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Congratulations for new storyDosto Meri 1 story yaha continue he..
Ye dusri story he...
Isme Har Hafte Ek Update Aayega..(yani har sunday ko)
Ab kahani ki baat kare to kahani he ek deshbhakt ladke ki..
Jisne aapne vatan ke liye aapna sabkus kurban kar diya..
To logo ne usko hi mujrim man liya..
Ab kya hua tha vo to kahani me hi pata chalega...
Nice start bhaiDeshbhakti(the real hero)
Update 1
Aaj subah India me tin jagah pe bomb blast huye the..
Hajaro insanone jaan gavayi thi.. Aaj pura desh ro raha tha... Hinduo ne aapne khoye the to Kai musalmano ne aapno ko khoya tha... Ek tarah se kai Hindustani ne koi aapna
Khoya tha..
Sab jagah pe har newz channel me yahi charcha chal rahi thi..
Pure India ko high alert kar diya gaya tha...
Ek car me do aadmi ja rahe the...usme ek ki age 48 tak thi to dusre ki age 25 ka ladka tha....
Ladka..hum ja kaha rahe he sir????
Aadmi...tihar jail..
Ladka....vaha lekin q???
Aadmi...abhi Jo halat he usko thik karne ke liye.. Baki tumhe pata chal Jaye ga...is file me dekho..
Aur vo ladka file dekhne lagta he...
Vo log aandar jakar jailer se Milne uske cabin me jate he.
Jailer.... Ji kahiye me kya madad kar sakta hu aapki???
Aadmi... Ye kya baat huyi rakesh.. Me tumse Milne itni dur se yaha aaya hu.. Aur tum halchal n puske sawal pus rahe ho..
Rakesh... Halchal dosto ka pusa jata he malik ji..
Malik... Lagta he tum abhi bhi naraj ho mujse!!!
Rakesh... Narajgi bhi dosto se hoti he... Gairo se nahi.. Aur vese bhi muje bhot kaam he.. Aapne aane ka kya karan he..??
Malik.... Thik he dost na sahi.. Gairo ki tarah hi milte he.. Aur mere aane ka karan he... Abhay Singh Rathod..
Ye naam sunke rakesh chunk jata he...kus paresan ho jata he.. Jo malik dekh lete he...
Fir khud KO sambhalkar..
Rakesh.... Jo insan mar chuka he.. Vo kese karan ho sakta he????
Malik... Ye baat me bhi janta hu Aur tum bhi.. Ki vo jinda he..
Rakesh... Lagta he waqt ke sath tumhara dimag ne kaam Karna band kar diya he.. Jo mare huye insan KO jinda he kah rahe ho...
Malik... Abhi me dosti ki nate pus raha hu...
Rakesh... Tum Jo kar sakte ho karlo.. Aur muje tumhari dosti ki koi jarurat nahi..
Ladka... Aap Hume bata dijiye... Varna hum aapko majbur bhi kar sakte he...
Rakesh turant gun nikal kar. Us ladke pe taan deta he...
Rakesh... Tum abhi bache ho.. Isliye pahli galti smjkar maaf kar raha hu.. Agar me majbur ho gaya to yaha se tumhari lash Jaye GI... Malik samjao aapne assistant ko.. Kaha munh kholna chahiye Aur kanha nahi..
Rakesh... Ab tum log ja sakte ho..
Military head quarter
Is waqt tino senao ke commander, raw chief,ib chief Aur DM(defense minister) ek sath meeting hall me bethe huye the..Aur is par charcha kar rahe the..
DM...malik(raw chief) pata chala kus??
Malik...iski jimmedari aul-kara naam ke aantaki sangathan ne li he...
Balveer Singh(army chief).... Ye to vahi aantaki sangathan he...Jo aapke liye afvaah thi...(vyang karte huye)
DM....balveer is waqt purani bato pe n padke... Hum Jo hua he Aur isko kese roka Jaye ispe dhyan dete he...
Malik...sir humne ek ko pakad liya he...Aur usne kaha he ki baar Aur bhi Kai jagah diwali manayi jayegi...
DM...mtlb
Pandey(IB chief)... Mtlb saaf he unka sir aese Aur bhi dhamake hoge.. Aur lakho log mare jayenge...
DM...isko Rokne ka tarika kisi ke pass he...
Malik...sir he..lekin uske liye Hume PM(prime minister) sir se mulakat karni hogi..
DM...me kus smja nahi..
Malik...isko sirf ek hi insan ROK sakta he..Abhay Singh Rathod...
Is naam KO sunkar vaha betha har insan chunk jata he...
Balveer...lagta he malik sahab pagal ho Gaye he.. Jo mare huye insan ki baat kar rahe he...
Malik...sir mera yakin maniye... Vo jinda he.. Aur muje us KO dhudhne me aapki madad chahiye.. Sirf 3 din..
DM...malik tum jante ho tum kya kah rahe ho??? Yaha betha har insan janta he ki abhay mar chuka he..
Malik...sir yaha bhi he kus log jante he ki vo jinda he..aur sir mera yakin maniye..
DM...lekin kese??? Sabko malum he ki vo us hadse me mar chuka he..
Malik...sir jaha tak me janta hu vo itni aasani se mar nahi sakta.. Aur fir uski lash bhi to nahi mili thi...
DM...tumhe yakin he..
Malik...ji sir..muje pura yakin he..
DM...thik he malik me tumhe 3 din ka waqt deta hu... Lekin tum syor ho ki vo zinda he??? Qki sab jante he ki vo mar chuka he..
Malik...sir muje uske liye Pm sir se milna he....
DM... Thik he.. Me baat karke confirm karta hu.. Lekin tum jante ho n tum kya kar rahe hi???
Malik...hum vaha ja hi rahe he..to vahi bata dunga.. Sir ek baat Aur muje isme balveer ka sath chahiye..
Balveer...bilkul nahi malik ji...me aapke sath kahi bhi nahi aaunga...
DM...balveer is waqt purani bato ko bhulkar abhi ke halat ke bare Aur desh ke bare me socho..
Balveer...ji sir...
(Agla Update Sunday KO)
Nice update bhaiDeshbhakti(The Real Hero)
Update 2
Is waqt pm office me tino Bethe huye the Aur samne PM the...
Pahle to PM sir bhi chunk jate he.. Lekin malik sab proof unko dete he jisse unko yakin ho jata he...
Malik...sir aap sabkus jante he...Aur muje aapki madad chahiye...
PM....malik me tumhare sath hu..lekin vo batayenge ya nahi uski koi guaranty nahi...
Malik...sir aap kahnge to sayad maan Jaye...
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Is waqt
Pm sir ka kafila ek ganv me dakhil ho chuka tha..
Jaha POI(ex president of India) viren sharma ji rahte the unke ghar ke aage kafila ruka tha...
Sab aandar jate he Aur viren ji se milte he..
Abhi chay pani kar hi rahe the ki ek 4 saal ka bacha khelta hua aata he...
Malik....bhut hi pyara bacha he...
Viren ji...hoga q nahi uska baap bhi aesa hi tha..
Malik abhi aage bolne hi vale the ki ek 25 saal ki ladki aati he...
Ladki sabko dekhti he Aur gusse me aapni najar fer leti he...
Ladki....aarav beta chalo..
Aur vo bache ko leke nikal jati he...
Viren ji...ab pm sir batayiye kese aana hua???
Fir vaha ye log vahi baat karte he .. Lekin viren ji vese hi shant rahte he.. Jisse sabko malik ki baat pe yakin ho jata he..
PM....muje diwya(Jo ladki thi uska naam) beti ki madad chahiye..
Viren ji...plz uske purane ghav mat khuredo ... Badi muskil se sambhli he...
PM...lekin is waqt pura desh khatre me he...Aur Hume abhay ki jarurat he..
Tabhi Divya aandar aati he ..
Divya....(hath jodkar) aap log yaha se ja sakte he..me aapki koi madad nahi kar sakti..
PM....divya me is waqt badi ummid leke aaya hu...
Divya...dekhiye aap mere uncle he isliye kus nahi kah rahi hu...Aur vese bhi muje nahi pata vo kaha he..agar pata hota tab bhi nahi batati...
PM....thik he beti chalta hu...lekin ek baat kahna chahunga... Tum is baat ka hamesha afsos rahega ki tum bacha sakti thi hajaro logo ko lekin aapne swarth ki vajah se tumne hajaro logo ko Marne diya...
Nice update bhaiDeshBhakti(The Real Hero)
Balveer...ab kya karenge malik ji...ek darvaza to band nikla.. Aur jab tak ye darvaza nahi khulega...pahla darvaza khol bhi lo farak nahi padega..
Malik...jarur khulega balveer ji... Bs dekhte jayiye...
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Is waqt ek lamba-chaud insan malik ke samne khada tha..
Malik...anwar hum tumhe ab army se requit karke raw me samil kar rahe he..
Anwar...Aur is maherbani ki vajah
Malik...tumhari strength Aur tumhari kabiliyat...
Anwar...sorry sir..me join nahi kar sakta..(ek salute karke) chalta hu sir..
Ye kahke vo jese hi pise mudta he..
To 2 aadmi samne khade ho jate he...
Anwar...sir smajayiye in bacho ko..galat insan se panga le rahe he...
Malik ke israe se dono side ho jate he..
Door ke pass pahunchke
Anwar...Mai janta hu aapne q bulaya tha...Aur meri aapse gujarish he ki usko paresan n karke usko jine de..
Ye kahke vo nikal jata he...
Malik...kus bhi Karo..jitne bhi agent he unko bhi lagado chaho to police ki madad bhi lo...I don't know tum log kya karoge ... Kese bhi karke muje abhay chahiye..understood
A1...yes sir
Balveer...malik sir vo mil gaya tab bhi kus nahi kar paoge...
Malik....balveer tum madad nahi kar sakte mat Karo...lekin tane Dena band karoge.. Tumhe pata he kitni Jane gayi he Aur kitni Aur Jane Jaye GI vo to aandaza bhi nahi laga sakte tum.. Is waqt is desh KO abhay ki jarurat he.. Qki ek vahi is terrorist group ke bare me janta he...
Balveer...jab usko jarurat thi tab kaha the aap?? Tab sirf aapne hi nahi pure desh ne usko deshdrohi kahkar dhutkar diya tha.. Jisne Kai baar hazaro logo ki jaan bachayi thi badle me kya mila usko??? Aap nahi smjoge sir!!! Rahne dijiye
Malik....to kya ab tum is baat ka badla lo ge mujse..?? Ha manta hu us waqt me galat tha Aur yaha tak pura desh galatfahmi ka sikar ho gaya tha.. Lekin iska mtlb ye to nahi ki us baat KO yaad karke tum aapne desh ko bhul jao??
Balveer....aap khud ko uski jagah rakhkar sochiye?? Aap kya karte?? Aur ha me desh ko nahi bhula hu...thik he me aapko le jaunga us tak!!
Aur salute karke nikal jata he...
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Shabana....kya soch rahe ho??? Kab se bula rahi hu..fir bhi sun nahi rahe ho..
Anwar...army wale abhay ko dhundh rahe he!!
Shabana...lekin q???
Anwar...(fir vo sab bata deta he)
Shabana...aapko bhaijaan ko vapis lane me madad karni chahiye...
Anwar...sab kus jante huye bhi???
Shabana...is waqt desh ko unki jarurat he..agar kisi blast me koi aapna Mara gaya to ??? Us waqt afsos rahe isse acha he ki unko vapas layiye Aur madad kijiye..
Anwar...hmmmm
Nice update bhaiUpdate 4
Ek 16 saal ka ladka aapne room me Bethe huye kisika intzaar kar raha tha..
Tabhi ek aurat room me aati he..
Ladka... Maa kya kaha papa ne???
Maa.... Mujse nahi hoga!! Tum khud hi baat q nahi karte???
Ladka... Aap janti he n Maa!! Unka gussa kitna khatarnakh he...
Maa... Tumhe khud hi baat karni padegi... Ha me tumhara support jarur karungi..
Ladka... Thik he Maa...
Vo do no baju ke room me jate he jaha papa Bethe huye book padh rahe the...
Papa... Ha bolo kya baat he...
Maa... Aapko kese pata??
Papa... Me army me cornel tha.. Bhulo mat...
Maa... Vo abhay KO aapse baat karni he??
Papa... Ha bolo abhay???
Abhay... Papa vo me doctor banna....
Abhi Mai kus aage bolta usse pahle..
Papa... Sochna bhi mat... Tumhe sirf army join karni he.. Aur desh ki seva karni he.. Aapne dono bade Bhai ki tarah..
Maa...lekin ek baar...
Papa... Muje kus nahi sunna.. Aur fir bhi agar vo army sod ke doctor banna chahta he... To besak ban sakta he ... Lekin fir kabhi vo muje papa nahi kah sakta..
Aur papa nikal jate he bahar.. Aur Mai aapne room me jakar Rone lagta hu..
Tabhi aavaz aati he.. Bhaiya... Bhaiya...
Usi avaz ki wajah se purani yado se nikalkar aankho kholta hu...
Mai... Ha bol kishu???
Kishu... Bhaiya vijay Bhai aaye he...
Mai... Ok tum jao Mai aata hu..
Is waqt me jungle me base ek chote se ganv me hu... Aur 4 saal se yahi.. Jaha puri duniya ke liye mar chuka hi.. Vahi yaha jinda hu...
Vijay.... Kese ho Bhai????
Mai... Acha hu... Kab aaye??
Vijay... Aaj hi asya hu..
Mai... Thik he ja aaram kar... Kal milte he...
Vijay... Thik he Bhai...
Nice update bhaiUpdate 6
Ek ladka college me ek ladki ke samne ghutno pe betha hua tha..
Aur Charo Aur college ke student's khade the....
Ladka.... Jaisa tumne kaha tha pure college ke samne Aaj Main Apne Dil Ka Hal Tumhen batata hu....
Ladka...
"Jab Se Tumhe Dekha Hai Is Dil Mein Sirf Tumhara Hi Khyal hai..
Jab Se Tumhe Dekha Hai Is Dil Ne Hamesha Tumhe dekhne Ki Khwahish ki hai...
Jab Se Tumhe Dekha Hai Is Dil Ne bandh Aankhon Me Bhi Sirf Tum Hi Dikhai deti ho..
Ladka....aaj main tumhe Apne Dil ki hi baat batata hun.. Aur aapne dil ki gahrayiyo se batana chahata hu ki main Tumhen bahut pyar karta hun...
Ladka...(ladki ki aankho me dekhkar) kya tum Hamesha ke liye Meri Life Line banne Ko taiyar Ho????
Ladki....(khush hoke) han main tumhari life line banne ko taiyar hu... I love you Abhay.. I love you..
Mai... I love you too Poonam....
Aur donon Ek dusre ke gale lag Jaate Hain... aur Sara college dono ke liye taliyan bajane lagte hai... aur abhay ke Apne dost usko cheer up kar rahe the..
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Abhi aur koi khayal dimag me aata usse pahle...
Vijay.... Bhai.... Bhai....Bhai....Bhai.....
Mai.... Ha bolo....
Vijay.... Aapka dhyan kidhar he bhai....???kitni baar aavaz di tab aap hosh me aaye...
Mai.... Kus purani yadein... Tum yaha kus kaam tha...????
Vijay... Ha Bhai vo Anvar Bhai aa rahe hai...
Mai.... Kya.????
Vijay...ha
Mai.... Itne salo baad...!!
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Balveer.... Anvar tumne usko bata to nahi diya...????
Anvar ko kus n bolta dekh...
Balveer... Mtlb tumne bata diya...
Anwar ha me mundi hilata hai...
Malik... Ye kya kiya tumne Anwar...??? Ab tak to us KO pata chal gaya hoga...
Anwar... Agar me n batata tab bhi us KO pata chal jata....
Malik...pata nahi ab vo vaha milega ki bhi nahi...????
Anwar.... Tension mat lijiye vo bhagne valo me se nahi he...
Mast update bhaiUpdate 7
Anwar.... Abhay...
Aaj kitne Sal bad is Awaaz ko Suna Tha Maine...!!! Kaise bhul sakta tha is Awaaz ko...??? Aur is Awaaz Ko sun kar Aaj Meri Aankhon Mein Aansu aa gaye the...!!
Badi Mushkil se Piche Muda...!!! Aur Piche mud kar....
Main.... Bhai jaan...
Badi Mushkil se ye bol Paye mai.... is ke turant bad Mein Rone Lage...
Aur jese hi mai rone Laga bhai Jaan ne Aakar Mujh Se gale lipat Gaye Aur vah Bhi Rone Lage....
Anwar.... kaisa hai tu Chhote...????
main.... bus kaise bhi Jindagi Gujar raha hun Bhaijaan....
Anwar.... koi aisa Din Nahin Gaya Jab Maine Tujhe Yad na kiya ho Chhote....
Main.... main bhi aap logon ko bahut Yad karta hai bhaijaan...
Main.... achha bhabhi ji kaisi hai...???? Aur Hamare Chhote navab...???
Anwar.... vah bhi Tujhe bahut Yad karti hai.... aur Chhote Nawab bhi ekdum theek hai....
Anwar.... Tujhse milane aur bhi log aaye hai....!!!
Jaise hi main Piche Muda To Meri Najar Balveer sir per Padi....
maine turant ja ke unke pair Chhu Liye....
Mujhe control se pakad kar upar uthaya aur mere Gale lag gaye...
Aur Unki Aankhon Se Aansu Aane Lage....
Balveer...m kaise ho Abhay...???
Main... Achcha hun chacha ji... aap kaise ho..???
Balveer.... Tere bagair kaise ho sakta hun...?? koi aisa Din Nahin Gaya Jab Maine Tujhe Yad na Kiya ho....
Main..... mujhe bhi aapki bahut Yad Aati Thi chachaji.... Akela Pad Gaya Tha Main....
baat karte hue Jaise maine Piche Mud Ke Dekha... To Malik Ji ko dekha Jisko dekhke Itna gussa a raha tha ki abhi ke abhi Unka Sar fod du...
Main turant chacha ji Se Alag Hoke Aage Ki aur Nikal Gaya....
Balveer Ji Ne Anwar Koi isara Kiya...
Jise Samajh Kar Anwar bhai jaan Mere Piche Aane Lage...
Bhai jaan mere pass Aakar Mere kandhe per Hath Rakha....
Main.... bhai jaan aap Kyon us insan ko Lekar Mere Samne Aaye...!!! aap Jante Agar Is Duniya Mein sabse Jyada Main Kisi Se Nafrat karta hun.... To vah Sirf Yahi insan hai.... aur aap usko hi Lekar mere pass Aaye....
Main.... Kyon...??? kyon Bhaijaan....??? kyon...???
Anwar.... is Waqt teri sabse Jyada jarurat is desh ko hai...
Main.... lekin is insan Ko Yaha laane ka kya matlab...!!!???
Anwar.... vah Tujhe Lene Aaye...!!!
Main.... bilkul Nahin jis Insan ki vajah se mera sab Kuchh Barbad Ho Gaya.... uski Baat Mein Manu... Kabhi Nahin...
Anwar....un Ki Baat Man nahi Sakta... Samaj sakta Hu..par hamari baat to man sakta hai.... chacha ji ki baat to man sakta hai...
Main.... aap Logon ke liye To Main hastey hastey Jaan de dunga.... Wapas Aana ab Mere Liye bahut kathin hai....
Anwar.... kya apne bete ke liye Bhi Nahin...!!!
Main.... mera beta..???? yah kya kah Rahe hai aap...m???Mera to Koi beta Bhi Nahin Hai...!!!
Anwar..... Arav Tumhara Apna beta....!!!tumhara aur Divya ka beta....
Mai.... Mera aur Divya ka beta....????
Anwar..... han Jab Tum wahan se chale gaye... tab Divya pregnant thi....
Mai.... kahan hai mera beta....????
Anwar..... bus pahunch Nahin wale Hoge....
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Ek jagah....
Ek sumsan ilake me...
Aadmi1... kya pura plan taiyar hai???
Aadmi2....ha pura plan taiyar hai....
Aadmi3.... to fir dhamaka ka kab karna hai...???
Aadmi1.... bus Jaise hi humare Aaka ki khabar aa Jaaye....
Aadmi2 & 3..... theek hai Jaise hi Unki Khabar Aati Hai Hamen Khabar pahuncha dena Ham aa Jaenge...
Sab Apne Apne Raste ki aur Chale Jaate....