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Bhai sab kuch hoga but thoda dhere dhere maine ye to apni pasand ki chachiyo ko rakha h lekin story laise aage badhe gi waise carector bhi change honge or uski samay unka introduction bhi dunga bhai .Samajhta hu , story hmesha ek idea se nhi chalti time to time change hotaa rahta h
But dekhiye aapne main lead me hero to deepak ko rakh hee liya h ,side me ravi bhi ho gaya ( young)
Isi liye mai kah raha tha ki jyada male candidate na ho ( ha story ke hisaab se jo relationship me chahiye vo to aap ko add krnaa hee banta h )
Baki aap kah rahe h to fir aapne kuch badhiya hee soch rakha hoga ....
Vaise kisi mature ko add kr lijiye like dada G
Ek hee type ke combination ( ladke + aunt /chachi ) ( ladka +chachi + chachi / chachi kee friend ) me jayada maja nhi aata .
Dada G ke saath pahle chachi fir bua ko bhi chachi se seduce krvakar group me shamil krvaa dijiyega .
Ho sake to aage chalkr chachi kee amma and chachi ki beti ke sasural se uski beti , saas or nanand or chachi ke damad ko bhi add krvana yaar
( soory if you feel I am explaining too much )
But kya kre aapne story ka plot hee esaa jamaya h ki aapki story se ummed hee jyada bn rahi , esi foundation bnayi h story kee jis angle se jitnaa bhi chaho likhte jao . Superb ....
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