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[lover of darkness]

Lajabab update.

thanks bhai... behad shukriya...

 

[lover of darkness]

Fantastic update robin sir

Suhana wapas aa gyi pr shyad ab usko ravi ke pyar ka ehsaas ho or wo badal jaye
Ravi komal ko kuchh nhi hone dega
Khushi ravi ki band baja degi
Kat fari ko apne jaisa bna degi tohh fari ravi se dur ho jayegi dekhte wo fari ko apne jaisa bna payegi ki nhi
Nakabposh aurat danvo ko parithvi pe la rhi hai
Or wo konsi pyari cheez chheenna chahti ravi se ravi ko sbse pyari tohh komal or fari hai


Bilkul sahi boht achha likha apne


Ye kya kiya

Overall update is mind blowing and pics are also awesome
Waiting for next

thanks sona ji..

suhana mere khyal se es bar ravi ka sath degi , agar ravi ne use uske hisse ka prem diya , suhana ko bus ehsas dilana hai , voh or komal ik hai ravi ke liye...

khushi ne band baja di ravi ki

kat gusse me jaladbazi kar rehi hai , par voh yeh nai janti , fari , ravi ki apni beti hai , uska apna khoon , toh ravi ka devil roop kat ke samne na zuke...

mane xp par hi apne last ke updates me , Raza abun or malika sona ka jiker kar diya tha kai bar kahani me do do sona ho jati hain

kisi ne help nai ki pics dundne me

behad shukariya sona

 

[lover of darkness]

Friends next update 9:30 baje post kar dunga... spelling mistakes check kar lu... shukariya sabhi ka..

 

[lover of darkness]

update-104

Abh agge....

Subah ke 7 baj rehe the , kat abhi bhi es intzar me nigahe jamaye bethi thi , kab uski beti ko hosh aye , or voh use mil paye , kat ko khud me abh beintha urza ka sanchar hota partit ho reha tha , ik shaktishali urza uske jism ki rag rag me doad rehi thi ,

abh uska apne emotions par pora control tha , lekin pari lok ka use abhi kuch yad aya tha , ya nai , yeh abh kat ke lafzo par nirbhar karta tha , jo uske or ravi ki mulakat me bole jane the ,

pori rat jagte hue nikal gai thi , ik gussa tha , uske man me , kyu ki use lagta tha , baby use pyar karti hai , par ajj shyad voh yeh mehsus kar rehi thi , ik mard ka sathan voh kabhi nai le sakti , kat ko ajj mehsus ho reha tha , voh ik mard ke hatho phir se haar chuki thi ,

kat abhi apni sochu me ghumsum thi , tabhi fari ke room se ik nurse bahar nikali , uske chehre par ik dilkash muskan thi , voh kat ke karib akar boli..." mam apki beti ko hosh a chuka , app mil lo use..."

bus yeh chand shabad sunne ke liye voh rat bhar jagti rehi thi , kat ki akhon se asnu chalak aye , voh muskrate rote hue , us room me ghus gai , yaha fari leti thi ,

room ke ander jate hi kat ne dekha , uski beti uski traf dekh muskra rehi thi ,

"fariii..." kat rote hue etna hi bol payi , or bhag kar fari ko apni bahu me bhar liya , uska chehra chumne lagi , maa ke agosh me akar , fari ko bhi , ik skoon sa mil reha tha ,

"maa , papa kaha hain , us bhut ne papa ko mara toh naii... " fari apni maa se alag hoker behad nam akhon se boli , kat ko aisa mehsus hua jaise voh abhi ro degi ,

"naii , mera bacha , sab thik hain , meri pyari betii umma , abh ham vaha nai jayege , abh ham shehar jayege apne ghar , mere sath jaugi na tum..." kat behad rote hue boli , uska dil dhak dhak kar reha tha , mano uski pori jindgi fari ke jawab par nirbhar karti thi ,

"par mumma , kya papa bhi sath ayege hamare..." fari behad masomyiat se boli ,

"nai beti , koi sath nai ayega , beti voh bhutt ladki tumare papa ki behan hai , or me tume vaha nai rehne dungi , agar tumare papa us bhutt ladki ko chod hamare sath shehar rehege , toh me tyar hu , lekin agar unhonu mana kar diya , phir tum mere sath jaugi..." kat ne behad dard bhare shabado me bola ,

"umm , thik hai , me janti hu , papa mere sath jarur ayege..." fari muskrate hue boli ,

"agar voh na aye toh , agar tumare papa ne mana kar diya , toh tum mere sath rahugi , varna me apna sharir nasht kar dungi , meri bachi , me tume khona nai chahti hu , bolo kya fasila hai tumara..." kat phir se rote hue boli ,

"naii mumma , papa jarur ayege , agar na aye , toh app jo kahugi me vahi karugi , par app khud ko kuch mat karna.." fari , kat ke gale lagti rote hue boli ,

"ohh meri bachi , meri beti , thik hai , ham sham tak wait karege tumare papa ka , uske bad koi swal nai , me unko phone kar deti hu .." kat , fari ka matha chumte hue boli , or phir baby ko phone lagane lagi , par ring ja rehi thi , koi phone utha nai reha tha , aisa kya ho reha tha vaha...


vahi dusri traf...


"ouchhhh khushiii dhereee ouchhhhh , hua kya tume..." yeh awaz ravi ki thi , jise khushi apne room me peet rehi thi ,

kuch wakht pehle khushi nashe me dhut , behad gusse me , ravi ko apne sath le ayi thi , or apna bharpur gussa us bechare par nikal rehi thi ,

"sale , me us kali jamen par pani pani chilati rehi , or tu yaha en makhan malayi jaisi , ladkyion ke sath masti kar reha tha..." khushi ne ik jordar punch ravi ke chehre par jadte hue bola ,

"ouchhh khushii , dekho meri bat toh suno , tum galat soch rehi ho , devil aisa nai hai..." ravi apne chot lage gaal ko sehlata hua bola ,

"teri toh me , kamine ..." khushi etna bol ravi ke chehre par tabadtod punch jadne lagi , ik ke bad ik , punch lagte gye , ravi ka chehra pora chil gya , akhir uska insani roop jo tha , or insani roop me chot lagne par khoon bhi behta hai ,

"ouchhh mera moh tod diya kambakht ladki , abhi me last time bol reha hu..." ravi apne hontho se behte khoon ko jebh se chatte hue bola ,

"kya kar lega tu , kamine tu kisi kam ka nai..." khushi ne etna bola or ik jordar mukka ravi ke pet me jad diya ,

"yaahhhhhhh , bus bahut hua , abh ik bar or mara (tabhi khushi ik jordar punch jadti hai..) , dekho agar ik bar or...( abhi ravi bol hi reha tha ke khushi ne uski jangu ke bech ghutna jad diya...) ahhhh uffff sali fod diya hathiyar , ahhhhhh baby yaha nai marte , ohhuuu uffff , eski saza ahhhh tume milegiii..." yeh bolte hi ravi ne ik jordar punch khushi ke pet me jad diya ,

"aaieeeeee maaa..." khushi uddti hui deewar se ja takrai or deewar ke sath rakhe lakadi ke table par gir gai ,

"aahhhhnnnm ahhnnnm (tez tez hafte hue) , kutte kamine muze maraaa ..." khushi apne moh se behte khoon ko thukte hue behad gusse me boli , or table ke uper se hi ravi par chalang laga , ik jordar superman punch ravi ke chehre par jad diya ,

bus phir kya tha , eske bad sab gol gol hone laga , pehle khushi marti , phir ravi marta , phir khushi marti , phir ravi marta , adhe ghante bad , dono ke chehre khoon se sane hue the , or dono se khada bhi nai hua ja reha tha ,

"ehhhhh ehhhhh..." khushi behad hafte hue ravi ko marne lagi , par tabhi ravi ne uska hath pakad liya ,

"bus yar , me thak gya hu , kuch der time break lete hain , uske bad baki ki fight hogi , ouchhhh tumara room..." ravi apne jakhmi , fate hontho par jebh phirate hue bola ,

"thik hai break lete hain , hunnnm ufff me bhi thak gai hu..." khushi etna bola apne tute hue bed par bethne lagi , par tabhi voh niche gir gai ,

"ouchhhh mere hips tut gye ..." khushi apne hips ko sehlate thode dard me boli ,

"ahahaha , tamas tume kisi ne bataya nai , band room me nai lada karte ouchhhh , mera ik dant bhi hila diya , dekho apne room ka haal .." ravi behad haste hue bola ,

tabhi khushi ne badi mushkil se khade hote hue , apne room par nazar dali , uski akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai , pore room me ik bhi cheez aisi nai thi , jo tuti na ho , sab saman tut kar bhikara hua tha ,

"gett outttttt , dafaaa ho jaoo mere room seee..." khushi ik lakadi ka tukda utha ravi ko marne agge badi , par tabhi ravi hasta hua room se bahar nikal gya ,

khushi apna saar pakad jamen par beth gai ,

vahi dusri traf...

baby bhi rat bhar soyi nai thi , jab kat ne phone kiya tab , baby naha rehi thi , naha kar bahar ate hi baby ne apna phone check kiya toh , kat ki miss calls dekh , voh beintha khush ho gai ,

baby ne muskrate hue kat ko phone laga diya , kuch hi rings gai hongi , tabhi kat ne phone pic up kar liya , voh fari ke sath bed par leti hui thi ,

"hlo katt..." baby behad nam akhon se boli ,

"baby voh , mane tume phone kiya , asal me , voh fari ko hosh a gya hai..." kat abhi bol hi rehi thi ke baby bech me bol padhi ,

"kaisi hai meri bachi..." baby behad rote hue boli ,

"shhhhh meri pori bat suno , fari thik hai , dekho mane rat hi tume apna decision bata diya tha , fari mere sath shehar jayegi , but fari chahti hai , ik bar ravi usse bat karle akar , me sham tak intzar karugi , agar ravi nai aya toh me or fari shehar chali jayegi , or fari mere sath jane ko tyar hai..." kat behad nam akhon se boli ,

"are yeh toh achi bat hai , tum fari ka khyal muzse jayda rakh sakti ho , me ravi ko bata dungi , meri beti ko pyar dena..." baby ne apne dil par pathar rakh yeh bola , or phone cut kar beintha rone lagi ,

dusri traf kat bhi phone cut kar rone lagi , or rote hue fari ko apni bahu me bhar , apna dard halka karne lagi ,

vahi baby kuch der roti rehi , or phir himet juta ravi se bat karne apne room se bahar nikal gai , ajj use aisa lag reha tha , jaise uski nisha phir se usse door chali gai , nisha jo markar kat ke roop me vapis ayi thi , abh shyad phir se mar gai thi...

ravi , khushi ke room se bahar aya , toh voh sidha sedyian chad komal ke pas chala gya , lekin jate jate uska khoon uske jism ne vapis sokh liya , par chotu ke nishan abhi baki thi , jinko bharne me abhi kuch wakht lagna tha ,

ravi room me aya toh komal abhi bhi so rehi thi , kal rat komal se hui bation ne , ravi ko yeh vishwas dila diya tha , uski komal hamesha uske pas hai , bus voh khud abhi apne asli roop me nai rehna chahti thi , par kyu ,

eske do karan the , pehle ravi apne devil roop me rehe or usko na chu pane ke karan , khud ko bebas or lachar na samaze , dusra suhana uski bali na de paye , jab tak voh apne es bache wale mayajaal me kaid rehe , lekin komal ki yeh halat , kahi na kahi , ravi ko peeda toh pahuncha rehi thi ,

"are komal moti uth ja , 8 bajne ko aye hain , etna nai sote , uth jaa..." ravi , pyar se komal ke baalo ko sehlate hue bola ,

komal ne dhere dhere apni akhen kholi , or apne bhyia ko apne pas paker muskrane lagi ,

"dhyia ten uth dai (gai) ..." komal apni bachu jaisi awaz me tutla kar boli or uth kar beth gai ,

"very good , meri komal syani ho gai hai , chalo me tumare liye chaye leker ata hu , tum moh dho lo , thik hai..." ravi pyar se komal ka matha chum kar bola ,

"han dhyia , galam galam taye lana , ale apte tehre (chehre) toh tya hua.." komal behad nam akhon se boli ,

"ale kuch nai , bus khel reha tha , khushi ke sath , abhi kuch der me pehle jaisa ho jauga.." ravi muskrate hue bola toh komal bhi muskrane lagi ,

phir ravi room se bahar a gya or shurti or rimi ke pas jane laga , tabhi baby uske samne a gai , jiski akhen thodi nam thi , ravi samaz gya , kuch toh bat ho , jo baby ko dard de rehi hai , baby , ravi ko apne sath apne room me le ayi , par room me kat or fari ko na dekh , ravi thoda preshan ho gya...

"hmm , abh batao baby kya bat hai , fari kaha hai , fari fari (fari ko awaz laga kar) , kahi gai hai voh kat ke sath , batao na , tumari yeh khamoshi mere dil ki dhadkan bada rehi hai..." ravi apni beti ko vaha na paker thoda bechain hota hua bola ,

"voh , voh , ravi , me tume , ahhhh kaise kahu me , muzse bola nai ja reha..." baby bolte bolte rone lagi ,

"ahhhhhh yeh ladkyion wala darama band karo , or batao meri beti kaha hai , or tum ro kyu rehi ho..." ravi , baby ke kandu par hath rakh , behad gusse me unko jijdote hue bola ,

"acha batati hu (apne asnu saf kar) , voh kal rat fari ne rema ko dekh liya tha , rema ka roop dekh , use gehra sadma laga or voh girkar behosh ho gai , me or kat , dr.nelam ji ko sath leker , use hospital le gye..." abhi baby bol hi rehi thi ke ik jordar thapad uske chehre par aan padha ,

"chatttaaakkkk , meri betiiii hospital me admit haiiiii , orrr tumne muze batana jaruri nai samaza , tum dono ki etni himet , tumeee pataaa thaaa meriiii betiii see mee kitnaaa pyarrr kartaaa huuu..." ravi beintha gusse me chekhta hua bola , uska roop badal gya , akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi , jism lal rang ka hoker aag jaise tapne laga ,

baby , ravi ka devil roop dekh , ander tak kamp gai , uske pair thar thar kampne lage , aisa gussa usne ravi ka pehle kabhi nai dekha tha , abh use kat ki chinta bhi hone lagii thi ,

"bataooo meriii betiiii abh kaisiii haiiiiii..." ravi gusse me chekh kar bolaaa , toh baby phir se rone lagiiiii ,

"voh (rote hue) abh thik hai , par kat ka phone aya tha , tume bula rehi hai voh , jao mil ayo apni beti se..." baby beintha rote hue darte hue nazarian zuka kar boli ,

"meriii betiiii meee aa rehaa huuu , tum komall ko chaye pilao voh uth gaii haiiiii..." ravi etna bol vaha se gyab ho gya... or sidha insani roop me us hospital ke parking area me parkat ho gya , ravi apni beti se milne ke liye hospital ke ander ki or jane laga...

lekin kya kat , ravi ki bhavnayion ko samaz pati , yah ravi , kat ki bhavnayion ko , fari , ravi ki apni beti thi , uski badi behan rekha ki beti , ravi ik pita toh tha hi , par ego me lipat ik darinda bhi tha , jise apni har cheez pyari thi ,

agar voh ruhi ke pyar me devil ban sakta tha , sadyion tak narag ki aag me jal sakta tha , toh fari toh uska apna khoon thi , uske liye voh kisi bhi had tak ja sakta tha , par kya hoga dono ki mulakat me , yeh anne wale wakht me chipa tha...


to be counited....

 

[spritemathews]

बहुत शानदार अपडेट।

 

[Asif khan]

Excellent brilliant fantastic good update

Hamesha ki trha behad shandar soooper lajawab

Tum ek bemisaal writer ho writing skill boht umdaaaa h
Or kahani to pocho mat mere pass alfaaz km pr jate hain k tareef mai Kia likho

Or ha welcome back bahi I hope k ap ki tabiyat sihat theek ho
Mai Dua kro GA k ap or ap ki family hamesha Kush or sehat yab rahe
Ameeeeeeesn

 

[aka3829]

Wah gajab ka update diya he bhai. Emotional kar diya fir se bhai. Baby ko kis baat ki saza mil rahi he. Abhi tak in 7 dino wala chapter jab se suru hua he tab se baby ko dhang se pyaar nahi mila he. Ravi ne kat ke sath masti ki aur use bhi apna bana liya lekin aaj wahi kat uae usaki beti se juda karne lag gayi wo bhi sirf ek galat fehmi ki wajah se. Chalo wo ravi ki bhavnao ko nahi samajh sakti lekin baby ko kaise alag lar sakti he fari se ya khud se. Khusi aur ravi ki ladayi kuch palo ke liye mere hoto par muskaan le ayi thi. Lekin baby ke liye ravi ka behaviour bhi sahi nahi laga mujhe. Baby ke dukh se me bhi dukhi ho gya hu.

Waiting 4 next update

 

[sorbobhuk]

update-104

Abh agge....

Subah ke 7 baj rehe the , kat abhi bhi es intzar me nigahe jamaye bethi thi , kab uski beti ko hosh aye , or voh use mil paye , kat ko khud me abh beintha urza ka sanchar hota partit ho reha tha , ik shaktishali urza uske jism ki rag rag me doad rehi thi ,

abh uska apne emotions par pora control tha , lekin pari lok ka use abhi kuch yad aya tha , ya nai , yeh abh kat ke lafzo par nirbhar karta tha , jo uske or ravi ki mulakat me bole jane the ,

pori rat jagte hue nikal gai thi , ik gussa tha , uske man me , kyu ki use lagta tha , baby use pyar karti hai , par ajj shyad voh yeh mehsus kar rehi thi , ik mard ka sathan voh kabhi nai le sakti , kat ko ajj mehsus ho reha tha , voh ik mard ke hatho phir se haar chuki thi ,

kat abhi apni sochu me ghumsum thi , tabhi fari ke room se ik nurse bahar nikali , uske chehre par ik dilkash muskan thi , voh kat ke karib akar boli..." mam apki beti ko hosh a chuka , app mil lo use..."

bus yeh chand shabad sunne ke liye voh rat bhar jagti rehi thi , kat ki akhon se asnu chalak aye , voh muskrate rote hue , us room me ghus gai , yaha fari leti thi ,

room ke ander jate hi kat ne dekha , uski beti uski traf dekh muskra rehi thi ,

"fariii..." kat rote hue etna hi bol payi , or bhag kar fari ko apni bahu me bhar liya , uska chehra chumne lagi , maa ke agosh me akar , fari ko bhi , ik skoon sa mil reha tha ,

"maa , papa kaha hain , us bhut ne papa ko mara toh naii... " fari apni maa se alag hoker behad nam akhon se boli , kat ko aisa mehsus hua jaise voh abhi ro degi ,

"naii , mera bacha , sab thik hain , meri pyari betii umma , abh ham vaha nai jayege , abh ham shehar jayege apne ghar , mere sath jaugi na tum..." kat behad rote hue boli , uska dil dhak dhak kar reha tha , mano uski pori jindgi fari ke jawab par nirbhar karti thi ,

"par mumma , kya papa bhi sath ayege hamare..." fari behad masomyiat se boli ,

"nai beti , koi sath nai ayega , beti voh bhutt ladki tumare papa ki behan hai , or me tume vaha nai rehne dungi , agar tumare papa us bhutt ladki ko chod hamare sath shehar rehege , toh me tyar hu , lekin agar unhonu mana kar diya , phir tum mere sath jaugi..." kat ne behad dard bhare shabado me bola ,

"umm , thik hai , me janti hu , papa mere sath jarur ayege..." fari muskrate hue boli ,

"agar voh na aye toh , agar tumare papa ne mana kar diya , toh tum mere sath rahugi , varna me apna sharir nasht kar dungi , meri bachi , me tume khona nai chahti hu , bolo kya fasila hai tumara..." kat phir se rote hue boli ,

"naii mumma , papa jarur ayege , agar na aye , toh app jo kahugi me vahi karugi , par app khud ko kuch mat karna.." fari , kat ke gale lagti rote hue boli ,

"ohh meri bachi , meri beti , thik hai , ham sham tak wait karege tumare papa ka , uske bad koi swal nai , me unko phone kar deti hu .." kat , fari ka matha chumte hue boli , or phir baby ko phone lagane lagi , par ring ja rehi thi , koi phone utha nai reha tha , aisa kya ho reha tha vaha...


vahi dusri traf...


"ouchhhh khushiii dhereee ouchhhhh , hua kya tume..." yeh awaz ravi ki thi , jise khushi apne room me peet rehi thi ,

kuch wakht pehle khushi nashe me dhut , behad gusse me , ravi ko apne sath le ayi thi , or apna bharpur gussa us bechare par nikal rehi thi ,

"sale , me us kali jamen par pani pani chilati rehi , or tu yaha en makhan malayi jaisi , ladkyion ke sath masti kar reha tha..." khushi ne ik jordar punch ravi ke chehre par jadte hue bola ,

"ouchhh khushii , dekho meri bat toh suno , tum galat soch rehi ho , devil aisa nai hai..." ravi apne chot lage gaal ko sehlata hua bola ,

"teri toh me , kamine ..." khushi etna bol ravi ke chehre par tabadtod punch jadne lagi , ik ke bad ik , punch lagte gye , ravi ka chehra pora chil gya , akhir uska insani roop jo tha , or insani roop me chot lagne par khoon bhi behta hai ,

"ouchhh mera moh tod diya kambakht ladki , abhi me last time bol reha hu..." ravi apne hontho se behte khoon ko jebh se chatte hue bola ,

"kya kar lega tu , kamine tu kisi kam ka nai..." khushi ne etna bola or ik jordar mukka ravi ke pet me jad diya ,

"yaahhhhhhh , bus bahut hua , abh ik bar or mara (tabhi khushi ik jordar punch jadti hai..) , dekho agar ik bar or...( abhi ravi bol hi reha tha ke khushi ne uski jangu ke bech ghutna jad diya...) ahhhh uffff sali fod diya hathiyar , ahhhhhh baby yaha nai marte , ohhuuu uffff , eski saza ahhhh tume milegiii..." yeh bolte hi ravi ne ik jordar punch khushi ke pet me jad diya ,

"aaieeeeee maaa..." khushi uddti hui deewar se ja takrai or deewar ke sath rakhe lakadi ke table par gir gai ,

"aahhhhnnnm ahhnnnm (tez tez hafte hue) , kutte kamine muze maraaa ..." khushi apne moh se behte khoon ko thukte hue behad gusse me boli , or table ke uper se hi ravi par chalang laga , ik jordar superman punch ravi ke chehre par jad diya ,

bus phir kya tha , eske bad sab gol gol hone laga , pehle khushi marti , phir ravi marta , phir khushi marti , phir ravi marta , adhe ghante bad , dono ke chehre khoon se sane hue the , or dono se khada bhi nai hua ja reha tha ,

"ehhhhh ehhhhh..." khushi behad hafte hue ravi ko marne lagi , par tabhi ravi ne uska hath pakad liya ,

"bus yar , me thak gya hu , kuch der time break lete hain , uske bad baki ki fight hogi , ouchhhh tumara room..." ravi apne jakhmi , fate hontho par jebh phirate hue bola ,

"thik hai break lete hain , hunnnm ufff me bhi thak gai hu..." khushi etna bola apne tute hue bed par bethne lagi , par tabhi voh niche gir gai ,

"ouchhhh mere hips tut gye ..." khushi apne hips ko sehlate thode dard me boli ,

"ahahaha , tamas tume kisi ne bataya nai , band room me nai lada karte ouchhhh , mera ik dant bhi hila diya , dekho apne room ka haal .." ravi behad haste hue bola ,

tabhi khushi ne badi mushkil se khade hote hue , apne room par nazar dali , uski akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai , pore room me ik bhi cheez aisi nai thi , jo tuti na ho , sab saman tut kar bhikara hua tha ,

"gett outttttt , dafaaa ho jaoo mere room seee..." khushi ik lakadi ka tukda utha ravi ko marne agge badi , par tabhi ravi hasta hua room se bahar nikal gya ,

khushi apna saar pakad jamen par beth gai ,

vahi dusri traf...

baby bhi rat bhar soyi nai thi , jab kat ne phone kiya tab , baby naha rehi thi , naha kar bahar ate hi baby ne apna phone check kiya toh , kat ki miss calls dekh , voh beintha khush ho gai ,

baby ne muskrate hue kat ko phone laga diya , kuch hi rings gai hongi , tabhi kat ne phone pic up kar liya , voh fari ke sath bed par leti hui thi ,

"hlo katt..." baby behad nam akhon se boli ,

"baby voh , mane tume phone kiya , asal me , voh fari ko hosh a gya hai..." kat abhi bol hi rehi thi ke baby bech me bol padhi ,

"kaisi hai meri bachi..." baby behad rote hue boli ,

"shhhhh meri pori bat suno , fari thik hai , dekho mane rat hi tume apna decision bata diya tha , fari mere sath shehar jayegi , but fari chahti hai , ik bar ravi usse bat karle akar , me sham tak intzar karugi , agar ravi nai aya toh me or fari shehar chali jayegi , or fari mere sath jane ko tyar hai..." kat behad nam akhon se boli ,

"are yeh toh achi bat hai , tum fari ka khyal muzse jayda rakh sakti ho , me ravi ko bata dungi , meri beti ko pyar dena..." baby ne apne dil par pathar rakh yeh bola , or phone cut kar beintha rone lagi ,

dusri traf kat bhi phone cut kar rone lagi , or rote hue fari ko apni bahu me bhar , apna dard halka karne lagi ,

vahi baby kuch der roti rehi , or phir himet juta ravi se bat karne apne room se bahar nikal gai , ajj use aisa lag reha tha , jaise uski nisha phir se usse door chali gai , nisha jo markar kat ke roop me vapis ayi thi , abh shyad phir se mar gai thi...

ravi , khushi ke room se bahar aya , toh voh sidha sedyian chad komal ke pas chala gya , lekin jate jate uska khoon uske jism ne vapis sokh liya , par chotu ke nishan abhi baki thi , jinko bharne me abhi kuch wakht lagna tha ,

ravi room me aya toh komal abhi bhi so rehi thi , kal rat komal se hui bation ne , ravi ko yeh vishwas dila diya tha , uski komal hamesha uske pas hai , bus voh khud abhi apne asli roop me nai rehna chahti thi , par kyu ,

eske do karan the , pehle ravi apne devil roop me rehe or usko na chu pane ke karan , khud ko bebas or lachar na samaze , dusra suhana uski bali na de paye , jab tak voh apne es bache wale mayajaal me kaid rehe , lekin komal ki yeh halat , kahi na kahi , ravi ko peeda toh pahuncha rehi thi ,

"are komal moti uth ja , 8 bajne ko aye hain , etna nai sote , uth jaa..." ravi , pyar se komal ke baalo ko sehlate hue bola ,

komal ne dhere dhere apni akhen kholi , or apne bhyia ko apne pas paker muskrane lagi ,

"dhyia ten uth dai (gai) ..." komal apni bachu jaisi awaz me tutla kar boli or uth kar beth gai ,

"very good , meri komal syani ho gai hai , chalo me tumare liye chaye leker ata hu , tum moh dho lo , thik hai..." ravi pyar se komal ka matha chum kar bola ,

"han dhyia , galam galam taye lana , ale apte tehre (chehre) toh tya hua.." komal behad nam akhon se boli ,

"ale kuch nai , bus khel reha tha , khushi ke sath , abhi kuch der me pehle jaisa ho jauga.." ravi muskrate hue bola toh komal bhi muskrane lagi ,

phir ravi room se bahar a gya or shurti or rimi ke pas jane laga , tabhi baby uske samne a gai , jiski akhen thodi nam thi , ravi samaz gya , kuch toh bat ho , jo baby ko dard de rehi hai , baby , ravi ko apne sath apne room me le ayi , par room me kat or fari ko na dekh , ravi thoda preshan ho gya...

"hmm , abh batao baby kya bat hai , fari kaha hai , fari fari (fari ko awaz laga kar) , kahi gai hai voh kat ke sath , batao na , tumari yeh khamoshi mere dil ki dhadkan bada rehi hai..." ravi apni beti ko vaha na paker thoda bechain hota hua bola ,

"voh , voh , ravi , me tume , ahhhh kaise kahu me , muzse bola nai ja reha..." baby bolte bolte rone lagi ,

"ahhhhhh yeh ladkyion wala darama band karo , or batao meri beti kaha hai , or tum ro kyu rehi ho..." ravi , baby ke kandu par hath rakh , behad gusse me unko jijdote hue bola ,

"acha batati hu (apne asnu saf kar) , voh kal rat fari ne rema ko dekh liya tha , rema ka roop dekh , use gehra sadma laga or voh girkar behosh ho gai , me or kat , dr.nelam ji ko sath leker , use hospital le gye..." abhi baby bol hi rehi thi ke ik jordar thapad uske chehre par aan padha ,

"chatttaaakkkk , meri betiiii hospital me admit haiiiii , orrr tumne muze batana jaruri nai samaza , tum dono ki etni himet , tumeee pataaa thaaa meriiii betiii see mee kitnaaa pyarrr kartaaa huuu..." ravi beintha gusse me chekhta hua bola , uska roop badal gya , akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi , jism lal rang ka hoker aag jaise tapne laga ,

baby , ravi ka devil roop dekh , ander tak kamp gai , uske pair thar thar kampne lage , aisa gussa usne ravi ka pehle kabhi nai dekha tha , abh use kat ki chinta bhi hone lagii thi ,

"bataooo meriii betiiii abh kaisiii haiiiiii..." ravi gusse me chekh kar bolaaa , toh baby phir se rone lagiiiii ,

"voh (rote hue) abh thik hai , par kat ka phone aya tha , tume bula rehi hai voh , jao mil ayo apni beti se..." baby beintha rote hue darte hue nazarian zuka kar boli ,

"meriii betiiii meee aa rehaa huuu , tum komall ko chaye pilao voh uth gaii haiiiii..." ravi etna bol vaha se gyab ho gya... or sidha insani roop me us hospital ke parking area me parkat ho gya , ravi apni beti se milne ke liye hospital ke ander ki or jane laga...

lekin kya kat , ravi ki bhavnayion ko samaz pati , yah ravi , kat ki bhavnayion ko , fari , ravi ki apni beti thi , uski badi behan rekha ki beti , ravi ik pita toh tha hi , par ego me lipat ik darinda bhi tha , jise apni har cheez pyari thi ,

agar voh ruhi ke pyar me devil ban sakta tha , sadyion tak narag ki aag me jal sakta tha , toh fari toh uska apna khoon thi , uske liye voh kisi bhi had tak ja sakta tha , par kya hoga dono ki mulakat me , yeh anne wale wakht me chipa tha...


to be counited....

bahut badhiya update.. .. to khushi ne ravi ke achhe se dho liya......dekhte hai ravi or kat ka milna ke wakt kya hota hai......waiting for next update

 

[Xp Xf lover]

Superb update bhai

 

[Jassandhu]

Nice update ???