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Sorry sir actually ik baar hi read kiya aaz update ap itna achha likhte ho apke hr update ko 2 3 baar padhti hun fir review deti hun but mere exam tohh time nhi mila sssooo sorry

koi bat nai.. app apne exam par concentrate kariye.. best of luck sona ji.. or sorry bolne ki jarurat nai.. apki bhi ik insani jindgi hai.. toh apne carrier par focus kariye ... shukriya...

 

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update-56

Abh Agge...

ravi , komal or khushi kabile ke main gate ke pas khade the , jaise hi tino kabile ke ander ghuse , 3 peharedaro ne unko rok liya , unke hatho me tez dhar talwar thi ,

"kon ho tum , yaha kyu aye ho , jaldi bolo , varna gala kat dunga.." unme se ik pehredar behad gusse me chekhte hue bola ,

"me komal hu , baba hamsha ki god li beti , yeh mera bhai or yeh meri friend , hame baba se milna hai..." komal ne us pehredar ki akhon me dekhte hue bola ,

"hmm , intzar karo , ham rehan malik se milkar ate hain..." ik pehredar yeh bola or vaha se jane laga , tabhi komal use awaz deker boli ,

"ehh suno , apne malik rehan se kehna ke , komal ayi hai , uski dost..." komal ne muskrate hue bola , use es bat ki beintha khushi thi ke rehan or suzi abhi jinda hain ,

phir voh pehredar chala gya ,

"komal , hasshhh , shukar hai bhagwan ka , ke dyana ne yaha koi tabahi nai machai ..." ravi ne behad khush hote hue bola ,

"han , yeh bat thik boli apne , bhyia es kabile ne muze nayi jindgi di thi , or mane eski raksha ka vachan diya tha , par me voh vachan nibha na payi..." komal ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"komal , har bat par rona jaruri hai..." ravi ne matha peet kar bola ,

"app kya jano aurato ke man ko , ravi babu..." khushi muskrate hue boli toh komal bhi hasne lagi ,

abhi ravi kuch bolne hi ja reha tha ke voh pehredar a gya , par uske piche koi or bhi a reha tha ,

tabhi ravi , komal or khushi ne dekha , ik ladki bhagti hui a rehi thi , uske pair nange the , voh nange pair bhagti hui a rehi thi , usne ik top or ik short lehnga pehan rakha tha , baal khule hue the , voh bar bar ik hath se apne asnu saf karti hui dilo jaan se bhag rehi thi ,

us ladki ko komal kaise na pehchan pati , uski dost thi , han , yeh suzi thi , jo komal se milne ki beintha khushi me pagal si hui roti hui bhagi a rehi thi ,

use yeh bhi nai pata tha ke kabile ke log use dekh rehe hain , akhir voh es kabile ki malika thi , suzi , komal ke karib akar ruk gai , uski sanse behad tez chal rehi thi ,

"suziiiii..." komal ne chila kar bola , or suzi ke gale lag gai , abh dono ro rehi thi , bichad kar milne ka dard or khushi , koi aisa insan hi samaz sakta hai , jiske sath aisi ghatna beet chuki ho ,

"komal , kaha chali gai thi tu , mane socha kahi....." suzi etna bolte bolte ruk sa gai or phir komal ke chehre ko chumne lagi , behad mushkil se komal ne suzi ko shant karvaya , lekin voh bhegi bhegi akhon me behad katilana lag rehi thi ,

tab tak rehan bhi vaha pahunch chuka tha , voh pehredar saar zuka ik traf khade ho gye , rehan agge bad ravi ke gale lag gya , unki akhen nam thi , par hontho se ik shabad nai nikala ,

yeh bat sabit karti thi , ke mard apni bhavnayion ko apne seene me chupa kar rakhte hain , kyu ki voh dunia ke samne kamzor nai dikhna chahte ,

"bhai kaisa hai tu..." rehan ne apni nam akhen saf karte hue bola ,

"me thik hu or tum , yar tum toh es kabile ke raza ban gye ho..." ravi ne muskrate hue mazak me bola toh rehan bhi muskrane laga ,

"ahuu , ahuuu , are bhai me bhi ayi hu sath me..." khushi ne khaste hue bola , toh sab hasne lage ,

phir komal bhi rehan ke gale lag , usse mili , akhir etni gehri dosti thi , tino ki , tino ki matlab , rehan , suzi or komal ki , phir rehan or suzi , khushi se mile , behad pyari jodi thi , rehan or suzi ki ,

phir rehan or suzi apne naye mehmano ko kabile ke ander le aye , sab kuch vaisa tha , vahi nadi par bana lakadi ka pul , vahi kabile ke ghar , vahi rehan ka do manzila ghar ,

ravi or komal ki purani yadian taza ho gai , lekin ik bat ki kami thi , voh kami thi , seema ,

seema ki yad ate hi komal or ravi ki akhen nam ho gai , phir dono ik dusre ki traf dekh muskra diye ,

"bhyia ham dono ka pehla pyar , hasshh sehtian ban gya..." komal ne behad dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"komal , ham seema ko vapis layege , jab suhana ki burai , achai me badal jayegi , tab seema khud ba khud thik ho jayegi..." ravi ne komal ko thoda vishwas dilate hue bola , par yeh etna asan bhi nai tha , ravi shetian ko sachai ke raste me lana chah reha tha ,

phir ravi , komal or khushi usi do manzila lakadi ke bane ghar ke pas pahunch gye , yaha un dono ne kai pyar bhare lamhe gujare the ,

ravi or komal ne ik dusre ki traf dekha or muskrane lage ,

"ravi bhai ander ayo , apka apna ghar hai..." rehan muskrate hue bola , toh voh tino bhi dil se khush ho gye ,

ravi or komal ghar me ghuste hi sidha usi room ki traf bhag gye , yaha voh ik sath rehte the , room ke ander ate hi , ravi ne komal ko piche se apni bahu me pakad liya ,

"ohhh meri jaan , kitna tadfaya tumne..." ravi ne komal ki gardan ko chumte chatte hue bola ,

"ahhh shhhh bhyiaa me bhi tadafi hu , apke pyar ke liye..." komal ne masti me sisakte hue bola ,

phir ravi ne jaladi se komal ko apni traf ghuma liya , usne komal ki gehri neli akhon me ik bar dekha , or phir apne pyase hontho ko uske pyase hontho se mila diya ,

ravi , komal ke hontho ko behad shidat se chum reha tha , komal bhi apne bhai ke baalo ko sehlati apne naram hontho ko ragad ragad kar apne bhai ke hontho ko chus rehi thi ,

en hontho ke milan ne dono ke jism ko masti se bhar diya , or ravi ke hath komal ki nazuk kamar se fisal uske hips par chale gye , ravi abh badi shidat se komal ke hontho ko chusta hua , uske mote gadraye hips ko daba reha tha , komal ki moh se abh siskyian nikalne lagi thi ,

"ummm ahhh bhyiaaa ummm pagal kar doge appp ahhhhh..." komal apne bhai ke hontho ko chod masti me sisakate hue boli ,

ravi ne ik pal ke liye muskra kar komal ke nishile chehre ko dekha or phir use god me utha bed par patak diya , abhi ravi , komal ke uper leta hi tha , ke "kaaadaaakkkk..." ki awaz karta room ka darvaja khul gya , ravi or komal darvaje ke khulne ki ahaht sun ik dusre se door ho gye ,

"shhiiii , shhiiii , komal abhi toh ayi ho , etni bhi kya jaladbazi..." yeh suzi thi , jo dono ko dekh ik dam se palatte hue bol rehi thi ,

"voh , voh , tu kyu ayi uper , hamesha mere romantic palu ki maa behan karne a jati hai..." komal ne thoda narazgi me bola ,

"are me khane ka puchne ayi thi , nai khana toh , bol do , jeju continue...." suzi etna bol niche bhag gai ,

"ehh suzi ki bachi..." komal bed se uth kar suzi ke piche bhagne lagi , tabhi ravi ne uska hath pakad liya , or use apni traf khich apni bahu me bhar liya , komal ne sharma kar apna chehra ravi ke chode seene me chupa liya ,

"komal.."

"huu..."

"abh or nai intzar hota , pls , abh toh muzse shadi kar lo , pata nai tum kab meri hogi..." ravi ne komal ke baalo ko pyar se sehlate hue bola ,

"apki toh hu..."

"par muze voh bhi chahyie..."

"kya..."

"yeh..." ravi ne komal ki chut ko muthi me bhar masalte hue boli ,

"ouuchhhh , gande kahi ki..." komal ne apne bhai ke seene me pyar se marte hue bola ,

"komal , rat ko mere pas sona ..." ravi ne komal ke gulabi lal hontho ko chus kar bola ,

"jii , abh niche chale , rehan or suzi pata nai kya soch rehe honge..." komal ne thoda sharma kar bola ,

"hmm , chalo.." ravi ne etna bola or komal ka hath pakad uske sath ghar ke hall me a gya , yaha khushi bethi use kha jane wali nazarion se ghur rehi thi...

vahi dusri traf..

rimi or shurti ghar ki saf safai kar rehi thi , unko samaz nai a reha tha , ke roz roz ghar ganda kaise ho jata hai , subah se leker sham tak voh pore ghar ko saf karti , par agle din phir se ghar vaise hi dhul mitti se sana ganda hota ,

voh dono seema se behad darti thi , eska ik veshesh karan tha , ik din seema ne rimi or shurti ko kam na karne par saza di , usne rema ko bulaya , rema ka voh khofnak roop dekh , rimi or shurti behad dar gai , or pichle 1 saal se voh seema ka har diya kam karti , uski har bat manti ,

aisa nai tha ke unko mout se dar lagta tha , par kisi ke intzar ne unko rok rakha tha , voh apne jism par apna khud ka huk nai manti thi , unke liye unka jism , unke bhi ki amanat tha , kisi shyar ne sach hi kaha hai..

ke.. voh mere pyar ki jamanat hai ,
sambal kar rakhna ,
meri aaaamanat hai ,
jra si kharoch bhi ayi use , toh pora shehar palat dunga ,
kyu ki abhi voh shakash jinda hai , slamat hai......

voh apne bhai ki amanat thi , uske liye voh pori jindgi dard jhel sakti thi , mar kha sakti thi , bhek tak mang sakti thi ,

unke pyar ka ik alag sathan tha , komal , seema , rema , en sab ka pyar alag alag tha , par ravi en sab ko ik jaisa pyar karta tha ,

"uff dedi me thak gai hu , mere hath chil gye hain , or muze bhukar bhi hai , dekho mera sharir kitna tap reha hai..." rimi ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

subah 7 baje se voh ghar ke har kam me lagi hui thi , or abh sham ke 6 baj rehe the , shurti bhi bejan si , jaise jism me koi jaan hi na ho , uska dil ro reha tha , par phir bhi voh kam me lagi hui thi ,

"rimi meri behan , tu aram karle , me tere hisse ka kam kar dungi , ja beth ja tu..." shurti ne pyar se rimi ke galo par hath phira bola ,

"ohhh rimi tuze toh sach me bahut bhukar hai , tume medicine leni chahyie , tu ruk me dekhti hu..." shurti bhi jadu ik traf fenk apne room me chali gai , medicine dundne ,

abh rimi akeli bethi hui thi , bhukar se uska badan kamp reha tha , saar dard se fata ja reha tha ,

"bhyiaaa , me mar jaugiii , plss a jaoo , plss , muzse galti ho gai , muze maf kar do ..." rimi bhukar se kampte rote hue chila kar boli , tabhi seema ghar ke ander ayi ,

"ehhh tu bethi kya kar rehi hai , nikami , kam kar , varna..." seema ne rimi ko baalo se khich jamen par girate hue bola ,

"aaieeeeeeeee , dediii bachaoooo..." rimi baal khichne se dard se rote hue chila kar boli ,

tabhi room se shurti bhag kar bahar ayi or seema ke pairo me gir kar usse rimi ko na marne ki bhekh mangne lagi ,

"plss , dediii , chod doo , plss , maf kar doo , rimi ko bhukar hai , mane hi use kaha tha bethne ko , muze maro dediii , plss rimi ko chod doo..." shurti , seema ke pario me girkar use rote hue boli ,

seema ne rimi ko dhaka deker ik traf gira diya or shurti ko baalo se pakad uske chehre par thapad marne lagi ,

shurti har dard sehti rehi , uski akhon me , uske dimag me , apne bhai ke sath bitaye khushnuma pal ghum rehe the , voh mar khati rehi , par hontho se ik bhi awaz nai nikali ,

"huu , kamchor kahi ki , ajj tum dono ko khana nai milega , or tum dono us andhere kamre me rahugi , varna , rema ko bula kar , usse pitavaugi tum dono ko..." seema ne shurti ke baal chodte hue behad gusse me bola , shurti bejan jism se jamen par gir gai ,

rimi jamen par rengte hue , shurti ke pas pahunchi or kampte hue use apni bahu me bhar liya ,

"bevkuf bhai ki , bevkuf behne , jao us room me , jaooo..." seema ne rimi ke pet me lat marte hue bola ,

"ahhhhhh bhyiaaaaa..." rimi dard se chekhte hue chila kar boli ,

"bhyia ka nam leti hai , voh buzdil , kabhi nai ayega , mar gya hoga kahi..." seema ne ik do bar or rimi ke pet me apne pario se marte hue bola , rimi ko beintha dard hua , uske hontho se khoon beh nikala ,

phir shurti ne uth kar rimi ko sahara diya , or sedyion ke pas bane store room me chali gai , yaha behad andhera tha ,

shurti or rimi room me ik kone me apas me chipak kar beth gai , rimi ka badan abh or bhi tap reha tha , karib ik ghante bad , rimi bhukar se tapte hue behosh ho gai , shurti abh behad dar gai thi , voh ro rehi thi or dua kar rehi thi bhagwan se....


vahi dusri traf...

ravi or khushi abh rat ko kabile me ghum rehe the , khushi toh behad khush thi ,

"khushu , yar kash ke me ghar ja pata , rimi or shurti kitna khush hoti muze dekh kar.." ravi ne rimi or shurti ko yad karte hue bola ,

tabhi khushi ne muskrate hue apni akhen band ki , par jo usne dekha , voh chekh uthi ,

"kyaa huaa khushii , tum thik toh ho.." ravi ne khushi ko apni bahu ka sahara dete hue bola , varna voh gir jati ,

"ravi , voh , voh , ravi..."

"are kya voh , voh , laga rakha hai , batao bat kya hai..." ravi ko abh behad chinta ho rehi thi , voh janta tha , khushi ne kuch behad bura dekha hai ,

"ravi , rimi or shurti , unki jaan ko khatra hai..." khushi ne rote hue bola ,

phir khushi ne rimi or shurti ke sath kya kya hua , voh sab bata diya , jise sun ravi ki akhen asunyion se bhar gai , voh ghutno ke bal beth chila chila kar rone laga , jiski awaz abh komal bhi sun chuki thi....

komal ghar se bahar bhagte hue nikali or ravi ke pas pahunch use apni bahu me bhar shant karne lagi , komal ne khushi ki traf dekha , toh khushi ne sab bata diya , komal bhi yeh sun rone lagi , khushi toh pehle se hi ro rehi thi ,

kuch der bad ravi behad gusse me utha or phir apna saar dono hatho me pakad , kuch sochne laga , tabhi use ik rasta nazar aya , voh rasta khushi thi....vahi shurti or rimi ko la sakti thi....


to be counited....

Emotional update suhana ne shurti aur rimi pe zulm pe zulm kar rahi bc jaldi bachao bhai shurti aur rimi ko

 

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update-57

Abh Agge...

Ravi kuch der sochne ke bad khushi ki traf dekhne laga , khushi apni bhegi bhegi akhen liye , ravi ko dekhne lagi , jaise samaz rehi ho , ravi ka matlab kya hai ,

komal abh bhi ro rehi thi , sab ki sab , bus ik hi insan se judi thi , voh insan tha ravi , uski har behan , har premika , sab ravi se judi thi , voh mar sakti thi , akele tadaf sakti thi , par apne dil se apne bhai ka pyar nai mita sakti thi , voh kisi bhi had se gujar sakti thi ,

"ravi tum aise kyu dekh rehe ho..." khushi ne geele galo ko hath se saf karte hue bola ,

"khushi , tum , tum hi la sakti ho , shurti or rimi ko , samaye nirman chakar se..." ravi ne muskra kar bola ,

"lekin ravi , eske bad suhana ko pata chal jayega, ham kaha hai , voh yaha pahunch jayegi..." khushi ne behad chinta me bola ,

"toh kya chup kar betha rahu , or kab tak betha rahuga , han , bolo , muze rimi or shurti chahyie , voh bhi ajj hi , or ik ghante me..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"bhyia khushi sahi bol rehi hai , thoda deraj se kam lejiye..." komal ne ravi ke kande par hath rakh bola ,

"are kitna deraj rakhu , unko marne du , ya unke marne ke bad kuch karu , komal , yeh meri nai ham sab ki ladai hai , jo hona hai , voh hoker rahega .." ravi ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"hmm , komal shyad ravi thik bol reha hai , honi ko koi nai tal sakta , ham anne wale kal se nai bhag sakte , me layugi shurti or rimi ko..." khushi ne thoda chinta me bola , usne anne wala wakht dekh liya tha , jo ke behad kashatdiyak or bura tha ,

"toh thik hai , bhyia me apke sath hu , akhri sans tak ladugi..." komal ne piche se apne bhai ko bahu me bharte hue bola ,

"khushu jao jaldi..."

"hmm... " khushi ne saar hila kar bola , or samaye chakar ko punar jevat kar , shurti or rimi ke pas nikal gai ,

"uff bhagwan hamara sath de , rimi or shurti sahi salamat yaha pahunch jaye..." komal ne dono hath jod akhen band kar bola ,

"muze khushi par pora vishwas hai , voh ayegi , jarur ayegi , chahe use unse ladna hi kyu na padhe..." ravi ne khushi ke nirshal balidan ko yad kar bola ,

vahi dusri traf shurti apne jism ki garmi rimi ko de rehi thi , usne rimi ko apni bahu me bhar rakha tha , voh rimi ke chehre ko bar bar chum rehi thi , uski akhon se asnu beh rehe the ,

es 1 saal me un par julam toh bahut hue the , par en sab ke bech , rimi or shurti , ik dusre ko behad pyar karne lagi thi ,

ik dusre ke sath rehti , sath soti , har dard ko sath sehti , use mehsus karti , un dono ke bech pyar abh behad gehra ho chuka tha ,

pehle yeh sab nai tha , chehe voh dono behne thi , par ajj unka rishta behad gehra ho chuka tha , tabhi toh shurti ki akhen bin masom barsat ki trah baras rehi thi ,

rat ke karib 11 baj rehe honge , tabhi jis room me shurti or rimi bethi thi , achank us room me roshni phail gai ,

shurti ne etni adhik roshni ki tapash sehan na karte hue apni akhan band karli , jab roshni thodi si kam hui , toh shurti ne apni akhen kholi , samne khushi khadi thi ,

lekin shurti behad dar gai , voh or bhi rone lagi , use lag reha tha , khushi use marne ayi hai ,

"pls mat marooo , me or nai seh sakti , plss , meri behan mar rehi hai , pls bacha lo use , nai jee sakti me eske bina , pls bacha lo ..." shurti ne dono hath jod rote hue bola ,

"shhhhh , shurti me khushi hu , khushi thakur , me tume bachane ayi hu..." khushi ne thoda nam akhon se bola , uska samaye chakar abhi bhi gol gol ghum reha tha ,

"kyaa , sach me , hame bacha lo , hame le chalo yaha se..." shurti ne dewar ka sahara leker uthte hue bola ,

"shurti , tumare bhai ne muze bheja hai , abh jaldi rimi ko uthao..." khushi bhi shurti ko sahara dete hue boli ,

"voh behosh hai..." shurti ne rote hue bola ,

"koi bat nai..." khushi ne rimi ko apne kande par utha liya or shurti ke sath us chakar me ghus gai , shurti toh khushi ki takat dekh herian reh gai ,

abhi voh ja hi rehe the , ke ik dam se store room ka darvaja .."kadddaaakkkkk..." ki awaz karta hua tut gya , khushi ne jaldi se chakar ko band karna chaha , par voh tuta hua darvaja bhi us chakar me sama gya ,

yeh suhana thi , jo behad gusse me , lal chamakti akhon se , store room ke bahar khadi thi , usne hi darvaje ko dhaka diya tha , or darvaja tut kar uddta hu us chakar me sama gya tha ,

"tamassssss..." suhana behad gusse me chilayi , uski chekh se pora ghar kamp utha... "tume eski kemat chukani hogiii..." suhana gusee me apne pair patak apne room ki traf chali gai ,

vahi dusri traf ravi or komal rehan ke ghar ke bahar ik pathar par apas me chipak kar bethe hue , khushi ka intzar kar rehe the ,

ravi samaz chuka tha , komal behad udas hai , voh uski udasi door karna chahta tha ,

"komal..."

"huu..."

"muzse kab pyar karugi tum..." ravi ne komal ko apni bahu me bhar uska matha chumte hue bola ,

"bhyia pyar karti toh hu ..." komal , ravi ki akhon me dekh muskra kar boli ,

"ohh ho , komal me hamari suhagrat ki bat kar reha hu..." ravi ne muskrate hue bola , toh komal sharmane lagi ,

"komal batau na..."

"muze nai pata , app gande ho.." komal ne apna chehra apne bhai ke seene me chupa kar bola ,

"acha , pori dunia me jo log sex karte hain , voh gande hote hain..." ravi haste hue bola ,

"huu..." komal ne behad sharma kar bola ,

"kya me jan sakta hu , voh kaise..."

"nai pata..." komal ne masomyiat se bola ,

"komal tum jitni masom dikhti ho , utni ho nai , tum behad chalak ho , jungli cat ki trah..." ravi etna bol haste hue bhagne laga ,

"kyaaa me cat , ruko app..." komal bhi apne bhai ko marne ke liye uske piche bhagi ,

tabhi ravi ke agge ik chakar sa ban gya , usme se khushi bahar ayi , usne apne kande par rimi ko utha rakha tha or uske sath shurti bhi thi , jaise hi khushi or shurti bahar ayi ,

"khushi bachooo..." ravi ne khushi or shurti ko ik traf kiya or us chakar se ik darvaja ravi ke uper gir gya , voh darvaja behad raftar se us chakar se bahar nikala tha , acha hua ravi ki nazar us par padh gai ,

"bhyiaaa..." komal jor se chilati hui ravi ke pas bhag kar ayi or us darvaje ko ravi ke uper se hata diya , ravi , komal ka hath pakad uth khada hua ,

"khushii..." ravi ne apna matha sehlate khushi ki traf dekha jo muskra rehi thi ,

"bhai meri koi galti nai , yeh kam suhana ka tha , jab me rimi or shurti ko la rehi thi , tabhi voh room me ik dam se a gai..." khushi ne thoda muskra kar bola ,

phir ravi ki nazar shurti par gai , bhikaryion jaisi halat thi uski , fate purane kapde , pora badan ganda , mitti se sana hua , bhikre hue baal , pore jism par halki halki chote , uske hontho par bhi suzan ayi hui thi , or ik traf se khoon beh kar sukh chuka tha , or es se bhi badtar halat rimi ki thi ,

ravi apni behan shurti ki traf badne laga , jo usse nazarian chura rehi thi , kyu , voh abh khud ko khubsurat nai manti thi ,

ravi , shurti ke karib akar ruk gya , usne komal or khushi ko kuch ishara kiya , voh dono samaz gai , or rimi ko ghar ke ander le gai ,

"shurti...." ravi ne nam akhon se apne hath shurti ke kandu par rakhe , jinko shurti ne jatak diya or palat kar rone lagi ,

"shurti mera gunah toh batao , kyu muzse nazarian chura rehi ho , kya galti hai meri..." ravi ne ghutno ke bal beth rote hue bola ,

shurti ne palat kar apne bhai ko yu rota dekha , toh voh bhag kar , ghutno ke bal beth , uske gale lag gai , or fot fot kar rone lagi ,

"bus shurti , abh or nai , jitna rona tha ro liya , abh me un sab se badla lunga , jisne bhi meri pari jaisi behan ka yeh haal kiya hai , use eski kemat chukani hogi..." ravi kas kar shurti ko apni bahu me bhar kar bola ,

phir ravi ne shurti ko kuch der rone diya , kuch wakht bad shurti ka rona kam ho gya , abh voh sisak rehi thi , dhere dhere ,

ravi ne uth kar shurti ko apni god me utha liya , shurti bus bejan si akhen kholi apne bhai ko dekhti rehi , use abh bhi yeh sapna lag reha tha , kyu ki usne apne ghar me hi narag se badtar jevan jiya tha ,

ravi , shurti ko ghar ke ander laya , or phir sedyian chad uper apne room me pahunch gya , yaha komal or khushi , rimi ka elaaz kar rehi thi ,

ravi ne shurti ko rimi ke sath lita diya , or uske pas hi beth gya , tabhi behosh rimi bhukar se kampte hue sote hue badbadane lagi ..

"ahhhh matt maroo , dedi bachaoo , naiiiii , matt maroo..." rimi behosh halat me yeh sab bol rehi thi , or uski akhon se asnu beh rehe the ,

ravi ne nam akhon se shurti ki traf dekha , voh bhi ro rehi thi ,

"komal , khushi , tum dono niche jao , me yahi , shurti or rimi ke sath rahuga , khushi tum rimi ko thik karo or hosh me laoo..." ravi ne dono ko jaise adesh sa dete hue bola ,

khushi ne rimi ke mathe par hath rakha , uske hath se ik roshni ki kirane nikali jo rimi ke saar me samane lagi , dhere dhere rimi ko hosh anne laga ,

"bhyiaaaaa...." voh dard bhari chekh marti uth kar beth gai , usne as-pas nazar doadai or kampte hue shurti ke gale lag gai , shurti bhi uth kar beth chuki thi , rimi uske gale lagi , uske seene me apna chehra chupa rehi thi ,

sabki akhen nam thi , phir komal or khushi rote hue bahar chali gai , ravi abhi bhi vaha betha tha ,

"rimi , dekho ham kaha hain , or yeh dekho yeh kon hai..." shurti ne rimi ke baal sehlate muskra kar bola ,

rimi ne thoda sa chehra piche kar bhegi bhegi akhon se ravi ko dekha , or phir kuch pal dekhti rehi , or phir jor jor se rote hue shurti ke seene se or bhi kas kar chipak gai , use abh bhi vishwas nai tha , voh abh bhi shock me thi ,

"rimi , me tera bhai hu , ehder dekh , meri bahu me sama jao , ayo rimi..." ravi ne nam akhon se dard bhari halat me hath phaila kar bola ,

rimi ne rote hue thoda piche hoker ravi ko dekha or phir tezi se uske gale lag gai , voh abh bhi ro rehi thi , use yeh umeed nai thi ke voh jinda bach jayegi or apne bhai se mil payegi ,

"shhh shant ho jao , meri cute si janu , abh or nai rona..." rimi apne bhai ko bahu me kasti ro rehi thi , voh chup nai ho rehi thi ,

ravi ko kuch samaz nai a reha tha , voh kya kare , ravi ne rimi ka chehra thoda piche kar , apne dono hatho se uska chehra pakad , apne honth uske bhege hontho par rakh diye ,

ravi abh rimi ke hontho ko chusne laga , rimi ke asnu beh rehe the , asnu beh kar , ravi ke hontho se mil rehe the , ravi bade pyar se , behad shidat se rimi ke hontho ko chus reha tha ,

kuch palu bad , rimi bhi ravi ka sath dete hue apne bhai ko apne honth chusva rehi thi , kuch wakht bad , ravi ne rimi ke hontho ko chusna chod uski akhon me dekha , uff bhegi bhegi akhon me rimi beintha cute lag rehi thi ,

ravi ne rimi ko apni bahu me bhar liya , uske balu ko sehlane laga ,

adhe ghante bad ravi , rimi or shurti ke bech leta hua tha , dono behne , ravi ke kandu par saar rakh , ik dusre ki traf dekh muskra rehi thi , yahi toh voh hasen pal the , jiske liye dono har julm , har dard sehti rehi , akhir dukh ke bad sukh ke pal aye the ,

"bhyiaaa sorry , hamne kitna galat socha apke bare me , hame maf kar do..." rimi thoda udas hoker boli ,

"han bhyia muze bhi maf kar do..." shurti or bhi kas kar ravi ke badan se chipakti hui boli ,

"shhh , voh wakht beet gya , use bhul jao , agge anne wale wakht ka sochu , acha me soch reha tha , tum dono se shadi kar lu , par tum dono dikhne me behad gandi ho , nahati nai ho kya..." ravi ne muskrate hue bola toh rimi or shurti ki akhen nam ho gai ,

"rimi , shurti , tum meri ho , chahe jaisi bhi ho , jis halat me ho , mera pyar na kam hua hai or na kabhi hoga , me tum dono se beintha pyar karta hu , or bevkuf ladkyio me mazak kar reha tha..." ravi ne dono ke chehre ke dekh kar bola ,

"ham bhi bhyia apse beintha pyar karti hain... " dono ik sath boli or phir ik dusre ki traf dekh hasne lagi , un dono ka apsi pyar abh behad badh chuka tha , unke hath ravi ke seene par apas me mil chuke the ,

"ohh shukar hai mere shiv ka , tum dono sahi salamat ho , varna , es dunia ka vinash kar deta me , meri pyari paryian..." ravi ne dono ke baalo ko sehla kar bola ,

"bhyia seema dedi ne ham par bahut julm kiye , hame bahut mara , ham kabhi unse bat nai karegi , apke khilaf hamare man me jehar bhar diya , or rema , voh kitni khofnak ho chuki hai..." rema ne phir se un narag jaise palu ko yad kar rote hue bola ,

"kya hua rema ko..." ravi ko rema ki chinta thi ,

"bhyia rema ik shetian ban chuki hai , uske lal lal lambe baal hain or jism ik dam black , or bhyia uske baal bhi jinda hain , han bhyia uske baal usse bat kar sakte hain..." shurti bhi rema ke khofnak roop ko yad rote hue boli ,

"shhh , so jao , ajj skoon se so jao , meri bahu me , me hu na , so jao..." ravi ne dono ko behad pyar se bola , dono ik dusre ki traf dekhti , muskrate hue sone lagi , kyu ki ,

ajj skun se dono ko nend a rehi thi , kyu voh apne bhai ke agosh me so rehi thi , ajj na koi dar tha , na hi kal koi kam karne ki chinta , kyu ki abh voh apne bhai ki pariyan thi , or pariyan kabhi kam nai karti... lekin ravi nai soya tha , voh subah tak bus rema ke bare me sochta reha.....

vahi dusri traf..

seema behad gusse me rema ke room ke pas pahunch kar ruk gai , voh akhon me asnu liye rema ke room me ghus gai ,

room ke ander bus lal roshni thi , charo traf ik gehri lal roshni , or samne ik lal bed par , rema bethi hui thi , voh supat awastha me thi , pichle 6 mahino se ,

lekin uske lambe lal chamakte baal room me ehder-ohder mandra rehe the , uska badan kala tha ,

jaise hi seema room me ghusi , rema ke jevat baal apas me ulazate , apas me takrate , seema ke karib akar , uske jism ko chune lage , use mehsus karne lage ,

"m...mm...me...ee..eski..mm..maa...hh..hu." seema ne haklate hue bola ,

par jaise hi voh agge badne lagi , rema ke baalo ne uske samne ik dewar bana di , jaise voh seema ko rema ke karib nai jane dena chahte the , jaise rema un baalo ki maa thi , jaise voh jevat bache the , par ik nai , lakho me ,

"sumonnnnnnn , uthooo betiiii , tumari behano ki jaan khatre me haii..." seema ne chila kar bola , voh yeh sab beintha rote hue bol rehi thi , rema ke baal ik bar piche ko hue or phir unhonu ne seema ko charo traf se gher liya ,

phir ika ik un baalo ne seema ko uper se niche tak jakad liya , abh seema ka badan jara sa bhi dikhai nai de reha tha , tabhi vaha dyana bhi a gai ,

seema ko chod rema ke lal baalo ne dyana ko chu kar mehsus kiya or phir rema ke chehre ke karib jaker use jagane lage ,

jaise hi rema ki supat awashta khatam hui , rema samne dekh ik hi shabad boli..."maaa..." par kise dekh kar....



to be counited.....

bahut badhiya update.......... rimi or shruty bach geyi seema ke hath se........or unhe unke bhai mil geya........udhar seema to ikdam perfect acting karti hai............to rema ka agle janam me shuman naam thi.......or dayna bhi aageyi or rema jaag geyi.....kyu ki uske maa matlab dayna suman chura kar apni beti ki tarah pala or udko bhi takat diya......or usse sab such chupaya......ab dekhte hai kya hota hai........rema kisko chunti hai......apni peyar ya use dhoka dene wali nakli 2no maa ko......
waiting for next update

 

[Rizwan]

update-57

Abh Agge...

Ravi kuch der sochne ke bad khushi ki traf dekhne laga , khushi apni bhegi bhegi akhen liye , ravi ko dekhne lagi , jaise samaz rehi ho , ravi ka matlab kya hai ,

komal abh bhi ro rehi thi , sab ki sab , bus ik hi insan se judi thi , voh insan tha ravi , uski har behan , har premika , sab ravi se judi thi , voh mar sakti thi , akele tadaf sakti thi , par apne dil se apne bhai ka pyar nai mita sakti thi , voh kisi bhi had se gujar sakti thi ,

"ravi tum aise kyu dekh rehe ho..." khushi ne geele galo ko hath se saf karte hue bola ,

"khushi , tum , tum hi la sakti ho , shurti or rimi ko , samaye nirman chakar se..." ravi ne muskra kar bola ,

"lekin ravi , eske bad suhana ko pata chal jayega, ham kaha hai , voh yaha pahunch jayegi..." khushi ne behad chinta me bola ,

"toh kya chup kar betha rahu , or kab tak betha rahuga , han , bolo , muze rimi or shurti chahyie , voh bhi ajj hi , or ik ghante me..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"bhyia khushi sahi bol rehi hai , thoda deraj se kam lejiye..." komal ne ravi ke kande par hath rakh bola ,

"are kitna deraj rakhu , unko marne du , ya unke marne ke bad kuch karu , komal , yeh meri nai ham sab ki ladai hai , jo hona hai , voh hoker rahega .." ravi ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"hmm , komal shyad ravi thik bol reha hai , honi ko koi nai tal sakta , ham anne wale kal se nai bhag sakte , me layugi shurti or rimi ko..." khushi ne thoda chinta me bola , usne anne wala wakht dekh liya tha , jo ke behad kashatdiyak or bura tha ,

"toh thik hai , bhyia me apke sath hu , akhri sans tak ladugi..." komal ne piche se apne bhai ko bahu me bharte hue bola ,

"khushu jao jaldi..."

"hmm... " khushi ne saar hila kar bola , or samaye chakar ko punar jevat kar , shurti or rimi ke pas nikal gai ,

"uff bhagwan hamara sath de , rimi or shurti sahi salamat yaha pahunch jaye..." komal ne dono hath jod akhen band kar bola ,

"muze khushi par pora vishwas hai , voh ayegi , jarur ayegi , chahe use unse ladna hi kyu na padhe..." ravi ne khushi ke nirshal balidan ko yad kar bola ,

vahi dusri traf shurti apne jism ki garmi rimi ko de rehi thi , usne rimi ko apni bahu me bhar rakha tha , voh rimi ke chehre ko bar bar chum rehi thi , uski akhon se asnu beh rehe the ,

es 1 saal me un par julam toh bahut hue the , par en sab ke bech , rimi or shurti , ik dusre ko behad pyar karne lagi thi ,

ik dusre ke sath rehti , sath soti , har dard ko sath sehti , use mehsus karti , un dono ke bech pyar abh behad gehra ho chuka tha ,

pehle yeh sab nai tha , chehe voh dono behne thi , par ajj unka rishta behad gehra ho chuka tha , tabhi toh shurti ki akhen bin masom barsat ki trah baras rehi thi ,

rat ke karib 11 baj rehe honge , tabhi jis room me shurti or rimi bethi thi , achank us room me roshni phail gai ,

shurti ne etni adhik roshni ki tapash sehan na karte hue apni akhan band karli , jab roshni thodi si kam hui , toh shurti ne apni akhen kholi , samne khushi khadi thi ,

lekin shurti behad dar gai , voh or bhi rone lagi , use lag reha tha , khushi use marne ayi hai ,

"pls mat marooo , me or nai seh sakti , plss , meri behan mar rehi hai , pls bacha lo use , nai jee sakti me eske bina , pls bacha lo ..." shurti ne dono hath jod rote hue bola ,

"shhhhh , shurti me khushi hu , khushi thakur , me tume bachane ayi hu..." khushi ne thoda nam akhon se bola , uska samaye chakar abhi bhi gol gol ghum reha tha ,

"kyaa , sach me , hame bacha lo , hame le chalo yaha se..." shurti ne dewar ka sahara leker uthte hue bola ,

"shurti , tumare bhai ne muze bheja hai , abh jaldi rimi ko uthao..." khushi bhi shurti ko sahara dete hue boli ,

"voh behosh hai..." shurti ne rote hue bola ,

"koi bat nai..." khushi ne rimi ko apne kande par utha liya or shurti ke sath us chakar me ghus gai , shurti toh khushi ki takat dekh herian reh gai ,

abhi voh ja hi rehe the , ke ik dam se store room ka darvaja .."kadddaaakkkkk..." ki awaz karta hua tut gya , khushi ne jaldi se chakar ko band karna chaha , par voh tuta hua darvaja bhi us chakar me sama gya ,

yeh suhana thi , jo behad gusse me , lal chamakti akhon se , store room ke bahar khadi thi , usne hi darvaje ko dhaka diya tha , or darvaja tut kar uddta hu us chakar me sama gya tha ,

"tamassssss..." suhana behad gusse me chilayi , uski chekh se pora ghar kamp utha... "tume eski kemat chukani hogiii..." suhana gusee me apne pair patak apne room ki traf chali gai ,

vahi dusri traf ravi or komal rehan ke ghar ke bahar ik pathar par apas me chipak kar bethe hue , khushi ka intzar kar rehe the ,

ravi samaz chuka tha , komal behad udas hai , voh uski udasi door karna chahta tha ,

"komal..."

"huu..."

"muzse kab pyar karugi tum..." ravi ne komal ko apni bahu me bhar uska matha chumte hue bola ,

"bhyia pyar karti toh hu ..." komal , ravi ki akhon me dekh muskra kar boli ,

"ohh ho , komal me hamari suhagrat ki bat kar reha hu..." ravi ne muskrate hue bola , toh komal sharmane lagi ,

"komal batau na..."

"muze nai pata , app gande ho.." komal ne apna chehra apne bhai ke seene me chupa kar bola ,

"acha , pori dunia me jo log sex karte hain , voh gande hote hain..." ravi haste hue bola ,

"huu..." komal ne behad sharma kar bola ,

"kya me jan sakta hu , voh kaise..."

"nai pata..." komal ne masomyiat se bola ,

"komal tum jitni masom dikhti ho , utni ho nai , tum behad chalak ho , jungli cat ki trah..." ravi etna bol haste hue bhagne laga ,

"kyaaa me cat , ruko app..." komal bhi apne bhai ko marne ke liye uske piche bhagi ,

tabhi ravi ke agge ik chakar sa ban gya , usme se khushi bahar ayi , usne apne kande par rimi ko utha rakha tha or uske sath shurti bhi thi , jaise hi khushi or shurti bahar ayi ,

"khushi bachooo..." ravi ne khushi or shurti ko ik traf kiya or us chakar se ik darvaja ravi ke uper gir gya , voh darvaja behad raftar se us chakar se bahar nikala tha , acha hua ravi ki nazar us par padh gai ,

"bhyiaaa..." komal jor se chilati hui ravi ke pas bhag kar ayi or us darvaje ko ravi ke uper se hata diya , ravi , komal ka hath pakad uth khada hua ,

"khushii..." ravi ne apna matha sehlate khushi ki traf dekha jo muskra rehi thi ,

"bhai meri koi galti nai , yeh kam suhana ka tha , jab me rimi or shurti ko la rehi thi , tabhi voh room me ik dam se a gai..." khushi ne thoda muskra kar bola ,

phir ravi ki nazar shurti par gai , bhikaryion jaisi halat thi uski , fate purane kapde , pora badan ganda , mitti se sana hua , bhikre hue baal , pore jism par halki halki chote , uske hontho par bhi suzan ayi hui thi , or ik traf se khoon beh kar sukh chuka tha , or es se bhi badtar halat rimi ki thi ,

ravi apni behan shurti ki traf badne laga , jo usse nazarian chura rehi thi , kyu , voh abh khud ko khubsurat nai manti thi ,

ravi , shurti ke karib akar ruk gya , usne komal or khushi ko kuch ishara kiya , voh dono samaz gai , or rimi ko ghar ke ander le gai ,

"shurti...." ravi ne nam akhon se apne hath shurti ke kandu par rakhe , jinko shurti ne jatak diya or palat kar rone lagi ,

"shurti mera gunah toh batao , kyu muzse nazarian chura rehi ho , kya galti hai meri..." ravi ne ghutno ke bal beth rote hue bola ,

shurti ne palat kar apne bhai ko yu rota dekha , toh voh bhag kar , ghutno ke bal beth , uske gale lag gai , or fot fot kar rone lagi ,

"bus shurti , abh or nai , jitna rona tha ro liya , abh me un sab se badla lunga , jisne bhi meri pari jaisi behan ka yeh haal kiya hai , use eski kemat chukani hogi..." ravi kas kar shurti ko apni bahu me bhar kar bola ,

phir ravi ne shurti ko kuch der rone diya , kuch wakht bad shurti ka rona kam ho gya , abh voh sisak rehi thi , dhere dhere ,

ravi ne uth kar shurti ko apni god me utha liya , shurti bus bejan si akhen kholi apne bhai ko dekhti rehi , use abh bhi yeh sapna lag reha tha , kyu ki usne apne ghar me hi narag se badtar jevan jiya tha ,

ravi , shurti ko ghar ke ander laya , or phir sedyian chad uper apne room me pahunch gya , yaha komal or khushi , rimi ka elaaz kar rehi thi ,

ravi ne shurti ko rimi ke sath lita diya , or uske pas hi beth gya , tabhi behosh rimi bhukar se kampte hue sote hue badbadane lagi ..

"ahhhh matt maroo , dedi bachaoo , naiiiii , matt maroo..." rimi behosh halat me yeh sab bol rehi thi , or uski akhon se asnu beh rehe the ,

ravi ne nam akhon se shurti ki traf dekha , voh bhi ro rehi thi ,

"komal , khushi , tum dono niche jao , me yahi , shurti or rimi ke sath rahuga , khushi tum rimi ko thik karo or hosh me laoo..." ravi ne dono ko jaise adesh sa dete hue bola ,

khushi ne rimi ke mathe par hath rakha , uske hath se ik roshni ki kirane nikali jo rimi ke saar me samane lagi , dhere dhere rimi ko hosh anne laga ,

"bhyiaaaaa...." voh dard bhari chekh marti uth kar beth gai , usne as-pas nazar doadai or kampte hue shurti ke gale lag gai , shurti bhi uth kar beth chuki thi , rimi uske gale lagi , uske seene me apna chehra chupa rehi thi ,

sabki akhen nam thi , phir komal or khushi rote hue bahar chali gai , ravi abhi bhi vaha betha tha ,

"rimi , dekho ham kaha hain , or yeh dekho yeh kon hai..." shurti ne rimi ke baal sehlate muskra kar bola ,

rimi ne thoda sa chehra piche kar bhegi bhegi akhon se ravi ko dekha , or phir kuch pal dekhti rehi , or phir jor jor se rote hue shurti ke seene se or bhi kas kar chipak gai , use abh bhi vishwas nai tha , voh abh bhi shock me thi ,

"rimi , me tera bhai hu , ehder dekh , meri bahu me sama jao , ayo rimi..." ravi ne nam akhon se dard bhari halat me hath phaila kar bola ,

rimi ne rote hue thoda piche hoker ravi ko dekha or phir tezi se uske gale lag gai , voh abh bhi ro rehi thi , use yeh umeed nai thi ke voh jinda bach jayegi or apne bhai se mil payegi ,

"shhh shant ho jao , meri cute si janu , abh or nai rona..." rimi apne bhai ko bahu me kasti ro rehi thi , voh chup nai ho rehi thi ,

ravi ko kuch samaz nai a reha tha , voh kya kare , ravi ne rimi ka chehra thoda piche kar , apne dono hatho se uska chehra pakad , apne honth uske bhege hontho par rakh diye ,

ravi abh rimi ke hontho ko chusne laga , rimi ke asnu beh rehe the , asnu beh kar , ravi ke hontho se mil rehe the , ravi bade pyar se , behad shidat se rimi ke hontho ko chus reha tha ,

kuch palu bad , rimi bhi ravi ka sath dete hue apne bhai ko apne honth chusva rehi thi , kuch wakht bad , ravi ne rimi ke hontho ko chusna chod uski akhon me dekha , uff bhegi bhegi akhon me rimi beintha cute lag rehi thi ,

ravi ne rimi ko apni bahu me bhar liya , uske balu ko sehlane laga ,

adhe ghante bad ravi , rimi or shurti ke bech leta hua tha , dono behne , ravi ke kandu par saar rakh , ik dusre ki traf dekh muskra rehi thi , yahi toh voh hasen pal the , jiske liye dono har julm , har dard sehti rehi , akhir dukh ke bad sukh ke pal aye the ,

"bhyiaaa sorry , hamne kitna galat socha apke bare me , hame maf kar do..." rimi thoda udas hoker boli ,

"han bhyia muze bhi maf kar do..." shurti or bhi kas kar ravi ke badan se chipakti hui boli ,

"shhh , voh wakht beet gya , use bhul jao , agge anne wale wakht ka sochu , acha me soch reha tha , tum dono se shadi kar lu , par tum dono dikhne me behad gandi ho , nahati nai ho kya..." ravi ne muskrate hue bola toh rimi or shurti ki akhen nam ho gai ,

"rimi , shurti , tum meri ho , chahe jaisi bhi ho , jis halat me ho , mera pyar na kam hua hai or na kabhi hoga , me tum dono se beintha pyar karta hu , or bevkuf ladkyio me mazak kar reha tha..." ravi ne dono ke chehre ke dekh kar bola ,

"ham bhi bhyia apse beintha pyar karti hain... " dono ik sath boli or phir ik dusre ki traf dekh hasne lagi , un dono ka apsi pyar abh behad badh chuka tha , unke hath ravi ke seene par apas me mil chuke the ,

"ohh shukar hai mere shiv ka , tum dono sahi salamat ho , varna , es dunia ka vinash kar deta me , meri pyari paryian..." ravi ne dono ke baalo ko sehla kar bola ,

"bhyia seema dedi ne ham par bahut julm kiye , hame bahut mara , ham kabhi unse bat nai karegi , apke khilaf hamare man me jehar bhar diya , or rema , voh kitni khofnak ho chuki hai..." rema ne phir se un narag jaise palu ko yad kar rote hue bola ,

"kya hua rema ko..." ravi ko rema ki chinta thi ,

"bhyia rema ik shetian ban chuki hai , uske lal lal lambe baal hain or jism ik dam black , or bhyia uske baal bhi jinda hain , han bhyia uske baal usse bat kar sakte hain..." shurti bhi rema ke khofnak roop ko yad rote hue boli ,

"shhh , so jao , ajj skoon se so jao , meri bahu me , me hu na , so jao..." ravi ne dono ko behad pyar se bola , dono ik dusre ki traf dekhti , muskrate hue sone lagi , kyu ki ,

ajj skun se dono ko nend a rehi thi , kyu voh apne bhai ke agosh me so rehi thi , ajj na koi dar tha , na hi kal koi kam karne ki chinta , kyu ki abh voh apne bhai ki pariyan thi , or pariyan kabhi kam nai karti... lekin ravi nai soya tha , voh subah tak bus rema ke bare me sochta reha.....

vahi dusri traf..

seema behad gusse me rema ke room ke pas pahunch kar ruk gai , voh akhon me asnu liye rema ke room me ghus gai ,

room ke ander bus lal roshni thi , charo traf ik gehri lal roshni , or samne ik lal bed par , rema bethi hui thi , voh supat awastha me thi , pichle 6 mahino se ,

lekin uske lambe lal chamakte baal room me ehder-ohder mandra rehe the , uska badan kala tha ,

jaise hi seema room me ghusi , rema ke jevat baal apas me ulazate , apas me takrate , seema ke karib akar , uske jism ko chune lage , use mehsus karne lage ,

"m...mm...me...ee..eski..mm..maa...hh..hu." seema ne haklate hue bola ,

par jaise hi voh agge badne lagi , rema ke baalo ne uske samne ik dewar bana di , jaise voh seema ko rema ke karib nai jane dena chahte the , jaise rema un baalo ki maa thi , jaise voh jevat bache the , par ik nai , lakho me ,

"sumonnnnnnn , uthooo betiiii , tumari behano ki jaan khatre me haii..." seema ne chila kar bola , voh yeh sab beintha rote hue bol rehi thi , rema ke baal ik bar piche ko hue or phir unhonu ne seema ko charo traf se gher liya ,

phir ika ik un baalo ne seema ko uper se niche tak jakad liya , abh seema ka badan jara sa bhi dikhai nai de reha tha , tabhi vaha dyana bhi a gai ,

seema ko chod rema ke lal baalo ne dyana ko chu kar mehsus kiya or phir rema ke chehre ke karib jaker use jagane lage ,

jaise hi rema ki supat awashta khatam hui , rema samne dekh ik hi shabad boli..."maaa..." par kise dekh kar....



to be counited.....

Both hi vadiya update veer g

 

[aka3829]

Bahut hi emotional update tha bhai. Rimi aur shruti ko to bachha liya ravi ne khushi ke hato. Aur unhe normal bhi kr diya apne pyar se lekin seema ne inhe le jaate hue dekh liya he. Aur wo reema ko bhadkane ke liye aa bhi gayi he. Lekin ye kya yaha to dayna bhi aa chuki he aur reema ne uthate hi kise ma kaha seema ko ya fir dayna ko.
Waiting 4 next update

 

[Prince Charlee]

Nice update. Rimi aur Shruti ko to Khshi ne bacha liya lekin Suhana ko bhi pata chal gaya hai ke Ravi aur Tamus wapis aa chuke hai.
Dayana ki bhi entry ho gai hai dekhte hai Reema apna pura sach kaise janti hai aur woh ki ka sath deti hai.

 

[Rbcl.007]

Aare bhai ye kiya aapne.. Aaap suspense banane ke chakar maine suspense ka kabada kar diya... Aap ne ye bataya dayena Or seema dono maine se kisi ko dekh ke rima ne maa bola.. Ham jaante hai ki wo seema ko hi maa bolti hai ab agar aap daina ko bhi wanha lake ye question karoge to obvious log jaroor guess karenge kisi jaroir daina se koi lena dena hai.. Daina ne hi rima ka raja abun ke ghar se chura ke jungle maine le gaye thi aur usse wanha pe pala tha isiliye usne usse maa bulaya.. Isse thoda aur behtareen word ke sath likha jaa sakta tha jisse thoda suspense bana rehta aur thoda maja bhi aata. Par shayad agli update maine aise hi kuch interesting plot twist leke likha gaya ho.. To intejaar rahega...

 

[sorbobhuk]

Aare bhai ye kiya aapne.. Aaap suspense banane ke chakar maine suspense ka kabada kar diya... Aap ne ye bataya dayena Or seema dono maine se kisi ko dekh ke rima ne maa bola.. Ham jaante hai ki wo seema ko hi maa bolti hai ab agar aap daina ko bhi wanha lake ye question karoge to obvious log jaroor guess karenge kisi jaroir daina se koi lena dena hai.. Daina ne hi rima ka raja abun ke ghar se chura ke jungle maine le gaye thi aur usse wanha pe pala tha isiliye usne usse maa bulaya.. Isse thoda aur behtareen word ke sath likha jaa sakta tha jisse thoda suspense bana rehta aur thoda maja bhi aata. Par shayad agli update maine aise hi kuch interesting plot twist leke likha gaya ho.. To intejaar rahega...

aap shayed mere post nhi padhi.......mere post pe mein likha hu.........rema seema ko maa bolti hai liken isbaar rema dayna ko maa boli thi......jo usko bachpaan se palI badhi hai.....or seema ko maa boli to fir jab seema room inter hua tab kyu uski baal seema ko aage kyu nhi badhte diya...........waise apke guess bhi thik hai......ager galti hui to maaf karna bhai...

Thank you​

 

[Rbcl.007]

aap shayed mere post nhi padhi.......mere post pe mein likha hu.........rema seema ko maa bolti hai liken isbaar rema dayna ko maa boli thi......jo usko bachpaan se palI badhi hai.....or seema ko maa boli to fir jab seema room inter hua tab kyu uski baal seema ko aage kyu nhi badhte diya...........waise apke guess bhi thik hai......ager galti hui to maaf karna bhai...

Thank you​

sorbobhuk aare nahini bhai bura kyun lagega maine bas lover of darkness bhai ko bol raha tha isse thoda aur ache se suspense rakh ke likhte to jada maja aata ye kyun ki ye jo seen buildup ka koi faida nahini hua kyun ki sab ko lagbhag pata lag chula hai ki daina ne hi rima ka paal ke bada kiya tha agar uss time tamasa ye baat na bata ke agar abhi disclose kiya jata to thodi suspense rehti ki aur maja bhi aata.. It's just a suggestion bhai..