Incest Destiny: The Last Stand (With AI Images)

[mistyvixen]

Latest Update 23
Beneath the Flow

 

[Mrxr]

Update 23
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* Pahla sawal aisa kya ho gaya tha ki Vinashika ke pita ne hi apni patni ko jahar de diya tha jiska jimmedar Vinashika anantrajya ko manti hai.

Lagta hai Karan ke chacha ji ka hanth hai ishme wohi hai jo Anantrajya se sambandh rakhte hai aur vinashika ke pita ho,

* Dusra sawal ek aur Sharvas, Ajay ko Thansala ke maze mein le ja raha hai wahin dusri aur Viyali ki information ke according Thansala nast ho chuka hai.

ish sawal ka koi matlab hi nahi Banta kyonki jab kaalrani ne thanasala pe hamla kiya tha toh nidhi ne apne angrakshak se vaani ko maze me le jane ko Bola tha ,ish se hi pata chalta hai ki maze kitni safe hogi

* Tisra sawal kya Vinashika mein itna power hai ki wo akele Agrahak ki help se Vanrajya aur uske logo ko maar sake.

Bhai wo queen of death hai,powerful toh hogi hai aur Agrahak ne bola tha ki vinashika van rajya me apni power nahi use kar sakti kyonki wo sarnita ke adheen hai maybe.....
aapka kya khayal hai dhal bhai main ne sahi kaha ya nahi

 

[mistyvixen]

Bahot shandaar likha hai

Thanks

Acchi baat hai bhai...
Mujhe koi dikkat nahi hoti samajhne me,
Sister kaysa bhi likhe samajh me aa hi jata hai mere

Nhi yeh wala thoda complicated tha hi

Good thinking sis.....
And I think you need only describe all locations ,distances, sides,relationship's,area,power, etc....

Pure lore hi hai describe karne ko hai...lekin aaj toh kuch nhi kar rhe main

 

[Mrxr]

Nhi yeh wala thoda complicated tha hi

Thoda Laga tha par padhne ke baad sabhi scenes ko deeply socha aur samajh aa gaya.....

Pure lore hi hai describe karne ko hai...lekin aaj toh kuch nhi kar rhe main

Koi lode na kudiye ,tu aaye kar, jeb twadda dil kay tu teb lekh,bas moz me rahin tension na leni

 

[mistyvixen]

Update 21​

Kya ye sab Ajay ne kiya tha Ravisha aur Akansha ke sath??

Her story is for season 2 mostly...all doubts will be cleared... about who was Ravisha?

Akansha ne Ravisha se Karan ki jo bhi yaaden thi wo le liya???

Yup...this magic requires that the original person khud apne marzi se raazi ho...aur itne din AKANSHA apne marzi se wahan band thi...jaise hi usko sach pata chala woh jaadu toot gaya.

Akansha apna asli roop pa chuki hai kya par lagta to nahi ki wo neeli colour ki hogi??

She's corrupted...woh apne asli body mein nhi hai but apne memories ke wajah se uska face uske pehle jaisa ho gya hai with the blue hue...(ik it sounds weird but fantasy mein aisa hota hai)

Akansha itne varshon ke baad Karan se mili hai to usko emotional hona hi tha aakhir kar Karan ko apna beta hi jo manti hai aur palne wali mata bhi janm dene wali mata ke barabar hota hai thoda sa bhi kam nahi.

Well said. Ek aur baat Akanhsa ke koi children nhi the! Toh thoda attachment toh badhna hi tha.

1. Kya Sarvash, Ajay se jeet payega jo Kaal-rani ka sipahi hai.

Shravas ne bahut aage ka plan kar rkha tha...usko Kaalandard mein jaane ke liye...kise wahan ke jeev ke jarut thi. One more thing Thansala ke maze is one of the most dangerous places in the story...wahan bahut se monsters rhete hai. Also, it's a maze like the maze runner toh simple se baat hai ek toh raasta toh hoga nhi ismein.

2. Karan yadi infinite skull army ka samna nahi kar sakta hai abhi ke liye to phir battle dekhna dilchasp hoga. Kya koi aur Karan ki help karta hai ya phir Karan khud ko aur apni mausi ko khud hi bacha payega!!!

Yeh pata chal chuka hai. Shravas acted as a decoy to help them escape...vaise bhi Mahal mein kise bhi guspaithye ke aane ke chaos mach jata hai

3. Yadi Akansha kamjor hone ke baw-jood wo Ravisha se apni Karan ki memory wapas le sakti hai to kya wo khud ko bacha nahi sakti hai???

She was in the prison on her own will...and AKANSHA doesn't know how to fight. Aur woh magic bhi isse wajah se tuta. And this magic will play a big role in season 2.

4. Yes I know dragon sirf Karan ki riding ke liye nahi hai balki use battle mein bahut hi jayada help milegi khas kar tab jab use help ki jarurat ho.

Hmmm... right?

Nice and beautiful update ended with suspense.

Thanks a lot. Dhal
Sorry for replying late.

 

[Oscarpistorious]

Thanks
Saare characters aur locations ke naam main first page pe Hindi aur Eng dono mein likh dungi...woh jayda shi rhega. Pehle socha tha ke ek map hi bana doon...lekin usse samjhna bhi mushkil hai


Mere saath bhi hota tha dheere dheere apne aap hi smjh aa jayega...!

Samjh aa rhi h intresting ho rhi h dhire dhire

I got it,he just saying ki update me tum rajyon ke naam hindi me bhi likha karo like this....
Vanrajya (वनराज्य)
Siyara (शियारा)
mistyvixen

Yes

Thanks
Saare characters aur locations ke naam main first page pe Hindi aur Eng dono mein likh dungi...woh jayda shi rhega. Pehle socha tha ke ek map hi bana doon...lekin usse samjhna bhi mushkil hai


Mere saath bhi hota tha dheere dheere apne aap hi smjh aa jayega...!

Hmm, exactly ya to update kre to hi hindi me wording ho jaye to best rahega, starting me hoga to bhi thik h, uske liye signature me us page ko add kar de taki jab bhi confusion kuch ho to direct pahuch jaye varna starting me 1st page me index rahega to sayad characters and locations ko agar jagah nhi mile 1st page me.
Rest story is really getting very intresting now I will read it again from first to last once 1st part completes.
So now Waiting for first part to complete that will give time to think story through about which way turn it to, and for us reader's to revise once to get clarity of story line.
Congratulations for such a great story, double century of pages and half million views .
Wishing you all the best.

 

[mistyvixen]

Han bai aur na bhi because Ajay said " kalrani ka hukum hai ki kaljayi milte hi dono ko khatam kar Dena "

Yup. Abhi tak woh kyuu chup chap baithe hue the...Karan aur baakiyon ke madad kyu kar rhe the...infact Nadnani ne letter mein jo request likhe the woh bhi kyu Maan Li...kyuki unhe bhi KalJayi chaiye the.

aur kaalrani ne sauda kiya tha akansha se ki vo use kaljayi degi aur badle me van rajya baksh diya Jayga aur Karan ka sauda ravisha ne man liya jishe akansha ne swikar nahi kiya tha .aur akansha kamjor nahi thi sayad

Akansha denied that she'll not give away Karan, but Ravisha knew ke unke saath rhene ka bas woh hi ek raasta hai toh peeche se usne Ajay ke baat maan li...aur woh Sharnita aur Ajay se kaise aur kahan mile. Woh aage hai story mein

I feel ke har characters ke saath story bahut complex hote jaa rhe hai.

 

[mistyvixen]

Samjh aa rhi h intresting ho rhi h dhire dhire

Yes

Iss chapter mein main thoda sab pichla connect hua hai bahut saree chapters...toh ek bhi cheez dimag se nikle toh smjh mein kam aayega. But I will say to chapter 9...uska hi Jayda role tha. Jaisa ki maine kaha tha 5-6 updates mein pura season wrap karna is challenging abhi itne info dimag mein rkhne padege aage toh isse complex hi hoge story...jab lore badh jayege

Hmm, exactly ya to update kre to hi hindi me wording ho jaye to best rahega, starting me hoga to bhi thik h,

You know what... I'm thinking of designing a map!! It would be best...usmein hindi aur eng mein list kar dungi saare naam aur characters bhi...abhi tak females hi daale hai...I think ke saare naam ek jagah hone chaiye first page pe.

uske liye signature me us page ko add kar de taki jab bhi confusion kuch ho to direct pahuch jaye varna starting me 1st page me index rahega to sayad characters and locations ko agar jagah nhi mile 1st page me.

Maps is the best way to represent a Fanatsy world...kyuki loactions aur geography bhi kaafi use karungi main so pata hona chaiye konsa Kingdom aur baaki important locations kahan hai

Rest story is really getting very intresting now I will read it again from first to last once 1st part completes.

Thanks staring se maine dheere dheere hi pace badhene ke koshish ke hai...kuch puchna ho toh puch lena bina jhijhake...spoilers ko chord ke bata dungi

So now Waiting for first part to complete that will give time to think story through about which way turn it to, and for us reader's to revise once to get clarity of story line.

Thoda bahut toh guess kar hi skte ho! Maine pehle hi bol diya tha tags mein ke wars toh obvious hi hai.

Congratulations for such a great story, double century of pages and half million views .
Wishing you all the best.

Thanks a lot Oscars
Hope you'll be here till the end of this epic

 

[Mrxr]

Well said. Ek aur baat Akanhsa ke koi children nhi the! Toh thoda attachment toh badhna hi tha.

I have one question for you sis....
Agar aysa hai toh Karan se Badi payal thi toh payal se itna lagawo kyon nahi tha sirf Karan se hi kyon kyon ki vo ladka tha ishliye....?????
Rajya ka yuvraj banega ishliye..????

I feel ke har characters ke saath story bahut complex hote jaa rhe hai.

Aur meri thinking bhi complex ho rahi hai

 

[mistyvixen]

I have one question for you sis....
Agar aysa hai toh Karan se Badi payal thi toh payal se itna lagawo kyon nahi tha sirf Karan se hi kyon kyon ki vo ladka tha ishliye....?????

Because Payal was born first and in Anantpur the capital... Aakansha ke saamne nhi. Karan was born in Vanrajya when Subhadra was exiled from his kingdom. Aur jab tak Payal thodi badi bhi ho gye the? Yk there's enough age difference between them. (I'm a human too i can make mistakes too)
So, Akansha usually took care of Karan when he was a infant... there's a difference between a baby and 5-6 year old. So that's that.
Khud hi smjh sakte ho...ke kisi ko god mein khilane wali feeling alag hi hoti hai.

Rajya ka yuvraj banega ishliye..????

Nope nope

Aur meri thinking bhi complex ho rahi hai

Haa Payal ke bahar bhi dimag chal rha hai

 

[Rudra Roy]

Update 23

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* Pahla sawal aisa kya ho gaya tha ki Vinashika ke pita ne hi apni patni ko jahar de diya tha jiska jimmedar Vinashika anantrajya ko manti hai.

* Dusra sawal ek aur Sharvas, Ajay ko Thansala ke maze mein le ja raha hai wahin dusri aur Viyali ki information ke according Thansala nast ho chuka hai.

* Tisra sawal kya Vinashika mein itna power hai ki wo akele Agrahak ki help se Vanrajya aur uske logo ko maar sake.

Well wonderful update slatyvixen.

bhai mere v teen sawal the ...

Pehela- sachcha me aisa koi app hai jiska use karke wo sab kar sakte hai jiska zeekr tumne apni thread pe kiya tha..?

Dushar- agar hai to bata do main v apni adhuri story ko pura karlu or agar nahi hai to kyo hum garib logo ka chutiya kat rahe ho...??

tishar- bata de bhai ...chutiya mat kat...garibo ki haya kyo lena chahta hai...???