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Harendar dhire se jakar Sunny ke baju mein baith gye par sunny ko khabar bhi na hui to Harendar ne dhire se sunny ke balon mein hath firane lage to Sunny bhi kam nhi tha use eik pal bhi nhi laga samjhne mein ki kon aisa kar sakta h kyunki Harendar pahle se hi Sunny ko isi tarah pamper karta aya h. Khair sunny apni soch se bahar aata h, kahne ko to sunny sirf 10 saal ka tha but pichle 1 saal mein wo bahot kuch seekh chuka tha kyunki na sirf usne apni maa ko khoya tha balki uske daddy jo uski aankh mein eik ansoo nhi aane dete the wo usse dur ja rahe the, sunny ko to ye bhi yaad nhi ki last time karamveer ne sunny ko kab pamper kiya tha aur wo nayi maa kitna khush hua tha sunny jab use pata chala tha ki uski nayi maa aane wali h, wo apni khoyi hui maa ki chavi apni nayi maa mein dhund raha tha pr uska bhram jald hi tut gya kyunki uski so called nayi maa usko sabke samne na sahi akele mein sotela vyavhaar karti thi, ik baar priya aur sunny khel rahe the aur priya sunny ko apne naye khilone dikha rahi thi, harendar aur karamveer dono kisi panchayat mein bahar gaye hue the, sunita tv dekhne mein busy thi, ab bache to masoom hi hote h isliye priya aur sunny ka apas mein koi bair na tha, to dono khel rahe the tabhi sunita ki najar dono pr pad jati h to wo priya ko dant deti h ki aise apne khilone kisi ko bhi degi to khilona tut jayega blah blah ab use kon samjhaye ki kisi ki khushi ke aage khilono ki kya bisat, par kahte h na jisne kabhi sukh suvidha dekhi na ho aur achanak se itna kuch mil jaye to hajam nhi hota kisi kisi ko aisa hi kuch hua tha sunita ke sath kaha uska mayka jisme mushkil se 2 kamre aur chota sa ghar, kuch bigha jameen usme parivar ka bharanposhan aur kaha pushtaini haveli aur kayi naukar chakar, croro ka bank balance 1000-2000 bigha khet. Khair sunny sunita ki bat sunke man hi man muskuraya bhale hi 10 saal ka tha wo pr wo batien aur taunt ko achi bhati samjhta tha, gayatri ne usko choti si umar se hi din duniya ki samjh deni shuru kar di thi, wo apne daddy karamveer aur harendar ke sath panchayat mein jata tha har cheej ko dhyan se sunta tha halaki kuch batein uski samjh se pare hote the pr ghar aakar wo un baton ko apne dada ya daddy se puch liya krta tha, wo apne daddy aur dada se pucha karta tha ki unhone ye faisla kyu kiya blah blah. Khair sunita ki bat pr wo muskuraya aur priya ko bola ki " Nayi maa thik kahti h naye khilone kharab ho jayenge ap mere khilono se khel lo" Ye kahkar wo apni almirah khol deta h almirah ke ander dekh kr priya ki hi nhi sunita ki bhi ankh badi ho jati h kyunki us badi si almirah mein rakhe kayi so khilone aur kuch mitti ki gullak, sunny ko aaj tak mili sone aur platinum ki chain, rings, aur kuch note ke bundle. Kul mila kr Ye chand saman hi sunny ke status ko dikhane ke liye kafi tha, aisa nhi tha ki sunny show off karta tha, bus sunny ko shuru se hi aadat thi ki jo bhi gift, ashirwad ke rup mein mile kuch khilone ya uske pariwar ke sneh mein mile aabhushan ya kapde ya fir paise wo sab ik yaad ki tarah sanjo kar rakhta tha wo aj bhi bta sakta tha ki usko platinum ki chain kisne, kab aur kyu di thi. Yahi batien thi jo sunny ko sabse alag banati thi. Khair sunny ka collection dekh kr sunita khud ko chota feel karne lagi thi but sunita to sunita h usne ye bhi mauka nhi chora sunny ko nicha dikhane ka, halaki tab wo jhuti muskurahat se priya ko boli ki dekho tumhare bhaiya ke pass kitne ache toys h chalo inse khel lo par rat ko jab wo apne karamveer ke sath thi tab usne sunny ke is behavior ko dusri tarah represent krke ki sunny mein ghamand aa gya h usne priya ko apna rutba dikhaya ki uspe khilono ki kami nhi h wo in chote khilono se nhi khelta blah blah. Kya chal chali thi usne, priya ko victim banake priya ke liye wahi sab cheeje pane ke liye make sure kr diya tha for future but usne ye bhi make sure kar diya tha ki sunny ko aise mehnge toys aur pocket money aage na mile but karamveer ne sunita ki baton ko jyada seriously nhi liya and baat aayi gyi ho gyi. Aise bhot se incident ho chuke the ab tak jaha sunny koi kasar nhi chor raha tha apne naye pariwar ke close jane ki wahi sunita koi kasar nhi chor rahi thi sunny ko sirf naye pariwar hi nhi sunny ke purane pariwar ko bhi usse dur karne ki, yahi sab sochte hue sunny ki fake smile hote hue bhi sunny ki ankhon se ik ansoon tapak gya. Jise uske dada ne dekh bhi liya aur samjh bhi liya. To harendar ne sunny ko apni gaud mein le liya aur apne seene se laga liya, sunny ko yahi to chahiye tha sunny apne dada ka sneh pate hi tut sa gaya aur pahle dil bhar ke ro liya aur fir aj ka incident kah sunaya uske dada bhi bade gaur se sab sunte rahe aur apne tajurbe se cheejo ko analyze karte rahe. Ye pahla mauka nhi tha ki jab sunny apne dil ki bat, apne incidents apne dada ke sath share kr raha ho, sunita ko bhale hi na pta ho but jab se sunny chalne ke kabil hua h, jab se usne school jana shuru kiya tha tab se har sham ko wo 1 ghanta apne dada ke sath bitata tha aur har bat share karta tha, ye bat sirf gayatri janti thi shayad yun kahe ki ye aadat gayatri ne hi sunny ko di thi taki wo apne dada ke tajurbe aur sanskar ko ache se samjh aur apna sake. Khair jab sunny ne apna dukhra kahi sunaya to harendar ne bade sneh se pucha
Harendar: kya tumhe gussa nhi aata apni maa pr
Sunny : Aata to h par hai to meri nayi maa na aur apno par kaisa gussa, haan unki soch galat h pr agar main bhi wahi soch rakhu to unmein aur mujhe mein anter kya.
Kitni achi bat boli thi sunny ne shayad yahi sanskar the, yahi maturity thi jo gayatri ne bhare the sunny mei, itni gehri soch kisi 10 saal ke bache mein milna bahot rare chance hote h jise harendar ne bhi samjha fir bat ko continue krte hue bola
Harendar: apni sadness ko apni kamjori nhi apni takat banao, apne gusse ko palo, apne gusse ko apne sharir pr lagao, itna majboot ban jao ki tumhe unki nhi balki unhe tumhari jarurat ho, bahot se log hote h jinhe hum importance dete h but unhe humari qadar nhi hoti aur jab hum majboot ho jate h apne mein saksham hote h tab wo humari importance ko samjhte h isliye apne ap ko banao.
Sunny: par wo sab kaise hoga?
Harendar: kasrat se, ache khane pine se aur achi yog sadhna se.
Sunny: par mujhe to insab mein se kuch nhi ata.
Harendar: koi bat nhi beta main hu na, main karta hu vyavastha.
To naya aghaj ho chuka tha sunny ko ab ik goal mil chuka tha jo shayad uske liye jaruri bhi tha.
To be continued.
Jabarjast bhai
 
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Harender: Chalo ab ghar chalte h mujhe aj aaloo ke paranthe khane ka bahut man hai.
Sunny: But mujhe to muradabadi dal khani hai.
(Darasal Harender ko muradabadi dal pasand thi aur sunny ko aaloo ke paranthe)
Itna sunne ke bad Harender eik bar ko sunny ki taraf dekhte h aur fir dono hasne lagte h. Ye thi dada pote ki chemistry, ye tha dada- pote ka pyar. Khair kuch der hasne ke bad dono hasi majak karte hue ghar chale jate hai.
Ghar pahunch kr sunny apne kamre mein chala jata hai fresh hone aur Harender apne kamre mein.
Harender apne kamre mein jakar kuch pal fir se soch mein gum ho jata hai aur kuch der bad uska chehra sakht ho jata hai. Jaise unhone kuch faisla kar liya ho. Wo apna phone utha kar eik number dial karte h. Dusri taraf turant call receive ho jati h.
Harender: Waqt aa gya hai. Main sunny ko tumhare pass bhej raha hu. Tumhe pata hai tumhe kya karna hai.
Unknown: Ji.
Harender: Kasam lo.
Unknown: Taiyar hai sab. Aur fir dono taraf se eik ritual nibhaya jata h.
Rat ko dinner ke time Sare log dining table par sath mein dinner kar rahe the. Tabhi Harender bolta h.
Harender: Main sunny ko Alok ( Harender ka sabse chota beta) ke pas bhej raha hu.
Ye sunke sab shock ho jate h jaha sunny ko jhatka lagta h ki subha hi uske dada uska sath dene ki bat kr rahe the aur achanak hi uske dada use is jagah se hi dur kar rahe h pr fir sunny ko subha hui bat yaad aati h ki use strong banna h aur uske dada ke wo words " Main karta hu kuch" Wo assurance hi kafi tha sunny ko calm hone ke liye aur ready hone ke liye.
Wahi sunita shock hone ke sath khush bhi thi akhir yahi to wo chahti thi but Harender humesha se uske aur sunny ke bich khada rahta tha, Harender hi tha jo humesha sunny ko bacha leta tha aur achanak hi Harender uska kaam asan kar rahe the par wo janna chahti thi ki is faisle ke piche karan kya h. Isliye wo bhi chup hi rahi.
Karamveer: Yun achanak. Kya hua?
Harender: Sunny apni nayi maa ke sath adjust nhi ho para h, meine suna h ki wo Sunita aur priya ke sath badtameeji bhi karne laga h. Iska asar uski padhai par bhi pad raha h. Main chahta hu wo aage badhe aur sehar mein sukh suvidha bhi jyada hai padhai ko leke.
Karamveer: Lekin....
Sunny: Main taiyar hu.
Karamveer ki bat puri bhi nhi hui thi. Karamveer ab bhi usse bahut pyar karta tha usko apne se dur nhi karna chahta tha. Halaki sunny ki harkat sunita btati thi but wo sunita aur sunny ke behavior ko najarandaj karta tha ye soch kr ki dono ko adjust hone mein time lagega pr wo sunny se ab bhi utna hi pyar karta tha par ab jab sunny ne khud hi ye iccha jatai to use dukh bhi hua but wo khush bhi hua ki sunny apne faisle khud lene laga hai. Isliye usne sunny ke faisle ka samman karte hue apni sehmati jata di.
Harender: To tai raha kal sunny alok ke pass ja raha h. Alok ne pahle hi sari vyavastha kar li h.
Itna kahne ke bad sabne apna dinner kiya aur apne apne kamre mein chale gye.
To be continued.
 

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Naya member hu par naya reader ya naya writer nhi hu, samjhdaar ko ishara kafi h. Main ye nhi bolunga ki update din mein ik bar aayega ya week mein ik bar kyunki plot clear h aur mostly har update bhi pahle hi type kiye ja chuke h par agar kabhi network ki problem hui to wo exceptional case h. Story meri file mein complete h pichle 1 saal se likh raha hu is story ko. Yaha jab dekha ki jyadatar writer 1-1 saal, 1-1 week mein 1 update dete h aur fir story ko adhura chhod bhag jate h to sabse jyada dukh mujhe hota kyunki main har story ko dil se jodkar read karta. Meri pahli preference fantasy supernatural powers aur adultry h but aisa nhi h ki mujhe incest se parejh h. Yaha apko sab colours milenge par pariwar ki ijjat maan maryada sabse upar aur behan and maa wo sakshi hote jisko kabhi us najar se nhi dekh sakta main. Haalanki yaha mom aur sis ka bol bala h but apne apne sanskar and morals h isliye different mindset ke log mind na kare.

Anyways ye story h eik aise pariwar ki jo ki bahut pahle se ik gaon, ik kasbe, ik sehar ke nhi balki ik puri khaap ke mukhiya rahe h jaise baliyan khap ke 84 gaon, thakur ki chobisi isi tarah bahut si biradri ki alag alag khap h aur ik aisi hi khap ke mukhiya h is story ke mukhya kirdar. Ye kahani ik aise ladke ki jo is khaap ke mukhiya ke ghar paida to hua par badkismati se uski maa chote umar main chal basi aur fir kisi karanwash uske baap ki nayi shadi aur uski soteli maa ki mahtvakansha ke chalte uske sath hue durvyavahaar aur uska pratishod uske bad sachai ka gyan aur supernature ki entry aur ik bade yudh ki taiyari. Supernatural powers ke sath mili jimmedari aur sath mein pariwarik jimmedariyan aur apni jiwansangini/yo ke sath bitaye yaadgar pal ki ik vishesh dimag ki upaj apke samne prastut h.

Main apke reply/ comment (positive negative) ka wait nhi krunga bas is story ke update krunga. Agar pasand aaye to apne vichar jarur rakhe.

Dhanyawaad.
( shuruat kal se)
Nice thought.......
Waiting for updates.....
 
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Harendar dhire se jakar Sunny ke baju mein baith gye par sunny ko khabar bhi na hui to Harendar ne dhire se sunny ke balon mein hath firane lage to Sunny bhi kam nhi tha use eik pal bhi nhi laga samjhne mein ki kon aisa kar sakta h kyunki Harendar pahle se hi Sunny ko isi tarah pamper karta aya h. Khair sunny apni soch se bahar aata h, kahne ko to sunny sirf 10 saal ka tha but pichle 1 saal mein wo bahot kuch seekh chuka tha kyunki na sirf usne apni maa ko khoya tha balki uske daddy jo uski aankh mein eik ansoo nhi aane dete the wo usse dur ja rahe the, sunny ko to ye bhi yaad nhi ki last time karamveer ne sunny ko kab pamper kiya tha aur wo nayi maa kitna khush hua tha sunny jab use pata chala tha ki uski nayi maa aane wali h, wo apni khoyi hui maa ki chavi apni nayi maa mein dhund raha tha pr uska bhram jald hi tut gya kyunki uski so called nayi maa usko sabke samne na sahi akele mein sotela vyavhaar karti thi, ik baar priya aur sunny khel rahe the aur priya sunny ko apne naye khilone dikha rahi thi, harendar aur karamveer dono kisi panchayat mein bahar gaye hue the, sunita tv dekhne mein busy thi, ab bache to masoom hi hote h isliye priya aur sunny ka apas mein koi bair na tha, to dono khel rahe the tabhi sunita ki najar dono pr pad jati h to wo priya ko dant deti h ki aise apne khilone kisi ko bhi degi to khilona tut jayega blah blah ab use kon samjhaye ki kisi ki khushi ke aage khilono ki kya bisat, par kahte h na jisne kabhi sukh suvidha dekhi na ho aur achanak se itna kuch mil jaye to hajam nhi hota kisi kisi ko aisa hi kuch hua tha sunita ke sath kaha uska mayka jisme mushkil se 2 kamre aur chota sa ghar, kuch bigha jameen usme parivar ka bharanposhan aur kaha pushtaini haveli aur kayi naukar chakar, croro ka bank balance 1000-2000 bigha khet. Khair sunny sunita ki bat sunke man hi man muskuraya bhale hi 10 saal ka tha wo pr wo batien aur taunt ko achi bhati samjhta tha, gayatri ne usko choti si umar se hi din duniya ki samjh deni shuru kar di thi, wo apne daddy karamveer aur harendar ke sath panchayat mein jata tha har cheej ko dhyan se sunta tha halaki kuch batein uski samjh se pare hote the pr ghar aakar wo un baton ko apne dada ya daddy se puch liya krta tha, wo apne daddy aur dada se pucha karta tha ki unhone ye faisla kyu kiya blah blah. Khair sunita ki bat pr wo muskuraya aur priya ko bola ki " Nayi maa thik kahti h naye khilone kharab ho jayenge ap mere khilono se khel lo" Ye kahkar wo apni almirah khol deta h almirah ke ander dekh kr priya ki hi nhi sunita ki bhi ankh badi ho jati h kyunki us badi si almirah mein rakhe kayi so khilone aur kuch mitti ki gullak, sunny ko aaj tak mili sone aur platinum ki chain, rings, aur kuch note ke bundle. Kul mila kr Ye chand saman hi sunny ke status ko dikhane ke liye kafi tha, aisa nhi tha ki sunny show off karta tha, bus sunny ko shuru se hi aadat thi ki jo bhi gift, ashirwad ke rup mein mile kuch khilone ya uske pariwar ke sneh mein mile aabhushan ya kapde ya fir paise wo sab ik yaad ki tarah sanjo kar rakhta tha wo aj bhi bta sakta tha ki usko platinum ki chain kisne, kab aur kyu di thi. Yahi batien thi jo sunny ko sabse alag banati thi. Khair sunny ka collection dekh kr sunita khud ko chota feel karne lagi thi but sunita to sunita h usne ye bhi mauka nhi chora sunny ko nicha dikhane ka, halaki tab wo jhuti muskurahat se priya ko boli ki dekho tumhare bhaiya ke pass kitne ache toys h chalo inse khel lo par rat ko jab wo apne karamveer ke sath thi tab usne sunny ke is behavior ko dusri tarah represent krke ki sunny mein ghamand aa gya h usne priya ko apna rutba dikhaya ki uspe khilono ki kami nhi h wo in chote khilono se nhi khelta blah blah. Kya chal chali thi usne, priya ko victim banake priya ke liye wahi sab cheeje pane ke liye make sure kr diya tha for future but usne ye bhi make sure kar diya tha ki sunny ko aise mehnge toys aur pocket money aage na mile but karamveer ne sunita ki baton ko jyada seriously nhi liya and baat aayi gyi ho gyi. Aise bhot se incident ho chuke the ab tak jaha sunny koi kasar nhi chor raha tha apne naye pariwar ke close jane ki wahi sunita koi kasar nhi chor rahi thi sunny ko sirf naye pariwar hi nhi sunny ke purane pariwar ko bhi usse dur karne ki, yahi sab sochte hue sunny ki fake smile hote hue bhi sunny ki ankhon se ik ansoon tapak gya. Jise uske dada ne dekh bhi liya aur samjh bhi liya. To harendar ne sunny ko apni gaud mein le liya aur apne seene se laga liya, sunny ko yahi to chahiye tha sunny apne dada ka sneh pate hi tut sa gaya aur pahle dil bhar ke ro liya aur fir aj ka incident kah sunaya uske dada bhi bade gaur se sab sunte rahe aur apne tajurbe se cheejo ko analyze karte rahe. Ye pahla mauka nhi tha ki jab sunny apne dil ki bat, apne incidents apne dada ke sath share kr raha ho, sunita ko bhale hi na pta ho but jab se sunny chalne ke kabil hua h, jab se usne school jana shuru kiya tha tab se har sham ko wo 1 ghanta apne dada ke sath bitata tha aur har bat share karta tha, ye bat sirf gayatri janti thi shayad yun kahe ki ye aadat gayatri ne hi sunny ko di thi taki wo apne dada ke tajurbe aur sanskar ko ache se samjh aur apna sake. Khair jab sunny ne apna dukhra kahi sunaya to harendar ne bade sneh se pucha
Harendar: kya tumhe gussa nhi aata apni maa pr
Sunny : Aata to h par hai to meri nayi maa na aur apno par kaisa gussa, haan unki soch galat h pr agar main bhi wahi soch rakhu to unmein aur mujhe mein anter kya.
Kitni achi bat boli thi sunny ne shayad yahi sanskar the, yahi maturity thi jo gayatri ne bhare the sunny mei, itni gehri soch kisi 10 saal ke bache mein milna bahot rare chance hote h jise harendar ne bhi samjha fir bat ko continue krte hue bola
Harendar: apni sadness ko apni kamjori nhi apni takat banao, apne gusse ko palo, apne gusse ko apne sharir pr lagao, itna majboot ban jao ki tumhe unki nhi balki unhe tumhari jarurat ho, bahot se log hote h jinhe hum importance dete h but unhe humari qadar nhi hoti aur jab hum majboot ho jate h apne mein saksham hote h tab wo humari importance ko samjhte h isliye apne ap ko banao.
Sunny: par wo sab kaise hoga?
Harendar: kasrat se, ache khane pine se aur achi yog sadhna se.
Sunny: par mujhe to insab mein se kuch nhi ata.
Harendar: koi bat nhi beta main hu na, main karta hu vyavastha.
To naya aghaj ho chuka tha sunny ko ab ik goal mil chuka tha jo shayad uske liye jaruri bhi tha.
To be continued.
Bahot behtareen
Shaandaar update bhai
 

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Harender: Chalo ab ghar chalte h mujhe aj aaloo ke paranthe khane ka bahut man hai.
Sunny: But mujhe to muradabadi dal khani hai.
(Darasal Harender ko muradabadi dal pasand thi aur sunny ko aaloo ke paranthe)
Itna sunne ke bad Harender eik bar ko sunny ki taraf dekhte h aur fir dono hasne lagte h. Ye thi dada pote ki chemistry, ye tha dada- pote ka pyar. Khair kuch der hasne ke bad dono hasi majak karte hue ghar chale jate hai.
Ghar pahunch kr sunny apne kamre mein chala jata hai fresh hone aur Harender apne kamre mein.
Harender apne kamre mein jakar kuch pal fir se soch mein gum ho jata hai aur kuch der bad uska chehra sakht ho jata hai. Jaise unhone kuch faisla kar liya ho. Wo apna phone utha kar eik number dial karte h. Dusri taraf turant call receive ho jati h.
Harender: Waqt aa gya hai. Main sunny ko tumhare pass bhej raha hu. Tumhe pata hai tumhe kya karna hai.
Unknown: Ji.
Harender: Kasam lo.
Unknown: Taiyar hai sab. Aur fir dono taraf se eik ritual nibhaya jata h.
Rat ko dinner ke time Sare log dining table par sath mein dinner kar rahe the. Tabhi Harender bolta h.
Harender: Main sunny ko Alok ( Harender ka sabse chota beta) ke pas bhej raha hu.
Ye sunke sab shock ho jate h jaha sunny ko jhatka lagta h ki subha hi uske dada uska sath dene ki bat kr rahe the aur achanak hi uske dada use is jagah se hi dur kar rahe h pr fir sunny ko subha hui bat yaad aati h ki use strong banna h aur uske dada ke wo words " Main karta hu kuch" Wo assurance hi kafi tha sunny ko calm hone ke liye aur ready hone ke liye.
Wahi sunita shock hone ke sath khush bhi thi akhir yahi to wo chahti thi but Harender humesha se uske aur sunny ke bich khada rahta tha, Harender hi tha jo humesha sunny ko bacha leta tha aur achanak hi Harender uska kaam asan kar rahe the par wo janna chahti thi ki is faisle ke piche karan kya h. Isliye wo bhi chup hi rahi.
Karamveer: Yun achanak. Kya hua?
Harender: Sunny apni nayi maa ke sath adjust nhi ho para h, meine suna h ki wo Sunita aur priya ke sath badtameeji bhi karne laga h. Iska asar uski padhai par bhi pad raha h. Main chahta hu wo aage badhe aur sehar mein sukh suvidha bhi jyada hai padhai ko leke.
Karamveer: Lekin....
Sunny: Main taiyar hu.
Karamveer ki bat puri bhi nhi hui thi. Karamveer ab bhi usse bahut pyar karta tha usko apne se dur nhi karna chahta tha. Halaki sunny ki harkat sunita btati thi but wo sunita aur sunny ke behavior ko najarandaj karta tha ye soch kr ki dono ko adjust hone mein time lagega pr wo sunny se ab bhi utna hi pyar karta tha par ab jab sunny ne khud hi ye iccha jatai to use dukh bhi hua but wo khush bhi hua ki sunny apne faisle khud lene laga hai. Isliye usne sunny ke faisle ka samman karte hue apni sehmati jata di.
Harender: To tai raha kal sunny alok ke pass ja raha h. Alok ne pahle hi sari vyavastha kar li h.
Itna kahne ke bad sabne apna dinner kiya aur apne apne kamre mein chale gye.
To be continued.
Tow sunny ab shaher ja raha h apne chacha ke jaha ab uski jindagi naya mod legi badhiya h
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
 

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Hi dude
What's up
Can you start the thread again or nope
What's your opinion on that plz tell us
 

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गोंडो क्यों बनाते हो भाई ?कहानी शुरू करने से पहले बहुत बातें करते थे .अब बताओ कहानी एक्टिवेट करनी है या नहीं, रोज ऑनलाइन आ जाते हो .
 
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