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[lover of darkness]

Brilliant update with awesome writing skill

thanks bhai.. shukariya..

 

[lover of darkness]

Superb update bro....

thanks bhai... shukariya

 

[lover of darkness]

Bhai 1 nai 2 din but bhai me aapko janta hu salo se muje pata h ke jung ke update ki end me h naya twist hoga... Don't worry bhai apne hisab se dijiyega updates

bhai 1 din chod kar update diya karuga , tain ki kahani me koi galati na ho , suspense ready kar liya hai , or naye twist bhi , jo jung ke akhri palu me samne ayege.. shukariya..

 

[lover of darkness]

Fantastic update

Fari or ravi ka milan emotional tha
Kat ne ye achha nhi kiya fari ko ravi se dur krke
Ravi ka gussa sb tabah kr dega
Kat ne ravi ka insaani roop chheen liya ab wo fari se kaise milne jayega kat ne dur kr hi diya ravi ko fari se ravi ab kisike samne nhi ja skta rimi shruti ke samne bi nhi wo bi dar jayegi ravi ko dekhke
Ravi hell ja ra wapas sbko chhodke ye sahi nhi ho ra
Danvi sena ab ravi ke gusse ka samna krenge ravi ka devil roop khtm kr dega unko
Waiting for next

thanks sona jii

kuch ladkyian aisi hi hoti hain , behad emotional

apke kuch swalo ke jawab ajj ke update me mil jayege , jaise ki kat ne voh kyu kiya ,

shukariya sona

 

[lover of darkness]

friends next update rat ko 9:30 baje ayega.. shukariya

 

[lover of darkness]

update-106 (all update -798)

Abh Agge...

ravi jungle ke bechu bech , nadi kinare , apne beintha gusse me dehak reha tha , jism se aag nikal rehi thi , or garam lave jaisi boonde jamen par gir rehi thi , jis karan aisa partet ho reha tha , jaise ravi ke pairo me kisi ne jawalamukhi se nikalta garam lava dal diya ho ,

as-pas ke pedh ravi ke gusse bhari aag se jal rehe the , ravi ka beshumar gussa , us hare-bhare jungle ka vinash kar reha tha , yeh sab kyu hua tha , ik jidd ke karan ,

jidd , ik chota sa lafaz hai , par agar yeh kisi ke man me ghar kar le , toh voh insan kamyab bhi ho sakta hai , dunia ki har takat hasil kar sakta hai , par agar jidd galat ho man me , tab har traf vinash hota hai , rishte- nate , dost , pyar , sab tabah ho jate hain , jidd karo toh achi karo , varna jidd ko 4 shabad samaz kar esse door raho ,

yeh sab kaha se suru hua , ik choti si bachi fari ke karan , jiski khelne kudne ki umar thi , voh rishto me ulzi peeda sehan kar rehi thi , use yeh bhi nai pata tha , uske papa devil hain , uska pora pariwar ik shap se juda hua hai , khair agge ,

"raviii , pls shant ho jaoo , tumara gussa pora jungle jala degaa , pls me hath jodti hu , agar tum shant na hue , toh jungle ke sath sath , pora kabila or komal bhi jal jayegiii , plss , plss..." khushi apne ghutno ke bal bethi rote hue boli , us se ravi ka dard sehan nai ho reha tha , aisa dard usne pari lok me dekha tha , jab ravi ko devil bana kar hell me dal diya gya tha ,

"naaaiiiii hoo saktaa shanttt , me naiii ho saktaaa , tum , tum jaoo , sabko jung ke liye tyar karooo , me yahii milugaa tumee , jaoo tamass , wakht bahut kam haiiii , hame prithvi chod kar jana haiiiii..." ravi apne aag se lathpath roop me khushi ke chehre ko dekhte hue bola ,

khushi ne kuch pal ravi ki akhon me dekha , or phir vaha se gyab ho gai , tain ki sabko tyar kar sake , anne wali behad badi musibat ke liye , sabka tyar rehna behad jaruri tha ,

khushi ke jate hi ravi akela padh gya , voh kuch nai sochna chahta tha , par man me ate vichar kabhi rukte nai , dimag me utpan hoti tasveere kabhi thamti nai , fari ka chehra , uski batian , bar bar ravi ko yad anne lagi , or phir komal ki yadian bhi ,

"abh me komal se kaiseee milugaaa , me , me , apni komal se or door ho gyaaa , komallllll , ham phir se usi sathan par aa gyeee , ham phirrr se doorrr ho gyeee , kattt tumeee marnaa hogaaa..." ravi beintha gusse me chekhte hue bola , uska gussa apni antim shikar par pahunch tadav kar reha tha , etna byank gussa , usne kabhi mehsus nai kiya tha , uska har rishta , es gusse bhari aag me jal reha tha ,

tabhi uske as-pas ik safad roshni phail gai , ravi apne tapte sharir ke sath , kuch samaz na paya , use laga kat phir se a gai hai , voh or bhi gusse me ghurane laga , use nafrat ho gai thi es safad roshni se , voh es roshni ko nasht kar dena chahta tha , par voh jitna bhi adhik gussa kar leta , par paviter tez ka vinash nai ho sakta tha ,

"kattt , tum phir se a gaiiiii , es barrr devil zukegaaa naiiii , tume mar degaaa devilll , tumara anttt meree hathoo hogaaa..." ravi beintha gusse me us roshni par apni tapash ka parbhav dalte hue bola , tain ki voh safad roshni uska tez ban jaye , uska rang safad se lal padh jaye ,

"raviii , etna adhik gussa , tumare liye acha naii , shiv ne yeh roop toh nai diya tha tume..." ik behad paviter admi ravi ke samakash akar khada ho gya , uski awaz behad naram thi , ik matar ansh bhi nai tha usme , kisi bhi burai ka ,

"pujari baba app , shiv ne sab cheen liya muzse , me es bar phir haar gya , mera pyar or meri beti , dono muzse door ho gye , do-do dard mile muzeee , kya shiv yahi chahte hain muzse , voh bar bar muze hi kyu dard dete hain..." ravi behad nam akhon se bola , par uska gussa jara sa bhi kam nai hua tha ,

"kon kehta hai , voh dard dete hain , tumne khud es dard ko janam diya haii , prem pana galat nai haii , par prem pane ka rasta galat nai hona chahyie , komal tumse door hai , kyu ki tum brehmand ke sabse bure jeev ho , tum ik devil ho mere bache , tumari jidd , tumara ghamand , tume bepanah shakti deta hai , par jab shakti milti hai , tab dard bhi milta hai , prem se door toh voh bhi rehe the , par unhonu veriag ka rasta chuna tha , gussa toh voh bhi hue the , jab voh apne prem ko jalne se bacha na paye , par gussa shant bhi kiya tha unhonu , tum apna gussa shant nai kar rehe ho , abh bhi badle ki bhavna dil me basaye bethe ho..." baba ne behad naram bation se ravi ka gussa shant karne ka pariyas karte hue bola ,

"me , me , apni beti se bhi door ho gya , nai kar sakta , me kuch nai kar sakta , yeh roop mera shap ban chuka hai , muze hell jana hoga , vahi hoga mera gussa shant..." ravi behad dard bhare shabado me bola ,

"beti , tumari beti , tumara hi ik ansh hai , lekin usme gussa ka koi ansh nai , kyu ki voh man ke bheter sochti hai , or tum bina soche har kadam uthe lete ho , katlyn ik paviter urza hai , voh prem se vanshit rehi hai hamesha , maa ka prem nai pa saki , baap ka prem nai mila , dost ka prem nai mila , lekin baby ne usko prem diya , usme badlav anne laga , lekin jab fari uske pas ayi , toh voh ik maa ke roop me behad bhavuk aurat ban gai , usme ik icha ne janam liya , jo voh jindgi me pana chahti thi , jo use na mila , voh sab voh apni beti ko dena chahti hai , achi shiksha , ache sanskar , acha sehbhav , acha jeevan , katlyn ik urza thi , pari log me usme koi icha nai utpan hoti thi , par baby se mile prem ne uski shakti ko badal diya , or fari ko paker , uske man me ichayion ne janam lena suru kar diya , katlyn galat nai hai , voh maa hai , uske liye brehmand me uski beti hi sab kuch hai , use tum fari se alag nai kar sakte..." baba ne ravi ko samporn sachai batate hue kaha ,

"lekin voh mera khoon hai , meri apni beti , mere karan uska janam hua , me uska pita hu , me alag nai ho sakta , muze meri beti vapis chahyie , agar muze meri beti na mili , toh vinash kar dunga , shiv ko meri yeh icha pori karni hogi , meri beti muze chahyie..." ravi apni jidd par kayam rehte hue bepanah gusse me chekhta hua bola ,

"kya doge apni beti ko , tum use koi sanskar nai de sakte , agar tumari beti tumare karib rehegi , voh tumare jaisi ban jayegi , ik jiddi , sanskarheen , behad ghamandi , devil ke pas uske bachi devil hi banegi , or paviter tez ke pas paviter , kat ke pas use acha or sukhi jeevan milega , tumare pas bus dard , yeh fasila tume karna hai , jaladbazi mat karna , tumari beti ki jindgi ka swal hai , jo voh chahte hain tum kar nai rehe , or jo tum chahte ho voh ho nai sakta , es trah hazaro janam leker bhi tum komal se mil nai pauge , komal ko pana hai , toh apni devil urza ko paviter urza me badal lo , jidd , ghamand ka tyag karo , tum brehmand ki sabse badi shakti ke malik ho , par log tumse darte hain , kyu ki tum devil ho , apne nam ka shap khatam karo , bus karam karte raho , ik din phal mil jayega..." baba ne muskrate hue bola , unke roop se ik rahasmayi tez utpan ho reha tha ,

"baba shetian ki sena a rehi hai prithvi par , kaise roku use me..." ravi bat badalte hue bola ,

"tumne toh bation ka rukh hi palat diya , sachai devil ko hazam nai hoti , ik wakht ayega jab devil ko sab gyat ho jayega , jab brehmand ki sachai jan loge , tab khud ko ik keede ke saman pauge , danvi sena ko tum rok loge , tumari priksha hogi , ik sahi faisla karna hoga , varna sab tabah ho jayega , es bar achayi or burai dono saman roop se takatwar hai , dhyan rehe , kuch khona padhe toh darna nai , kyu ki shiv ke mayajaal se nikal pana asan nai..." baba ne muskrate hue bola ,

"mayajaal kaise mayajaal..." ravi thoda chonk kar bola ,

"abhi rehne do ravi , agar unke mayajaal ko abhi se jan loge , toh brehmand me tumari shakti ik tare (star) ke saman rehegi , or tare (star) toh anant hain brehmand me , bus apne karam karo , gusse ko shant rakho , jidd ka tyag karo , ghamand ka vinash karo , jung me jeet tumari hogi , antim wakht me priksha deni hogi , yeh yad rakhna mere bache , us wakht man me dar hoga , sab kuch khone ka ehsas hoga , us wakht tumari sachai ki priksha lenge voh ..." etna bol baba gyab ho gye , lekin ravi ko ik duvida me dal gye , kisko khone ka dar tha , lekin ravi ne man me soch liya , voh sabki raksha karega , kisi ko marne nai dega , chahe kuch bhi ho jaye , lekin jo unhonu uski kismat me likha hai , voh use pora bhi karvate hain , nai toh dard sehna padta hai , shyad koi behad badi ghatna ravi ke samaksh anne wali thi ,

kuch ghatnyian insan ko sudhar deti hain , kuch bhigad deti hain , kuch rahasmayi ghatnyian hoti hain jeevan me , tab koi insan kisi rasta bhatak rehe insan ki jindgi me parvesh karta hai , tab voh sahi galat ka ehsas karvata hai , ravi ko bus usi ik insan ka intzar tha , jo ravi ki jindgi sahi raste par laye , tain ki komal uski ho sake , uski beti use mil jaye , par kab ayega voh insan ,

vahi dusri traf...

khushi vaha se gyab hoker sidha ghar me ja utpan hui , uski akhon me ik udasi thi , apne pyar ko phir se tutte hue dekh kar ayi thi , par honi ko kon tal sakta hai ,

"are tamas app..."

ik awaz ayi , khushi ne palat kar dekha , seema , nai nai , suhana khadi thi , apne asli roop me , khushi behad ghabra sa gai , voh nai janti thi , suhana achi hai ya buri ,

"voh , voh , suhana app..." khushi jabran muskrate hue boli ,

"han ham , hame sab yad a gya , yeh hamara dusra janam hai , hamne sab pa liya , prince ka pyar bhi , ohh ham toh bhul hi gye , hamare prince kaha hain..." suhana behad muskrate hue boli ,

"voh , voh , malika suhana , ham apko sari bat batate hain , par app apna gussa shant rakhna , prince ko hamari jarurat hai es wakht..." khushi behad nam akhon se boli ,

"tamas , kya bat hai , prince kisi musibat me toh nai , tamas app roti nai kabhi , batao na hame bahut peeda ho rehi hai dil me .." suhana behad udasi me khushi ke karib akar boli ,

"han..." phir khushi ne fari ke karan kat or ravi ki ladai ka jikar kiya , kaise kat ne ravi ko apni urza se gussa dilaya , use kamzor karna chaha , par usne ravi ko teleport kar liya , lekin ravi ka insani roop usse cheen gya , or voh ik aag se lathpath devil ban gya , or prithvi par a rehi danvi sena ke bare me bhi bata diya ,

"naiiiii , jivika aisi hai , ham soch bhi nai sakte the , hamne kitni badi galti kar di , ham pyar me andhe ho chuke the , hamne prince ki jindgi narag bana di , or prince ne hame etna pyar diya , hamare kehne par hi pita ji ne jivika ki rachna ki , ajj vahi jivika ne hamse hamara pyar cheen liya , jaise hamne prince ka cheena tha use ruhi se alag karke , ajj hame voh peeda voh dard mehsus ho reha hai , ham ladege , apni mout tak , ham prince ko kuch nai hone denge , ham vada karte hain , prince or apne sache prem se..." suhana behad nam akhon se dard bhare shabado me boli ,

"shukariya , malika suhana , ham lara , Elizabeth or baby ko ladai ke liye tyar karte hain , app apni beti rema se bat kar lo.." khushi etna bol baby ke room ki traf chali gai ,

suhana ne rema ke room ka darvaja khatkhata diya , rema darvaja kholte hi suhana se lipat kar rone lagi , uski akhon se kale rang ka pani asnu ban kar beh reha tha ,

"hamari bachi , hamari rema , apko me pehchan gai , app sumon ho , pari lok ki sabse badi jadugarni , par wakht kitna ajeeb hai , apko hamari beti bana diya es janam me , ham apse bahut pyar karte hai rema , hame sab yad a gya hai..." suhana , rema ke chehre ko chumte hue boli ,

"maa , muze laga mane apko kho diya , me bhi apse bahut pyar karti hu , me apke bina nai jee sakti maa.." rema behad nam akhon se rote hue boli ,

"shant ho jao hamari bachi , abh ham apke sath hai , or hamesha rehege , acha rema , hamne suna hai jung hone wali hai , app kiska sath dogi jung me , hamara ya us shetian ki sena ka..." suhana muskrate hue rema ki akhon me dekhte hue boli ,

"maa , ham jung nai ladege , app bhi hamari maa ho , or dusri traf voh ring pehne aurat bhi hamari maa hai , ham app dono ke khilaf shastar kaise utha sakti hain , ham nai lad sakte maa..." rema behad bhavuk hoker boli ,

"rema beti , abhi wakht hai app soch lena , apko ehsas ho jayega , apko kis maa ka sath dena hai , ham ruhi se milkar ate hain , app aram se socho es bare..." suhana , rema ka matha chum kar sedyian chad komal ke pas chali gai , or rema ne udas man se room ka darvaja band kar diya ,

Ruhi or suhana ki mulakat , jo pari log me kabhi nai sambhav hua , abh voh hone ja reha tha , kya komal ka bachu wala mayajaal suhana ke samne tik pata , yeh toh anne wale wakht ki bat thi ,

khushi , baby , lara or Elizabeth se kya bat karegi , kya voh jung ke liye tyar hongi , kya baby , jo es wakht bahut peeda or dard seh rehi thi , voh ladne jayegi , baby ka pyar , uski beti , uski kat , sab usse alag ho chuka tha , es halat me , voh shetian ke sabse takatwar danvo se lad payegi , jo sadyion se ik bhi jung nai hare the , yeh khushi or baby ki mulakat par nirbhar karta tha...


to be counited... [Note:- Friends es lambi fight ka pora plot soch liya hai , eska end bhi , lekin eske end ke sath , yeh part close nai hoga... kyu ki abhi 5th day chal reha hai , 2 din abhi bhi rehte hain , jung kuch 10 , 15 updates tak sochi hai.. shukriya.. or kal update karne ki pori kossih karuga.. ]

 

[aka3829]

Bahut hi umda update diya he bhai. Yaha aapne ek baat sahi kahi ki ati har chiz ki buri hoti he. Koi bachha jab choti 2 jid karta he to ma baap ko wo ek khel lagta he aur wo khush hote he use dekh kar. Lekin jab wahi bachha kisi galat chis ke liye ya fir kuch galat jid pakad leta he to ma baap ko sakti se kaam lena padta he. Yaha ravi wahi bachha he jisa e ek galat jis pakad li he aur ab shiv use iska dand bhi denge. Lekin wo ek pita bhi he to wo ye bhi dhyan rakhenge ki is dand se ravi kuch shikh le. Bas end achha rakhna
Waiting 4 next update

 

[killar_back]

Shandaar update.....

 

[killar_back]

Bhai ab kya hoga jab Suhana aur Ruhi ka aamna-samna hoga......
Ye jung mai kya - kya hoga intezaar rahega.....

ki puri teyaree ho chuki hai...

 

[Naik]

Bahot bahot shaandaar update dost
Intizar rehega aapke agle update ka
Bahot bahot shukriya aapka