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Update 82 se update 93 tak sab update aaj hi pade hai aachi ja rahi hai story......sabhi update bohot hai aache hai.

komal ko bachi bana kar seema ke karib lana .......wo bhi us time jab seema par suhana havi ho rahi hai tab....... ek aachi soch hai..... suhana ko komal ke karib lane ke liye .

fari rekha aur ravi ki beti hai........jokar ne rekha ko wo roop diya....... Aur rekha ko thik karna hai to ravi ko mahashakti ko hasil karne ki jarurat hogi...... Uske liye ravi nakshe ka used kare ga........ Kahi rekha ne jo sachai bata hi hai use ke piche us nakab wali aurat ka to hat nahi ......ku ki dekha jaye to fayda to use hi hone wala hai ....... Ravi aasani se us nakshe ka pata kisi ko batane se raha ....... To wo aurat rekha ke aad mai ye khel to nahi khel rahi hai...... Rekha ke liye hi sahi ravi us mahashakti ko pane ke liye jaye ga aur us mahashakti tak wo aurat bhi ravi ke piche pohoch jaye aaisa kuch to nahi soch rahi hai wo nakab wali aurat.......dekate hai aage kay hota hai......

fari ka used bohot hai aachi tarah se kiya gaya hai sare update me .......fari ke sawal bhi aache pareshan karte hai sab ko..... Majja aagaya fari ke bare me padha kar...... Abhi bhi fari ke problem ke bare me pata nahi laga ......shayad sona ko milne ke badh fari apni problem sona ko bata de tab pata chal jayega ....... Dekhate hai kay hota hai

seema fari ko bhai dene ke liye tayar ho gai chalo aachi baat hai aagar aaisa hota hai to bhi aachi baat hai ......ku ki jab suhana seema par havi hogi aur us wakt seema pregnant hogi to bhi suhana kush hi hogi ku ki use to yahi lagega usne ravi ko paa liya.... Sayad aaisa lage bhi ya na lage bhi.....per tab wo seema par havi hokar bhi kuch nahi kar sakti hai ya bohot kuch kar sakti hai.....ravi ko blackmail bhi kar sakti hai ....... Ye to kahani ke situation demand par nirbar karta hai...

Aaisa mujhe lagta hai waise to story ki demand kuch aur bhi ho sakti hai...... Wo to tab pata chalega jaise jaise story aage badhe gi...


rehman ulha mara gaya bohot hi buri mot mara gaya hai ....... Bas baki ke jo dusman bache hai unko marne ke liye ravi ko devil roop na lena pade to hi aacha hai...... Khas kar jo dusman insan hai unke liye ..... Ravi chahe to end me marte samay apna devil roop dikha sakta hai unko par marne ke liye apna insani roop hi used kare to aacha hoga....

....aur ek wajha ye bhi hai jab jab ravi apne devil roop mai aa jata hai tab prithavi par hone ke karn pruthvi par tufan aata hai ........ye wajha bhi ravi ko insani dusmano ko marne ke liye devil roop na lene ke liye kafi hai......ravi ye wajha bhi apne sathi yoko bata sakta hai khaas kar khushi ko....aur ek baat ravi ko apni devil power ka used apne barabar walo par karna chaiye nahi apne se kam takat war insano par.

Ab to Anu bhi ravi ke sath hai to
Anu, kat , lara ,eliza ka bhi used ho sakta hai...... Jisse Anu ka role bhi story se juda rahe.... Eliza se ekkhat ek experiments hi karva lo dusmano ko marne ke liye ya unke thikane tak puhchane ke liye....aaisa hi kuch bhi used karva sakte ho lara aur eliza ka jise story aur bhi interesting lagne lagegi......ravi ne apna devil roop badla aur dusmano ko mara is me majja nahi aata....

""" kuch aaisa ho jisme science aur takat aur dimag ka mail jol ho.""""".... Padh kar majja aaye.

supernatural dusmano ko marne ki liye ravi ko jarur apna devil roop lena hoga ......per insano ko mare ke liye us roop ki jarurat nahi lagti hai ..ravi aur uski team ko bhi .... Aaise mujhe lagta hai.....baki apko jo thik lage.

kaal ne maya ko yeto bata diya ravi ab insaan aur devil hai .... Un mai se ek nahi hai....... Dekhate hai jab ravi kaal se milne jayega tab kaal use apne pita ke bare mai bata ta hai ya nahi...

kat ka raaz kuch gaya... to kat bhi ravi ke behan hai..... Komal ke bachi banne ke piche ki vajaha bhi pata chal gai hai.

ravi ke pita aur maa ke bare suspens kayam hai khas kar ravi ke pita jo pari desh ke raja bhi the aur shitan bahi hai.

agar aaisa hai to suhana ke bareme jo story batai gayi hai wo shayad aadha such hai. Ya usme bhi abhi suspens baki hai. Ya phir prince ke maa ko apne pati ka dusra roop malum nahi hai .Dekhate hai aage kay hota hai.

ravi apne chacha ke ghar ja raha hai ......salo badh apne chacha ke ghar ja raha hai ravi ....dekhate hai ab ravi ka swagat kaise hota hai......fari se milkar aur komal ki abhi ki dasha ko dekha kar kay reaction hota hai chacha chachi aur ravi ke bahno ka ...... Sayad fari ko apni 10th mummy bhi mil jaye gi yaha par.
dekhate hai aage kay hota hai

intajar rahega




thanks sam bhai... bahut pyara reply tha :hug:

hmm.. komal jo pichli bar hua tha , vahi es bar ho reha , komal ik bachi ke roop me suhana ke samne ayega , dekho es bar kya hota ,

bhai rekha wali bat par abhi khamosh rahuga , kyu ki jab bat fari ki ati hai , tab me koi suspense nai rakhta , voh bhi uski maa or pita ke bare me ,

sahi bat bhai , fari ka use mane ik bar try kiya tha , sabko pasand aya , toh use paka hi kahani me jod diya , voh 6th part ko lead karegi...

seema ke pregnant hone ka abhi polt socha nai hai , soch reha hu abhi..

bhai ravi kyu devil roop leker insano ka shikar kar reha , yeh bat me apko pm me bata dunga..

gud suggestion , eliza ka use karne ke bare me sochuga , vaise me uska plot tyar kar reha tha , story din ke hisab se chal rehi , toh usko jalad hi pesh karuga...

han bhai yeh bada suspense hoga , kaal kya batata hai ravi ko , or suhana , komal ki bali de pati hai ya nai... han bhai pari log ki kahani kabhi bhi badal sakti , par character yahi rehege...

shukariya bhai.. bahut ache suggestion diye , en par vichar karuga.. thanks...
 
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Maza aayega ab lucifer ke sath bahot sahi mujhe last update mein hi laga tha ki plot ab lucifer ki taraf jaa raha hai waise mast hai best updatr boss
bhai December month me Lucifer series dekhi , uska plot behad acha tha , or voh es story se match kar gya ...
 

lover of darkness

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Mast update bhai maza aa raha hai
Har update yeh soch ke padh raha hu ki yeh padh kar so jauga lekin fir se next padhane lagta hu lag raha hai aaj yeh sone nahi dene wali story
haha , bhai aram bhi kar lena , muze lagta app pori rat story padte rehe ho , apni sehat ka bhi khyal rakhna pyare bhai...
 

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update-82

Abh Agge...

fari tino ki traf behad gusse se dekh rehi thi , ravi , kat or baby phir thoda ghambir ho gye ,

"mumma , me khushi mumma ke pas ja rehi hu , muze nai bat karni apse , bye..." fari etna bol room se bahar chali gai ,

ravi vahi let gya , or uper chat ki traf dekhne laga , baby ne kat ke kan me kuch bola , or phir ik dusre ka chehra dekh muskrane lagi ,

"are kya hua jii..." baby , ravi ke chehre ke pas bethte hue boli ,

"muze lagta hai yeh thak gye honge , layie me apka daba deti hu..." kat bhi ravi ke karib hoker boli ,

"kyaa..." ravi thoda chonk kar bola ,

"gala , nai mera matlab pair..." kat behad masomyiat se boli ,

"me bhi apka hatho me pakad sehla deti hu..." baby , kat ki traf dekh haste hue boli ,

"kyaa ..." ravi apni jangu par hath rakhte hue bola ,

"apka saar , jii..." baby behad pyar se ravi ka matha sehlate boli ,

abh ik traf kat , ravi ke pair daba rehi thi , toh vahi baby , ravi ka saar , or ravi ko man me lag reha tha , ke voh khatre me hai ,

"baby enki pent me yeh ubhar kaisa hai , yaha kya chupa rakha hai enhuno ne..." kat , ravi ke khade lund ki traf dekhte hue boli , vaise uska chehra sharam se lal ho chuka tha ,

"dikh toh muze bhi reha hai , tum hath ander dal kar dekh lo , koi khatre ki cheez na ho... " baby apni muskrahat rokte hue boli ,

"agar koi nokili cheez hui or muze chub gai toh..." kat ik tak pent me bane ubhar ko ghurte hue sharma kar boli ,

"baby ik gilass pani la do , bahut pyas lagi hai.." ravi ne baby ki akhon me dekhte hue boli ,

"are hamari kat ke pas pani ka jarna hai , bahut mitha or namkin pani behta hai , lekin apko ji , thodi mehnat karni hogi..." baby behad muskrate hue boli , toh kat use akhen nikal dekhne lagi ,

"acha , kat tum hi pyas buja do..." ravi , kat ke sharmaye chehre ko dekhte hue bola ,

"acha , me apke liye pani lati hu..." baby , ravi ko akh marte hue boli , or room ka darvaja band kar kitchen ki or chali gai ,

kat abhi bhi ravi ke pair daba rehi thi , par uski sanse abh thoda tez hone lagi thi , tight top me uske gadraye boobs uper niche hoker , ravi ke man me vasna ki aag badka rehe the ,

"kat , mera saar bhi daba do , thoda dard kar reha hai..."

"jii , dabati hu..." kat uth kar , ravi ke chehre ke pas beth gai ,

ravi ne apna saar , kat ki jangu par rakh liya , kat behad pyar se , ravi ke mathe ko sehla rehi thi , ravi akhan khole kat ke mote mote boobs ko ghur reha tha ,

ravi ne apna ik hath uper karke kat ke mast gadraye doodh ko kas kar masal diya..."ouchhhhh , yeh mat karo jii..." kat dard or maze me sisak kar boli ,

"kya na karu jii..." ravi ne ik dam se uth kar kat ko bed par gira , uske uper lette hue bola ,

"chodo na jii..." kat thoda kasmasate hue boli ,

"shhhhhii , apni akhen band kar lo , bus mehsus karo , tume pyar ka ehsas hoga , gehrai tak..." ravi ne kat ke gulabi hontho par apni ungli rakhte hue bola ,

"mane pehle kabhi kiya nai..." kat thoda sisak kar boli ,

"ohhh tum bahut rasili ho , tumare yeh mote mote boobs , tumari gadrayi gand , ufff tumari chut toh khub tight hogi , ik bar dekhne do na..." ravi , kat ki gardan ko chumte chatte hue bola ,

"ohhh no , pls noo , stop ravi pls..." kat apni vasna ko sehan karti sisak kar boli ,

"kyu ruku , agar tum jaise kamsin maal ko na choda , toh meri jindgi ka koi maksad nai hoga..." ravi , kat ki vasna se lipat rasili akhon me zakta hua bola ,


"ahhh me nai chahti..."

"par kyu , kis karan me tume pyar nai kar sakta.."

"nai bata sakti..." kat ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"thik hai , agar me tumse pyar kar bhi lu , toh yeh jabardasti ka pyar hoga , yeh me nai chahta..." ravi udas man se yeh bola , or uth kar room se bahar nikal gya ,

"me pyar karti hu tumse , bahut pyar karti hu , par , par , hai koi vajah , jo me tume bata nai sakti , muze maf kar dena jaan..." kat man hi man yeh bolte hue rone lagi ,

akhir kya karan tha , ke kat , ravi ko apne karib nai anne de rehi thi , yeh toh anne wale wakht ki bat thi ,


vahi dusri traf...

"hmm , han , acha , ok , nai , nai , me akeli jaugi , ohhh ho , me bachi nai hu , sir , muze ravi se akele me milna hai , jii , yeh jindgi usi ki di hui hai , agar cheen bhi lega , toh koi farak nai padega , bye sir..." yeh anu thi ,

anu ne bahut din pehle hi , hospital me ravi ke anne , jane , ke cctv footage dekh liye the , anu abh rehan se milne uske kabile me ja rehi thi ,

jis trah se rehan or ravi hospital me dakhil hue , us se kahi bhi aisa nai lag reha tha , ke rehan ko ravi ne kidnap kiya ho ,

rahul ne apni police statement me bataya tha , ke voh apni saas se milne hospital a reha tha , tabhi ravi ne use kidnap kar liya , phir voh use es hospital le aya ,

anu ik behad tez dimag agent thi , voh samaz gai ke rahul kahani bana reha hai , or uski batai kahani ka writer voh khud nai , balki ravi hi tha ,

shehar me apatkalin goshit kiya gya tha , kyu ki ravi abh shehar ka most wanted criminal ban chuka tha , use dekhte hi shout karne ka order tha , par rajesh or anu , ravi se sach janna chahte the ,

anu janti thi , ravi jaisa insan kabhi criminal nai ho sakta , jisne bina kisi jan-pehchan ke 20 lakh rupey uski maa ko de diye , jisne uski narazgi sahi , par madad karne se piche nai hata , anu ko lagta tha , thakur hi ravi ko fasane ki kossih kar reha hai ,

anu ghar se nikalne se pehle apni maa vadna ke pas gai , jo kitchen me kam kar rehi thi , vadna bhi ravi se milna chahti thi ,

"hey mom , whatsup , acha mom , ajj janti ho me kisse milne ja rehi hu..." anu behad muskrate hue boli ,

"ohh ho , ravi se..." vadna muskra kar boli ,

"what , apko kaise pata chala..." anu chonk kar boli ,

"beti jab bhi tu had se jayda khush hoti hai , me samaz jati hu , tu ravi se milne ja rehi hai , jab , jab , tu subah muskrate hue apne room se bahar nikali hai , tab tab tere sapno me ravi ata reha hai , abh apni bachi ke dil ki bat , me kaise na samaz pau..."

"mom , sach kaha apne , me ravi se pyar karti hu , par meri badkismati hai , uski shadi ho chuki hai..." anu ne behad nam akhon se bola ,

"ufff beti , phir kya hua , dekho , me samazti hu tere dil ka dard , par beti , tum jo bhi faisla logi , muze hamesha manzor hoga..." vadna ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"thanks mom , muze samazne ke liye , apki beti , ik din apka saar , pori dunia me ucha karegi , apni beti par apko garav hoga..." anu bhegi akhon se muskrate hue boli ,

phir anu , ravi se milne nikal padhi , lekin kya voh ravi se milegi , ya devil ravi se...


vahi dusri traf....


lara or Eliza ghar ke bahar ik bade se pathar par bethi batian kar rehi thi , lara ko Eliza se door rehne ka dukh tha , yeh vahi dukh tha , matlab ladkyion ki batian , dher sari batian ,

dono jab se mili thi , bus batian kar rehi thi , abh yeh mat puchna ke kya batian kar rehi thi , voh ladkyian hain , me unki batian nai sunta ,

ravi bhi ghar se bahar nikal unke pas akar beth gya ,

"haye ravi , tumara bahut bahut shukriya..." Eliza muskrate hue boli ,

"shukriya , par kis bat ka..." ravi dono ke bech betha hua bola ,

"are yar tumne muze or lara ko ik kiya , hame burai ke raste se hata kar , sachai ke raste par chalna sikhaya , uske liye shukriya..." Eliza , pyar se ravi ka gaal chumte hue boli ,

"acha ravi , tum kaha ke rehne wale ho , yaha toh nai rehte hoge..." lara bhi ravi ke kande par hath rakhte hue boli ,

"meri jindgi bahut dukho bhari rehi , bachpan me pita ji gujar gye , phir 3 behno or maa ki jimedari muz par aan padhi , apni sabse choti behan komal ko shehar behj diye , tain ki voh achi job par lag sake..." ravi abhi bol hi reha tha , Eliza bech me bol padhi ,

"ohh , kitni age thi tumari us wakht.." lara thoda nam akhon se boli ,

"shyad , ummm , shyad 14 saal hogi..."

"what , tum , ohhh ravii ..." Eliza behad nam akhon se boli ,

"mane apna bachpan nai jiya , apne pita ji ko preshan nai kiya , mera sapna tha , me pita ji se kisi cheez ko pane ke liye jidd karna chahta tha , me unke kandu par chad kar , ghumna chahta tha , me jawan hoker , unka sahara banna chahta tha , budape me unki har khuwasih pori karna chahta tha , par sab sapna hi reh gya..." ravi ne apne pita ko yad kar bhegi akhon se bola ,

"ravi , tumne bahut dard sahe jindgi me , phir kya hua..." lara rote hue boli ,

" mane pita ji ko marte wakht vachan diya tha , es liye 14 saal ki umar me , main kheto me mehnat , mazdori karne laga , ham bahut gareeb the , ik tuta sa zopda tha hamara , apni behno ki shadi karni thi , mane apni jindgi ka kuch nai socha tha , muze lagta tha , muz jaise mazdor insan se kon ladki pyar karegi , par , abh dekho , yeh sab muzse pyar karti hai , mere bina jeene ka sochti bhi nai..." ravi ne behad rote hue bola , voh ik dardnak wakht tha uski jindgi ka ,

"ohh ravi , tum sach me mahan ho.." Eliza bhi rote hue boli ,

"mahan me nai , meri behan komal or meri wife seema hai , gaon ke ik gawar anpad admi ko , en dono ne badal diya... "

"ravi tum apni behan komal se etna pyar kyu karte ho , or fari tumari apni beti hai.." Eliza ne man me uthe naye swal puch liye ,

"jab pita ji ki mout hui , tab maa ne kaha , ham komal ko shehar padhne ke liye nai behj sakte , maa ne kaha , ham do wakht ki roti nai kha sakte , toh shehar me bahut paise lagege , komal agge padhna chahti thi , voh bahut royi akele beth kar , me tab 15 saal ka tha..."

"tumne kya kiya phir.."

"us din komal meri bahu me simat kar roti rehi , pata nai kyu , mane agle hi din , maa se lad kar , komal ko mama ji ke pas behj diya , mere mama ji lalachi insan the , voh komal ko apne pas rakhne ke liye man gye , par uska koi bhi kharach uthane se unhonu mana kar diya , mane unse kaha ke me paise behjta rahuga , me gaon me akar apni jamen par kheti karne ke sath sath , mazdori bhi karne laga , mane din rat kam kiya , or karta reha , ik traf me apna pariwar pal reha tha , or ik traf apni behan ki jindgi bhi achi bana reha tha , na mane barsat dekhi , na kadakti dhup , na kehar barsari sardi , muze bus komal ki har khuwasih pori karni thi , us wakht mane jindgi me bahut dard saha , us wakht jismani dard bhi tha , or dil ka dard bhi..." ravi behad rote hue bola ,

"bus ravii (rote hue) , or mat bolu , me nai sun sakti or..." Eliza , ravi ko bahu me bharte hue rote sisakte hue boli ,

"mere khyal se jindgi har insan ki priksha leti hai , me us priksha me pas hua , jab kheto me kam karte thak kar chur hua , me pita ji ko yad kar rota tha , kyu ki mere hamumar sathi jab gaon me khel rehe hote , tab me koi na koi kam kar reha hota , mera bachpan bus dukhu me gujar gya , lara muze jindgi me kabhi skoon nai mila , jab se paida hua hu , bus dukh , dard , taklef , ohhh , me thak chuka hu , bus bhagwan se ik hi dua mangta hu , ik skoon ki mout dena..." ravi behad emotional hoker nam akhon se bola ,

"ik thapad marugi , agar marne ki bat ki toh..." lara behad gusse me boli ,

"han ravi , lara thik bol rehi hai , tumari jindgi ke dukh utne nai , jitne mane or lara ne sahe hain , ham jab mili tab bus 17 saal ki hongi , ham dono anath thi , ik dusre ka sahara bani , khane ke liye kuch manga toh hamare jism ki boli lagi , ham buri nai thi , wakht ne bana diya , halato ne bana diya , agar yeh log hame sahara dete , toh ham burai ke raste par na chalti , ravi , hamne kabhi apna jism nai becha , kisi ke agge zuki nai..." Eliza behad rote hue boli ,

"abh toh burai chod dogi..."

"han , kyu ki hame jis insan ki talash thi voh pori ho gai , tumne hame bina kisi icha ke sahara diya , hamare liye apni jaan jokhim me dali , ravi tum sach me mahan insan ho , tume jis maa ne janam diya , voh bhi mahan hogi..." lara ne thoda nam akhon se dil ki gehrai se bola ,

abhi tino batian hi kar rehe the , ke khushi unke pas a gai , usne ravi ko apne pas bulaya ,

"kya bat hai khushu..."

"khushu , wow , acha , ravi voh , voh anu a rehi hai , usne abhi abhi jungle ke raste par apni gadi mod di hai , voh adhe ghante me yaha pahunch jayegi..."

"hmm , me use raste me rok lunga , me anu se milkar ata hu..." ravi etna bol udd gya , anu se milne ke liye....


to be counited....
Gazab emotional update the maza aa gaya
 
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