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Itne update padkar bahut hi achha lga apki writing skill bahut hi behtreen hoti ja rhi h jitna pyar apko xossip pr mila itna yha bhi mil rha h ue dekhkr bahut hi achha lg rha aur aap aise hi likhte rhe aur hum padkr rply krte rahenge aur aap apni sehat ka bhi dhyan rakha kre
 
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lover of darkness said:

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FINAL 10 UPDATES..

Abh Agge..

Ravi or khushi narag log ke darvaje par khade the , pari log me ese patal log kehte the , bure karam karne walo ko yaha behad byank khathor sajayian de jati thi ,

yaha ke pehredar behad shaktishali danav the , jo muzrimo ko bhedyion me band kar , unko behad kashtdiyak saza dete the , jinko dekhne matar se rooh kamp jaye ,

jaise hi ravi ne apna kadam agge badaya , tabhi darvaja apne app khul gya , darvaje ke ander us par , bus agg hi agg jal rehi thi ,



agar ravi ko apni behan komal tak pahunchna tha , toh use es agg ke behte sagar ko chal kar par karna tha , jo ke namumkin sa lag reha tha ,

ravi ke badte har ik kadam ke sath shetian ki murat jal uthi , uski badi badi aken tez roshni me jagmaga uthi , samne agg ka dariya tha , jiske dusri traf uski sadyion purani mohabat thi ,

"ravi , agar tumne sache dil se komal ko chaha ho , tabhi ander jana , varna yeh agg tume jala kar rakh kar degi..." khushi ne ravi ko chetevni dete hue bola ,

"me nai janta ke meri mahabat sachi hai ya zuthi , muze bus apni komal ko vapis lana hai , meri sabhi behne muze hawsi samazti hain , agar mere dil me tum sabke liye pyar ki jagah , thodi si bhi hawas hui , toh me es agni ko sakshi man kar kehta hu , yeh agni muze jala de..." ravi ne agni ke vishal sagar ko dekhte hue bola , uski akhen nam thi ,

"nai ravi , tume kuch nai hoga , tum ik ache insan ho , vada karo vapis ayoge , mere liye , komal ke liye , apni behano ke liye , vada karo..." khushi ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"vada , hashhh , khushi vada voh log karte hain , jo kisi rishte ko nibhana nai chahte , ya jinko vishwas na ho , khushi tumari akhon ke samne agg hi agg hai , kaise vada karu me , agar me mar gya , toh mera pyar zutha padh jayega..." ravi ne palat kar khushi ki akhon me dekh kar bola ,

"raviii , nai , tume kuch nai ho sakta , sadyion se tumare pyar ke liye tadaf rehi hu , es bar bhi , nai , tum ayoge , varna me apni jaan de dungi..." khushi ne beintha rote hue bola ,

"hasshhh , meri jaan , jo galti mane pichle janam me ki thi , tume pyar na deker , vahi es janam me ki , tume pyar na deker , khushu agar muze kuch ho jaye , tum meri masom behno ka khyal rakhna , abhi nadan hai , nasamaz hain , bahut jalad behak jati hain , kisi ki bhi bat ko sach man leti hain , or meri juhi ka bhi khyal rakhna , abh muze jane ki ijajat do..." ravi ne khushi ko apne gale laga uske kanu me dard bhari awaz me bola ,

khushi kuch na bol payi , akhon se asnu beh rehe the , ajj sirf ravi ki priksha nai thi , uski bhi thi , uski behno ke pyar ke priksha thi ,

ravi ne ik bar khushi ke gulabi kampte hontho ko chuma or ik bar muskra kar uski bhegi bhegi akhon me dekha or palat kar us agg ke dariya ki traf chal padha ,

"raviii , me yahi ruk kar tumara intzar karugi , jab tak tum nai ayuge , ik pal bhi yaha se nai hilugi..." khushi ne chila kar bola , uski awaz me aseem dard tha , bepanah pyar tha ,

ravi ne palat kar khushi ki traf dekha or phir narag log me chala gya , ravi ke ander ghuste hi darvaja jor se band ho gya , shetian ki akhon ki roshni ik dam se gyab ho gai , abh voh ik pathar ki murat lag reha tha ,

kaisa insan tha ravi , jindgi bhar chain se nai betha tha , bachpan me baap mar gya , abh umar hi kya tha , khelne , kudne ki umar me kheto me mazdori karne laga ,

apne pariwar ko pala , bada hua toh , rema ke sath ik aise rishte me bandh gye , jiski saza voh ajj tak bhugat reha hai , ik vasna , ik ajeeb si vasna uske ander jag uthi , apni behno ke sath sex karne ki ,

lekin voh janbuz kar yeh sab nai kar reha tha , uski behne , uski har premika , pichle janam me usse judi hui thi , sabka pyar adhura tha , or sabko khushyian deni thi ravi ko ,

pichle janam me jise pyar nai mila tha , use pyar dena tha , ajj bhi voh apne pichle janam ki galtyion ko sudhar reha tha ,

ruhi se pyar voh na pichle janam me kar paya , or ni hi es janam me , uske man me ik adhuri khwish thi , komal se prem karne ki , kya voh es janam me pori ho payegi , hashhh , khair yeh agge wakht ki bat thi ,

abh agge...

ravi ne piche palat kar dekha , abh vaha koi darvaja nai tha , bus charo traf agg hi agg thi ,

ravi ne apne samne ki traf nazar dodai , toh
samne ka manzar dil dehla dene wala tha , agg ki tez lapte jal rehi thi , jaise kisi sagar me lehre uth rehi ho ,

door tak , yaha yaha , ravi ki nazar jati , bus agg hi agg dikhai deti , vaha agg ke es dariya me hazaro log jal rehe rhe , unke hath or sar hi dikhai de rehe the ,



jaise koi pani me dubte hue apne hath pair marta hai , usi trah yeh log bhi , dard se chilate hue apne hath pair chala rehe the ,

ravi ko abh beintha garmi mehsus hone lagi , dhere dhere ravi ka badan us garmi ko sehan na karte hue jalne laga ,

"ufff kaha hogi meri komal..." ravi ne man hi man bola or phir agge badh gya ,

abh ravi us agg ke dariya me chalne laga , uska badan tez agg me jalne laga , ravi ko beintha dard ho reha tha , jisko shabado me byan karna murkhta hogi ,

na kabhi pyar ko shabado me byan kiya ja sakta hai , or na kisi ke dard ko , na khushi ko or na hi kisi ke gam ko ,

ravi jaise jaise agge badta gya , uska jism jalta gya , ravi ke man me bus komal thi , use bus komal tak pahunchna tha , use bus komal ka hasna , rona , uska pyar karna , yahi sab yad a reha tha ,

jaise jaise wakht betta gya , ravi ko apni shakti ka ehsas hota gya , usne sabit kar diya tha ke voh hawasi nai hai , agar usme jara si bhi hawas hoti , toh voh abh tak jal kar rakh ho jata ,



abh ravi ka jism lal padh chuka tha , kapde jal chuke the , akhen tez roshni me chamak rehi thi , uske baal bhi tez agg me jal rehe the , lekin aggni ka dard , voh abh bhi mehsus kar reha tha ,

par mohhbat ko pane ki lalsa ne use ander se mazbot kar diya tha , use bus apni behan ko dekhna tha , use apni mazbot bahu me lena tha , use voh skoon mehsus karna tha , jo voh pehle karta tha ,

jaise jaise ravi agge badh reha tha , vaha jalte logu ki chekhe abh use tez sunai dene lagi thi , kuch log dard se chilate uske pair pakad lete , tab ravi ko bahut dikat hoti ,

adha din chalne ke bad , beintha jalne ke bad , ravi ne es agg ke dariya ko par kar liya , par samne ka manzar dekh ravi ke hosh udd gye ,



samne patal log ke pehredar the , jo naye kaidyion ko bhedyion me jakad kar la rehe the , vaha logu ko mara ja reha tha , unko kat rehe the , kode lagaye ja rehe the ,

par yeh sab papi log the , enke bure karam , enko es jagah khich laye the ,

tabhi un pehardaru ki nazar ravi par padh gai , ik pehredar ravi ki traf bada , ravi ne tez bhagte hue uske chehre par jordar war kiya , voh pehredar vahi gir padha ,



tabhi sabhi danavi pehredar ik jut ho gye , voh hazaro se bhi jayda the , kuch hawa me udd bhi rehe the , ravi akela tha ,

"dekho me tum sab se nai ladna chahta , me hu prince sonik , pari log ka prince , raja abun or mailka sona ka beta , me apni behan malika ruhi ko lene aya hu , muze jane do , varna..." ravi ne gusse me chekhte hue bola , toh agg ki lapte tez ho gai ,

pora agg ka dariya jaise ravi ke piche khada ho chuka tha , sabhi danav ravi ke raste se hat gye ,

ravi ka pora jism agg ki lapto se ghir chuka tha , pore jism se agg nikal rehi thi , sabhi danav , ravi ke agge saar zuka kar beth gye ,

ravi agge badne laga , karib ik din or chalne ke bad , ravi us agg ke vishal sagar ko par kar gya , abh tak dedh din pora beet chuka tha , matlab prithvi par 6 mahine gujar chuke the , matlab ravi ko 1 saal pora ho chuka tha , prithvi chode hue ,

es 1 saal me prithvi par bahut kuch badal chuka hoga , suhana or joker ne beintha tabahi machai hogi , uski behne tut kar bhikar chuki hogi , baby ka pata nai kya hua hoga ,

abh bus ik banzar jamen thi , jise par karna tha , jiski mitti pori kali thi , abh agg nai thi , ravi ne apni shakti ko ik jut kiya , uske pankh phir se nikal aye ,

ravi uddta hua agge badne laga , adha din or beet gya , abh ravi ke samne ik ladki bethi thi , jo agg me jal rehi thi , uske charo or agg hi agg thi , jamen bhi jal kar lava ban chuki thi ,

"komalll..." ravi jor se chilaya or jamen par utar gya , uske utarte hi uske pankh gyab ho gye ,

abh bus chand kadam door uski mahobat thi , uski behan thi , use abh uske karib jana tha , lekin voh nai janta tha , komal kaise es kaid se azad hogi , par komal ki dard bhari chekhe usse bardasht nai ho rehi thi ,



komal us agg me jalti hui uska hi ik roop lag rehi thi , ravi dhere dhere komal ki traf badne laga , abh tak komal bhi apne bhai ko dekh chuki thi ,

"bhyiaaaa , rukkk jaooo..." komal ne dard bhari awaz me bola , voh nai chahti thi ke uske bhai ko kuch ho jaye ,

komal jis mayajal me kaid thi , uska tod use bhi nai pata tha , or uske sath dyana bhi kaid thi , or voh dyana ko azad nai karna chahti thi ,

ravi toh jaise komal ki awaz sun hi nai reha tha , use bus komal ko apni bahu me lena tha , use chumna tha , pyar karna tha ,

"ahhhhhhhhhhhh...." ravi jaise hi us mayajaal se upjai paviter agg me ghusa , voh dard se chila utha , komal apne bhai ki chekh sun uski traf badne lagi ,

ravi ka pora jism us paviter agg me jal utha , par voh ruka nai , hala ki ik kadam agge chalne par bhi agg ki lapte uske chehre se bhi uper tak bad rehi thi ,



"bhyiaaaa , mattt ayooo plssss..." komal ne dard bhari awaz me chila kar bola , apne bhai ki aisi dardnak halat usse sehan nai ho rehi thi ,

"kk...komalllll..." ravi dard se kahrahata hua agge badta gya ,

jaise jaise unke bech ka fasla kam hota gya , vaise vaise agg ki tez lapte ik diwar si bankar ravi ko rokne lagi , voh agg mayajaal se bani thi , kale jadu se bani thi ,

chahe voh ravi ke jism ko jala nai pa rehi thi , par uski lapte behad tez thi , jaise sagar ki vishal lehre tez ghati se kinare ki traf ati hain or har cheez ko apni takat ke sath baha kar le jati hain , bus vaise hi yeh agg lehro ka roop dharan kar , ravi ko piche dhakel rehi thi ,

"bhyiaaaa , appp naii a paugeee..." komal ne dard se kahrahte hue bola , voh ander se beintha ro rehi thi ,

ravi kuch sunne ko tyar nai tha , abhi ravi , bus komal se do kadam hi door tha , ke us paviter agg ne apni pori takat laga , ik behad tez lehar paida ki , jo ravi ko apne sath baha le gai , or ravi ko vapis jamen par fenk diya ,

ravi jamen par besudh padha hua tha , pore jism se dhua nikal reha tha , badan ka har hissa jal reha tha , ravi ko apne jism me etni jalan or dard mehsus ho reha tha , ke use shabado me byan karna bevkufi hogi ,

"bhyiaaaa , lott jaooo , plsss , agarrr apkooo kuchhhh hooo gyaaa , tohhh meee kiskee saharee jeyugiiii..." komal ne jaise ander se kamzor hote hue bola , vaise hi us paviter agg ne komal ko charo traf se gher liya or use apni pori takat se jalane lagi ,

"komallllll..." ravi apni bachi kuchi himet juta uthte hue bola , chahe uske badan ke har hisse se dard ki tez lehre uth rehi thi , par komal ka dard usse bardasht nai ho reha tha ,

ravi es bar apni pori takat bator agge badha , uski akhen safad ho gai , or pora badan agg me jalne laga , ravi vapis us agg me ghus gya ,

abh us agg ne komal ko or bhi jalana suru kar diya , voh ravi ke us tak pahunchne se pehle , use khatam karna chahti thi ,

ravi se yeh sab dekha na gya , abh use ik akhri rasta nazar aya , yahi ik rasta bacha tha ,

"komallll..." ravi ne us agni se bahar akar komal ko pukara , par abh komal ki awaz nai a rehi thi ,

ravi ne apne dono hath jod liye , kuch hi der me ravi ka badan hawa me uddne laga , jaise jaise ravi dyan lagata gya , uske seene se sapat chakar utpan hone lage ,



ravi dhere dhere us agg ko apne ander sokhne laga , jaise jaise agg uske jism me parvesh karti gai , uska badan lal hota gya ,

"bhyiaaaa naiiii , aisaa mattt karooo..." komal jo abh agg ki tapash kam hone ke karan apne bhai ko dekh sakti thi , usne chila kar bola ,

par ravi ruka nai , voh agg ko apne ander nigalta gya , abh agg behad kam ho chuki thi , lekin komal abh bhi jal rehi thi , kyu ki mayajaal abhi tuta nai tha ,



ravi abh komal ke karib jane laga , dono ke badan agg me jal rehe the , ik wakht aya , jab dono ik dusre ke samne khade the ,

abh kuch hi wakht hua tha dono ko door hue , par aisa mehsus ho reha tha , jaise sadyian beet gai ho ,

"komalll..." ravi ne komal ko apne karib karte hue bola ,



"bhyiaaa..." komal etna hi bol payi thi , ke ravi ne apne honth uske hontho se mila diye , beintha tadafe the dono , es pyar ke liye , en skoon bhare palu ke liye ,

komal ka mayajaal abh tut chuka tha , use akele rehna tha , par ravi ke usko chute hi , uska mayajaal khatam ho gya ,

"aahhhh bhyiaaa..." ik tez dhamaka hua , jaise bam visfot hua ho , ravi or komal ik dusre se kafi door jaker gir gye , or tabhi koi hasne laga , yeh thi dyana , jo abh azad thi ,



uske samne uske dushman the , jo abh behad kamzor the , or apni dunia se bahut door....

"hmmm , hasshhhh , me azad ho gaiiii , ahhhh , ummm , khuli hawa me sans lene ka maza hi kuch or hai , khiiikhiiiiiii , hai na komal ..." dyana ne apni vheshi hassi haste hue bola , or uddte hue komal ke karib pahunch gai ,

komal jamen par besudh padhi hui thi , voh behad kamzor ho chuki thi , dyana uske pas akar , uske bejan sharir ko dekhne lagi ,

"ehhh door , ahhh shhh , door rehh , ahhh meri behan see..." ravi dard se kahrahta uthte hue bola ,

"khiiiikhiiiii , ohhh mere pyare raviii , me tume mar kar , komal ko pori jindgi bhar ka dard dungi..." dyana ne haste hue bola ,

dyana ne akhen band kar , apne hath ko agge kiya , uske hath se tez bijli nikalne lagi , dyana ne voh tez chamakti bijli , ravi par chod di ,



voh bijli tezi se ravi ke jism se takrai , ravi behad kamzor tha , voh dard se kahrahne laga or jamen par gir gya ,

"bhyiaaaa..." komal behad kamzor halat me uthte hue boli , voh ladkhadati hui ravi ki traf badne lagi ,



tabhi dyana ne ik or magic ball komal par chod diya , tez agg ka magic ball komal ke badan se takaya .."ahhhhhhh bhyiaaa.." komal tez dard se chekhti hui door jaker gir gai , abh voh behosh ho chuki thi ,

"komalll , ahhh shhhh..." ravi dard bardasht karte hue utha , tabhi dyana ne uske karib akar , ik jadui khanjar uske pet me ghusa diya ,

"khiiiikhiiii , abh mera badla pora hua .." dyana haste hue boli , or khanjar ravi ke pet me or ghusa diya ,

khanjar pet ko cheerta hua jad tak ghus gya , or tez khoon behne laga , dyana ravi ko khanjar mar vaha se gyab ho gai ,

ravi jamen par gir padha , uski akhen band hone lagi thi , par uski akhon ke samne besudh jakhmi komal ka chehra ghum reha tha ,

ravi apni himet juta uth kar ghutno ke bal beth gya , ravi ne apne pet me ghuse khanjar ko dekha , or phir dono hatho me khanjar ko pakad , ik gehri sans lete hue , khanjar khich kar apne pet se nikal diya , khanjar ke sath khoon ki dhar bhi beh nikali ,

"ahhhhhh shhhhh , komall ko ahhhh bachana hai ahhhhhhh uthooo raviiii ummm shhhh..." ravi khud se hi bat karte hue bola ,

ravi uth kar ladkhadate hue komal ke pas gya , komal besudh behosh padhi hui thi , ravi ne jaise hi zuk kar use apni god me uthaya , ik tez dard ki leher uske jism me doad gai , or voh ladkhada kar komal ke uper hi gir gya....

vahi dusri traf khushi bechain hui ehder ohder ghum rehi thi , voh ravi ka intzar karte karte thak chuki thi , voh abh kuch nai kar sakti thi , na toh voh ander ja sakti thi , or na hi prithvi par....

"me toh baveshyie dekh sakti hu ..." khushi ne ika ik yahi socha , or phir akhen band kar , ravi or komal ko dekhne lagi , par jo usne dekha , voh dekhte hi voh jamen par ghutno ke bal beth rone lagi , or phir dhere dhere uske ander ik krodh ka jawalamukhi foot padha , lekin kya dekha tha khushi ne anne wale wakht me , kuch bura ya , kuch behad bura ,

"raviiiii..." khushi etni jor se chilai ke asman garaz utha , bijlyian kadakne lagi , khushi abh apne sabse vheshi roop me a chuki thi , aisa bus ik bar pehle hua tha ,

jab pari log me suhana ne prince ko mar diya tha , lekin kya khushi , komal or ravi tak pahunch payegi , un danavo se lad payegi.... eske liye next update ka intzar kariye...

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Mst update bhai akhir ravi aur komal mil hi gaye aur ravi ne komal ko azad bhi karwa diya lekin uske sath hi dyana bhi azad ho gayi jisne ravi ko khanjar mara aur komal ko behosh kiya hai kya komal hosh me aa kar ravi ko bacha payegi ya phir khushi joh apne sabse vehsi roop me hai woh bachayegi ravi ko :waiting:
 
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