Fantasy Demon Girl Se Shaadi

[Zohaib896]

Bhai kesai ho yaar ap ki story bahut acchi this Bhai mei nai Socha ab incest kai bad yaha suspense story milai hi bhai pehlai apki ki story bahut acchi chal Rahi Thi pir achanak ap nai rok di pata sab logo ki zindgi mei problem ati hume Laga thik hai jab Bhai ko time milai toh Update ajai hi yaar pir Bhai sab nai kaha Kai jis ko story parhni hai pare nahi parhni toh ja sakta hai aur Marzi hogi toh update kar do ga yaar yaha Mazak chal raha Bhai dil sai respect kartai hai yaar agar nahi update daini toh likhi hi Kyu yaar Chalo Marzi hai apki mei toh apnai Dil mei sab Kuch likh diya hai hope so sharam ajai toh update dai do bye

 

[spritemathews]

Dear We are waiting for your super update!

 

[gopal.10495]

Update please........

 

[Jacab]

Nice

 

[Spiegel]

Bhai kesai ho yaar ap ki story bahut acchi this Bhai mei nai Socha ab incest kai bad yaha suspense story milai hi bhai pehlai apki ki story bahut acchi chal Rahi Thi pir achanak ap nai rok di pata sab logo ki zindgi mei problem ati hume Laga thik hai jab Bhai ko time milai toh Update ajai hi yaar pir Bhai sab nai kaha Kai jis ko story parhni hai pare nahi parhni toh ja sakta hai aur Marzi hogi toh update kar do ga yaar yaha Mazak chal raha Bhai dil sai respect kartai hai yaar agar nahi update daini toh likhi hi Kyu yaar Chalo Marzi hai apki mei toh apnai Dil mei sab Kuch likh diya hai hope so sharam ajai toh update dai do bye

thanks bro par abhi dil nahi lag raha jis hisab se mene socha tha us hisab se acchi story likh nahi paya character development mene socha tha us hisab se hua nahi uski vajah se sab character ko time nahi diya jitna dena tha aur deta to story lambi aur sath me slow ho jati hai abhi aage sochunga kya karna abhi mujhe story likhni aati nahi hai jaisa mene socha tha mene plot character sab soch lia tha aage kam se kam 400 updates tak ka yani ke end tak ka sab set hai par jaisa dimag me hota hai wo me story me la nahi pata kuch bhi kar lun thoda bahut idhar udhar ho jata hai, rudra ka 70 ya 80 per tak sahi hai par kaira ka thoda idhar udhar hai abhi par aage kuch updates me sahi kar lunga par usse pehle mujhe practice karni hai acchi story likhne ki jisme jo imagine karu vaisa likh pau isliye ya to yahi same story english me kahi aur likhunga ya agar hinglish me dusri story suru karunga to wo yaha pe karunga jo abhi socha nahi hai. mene bahut sara material deha hai light novel likhne ka bahut dhayan se bhi padhi hai ke vo writers kaise likhte hai apni story so me bhi aesa try karunga jab tak khud ko lage nahi ke ab acche se story likh raha hun tab tak ye hiatus pe rakhunga, ab dekhta hun kya karta jisme jyada maja aayega wo karunga just keep supporting

 

[deepg]

Bhai aap ese hi likh do hume to abhi tak koi kami lagi ne story me zara si bhi....aap khud hi imagine kr rhe ho yhe sb ......humari taraf se to one of the best sotries me hai yhe

 

[Spiegel]

Bhai aap ese hi likh do hume to abhi tak koi kami lagi ne story me zara si bhi....aap khud hi imagine kr rhe ho yhe sb ......humari taraf se to one of the best sotries me hai yhe

nahi bro us hisab se nahi bol raha story and plot ke hisab se utna bhi bura nahi ja raha par aapko bhi pata hoga mera likhne ka tarika sahi nahi hai jo me jatana chahta hun ya dikhana chahta hun wo sahi tarike se nahi dikha pa raha jaise last me 10 me se 5 jitne to sirf rudra aur kaira ki bato me hi chale gaye kyun ki undono ka ek dusre ke sath development dikhana tha ki kaise sab dhire dhire change ho rha hai par kuch jayda hi chapters le liye agar nahi dikhata fir bhi problem thi upar se world building isme sahi se nahi hua kyun ke usko dikhane ka mere pe accha tarika hi nahi tha agar aesa hi chalta raha to puri story sirf kaira and rudra me hi nipat ke rah jayegi jisme bura bhi nahi hai and sabko acchi bhi lagegi par next level pe jane ke liye dusre characters ka bhi development jaruri hai agar aage kisise fight ho to aesa na lage ki kaira, rudra ya kisi aur bas aese hi mara hai jisko me bas update me bol diya ke wo itna jayda powerfull hai bla bla par aese puri hype bane to maja aayega sabko jyada jaise madara ya kaido jaise kaido ka naam kuch baar hi pehle aaya tha yaha waha pe aaya tha par bas usko sirf ek baar dikhaya tha tab sabko lagta tha ki ha thoda powerfull hoga par luffy kuch bhi karke jeet jayega par ek baar dressorosa ark ke baad dikhayatha sirf 2 min usme hi sabki fatt gai thi aur uske baad 2 ya 4 epi wano me par itne me pura change ho gaya aur hype ban gai, ab mere se aesa hoga ki nahi wo baat alag hai par aesa karna sikhna hai jaha hype ke liye 10ya 20 chapter ki jagah sirf 2 ya 4 me hi sab dikha saku par me jyadatar sabki backstory dunga jaise is season ke villain ki jo badi ho sakti hai 10 chapters jitni par mere hisab se me ready nahi itne acche taraike se likhne ke liye

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

nahi bro us hisab se nahi bol raha story and plot ke hisab se utna bhi bura nahi ja raha par aapko bhi pata hoga mera likhne ka tarika sahi nahi hai jo me jatana chahta hun ya dikhana chahta hun wo sahi tarike se nahi dikha pa raha jaise last me 10 me se 5 jitne to sirf rudra aur kaira ki bato me hi chale gaye kyun ki undono ka ek dusre ke sath development dikhana tha ki kaise sab dhire dhire change ho rha hai par kuch jayda hi chapters le liye agar nahi dikhata fir bhi problem thi upar se world building isme sahi se nahi hua kyun ke usko dikhane ka mere pe accha tarika hi nahi tha agar aesa hi chalta raha to puri story sirf kaira and rudra me hi nipat ke rah jayegi jisme bura bhi nahi hai and sabko acchi bhi lagegi par next level pe jane ke liye dusre characters ka bhi development jaruri hai agar aage kisise fight ho to aesa na lage ki kaira, rudra ya kisi aur bas aese hi mara hai jisko me bas update me bol diya ke wo itna jayda powerfull hai bla bla par aese puri hype bane to maja aayega sabko jyada jaise madara ya kaido jaise kaido ka naam kuch baar hi pehle aaya tha yaha waha pe aaya tha par bas usko sirf ek baar dikhaya tha tab sabko lagta tha ki ha thoda powerfull hoga par luffy kuch bhi karke jeet jayega par ek baar dressorosa ark ke baad dikhayatha sirf 2 min usme hi sabki fatt gai thi aur uske baad 2 ya 4 epi wano me par itne me pura change ho gaya aur hype ban gai, ab mere se aesa hoga ki nahi wo baat alag hai par aesa karna sikhna hai jaha hype ke liye 10ya 20 chapter ki jagah sirf 2 ya 4 me hi sab dikha saku par me jyadatar sabki backstory dunga jaise is season ke villain ki jo badi ho sakti hai 10 chapters jitni par mere hisab se me ready nahi itne acche taraike se likhne ke liye

Mugen bhai apki story sabko pasand ayi h ap jo likh rahe wo bahut acha h isai koyi fark ni padta ki kitne updates 2 jano ke bich he rah gaye ya simat gaye plot ye h ki reader ko ache lage ya ni toh yes bilkul ache lage h main khud writer aur reader hu aur apki story mai toh pahle bi kaha h har update mai hero ne mere chahre pe achi khasi smile layi h ap bus likhte rahe

 

[Ajaysinh]

Spiegel please continue story we all support u

 

[Spiegel]

Spiegel please continue story we all support u

closed nahi kar raha bas kuch time keliye hiatus pe hogi fir baad me suru kar dunga tab tak kya karu wi bata raha tha ki nai story suru karu ya rehne dun agar suru karne ki socha to me iss week me nai story suru kar dunga ya fir isi story ko kuch time suru kar dunga