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spritemathews

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बहुत ही शानदार अपडेट दिया है!!!!!!
 

lover of darkness

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friends update kal rat ayega.. voh es 5th part ka akhri update hai , uske bad dekhte hain agge likhna hai ya nai... 6th part "Haweli-ik ankahi chahat " , abhi me soch reha hu , abhi ke liye story complete kar reha hu , es part ke jariye , muze khushi hai ke mane ik achi story likhi , or jise lakho logu ne beintha pyar diya , 9 saal pehle mane yeh socha nai tha , ke jo me suru kar reha hu , ese khatam karne me muse etne saal lagege , uff bahut lamba wakht beet gya , or me un lakho logu ko shukriya kehna chahta hu , jinhonu etna pyar diya , es story ko etni mohhabat di , me hamesha mout se jeet kar vapis ata tha , kyu ik lambi bimari mere sath thi , es bimari ne bahut dard diya , us dard se rahat pane ke liye , ik din yu hi xossip site khul gai , dhere dhere vaha mane esi dunia ko anubhav kiya jo muze es samaz se bahut door le jata tha , ik fantasy world me , xossip site mere jaise lakho logu ki kalpana thi , hamari ik kalpanyion se bhari dunia , yaha ham dekhte hain , hamari dunia kaisi hai , agar samaz ke banaye nizam or kanun na hote , ik bar yu hi , stories read karte karte , meri akhan ik aisi story par ruk gai , ke pehle din se hi , us story se mohhabat ho gai , dhere dhere us writer ne apne pyar me aisa jakada ke , uske har update ki chahat si ho gai , uske likhne me ik kamal ki ada thi , abh me fas chuka tha xossip ke mayajaal me , kyu ki jis story ko me pyar karta tha , uske liye bar bar , din me kai bar , me xossip ke chakar katne laga , bus phir mane bhi writer banne ka socha , pehle socha choti si kahani likh dunga , kuch dino bad use khatam kar dunga , par dhere dhere jab likhna suru kiya , toh ik jaladbaji thi , es story ko end karna hai , likhte likhte muze adat si ho gai , kyu ki jab log replys dete the , toh aisa mehsus hota jaise me bahut acha likh reha hu , me bahut acha writer hu , halaki mane kabhi khud ko acha writer nai mana , or es story me hazaro kamyian bhi nikal ayegi , par phir bhi , mane pata nai kyu , yeh story likh di , abh piche palat kar dekhta hu , toh khud par hasta hu , yeh mane kya likh diya , or kyu likh diya , mere khyal se , har writer yahi sochta hai , jab voh khud ki likhi story ko read karta hoga.. shukriya sabhi dosto ka ...
 

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You're a very good writer you don't need to say this everybody who is reading this story knows it...and thanks for returning again... about the updates i don't like to give review in a hurry will write once this one is over... which means after next 2 updatesa
 

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friends update kal rat ayega.. voh es 5th part ka akhri update hai , uske bad dekhte hain agge likhna hai ya nai... 6th part "Haweli-ik ankahi chahat " , abhi me soch reha hu , abhi ke liye story complete kar reha hu , es part ke jariye , muze khushi hai ke mane ik achi story likhi , or jise lakho logu ne beintha pyar diya , 9 saal pehle mane yeh socha nai tha , ke jo me suru kar reha hu , ese khatam karne me muse etne saal lagege , uff bahut lamba wakht beet gya , or me un lakho logu ko shukriya kehna chahta hu , jinhonu etna pyar diya , es story ko etni mohhabat di , me hamesha mout se jeet kar vapis ata tha , kyu ik lambi bimari mere sath thi , es bimari ne bahut dard diya , us dard se rahat pane ke liye , ik din yu hi xossip site khul gai , dhere dhere vaha mane esi dunia ko anubhav kiya jo muze es samaz se bahut door le jata tha , ik fantasy world me , xossip site mere jaise lakho logu ki kalpana thi , hamari ik kalpanyion se bhari dunia , yaha ham dekhte hain , hamari dunia kaisi hai , agar samaz ke banaye nizam or kanun na hote , ik bar yu hi , stories read karte karte , meri akhan ik aisi story par ruk gai , ke pehle din se hi , us story se mohhabat ho gai , dhere dhere us writer ne apne pyar me aisa jakada ke , uske har update ki chahat si ho gai , uske likhne me ik kamal ki ada thi , abh me fas chuka tha xossip ke mayajaal me , kyu ki jis story ko me pyar karta tha , uske liye bar bar , din me kai bar , me xossip ke chakar katne laga , bus phir mane bhi writer banne ka socha , pehle socha choti si kahani likh dunga , kuch dino bad use khatam kar dunga , par dhere dhere jab likhna suru kiya , toh ik jaladbaji thi , es story ko end karna hai , likhte likhte muze adat si ho gai , kyu ki jab log replys dete the , toh aisa mehsus hota jaise me bahut acha likh reha hu , me bahut acha writer hu , halaki mane kabhi khud ko acha writer nai mana , or es story me hazaro kamyian bhi nikal ayegi , par phir bhi , mane pata nai kyu , yeh story likh di , abh piche palat kar dekhta hu , toh khud par hasta hu , yeh mane kya likh diya , or kyu likh diya , mere khyal se , har writer yahi sochta hai , jab voh khud ki likhi story ko read karta hoga.. shukriya sabhi dosto ka ...
Xossips par mai bhi esse hi aagaya tha phir aap ka story padha. Alag hi story fantasy tha issmai.. jaab waha par aadhura rehgaya bahut site mai pata lagaya kahi par bhi nahi aaye aap. U r the best writer.. chalo dukh such Saab aapk nai dekha ..phir aap yaha story pura karne phir sai aaye..thnks ..
Ummed Hai aap eesehi aaur bhi story likhe
 

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Brother is story ka 6th part v le ke ana
 

sorbobhuk

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kon aya tha komal ya rema...?


abh agge:-


ravi apne ghutno ke bal niche betha hua tha ,
voh chahta toh apne devil roop me a jata , par uski soch , uski yadian , bus or bus uski pyari , shararti or beintha khubsurat behan rema par hi khoyi hui thi , uski yadion me use rema hi dikhai de rehi thi , use voh prem bhare pal yad a rehe the , jab voh or rema ik hue the , voh gaon ka tuta phota zopda , uska dhua udate chilam ke kash khichna , rema ka use vasna ke sagar me dub kar use apni shararti akhon se dekhna , uske lal ras bhare hontho ki voh katil muskan , or phir dono ka prem karna ,


ravi kabhi kabhi sochta ke usne voh sab kyu kiya , apni behan se prem karna , uff shyad tab use yeh gyat bhi nai tha , ke rema se uska prem karna pehle likha ja chuka tha , rema pichle janam me uski sagi behan thi , es jadugarni ne use utha liya tha ,
or jab tamas(khushi) ke sath rema vapis pari log me ayi thi , tab shyad kisi ko bhi yeh yad nai tha ke rema pari log ki malika thi , par pari log me sabko laga rema bus khushi ki dost hai ,


uff pehli bar jab rema or prince ki nazarian apas me mili thi , tab rema dil hi dil me prince ko apna sab kuch man bethi thi , pari log me rehte hue voh chup chup kar prince ko dekhti rehti , voh man hi man kai sapne sanjoye ja rehi thi apne or prince ke bare me , phir ik din rema ko yeh pata chala ke prince toh malika ruhi ko hi prem karte hain , yeh bat rema ko khushi ne hi batayi thi , rema ka pyar adhura reh gya , voh akhri jung me apne pyar ko bachana chahti thi , usne suhana ko mar diya , suhana or rema ki akhri ladai etni byank thi ke use byan kar pana namumkin hoga , rema ne voh jung jeet li , par uski maa ne use mar diya , lekin es janam me usne hi sabse pehle apne bhai ka prem paya , shyad rema ko abh sab yad a gya tha , shyad use abh bhi kuch yad nai tha ,


"bhyiaaa.." ravi ke kano me ik awaz gunj uthi , jab voh lagatar rema ke bare me hi sochte ja reha tha ,


"komall.." ravi ne rema ki yadion par viram lagate hue akhan band kar man hi man bola ,


"bhyiaa , muze anna hoga , kahi joker apko mar na de .." komal ne door usi balkoni me khade behad dard bhari awaz me bola , uski bhi akhan band thi or thodi thodi nami thi akhon me ,


"naii , tum mat anna , pls komal , muze kuch nai hoga , me etni asani se nai mar saktaa... " ravi ne vaise hi akhan band kiye bola ,


"par , bhyiaa.."


"par-var kuch nai , mane ik plan bana liya hai , bus vaise hi chalne do , me or khushi sab dekh lenge , tum mat anna , plss , tum jab tak es jung se door ho , tab tak hi ham jeet sakte hain.." ravi ne vaise hi akhan band kiye bola ,


"jii bhyiaa..." komal ne etna bol apni akhon ko khol diya or samne ho rehi ladai ko door se hi dekhne lagi ,


voh nakabposh aurat abh bechain ho rehi thi , use abh vishwas ho gya tha , ke komal abh nai ayegi , use samaz a gya tha , ke ravi ko dard dena hoga tabhi komal bhagti hui ayegi , usne joker ko kuch ishara kiya , usne 3 tak gin liya tha , abh sabki nazarian bus joker par thi ,


"ravii , tera khel khatam... ahaha.." joker ne beintha haste hue , us teer ko kaman se chod diya , jo lal roshni se tez tez chamak reha tha ,


"naiii.." suhana or baby ki chekh nikal gai , un dono ne apni akhon ko band kar liya ,


"aaaayeeeeiiiiiiii ..." ik tez chekh us shant vatavaran me gunj uthi , voh chekh etni dardnak or uchi thi ke jungle se panchi bhi us chekh ko sun asman me udne lage ,


"deeddiiii.." ravi ke moh se ik tez awaz nikali or koi uski baho me lehrata hua gir gya , yeh or koi nai , uski badi behan rekha thi ,


hua yeh tha , jab joker ne apni kaman se teer choda , tab rekha , khushi ke agge khadi thi , par uski nazaian bus apne bhai par hi jami hui thi ,
voh ik ik pal yad kar rehi rhi thi , jo usne apne bhai ke sath bitaya tha , use apni beti fari ki chinta thi ,voh nai chahti thi , ke uski beti ke sar se baap ka saya uthe , usne ik antim faisla le liya , or voh akh japakne se bhi tez , apne bhai ke agge pahunch gai , jis teer par ravi ka nam likha tha abh voh teer rekha ke pet me ghus chuka tha , or use barso ke aseem dard se abh mukti mil rehi thi , uske jeevan ka maksad abh pora ho chuka tha , voh janti thi , uski beti abh khush rehegi , uske papa use bahut khushyian denge , uske pas etni sari maa bhi thi , rekha marne se pehle apne insani roop me a chuki thi ,


"deeddiii , kyuuu akhirr kyuuu ..." ravi ne apni behan rekha ke chehre ko beintha chumte hue bola , uski akhon me asnu the ,


"bhaaiii , m..mm...e..rrriii.. bb...beettiii .." rekha ne akhon me asnu bharte hue apne antim palu ko mehsus karte hue behad dard me bola , uske chehre par aseem dard ke bhav the ,


"me hamari beti ko khush rakhugaa , deediii apko kuch nai hogaa (rote hue) , deddiii ,dediii , uthoo naa .." ravi beintha dard me duba rote hue , apni behan rekha ko gale lagaye bol reha tha , par rekha mar chuki thi , uski atma hi jinda thi , voh atma bhi abh es sunsar se kahi door ja chuki thi , abh ravi ke hath khali the , uske hatho me kuch nai tha , par uski akhon me ik agg thi , use badla lena tha ,


"ohhhh ahhhh , es bevkuf ladki ne hame dhoka diya ..." abhi voh nakabposh aurat etna hi boli thi , ravi ne uski gardan ko ik hath se jakad liya , ravi ka hath abh agg ki trah garam tapne laga tha ,


door khade joker ne ik or teer ravi ko marna chaha , par tabhi uske samne voh a gai , voh thi remaa , rema ne ate hi joker ko apne lal jadui baalo me jakad liya or jor se chilayii.."komaaallllll.."


tabhi ika ik komal vaha pahunch gai , rema ne komal ko voh shetani khanjar diya , jo rema ko uski maa ne mara tha , komal voh kanjar hath me pakade joker ke samne a gai ,


"nech , papi , abh tera akhri wakht a gya haii .." etna bol komal ne voh kanjar , joker ke seene me utar diya , joker ki mout bus komal ke hathion hi ho sakti thi , par kyu ,


"ahhhhhh..." joker dard se tadafne laga , uske badan se dhua uthne laga or dekhte hi dekhte uska pora jism jal kar rakh ho gya ,
abh bus voh nakabposh aurat hi bachi thi , ya phir koi or ,


"dekhaaa , tune ghatiyaa auratt ..." ravi ne apne hath ki pakad or mazbot karte hue behad gusse bhari awaz me us nakabposh aurat ko bola , jiska chehra toh tha hi nai , voh ik parchayi thi , ik kali parchayiiii


"mane toh dekh liyaa , ahhh abh tum bhi dekhooo..." etna bol voh nakabposh aurat vaha se gyab hoker thoda door khadi ho gaii , abh jung thi , ravi or uske pyar ki or us shetiani nakabposh aurat ki ,



ravi ne us nakabposh aurat ko dekha , uske sath , komal , baby , suhana , khushi , rema , lara or elizabeth , sab khadi thi , es bar uske sabhi chahne wale uske sath the , uske liye marne ko bhi tyar the , abh faisla hona tha , yeh antim ladai ring jeet jati hai ya ravi or uska prem ,


"bhyiiaaa rukoo , ese me hi marugii , maa , kyu akhirr kyuuuu , apne hi muze mara tha , kyuu maa , agar marna hi tha , toh phir muze pal kar bada kyu kiyaa , kyuu maaaa , apni sabse pyari beti ko hi mar diyaa ..." rema ne un sabse agge akar , apni maa ,us nakabposh aurat ki akhon me dekhte hue behad dard bhari awaz me bola , us aurat ki akhan abh lal roshni me chamak rehi thi , ring ki aseem kali takat us aurat ke pas thi ,


"dhokaaa , tumne dhoka diya apni maa ko , mane tume aseem takat di , yeh kabhi na mar sakne wali takat , mane tume amar bana diya , par , par tumne , ohhhuuu , tumne apne es bhai ko chunaa , muze akela chod diya , mane tume pari log se utha kar tumari jaan bachayi , varna malika suhana tumari bhi bali de deti .." voh nakabposh aurat abhi bol hi rehi thi ke rema bech me hi bol padhi ,



"kyaaaa , apne muze mehal se uthaya tha..." rema ko jaise vishwas nai ho reha tha ,


"han remaa , yeh tumari maa nai thi , tum prince ki badi behan ho , es chalak jadugarni ne tume dhoke se utha liya , yeh raja abun or malika sona se badla lena chahti thi , yeh shetian hai , yeh ik dyan hai .." khushi ne rema ke kande par hath rakh , behad gusse bhari awaz me bola ,


"rema , meri bachii , voh..."


"shhhh , me apki beti hu ya naiii , batao , varna sab kuch jala kar rakh kar dungii..." rema ne behad gusse me bola , uske lal jadui baal bhi charo traf uddne lage , voh agg ki tez uthti lapto jaise parteet ho rehe the ,


"naiii , tum meri beti nai ho , han , han , tum es bevkuf prince ki behan ho , par mane tume ik nayi jindgi di hai.." voh nakabposh aurat rema ke behad kareeb akar boli ,


"nayi jindgi , apne mera bhai muzse cheen liya , apne mera bachpan muzse cheen liya , muze ik shetian bana diya , yeh sab , yeh sab , app ne apna badla lene ke liye kiyaa , abh me apko jinda nai chodugii ..." rema ne behad dard or gusse bhari awaz me bola ,


"heehee , beti , tum muze nai mar sakti , yeh ring abh bhi mere hath me hai , or tum esko utar bhi nai sakti ho , jab tak meri khud ki icha na ho ..." voh nakabposh aurat haste hue abhi etna hi boli thi ke rema ne uske seene par dono hath mar diye , voh aurat uddte hue door baraf par ja giri ,


"remmaaa .." us aurat ne khade hote hi , kuch mantra padh , ik magic ball utpan kiya or use rema ki traf chod diyaa ...


voh magic ball behad tez raftar se rema ki traf badta gya or akhir ik jordar cheekh vaha gunj uthi ,


"ayyyiieeeeeeeeee maaaaaa..." ik ladki tez chekh marti niche gir gaiii ,


voh aurat herian reh gai , kyu ki rema sahi salamat khadi thi , akhir kaise , asal me hua yeh tha , jab voh magic ball jo apne ander anat bijli samaye rema ke seene se takrane wali thi , tabhi voh bhag kar rema ke agge a gai ,


"naiiiiiiii.." komal jor se chekh marte hue boli ,


akhir kon thi voh , jisne rema ke agge akar apni jaan de di thi , vaise bhi rema us lal stone ke rehte amar thi , par usne yeh sab kyu kiya , eske piche kya raz tha ,


dusri traf.....


katlyn behad bechain hoker , behad gam me , behad udas , ghar ke hall me chakar kate ja rehi thi , uske pas hi sofe par fari bethi hui thi , jo apni maa kat ke es trah udas rehne par muskraye ja rehi thi , use pata tha , uski mom uske papa ko yad kar rehi hai , use pata tha , uski mom uske papa ko milne ke liye ander hi ander tadaf rehi thi , or fari ka sochna sahi bhi tha , kat sach me ravi ko yad kar rehi thi , use ravi ki reh reh kar yad a rehi thi ,


"ufff , mera man use yad kar reha , kya karu , par usne galti bhi toh ki , uff ravi , tum meri bat kyu nai sunte , voh lal balo wali ladki kitni byank thi , meri bachi behosh ho gai thi , or ravi meri galti nikal reha , mane jo kiya sahi kiya , par mera dil nai lag reha , agar me vaha hoti , voh muze chum leta , ufff kitna acha lagta hai uske sath , jab voh muze satata hai , umm , me usse bat karugi , mane use kitna dard diya , mane apne pyar ko dard diya...." kat bus yahi sochti ja rehi thi , use ravi ki yad a rehi thi , voh pichle 2 ghanto se lagatar ghar ke hall me ehder se oder , bus chalte ja rehi , akhir yahi toh pyar hai ,


"triiinnggggg triiinnngggggggg.." darvaje ki door bell baji , kat ne bell ki awaz suni or darvaje ki traf bad gai , kat ne darvaja khola or samne khade shaksh ko dekh chonk gai ,


"tummmmm..." kat ne behad chonkte hue bola , kon tha voh jise dekh kat chonk gai thi , koi dushman tha ya koi dost tha....


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bahut badhiya update hai......
 

sorbobhuk

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Abh agge...


kat us insan ko dekh behad chonk gai thi , use vishwas nai ho reha tha , voh kuch der yu hi darvaje par khadi kuch sochti rehi , par tabhi us insan ki awaz ne kat ko sochu se bahar nikal liya ,


"kat , muze ander anne do , muze tumse bat karni hai..." voh bahar khada shakash etna bol ghar ke ander ghus gya , sofe par bethi fari us shakash ko dekh behad khush ho gai or bhag kar us insan ke gale lag gai , akhir kon tha voh ,


dusri traf....


behad andhere bhara sathan , jaha charo or bus andhera hi pasra hua tha , yaha roshni toh bus namatar hi thi , dekhne se yeh koi bahut purana room lag reha tha , jiski deeware bhi abh khokhli si hone lagi thi , room ke charo or bus andhera tha , ik ajeeb si shanti thi , or room ke bechu bech ik bada sa sofa tha , ya yu kehle ke ik bada sa singahsan tha , us par ik kala libas pehne ik shakash betha hua tha , yeh shakash koi or nai , balki kaal tha , kaal apne singahsan par betha , vansha jungle me ho rehi , us khukhar ladai ke bare me soch reha tha , yaha uska beta , burai ke khilaf lad reha tha , apne pyar ko pane ke liye lad reha tha , par kaal kya soch reha tha , kya kaal vaha jane ki soch reha tha , use bhi ladna tha , par voh ravi ka pita kab bana tha , or sabse bada raz , voh vampire kaise bana tha , akhir kon tha kaal , or ravi se uska kya rishta tha ,


"kya soch rehe ho app , hame kab jana hai vaha..." ik kala libas dharan kiye aurat ne kaal ke samne akar uski traf dekhte hue bola , jaise voh jung me jane ko betab thi ,


"shaya , me apne bete ke bare me soch reha hu , us rehnuma se voh kaise jeet payega , voh behad chalak jadugarni hai ..." kaal ne us nakabposh aurat ke bare me sochte hue bola , jaise kaal use janta tha ,


"hmm , kya app rehnuma ko jante ho , agar app jante ho , toh apko yeh pata hoga , use kaise khatam karna hai , phir toh behad asani hogi ravi ko..." abhi shaya etna hi boli thi ke kaal ne uski bat ko katt diya , shaya thodi herian si ho gai , voh khamoshi se kaal ki bat ko sunne lagi , use bhi janna tha rehnuma ke bare me , us nakabposh aurat ke bare me ,


"malika , me use janta hu , par use mara nai ja sakta , us mahashakti ke bina rehnuma ka ant hona namumkin hai , agar ravi ko us aurat ka ant karna hai toh use maha shakti ko pana hi hoga..." kaal ne behad ghambir or bhari awaz me bola ,


"maha shakti , or rehnuma kon hai or voh kyu ayi hai es prithvi par , or ravi se voh kya chahti hai.." shaya thodi bechaini me boli , voh sab janna chahti thi , uski utsukta badhti ja rehi thi ,


"shaya , yeh bat pari log ki hai , pari log me pehle sabhi mil kar rehte the , pariyan or jadugar ik sath , vaha behad khushhali thi , koi pap nai tha , par ik bar ik bat ko leker behas chid gai , ik pari me or ik jadugarni me ..." kaal abhi bol hi reha tha ke shaya apni utsukta vash bech me bol padhi ,


"behas , kis bat ko leker..."


"hnm , voh behas thi , kon sabse shaktishali hai , kon sabse acha jadu janta hai , or yeh behas do logu se suru hoker , pore pari log me phail gai , abh pari log ke asli nivasi or jadugar apas me ladne jagadne lage , tabh raja abun behad preshan ho gye , voh samaz nai pa rehe voh kya kare , akhir kuch din sochne ke bad unhonu use milne ke liye bulava behja ..." kaal ne us wakht ko yad karte hue bola ,


"kise , ohh , rehnuma ko..." shaya thodi chonk kar boli ,


"han , rehnuma hi jadugaru me sabse badi or sabse shaktishali thi , raja abun ke bulane par voh bhi pal bhar me vaha pahunch gai , voh toh jaise esi pal ko yad kar rehi thi , jab voh raja abun ke mehal me pahunchi tab raja abun or malika sona , apne apne singhasano par bethe hue the , rehnuma ne apna saar zuka raja abun ko apna pyar jataya or vahi pas me hi ik chote se singhasan par beth gai , uski nazar bar bar malika sona par ja rehi thi , uske man me beintha erkha ke bhav utpan ho rehe the , voh raja abun ke bolne ka intzar kar rehi thi..." kaal ne un palu ko yad karte hue behad udas or bhari awaz me bola , jaise voh us wakht vahi tha ,


"ohhh , kya bat hui sab me , me janna chahti hu..." shaya behad bechain ho rehi thi , voh sab janna chahti thi , suru se ant tak...


"toh suno..." kaal etna bol agge batane laga..


Flashback.....


raja abun or malika sona apne samne bethi jadugarni rehnuma ko dekh rehe the , jisne lal rang ka libas pehan rakha tha , voh behad khubsurat lag rehi thi , par uski khubsurti malika sona se kam hi thi , shyad esi bat ki erkha thi rehnuma ko ,


"rehnuma..." raja abun ne bat suru karte hue rehnuma ki akhon me dekhte hue bola ,


"jii prince , kaise yad kiya es choti si jadugarni ko..." rehnuma , raja abun ki khubsurat neli neli akhon me dekhte hue muskra kar boli , aisa lag reha tha jaise use raja abun se bahut prem tha ,


"rehnuma , han , apse ik kam tha , pichli kai sadyion se ham or app , mera matlab , pari log ke sare niwasi or jadugar , ik sath milkar , bahut khushi khushi reh rehe hain , par abh , abh muze dar hai , shyad , voh wakht ane wala hai , tum samaz rehi ho na.." raja abun ne thodi preshani bhari awaz me bola ,


"hmm , me samazti hu , app yahi soch rehe ho , kahi jung na ho jaye .." rehnuma behad muskrate hue boli ,


"han rehnuma , me yahi soch reha hu , agar pari log or jadugaro me jung hui toh bahut vinash hoga , or pora pari log tabah ho jayega..." raja abun or bhi preshan hoker bole ,


"han prince , par dekho na , abh toh bacha bacha apas me jidd kar reha hai , acha , app hi batao jadugar behtar hain ya app ki paryian..." rehnuma ne behad chalaki se bola ,


"ohh , tum bahut chalak ho rehnuma , tume nai lagta , eska koi hal nikalna chayie , koi toh rasta hoga hi..." abhi raja abun bol hi rehe the ke rehnuma bech me bol padhi ,


"ik rasta hai prince " rehnuma ne apne sathan se uthte hue raja abun ke pas akar bola ,


"kyaa..." es bar raja abun se pehle malika sona hi bol padhi ,


"hmm , dekho prince , agar app muzse shadi kar lo , toh shyad , jadugar or pari log ke logu me jo behas chal rehi hai , voh khatam ho jaye , apki or meri shadi hote hi , sab phirse apas me pyar se rehne lagege..." rehnuma ne behad muskrate hue bola ,


"kyaaaa , nai , aisa kabhi nai hoga , prince bus mere hain , me aisa kabhi nai hone dungi..." malika sona ne behad gusse me chekhte hue bola ,


"ohhh , malika sona , maf kariye , par me toh sabka bhala chahti hu , malika , me , me bus yahi chahti hu , ke sab milkar rahe , koi apas me lade na , pari log me sab khushi khushi ik sath rahe , or kya pata makila , dusri shadi se , es pari log ko apna waris mil jaye..." jadugarni rehnuma ne malika sona ki dukhti rag par hath rakhte hue bola , use pata tha , raja abun or malika sona bacha na hone ko leker bahut preshan the ,


"rehnumaaa , apni juban ko lagam do..." raja abun ne beintha gusse me bola , use malika sona se behad prem tha ,


"maf kariye prince , hamse galti ho gai , par prince , ham toh sachai hi bata rehe hain , ham apka or pore pari log ka acha hi chahte hain , prince app chahte ho na , ke pari log me phirse shanti phail jaye..." rehnuma ne behad dard bhari awaz me thoda nam akhon se bola ,


"ohh , rehnuma , han ham chahte hain , par , par ham sona se bahut prem karte hain , ik patni ka sathan , ham kisi or ko kaise de sakte hain , rehnuma , app jadugaro ki malika ho , app koi or rasta dund lo , app chaho toh sab jadugar shant ho sakte hain , app hi unko shant kar sakti ho , par jo app hamse mang rehi ho , voh kemat bahut jayda hai ..." raja abun ne behad udas awaz me bola ,


"prince , ham apse pyar karte hain , or apne prem ko pana buri bat nai hai , ham jadugaro ki malika , ham apse vada karte hain , agar app hamse shadi karo toh ham pari log se sare jadugaro ko leker , un andhero junglo me chale jayege , or hamare jadugar kabhi bhi apko preshan nai karege , kabhi pari log me nai ayege..." rehnuma ne raja abun ki akhon me akhan dal bola , use laga ke hazaro salo se uska jo sapna tha , abh voh pora hone wala hai ,


"rehnuma , hame kuch din ka wakht do , ham soch kar batayege..." raja abun ne kuch dino ki mohlat mangte hue bola ,


"jii prince , hame intzar rahega..." rehnuma muskrate hue etna boli or vaha se gyab ho gai ,


esi trah 7 din beet gye , raja abun ne malika sona se bat ki , par malika sona es bat se bilkul bhi sehmat nai thi , dhere dhere raja abun ne malika sona ko mana liya , par malika sona ne kuch sharatian rakhi thi , abh voh kya thi yeh toh agge hi pata chalna tha , akhir 7 din bad raja abun ne rehnuma ko bula liya , esbar raja abun akele the , voh malika sona ko preshan nai karna chahte the , kuch hi palo bad rehnuma vaha a gai , abh raja abun or jadugarni rehnuma akele the ,


"rehnuma , ham tumse shadi karne ko tyar hain , par uske liye , tume hamari ik sharat manni hogi..." raja abun ne thoda chintit hoker bola ,


"bolyie prince , ham sun rehe hain.." rehnuma behad khush hote hue boli ,


"rehnuma ham chahte hain , ke sare jadugar , un andhere junglo me chale jaye , hamari shadi gupt rahegi , kisi ko pata na chale ke hamne apse shadi ki hai , or akhri bat ham apse shadi karege ik aam insan ban kar , ham tab prince nai honge , bolo manzor hai..." raja abun ne apni sharat batate hue bola , use laga shyad rehnuma mana kar degi ,


"hame manzor hai , prince , hame apse prem hai , hame malika nai banna , ham bus apka prem chahte hain.." rehnuma behad dard bhari awaz me boli , vaise voh samaz chuki thi ke eske piche malika sona ka hath hai ,


eske bad rehnuma ne apne sare jadugaro ko andhere junglo me behj diya , naye asool banaye gye , na toh pari log se vaha koi ja sakta or na un junglo se koi pari log a sakta tha ,


raja abun ne apna vada nibhaya or rehnuma se shadi karli , raja abun kuch din rehnuma ke pas rehte or kuch din malika sona ke pas , akhir ik din rehnuma or raja abun nadi kinare bethe the tabhi rehnuma ne bataya ke voh maa banne wali hai , usne prince ko bola ke uske bache ko uske sare adhikar do , use singhasan par bithao , kyu ki malika sona ko koi bacha nai ho reha tha , esliye rehnuma janti thi , abh jalad hi sadyion bad koi jadugar pari log ka raja banega , or phir jadugar raj karege pari log par ,


par prince ne mana kar diya , voh nai chahte the , ke ik jadugar pari log ka raja bane , or dusra karan malika sona thi , usne pehle hi raja abun se vachan le liya tha , raja abun preshan ho gye the ,


rehnuma ne kai bar raja abun ko manane ki kossih ki , par raja abun mana karte rehe , jadugarni rehnuma ko es bat se behad gussa aya or voh raja abun se apne sare rishte tod junglo me chali gai hamesha hamesha ke liye , abh voh badla chahti thi malika sona se , kuch salo bad jab raja abun ko 2 judva betiyan hui toh unme se ik ko rehnuma chori utha kar le gai ,


raja abun es bat se behad gussa hue , voh pari log or un junglo ki hud par ruke or rehnuma se milne ke liye bulava behja par rehnuma ne milne se inkar kar diya , usne yeh sandesh behja ke agar raja abun en andhere junglo me aye toh unki beti ko voh mar degi , raja abun bebas or udas vapis pari log lot aye ,


jab pari log ki antim ladai hui , tab rehnuma ne malika suhana ka sath diya , ladai ke ant me apni beti rema ko dhoke se mar diya , lekin malika sona ne apni paviter shakti se jadugarni rehnuma ke sharir ko kaid kar liya , malika sona ne jadugarni rehnuma ki atma ko uske sharir se alag kar diya or uski atma ko rema duwara banai ring me kaid kar diya , abh rehnuma apna sharir or voh maha shakti pana chahti hai ,


jab seema ne us ring ko dharan kiya , tab rehnuma ki atma us ring se azad ho gai , ya rema ya suhana ne use azad kar diya ,
jab ravi or rema ki ladai hui or ravi mara gya (3part) , tab suhana ke apni icha se ring utarte hi rema ne voh ring rehnuma ko sonp di , abh rehnuma beintha shaktishali thi , use mar nai sakte par use kaid kar sakte hain , usi ring me , jo usne pehni hui hai , mahashakti ke bina rehnuma ko mar nai sakte ,


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kaal ne pori kahani shaya ko suna di , shaya bhi abh chinta me thi , akhir ravi us nakabposh aurat yani ke rehnuma ko kaise rokega , kaal abh khamosh tha or shaya bhi....


dusri traf...


"tumari etni himet , abh me tume apna asli roop dikhauga , mera shaitani roop , me tume khatam kar dunga ghatiya aurat...." ravi ne behad gusse me akar apna shaitani devil wala roop apnate hue bola , par akhir us nakabposh aurat ke hatho mara kon tha , kya yeh uski chaal thi , par jo bhi ho , ravi abh beintha gusse me uski traf badh reha tha...


to be counited..... Note :- friends maf karna etna wakht update nai kar paya , meri mom ki death ho gai , me tut sa gya tha , me jis ladki ke sath rehta tha live in me , usse bhi rishta tut gya , meri usse shadi nai hui thi , par ham dono shadi karne wale the , uske bad jo yaha xf par meri dost bani , uski bhi pichle saal death ho gai , muze sambalne me thoda wakht laga , lekin abh me daily update dunga , ham milkar es story ko pora karege , es part ke end hote hi 5th part start kar dunga , abh agar app replys doge tabhi me 5th part ka sochuga , abhi ravi ke pita ka anna baki hai , or amtul bhai nayi id bana kar a jao ,apse bat karni hai , friends abh replys jarur dena agar app chahte hoke me daily update du , me kabhi zuth nai bolta hu , or abh me arrange marriage kar reha hu next month , shukriya , me janta hu app meri bation ko mehsus kar pauge ke mane pichle 3 saal kitne dard me nikale ...abh daily ya ik din chod kar update aya karega....
bahut badhiya update hai........akhirkar jadugarni or malika sona ke bich kya dusmani thi y e paata chala...........or or koun mara geya dekhte hai.......or ha hume sirf 5 part hi nhi is story ke plote ke sari part chahiye.........main bangladesh se hoon ......main hindi nhi janta tha fir maine xossip par pahli baar life me first time hindi section me inter hua wo bhi apki thread per......apki story se hinddi story ke gaari chalu hui thi..........3 saal jab story complete nhi hua to mujhe bhi dukh hua ki life ke pehli story incomplete reh geyi hai......or aaj jab apko fir dekha to mujhe kitni khushi hui bata nhi sackta........iss story ke saari saari part hum sab reader padhna chahte hai......or intejer kare kuch din jab kuch din update denge to reader bhi aahishta aahista padhta jaayega.........
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friends update kal ayega .. voh fight scene hai toh adha hi likh paya or pics bhi dund kar add karni hai... app chinta mat karna abh me free hu , toh update jarur aya karega , abh story complete karke hi jauga ,

vaise app konse browser app ko use karte ho xf chalane ke liye pls muze batana , me jab bhi log in hota hu , site behad dhemi ho jati hai , kitna wakht toh page hi nai open hota , muze jarur batana me konsa app use karu xf chalane ke liye , pm mat karna yahi bata dena ...
google chorome use karke dekhna...........mujjhe to koi problem nhi hota kabhi
 
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