Fantasy Demon Girl Se Shaadi

[Spiegel]

Kahani ke kirdar badhate ja rahe Hain Magar kahani nahin badh rahi . By the way nice update keep posting

bro story bahut badi hai abhi to season 2 hi suru hua hai bas suru ka buildup chal raha hai sayad kuch updates aur aesa hi rahega

 

[Jiashishji]

Koi baat nahi bhai aap apne tareeke se kahani likho . Hum to readers hai . Padhen ge to kuch comment bhi Karen ge aap Dil pe mat loo . Waiting for next apdate bhai .

 

[Spiegel]

Gajjab update par bhai spell mistakes bhut thi es update mai or bhai ho sakay to story ko thori speed do or kaira kb giray go yr bhai k pyar mai or villain ka koi ata pata ni hy abhi tk

sorry for the spell mistake mene dhayan nahi diya utna likhte time aage se dhayan rakhunga and ho sake to isko eidt kar dunga
story ki speed mene bahut badai hai bro mere hisab se itni speed abhut hai jyada badavunga to characters fike pad jayenge and kaira ka pyaar me padna wo mere hath me nahi hai wo uske character ke hisab se hai wo ab apne aap ho jayeg, rahi baat villain ki to me antagonist word use karunga sab apne najariye se hero hote hai matlab kuch ke liye koi hero and kuch ke liye villain and sab season ka alag alag antagonist honge is season ka rexyne me ek tournament ya classes ka compi samaj lo wo jab hoga uske kuch updates baad aayega

 

[Spiegel]

Koi baat nahi bhai aap apne tareeke se kahani likho . Hum to readers hai . Padhen ge to kuch comment bhi Karen ge aap Dil pe mat loo . Waiting for next apdate bhai .

na bro me aesa kuch nahi sochta sabka apna apna pov hota hai usme dil pe lene jaisi koi baat nahi hoti mene aage bhi bola hai dil khol ke bol do jaha pe aapko kuch sahi nahi laga to aap bhi apne maje ke liye padh rahe hai and xf ka meta abhi bhi same 5 saal pehla wale xossip ki tarah hai jaha pe readers jyada story me involve nahi hote usi dar se ki writer ko bura na lag jaye par ab wo meta change karne ki jarurat hai at least meri story pe aapko jo sahi na lage wo bol diya karo bhale kitna bhi offending ho aur sab jyada story me involve honge to bahut accha rahega sath me writer ko bhi maja aayega uske liye me karta hun kuch naya

 

[deepg]

Bhai ek no story hai ..update regular rakho brother bss

 

[Spiegel]

Bhai ek no story hai ..update regular rakho brother bss

thanks bro try karunga agar ho sake to but roj roj likhne ka mann nahi karta jab maja aata hai tab hi likhta hun

 

[Lovekillsyou]

Achha update tha par Aaj ke update me maza nahi aaya

Ab tumhare maje ke liye kya writer kaira rashmi lia aur voh 7 inch waali ko ek sath nachaye.

 

[go4ahaan]

thanks bro aage se dhayan rakhunga me likhne ke baad edit nahi karta isiliye aesa hota hai upar se aaj late likhna suru kiya tha so jaldi jaldi me kuch dekha nahi, aage ke bhi updates hai jo mujhe edit karne hai kabhi time mila to sab ek sath kar lunga

No issues bro I know writing is just a hobby its not giving you money. So its ok you are trying thats all matters

 

[Spiegel]

vote for your fav beasts


1- BANNACON



2-ONGAMARTO


3- CLADRIUS


4- RISHU THE LEGENDARY SUAR

 

[Huraiz]

waiting