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[lover of darkness]

BAHUT SANDAR UPDATE THA DOST

thanks bhai...

 

[lover of darkness]

Fantastic update sir

Suhana achhi bn gyi
Ruhi ne suhana ko maaf kr diya dono behno mein janamo ki dushmni khtam ho gyi
Dusron ki glti pe gussa tohh hr koi kr skta hai pr maaf koi koi krta
Baby kat or fari ki wazae tut gyi pr wo ravi ki help krne jrur jayegi ladayi mein
Vampires wapas aa gye
Is baar ki jung kaafi interesting hogi

Kasshh sona bi kuchh log ko maar skti

Well kuchh lines update ki dil ko chhu gyi yahan quote nhi krugi sorry but mind blowing

Waiting for next update

thanks sona ji...

han apne sahi kaha , dusro ko maf koi koi kar sakta.. or jo maf karde voh insanyiat se kahi ucha ho jata hai...

sona abhi bachi hai story me

voh achi lines mane kamayi hai jindgi me jo apne read ki , kisi khas dost ki meharbani se

shukariya sona ji.. sath bane rehna..

 

[lover of darkness]

friends next update rat ko 9 baje a jayega.. spelling mistakes check kar lu..

 

[Jassandhu]

friends next update rat ko 9 baje a jayega.. spelling mistakes check kar lu..

Ok bro

 

[lover of darkness]

update-108


Abh Agge...


Asman ko chu reha vansha jungle ka sadyion purana parbat , abh jung ka killa ban chuka tha , parbat ki choti par , tin lok khade the , jo danvi sena ka intzar kar rehe the ,





nakabposh aurat , joker or rekha , tino hi behad shidat se danvi sena ko prithvi par lane ke liye utavle ho rehe the , par kya shetian par vishwas karna uchit tha ,


akhir nakabposh aurat ki mehnat rang layi , uske kiye gye tantra mantra se us nele pathar se ik tez urza nikal kar , sidha nele asman ko katne lagi , voh urza etni tez thi ke tino parvat se niche gir gye ,





tez chamakti behad vinashkari urza ne , asman ko kat diya , ik bada sa gol ched brehmand ki sathithi ko darshane laga , abh bus intzar tha , kab dani sena prithvi me parvesh kare , or kab prithvi ka vinash ho ,


vahi dusri traf...


ik sunsan si gufa , jiske ander jane ka rasta behad ghumavdar tha , koi aam insan es gufa tak pahunchna toh door , eske bare me sochne ki kalpana bhi nai kar sakta tha ,


gufa ke ander jate wakht thodi thodi doori par aag ki masahle jal rehi thi , tain ki andhera thoda kam ho , gufa ke un ghumavdar raste se hote hote , ik badi si khali jamen thi , jiske bechu bech , ik pathar par koi aurat tapasya me leen thi , uska jism sirf haddyion ka dhancha partit ho reha tha , na koi chehra tha , na koi jism , aisa dikh reha tha , jaise koi tapasya me leen hi mar gya ho , abh uska kankal hi vaha betha ho ,





par yeh kankal nai tha , lekin yeh aurat thi kon , or es kadar tapasya me kyu leen thi , eska jawab kiske pas tha ,


tabhi vaha ik kali parchai vajood me a gai , voh kali parchai koi or nai , kaal khud tha , lekin voh yaha kyu aya tha , es aurat se uska kya rishta tha ,


"malika , apke jagne ka wakht ho gya hai , hame jarurat hai apki..." kaal ne behad garajti byank awaz me bola ,


tabhi dekhte hi dekhte us kankal ke ander se safad roshni janam lene gai , kuch hi palu me voh safad roshni ik jism ka akar le gai , ufff jab voh insani vajood me ayi , tab uske sunderta ka koi mukabala nai tha , etni dilkash , hasen , khubsurat aurat , shyad hi es dunia me koi or ho ,


"meri malika ko mera parinam , app sab janti ho malika , mere yaha anne ka maksad bhi..." kaal ne ghutno ke bal bethte hue saar zuka kar bola ,


"ham jante hain , hamara beta musibat me hai , par ham uski raksha kyu kare , usne khud yeh rasta chuna tha , hamne use roka bhi tha , lekin voh hamari bat kabhi sunta hi kaha hai , abh ham uska sath kyu de..." malika samadi se uthte hue boli ,


"malika sona , voh apka beta hai , voh apni behan ke bina nai reh sakta , voh prem karta hai use , or voh akeli komal se nai , kai or ladkyion ko bhi chahta hai , kai jindgyian uske sath jud chuki hain , app madad karo malika , app hi kar sakti ho..." kaal ne vaise hi apna saar zuka kar bola ,


"ham uske or uske pita ke bech kyu aye , prem karna gunah nai , par apni behan se prem karna gunah hai , uske pita bahut takatwar hain , unko marna namumkin hai , aisa koi rasta nai hai , or hamne vachan diya tha , ham dono ke raste me nai ayege..." malika sona ne behad udas hoker bola ,


"malika , koi toh rasta hoga , prithvi par masoom log rehte hain , voh bevajah mare jayege , malika agar bat prithvi ki na hoti , toh me yaha apke pas kabhi nai ata..." kaal ne dard bhari awaz me bola ,


"kaal , ravi hamara beta nai hai , hamara beta toh mar chuka hai , sadyion pehle , abh voh apka beta hai , app madad karo uski , ham sath denge apka , lekin ham jung nai lad sakte , han ham pore jungle ke as-pas ik raksha kavach ka nirman kar denge , tain ki koi bhi danav jungle se bahar na ja paye , kaal ham tume yeh locket dete hain , ese pehan lo..." malika sona ne apni akhen band kar ik locket ka nirman kiya , jo baraf se bana hua tha , lekin kathor baraf se ,


"shukariya malika , es locket ko pehan leta hu , lekin eski shakti ka raz kya hai..." kaal ne voh locket apne gale me dharan karte hue bola ,


"es locket ki shakti se , app or apke sabhi sathi , kisi bhi parsathithi me lad sakuge , chehe din ho ya chahe rat , jab tak yeh locket apke gale me rehega , apka koi bhi sathi marega nai , jab tak uske mathe ke bechu bech war na kiya jaye , yahi ik matar rasta hoga apke sathyian ko marne ka , varna unko or apko koi nuksan nai hoga..." malika sona behad shant sehbhav me boli , unki awaz behad komal thi , dil ko moh lene wali ,


"jii malika , me es locket ka khyal rakhuga..."


"kaal , tumne hamse kiye har vade ko badi bakhubi se pora kiya hai , sadyion tak kisi insan ki hatya nai ki , or sabhi murda logu ke liye kai kanun banaye , ham tumse bahut khush hain , agar koi icha hai toh voh mang sakte ho , ham tumari ik icha jarur pori karege..." malika sona behad khushnuma awaz me boli ,


"ham chahte hain , hamara beta ravi yeh jung jeet jaye , or use kuch na ho , voh jinda rehe..." kaal ne vaise hi chehra zukaye hue bola ,


"yeh talwar lo , uska gussa shant karo , or rehi bat , jeene ya marne ki , voh mere hath me nai , voh uski kismat me likha hai , use kabhi mat batana , ham uski maa hain , or ham abhi jeevat hain , ese hamara adesh samaz lena..." malika sona ne behad ghambir awaz me bola ,


"es talwar me koi takat hai kya..." kaal us baraf se bani bejan talwar ko dekhte hue bola ,


"naii , esme koi shakti nai , par es talwar ko dekhte hi voh shant ho jayega , etne gusse me voh jung nai lad sakta , es gusse ki shakti ko , voh apne vash me karke lade , tabhi uski jeet ho sakti hai , abh jao kaal..." malika sona etna bol ik dam sa , usi roop me , usi chatan par , ik kankal ke roop me beth gai ,


"jo agya mailka.." kaal apna saar zukate hue bola , or vaha se gyab ho gya...


kaal vaha se gyab hoker , sidha jungle pahunch gya , usne dekha voh kala parvat abh baraf se dhaka hua tha ,





jungle me bhi baraf ka saya badta ja reha tha , jamen par baraf ki safad chadar bish chuki thi ,


"murdo ki sena... " kaal man hi man sochte hue bola ,


kaal jab ravi ke samne aya , tab ravi beintha gusse me , tez tez ghurate hue sanse le reha tha , ravi ne kaal ko dekha , par uska gussa jara sa bhi shant na hua ,


"meriii betiii muzseee doorrr ho gaiiii , meriii komalll bhiii muzsee doorr ho gaiiii.. " ravi beintha nafrat or dard me chekhte hue bola , uske chekhne se , uske badan se tez aag ki lapte charo or girne lagi , agar kaal ne malika ka diya voh jadui locket na pehna hota toh voh jal jata , kyu ki yeh hell ki aag thi , hell ke raza ki apni khud ki tapash ,


"betaa yeh talwar loo..." kaal ne voh talwar jo malika sona ne use di thi , voh ravi ko sonp di , kaal door shant khada ho gya , ravi ke hatho me ate hi voh talwar tez safad roshni me chamak uthi ,


"maaaaaaaaa..." ravi pari lok me bitaye apne ache palu ko yad karne laga , jo pal uske or uski maa malika sona ke bech ghat chuke the , yeh talwar sirf or sirf , vahi sambal sakta tha , jiske liye eska vajood racha gya ho ,


ravi ne voh talwar apne mathe se laga li , us talwar se safad roshni ki kirane nikal uske jism me sama gai , kuch hi palu me ravi shant khada tha , lekin devil toh abh bhi voh tha , bus uska man shant ho chuka tha , yeh es bat ka saboot tha , ke jab maa ka saya sath ho , tab insan ke ander gussa , nafrat , har dard , har tanhayi , sab jaise ik pal me gyab ho jate hain ,


"hassshhh pita jii appp ..." ravi muskra kar bola ,


"hmm , etna adhik gussa , abh wakht nai ke me tume tumari galatyian samazau , ayo mere sath..." kaal ik pal me ravi ko us sathan par le aya , yaha se voh parvat saf saf dikhai de reha tha ,





us parvat ke as-pas abh na toh jungle ke pedh the , or na hi koi nadi , ik dam saf barfeli jamen thi ,



ravi ne uper asman ki traf dekha , asman me ik bada sa ched ho chuka tha , us nele pathar se nikalti roshni ke karan , jo behad vinashkari partit ho rehi thi ,


ravi or kaal agge bade or us parvat se koi 100 metter door akar khade ho gye , tabhi unki nazar us nakabposh aurat par padhi , uske sath joker or rekha bhi the ,


"pita ji ham dono ladege , par kis se , yaha toh yeh tino hi hain..." ravi behad shant sehbhav me bola ,


"danvi sena hamare as-pas hi hai , bus apne malik ka hukam sunne ko betab hai , voh abhi ruke hue hain , matlab hamse ik akhri bar bat karna chahte hain..." kaal ne anne wale wakht ko mehsus karte hue bola ,


tabhi kisi ne ravi ke kande par hath rakha , ravi chonk sa gya , usne piche palat kar dekha , uff usne ik rahat ki sans li , yeh khushi thi ,


"are wah , matlab kya bat haii , yeh bevkuf aag me jal reha tha , abh baraf se bhi thanda ho gya , uff icecream ki trah..." khushi muskrate hue apne hontho ko jebh se chat te hue boli ,


"prince..." suhana ne behad nam akhon se bola , or ravi ke gale lag gai , uske chehre ko chumne lagi paglu ki trah ,


"are sharam karo pita ji sath me hain..." ravi muskrate hue suhana ko piche karte hue bola , suhana sharmate hue jamen ki traf dekhne lagi ,


"tum dono bhi mere liye ayi ho..." ravi , lara or eliza ke karib jaker bola ,


"ham toh tumari hi hai ravii , tumne ham dono ko badal diya , yaha tum jauge ham sath jayegi , jo tumara dushman voh ham dono ka dushman , ham dono tumare sath hain..." lara , ravi ki akhon me akhen dal boli ,


ravi ne un dono ko bahu me bhar liya , voh dono bhi ravi ke pyar ko mehsus karti rehi , phir tino alag ho gye , tabhi ravi ne dekha , voh nakabposh aurat joker or rekha uske behad karib khade the , bus 15 feet ki doori par , shyad ik akhri bar bat honi thi...


vahi dusri traf...


baby behad udas thi , usne bahut ro liya tha , abh asnu bhi kam nikal rehe the akhon se , jajbat bhi nisha ki yadion me kahi kho sa gye the , kahi na kahi nisha ka kuch vajood uske ander tha , uski dolt , uske pyar , uske vishwas ne use jinda rakha tha..


baby ne apne phone uthaya or kat ko laga diya , usse bat karne ke liye , ik akhri bat...


to be counited...

 

[sraab]

Bhai ek update mai aapne kaha tha ki Juhi aur Nisha dono jinda hai, jab baby ka raaz nahi khula tha, to kya Nisha bhi jinda hai lekin kaise, kahi kat hi to nahi hai Nisha aur ab dekhte hai saayadagle update mai Kat ka man pighal jaaye

 

[Prince Charlee]

Superb update. To Malika Sona bhi abhi zinda hai lekin woh apne bete aur pati ke darmiyan nahi ana chahti. Dekhte age chal ke Malika kis ka sath deti hai.
Khushi aur baki sab bhi aa gae hai aur Baby bhi Kat se bat karne wali hai dekhte hai Kat kya karti hai.
Waiting for fighting scene. Bhai ho sake to fight ko 1-2 Mega update me hi complete karne ki koshish karna.

 

[Mr.Omi]

update-107

Abh Agge....

Suhana or Ruhi ki mulakat , ik ajeeb sa khel tha kudrat ka , kehte hain kudrat khud ko bar bar dohrati hai , voh pehle cheeze banati hai , phir unka vinash kar deti hai , phir banati hai , phir vinash karti hai ,

kudrat se bada koi nai , koi shaktishali nai , sab gulam hai uske , voh jo chahti hai , vahi hota hai , pari lok bana , phir tabah hua , prithvi bani , lekin kya abh voh bhi tabah hogi , ya kudrat use jeevat rakhegi anne wali kuch sadyion tak ,

kisi sarav-shaktiman lok ka vinash , vaha ke log khud karte hain , aisa hota aya hai sadyion se ,

pari lok ko na toh jeeta ja sakta tha , na chal-kapat se parapat kiya ja sakta tha , shetian bebas tha pari lok ke agge , lekin ik machis ki teli pore jungle ko jala sakti hai , or shetian ko voh moka mil hi gya , shetian ke liye voh machis ki teli suhana thi ,

ik aisa dushman , jis par kisi ka shak na jata , usne pari lok ke 6 paviter satamb , jo dunia ki achai ka partik the , kuvari kanyion ki bali ke madayam se , shetian ko samarpit kar diye ,

ik akhri satamb abhi bacha tha , lekin voh sabse mazbot tha , jaise insan ki tesri akh hoti hai vaisa , 3sri akh kholna namumkin hai , vaise hi komal ki bali deker , yeh paviter or mazbot satamb shetian ko samarpit karna bhi mushkil tha ,

suhana haar gai , chahe usne har pariyas kiya , pari lok ko tabah kar diya , sabko shap se lipat kar diya , par keh sakte hain , suhana haar gai thi , lekin uski icha abhi jinda thi ,

icha hi ik karan hai , jis karan insan bar bar janam leta hai , agar ichyion se mukat ho jaye , toh ham es dunia me kya lene ayege , sab 0 me valeen ho jayege ,

ajj sadyion bad suhana apni behan se mil rehi thi , us nazuk wakht par , jab phir se jung unke darvaje par khadi thi , yaha se kisi ik ki mout bhi ho sakti thi , or koi jeevat bhi reh sakta tha ,

suhana sedyian chad room ke darvaje ke pas pahunch gai , suhana ne darvaje ko dhaka dena chaha , par uske hath ruk sa gye , uske hath ki unglyian kampne lagi , akhon se asnu behne lage ,

voh apni behan se nazarian milane se dar rehi thi , akhir kis moh se voh usse bat karti , usne sab kuch barbad kiya tha , ik khushhal pariwar , ik azad dunia , sab jala kar khak kar diya tha ,

"ham , ham nai kar sakte , ham ruhi ka samna nai kar sakte , ham bure hain bahut bure..." suhana vapis palat beintha rote hue khud se hi boli ,

voh jane hi lagi thi , ke use ravi ki yad a gai , use ravi ki madad karni thi , lekin marne se pehle apne behan se mafi bhi mangni thi ,

"ham , ham milege apni behan ko.." suhana ne apne behte asnu , apne hatho se saf kiye , or behad tezi se room ke ander ghus gai ,

suhana ne ander ghus kar dekha , uski behan ruhi (komal) balkoni me khadi door jungle ki traf dekh rehi thi , uski akhen shant thi , man bhi shant tha , or chehre par koi bhav nai tha , na nafrat ka , na pyar ka , na gusse ka , voh bhavheen thi ,

"Ruhana..." suhana ne behad nam akhon se komal ki traf dekhte hue bola , uski awaz me ik dard tha ,

komal es awaz ko sun kar palat gai , suhana use dekh chonk sa gai , par komal muskrane lagi ,

"theema mumma tap..." komal apni totli awaz me boli ,

"ruhi , phir se vahi mayajaal , ham suhana hai , apke es mayajaal ko jante hain , hame nai pata , apne kyu ese vapis apna liya , ham apni ruhi se bat karna chahte hain..." suhana ne behad nam akhon se dard bhari awaz me bola ,

komal muskrate hue khamosh ho gai , lekin voh kuch boli nai , bus suhana ko dekhti rehi , uska beeta hua kal , uski akhon ke samne khada tha ,

"Ruhi kuch toh kaho , hame apni galti ka pachtava hai , hame maf kardo..." suhana , komal ke behad karib akar rote hue boli ,

"me ruhi nai hu , me komal hu , ruhi toh mar gai , or apne ananat shapo ka bhar komal par chod gai , komal ko ruhi ke har shap ka karaz uthana padh reha hai..." komal vaise hi shant bhav se boli ,

"hame pata hai ruhi , apka or hamara dusri bar janam hua hai , yeh sab hamari galtyion ke parinam hain , hame maf kardo behan , hamne tumse erkha or jalan ke bhav rakhe , hamne tume tumare pyar se alag kiya , hame koi bhi saza do..." suhana abhi bol hi rehi thi ke komal bech me bol padhi ,

"kis galti ki saza de , app meri badi behan ho , apko maf karne ka or saza dene ka , muze koi adhikar nai hai , me apse tab bhi pyar karti thi , or ajj bhi karti hu..." komal behad nam akhon se boli ,

"nai , nai , hamne tumse sab kuch cheen liya , ham achi nai hain , ham buri hai..." suhana behad rote hue boli ,

"shhhh dedi , jab mere ander koi nafrat hi nai , koi gussa hi nai , me kya saza du apko , bhul jao un bation ko , apki achi jindgi apke samne hai , me apse pyar karti thi , or hamesha karti rahugi , jao dedi , bhyia ko jarurat hai apki , unka sath do..." komal behad prem bhare shabado se boli ,

"tum , tum , sach me paviter shakti ho , tum , tum , hamari behan ho , es bat ka garav hai hame , ham akhri sans tak , ladege , or ravi ko kuch nai hone denge , ham vada karte hain..." suhana etna bol komal ke gale lag gai , sadyion purani erkha ne dam tod diya , jalan ke bhav jal gye , or pyar ne ik nayi suruat karli ,

vahi dusri traf....


khushi behad tezi se baby ke room ke pas pahunch gai , "baby , baby , muze bat karni hai , darvaja kholo jaldi..." khushi behad dard me darvaje par hath marte hue boli ,

ika ik baby ne darvaja khol diya , khushi tezi se room ke ander ghus gai , baby ne darvaja band kar liya , or jaker bed par beth gai , jab ki khushi vaha khadi rehi , usse kuch door ,

"baby ham sab ko milkar ravi ki madad karni hai , pls , jaldi chalo , shetian ki sena a rehi hai , ham sab mare jayege..." khushi abhi bol hi rehi thi ke baby bech me bol padhi ,

"busss , khushi , mane abhi abhi apni beti ko kho diya , apna pyar kho diya , es halat me , main kaise lad sakti hu..." baby behad nam akhon se boli ,

"shhh voh sab tume mil jayega , me or ravi hell vapis ja rehe hain , lekin baby agar jung me ravi haar gya toh fari or kat bhi mar jayegi , voh kahi bhi surakshit nai hain , ayo baby milkar apne pyar ki madad kare..." khushi , baby ke karib bed par bethte hue , uske dono hath apne hatho me lete hue boli ,

"me , me , nai kar sakti , me tut chuki hu ander se..." baby behad rote hue boli ,

"janti ho , mane kitna dard sahe hain , pichle janam me , muze devil ke sath hell me rehna padha , sadyion tak us garam aag ki tapash ko sehti rehi , kyu , kyu ki muze apne pyar ko pana tha , uske sath rehna tha , use koi dard nai pahunchne dena tha , par me nakam rehi , us jung me ravi mar gya , me bhi mar gai , me na toh pyar ko pa saki or na use bacha saki , baby ajj phir vahi halat samne hain , me vada karti hu , me fari or kat ko tumare pas chod kar jaugi , par abhi mere sath chalo..." khushi ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"me nai kar paugi , me kamzor ho chuki hu , me , me , abh nai lad paugi... " baby apna chehra zuka rone lagi ,

"hasshhh thik hai , janti ho agar nisha jinda hoti toh voh tume ravi ki madad ke liye khud behj deti , or etna hi nai , voh tumare sath jati , khair agar man badal jaye toh a jana..." khushi etna bol room se bahar chali gai , baby chehra zuka nam akhon se pichle wakht ko sochne lagi ,

khushi , baby ke room se nikal lara or eliza ke pas chali gai , use umeed nai thi , ke lara or eliza uske sath jayegi , par voh puchna jaruri samazti thi ,

khushi unke room me ghus gai , voh dono bed par leti hui thi , khushi ko dekh dono uth kar beth gai ,

"kaisi ho tum dono..." khushi muskrate hue boli , par uski yeh muskan zuthi thi ,

"ham thik hain , acha mane apne super computer me kuch dekha , es jungle ke sabse bade parbat par ik safad si roshni asman ki traf ja rehi hai , koi khatra ane wala hai kya..." Eliza apna tez dimag doadate hue boli ,

"han , aisa hi kuch samaz lo..." khushi behad ghambir hoker boli ,

"kitne dushman hain..." lara bed se uth kar khade hote hue boli ,

"lakho me..." khushi yeh bol dono ke chehre dekhne lagi ,

"ohhuaahhhh (angdai lete hue) Eliza etne dino bad maza ayega , chalo khushi ham tyar hain... " lara ik pal me hi apne ninja suit me ate hue boli ,

"ohhh , kyaaa , ik bar soch lo , jaan ka khatra hai vaha..." khushi dono ki bat sun chonkte hue boli ,

"let's go khushi , jaan-vaan ki chinta ham dono nai karti , chalo abh achai ke liye mara jaye..." lara , khushi ko akh mar room se bahar jate hue boli ,

"me bhi tyar hu..." Eliza etna bol lara ke piche piche room se bahar a gai ,

"kamal hai , me enke pas kyu nai ayi pehle..." khushi muskrate hue khud se hi boli , or room se bahar a gai ,

abh charo tyar thi , suhana (seema) , lara , eliza or khushi , voh charo chal padhi , ik akhri jung ki or , jo behad vinash kari hone wali thi...

vahi dusri traf...

ik andheri jagah , ik veeran Haweli , yeh vahi haweli thi , yaha se ravi ke jeevan ki ik nayi suruat hui thi , ik rahasmayi haweli , es haweli me kai raz dafan the , lekin abh es haweli par vampires ka raz tha , voh shashan karte the , haweli par , or haweli ke as-pas ke pore jungle par ,

"malik , voh a gye..."

ik andhere kamare me , ik aurat ne darvaje se ander zakte hue bola , or phir voh vaha se chali gai ,

"huuunn , sardyian anne wali hain , lekin jung me sardi ka hona jaruri hai , dhup me lada nai ja sakta , kuch karna hoga malik..." ik aurat behad muskrate hue boli , uski akhen lal roshni me chamak uthi , us gehre andhere me...

"mera beta , kitna badal gya hai , me usse bat karna chahta hu , par voh aag me jalta hua rakshas partit ho reha hai , me uske samne nai ja sakta..."

yeh kaal tha , ravi ka pita , vampires ka raza , es dunia ke har vampire eska agya ka gulam tha ,

"app ja sakte ho malik , app me kai rahasmayi takatian hain..." maya , kaal ke karib ate hue boli ,

"janta hu , me chahta tha , voh khud se sab sikh jaye , jab voh yaha aya tha , tab bhi nasamaz tha or abh bhi nasamaz hai , aurat uski kamzori hai , yeh bataya tha use , lekin ajj phir voh aurat ki batian se gusse me jal reha hai , me akhri bar use milna jauga..." kaal behad byank garjati awaz me bola ,

"malik hamare sabhi sathi a chuke hain , ham tyar hai jung me ladne ke liye..." maya lal chamakti akhon se muskrate hue boli ,

"hmm , jab mere man ki awaz suno , tab us sathan par pahunch jana , lekin ham rat hone ka intzar karege , rat hone tak , ravi ko shetiani sena ko rok kar rakhna hoga , yeh namumkin toh hai , par mera beta esko mumkin bhi kar dega..." kaal behad shant awaz me bola ,

"malik app kuch bhi kar sakte ho , ham din me lad sakte hain , jayda se jayda hame chot pahunchegi , vaise bhi ham mare hue hain , jayda dard nai hoga..." maya , kaal ke hath par apna hath rakhte hue boli ,

"hmm , me kuch sochta hu , jab man ki awaz aye tab sabko sath leker vaha a jana..." kaal etna bol vaha se gyab ho gya...


to be counited....

Bahot badhiya update hai bro..
Lagta hai ab Suhana acchai ka sath degi

 

[Chunmun]

Abhi tak k sare update padh dale. Kya dhasu update diye ho bhai.
Gajab...

Seema behosh ho gai thi or khushi kisi or jagah gayab ho kr pahuch gai jab us ne seema ka sar chhu li thi to.
Maine yaha tak pahle padha tha lekin aaj jab is se aage padhne laga hu to aap ne to yaha dhamal macha rakha hai.
Suhana wapas aa chuki hai seema mai or khushi bhi waha ka mayajal tod kr wapas kabile mai pahuch gai.
Waha khushi k sath jo hua hai kya khub dikhaya hai aap ne. Bemishaalll...

Reema ka chudail wala roop fari ne dekh liya or wo behosh ho gai or iska natija nikla ki kat ab apne asli roop mai aa gai or fari ko in sab se dur karne k chakkar mai Ravi ka inshano roop hi chin li.

Ye bada bura hua Ravi k sath. Ab wo na to apne beti se mil payega na hi apne kisi bibi se khushi k chod kr.

Last ka update thoda confusion paida kr raha hai.
Jab Ravi insani roop mai nahi aa pa raha hai to alija or Lara ne koi reaction nahi diya. Ravi se dono gale mile bahut badhiya tarike se.

Waise Ravi apne maa k dwara bheje talwar ko pa kr ek bar fir se maa ko mahsus kiya or khus bhi hua or sukun bhi mila use. Tabhi to uska ubal marta gussa bhi sant ho gya.
Maa k charno mai hi jannat hai. Ravi ko bhi us jannat ka thoda sa santi sitalta or pavitrata mil gya.
Baba bhi aa kr Ravi ko chauka diye hai ki ant mai uski pariksha hai or sab se badi baat ki baba bol gye hai ki ye ek mayajal hai hai.
Ab ye kya mayajal hai or kis ne racha hai is mayajal ko ye bhi nahi pta.
Ye dekha or jokar ke sath kaun hai budhiya jadugarni jis ko kafi samay se aap chupa kr rakhe ho.
Ab is budhiya ka bhi raaj khol hi do.
Kahi ye khushi ki mata raam ya kaal ki bahan to nahi.
Fabulous update sarkar.
Bahut mehnat lagta hai aise update dene mai aap ka bahut bahut sukriya itne achhe achhe update k liye.
Sath hi kamna ki aap humesa swasth rahe or aise hi majedar dhamakedar update dete rahe.
Good night.

 

[Mr.Omi]

update-108


Abh Agge...


Asman ko chu reha vansha jungle ka sadyion purana parbat , abh jung ka killa ban chuka tha , parbat ki choti par , tin lok khade the , jo danvi sena ka intzar kar rehe the ,





nakabposh aurat , joker or rekha , tino hi behad shidat se danvi sena ko prithvi par lane ke liye utavle ho rehe the , par kya shetian par vishwas karna uchit tha ,


akhir nakabposh aurat ki mehnat rang layi , uske kiye gye tantra mantra se us nele pathar se ik tez urza nikal kar , sidha nele asman ko katne lagi , voh urza etni tez thi ke tino parvat se niche gir gye ,





tez chamakti behad vinashkari urza ne , asman ko kat diya , ik bada sa gol ched brehmand ki sathithi ko darshane laga , abh bus intzar tha , kab dani sena prithvi me parvesh kare , or kab prithvi ka vinash ho ,


vahi dusri traf...


ik sunsan si gufa , jiske ander jane ka rasta behad ghumavdar tha , koi aam insan es gufa tak pahunchna toh door , eske bare me sochne ki kalpana bhi nai kar sakta tha ,


gufa ke ander jate wakht thodi thodi doori par aag ki masahle jal rehi thi , tain ki andhera thoda kam ho , gufa ke un ghumavdar raste se hote hote , ik badi si khali jamen thi , jiske bechu bech , ik pathar par koi aurat tapasya me leen thi , uska jism sirf haddyion ka dhancha partit ho reha tha , na koi chehra tha , na koi jism , aisa dikh reha tha , jaise koi tapasya me leen hi mar gya ho , abh uska kankal hi vaha betha ho ,





par yeh kankal nai tha , lekin yeh aurat thi kon , or es kadar tapasya me kyu leen thi , eska jawab kiske pas tha ,


tabhi vaha ik kali parchai vajood me a gai , voh kali parchai koi or nai , kaal khud tha , lekin voh yaha kyu aya tha , es aurat se uska kya rishta tha ,


"malika , apke jagne ka wakht ho gya hai , hame jarurat hai apki..." kaal ne behad garajti byank awaz me bola ,


tabhi dekhte hi dekhte us kankal ke ander se safad roshni janam lene gai , kuch hi palu me voh safad roshni ik jism ka akar le gai , ufff jab voh insani vajood me ayi , tab uske sunderta ka koi mukabala nai tha , etni dilkash , hasen , khubsurat aurat , shyad hi es dunia me koi or ho ,


"meri malika ko mera parinam , app sab janti ho malika , mere yaha anne ka maksad bhi..." kaal ne ghutno ke bal bethte hue saar zuka kar bola ,


"ham jante hain , hamara beta musibat me hai , par ham uski raksha kyu kare , usne khud yeh rasta chuna tha , hamne use roka bhi tha , lekin voh hamari bat kabhi sunta hi kaha hai , abh ham uska sath kyu de..." malika samadi se uthte hue boli ,


"malika sona , voh apka beta hai , voh apni behan ke bina nai reh sakta , voh prem karta hai use , or voh akeli komal se nai , kai or ladkyion ko bhi chahta hai , kai jindgyian uske sath jud chuki hain , app madad karo malika , app hi kar sakti ho..." kaal ne vaise hi apna saar zuka kar bola ,


"ham uske or uske pita ke bech kyu aye , prem karna gunah nai , par apni behan se prem karna gunah hai , uske pita bahut takatwar hain , unko marna namumkin hai , aisa koi rasta nai hai , or hamne vachan diya tha , ham dono ke raste me nai ayege..." malika sona ne behad udas hoker bola ,


"malika , koi toh rasta hoga , prithvi par masoom log rehte hain , voh bevajah mare jayege , malika agar bat prithvi ki na hoti , toh me yaha apke pas kabhi nai ata..." kaal ne dard bhari awaz me bola ,


"kaal , ravi hamara beta nai hai , hamara beta toh mar chuka hai , sadyion pehle , abh voh apka beta hai , app madad karo uski , ham sath denge apka , lekin ham jung nai lad sakte , han ham pore jungle ke as-pas ik raksha kavach ka nirman kar denge , tain ki koi bhi danav jungle se bahar na ja paye , kaal ham tume yeh locket dete hain , ese pehan lo..." malika sona ne apni akhen band kar ik locket ka nirman kiya , jo baraf se bana hua tha , lekin kathor baraf se ,


"shukariya malika , es locket ko pehan leta hu , lekin eski shakti ka raz kya hai..." kaal ne voh locket apne gale me dharan karte hue bola ,


"es locket ki shakti se , app or apke sabhi sathi , kisi bhi parsathithi me lad sakuge , chehe din ho ya chahe rat , jab tak yeh locket apke gale me rehega , apka koi bhi sathi marega nai , jab tak uske mathe ke bechu bech war na kiya jaye , yahi ik matar rasta hoga apke sathyian ko marne ka , varna unko or apko koi nuksan nai hoga..." malika sona behad shant sehbhav me boli , unki awaz behad komal thi , dil ko moh lene wali ,


"jii malika , me es locket ka khyal rakhuga..."


"kaal , tumne hamse kiye har vade ko badi bakhubi se pora kiya hai , sadyion tak kisi insan ki hatya nai ki , or sabhi murda logu ke liye kai kanun banaye , ham tumse bahut khush hain , agar koi icha hai toh voh mang sakte ho , ham tumari ik icha jarur pori karege..." malika sona behad khushnuma awaz me boli ,


"ham chahte hain , hamara beta ravi yeh jung jeet jaye , or use kuch na ho , voh jinda rehe..." kaal ne vaise hi chehra zukaye hue bola ,


"yeh talwar lo , uska gussa shant karo , or rehi bat , jeene ya marne ki , voh mere hath me nai , voh uski kismat me likha hai , use kabhi mat batana , ham uski maa hain , or ham abhi jeevat hain , ese hamara adesh samaz lena..." malika sona ne behad ghambir awaz me bola ,


"es talwar me koi takat hai kya..." kaal us baraf se bani bejan talwar ko dekhte hue bola ,


"naii , esme koi shakti nai , par es talwar ko dekhte hi voh shant ho jayega , etne gusse me voh jung nai lad sakta , es gusse ki shakti ko , voh apne vash me karke lade , tabhi uski jeet ho sakti hai , abh jao kaal..." malika sona etna bol ik dam sa , usi roop me , usi chatan par , ik kankal ke roop me beth gai ,


"jo agya mailka.." kaal apna saar zukate hue bola , or vaha se gyab ho gya...


kaal vaha se gyab hoker , sidha jungle pahunch gya , usne dekha voh kala parvat abh baraf se dhaka hua tha ,





jungle me bhi baraf ka saya badta ja reha tha , jamen par baraf ki safad chadar bish chuki thi ,


"murdo ki sena... " kaal man hi man sochte hue bola ,


kaal jab ravi ke samne aya , tab ravi beintha gusse me , tez tez ghurate hue sanse le reha tha , ravi ne kaal ko dekha , par uska gussa jara sa bhi shant na hua ,


"meriii betiii muzseee doorrr ho gaiiii , meriii komalll bhiii muzsee doorr ho gaiiii.. " ravi beintha nafrat or dard me chekhte hue bola , uske chekhne se , uske badan se tez aag ki lapte charo or girne lagi , agar kaal ne malika ka diya voh jadui locket na pehna hota toh voh jal jata , kyu ki yeh hell ki aag thi , hell ke raza ki apni khud ki tapash ,


"betaa yeh talwar loo..." kaal ne voh talwar jo malika sona ne use di thi , voh ravi ko sonp di , kaal door shant khada ho gya , ravi ke hatho me ate hi voh talwar tez safad roshni me chamak uthi ,


"maaaaaaaaa..." ravi pari lok me bitaye apne ache palu ko yad karne laga , jo pal uske or uski maa malika sona ke bech ghat chuke the , yeh talwar sirf or sirf , vahi sambal sakta tha , jiske liye eska vajood racha gya ho ,


ravi ne voh talwar apne mathe se laga li , us talwar se safad roshni ki kirane nikal uske jism me sama gai , kuch hi palu me ravi shant khada tha , lekin devil toh abh bhi voh tha , bus uska man shant ho chuka tha , yeh es bat ka saboot tha , ke jab maa ka saya sath ho , tab insan ke ander gussa , nafrat , har dard , har tanhayi , sab jaise ik pal me gyab ho jate hain ,


"hassshhh pita jii appp ..." ravi muskra kar bola ,


"hmm , etna adhik gussa , abh wakht nai ke me tume tumari galatyian samazau , ayo mere sath..." kaal ik pal me ravi ko us sathan par le aya , yaha se voh parvat saf saf dikhai de reha tha ,





us parvat ke as-pas abh na toh jungle ke pedh the , or na hi koi nadi , ik dam saf barfeli jamen thi ,



ravi ne uper asman ki traf dekha , asman me ik bada sa ched ho chuka tha , us nele pathar se nikalti roshni ke karan , jo behad vinashkari partit ho rehi thi ,


ravi or kaal agge bade or us parvat se koi 100 metter door akar khade ho gye , tabhi unki nazar us nakabposh aurat par padhi , uske sath joker or rekha bhi the ,


"pita ji ham dono ladege , par kis se , yaha toh yeh tino hi hain..." ravi behad shant sehbhav me bola ,


"danvi sena hamare as-pas hi hai , bus apne malik ka hukam sunne ko betab hai , voh abhi ruke hue hain , matlab hamse ik akhri bar bat karna chahte hain..." kaal ne anne wale wakht ko mehsus karte hue bola ,


tabhi kisi ne ravi ke kande par hath rakha , ravi chonk sa gya , usne piche palat kar dekha , uff usne ik rahat ki sans li , yeh khushi thi ,


"are wah , matlab kya bat haii , yeh bevkuf aag me jal reha tha , abh baraf se bhi thanda ho gya , uff icecream ki trah..." khushi muskrate hue apne hontho ko jebh se chat te hue boli ,


"prince..." suhana ne behad nam akhon se bola , or ravi ke gale lag gai , uske chehre ko chumne lagi paglu ki trah ,


"are sharam karo pita ji sath me hain..." ravi muskrate hue suhana ko piche karte hue bola , suhana sharmate hue jamen ki traf dekhne lagi ,


"tum dono bhi mere liye ayi ho..." ravi , lara or eliza ke karib jaker bola ,


"ham toh tumari hi hai ravii , tumne ham dono ko badal diya , yaha tum jauge ham sath jayegi , jo tumara dushman voh ham dono ka dushman , ham dono tumare sath hain..." lara , ravi ki akhon me akhen dal boli ,


ravi ne un dono ko bahu me bhar liya , voh dono bhi ravi ke pyar ko mehsus karti rehi , phir tino alag ho gye , tabhi ravi ne dekha , voh nakabposh aurat joker or rekha uske behad karib khade the , bus 15 feet ki doori par , shyad ik akhri bar bat honi thi...


vahi dusri traf...


baby behad udas thi , usne bahut ro liya tha , abh asnu bhi kam nikal rehe the akhon se , jajbat bhi nisha ki yadion me kahi kho sa gye the , kahi na kahi nisha ka kuch vajood uske ander tha , uski dolt , uske pyar , uske vishwas ne use jinda rakha tha..


baby ne apne phone uthaya or kat ko laga diya , usse bat karne ke liye , ik akhri bat...


to be counited...

Shandaar update.
Let the war begin