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rec- JAISA KE AAPNE DEKHA RUDRA ABHI EK GOBLIN KIDNAM KAR RAHA THA PAR KAIRA NE USKO BICH ME AAKE ROK DIA AB AAGE




Abhi kaira rudra ki tarah gusse se aankhe nikal ke dekh rahi thi or rudra ke hath se bag le liya ek jatke se or wo bag gautmi ki taraf fek dia usne us magic se bag ko chota kar dia or apne paas rakh lia ab rudra ko pata nahi tha gautmi ke paas ye bhi power hai. kaira ne rudka ko unke piche chalne ko bol dia, rudra ke paas aese bhi kuch chara nahi tha wo chup chaap unke piche chalne laga or wo charo aage chalne lage, tabhi thodi der baad baar baar gautmi piche dekh ke rudra ko chida rahi thi rudra ne bhi socha tha iski bhi bari lunga par abhi nahi. par abhi sab bas plan bana rahe the tabhi thodi der baad sab ek resto jaisi jagah pe pahoch gaye or ek side jake sab beth gaye. rudra bas abhi sab dekhne me laga tha usko maja aaraha tha ek tarah se sab dekh ke tabhi kaira ne gautami ke paas se leke rudra ko ek relic stone de diya or muh me rakhne ko bol dia rudra ne bhi wahi kia jaise muh me rakha wo gayab ho gaya par aaju baju wali dusron species ki aavaj usko samaj me aane lagi thi matalb ye translater type ka relic stone tha.

firse sab bate kar rahe the abrix metal kaha pe milega or waha kaise jana hai or unka alliance guild jinga name KS guild tha uske kuch member thode member jo megur ke hath nahi aaye the matalb wo bach gaye the par abhi unki body heal ho rahi thi fight ke baad abhi unki fight ka bhi 2 se 3 din ho gaya tha par abhi jake unki body heal huvi thi matlab samne walo ne aesa kuch use kia tha jisse body thodi dhire se heal ho rahi tho varna kuch ghanto me vamp ki body heal ho jati hai. or abhi un member ko bhi milna tha or sath me abrix ko bhi dhundha na tha. yahi sab bate chal rahi thi tabhi gautami thodi aas paas dekh ke boli '' tum sabne dhyan diya right 2 log hamare pe najar rakh rahe hai, sayad megur ne bheja hai '' avi bhi uski baat unke bola '' ha mene bhi dekha sayad abhi se najar rakani suru kar di hai '' uski baat ka javab dete huve gautami thodi smart bante huve boli '' abhi se nahi jabse ham restro me aaye hai tabse najar rakh rahe hai par do ko to aasani se sambhal sakte hai ham chaar to'' gautami ne jaan buj ke chaar log bole the rudra ko nahi gina tha. uski baat sunke rohan bola '' nahi hamara mission unse fight karna nahi hai ks guild ko sudana hai or wo 2 se jyada hai bas hame unse baat karne ki jarurat hai or kuch nahi'' uski baat sunke kaira bhi boli '' ha and im sure 5 hi log hai wo or jabse phantom world me aaye hai tabse wo hampe najar rakhe huve hai'' gautmi or avi ye baat sunke chonk gaye kyun ke unhone itna dhayan nahi dia tha waha rohan ko bhi 5 ka hi pata tha kaira ki tarah kyun ke usne bhi dhayan dia tha par tabhi rudra kaira ki taraf dekh ke bolta hai ''bet lagavogi agar wo 5 se jyada huve to'' ye baat sunke gautami kuch bich me bolne wali thi tabhi kaira bol padi '' accha or tumhe kya lagta hai kitne hai '' gautami kaira ke bich me to kuch bol nahi sakti thi isilye uski baat sunke wo to chup ho gai par rohan ka dhayan rudra pe tha kyun ke usko bhi panch hi bando ka pata tha or usko yakin tha usne kisiko miss nahi kia tabhi rudra bolta hai '' thik hai meri bet hai 7 '' .

ye baat sunke kaira boli '' accha agar 5 hi huve to '' rudra uski baat ka javab dete huve bola '' fir tum winner tum jo kahogi wo karunga'' kaira ke liye bhi ye accah moka tha isliye usne bola '' thik hai agar me jiti to hamari deal ki tum koi prize nahi loge'' kaira ye 20 kiss wali baat kar rahi thi par uski team walo ko kuch pata nahi tha par unke liye khash kar gautami ke liye ke kaira rudra se itne acche se baat kar rahi thi or uske bato ka javab bhi de rahi thi jo usne expact nahi kia tha par tabhi rudra bola '' ok no problem par agar me jita to prize hogi '' itna bolke wo apni ring ko ghumake hath band karke bolta hai '' wo prize hogi navel ki ya boobs dabane ki '' ye usne mann me bola tha boobs dabane ki baat sunke kaira ko gussa to bahut aaya par usne control kia or boli ''thik hai'' par team walo ne to aadhi baat hi suni thi unko pata nahi chala kya prize rakhi kya hua kuch bhi. rudra bola kaira ki baat sunke ''ok to sabko 5 ka to pata hi hoga sabko (gautami ki or dekh ke bolta hai) bas andho ke alava'' ye baat sunke gautami ki jal gai thi par avi ko bhi pata nahi tha fir bhi wo bola '' ha ofcourse sahi baat unka to sabko pata hai '' rohan ne avi ki taraf dekha avi aankhe chura raha tha rohan se waha rudra ne apni baat jari rakhi or bola '' so baat rahi baki 2 ki usme ek tha goblin '' ye baat sunke gautami bich me boli '' konsa wala jisko tum kidnap kar rahe the rudra ne uski baat ka javab dia '' ha wahi '' gautami ko laga ye kya fek raha hai rohan ko bhi yakin nahi hua usko bhi laga rudra bas aese to kahi nahi bol raha par tabhi kaira boli '' or dusra '' tabhi kaira ki baat sunke gautami boli '' par ye kya bol raha tum iski baat pe yakin kar rahi ho'' tabhi kaira ne bas ek baar gautami ki or dekha wo chup ho gai fir rudra bola '' or rahi baat dusre wali ki to usko khud hi puch lo '' itna bolke rudra ne apne paas wale table pe ek bacchi bethi thi 10 ya 12 saal ki uski taraf dekh ke bola '' beta kab tak bate sunti rahogi kuch bol bhi do'' ye baat sabke sar ke upar se gai kaira ko bhi samaj nahi aaya kuch, rohan ko laga ab rudra pakka bate bana raha hai par usko laga tha ye genius hai par sabse jyada thoda gusse me aake gautami boli '' kabse fek raha hai ham tujhe pagal dikhte hai jo teri baat maan lenge pata hai kitne salo ka expriance hai hame....'' itna bol rahi thi tabhi wo baju wali ladki khadi huvi or rudra ki taraf dekha or boli '' follow me'' or wo chalne lagi. rudra ne kaira ki taraf dekha or bola '' ladies first '' kaira bhi kuch nahi boli or khadi hoke uske piche chalne lagi fir rudra or rohan baad me avi bhi waha gautami ko kuch pata nahi chala kya hua bina soche wo bhi unke piche jane lagi kyun ke usko ghanta pata nahi tha kya ho raha hai. waha rohan bhi soch me pad gaya tha par kaira ne jyada react nahi kia kyun ke rudra kuch bhi unexpacted kar sakta hai. waha avi khud ke tatte sunke saste nashe me tha usko kuch pata nahi tha kaha kya kuch ho raha hai.

thodi der baat us ladki ke piche chalte huve tabhi ek sumsan ilake me aagaye jaha pe ek chote se ghar jaisa tant bana hua tha waha aake ladki jab ruki tabhi baki panch log bhi unke piche aage or unko charo taraf se gher lia sab powerfull bhi lag rahe the gautami or avi ki thodi fatt gai rohan bhi thoda tenstion me aagaya kyun ke usko abhi sambhalna tha kyun ke wo leader tha usko bas baat karke sambhalna tha. tabhi usi tant se subah wala goblin bahar aaya or sath me ek bada sa bag ko khich ke leke aaraha tha ye dekh ke rudra khush ho gaya or haste huve kaira ki taraf bola '' told ya '' par wo rudra ke samne aake ruka or upar aasaman me dekh ke chilane laga ye dekh ke rudra bola '' kya kar rahe ho super saiyan banega kya goblu'' tabhi wo achanak bada ban gaya rudra se bhi bada rudra muskurate huve kaira ki taraf dekh ke bola '' are kaira tune dekha kya ye sachme powerfull ban gaya'' kaira kya hi bole usne me bas ha me sar hika dia par usko rudra ka pata tha kyun wo kabhi darta nahi tha par isko bada dekh ke bakiyon ki gand fatt gai thi kyun ke ye sabse powerfull goblin me se ek mane jate hai par jis hisab se rudra hasi majak kar raha tha wo dekh ke unke hosh ud gaye the unko kuch pata nahi chal raha tha kya ho raha hai isko ye pagal hai kya par tabhi goblin ne rudra ke paas aage ke usko pakad ne wala tha tabhi rudra ne gautami ki taraf ungli kar di or bola '' isne bola tha mujhe '' goblin ne ek baar gautami ki or dekh fir ek baar rudra ki or usne power dekhi gautami ki jyada thi or upar se goblin hote bhi dumb hai wo goblin gautami ki taraf chal pada wo kaira or rohan ki taraf dekh ne lagi par tabhi goblin ne usko gale se pakad ke bag me daal dia wo chillane lagi or wo bag band karke goblin ne wahi jamin pe fek dia gautami abhi bhi chila rhi thi par kaira or rohan ko pata tha ye kuch karenge nahi gautami ko isiliye undono ne fight bhi lena sahi nahi samja or rohan ne gautami ko chup hone ko bol dia wo chup bhi ho gai par abhi bhi bag me padi padi hil rahi thi. avi ne rudra ki taraf dekha rudra ne bhi uski taraf dekha avi niche dekhte huve sochn laga accha hua mene isko kuch nahi bola. fir rohan ko laga isne baat karni chahiye or wo baat karne ke liye aage bada par us ladki ne usko rok dia or boli tumhare paas bas 15 din hai abrix lage ruins me aajana aaj se thik 15 din baad bas utna hi boli wo ladki to or unke sare bando ko isara kar dia sab piche ho gaye or wo goblin bhi chota ho gaya or sab jane lage tabhi rudra bola '' wait '' us ladki ne piche mudke rudra ne wo chote huve goblin ke paas pohach gaya or firse usko kano se pakad lia ye dekhe gand fatt gai rohan or avi ki ye sala marva na de par rudra ne goblin ko kano se padak ke ladki ki taraf feka or bola catch us ladki ne goblin ko padak bhi lia or rudra ki taraf dekhne lagi wo kuch bolne wali thi wo kuch bole bina hi jane lagi waha rudra hasta hua piche dekha waha sab usko gusse me dekh rahe the or upar se avi ne tabhi gautami ko bag se nikala wo gusse se rudra ki taraf dekh rahi thi kuch bolne wali thi tabhi kaira bolti hai '' leave it hame jo info chahiye tha uska thoda bahut mil gaya hai so abhi 15 din hi hai hamare paas ''














bas aaj ke liye itna hi abhi me sota hun or bol dena vampire war wali story iske sath me aage bata dun ya usko jaldi se ek alag story me hi likhu chronology ke hisab se 8 story me se wo sabse aage aati hai jo me likhne wala tha usme se kuch xossip pe likhi bhi thi par uska order sahi nahi tha isiliye is baar sari stories soch raha hun ek order me likhu varna pehle ki kuch story ki tarah adhuri rah jayegi or soch raha hun baad me xossip ki kuch meri story aadhi thi unka pura karunga iss story ke khatam hone ke baad kyun ke sab ek dusre se judi huvi hai sab parallel ya same universe ki stories hai par ek tarah se judi hai marvel ki tarah so iss story ke baad jo aap sab bolenge wo suru karunga

Bhai maine nhi padhi aapki iske alawa koi story. Yadi aapke pass apki Stories ki pdf hai toh de do. Yeh story acchi hai toh pakka aur sab v hongi hi. Pdf hai toh de do nhi toh link hi bata do.

 

[Vipul]

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ha or dursri story xossip thi par wo alag thi wo superpowers wali thi jo list ke hisab se 5th pe likhni thi uska pdf mile to deta hun kashi se

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[Xabhi]

bol dena vampire war wali story iske sath me aage bata dun ya usko jaldi se ek alag story me hi likhu chronology ke hisab se 8 story me se wo sabse aage aati hai jo me likhne wala tha usme se kuch xossip pe likhi bhi thi par uska order sahi nahi tha isiliye is baar sari stories soch raha hun ek order me likhu varna pehle ki kuch story ki tarah adhuri rah jayegi or soch raha hun baad me xossip ki kuch meri story aadhi thi unka pura karunga iss story ke khatam hone ke baad kyun ke sab ek dusre se judi huvi hai sab parallel ya same universe ki stories hai par ek tarah se judi hai marvel ki tarah so iss story ke baad jo aap sab bolenge wo suru karunga

Bhai Ye sb kya hai mai suggest krunga ki aap Pahle ek do character ko build up kre sath hi un character ke opposite character (villan) bhi develop kre fir unka var Ya Jo bhi Aap chahe...
Uske baad dusri story me bhi kuchh nye positive or negative dono hi tarah ke character bnaye the unka bhi jo aap chahe kre war romance Ya kuchh or...
Fir ek nyi story me ek team up kre kre positive character ka or nye negative character se fight or kuchh nye positive character introduce kre sath me...
Aap Thodi Thodi information kisi nye bde villan ki dete rhe inhi uper ki storiyo me Lekin main villain ka suspense bnaye rakhe fir ek Ya 2 Ya 3 fight ek nyi story me dale main villain se like Avenger:end game
MCU me bhi aisa hi kuchh kiya hai pahle iron man aayi fir caption America aayi fir iron man 2nd uske baad Thor yha alag hulk ke kyi part aaye fir bni avenger 1st fir guardian of the galaxy aayi Thor 2nd iron man 3rd caption America 2nd fir avenger :age of altron aayi fir black panther 1st doctor strange 1st guardian of the galaxy 2nd fir spider man 1st or fir dhire dhire avenger :end game aayi kahne ka mtlb sabhi filmo me kuchh na kuchh reference diya agli movie ka nye villan aaye nye hero aaye par last me main villain aaya to aisa hi kuchh aap bhi kariye...

Aap ne kaha 8 story ka concept hai aapke pass to unko Pahle kuchh din baith kr fursat me vell orgranise kariye sari ruprekha bnaiye fir ek ek story digiye Jisse Sabhi logo ko samajhne me kathinai bhi nhi hogi or back to back ek vell managed story verse padhne ko milega...
Aisa hi kuchh yha pr kai writero ne likha hai jaise vj4u bhai ki attitude 1st and 2nd nain11star bhai ki isqe risk 1st and 2nd Jay Sutar Bhai ki gods and demons dev Bhai ki dev the hidden power 1st and 2nd and 3rd ek or writer hai name yaad nhi story thi 'Karma' karke uske 3 part the or bhi Bahut se writer hai Aap unhe padh sakte ho or kuchh madad chahiye to Aap puchh sakte ho or ha Naina ji ko to Maine chhod hi diya unse bhi Aap puchh sakte ho...
Yadi isme likhi kisi baat se kisi ko bhi thes pahuche to mafi chahta hu...

 

[Spiegel]

Bhai maine nhi padhi aapki iske alawa koi story. Yadi aapke pass apki Stories ki pdf hai toh de do. Yeh story acchi hai toh pakka aur sab v hongi hi. Pdf hai toh de do nhi toh link hi bata do.

15 shades of rick naam tha story ka par isme mene thoda hagg diya tha last ke kuch updates me so thoda cringy ban gai thi par fir kahi mile to batata hun ya fir iss story ke baad firse restart karke acche se likhunga ye 5th number pe likhunga or rick ke paas jo story me powers hoti hai wo ek tarah se rudra se related hai jo kuch stories le baad aayega par tab mene wo stroy pehle likh di thi. par ab soch raha hun sab line me chronology ke hisab se likhunga iske baad ek story hogi superheroes ke upar jo one punch man ya the boys jaisi hogi par sirf concept hi baki sab chije usme alag hogi uske baad wali 4 stories rick wale universe ki hi hogi jo ek hacker pe hogi ek secret agents pe hogi or last money pe hogi or sari stories ek dusre se related hogi or ek story alag bhi mene sochi hai jisse kisika lena dena nahi hai wo soch raha hun koi esport player pe likhun par iska abhi socha nahi hai par dusri to dunga

 

[Spiegel]

bol dena vampire war wali story iske sath me aage bata dun ya usko jaldi se ek alag story me hi likhu chronology ke hisab se 8 story me se wo sabse aage aati hai jo me likhne wala tha usme se kuch xossip pe likhi bhi thi par uska order sahi nahi tha isiliye is baar sari stories soch raha hun ek order me likhu varna pehle ki kuch story ki tarah adhuri rah jayegi or soch raha hun baad me xossip ki kuch meri story aadhi thi unka pura karunga iss story ke khatam hone ke baad kyun ke sab ek dusre se judi huvi hai sab parallel ya same universe ki stories hai par ek tarah se judi hai marvel ki tarah so iss story ke baad jo aap sab bolenge wo suru karunga

Bhai Ye sb kya hai mai suggest krunga ki aap Pahle ek do character ko build up kre sath hi un character ke opposite character (villan) bhi develop kre fir unka var Ya Jo bhi Aap chahe...
Uske baad dusri story me bhi kuchh nye positive or negative dono hi tarah ke character bnaye the unka bhi jo aap chahe kre war romance Ya kuchh or...
Fir ek nyi story me ek team up kre kre positive character ka or nye negative character se fight or kuchh nye positive character introduce kre sath me...
Aap Thodi Thodi information kisi nye bde villan ki dete rhe inhi uper ki storiyo me Lekin main villain ka suspense bnaye rakhe fir ek Ya 2 Ya 3 fight ek nyi story me dale main villain se like Avenger:end game
MCU me bhi aisa hi kuchh kiya hai pahle iron man aayi fir caption America aayi fir iron man 2nd uske baad Thor yha alag hulk ke kyi part aaye fir bni avenger 1st fir guardian of the galaxy aayi Thor 2nd iron man 3rd caption America 2nd fir avenger :age of altron aayi fir black panther 1st doctor strange 1st guardian of the galaxy 2nd fir spider man 1st or fir dhire dhire avenger :end game aayi kahne ka mtlb sabhi filmo me kuchh na kuchh reference diya agli movie ka nye villan aaye nye hero aaye par last me main villain aaya to aisa hi kuchh aap bhi kariye...

Aap ne kaha 8 story ka concept hai aapke pass to unko Pahle kuchh din baith kr fursat me vell orgranise kariye sari ruprekha bnaiye fir ek ek story digiye Jisse Sabhi logo ko samajhne me kathinai bhi nhi hogi or back to back ek vell managed story verse padhne ko milega...
Aisa hi kuchh yha pr kai writero ne likha hai jaise vj4u bhai ki attitude 1st and 2nd nain11star bhai ki isqe risk 1st and 2nd Jay Sutar Bhai ki gods and demons dev Bhai ki dev the hidden power 1st and 2nd and 3rd ek or writer hai name yaad nhi story thi 'Karma' karke uske 3 part the or bhi Bahut se writer hai Aap unhe padh sakte ho or kuchh madad chahiye to Aap puchh sakte ho or ha Naina ji ko to Maine chhod hi diya unse bhi Aap puchh sakte ho...
Yadi isme likhi kisi baat se kisi ko bhi thes pahuche to mafi chahta hu...

are isme thes pohchne jaisa kya tha bhai lol or aese bhi agar kuch sahi na lage to bol dena mereko kuch problem nahi hai or mene sari stories pehle se hi order me hi rakha hai or sabka main villain ek tarah se ek hi hoga jispe bhi puri alag story hogi last wali fir usme hi sab last ki fight hogi mene sari story ka plot bhi socha lia hai kamse se kam 5 saal se soch raha hun kis story me kab kya karna hai so par time nahi mil raha likhne ka baat wahi hai or kuch nahi

 

[Xabhi]

UPDATE-19


TO DOSTO AB AAGE,


rec- JAISA KE AAPNE DEKHA RUDRA ABHI EK GOBLIN KIDNAM KAR RAHA THA PAR KAIRA NE USKO BICH ME AAKE ROK DIA AB AAGE




Abhi kaira rudra ki tarah gusse se aankhe nikal ke dekh rahi thi or rudra ke hath se bag le liya ek jatke se or wo bag gautmi ki taraf fek dia usne us magic se bag ko chota kar dia or apne paas rakh lia ab rudra ko pata nahi tha gautmi ke paas ye bhi power hai. kaira ne rudka ko unke piche chalne ko bol dia, rudra ke paas aese bhi kuch chara nahi tha wo chup chaap unke piche chalne laga or wo charo aage chalne lage, tabhi thodi der baad baar baar gautmi piche dekh ke rudra ko chida rahi thi rudra ne bhi socha tha iski bhi bari lunga par abhi nahi. par abhi sab bas plan bana rahe the tabhi thodi der baad sab ek resto jaisi jagah pe pahoch gaye or ek side jake sab beth gaye. rudra bas abhi sab dekhne me laga tha usko maja aaraha tha ek tarah se sab dekh ke tabhi kaira ne gautami ke paas se leke rudra ko ek relic stone de diya or muh me rakhne ko bol dia rudra ne bhi wahi kia jaise muh me rakha wo gayab ho gaya par aaju baju wali dusron species ki aavaj usko samaj me aane lagi thi matalb ye translater type ka relic stone tha.

firse sab bate kar rahe the abrix metal kaha pe milega or waha kaise jana hai or unka alliance guild jinga name KS guild tha uske kuch member thode member jo megur ke hath nahi aaye the matalb wo bach gaye the par abhi unki body heal ho rahi thi fight ke baad abhi unki fight ka bhi 2 se 3 din ho gaya tha par abhi jake unki body heal huvi thi matlab samne walo ne aesa kuch use kia tha jisse body thodi dhire se heal ho rahi tho varna kuch ghanto me vamp ki body heal ho jati hai. or abhi un member ko bhi milna tha or sath me abrix ko bhi dhundha na tha. yahi sab bate chal rahi thi tabhi gautami thodi aas paas dekh ke boli '' tum sabne dhyan diya right 2 log hamare pe najar rakh rahe hai, sayad megur ne bheja hai '' avi bhi uski baat unke bola '' ha mene bhi dekha sayad abhi se najar rakani suru kar di hai '' uski baat ka javab dete huve gautami thodi smart bante huve boli '' abhi se nahi jabse ham restro me aaye hai tabse najar rakh rahe hai par do ko to aasani se sambhal sakte hai ham chaar to'' gautami ne jaan buj ke chaar log bole the rudra ko nahi gina tha. uski baat sunke rohan bola '' nahi hamara mission unse fight karna nahi hai ks guild ko sudana hai or wo 2 se jyada hai bas hame unse baat karne ki jarurat hai or kuch nahi'' uski baat sunke kaira bhi boli '' ha and im sure 5 hi log hai wo or jabse phantom world me aaye hai tabse wo hampe najar rakhe huve hai'' gautmi or avi ye baat sunke chonk gaye kyun ke unhone itna dhayan nahi dia tha waha rohan ko bhi 5 ka hi pata tha kaira ki tarah kyun ke usne bhi dhayan dia tha par tabhi rudra kaira ki taraf dekh ke bolta hai ''bet lagavogi agar wo 5 se jyada huve to'' ye baat sunke gautami kuch bich me bolne wali thi tabhi kaira bol padi '' accha or tumhe kya lagta hai kitne hai '' gautami kaira ke bich me to kuch bol nahi sakti thi isilye uski baat sunke wo to chup ho gai par rohan ka dhayan rudra pe tha kyun ke usko bhi panch hi bando ka pata tha or usko yakin tha usne kisiko miss nahi kia tabhi rudra bolta hai '' thik hai meri bet hai 7 '' .

ye baat sunke kaira boli '' accha agar 5 hi huve to '' rudra uski baat ka javab dete huve bola '' fir tum winner tum jo kahogi wo karunga'' kaira ke liye bhi ye accah moka tha isliye usne bola '' thik hai agar me jiti to hamari deal ki tum koi prize nahi loge'' kaira ye 20 kiss wali baat kar rahi thi par uski team walo ko kuch pata nahi tha par unke liye khash kar gautami ke liye ke kaira rudra se itne acche se baat kar rahi thi or uske bato ka javab bhi de rahi thi jo usne expact nahi kia tha par tabhi rudra bola '' ok no problem par agar me jita to prize hogi '' itna bolke wo apni ring ko ghumake hath band karke bolta hai '' wo prize hogi navel ki ya boobs dabane ki '' ye usne mann me bola tha boobs dabane ki baat sunke kaira ko gussa to bahut aaya par usne control kia or boli ''thik hai'' par team walo ne to aadhi baat hi suni thi unko pata nahi chala kya prize rakhi kya hua kuch bhi. rudra bola kaira ki baat sunke ''ok to sabko 5 ka to pata hi hoga sabko (gautami ki or dekh ke bolta hai) bas andho ke alava'' ye baat sunke gautami ki jal gai thi par avi ko bhi pata nahi tha fir bhi wo bola '' ha ofcourse sahi baat unka to sabko pata hai '' rohan ne avi ki taraf dekha avi aankhe chura raha tha rohan se waha rudra ne apni baat jari rakhi or bola '' so baat rahi baki 2 ki usme ek tha goblin '' ye baat sunke gautami bich me boli '' konsa wala jisko tum kidnap kar rahe the rudra ne uski baat ka javab dia '' ha wahi '' gautami ko laga ye kya fek raha hai rohan ko bhi yakin nahi hua usko bhi laga rudra bas aese to kahi nahi bol raha par tabhi kaira boli '' or dusra '' tabhi kaira ki baat sunke gautami boli '' par ye kya bol raha tum iski baat pe yakin kar rahi ho'' tabhi kaira ne bas ek baar gautami ki or dekha wo chup ho gai fir rudra bola '' or rahi baat dusre wali ki to usko khud hi puch lo '' itna bolke rudra ne apne paas wale table pe ek bacchi bethi thi 10 ya 12 saal ki uski taraf dekh ke bola '' beta kab tak bate sunti rahogi kuch bol bhi do'' ye baat sabke sar ke upar se gai kaira ko bhi samaj nahi aaya kuch, rohan ko laga ab rudra pakka bate bana raha hai par usko laga tha ye genius hai par sabse jyada thoda gusse me aake gautami boli '' kabse fek raha hai ham tujhe pagal dikhte hai jo teri baat maan lenge pata hai kitne salo ka expriance hai hame....'' itna bol rahi thi tabhi wo baju wali ladki khadi huvi or rudra ki taraf dekha or boli '' follow me'' or wo chalne lagi. rudra ne kaira ki taraf dekha or bola '' ladies first '' kaira bhi kuch nahi boli or khadi hoke uske piche chalne lagi fir rudra or rohan baad me avi bhi waha gautami ko kuch pata nahi chala kya hua bina soche wo bhi unke piche jane lagi kyun ke usko ghanta pata nahi tha kya ho raha hai. waha rohan bhi soch me pad gaya tha par kaira ne jyada react nahi kia kyun ke rudra kuch bhi unexpacted kar sakta hai. waha avi khud ke tatte sunke saste nashe me tha usko kuch pata nahi tha kaha kya kuch ho raha hai.

thodi der baat us ladki ke piche chalte huve tabhi ek sumsan ilake me aagaye jaha pe ek chote se ghar jaisa tant bana hua tha waha aake ladki jab ruki tabhi baki panch log bhi unke piche aage or unko charo taraf se gher lia sab powerfull bhi lag rahe the gautami or avi ki thodi fatt gai rohan bhi thoda tenstion me aagaya kyun ke usko abhi sambhalna tha kyun ke wo leader tha usko bas baat karke sambhalna tha. tabhi usi tant se subah wala goblin bahar aaya or sath me ek bada sa bag ko khich ke leke aaraha tha ye dekh ke rudra khush ho gaya or haste huve kaira ki taraf bola '' told ya '' par wo rudra ke samne aake ruka or upar aasaman me dekh ke chilane laga ye dekh ke rudra bola '' kya kar rahe ho super saiyan banega kya goblu'' tabhi wo achanak bada ban gaya rudra se bhi bada rudra muskurate huve kaira ki taraf dekh ke bola '' are kaira tune dekha kya ye sachme powerfull ban gaya'' kaira kya hi bole usne me bas ha me sar hika dia par usko rudra ka pata tha kyun wo kabhi darta nahi tha par isko bada dekh ke bakiyon ki gand fatt gai thi kyun ke ye sabse powerfull goblin me se ek mane jate hai par jis hisab se rudra hasi majak kar raha tha wo dekh ke unke hosh ud gaye the unko kuch pata nahi chal raha tha kya ho raha hai isko ye pagal hai kya par tabhi goblin ne rudra ke paas aage ke usko pakad ne wala tha tabhi rudra ne gautami ki taraf ungli kar di or bola '' isne bola tha mujhe '' goblin ne ek baar gautami ki or dekh fir ek baar rudra ki or usne power dekhi gautami ki jyada thi or upar se goblin hote bhi dumb hai wo goblin gautami ki taraf chal pada wo kaira or rohan ki taraf dekh ne lagi par tabhi goblin ne usko gale se pakad ke bag me daal dia wo chillane lagi or wo bag band karke goblin ne wahi jamin pe fek dia gautami abhi bhi chila rhi thi par kaira or rohan ko pata tha ye kuch karenge nahi gautami ko isiliye undono ne fight bhi lena sahi nahi samja or rohan ne gautami ko chup hone ko bol dia wo chup bhi ho gai par abhi bhi bag me padi padi hil rahi thi. avi ne rudra ki taraf dekha rudra ne bhi uski taraf dekha avi niche dekhte huve sochn laga accha hua mene isko kuch nahi bola. fir rohan ko laga isne baat karni chahiye or wo baat karne ke liye aage bada par us ladki ne usko rok dia or boli tumhare paas bas 15 din hai abrix lage ruins me aajana aaj se thik 15 din baad bas utna hi boli wo ladki to or unke sare bando ko isara kar dia sab piche ho gaye or wo goblin bhi chota ho gaya or sab jane lage tabhi rudra bola '' wait '' us ladki ne piche mudke rudra ne wo chote huve goblin ke paas pohach gaya or firse usko kano se pakad lia ye dekhe gand fatt gai rohan or avi ki ye sala marva na de par rudra ne goblin ko kano se padak ke ladki ki taraf feka or bola catch us ladki ne goblin ko padak bhi lia or rudra ki taraf dekhne lagi wo kuch bolne wali thi wo kuch bole bina hi jane lagi waha rudra hasta hua piche dekha waha sab usko gusse me dekh rahe the or upar se avi ne tabhi gautami ko bag se nikala wo gusse se rudra ki taraf dekh rahi thi kuch bolne wali thi tabhi kaira bolti hai '' leave it hame jo info chahiye tha uska thoda bahut mil gaya hai so abhi 15 din hi hai hamare paas ''














bas aaj ke liye itna hi abhi me sota hun or bol dena vampire war wali story iske sath me aage bata dun ya usko jaldi se ek alag story me hi likhu chronology ke hisab se 8 story me se wo sabse aage aati hai jo me likhne wala tha usme se kuch xossip pe likhi bhi thi par uska order sahi nahi tha isiliye is baar sari stories soch raha hun ek order me likhu varna pehle ki kuch story ki tarah adhuri rah jayegi or soch raha hun baad me xossip ki kuch meri story aadhi thi unka pura karunga iss story ke khatam hone ke baad kyun ke sab ek dusre se judi huvi hai sab parallel ya same universe ki stories hai par ek tarah se judi hai marvel ki tarah so iss story ke baad jo aap sab bolenge wo suru karunga

Rudra ne jis goblin ko pakda tha Vo bhi inka pichha kr rha tha or ek bacchi bhi thi kaira jo Apne Aap ko Itni smart samajhti hai or hai bhi use bhi pta nhi chla ki total kitne log najar rkhe huye hai yha pr bhi rudra ne majak masti Karna nhi chhoda Accha hai dekhte hai or kaise kaise tease karta hai kaira ko...
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[u.sir.name]

15 shades of rick naam tha story ka par isme mene thoda hagg diya tha last ke kuch updates me so thoda cringy ban gai thi par fir kahi mile to batata hun ya fir iss story ke baad firse restart karke acche se likhunga ye 5th number pe likhunga or rick ke paas jo story me powers hoti hai wo ek tarah se rudra se related hai jo kuch stories le baad aayega par tab mene wo stroy pehle likh di thi. par ab soch raha hun sab line me chronology ke hisab se likhunga iske baad ek story hogi superheroes ke upar jo one punch man ya the boys jaisi hogi par sirf concept hi baki sab chije usme alag hogi uske baad wali 4 stories rick wale universe ki hi hogi jo ek hacker pe hogi ek secret agents pe hogi or last money pe hogi or sari stories ek dusre se related hogi or ek story alag bhi mene sochi hai jisse kisika lena dena nahi hai wo soch raha hun koi esport player pe likhun par iska abhi socha nahi hai par dusri to dunga

15 shades of rick story teri hai ptaa na tha.... Par story kafi badhiya lagi mere ko woh... Incomplete hai woh.... Yha k story section mein uska pdf PDA hai.... agar ptaa hota ki woh story teri likhi hui hai to tereko pehle wahi complete karne bolta mein... Mujhe woh story kafi pasand aayi thi....

 

[Xabhi]

ha or dursri story xossip thi par wo alag thi wo superpowers wali thi jo list ke hisab se 5th pe likhni thi uska pdf mile to deta hun kashi se

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[Spiegel]

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me kuch nai story suru karna chahta tha isilye wo baad me finish kar dunga or change bhi karne hai us story me so