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[lover of darkness]

badhiya update Lara mar gayi ravi use bacha nahi paya

thanks bhai... lara ko bachne hi toh nikala hai ravi... app udas mat ho.. shukriya

 

[lover of darkness]

Ko


koi baat nahi bhai ...... ab aap puri kasar bar dijiye ....... Ab roj update dene ki kosis kijiye.

aaj ka update aacha hai.......jokar ne apni chaal chal hi di ...... Par kay yaha par lara ka ant ho gaya hai ....... Ya koi aur twist baki hai lara aur Eliza ke bich me........us aurta ka aur kaal ka kay samandh hai ...... Ye to aage pata chal hi jaye ga ........ Aaise hi aur bhi kahi suspense hai.....ab dekhate hai kab in sab suspense par se parda utha hai........aaise hai suspense bhari story likhate rahiye ........intajar rahega nxt update ka..

thanks bhai... meri kossih daliy update dene ki hoti hai.. par kai bar update thoda difficult hota hai.. toh time lag jata hai...

bhai story me behad suspense hain.. kossih yahi es part ke ant me , kuch suspense khul jaye.. yeh part baki sab se chota hoga.. shukriya...

 

[lover of darkness]

Really I don't like this update..
Sach ka sath dene ki kimat maut to nahi honi chahiye.
Agar aisa hota raha to log burai chhod k sachai ke raste ko kabhi nahi chunenge.
Ravi will have to do something to save her.

thanks bhai... bhai lara ke sath yeh kyu hua.. eska khulasa jalad hoga... eski piche ik karan hai... apko jalad pata chalega... shukriya...

 

[lover of darkness]

last ke dono update padh dale

Behad mast they!

Kat ke sath ravi ka sath achha tha aur bad me khushi ki chedkhani bhi sahi thi

Lara Eliza ki yaad me dukhi thi jaha seema ne use dilasa dilaya ki ravi usko le aayega lekin seema behosh kyu hui ye mere samjh se bahar hai

Wahi dusre update me lara ko marko ne mardiya hai aur ye joker ke ghatiya plan ka hi hissa tha ab ye dekhna hoga ravi aur baki family members me kese ladai hoti hai
Aur kya rema ravi se bhi jyada taqadwar hai ye bhi pata chal jayega
Iske liye aage ka intazar

thanks bhai... lagta hai bahut thak gye read karte karte

yeh whats up par bat karne se jayda mushkil hoga..

seema ko chakar kyu aye.. ring ke karan...

yeh apne sahi bola.. kon takatwar hai.. yeh abh pata chalega.. shukriya bhai..

 

[lover of darkness]

Superb update
Aakhir kar jokar ne lara or Eliza ke beech foot ki koshish kar dali.
Markosh lara ko ghayal kar diya.
Jab ye bata ravi ko pata chla to vo use marne shahar ki or jane laga.
Lakin komal beech me aa gayi.
Rekha ke sath vo aurat kon thi.
Or vo kaal ke bahut karibi bhi hai.
Kahin vo kaal ki patni maya to nhi hai.
Rekha abhi ravi ke kamjori ka pata lagane me lagi hai.

thanks bhai... voh maya hi ho sakti hai... kyu ki vahi takatwar hai.. or koi or bhi ho sakta hai.. rekha ka flashback jalad hi suru karuga.. uska plot soch reha hu abhi.. shukriya...

 

[lover of darkness]

Index updated on page 1

thanks siraj bhai.. shukriya...

 

[lover of darkness]

amazing updates dear...

thanks pc bhai... shukriya..

 

[lover of darkness]

fantastic update
Us aurat ka or rekha ka raaz shayad khulne wala
Lara ko marko ne maar diya
Ab eliza ravi se or nafrat kregi
Dekhte hai next update mein kaise ravi ki family usko rokti

thanks sona ji..

han yeh sahi socha apne.. rekha ka flashback jalad hi pesh karuga.. plot soch reha hu.. bus kuch din or..

shukriya apka..

 

[lover of darkness]

Zabardast update

thanks bhai... shukriya..

 

[lover of darkness]

friends next update 9 baje post kar dunga.. shukriya..