Fantasy Demon lord(demon-king)

[akshay2018]

Congratulations for new story brother

Congratulations for new story brother
I hope aap ek achchi kahani likhenge

Congratulations for new stroy
Demn -lord.. Ei ek asey title hey jo log bina suche galat man letey hey..ap ney stroy ke name rkaha demon lord.. Kuch toh Hatke dikhney ko mile ga..i hope ap hame nirash nehi kara gey.. Keep up with good update and regular update

Congrats for new trend but giving very slow update

thanks for supporting Bhai log

 

[akshay2018]

Update2
Demon lord
ab tak aap ne padha kaise vo ladka mara jatahai.
ab aage
Delhi ke sarkari hospital ke ward main garbhvati lady ke bacha hone Bala hai aur ek nanhi ladki aur uss lady Ka husband bahar bhethe wait Kar Rahe hai tabhi achaank se time ruk gya ek roshni us ward main dakhil hui aur vo roshni us lady ke garbh main parvesh Kar gai aur time phir se chal pada aur us lady ko ek ladka hua Jo muskarta hua paida hai vaha par ek doctor aur do nurse Dekh ke pareshan ho gai ki bacha haste huye paida hua hai magar ihe kon bate ye bacha koi aam bacha Nahi hai demon lord hai Jo duniya main sabko rulayega vo Kabhi rote huye Nahi aata hai.
Phir ek nurse us bache ko ek saaf kapde main le ke Baar kadhe Uske Papa aur sister pass Jake kehti hai badhai ho ladka paida hua.
uska baap to kushi ke maare rone laga ki Uske kul Deepak aa gya vahi vo ladki to nachne lagi ki Mera Bhai aa gya.

ab jara intro ho Jaye
Ram pandit : aap sabko to naam se hi pata chal gya ho ga yai kitne sidhe jaisa naam vaisa kaam hai inka age abhi 44 year hai dikhne main BHI tihk thak inki ek choti dukkan hai jis se ghar karcha aur beti padai likhai Hoti hai an bete ki BHI hogi.
Neelam pandit : naam ki tarah hi inka man bhi Neelam hai Yani yai Kabhi BHI gussa Nahi Karti hai age 42 year dikhne main khubsurut hai APNI beti aur bete se bahut pyaar karti hai.
Sheetal pandit : naam ki Tarah yai BHI Sheetal hai to magar tab tak jab tak koi inke Bhai ya betu ki Kuch nahi kehta inhe gussa jaldi to Nahi aata magar jab aa jye to kya kahana age 22 year
Akshay pandit(devil ?) : yai apna hero naam to iska Akshay hai magar Jo ise ache se janta hai vo inhe devil bulate hai Aisa kyu yai aapko story main pta chalega inka age 18 year bodybuilder hai height Apne Ghar San se jyda hai 6.2 inch dimag ke itne
tej hai hai ki puchu hi mat.
yai intro 20 Saal ke baad Ka abhi Ka Nahi hai jis time bacha paida hua us time 20 year mita do to present age PTA chal jaiye
ab aate hai story pe jaha bache Ka janam ho chuka hai aur bache ko Uske pita be gaud main liya hua hai vahi Neelam ko general ward swift Kar Diya gya.
Sheetal Apne Papa se kehti hai.
sheetal : Papa yai kon hai aur mummy Kaha hai.
Papa : beti Sheetal yai Aapka chota Bhai hai aur aapko mummy abhi dushre room so rahi jab uth jaiye hi to hum Milne chale ge
Sheetal : yaimera Bhai aa gya Mera Bhai aa gya
Kuch ghanto ke baad Neelam ko his as jata hai vo BHI Aapne bache ko Dekh ke Kush hoti hai aise do din beet ne ke baad hero ki family hero ki leke ghar aa jati hai
one week later hero Ka naam Karan Ka din hota hero ki family hero ko le ke Mandir jaate hai.
Mandir main ek pandit ki Bethe hote aur vo kehte.
Pandit : kaise ho ram ji aur Neelam.
ram : ache hai pandit ki bhagwaan ki kirpya se.
Neelam BHI yahi kahti hai.
phir pandit ki aane Ka Karan puchte dono pati patni se to ram kehta hai.
Ram : pandit ji mujhe Apne bete Ka namkaran karana hai.
pandit ji : ki yai to badiya baat hai chalo karte hai naamkaran.
phir pandit ji bete janam kis din hua time aur date puchte Jo ram ji batate hai.
Ram : 10/11/2000 Raat ke 3:00 Am shanivaar ke din.
pandit ji unke bete ki kundli bante pareshan hone lage aur kehen lage.
pandit ji : Ram ji yai kaise ho Sakta hai Aapke bete ki kundli khali 18 varsh ki aayu tak hi ban rahi aur iske mathe ki Rekha ki likhvat to kehti iski aayu bahut lambi hai.
Ram : yai aap kya keh Rahe hai pandit ji Aisa Kabhi hota hai kya.
pandit ji :Aisa hota to Nahi magar Aapke bete ki kundli yahi bata rahi chalo chodo iska naam rakhte hai iske do naam honge ek to aap ise denge Jo ki A naam ke aksher se Suru Hoga dusra naam use duniya degi.yai bahut budhi vaan, shurveer Hoga aur ise gussa bahut aaiye jab jab ise gussa aaiye ise jis kis bhi ki vajha se gussa aaiye ga yai uska sarvnaas Kar dega.
iski teen shadhi hogi jinka naam S naam se Suru Hoga.
Apne bete ke baare Jan ke ram aur Neelam Kush dukhi bhi huye aur unhone Apne bete Ka naam Akshay pandit rakha.
aise hi samay bita rahta Akshay aur Sheetal bhi bade hote gye. Jaha humhar

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

Nice update

 

[Shahrukh]

Bahut badiya update bhai

 

[crazyrex]

Very nice update

 

[Abbasi]

Very Nice & Fantastic update ....................
Keep it up bro ..................
Waiting for next update .....................

 

[Black water]

Awesome update

 

[Akil]

Nice update bro

 

[ashish_1982_in]

update kab aayega

 

[akshay2018]

Next Sunday se regular ho ga update main abhi story ke villan ke bare main Soch raha hu bhai