Jabardast update.... or sath me suspense bhi hai........mujhe lagta hai ki baby aajayegi ravi ko bachane......dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.....or woh aurat kon thi jo rema ko mara tha.....mein kuch nhi bataunga... kyu ki mera guess galat nikla hai......sab raaz is part me khatam hogi or nayi suspense se 4rt part start hoga.....ye mein request karta hu bakii writer better jante hai
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Abh Agge...
rema ne jaise hi maa shabad bola , dyana or seema ik dusre ka chehra dekhne lagi , dyana or rema ki maa , kya aisa tha ,
par aisa hua tha , supat awashta se jagte hi rema ne dyana ko apni maa bola tha , dyana ke hontho par ik muskan doad gai ,
usne socha abh voh rema ka istemal kar sakti hai , apne dushmano ke khilaf , voh ander se beintha khush ho rehi thi , usne muskra kar ik bar seema ki traf dekha , or phir rema ki traf badne lagi ,
"meri bachi , meri beti , kaha thi tu..." dyana thoda udas awaz me bolti hui rema ki traf badhi , tabhi kuch aisa hua , jiski umeed na dyana ko thi or na hi seema ko ,
jaise hi dyana , rema ke karib gai , rema ne gusse se uski traf dekha , or phir uske lambe baalo ne , dyana ki gardan ko jakad liya , or use utha kar , dewar ke sath laga liya ,
"ahhhh beti yeh , yeh , kya kar rehi ho..." dyana ne apne app ko chudvane ki kossih karte hue bola , uske chehre se niche uska pora jism dewar se chipaka hua tha , jaise kisi makadi ne apne shikar ko jal me fas liya ho ,
seema bhi herian reh gai , tabhi usne piche palat kar dekha , room ke samne ki dewar yaha behad andhera tha , vaha se ik aurat bahar ayi ,
yeh vahi aurat thi jo us din suhana se bat kar rehi thi , jab rimi or shurti unko darvaje par kan laga sun rehi thi , lekin yeh aurat thi kon ,
"maaaaaa ..." rema behad udas awaz me uddte hue us aurat ki traf badne lagi ,
us aurat ne ik kala libas pehan rakha tha , uska pora jism jaise ghor andhera se upja hua tha , sharir ka ik bhi ang dikhai nai de reha tha , agar kuch dikh reha tha , toh bus andhera ,
seema us aurat ko dekhte hi zuk kar beth gai , rema ke lambe gusse khor baal shant hoker beth gye , abh voh udd nai rehe the , voh shant the ,
"maaaa , app kaha thi , meri maaa..." rema us aurat ke karib jaker use chukar mehsus karne lagi , uski akhen nam ho gai , kali akhon se kala khoon behne laga ,
"meri bachiiii , ajj tumse mulakat ho hi gaii , kaisi hai meri beti..." us aurat ne rema ko apne gale laga bola , uske hath andhere se bane hue the , uska koi roop nai tha , koi akar nai tha ,
"maaaa me thik hu , muze kisi ko apse milvana hai , yeh , yeh , meri insani maa seema hai , yeh bhi apki trah muze bahut chahti hai , muze bahut pyar karti hai.." rema ne seema ko pyar se dekh kar bola , uske baal bhi seema ko chu kar mehsus karne lage ,
"tum sab shant kyu nai hote , bevkuf kahi ke , shant hoker beth jao , varna , jad se ukhad dungi..." rema ne apne baalo ko dekh gusse se bola ,
rema ke baal ik bar halka sa dar gye , or phir rema ke chehre ko chune lage , rema pyar se unko sehlane lagi or boli..." mere bacheee , maaa dekho , mere bache kitne pyare hain or meri har bat mante hain , ik ache bache ki trah , me en sab ki maa hu , jaise app meri maa ho , hai na maa..." rema ne ik gehri muskan ke sath bola , uski muskan me ik rahasye tha ,
"rema betiii , tumari behno ki jaan khatre me hai , rimi or shurti ki , voh , voh , unko le gai ..." seema ne beintha rote hue bola ,
"kyaaa , huuuuuu , toh apne muze uthaya kyu nai..." rema ne behad gusse me bola , uske baal hawa me charo traf phail kar mandrane lage ,
"han meri bachi , seema thik bol rehi hai , tumara sabse bada dushman , prince sonik or malika ruhi , vapis lot aye hain , jin sab ne , tume bachpan me un andhere junglo me chod diya tha , marne ke liye , beti , tumari masom insani behno ki jindgi danv par lagi hai , jao sabko khatam kar , unko bacha lo..." us nakabposh aurat ne behad gusse bhari awaz me bola ,
"huuuu , huuuuu , kon leker gya , meri behno ko..." rema ne behad gusse me bola , uska gussa jaise jaise badta ja reha tha , vaise vaise uska badan or bhi kala ho reha tha or uske baal agg ki lapto me jalne lage the ,
"tamasss , voh leker gai hai..." dyana jo dewar ke sath chipaki hui thi , voh behad dard me boli ,
"kyaaa , tamasss , voh hamari , ik louti dost thi , voh bhi , us bevkuf prince ke sath mil gai , abh use bhi mere gusse ka samna karna hoga..." rema or bhi gusse me a gai ,
"han beti , tumne pari log me , us tamas ki khatir hi , hamse dushmani ki thi , hamse ladai ki thi , dekho me ajj bhi tume kitna pyar karti hu , me tumari maa hu..." us shetian aurat ne sisakte hue bola ,
"maa app rona mat , pichli bar jo galti muzse hui thi , voh es bar nai hogi , me sabko khatam kar dungi..." etna bol rema vaha se gyab ho gai , or dyana , uske baalo ki kaid se mukat ho gai , rema ke sath hi voh aurat bhi gyab ho gai ,
seema , abh suhana ke roop me a gai , or dyana ke karib akar boli ,
"kaisi lagi meri beti ki takat..." suhana ne haste hue bola ,
"voh behad takatwar hai , lekin voh aurat kon thi..." dyana ne apna gala sehlate hue bola ,
"muze nai pata , bus rema janti hai , uska nam , or use bhi , par kabhi batati nai , or use hamesha maa kehti hai..." suhana ne khud bhi preshan si hoker bola ,
vahi dusri traf....
subah ho chuki thi , ravi rat se nai soya tha , kyu ki use ajj ladna tha , rema se , dyana se , or uski jaan seema se ,
voh na toh rema ko mar sakta tha or na hi seema ko , voh en dono me kisi ko bhi khona nai chahta tha , or rat bhar sochne ke bad , use ik rasta mil gya tha , lekin kya tha voh akhri rasta , yeh toh bus ravi janta tha ,
shurti or rimi abhi bhi bachu ki trah usse lipat kar , use bahu me bhar kar so rehi thi , ravi ke seene par , un dono ne ik dusre ka hath pakad rakha tha ,
ravi un dono ki traf dekh muskra hi reha tha , ke room me ik dam se andhera sa phial gya , ravi samaz gya ke kon aya hai ,
ravi bed se uth kar khada ho gya , rimi or shurti nend me thoda kasmasai , or ik dusre se chipak kar so gai , ravi un dono ka apsi pyar dekh muskra diya , or phir uska intzar karne laga ,
"pita jiii , abh a bhi jaoo..." ravi man hi man bola ,
tabhi room me ik saya ban gya or abh kaal vaha khada tha , voh din me kam hi kahi jata tha , par ajj ka din , kai jindgyion ke faisle karne wala tha , kai jindgyian barbad hone wali thi , or kai abad ,
"ravi beta , tum thik toh ho..." kaal ne ravi ke karib akar bola ,
"acha hua pita ji app a gye , mane socha , ajj apse mil lu , bad me pata nai , moka mile ya nai..." ravi ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,
"hmm , esi liye aya hu , kash ke me tumari madad kar sakta , par , yeh tumari ladai hai , lekin han , jab dyana or joker es ladai me ayege , tab me tumara sath dunga..." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola ,
"jii pita ji , par me na toh rema ko mar sakta hu or na seema ko , koi apno se kaise lad sakta hai , or rema mere dil ke behad karib hai ..." ravi ne thoda udas awaz me bola ,
"ravi , rema es ladai me sabse takatwar hai , tume rema ko marna hi hoga , varna voh tum sabko mar degi , uski takat hi aisi hai ke voh sab bhul chuki hai , abh voh ik maa hai , uske jevat baal uske bache hain..." kaal ne ravi ko samaza kar bola ,
"pita ji agar me uske baalo ko khatam kar du , toh kya pata , rema normal ho jaye , kya pata uske jevat baal hi use shetian banne par mazbor kar rehe ho..." ravi ne ik asha ki kiran dekhte hue bola ,
"hmm , ik maa se uske bache cheen loge , toh uska gussa , etna byank ho jayega , ke es ladai ko voh chand minto me khatam kar degi..." kaal ne ravi ki bat ko galat therate hue bola ,
"toh kya rasta hai , rema ko rokne ka..." ravi abh gusse me bola ,
"koi nai janta , bus ik aurat janti hogi , voh hogi , jisne rema ko pichle janam me dhoke se mar diya tha , jab suhana ne tume mar diya tha , tab rema beintha gussa ho gai thi , usne suhana ke jism ko cheer fad diya tha , lekin es ladai me voh behad jakhmi ho gai thi , tab use bhi kisi ne mar diya tha..." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola ,
"hmm , par pita ji voh aurat kon thi..."
"muze nai pata , par es jung ke akhir me voh shyad a jaye , ravi jab tum vampire bankar haweli me muzse milne aye the , tab tumne ik vada kiya tha..." kaal ne ravi ko kuch yad dilvate hue bola ,
"han , yad hai , apne muze 1 saal ka wakht diya tha , muze dyana ko khatam karna tha , varna app muze haweli me kaya or shaya ki trah kaid kar lete , par pita ji voh wakht beet chuka hai , abh toh 3 saal hone ko hain... " ravi ne un palu ko yad kar bola ,
"han , janta hu , par 2 saal tum yaha the hi nai , me unko kaise gin sakta hu , or abh tumare samne bus dyana hi nai , suhana or rema bhi khadi hai , tumare kai dushman hain , or ik traf tumara pyar , komal , tumare pas abh 12 ghante bache hain , 1 saal pora hone me , abh me jata hu , ik bat or abh tume kaid se darkar nai ladna hai , abh tume apne pariwar ke liye ladna hai , apni behno ke liye ladna hai , apne pita ko diye vade ko pora karna..." kaal etna bol gyab ho gya ,
ravi ne palat kar dekha rimi or shurti nend se jag rehi thi , tabhi khushi behad ghabrai hui room me ayi , uski sanse behad tez chal rehi thi , aisa lag reha tha jaise voh bhag kar ayi thi ,
"kyaa hua khushi , tum etni ghabrai kyu ho..." ravi ne khushi ke kandu par hath rakh bola ,
"voh , voh , rema a rehi hai , hamse ladne.." khushi ne ghabrate hue bola ,
"kitna wakht hai..."
"bus 5 mint or..."
"khushi , jaldi se rehan or suzi ko sach bata do , or pora kabila khali karvao , jaoo jaldi , me tab tak , rema ko bataion me ulza kar rakhta hu..." ravi etna bol jaldi se room se bahar nikal gya ,
phir khushi bhi jaldi se niche ayi or sabko rema ke anne ki khabar de di , kuch hi wakht bad , rehan or suzi , kabile ke logu ko ikatha kar , vaha se kabile ke piche bani ik pahadi guffa me ghus gye , jiska pehra abh khushi de rehi thi ,
ravi , rehan ke ghar ke bahar , ik pathar par beth , rema ka intzar kar reha tha , tabhi komal uske pas a gai , usne uske kande par hath rakha ,
"komal , dekho ajj jindgi kaha le ayi..." ravi ne bechain sa hoker bola ,
"bhyia jindgi nai , hamara pyar , bhyia vada karu , ham jiyege toh sath , or marege bhi sath..." komal ne nam akhon se bola ,
"vada reha..." ravi ne komal ka hath chum kar bola ,
"bhyiaa , kash ke ham chain ki jindgi gujar sakte , hame kya chahyie kisi se , kuch bhi nai , hame bus ik chota sa ghar chahyie , or do wakht ki roti , par bhagwan voh bhi hame nai de sakta..." komal ne rote hue bola ,
"shhh , rona nai , ajj hamri jindgi ki akhri ladai hai , ajj ro kar nai , hass kar mukabla karna hai , har dard jelna hai , har chot par pyar ki malam lagani hai , tum jao , or jab wakht aye tabhi bahar anna..." ravi ne komal ko apni bahu me bhar uska matha chum kar bola , komal muskrate hue ghar ke ander chali gai ,
ravi phir se us pathar par beth gya , tabhi tez hawa chalne lagi , pedu ke patte hilne lage , panchi uddne lage , janwar chekhne or shor machane lage , khubsurat jungle me hahakar mach gai , kyu ki shetian khud a reha tha ,
ravi man me soch reha tha ..." ajj meri jindgi us mode par a gai , yaha bus akhri rasta ladai hai , huu pita ji se vada kiya ke 1 saal me dyana ko khatam kar dunga , par yeh nai janta tha , ke dyana ke sath sath mere apne mere dushman ban jayege ,
har insan ki jindgi me musebtian ati hain , lekin kuch log musibat me dar jate hain , kuch unka dilo jaan se mukabla karte hain ,
lekin meri musibat , mere apne the , kya me unko mar pata , ik traf meri behan rema thi , or dusri traf meri patni seema , me dono ke bech fas chuka hu , rema ke sath mera rishta etna gehra tha , ke koi shabad nai the byan karne ke liye ,
rema meri jindgi ka voh ehsas tha , jise bus me mehsus kar sakta tha , uske jism ki voh khubsurat mehak , muze khich leti thi apni traf , ham dono ik jaise the , ham dono me pyar tha , gussa tha , dard tha , kyu ki rema meri behan thi , mera adha hissa ,
na use mar sakta hu , or na use , lekin eska ant kya hoga , mane soch liya tha , muze marna hoga , meri mout hi es yudh ka ant hogi , sab mere sath judi thi , agar me mar jata toh sab thik ho jata , kisi ke dil me dushmani na rehti ,
suhana ko bhi chain mil jata or rema ko bhi..." ravi man hi man yeh batian khud se bol reha tha ,
ravi abhi apne man se batian kar hi reha tha , ke rema uske samne a gai , ufff uske lal baal sach me jevat lag rehe the , uski akhen behad kali thi , or jism bhi behad kala , gussa se uski sanse tez chal rehi thi , honth gusse se kamp rehe the , samne uska bhai tha , jise abh voh pehchanti nai thi , kyu ki es khofnak roop me voh apne bhai se kabhi nai mili thi ,
"a gai tum , me tumara hi intzar kar reha tha , uff kya jindgi hai meri , jiske sath jindgi ki suruat ki , ajj voh muze pehchanti bhi nai , esse bada dukh kya hoga , es se achi mout hai , hmm , par mar bhi toh nai sakta , akhir tumse pyar hi etna hai , acha meri akhri khuwahish sunogi , bus rona mat , mere marne ke bad , rema pichle janam me chahe tumse na mil paya , par es janam me mane tumse beintha pyar kiya , tumse pyar kar , tume mehsus kiya , tume har khushi di , apne dil ki malika bana kar rakha , rema tum meri ho , me janta hu , tum muze mar dogi , par vada reha , jab bhi mout ayi , tumari bahu me ayegi..." ravi us pathar se utha or bolta hua rema ke karib akar ruk gya ,
rema apna chehra thoda teda kar use dekhne lagi , voh etne pyar se ravi ko dekh rehi thi , ke koi shabad nai dikhane ko , behad masom lag rehi thi voh , behad pyari , rema ke aise pyar se dekhne se , uska jism insani roop me anne laga , uske baal ravi ke chehre ko mehsus karne lage , tabhi rema ke saar me tez dard utha ...
"maa ajj bhyia ka khana me leker jaugi , ouchhhh dhere bhyia dard ho reha hai , bhyia yeh bat kisi ko batana mat , kya hua behna kahi dard toh nai ho reha , bhyia mat jao shehar , me nai jee sakti apke bina..."
rema ko ika ik gaon me bitaye pal yad anne lage , uske hontho par ik muskan doad gai , par tabhi uske baal uske chehre ke samne a gye , uske chehre ko dekhne lage , aisa lag reha tha voh usse kuch bat kar rehe the ,
"rema , yad karo..." ravi ne or bhi rema ke karib jaker bola ,
rema ka saar tez dard se fata ja reha tha , voh beintha gusse me chekh uthi , uski chekh sun pora jungle kamp utha , komal ghar me behthi kamp si gai , khushi pehra dete hue kampne lagi , kabile ke log bhi dar gye , rimi or shurti ik dusre se chipak gai ,
"remaa..." ravi abhi etna hi bola tha ke rema ne tezi se agge badh ravi ke seene par dono hatho se dhaka jad diya , usme etni takat thi ke ravi piche ki traf uddta hua , rehan ke ghar se takra gya ,
ghar ki lakadi ki dewar tut kar bhikar gai , ravi ghar ke hall me jaker gira , komal vahi bethi thi , voh behad gusse me bahar ki traf bhagi , khushi bhi vaha pahunch chuki thi , kuch der bad ravi bhi vaha a gya ,
abh rema ke samne komal , ravi or khushi khade the , lekin kya voh tino bhi rema ko rok pate ya koi or bhi ata vaha par...
vahi dusri traf..
kat ghar me ehder ohder ghum rehi thi , usne ik galti ki , or sab barbad sa ho gya , voh galti thi ravi ko baby se door karne ki ,
do saal gujar chuke the , or ravi us din ke bad kabhi vapis nai aya tha , or baby voh ik janwar ban chuki thi , pyar shabad se use abh ghin ati thi , nafrat si ho gai thi , mahino tak ghar se gyab rehti , en do saalo me baby mushkil se matar 6 mahine ghar rehi thi ,
us din ravi ke jane ke bad jab locket ne baby ki pori jindgi jaan li , tab uske balidan dekh , use apni pori takat sonp di , pata nai kya tha baby me , ke komal ka locket use chahne laga tha , apni pori takat use deker amar sa kar diya ,
kyu ki voh locket malika ruhi ki amanat thi , behad rahasmayi takato se bhara tha , anant kali shaktiyion se bana tha voh , dunia ke bade se bade jadu ka tod tha ,
lekin locket ne baby ke dil me ravi ke liye pyar or bada diya tha , or baby ka man abh ravi ko milne ke liye tadaf utha ,
suru suru me voh normal thi , kat se behad pyar karti thi , use ravi ka bar bar puchti rehti , or kat use kuch bata na pati , voh kya kehti , ke uske karan hi ravi nai a reha ,
hafte beet gye , mahine gujar gye , par ravi nai aya , baby ne pori takat laga li , par ravi kaha hai voh na jan payi , kyu ki ravi us wakht andhkar log me tha khushi ke sath , or baby use dekh nai pa rehi thi ,
akhir har roz , har pal , har lamha , jab baby , kat ke samne ravi ka nam japti rehi , tab kat ko khud se haar man kar baby ko sach batana padha , baby ko sach sun kar kat par beintha gussa aya , par usne kat ko kuch nai kaha , bus tut gai , bhikar gai , atma udas ho gai , chanchal man , ravi , ravi chilata reha , par voh kuch na kar payi ,
akhir ik din rema se use pata chala ke ravi , khushi ko leker kahi bhag gya hai , tab usne ravi ko bevafa samaz liya , tuta dil pathar ban gya , asun sukh kar tezab ban gye , or baby ne apne shandar jism ko hamesha hamesha ke liye kale libas me dhak liya , voh es par sirf ravi ka huk samazti thi ,
kat ne baby ko bahut samazaya , par baby es kadar tut gai ke vapis sambal na payi , lekin usne sachai ka rasta kabhi nai choda , voh burai se ladti rehi , joker se ladti rehi , logu ko bachati rehi , par es sab me voh khud ko bhul gai ,
ik din use mehsus ho gya ke ravi vapis a chuka hai , voh use dekhne bhi gai , pedu ke piche chup kar , ravi ko niharti rehi , akhir pyar tha uska , lekin kya voh ajj bhi yahi thi , jab rema jaisa khukar shetian ravi ke samne khada tha , kya voh ajj ati , apne ravi ke liye , eska jawab anne wale wakht me chupa tha...
to be counited....[Note- esko kehte hain suspense... voh aurat kon thi , jo rema ki maa thi... Love1994 app kisi ko mat batana...or friends 4rth part esi trah magical hoga.. samaz lena ke 3rd part ka hi second part hoga... matlab es magical world ka ant 4rth part me hoga... ]
Nice update
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Abh Agge...
rema ne jaise hi maa shabad bola , dyana or seema ik dusre ka chehra dekhne lagi , dyana or rema ki maa , kya aisa tha ,
par aisa hua tha , supat awashta se jagte hi rema ne dyana ko apni maa bola tha , dyana ke hontho par ik muskan doad gai ,
usne socha abh voh rema ka istemal kar sakti hai , apne dushmano ke khilaf , voh ander se beintha khush ho rehi thi , usne muskra kar ik bar seema ki traf dekha , or phir rema ki traf badne lagi ,
"meri bachi , meri beti , kaha thi tu..." dyana thoda udas awaz me bolti hui rema ki traf badhi , tabhi kuch aisa hua , jiski umeed na dyana ko thi or na hi seema ko ,
jaise hi dyana , rema ke karib gai , rema ne gusse se uski traf dekha , or phir uske lambe baalo ne , dyana ki gardan ko jakad liya , or use utha kar , dewar ke sath laga liya ,
"ahhhh beti yeh , yeh , kya kar rehi ho..." dyana ne apne app ko chudvane ki kossih karte hue bola , uske chehre se niche uska pora jism dewar se chipaka hua tha , jaise kisi makadi ne apne shikar ko jal me fas liya ho ,
seema bhi herian reh gai , tabhi usne piche palat kar dekha , room ke samne ki dewar yaha behad andhera tha , vaha se ik aurat bahar ayi ,
yeh vahi aurat thi jo us din suhana se bat kar rehi thi , jab rimi or shurti unko darvaje par kan laga sun rehi thi , lekin yeh aurat thi kon ,
"maaaaaa ..." rema behad udas awaz me uddte hue us aurat ki traf badne lagi ,
us aurat ne ik kala libas pehan rakha tha , uska pora jism jaise ghor andhera se upja hua tha , sharir ka ik bhi ang dikhai nai de reha tha , agar kuch dikh reha tha , toh bus andhera ,
seema us aurat ko dekhte hi zuk kar beth gai , rema ke lambe gusse khor baal shant hoker beth gye , abh voh udd nai rehe the , voh shant the ,
"maaaa , app kaha thi , meri maaa..." rema us aurat ke karib jaker use chukar mehsus karne lagi , uski akhen nam ho gai , kali akhon se kala khoon behne laga ,
"meri bachiiii , ajj tumse mulakat ho hi gaii , kaisi hai meri beti..." us aurat ne rema ko apne gale laga bola , uske hath andhere se bane hue the , uska koi roop nai tha , koi akar nai tha ,
"maaaa me thik hu , muze kisi ko apse milvana hai , yeh , yeh , meri insani maa seema hai , yeh bhi apki trah muze bahut chahti hai , muze bahut pyar karti hai.." rema ne seema ko pyar se dekh kar bola , uske baal bhi seema ko chu kar mehsus karne lage ,
"tum sab shant kyu nai hote , bevkuf kahi ke , shant hoker beth jao , varna , jad se ukhad dungi..." rema ne apne baalo ko dekh gusse se bola ,
rema ke baal ik bar halka sa dar gye , or phir rema ke chehre ko chune lage , rema pyar se unko sehlane lagi or boli..." mere bacheee , maaa dekho , mere bache kitne pyare hain or meri har bat mante hain , ik ache bache ki trah , me en sab ki maa hu , jaise app meri maa ho , hai na maa..." rema ne ik gehri muskan ke sath bola , uski muskan me ik rahasye tha ,
"rema betiii , tumari behno ki jaan khatre me hai , rimi or shurti ki , voh , voh , unko le gai ..." seema ne beintha rote hue bola ,
"kyaaa , huuuuuu , toh apne muze uthaya kyu nai..." rema ne behad gusse me bola , uske baal hawa me charo traf phail kar mandrane lage ,
"han meri bachi , seema thik bol rehi hai , tumara sabse bada dushman , prince sonik or malika ruhi , vapis lot aye hain , jin sab ne , tume bachpan me un andhere junglo me chod diya tha , marne ke liye , beti , tumari masom insani behno ki jindgi danv par lagi hai , jao sabko khatam kar , unko bacha lo..." us nakabposh aurat ne behad gusse bhari awaz me bola ,
"huuuu , huuuuu , kon leker gya , meri behno ko..." rema ne behad gusse me bola , uska gussa jaise jaise badta ja reha tha , vaise vaise uska badan or bhi kala ho reha tha or uske baal agg ki lapto me jalne lage the ,
"tamasss , voh leker gai hai..." dyana jo dewar ke sath chipaki hui thi , voh behad dard me boli ,
"kyaaa , tamasss , voh hamari , ik louti dost thi , voh bhi , us bevkuf prince ke sath mil gai , abh use bhi mere gusse ka samna karna hoga..." rema or bhi gusse me a gai ,
"han beti , tumne pari log me , us tamas ki khatir hi , hamse dushmani ki thi , hamse ladai ki thi , dekho me ajj bhi tume kitna pyar karti hu , me tumari maa hu..." us shetian aurat ne sisakte hue bola ,
"maa app rona mat , pichli bar jo galti muzse hui thi , voh es bar nai hogi , me sabko khatam kar dungi..." etna bol rema vaha se gyab ho gai , or dyana , uske baalo ki kaid se mukat ho gai , rema ke sath hi voh aurat bhi gyab ho gai ,
seema , abh suhana ke roop me a gai , or dyana ke karib akar boli ,
"kaisi lagi meri beti ki takat..." suhana ne haste hue bola ,
"voh behad takatwar hai , lekin voh aurat kon thi..." dyana ne apna gala sehlate hue bola ,
"muze nai pata , bus rema janti hai , uska nam , or use bhi , par kabhi batati nai , or use hamesha maa kehti hai..." suhana ne khud bhi preshan si hoker bola ,
vahi dusri traf....
subah ho chuki thi , ravi rat se nai soya tha , kyu ki use ajj ladna tha , rema se , dyana se , or uski jaan seema se ,
voh na toh rema ko mar sakta tha or na hi seema ko , voh en dono me kisi ko bhi khona nai chahta tha , or rat bhar sochne ke bad , use ik rasta mil gya tha , lekin kya tha voh akhri rasta , yeh toh bus ravi janta tha ,
shurti or rimi abhi bhi bachu ki trah usse lipat kar , use bahu me bhar kar so rehi thi , ravi ke seene par , un dono ne ik dusre ka hath pakad rakha tha ,
ravi un dono ki traf dekh muskra hi reha tha , ke room me ik dam se andhera sa phial gya , ravi samaz gya ke kon aya hai ,
ravi bed se uth kar khada ho gya , rimi or shurti nend me thoda kasmasai , or ik dusre se chipak kar so gai , ravi un dono ka apsi pyar dekh muskra diya , or phir uska intzar karne laga ,
"pita jiii , abh a bhi jaoo..." ravi man hi man bola ,
tabhi room me ik saya ban gya or abh kaal vaha khada tha , voh din me kam hi kahi jata tha , par ajj ka din , kai jindgyion ke faisle karne wala tha , kai jindgyian barbad hone wali thi , or kai abad ,
"ravi beta , tum thik toh ho..." kaal ne ravi ke karib akar bola ,
"acha hua pita ji app a gye , mane socha , ajj apse mil lu , bad me pata nai , moka mile ya nai..." ravi ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,
"hmm , esi liye aya hu , kash ke me tumari madad kar sakta , par , yeh tumari ladai hai , lekin han , jab dyana or joker es ladai me ayege , tab me tumara sath dunga..." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola ,
"jii pita ji , par me na toh rema ko mar sakta hu or na seema ko , koi apno se kaise lad sakta hai , or rema mere dil ke behad karib hai ..." ravi ne thoda udas awaz me bola ,
"ravi , rema es ladai me sabse takatwar hai , tume rema ko marna hi hoga , varna voh tum sabko mar degi , uski takat hi aisi hai ke voh sab bhul chuki hai , abh voh ik maa hai , uske jevat baal uske bache hain..." kaal ne ravi ko samaza kar bola ,
"pita ji agar me uske baalo ko khatam kar du , toh kya pata , rema normal ho jaye , kya pata uske jevat baal hi use shetian banne par mazbor kar rehe ho..." ravi ne ik asha ki kiran dekhte hue bola ,
"hmm , ik maa se uske bache cheen loge , toh uska gussa , etna byank ho jayega , ke es ladai ko voh chand minto me khatam kar degi..." kaal ne ravi ki bat ko galat therate hue bola ,
"toh kya rasta hai , rema ko rokne ka..." ravi abh gusse me bola ,
"koi nai janta , bus ik aurat janti hogi , voh hogi , jisne rema ko pichle janam me dhoke se mar diya tha , jab suhana ne tume mar diya tha , tab rema beintha gussa ho gai thi , usne suhana ke jism ko cheer fad diya tha , lekin es ladai me voh behad jakhmi ho gai thi , tab use bhi kisi ne mar diya tha..." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola ,
"hmm , par pita ji voh aurat kon thi..."
"muze nai pata , par es jung ke akhir me voh shyad a jaye , ravi jab tum vampire bankar haweli me muzse milne aye the , tab tumne ik vada kiya tha..." kaal ne ravi ko kuch yad dilvate hue bola ,
"han , yad hai , apne muze 1 saal ka wakht diya tha , muze dyana ko khatam karna tha , varna app muze haweli me kaya or shaya ki trah kaid kar lete , par pita ji voh wakht beet chuka hai , abh toh 3 saal hone ko hain... " ravi ne un palu ko yad kar bola ,
"han , janta hu , par 2 saal tum yaha the hi nai , me unko kaise gin sakta hu , or abh tumare samne bus dyana hi nai , suhana or rema bhi khadi hai , tumare kai dushman hain , or ik traf tumara pyar , komal , tumare pas abh 12 ghante bache hain , 1 saal pora hone me , abh me jata hu , ik bat or abh tume kaid se darkar nai ladna hai , abh tume apne pariwar ke liye ladna hai , apni behno ke liye ladna hai , apne pita ko diye vade ko pora karna..." kaal etna bol gyab ho gya ,
ravi ne palat kar dekha rimi or shurti nend se jag rehi thi , tabhi khushi behad ghabrai hui room me ayi , uski sanse behad tez chal rehi thi , aisa lag reha tha jaise voh bhag kar ayi thi ,
"kyaa hua khushi , tum etni ghabrai kyu ho..." ravi ne khushi ke kandu par hath rakh bola ,
"voh , voh , rema a rehi hai , hamse ladne.." khushi ne ghabrate hue bola ,
"kitna wakht hai..."
"bus 5 mint or..."
"khushi , jaldi se rehan or suzi ko sach bata do , or pora kabila khali karvao , jaoo jaldi , me tab tak , rema ko bataion me ulza kar rakhta hu..." ravi etna bol jaldi se room se bahar nikal gya ,
phir khushi bhi jaldi se niche ayi or sabko rema ke anne ki khabar de di , kuch hi wakht bad , rehan or suzi , kabile ke logu ko ikatha kar , vaha se kabile ke piche bani ik pahadi guffa me ghus gye , jiska pehra abh khushi de rehi thi ,
ravi , rehan ke ghar ke bahar , ik pathar par beth , rema ka intzar kar reha tha , tabhi komal uske pas a gai , usne uske kande par hath rakha ,
"komal , dekho ajj jindgi kaha le ayi..." ravi ne bechain sa hoker bola ,
"bhyia jindgi nai , hamara pyar , bhyia vada karu , ham jiyege toh sath , or marege bhi sath..." komal ne nam akhon se bola ,
"vada reha..." ravi ne komal ka hath chum kar bola ,
"bhyiaa , kash ke ham chain ki jindgi gujar sakte , hame kya chahyie kisi se , kuch bhi nai , hame bus ik chota sa ghar chahyie , or do wakht ki roti , par bhagwan voh bhi hame nai de sakta..." komal ne rote hue bola ,
"shhh , rona nai , ajj hamri jindgi ki akhri ladai hai , ajj ro kar nai , hass kar mukabla karna hai , har dard jelna hai , har chot par pyar ki malam lagani hai , tum jao , or jab wakht aye tabhi bahar anna..." ravi ne komal ko apni bahu me bhar uska matha chum kar bola , komal muskrate hue ghar ke ander chali gai ,
ravi phir se us pathar par beth gya , tabhi tez hawa chalne lagi , pedu ke patte hilne lage , panchi uddne lage , janwar chekhne or shor machane lage , khubsurat jungle me hahakar mach gai , kyu ki shetian khud a reha tha ,
ravi man me soch reha tha ..." ajj meri jindgi us mode par a gai , yaha bus akhri rasta ladai hai , huu pita ji se vada kiya ke 1 saal me dyana ko khatam kar dunga , par yeh nai janta tha , ke dyana ke sath sath mere apne mere dushman ban jayege ,
har insan ki jindgi me musebtian ati hain , lekin kuch log musibat me dar jate hain , kuch unka dilo jaan se mukabla karte hain ,
lekin meri musibat , mere apne the , kya me unko mar pata , ik traf meri behan rema thi , or dusri traf meri patni seema , me dono ke bech fas chuka hu , rema ke sath mera rishta etna gehra tha , ke koi shabad nai the byan karne ke liye ,
rema meri jindgi ka voh ehsas tha , jise bus me mehsus kar sakta tha , uske jism ki voh khubsurat mehak , muze khich leti thi apni traf , ham dono ik jaise the , ham dono me pyar tha , gussa tha , dard tha , kyu ki rema meri behan thi , mera adha hissa ,
na use mar sakta hu , or na use , lekin eska ant kya hoga , mane soch liya tha , muze marna hoga , meri mout hi es yudh ka ant hogi , sab mere sath judi thi , agar me mar jata toh sab thik ho jata , kisi ke dil me dushmani na rehti ,
suhana ko bhi chain mil jata or rema ko bhi..." ravi man hi man yeh batian khud se bol reha tha ,
ravi abhi apne man se batian kar hi reha tha , ke rema uske samne a gai , ufff uske lal baal sach me jevat lag rehe the , uski akhen behad kali thi , or jism bhi behad kala , gussa se uski sanse tez chal rehi thi , honth gusse se kamp rehe the , samne uska bhai tha , jise abh voh pehchanti nai thi , kyu ki es khofnak roop me voh apne bhai se kabhi nai mili thi ,
"a gai tum , me tumara hi intzar kar reha tha , uff kya jindgi hai meri , jiske sath jindgi ki suruat ki , ajj voh muze pehchanti bhi nai , esse bada dukh kya hoga , es se achi mout hai , hmm , par mar bhi toh nai sakta , akhir tumse pyar hi etna hai , acha meri akhri khuwahish sunogi , bus rona mat , mere marne ke bad , rema pichle janam me chahe tumse na mil paya , par es janam me mane tumse beintha pyar kiya , tumse pyar kar , tume mehsus kiya , tume har khushi di , apne dil ki malika bana kar rakha , rema tum meri ho , me janta hu , tum muze mar dogi , par vada reha , jab bhi mout ayi , tumari bahu me ayegi..." ravi us pathar se utha or bolta hua rema ke karib akar ruk gya ,
rema apna chehra thoda teda kar use dekhne lagi , voh etne pyar se ravi ko dekh rehi thi , ke koi shabad nai dikhane ko , behad masom lag rehi thi voh , behad pyari , rema ke aise pyar se dekhne se , uska jism insani roop me anne laga , uske baal ravi ke chehre ko mehsus karne lage , tabhi rema ke saar me tez dard utha ...
"maa ajj bhyia ka khana me leker jaugi , ouchhhh dhere bhyia dard ho reha hai , bhyia yeh bat kisi ko batana mat , kya hua behna kahi dard toh nai ho reha , bhyia mat jao shehar , me nai jee sakti apke bina..."
rema ko ika ik gaon me bitaye pal yad anne lage , uske hontho par ik muskan doad gai , par tabhi uske baal uske chehre ke samne a gye , uske chehre ko dekhne lage , aisa lag reha tha voh usse kuch bat kar rehe the ,
"rema , yad karo..." ravi ne or bhi rema ke karib jaker bola ,
rema ka saar tez dard se fata ja reha tha , voh beintha gusse me chekh uthi , uski chekh sun pora jungle kamp utha , komal ghar me behthi kamp si gai , khushi pehra dete hue kampne lagi , kabile ke log bhi dar gye , rimi or shurti ik dusre se chipak gai ,
"remaa..." ravi abhi etna hi bola tha ke rema ne tezi se agge badh ravi ke seene par dono hatho se dhaka jad diya , usme etni takat thi ke ravi piche ki traf uddta hua , rehan ke ghar se takra gya ,
ghar ki lakadi ki dewar tut kar bhikar gai , ravi ghar ke hall me jaker gira , komal vahi bethi thi , voh behad gusse me bahar ki traf bhagi , khushi bhi vaha pahunch chuki thi , kuch der bad ravi bhi vaha a gya ,
abh rema ke samne komal , ravi or khushi khade the , lekin kya voh tino bhi rema ko rok pate ya koi or bhi ata vaha par...
vahi dusri traf..
kat ghar me ehder ohder ghum rehi thi , usne ik galti ki , or sab barbad sa ho gya , voh galti thi ravi ko baby se door karne ki ,
do saal gujar chuke the , or ravi us din ke bad kabhi vapis nai aya tha , or baby voh ik janwar ban chuki thi , pyar shabad se use abh ghin ati thi , nafrat si ho gai thi , mahino tak ghar se gyab rehti , en do saalo me baby mushkil se matar 6 mahine ghar rehi thi ,
us din ravi ke jane ke bad jab locket ne baby ki pori jindgi jaan li , tab uske balidan dekh , use apni pori takat sonp di , pata nai kya tha baby me , ke komal ka locket use chahne laga tha , apni pori takat use deker amar sa kar diya ,
kyu ki voh locket malika ruhi ki amanat thi , behad rahasmayi takato se bhara tha , anant kali shaktiyion se bana tha voh , dunia ke bade se bade jadu ka tod tha ,
lekin locket ne baby ke dil me ravi ke liye pyar or bada diya tha , or baby ka man abh ravi ko milne ke liye tadaf utha ,
suru suru me voh normal thi , kat se behad pyar karti thi , use ravi ka bar bar puchti rehti , or kat use kuch bata na pati , voh kya kehti , ke uske karan hi ravi nai a reha ,
hafte beet gye , mahine gujar gye , par ravi nai aya , baby ne pori takat laga li , par ravi kaha hai voh na jan payi , kyu ki ravi us wakht andhkar log me tha khushi ke sath , or baby use dekh nai pa rehi thi ,
akhir har roz , har pal , har lamha , jab baby , kat ke samne ravi ka nam japti rehi , tab kat ko khud se haar man kar baby ko sach batana padha , baby ko sach sun kar kat par beintha gussa aya , par usne kat ko kuch nai kaha , bus tut gai , bhikar gai , atma udas ho gai , chanchal man , ravi , ravi chilata reha , par voh kuch na kar payi ,
akhir ik din rema se use pata chala ke ravi , khushi ko leker kahi bhag gya hai , tab usne ravi ko bevafa samaz liya , tuta dil pathar ban gya , asun sukh kar tezab ban gye , or baby ne apne shandar jism ko hamesha hamesha ke liye kale libas me dhak liya , voh es par sirf ravi ka huk samazti thi ,
kat ne baby ko bahut samazaya , par baby es kadar tut gai ke vapis sambal na payi , lekin usne sachai ka rasta kabhi nai choda , voh burai se ladti rehi , joker se ladti rehi , logu ko bachati rehi , par es sab me voh khud ko bhul gai ,
ik din use mehsus ho gya ke ravi vapis a chuka hai , voh use dekhne bhi gai , pedu ke piche chup kar , ravi ko niharti rehi , akhir pyar tha uska , lekin kya voh ajj bhi yahi thi , jab rema jaisa khukar shetian ravi ke samne khada tha , kya voh ajj ati , apne ravi ke liye , eska jawab anne wale wakht me chupa tha...
to be counited....[Note- esko kehte hain suspense... voh aurat kon thi , jo rema ki maa thi... Love1994 app kisi ko mat batana...or friends 4rth part esi trah magical hoga.. samaz lena ke 3rd part ka hi second part hoga... matlab es magical world ka ant 4rth part me hoga... ]
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