charan age 47 year apni patni ka gulam h ek bar iske patni jo keh diya to iski himmat nhi ki wo inkar kr de.
1beta or ek beti h dono k
Ladka - ravi 20 year
Ladki -jyotshna iski Sadi ho gyi h
Husbhad-raja
2- shushila chachi age 46 year ye bhi bomb hi h figure 40D-30-42 ek number ki chudai khor lady h hamesa nay nay land ki talash me rehti h
Husband - keshav age 50 sale ka land hi nhi khada hota h ek dam kala bujang h
Iske do bete h
SHivam pagal type ka h
Ritik ye sala gandu h
3- uma chachi age 44 ye bht chalak aurat h apne kam karwane k liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakti h figure size 38D-32-44
Husband -Santosh age 48 year ek number ka kamina h sala dusro ka hissa khana wala h
Iske do beti h
Anchal -26 year Sadi ho gyi h
Husband -dewakar age 27
MInakshi - age 24 year
Dono ek number mall h
4- Preeti chachi age 38 year ye thodi lambhi or chodi h figure size 38F-32-46 jo bhi dekh le uska pani nikal jaye esi kadak mall h
Husband -ajay age 42 year mota sa h or land sale ka chota sa h jo apni patni ko satisfaction nhi de pata h
Iske ek ladka ek ladki h jo abhi chote h
Aarti chachi -age 35 year ye bhi ek dam bomb hi h mast chikhna badan h sali ka figure size 32D-26-38 Iski gand ka Deepak diwana h
Husband -Aklesh age 40 year ye sirf apni dukan me hi dyan deta h iski panti bechari pyasi hi rehti h
Iske bhi do bacche jo abhi chote h
Ye ghar k samne rehne wali aunty h jiska beta Deepak ka dost
Rani- age 52 year figure size 36D-26-40
YE ek hasmukh type ki lady h jo Deepak ko bht manti h ye bhi bht kamuk lady h
Iske do bete h
Sonu - jo Deepak ka dost h age 25
Monu - ye bahar gaon me naukri karta h jo kabhi kabhi ata rehta h
Ye sonu ki chachi h
Rimjhim-age 46 year figure 40D-30-42 h sare gaon k mard iske chucho pe marte h
Ye lady Deepak ke ghar k bagal me rehti h ye Deepak ke dost ankur ki chachi h
Sheela -age 48 year figure size 38F-32-46 iske gand dekh kr hi sab gaon walo ke land khade ho jate h
Ankur -age 24 year ek ek nata sa ladka h jo Deepak ka dost h ek number ka laundiya baj ladka h
Ye ankur ki maa h
Rekha-55 year figure size 38D-32-44 gajab ki lady h isne hi Deepak ko chudai ka gyan diya tha
Dosto aage bht se or carector ayenge inka parichay tabhi Kiya jayega