Fantasy Demon Girl Se Shaadi

[Spiegel]

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Tb to bahut maza aane wala hai bhai bass tb tk ek kaam kr do na plzzz ek chingari he jala do tb tk lia ke dil me

abe salo jine do bechari ko abhi last update me didi bola tha, upar se 3 se 4 saal badi bhi hai par tension na lo usse bhi acchi chij hogi aage or kuch ladkia bhi aayegi aage kaira or rudra ke bich me tab maja aayega sabko sayad

 

[Spiegel]

Rudra jitna mast aur ungli karne wala character is pure forum me aur koi nai hai...behtareen character behtareen update aur bahut hi shandaar story hai bhai...thanks itna hasane ke liye

thanks bro, love u

 

[niikhill]

Rudra jitna mast aur ungli karne wala character is pure forum me aur koi nai hai...behtareen character behtareen update aur bahut hi shandaar story hai bhai...thanks itna hasane ke liye

True, next level bakchod character hai

 

[Chinturocky]

Gajab update

 

[Vickey.a]

thanks bro, love u

Nhi bhai apun ko to lia he chahiye uske saath bakchodi me bhi maza aata hai
Bhai mere itna chota se bhi baat nhi manta maan jao pyaar se nhi to chal jayegi
fir na rahega baas or na bajegi basuri

 

[Vickey.a]

Maza to tb aayega jb rudra ke saath ungali hone lagegi lia vs Kira hahahaah
Ab to liya ke dil me chingari jala do
Nhi to
Dro...

 

[Avir]

Nice One

 

[Voldimort]

Yar apke story bohot achy hae .. roz he updates ka wait hota hae .. aik do baatein mein ap ko suggestion k tor per kehna chahu ga 1) yar plz rudra ke power ko itne jaldr expose na kero , readers k samne bhi nae . Jab ap ne woh speed mein bhagne waly update k bad rudra ko kaira waghera se bhi zyada powerfull bataya toh story ke adhy thril khatam ho gaye dil se .. Rudra ke powers ko asta asta dekhao plz na k usko zab se taqatwar pesh kerne k ... Yeh mein ne mehsoos kiya iss liye bataya apko ..2nd) yar apne story ka name change kero , jitne maze ke story hae uss per yeh name set nae bethta , agar mein ne ghalte se issko press na ker diya hota toh mujhy iss story ka kabhi pata ge na chalta k yeh kitne maze ke hae. Name powerfull hota hae toh achy story jo perhne k liye dhoondh rahy hote hein unko jalde mil jaate hae .. Yeh mere suggestions thy sirf baaqi ap ke merze .. Agar koi baat bure lagy ho toh maaf kerna .. baaqi bohot acha likh rahe ho .. keep writing

 

[Bhavana694]

#teamkiadra finally kiara or rudra sath sath hatho me hath dal kar lade or enemy ki mc bc kar dali. Aqua clan potential to kafi h but glt bnde ki wife ko marne chle the. Acha hua kiara ne per hi udaye pero k bich ka saman udana tha. Kher ab jb finally sab fights over ho gyi or rohan ko kidnap krne ka reason bhi pta chal gya. Ab bas rohan ko apna true potential find out krna h or demon fist nam ko justify krna h vo akuma guild ka leader h but kb tk vo kiara ki shadow me ldta rahega kb tk bs punch or kick marega fire element ki power ki training dilwao usko or baki members ko bhi thoda level up mile jldi se or kiara apne dream the most powerfull vampi of all time ki or ek kadam or badaye. I think ab is arc ka end ho gya but goblu ko rudra ne kyu pkda ye bhi bta hi dete aaj hi. Kher koi na as always noice update oniichan. Looking forward to read more.

 

[Spiegel]

Yar apke story bohot achy hae .. roz he updates ka wait hota hae .. aik do baatein mein ap ko suggestion k tor per kehna chahu ga 1) yar plz rudra ke power ko itne jaldr expose na kero , readers k samne bhi nae . Jab ap ne woh speed mein bhagne waly update k bad rudra ko kaira waghera se bhi zyada powerfull bataya toh story ke adhy thril khatam ho gaye dil se .. Rudra ke powers ko asta asta dekhao plz na k usko zab se taqatwar pesh kerne k ... Yeh mein ne mehsoos kiya iss liye bataya apko ..2nd) yar apne story ka name change kero , jitne maze ke story hae uss per yeh name set nae bethta , agar mein ne ghalte se issko press na ker diya hota toh mujhy iss story ka kabhi pata ge na chalta k yeh kitne maze ke hae. Name powerfull hota hae toh achy story jo perhne k liye dhoondh rahy hote hein unko jalde mil jaate hae .. Yeh mere suggestions thy sirf baaqi ap ke merze .. Agar koi baat bure lagy ho toh maaf kerna .. baaqi bohot acha likh rahe ho .. keep writing

ha abhi bahut sari uski powers nahi dikhaya me par sabko pata hi hai rudra powerfull hai, or name ko suggest kardo accha fir mujhe laga yahi sahi hai ek tarah se par kisiko koi or pasand hai to bolo