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Bhai tum chahte kya ho fir hero ko kya karna chahiye?

Use superman banade?
Ya kuch aur

SUPERMAN NAHI BHAI, WO TO PEHLE SE HI VAMPIRE BANA GHUM RAHA HAI

BAS AAP ITNA KIJIYA EK CHHOTI SI LIST BANA LIJIYE IS KAHANI KE VILLAINS KI

AUR USKE BAAD MEJHE YE BATAIE KI, USME SE KITNO KO RAVI NE KHUD APNE HATHO SE JAAN SE MARA HAI YA PHIR SAZA DI HAI
 
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SUPERMAN NAHI BHAI, WO TO PEHLE SE HI VAMPIRE BANA GHUM RAHA HAI

BAS AAP ITNA KIJIYA EK CHHOTI SI LIST BANA LIJIYE IS KAHANI KE VILLAINS KI

AUR USKE BAAD MEJHE YE BATAIE KI, USME SE KITNO KO RAVI NE KHUD APNE HATHO SE JAAN SE MARA HAI YA PHIR SAZA DI HAI
Yaar tumhe samjhake lagta hai koi fayda nahi
Sab tumhare upar se jaa raha hai
Maine bola tha ki story me jo kuch bhi hua wo ravi ke samaj se upar tha
Wo ek mamuli kheto me kaam karne wala ladka tha jiske sath ye sab huwa hai

Ab
Bas mujhe bata kya story end hui hai?
Nahi naa to aage dekhte hai ravi kya karta hai

Tujhe pehle hi bola tha har story me kuch alag baat hoti hai isiliye ham use pasand karte hai agar wahi same story padhni hai to wo 600 story jake padho jo band hai
 

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Aur ab aapke swalo ke jawab dena chahunga bhai. Aapne kaha ki ravi ne abhi tak hero wala kou kaam nahi kiya he. Kya sach me aisa hua he. Suru se suru karta hu. Suru me sahar me aake apni bahan ke raz janana. Fur usko aur mami ke pariwar ko gundo se bachana. Wapas gao aake aoni ma ke kehne par ghar chod kar 7 saal tak apne pyar se dur rehna. Juhi aur neha ko mandir ke samne un gundo se bachana. Fir akele hi is purani factory me un gundo ki dhulayi karna. Akele Biman sah ke pure gang ko khatam karna. Fir saat saal ke baad dubara biman sah ke chkarviuh ko tod kar ek ladki ko bachana. Biman sah ke kabje se baby urf juhi ko bachana. Aur thakur ke waha akele bhesh badal kar rehna aur usake aur biman sah ke mansubo par pani ferna. Thkur ke waha se komal ka pata lagana. Fir apne chacha ke waha jake dilawer ke gundo ko marna. Baby ke sath milkar dayna ke plan par pani ferna. Aur aap kehte ho ki Ravi ne hero ka koi kaam hi nahi kiya. Ye sab sayad ravi ne hi kiya tha. Fir aapne ek ilzam aur lagaya ki ravi puri story me chudayi karta dikha he to mere bhai Ravi is story ka HERO he aur ye story incest he to agar wo chudayi nahi karega to kya aap karoge story me chudayi. Batao jara mujhe.


AAPNE KAHA SAHAR ME AA KE USKI BAHAN KA RAAZ JAN NA, KYA WAKAI ME USNE KOMAL KA RAAZ JANA YA FIR KOMAL KHUD AISA CHAHTI THI ?


KYA BIMAN SHAH KE ADDE SE BABY KO RAVI NE BACHAYA YA PHIR YAHAN BHI KOMAL LEAD KAR RAHI THI


KOMAL SURUWAT SE HI IS KAHANI KO LEAD KAR RAHI HAI, USKA HI DIMAG ABHI TAK CHALTA AAYA HAI


JIS DAYNA KO KAAL TAK NAHI HARA PAYA KYA RAVI USE HARA PATA ?


WRITER SAHAB NE DAYNA KI JAGHA AB JOKER KO DIYA HAI, JO DAYNA SE BHI JADA POWERFUL HAI, KYA AAPKO LAGTA HAI JOKER KA SAMNA KARNA RAVI KE BAS KI BAAT HAI..... NAHI !!!


WRITER SAHAB KO KOMAL KI WAPSI KARNI HOGI, BHALE HI WRITER SAHAB REEMA KO KOMAL JAGHA DENE KI SOCH RAHE HAI LEKIN WO JANTE HAIN KOMAL TO KOMAL HAI, IS KAHANI KA ASLI HERO KOMAL HAI


AUR JOKER KO KHATM KARNE KE LIYA KOMAL KO AANA HI HOGA
 
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AAPNE KAHA SAHAR ME AA KE USKI BAHAN KA RAAZ JAN NA, KYA WAKAI ME USNE KOMAL KA RAAZ JANA YA FIR KOMAL KHUD AISA CHAHTI THI ?


KYA BIMAN SHAH KE ADDE SE BABY KO RAVI NE BACHAYA YA PHIR YAHAN BHI KOMAL LEAD KAR RAHI THI


KOMAL SURUWAT SE HI IS KAHANI KO LEAD KAR RAHI HAI, USKA HI DIMAG ABHI TAK CHALTA AAYA HAI


JIS DAYNA KO KAAL TAK NAHI HARA PAYA KYA RAVI USE HARA PATA ?


WRITER SAHAB NE DAYNA KI JAGHA AB JOKER KO DIYA HAI, JO DAYNA SE BHI JADA POWERFUL HAI, KYA AAPKO LAGTA HAI JOKER KA SAMNA KARNA RAVI KE BAS KI BAAT HAI..... NAHI !!!


WRITER SAHAB KO KOMAL KI WAPSI KARNI HOGI, BHALE HI WRITER SAHAB REEMA KO KOMAL JAGHA DENE KI SOCH RAHE HAI LEKIN WO JANTE HAIN KOMAL TO KOMAL HAI, IS KAHANI KA ASLI HERO KOMAL HAI


AUR JOKER KO KHATM KARNE KE LIYA KOMAL KO AANA HI HOGA
To mere bhai isase hero ke ahmiyat to kam nahi ho jati he na. Kisi bhi film ya story ko utha kar dekh lo hero kabhi akela nahi hota humesha usake sath uska koi dost ya premika ya pariwar ya koi power ya vardan deta he. Mujhe koi ek aisi story ya film bata do jisame hero ne bina kisi ki madad ke ya fir bina kisi ki power ke apne dusmano ko mara ho ya haraya ho. Yaha tak ki jis hero ka aapne naam dharan kiya hua he usane bhibkhud apne liye ek powerful suit ka avishkaar kiya tha. Tabhi wo hero bana warna usase pehle wo sirf ek hatyaro ko supply karne wala bussiness man tha.
 

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To mere bhai isase hero ke ahmiyat to kam nahi ho jati he na. Kisi bhi film ya story ko utha kar dekh lo hero kabhi akela nahi hota humesha usake sath uska koi dost ya premika ya pariwar ya koi power ya vardan deta he. Mujhe koi ek aisi story ya film bata do jisame hero ne bina kisi ki madad ke ya fir bina kisi ki power ke apne dusmano ko mara ho ya haraya ho. Yaha tak ki jis hero ka aapne naam dharan kiya hua he usane bhibkhud apne liye ek powerful suit ka avishkaar kiya tha. Tabhi wo hero bana warna usase pehle wo sirf ek hatyaro ko supply karne wala bussiness man tha.
BHAI APNE TONY SIR JIKRA KAR KE TO DIL KHUSH KAR DIYA, BAHOT BAHOT SUKRIYA

WAISE AAPKO BATA DOON KE TONY SIR KA SUIT JO HAI WO SARKARI TOHFA HAI, IS SUIT SE TONY SIR KA KOI LENA DENA NAHI HAI.....HAI NA !!!!
 
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AAPNE KAHA SAHAR ME AA KE USKI BAHAN KA RAAZ JAN NA, KYA WAKAI ME USNE KOMAL KA RAAZ JANA YA FIR KOMAL KHUD AISA CHAHTI THI ?


KYA BIMAN SHAH KE ADDE SE BABY KO RAVI NE BACHAYA YA PHIR YAHAN BHI KOMAL LEAD KAR RAHI THI


KOMAL SURUWAT SE HI IS KAHANI KO LEAD KAR RAHI HAI, USKA HI DIMAG ABHI TAK CHALTA AAYA HAI


JIS DAYNA KO KAAL TAK NAHI HARA PAYA KYA RAVI USE HARA PATA ?


WRITER SAHAB NE DAYNA KI JAGHA AB JOKER KO DIYA HAI, JO DAYNA SE BHI JADA POWERFUL HAI, KYA AAPKO LAGTA HAI JOKER KA SAMNA KARNA RAVI KE BAS KI BAAT HAI..... NAHI !!!


WRITER SAHAB KO KOMAL KI WAPSI KARNI HOGI, BHALE HI WRITER SAHAB REEMA KO KOMAL JAGHA DENE KI SOCH RAHE HAI LEKIN WO JANTE HAIN KOMAL TO KOMAL HAI, IS KAHANI KA ASLI HERO KOMAL HAI


AUR JOKER KO KHATM KARNE KE LIYA KOMAL KO AANA HI HOGA

bhai yar.. ik bat toh app samaz hi gye ho.. meri story ki hero ravi kabhi tha hi nai.. muze komal ka chracter pasand hai .. suru se hi.. jab mane avi bhai ki story read ki.. mane kabhi apne moh se yeh nai bola ke ravi hi main hero hai..

es story ke hero or heroin komal hai.. har reader yahi chahta hai.. ke story ka hero ik mard ho.. lekin mere liye .. komal hi sab kuch hai.. voh meri kalpana hai.. meri kalpanik dunia me.. voh meri premika hai.. me uske bina adhura hu..

mane yeh bat tabhi kisi ko nai batai.. kyu ki sab ravi ko hero mante hain.. kyu ki ham mard apni ego ko satisfied karna chahte hain.. ham aurat ko samaz me koi veshas sthan nai dete... hame lagta hai.. ke auratian kabhi hamse agge nai nikal sakti..

app behad chalak ho.. muze mazbor kar diya.. ke me khud yeh bat kahu.. ke ravi hero nai hai.. balki voh kabhi hero tha hi nai..

es kahani ko suru se leker abh tak komal lead kar rehi hai.. apke dimag ko manna padega..

but yar apko chahe bura lage ya nai.. yeh story dusri stories se alag hai.. or meri hero komal hai..

jaruri nai ke har story me mard hi sab kuch ho.. meri story me .. ik ladki hero bhi hai or heroin bhi...

abh yeh apke uper hai.. ke app or baki sab.. apni mardo wali ego ko ik traf rakh.. mera sath dete ho.. ya phir muze bar bar yahi kahuge.. ke ravi kamzor hai .. ravi bevkuf hai.. but me .. komal ko lead hero ke roop me darsa reha hu..

but yeh alag bat hai ke yeh sirf apko ehsas hua.. or kisi ko nai.. sorry agar mane kuch galat bola ho.. but app apni jagah thik ho.. par me bhi galat nai hu.. komal hi real hero hai.. ravi toh bus uska sath de reha hai... yeh baki sab se alag hai.. kyu ki alag hai.. tabhi toh pichle 4 salo se chal rehi hai.. varna kab ki khatam ho jati..

agla update ajj rat ko dunga... app sath bane rehna...
 

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bhai yar.. ik bat toh app samaz hi gye ho.. meri story ki hero ravi kabhi tha hi nai.. muze komal ka chracter pasand hai .. suru se hi.. jab mane avi bhai ki story read ki.. mane kabhi apne moh se yeh nai bola ke ravi hi main hero hai..

es story ke hero or heroin komal hai.. har reader yahi chahta hai.. ke story ka hero ik mard ho.. lekin mere liye .. komal hi sab kuch hai.. voh meri kalpana hai.. meri kalpanik dunia me.. voh meri premika hai.. me uske bina adhura hu..

mane yeh bat tabhi kisi ko nai batai.. kyu ki sab ravi ko hero mante hain.. kyu ki ham mard apni ego ko satisfied karna chahte hain.. ham aurat ko samaz me koi veshas sthan nai dete... hame lagta hai.. ke auratian kabhi hamse agge nai nikal sakti..

app behad chalak ho.. muze mazbor kar diya.. ke me khud yeh bat kahu.. ke ravi hero nai hai.. balki voh kabhi hero tha hi nai..

es kahani ko suru se leker abh tak komal lead kar rehi hai.. apke dimag ko manna padega..

but yar apko chahe bura lage ya nai.. yeh story dusri stories se alag hai.. or meri hero komal hai..

jaruri nai ke har story me mard hi sab kuch ho.. meri story me .. ik ladki hero bhi hai or heroin bhi...

abh yeh apke uper hai.. ke app or baki sab.. apni mardo wali ego ko ik traf rakh.. mera sath dete ho.. ya phir muze bar bar yahi kahuge.. ke ravi kamzor hai .. ravi bevkuf hai.. but me .. komal ko lead hero ke roop me darsa reha hu..

but yeh alag bat hai ke yeh sirf apko ehsas hua.. or kisi ko nai.. sorry agar mane kuch galat bola ho.. but app apni jagah thik ho.. par me bhi galat nai hu.. komal hi real hero hai.. ravi toh bus uska sath de reha hai... yeh baki sab se alag hai.. kyu ki alag hai.. tabhi toh pichle 4 salo se chal rehi hai.. varna kab ki khatam ho jati..

agla update ajj rat ko dunga... app sath bane rehna...
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mai iska jawab dene hi aaya tha ki komal hi is story ke liye main hai agar wo naa hoti to ye story itni naa chalti

Ab aap ne ye batake mera kaam khatam kardiya :D
 

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SORRY SIR, AGAR MERI BAAT BURA LAGA HO TO, MERA IRADA AAP KA YA KISI BHI READER KA DIL DUKHANA NAHI THA, MAIN KAFI SAMAY SE IS KAHANI SE JUDA HUA HOON, AUR MAIN AAPKI WRITING KA FAN BHI HOON


KAHANI KI SURUWAT RAVI SE HUI TO MUJHE YA SHAYAD SABHI READERS KO LAGA HOGA KE HERO RAVI HAI


MAIN BHI NARI SHAKTI KA SAMMAN KARTA HUN, MERE MANN ME KOMAL KO LEKAR KOI DUVIDHA YA BAIR NAHI HAI, KOMAL AAPKI KAHANI KA BAHOT HI AHAM KIRDAR HAI, MERE NAZARIYE SE KAHUN TO KOMAL HUKUM KA IKKA HAI


JAB KUNAL USKI PITH JALA RAHA THA TO BAHOT TAQLIF HUI THI MUJHE, SHAYAD RAVI JAISA PREMI IS BAAT KO BHUL GAYA HAI



UMMID KARTA HUN KOMAL KI WAPSI BAHOT JALD HOGI, MERI BAATON KA PLEASE BURA MAT MANIYEGA, YE BAS MERA NAZARIYA HAI IS KAHANI KO DEKHNE KA



APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYEGA, UPAR WALA AAPKO LAMBI UMRA AUR ACHHI SEHAT DE


AAPKA CHHOTA SA FAN

TONY.....
 
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