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Abhi

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:thanks: bhai.. bhai joker ko abhi pata nai hai.. map me kya chipa hai.. jiske liye dyana pagal thi..

yeh toh map milne ke bad hi pata chalega.. and us diary ka flashback bhi jalad khulega.. agar app log support karte rehe... yeh kahani behad lambi hai.. abhi eska 3rd part chal reha hai.. eske 7 part soche hain... dekhte hain..kitne complete kar pata hu...
Itni lambi story
 

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Itni lambi story
Koi to rok lo isko kahin adhuri na rah jaye waise kamaal ka likhte hain jaise original writer likhta tha lagta hi nahi koi aur likh raha aur khusi meri manpasnd hai
 

lover of darkness

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Koi to rok lo isko kahin adhuri na rah jaye waise kamaal ka likhte hain jaise original writer likhta tha lagta hi nahi koi aur likh raha aur khusi meri manpasnd hai
bhai es story ka original writer me hi hu..xossip close hone se pehle mane love bhai or amtul bhai ko whats up number diya tha.. hamara ik group bhi hai.. love bhai or amtul bhai.. ke kehne par hi yeh story mane restart ki hai.. es story ka writer me hi hu.. aisa mat kaho ke original writer jaisa hu... haha.. or story ke 7 part soche hain.. pata nai kitne complete kar pau..
 

spritemathews

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It’s really
bhai es story ka original writer me hi hu..xossip close hone se pehle mane love bhai or amtul bhai ko whats up number diya tha.. hamara ik group bhi hai.. love bhai or amtul bhai.. ke kehne par hi yeh story mane restart ki hai.. es story ka writer me hi hu.. aisa mat kaho ke original writer jaisa hu... haha.. or story ke 7 part soche hain.. pata nai kitne complete kar pau..
good to see the story from you people kudos to you people
 

Love 1994

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Koi to rok lo isko kahin adhuri na rah jaye waise kamaal ka likhte hain jaise original writer likhta tha lagta hi nahi koi aur likh raha aur khusi meri manpasnd hai
:slap: original writer hi hai

Tabhi to kamal ka likhte hai:D
 

lover of darkness

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update-23

Abh Agge..

ravi kuch der khushi ke khubsurat chehre ko dekhta reha or phir bola ,

"kya me puch sakta hu , yeh sab kya hai , me nai janta tha , tum etni kamzor hogi.." ravi ne thoda gusse me bola ,

" ravi me kamzor nai thi , par pichle 2 dino se mane jo dekha or mehsus kiya , me , me kaise bhul jati.." khushi ne rote hue bola ,

"matlab , ohh meri jaan , abh mat daro , tum bolo na.." ravi ne thoda ghambir hoker pucha ,

"ravi , mane apni akhon se ik darinde ko dekha hai , me behad dar gai thi , voh mar dega muze..." khushi ne or bhi rote hue bola ,

"kon tha voh.."

"mera bhai kunal , voh janwar hai ravi , janwar , voh muze mar dega.."

"shhh , me hu na , tum befiker ho jao , abh batao kya dekha tumne.." ravi ne khushi ko apni bahu me bhar kar bola ,

"ravi 3 din pehle , mane use bola ke ham shadi kar lete hain , lekin usne mana kar diya , voh bus mera jism nochna chahta tha , mane use mana kar diya , ravi , us pal muze apni galti ka ehsas hua , ke mane kya kho diya , us rat mane bahut sharab pi .." khushi ne asnu bahate hue bola ,

"bhul jao sab , mane tume kab ka maf kar diya , akhir tumne apne pyar ke liye kiya tha.."

"nai ravi voh pyar nai tha , voh vehshi darinda hai , voh insan nai hai , ravi , voh muze mar dega , pls , muze bacha lo , kahi door le chalo.." khushi ne us khofnak wakht ko yad kar rote hue bola ,

"kya kiya usne , agar usne tume chua bhi toh me uski sanse uske seene se nikal dunga.." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"ravi me nai bata sakti , me us khofnak wakht ko yad nai karna chahti..."

"pls bata do , muze dar sa lag reha hai.." ravi ne khushi ka hath apne hathion me leker bola ,

"ravi 2 din pehle rat ko 8 baje mera bhai behad nashe me mere room me aya , usne behad sharab pi thi , uski akhen nashe me churr thi , or phir.."

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"bhyia app yaha , mane bola na apko , muze apse koi bat nai karni.." khushi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"mat kar bat muzse , bus apni yeh katil jawani muze sonp de , tuze pane ke liye , mane bahut sal barbad kiye hain , abh tu bach nai sakti muzse.." kunal ne khushi ki traf badte hue bola ,

"bhyia , yehh , yeh , app kya bol rehe ho , me apki behan hu , bhai aisa mat karo..." khushi ne rote hue bola ,

"haha , sali , jab muzse ishq lada rehi thi , tab meri behan nai thi kya , khushu , bus ik bar karne de , phir tuze kabhi preshan nai karuga.." kunal ne khushi ke behad karib pahunch kar bola ,

"toh shadi kar lo muzse , varna hath mat lagana muze.." khushi ne agg ugalti akhon se bola ,

"shadi , haha , sali , me kya har ladki se shadi karta phiru , muze har roz ik nayi ladki chahyie , acha , ehh meri bat sun , tuze bilkul bhi dard nai hoga , vaise bhi yeh bat kisi ko nai pata chalegi , me tume bahut maza dunga.." kunal ne khushi ke baalo ki khushbu lete hue bola ,

"door hat kutte , thuu , muze ghin ati hai , mane tuz jaise insan se pyar kiya , ravi ko dhoka diya , kash ke voh jinda hota , toh teri etni himet na hoti , mere pas anne ki.." khushi gusse se bol room se bahar jane lagi ,

"ahhhhhh , us kamine ka nam bhi kaise liya , abh tuze koi nai bacha sakta.." kunal ne behad gusse me bola , or khushi ko piche se baalo se pakad , apni traf khich liya , kunal jabardasti uski gardan ko chumne laga ,

"ahhhhh maa , pita jii , bachao muze , raviii , bachao muze , chod de kutte.." khushi ne dard se chekhte rote hue bola ,

"ravi , voh haramjada mar chuka hai , tu chal bed par , tu meri rakhel ban kar rehegi , samazi kutiya.." kunal ne khich kar do thapad khushi ko mar diye or use utha kar bed par patak diya ,

"nai , nai , muze chod do , me hath jodti hu , pls chod do muze.." khushi ne rote hue bola ,

"haha , har ladki tumari trah roti hai , chilati hai , muze behad maza ata hai , unka rape kar , unko me apne farmhouse me jinda gad deta hu , tume bhi mar kar vahi gad dunga..." kunal ki vehshi akhon me dekh khushi ander tak kamp gai ,

"pls , mat karo , chod do muze , pls.." khushi ne dar se kampte rote hue bola ,

"shhh shant , meri behan , shant ho jao , janti ho , kunal thakur se ajj tak , bus ik ladki bachi hai , voh hai komal , uff uska rasila badan , voh bhi bus tere karan , sali , kutiya , tune hi azad kiya tha use , us jaise maal ko chodne ka moka kho diya mane , abh tu uski bharpayi karegi , jab tak voh sali muze mil nai jati..." kunal ne khushi ko ik or thapad jad bed par gira uske uper lette hue bola ,

"ahhh kutte , tu komal ko kabhi nai pa sakega , uske saar par mere ravi ka hath hai , ahhhhh tu mera rape kar sakta hai , par muze zuka nai sakta , lut le meri ijajat ahhhhh , par tu na kabhi komal ko zuka paya tha or na kabhi muze zuka payega.." khushi ne roti hui akhon se gusse me bola ,

"sali , meri mardangi ko lalkarti hai , teri toh , tuze toh komal se jayda torture karuga , tu khud mere agge zuk kar , reham ki bhek mangegi.." kunal gusse se utha or apni pent ki belt nikal li ,

"le mar muze , par kutte me mar jaugi , par agar mera pyar ravi ke liye sacha hai , toh me mar jaugi par zukugi nai.." khushi ne muskrate hue bola ,

"ehhhhhhh sali ravi ka nam leti hai.." kunal gusse se khushi ko marne laga ,

kunal , kafi der tak khushi ko belt se marta reha , par khushi har dard sehti chup rehi , uski akh se ik katra asnu nai nikala tha , yeh dekh kunal ka gussa or bhi badh gya ,

"thak gye bhyia..." khushi ne thodi dard bhari awaz me bola ,

" ahhhhh " kunal gusse se chekha or pas hi table par padhe chaku se khushi ke dono hathion ki kalayion ko kat diya ,

"aeeiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii maaaaaaa .." khushi dard se chekhte hue boli , uska sar chakrane laga tha ,

"haha , abh me teri vahi halat karuga , jo mane komal ki ki thi , haha , teri pith pori jala dunga , phir khud tu zukegi mere agge.." kunal gusse se chekhta hua utha or khushi ka top khich kar fad diya ,

khushi ka khoon bahut beh chuka tha , uski akhen band hoti ja rehi thi , voh abh jayda virodh bhi nai kar rehi thi ,

kunal ne khushi ko pet ke bal lita diya , or uth kar ik tezab ki bottle utha laya ,

"bhagwan pls bacha lo.." khushi ne besudh halat me bola ,

abhi kunal ne bottle ka dhakan khola hi tha , ke kisi ne darvaja khatkata diya ,

"khushi beta darvaja kholu na..." yeh awaz thi thakuran sunita ki , jo uski badi maa thi ,

kunal ne apni maa ki awaz suni toh voh khushi ke kanu me bola ,

"kutyia agar mera nam tere hontho par aya toh , haweli me kisi ko jinda nai choduga , samazi , teri maa ko bhi mar dunga.." kunal etna bol room ki khidki se bhag gya ,

khushi ki akhon se asnu behne lage , phir use pata hi na chala kab voh behosh ho gai , jab uski akh khuli , tab voh hospital me thi ,

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khushi jab apni beeti jindgi ke bare me bata rehi thi , ravi ki akhon me ik gussa sa badhta ja reha tha , phir ika ik uski akhon se asnu behne lage ,

ravi ne khushi ko apni bahu me bhar liya , or use shant karne laga , voh pyar se uske baal sehlate ja reha tha ,

"khushi bus shant ho jao , abh tum mere pas ho , jab tak me jinda hu , tume koi chuu bhi nai sakta.." ravi ne khushi ke mathe ko chum kar bola ,

"ravi , pls muze , kahi door le chalo , voh , voh mar dega muze , ahhh mera saar , ravi , tum muze bhaga kar le chalo , mar dega , voh , voh mar dega muze..." khushi ne phir se rote hue bola ,

"mere pas ik plan hai .."

"kya.."

"tum meri bat dyan se suno , tum meri behan rema ke collage me admission le lo , or vahi hostel me rehna , es se do fiyade honge , tum kunal se mehfoz rahugi , or me uska kissa khatam kar dunga , bad me ham shadi kar lenge.."

"ohh bahut acha plan hai , pls abh muzse door mat jana.." khushi ne ravi ko apne gale lagate hue bola ,

"nai houga , tum bus agge ki jindgi ke bare me socho , abh tum meri ho , bus kabhi dhoka mat dena , varna es bar me kabhi vapis nai ayuga..." ravi ne khushi ki akhon me dekh kar bola ,

"nai dungi , ik bar yeh galti karli , abh nai karugi , acha , muze komal se milna hai , me us pyar ki murat se milna chahti hu , jisne bus tumare liye etna kuch saha , jante ho us rat kya hua tha.." khushi ne thoda dardbhari awaz me bola ,


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khushi apne bhai ke tehkhane se nikalne ke bad dabe panv ander ghus gai , voh dekhna chahti thi , uska bhai bar bar vaha kyu jata hai ,

jab khushi ne samne dekha toh uski rooh tak kamp gai ,

khushi ne dekha , ik ladki lohe ki janjero me jakdi hui thi , uske hath bande hue the , usne ik short jeen pehni hui thi or uske chuchu ko matar ik kali bra ne dhaka hua tha ,

uska chehra pora chilla hua tha , honth fate hue the , baal bhikere hue the , uski gardan , uske kandu par choto ke nishan the , pora seena lahu se lathpath tha , uski sanse dhere dhere chal rehi thi , lekin uski kali akhon me ik kassih thi , ik intzar tha ,

khushi bhag kar us ladki ke pas pahunch gai , jab khushi ne uske piche jaker uski pith ko dekha , uski akhon se asnu behne lage ,

uske dhaye kande se niche ka mass jala hua tha , uski pith ka voh hissa bina mass ka tha , uff aisa lag reha tha , jaise uski chamdi kisi ne khich kar nikal di ho , pith ke use jale hue hisse se khoon beh reha tha , etna bereham koi kaise ho sakta hai ,

khushi ne as-pass nazar dali toh khushi ne dekha lohe ki garam salakhe padhi hui thi , shyad enhi garam salakho se es ladki ki pith ko jalaya ja reha tha ,

lekin esko kis liye etna torture kiya ja reha tha , yeh khushi samaz nai pa rehi thi , kya karan tha , ika ik khushi jaldi se us ladki ke samne a gai , or boli ,

"k..k..kon ho t..tu...tum..." khushi ne us ladki ke samne akar rote hue bola ,

voh ladki koi or nai komal thi , jise bandh kar rakha gya tha , yeh kam kunal ka tha , jo komal ko zukana chahta tha ,

"m..ma..main...pp...pa..pani..." komal ne besudh si halat me bola , voh dard ko bardasht karte hue behosh si hoti ja rehi thi ,

"han , yeh lo pani.." khushi ne jaldi jaldi komal ko pani pila diya , or bottle vahi rakh di ,

pani pene ke bad komal ne thodi si akhen khol khushi ko dekha , voh dard me kuch bol nai pa rehi thi ,

"b...bb...bhyiaaa..." komal etna hi bol payi , ke khushi ko kisi ke anne ki ahahat sunai di , khushi jaldi se chip gai ,

tabhi kunal sharab ke nashe me tun vaha a gya , uske hath me ik bottle thi , jo lagbhag khali hone ki kagar par thi ,

kunal , komal ke pas akar ruk gya , komal ne besudh si akhon se use dekha ,

"sali , kitni akad hai tuz me , dekh , ik bar , bus ik bar , han bol de , etni dolt dunga tuze , ke tu soch bhi nai sakti , tere us fakeer bhai ke pas kya hai , voh sala bhikari kahi ka , dekh , me tuze or dard nai dena chahta , bus tu zuk kar bol de , ke kunal me haar gai or tum jeet gye , bol de rani , varna tere es khubsurat jism ki poori chamdi utar dunga , bol..." kunal ne komal ka chehra apne dono hathion me pakad kar uski akhon me zakte hue bola , kunal ki akhon me ik veshipan tha ,

"n...n..naiii.." komal ne dhere se bola or muskra di ,

"sali kya dekh liya tune apne bhai me , uska lund dekh liya kya , rani , me tuze utna hi maza dunga , jitna tera bhai tuze dega , chal bol , kunal me haar manti hu , bolll.." kunal ne gusse me chekhte hue bola , vahi khushi use chup kar dekh rehi thi ,

"ehhiinnnn , naii , b ..bb..bh...yiaaa.." komal ne ladkhadti awaz me bola ,

"bhyia , bhyia , kya bhyia , bhiya laga rakha hai , sali , voh nai ayega , bhag gya voh .." kunal ne gusse me chekhte hue bola ,

"aaaieeeeeeeeeeeiiiiiiiiii bhyiaaaaaaaaaa..." komal dard se chekh uthi , kyu ki kunal ne uski jali hui pith par shrab gira di thi , komal ki akhon se asnu beh rehe the , sharab uske jakham ko or jala rehi thi ,

" bhyiaaaaa , bachaooo , bhyiaaa.." komal dard se chekhti hui apni bhai ko yad kar rehi thi ,

"aaeeeeeeeiiiiiiiiiii ahhhhhhhhh bhyiaaa bachalooo plssss...." komal ki chekh or bhi dardnak ho gai , kyu ki kunal ne namak ke packet se muthi bhar namak utha , komal ki pith par rakh diya , namak se komal ke badan me dard ki tez lehar uth padhi ,

"bolll , kutyia , kunal me teri hu , bolll.." kunal ne gusse me komal ki jali pith par namak lage hath ko ragadte hue bola ,

"aaaaaieeeeeeeeiiiiiiiii , bhyiaaaaaa bachaaoooooo , bhyiaaaaaa..." komal dard se tadfate rote hue boli , yeh dard asehnyie tha , es dard ki koi kalpana bhi nai kar sakta tha ,

"aaaahhhhhhhh bhyiaaaaaaaaaa..." komal chekh uthi , jab kunal ne ik garam agg se tapti lohe ki slakh komal ki jali hui pith par laga di .." abh bol komal , bol , me haar manti hu , boll sali , haramjadi , kutiya , me tere pore badan ko jala dunga , bolll..." kunal ne us tapti garam salakh se komal ki pith or bhi jalani suru kar di ,

"aaahhhh naaiiii , naiiii , aaieeeeeee maaa , ahhhhh shhhhhhh bhyiaaa , bachalo , bhyiaaa plssss bachalooo..." komal dard se tadafte rote hue boli , abh toh uski akhon se asnu bhi sukhne lage the , jaise jaise voh agg se jalti lal rang ki lohe ki salakh , komal ki jali pith par ragad khati , komal tadafne lagti ,

"sali kis mitti ki bani hai tu , ehhhhhhhhh tu zukti kyu nai , komal , me mar dunga tuze , zuk ja haramjadi , thik hai , agar tu apni jidd nai chodegi , main haar gya , lekin tera yeh jism toh me paker hi rahuga , abh chahe tu zuke ya na zuke..." kunal ne beintha haste hue bola , uski hassi me ik daravna ehsas tha ,

phir kunal ne komal ke hath khol diye , komal besudh hoker niche gir gai ,

"sali , tu nai zukegi , tu bus apne bhai ki deewani hai , par tu bhi janti hai , me bhi nai zukuga , tuze pana hai toh paker hi rahuga , chahe pyar se ya bedardi se.." kunal ne gusse se bola or tshit utar di ,

" nn...nai.. p...pll ..pls..." komal ne asnuyion se bhegi akhon se bola ,

phir ika ik kunal ne komal ke dono hatho ko pakad liya or ik hath se uski bra khich kar fad di ,

kunal jabardasti komal ke hontho ko chumne ki kossih karne laga , kunal ke ander ik darinda sa bas gya tha , voh jabardasti komal ke hontho ko uski gardan ko katne chumne laga ,

"ahhhhh bhyiaaaa bachaooo , bhyiaaa ..." komal beintha roti , kunal se chutne ki kossih kar rehi thi ,

"chilla sali , yaha koi tuze bachane nai ayega , ajj tuze etna choduga , ke tu jindgi bhar apne bhai ka samna nai kar payegi , kis moh se jayegi tu apne bhai ke samne , tera sab kuch loot lunga me , tum yahi rahugi , meri rakhel bankar..." kunal gusse me hasta hua bola ,

abhi kunal ne komal ke kuware chuchu ko chua hi tha , ik tez lohe ki road uske saar par a lagi ."aahhhhhhhhh..." kunal dard se chekhta hua , ik traf gir gya , yeh or koi nai khushi thi ,

khushi jaldi se vapis haweli ke ander bhag gai , or apna ik top utha layi , khushi ne jaldi jaldi , komal ko top pehna diya , or use shara deker khada kar diya ,

"tum jao , bhag jao , varna mera bhai tume mar dega..." khushi ne rote hue komal ko hosh me late hue bola ,

"k...kk...kon...h...ho...t..tt...tum..." komal ne dard bhari akhon se pucha ,

"me khushi hu , eski behan , abh jao , bhag jao..." khushi jaldi se komal ko tehkane ki ik diwar ke pas le ayi ,

khushi ne jaldi se ik pathar hata diya , or gufa ka rasta khul gya ,

"komal yaha se bhag jao , yeh gufa jungle me khulti hai , vaha ik kone me ik pathar hoga , us pathar ko bahar khich dena , tab rasta khul jayega , or jungle me kahi bhag jana , jao komal , bhag jao , voh jaldi hosh me a jayega..." khushi ne rote hue komal ko dhaka deker us gufa me behj diya , or darvaja lock kar diya ,

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khushi ne jab yeh bat batai , ravi ki akhon me asnuyion ka selab a gya tha , voh komal ko samaz nai pa reha tha ,

agar komal etna dard bus uske liye bardasht kar rehi thi , toh us din , usne voh sab kyu kaha , yeh bat alag thi , ke kaal ki kahi batian ravi bhul chuka tha , ring ne sab mita diya tha , lekin bar bar koi na koi komal ka nam le hi leta tha , jisse komal ka pyar vapis jag uthta tha ,

"etna pyar , etni mohhbat , voh tumse etna pyar karti thi , ravi voh sach me tumare liye es dunia me ayi thi , kaha hai voh , pls muze komal se milna hai.." khushi ne nam akhon se bola ,

yeh bat alag thi , ke khushi or komal , dono hospital me mil chuki thi , par tab khushi , mastani begam ke mayajaal me fasi thi , uski soch , mastani begam ke kabje me thi ,

"voh..voh.. khushi , komal mar chuki hai.." ravi ne etna bol nazarian zuka li ,

"naiiiiii , yeh nai ho sakta , naiiii , pls bol do , ravi , tume muz par vishwas nai hai , ravi , me es bar tume dhoka nai de rehi hu , ravi , ik bar , bus ik bar , milva do komal se , pls .." khushi ne beintha rote hue hath jodte hue bola ,

"mar chuki hai voh , muze chod kar chali gai hai , jaise me use 7 salo ke liye chod kar chala gya tha , khushu , voh muzse badla le rehi hai , kaha se layu use me , kaha dundu , etni badi dunia me , me mazbor hu , pls , me mazbor hu , tum nai samaz sakti , mane kya kho diya hai , mane sab kho diya hai , abh me ik jinda lash hu , eske bina kuch nai..." ravi ne komal ko yad kar beintha rote hue bola ,

"komal lot ayo komal , me nai jee sakta tumare bina , ahhhhhh komalllll , pls lot ayo , me mar jauga komal , kaha ho tum , pls a jao , kya karu , kya karu , kaha dundu use , meri bachi , meri komal ..." ravi uth kar diwar se saar tikaye roye ja reha tha ,

"pls ravi shant ho jao , pls.." khushi bhi bed se uthne ki kossih karti rote hue boli ,

"kaise shant ho jau , kaise , enhi hathion se pala tha use , usi ke liye toh jee reha tha me , kyu pyar kiya use mane , kyu , yeh bhagwan muze konsi saza de reha hai , kya bhigada hai mane eska , esse acha toh meri jindgi cheen leta , par ik bar komal se milva de , bhagwan loota de meri gudia ko , nai jee sakta me , kab tak nafrat karuga usse , meri jaan lele , mar de muze , meri komal loota de , pls , pls , komalll lot ayo , komallllllll..." ravi vahi dewar ke sahare pith lagaye beth gya , komal ki yad ne uski nafrat ko asnuyion me baha diya tha , ravi bus rota ja reha tha , kya yahi deewanapan tha , ravi ki akhen es kadar beh rehi thi , ke koi pathar dil bhi rone lag jata...

ring ravi ko control kar rehi thi , par ravi ke dil me ik pavitar pyar panap utha tha , jiske agge ring ki sari takat fazool thi , voh chah kar bhi , ravi ke dimag ko control nai kar pa rehi thi ,

to be counited....


 
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