Incest DEV THE HIDDEN POWER - ULTIMATE UNIVERSE

[sorbobhuk]

UPDATE 34​

Rudra (Damian) ke haath tezi se hawa mein ghoome. Uski ungliyan ek jatil mudra bana rahi thi aur uske muh se ek vinashkari mantra nikalne hi wala tha. Agar woh mantra pura ho jata, toh shayad yeh pura ghar raakh ke dher mein badal jata.
Lekin main intezaar karne walon mein se nahi tha.

Main (Mann mein): “Ab aur nahi.”

Maine turant apne dono haath aage kiye. Meri hatheliyon se ek invisible frequency nikli—woh frequency jo physical duniya ko nahi, balki seedha aatma (soul) ko target karti hai.

Main (Buland aawaaz mein): “SOUL RETRIEVAL: AATMA-VICHHEDAN!”

Jaise hi mera mantra pura hua, waqt jaise tham gaya.

Ek tez jhatka laga.

ZUUUUUNNN!

Mere aur Rudra ke physical shareer (bodies) ek kathi (puppet) ki tarah dhile pad gaye aur zameen ki taraf girne lage.
Lekin hum gir nahi rahe the.

Humare shareeron se humari Aatmaayein (Souls) bahar khich aayi thi.

Ek behad patli, chamakti hui Silver Thread (Rajat Sutra) humari naabhi (navel) se nikal kar niche pade humare shareeron se judi hui thi. Yeh woh aakhiri dhaaga tha jo humein zinda rakhe hue tha. Agar yeh toota, toh maut tay thi.
Damian (Rudra ki aatma mein) hairan tha. Usse pehle ki woh kuch samajh pata, maine uski soul ko gardan se pakda.

Main: “Yahan nahi. Upar!”

Maine ek rocket ki raftaar se udaan bhari.

Main Damian ko ghaseet-te hue chhat ko cheerte hue, hawa ko kaatte hue seedha badalon (clouds) ke upar le aaya.

Niche ghar ek chinti jaisa dikh raha tha. Yahan, aasmaan mein sirf hum the. Shanti aur toofan dono saath mein.

Maine use jhatke se choda. Hum dono hawa mein tair rahe the.

Damian ne apne soul-form ko sambhala. Rudra ka chehra wahi tha, par uski aatma ka rang maila (muddy) aur kaala pad chuka tha.


Damian (hasta hua): “Waah Dev! Apni family ki badi chinta rehti hai tujhe... ki kahin unhe kharoch na aa jaye. Par dusron ki family ko maarne mein bada maza aata hai na tujhe? Unka kya jinko tune past mein kuchla tha?”

Uski baatein mere kaano mein chubhi, par main shant raha.

Main: “Gade murde mat ukhaad Damian. Galati tere baap ki thi. Woh meri family, piche pada tha. Maine bas wahi kiya jo zaroori tha.”

Main thoda aage badha, meri aatma ka golden aura badalon ko roshan kar raha tha.

Main (Gambhir awaaz mein): “Shuruaat usne ki thi, khatam maine kiya. Ab tu mere piche pada hai... iske baad tera beta aayega badla lene? Yeh cycle yahi rukni hogi.”

Damian zor se hasa. Uski hasi mein paagalpan tha.

Damian: “Hahaha! Tujhe lagta hai main tujhse haar ke mar jaunga? Bewakoof Dev! Phele mere is chhote se ansh (fragment) ko toh hara de jo Rudra ke andar hai. Yeh main nahi hu... yeh bas meri parchhai ka ek tukda hai. Agar tu ise bhi nahi nikaal paya, toh asli ‘Main’ se kaise ladega?”

Woh sahi keh raha tha. Rudra ki aatma puri tarah corrupt ho chuki thi. Rudra ki safed roshni aur Damian ka kaala dhuan aapas mein aise ghul gaye the jaise doodh mein zeher.

Agar maine zabardasti Damian ko kheenchne ki koshish ki, toh Rudra ki aatma bhi phat jayegi.

Mujhe surgery karni thi... Soul Surgery.

Main: “Tujhe lagta hai tu nikal nahi sakta? Dekh ab.”

Maine hawa mein apne haath phailaye. Aas-paas ke vatavaran ke Particles (Anu) mere control mein aane lage. Hawa, nami, roshni—sab kuch mere ishare par naachne laga.

Main: “PARTICLE MAGIC: VIBHAJAN (SEPARATION)!”
Maine apne haath aage kiye aur Rudra ki aatma par focus kiya.
Maine Damian ke kaale dhuen ko ek virus ki tarah treat kiya. Ek-ek particle ko maine Rudra ki pure soul se alag karna shuru kiya.
“Aaaagghhhh!”
Damian cheekha. Use dard ho raha tha. Particle magic uske astitva ko bikhair raha tha.

Dhire-dhire, Rudra ki aatma se woh kaala hissa alag hone laga.
Lekin... ek samasya thi.
Damian ne Rudra ki aatma ka aadha hissa kha liya tha. Jab maine Damian ko alag kiya, toh Rudra ki aatma aadhoori (incomplete) reh gayi. Ek khokhla-pan tha wahan.

Agar maine use aise hi wapas bheja, toh Rudra pagal ho jayega ya coma mein chala jayega.

Mere paas sirf ek raasta tha.

Maine apni khud ki aatma (Soul) ki taraf dekha. Woh bright golden thi, urja se bhari hui.
Maine ek faisla liya.

Main: “Main apne bete ko aadhoora nahi chodunga.”

Maine apne daayein haath se apni chhati (chest) par vaar kiya.

Main: “Urghh!”
Dard... bhayankar dard. Aatma ko todna shareer todne se hazar guna zyada takleefdeh hota hai.

Maine apni Half Soul (Aadhi Aatma) ko apne andar se nikaal liya.

Mera aura aadha reh gaya, meri chamak thodi feeki pad gayi.
Lekin mere haath mein ek glowing golden ball thi—mera aadha hissa.

Damian (Darr ke maare): “Tu... tu pagal hai! Tu apni power sacrifice kar raha hai?”

Main (Muskurate hue): “Ek baap ke liye, yeh taqat kuch bhi nahi.”
Maine woh golden hissa Rudra ki khokhli aatma mein fit kar diya.

Jaise hi mera hissa Rudra se mila...

BOOOOM!

Ek nayi roshni paida hui. Rudra ki aatma ab puri thi. Usme ab sirf Rudra nahi tha, usme mera ansh bhi tha.

Ab woh pehle se zyada shaktishali tha.
Maine hawa mein bikhre Damian ke us chote fragment ko muthi mein band kiya aur masal diya.

Woh cheekh ke saath gayab ho gaya.
Ab sirf main aur Rudra the.

Maine Rudra ki aatma ko gale lagaya.

Main: “Chalo beta, ghar chalte hain.”
Hum tezi se niche ki taraf gire. Woh Silver threads humein wapas kheench rahe the.
Baadalon ko cheerte hue, chhat ko paar karte hue...

Living Room
GASP!

Main aur Rudra, dono ek saath jhatke se uth baithe.

Humare physical bodies mein jaan wapas aa gayi thi.

Mere seene mein ek halka sa dard tha—apni aadhi soul khone ka dard—lekin jab maine Rudra ko dekha...

Rudra apni aankhein mal raha tha. Uski aankhein ab wapas normal brown ho gayi thi. Kaalaapan gayab tha.

Woh confuse hokar idhar-udhar dekh raha tha.

Rudra: “Dad...? Hum... hum zameen par kyun hain?”

Dad, Mom, Neha, Saloni aur Pari... sab hairaan the.

Unhone bas humein girte hue dekha tha aur ab uthte hue.

Unhe nahi pata tha ki upar aasmaan mein kya jung hui hai.

Maine ek gehri saans li aur apne ladkhadate hue pairon par khada hua. Kamzori mehsoos ho rahi thi, par dil ko sukoon tha.


Main: “Kuch nahi beta... bas ek bura sapna tha. Jo ab khatam ho gaya.”
Maine Neha ki taraf dekha. Uski aankhein nam thi. Woh samajh gayi thi ki maine kuch bada khoya hai lekin usko pata hai ki mene apne bete ke liye kiyaa thaa yeh...

Lekin maine use ishare se chup rehne ko kaha.

Rudra bilkul theek tha.
Par Damian sahi keh raha tha... yeh toh bas shuruaat thi.

Bahut badhiya update Hai Bhai.....
Sach kahu to update chhota hone se jayda maaja nhi aaya......samajh sacktu hu ki ye part storyline ke liye jaruri hai..... Jaise ki bataya geya hai ye to shuruaat hai.....dekhte hai ek sath V or Damian ke sath kaise ladai karta hai.....
Or ek baat abhi tak samne nhi sab iss universe me aaya hai story ke main character hai liken mujhe ek ladka ka kami jarur mehsus ho raha hai.....dev jab joker character ke sath raw me tha to ek misson ke baad ek ladki ke sath sex kiya tha or pichli story end hone ke kuch update pehla samne aaya jo samay ke bahut pehle hi apna age se jayda 18 saal ka ho geya tha jab uska age bach kuch saal hona chahiye tha.....wo bhi dev ka beta hai to kya uska iss part me koi role nhi hai.
Btw waiting for next update

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro

 

[Smith_15]

 

[Shanu]

Fabulous update bhai

 

[Smith_15]

Update 35

 

[Dev the lover]

Update 35

Aaj deta hu update sorry for delayed response...

 

[Dev the lover]

Bahut badhiya update Hai Bhai.....
Sach kahu to update chhota hone se jayda maaja nhi aaya......samajh sacktu hu ki ye part storyline ke liye jaruri hai..... Jaise ki bataya geya hai ye to shuruaat hai.....dekhte hai ek sath V or Damian ke sath kaise ladai karta hai.....
Or ek baat abhi tak samne nhi sab iss universe me aaya hai story ke main character hai liken mujhe ek ladka ka kami jarur mehsus ho raha hai.....dev jab joker character ke sath raw me tha to ek misson ke baad ek ladki ke sath sex kiya tha or pichli story end hone ke kuch update pehla samne aaya jo samay ke bahut pehle hi apna age se jayda 18 saal ka ho geya tha jab uska age bach kuch saal hona chahiye tha.....wo bhi dev ka beta hai to kya uska iss part me koi role nhi hai.
Btw waiting for next update

Bhai aapki yaaddaash toh kamaal ki hai!

Maan gaye, aapne toh seedha itihas ke pannno se wo kissa dhund nikala. Update chhota tha, maafi chahunga, lekin aane wale bade dhamako ke liye ye shanti zaruri thi.

Rahi baat Dev ke us bete ki (Joker mission wala), toh aapka point valid hai. Kahani mein har character ka ek waqt hota hai. Wo iss part mein hai ya nahi, ya uska role kya hoga... ye abhi ek surprise hai. Lekin itna zaroor kahunga ki is universe mein purani kadiyan judengi zaroor.

Bas aise hi bariki se padhte rahe!
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Update 35

Shukriya Bhai!
Update number yaad rakhne aur itne pyaar ke liye thanks.
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Dil se Shukriya!
Aapka ye support hi energy deta hai.
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Fabulous update bhai

Thanks a lot Bhai!
Khushi hui ki update aapko fabulous laga. Saath bane rahe.
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Nice update bro

Thanks Brother!
Glad you liked it.
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Mazedar update

Thanks Brother!
Glad you liked it.
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[Dev the lover]

UPDATE 35​

The Era of War & The Demand of Detrios

Mahoul behad gambhir tha. Main Rudra ko apne baahon mein uthaye hue tezi se kamre ki taraf badha. Mere piche-piche Neha, Saloni, Pari aur Komal bhi aa rahi thi. Unke chehro par ghabrahat aur sawalon ka tufaan saaf dikh raha tha.
Kamre mein pahunchte hi maine Rudra ko bed par aaram se lita diya. Uski saansein chal rahi thi, par woh behosh tha.

Tabhi Komal, jo ab tak chup thi, achanak bol padi, uski awaaz mein kampan tha.

Komal: “Dev... aakhir yeh sab kya hai? Kaun hai yeh ladka? Aur tum... tum asal mein kaun ho? Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha.”

Maine ek gehri saans li. Ab waqt aa gaya tha ki parde hata diye jayein. Maine apna haath unki taraf badhaya.

Main: “Sawaal bahut hain Komal, aur jawaab zubaan se nahi diye ja sakte. Sab log... mera haath pakdo.”

Mere kehne par pehle Saloni ne, fir Neha, Pari aur ant mein darte hue Komal ne mera haath thama. Jaise hi humara circle pura hua, maine apni aankhein band ki.

Seal.

Mere dimag se ek command nikli aur pure kamre ke charo taraf ek invisible magical barrier ban gaya. Bahar ki duniya ki awaazein shant ho gayi. Aur agle hi pal, meri memories ka ek sailaab unke dimaag mein transfer hone laga.

Woh koi mamooli yaadein nahi thi. Woh pichle janmon ka sach tha, humare rishton ki gehraayi thi, aur woh dard tha jo humne sadiyon se saha tha.

Jaise hi flashback khatam hua, kamre mein sannata chha gaya. Sirf sisakne ki awaazein aa rahi thi. Teeno ladkiyan—Saloni, Pari aur Komal—zameen par baith gayi, unki aankhon se aansu rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the. Unhone woh sab dekh liya tha—humara pyaar, humara bichhadna, aur mera intezaar.

Pari rote hue aage badhi aur Saloni ki taraf dekha.

Pari (rote hue): “Saloni di... aapne dekha? Iss janam mein aapne Dev bhaiya se khoon ka rishta paaya hai... par hum? Hum sab toh wo kismat nahi paa sake.”

Uski baat mein ek dard tha, par saath hi ek ajeeb si raahat bhi thi. Kyunki khoon ka rishta na hone ka matlab tha ki woh mere kareeb aa sakti thi.
Maine aage badh kar Pari ko gale laga liya aur uske sar ko sehlaya.

Main: “Pagal ladki... yeh toh achi baat hai na? Tujhe apna banane ke liye mujhe samaj ke kisi bahane ki zarurat nahi padegi. Tu humesha se meri thi, aur rahegi.”

Meri baat sunkar paas baithi Komal, jo ab tak ro rahi thi, achanak thoda muskurayi. Aansu abhi bhi uske gaalo par the.

Komal (haste hue): “Maine sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki main apni sautano (rivals) ko wapas paakar itna khush houngi. Aisa lag raha hai jaise humari family puri ho gayi.”

Tabhi Neha, jo thodi door khadi thi, rote hue Saloni ke paas gayi aur unke gale lag gayi.

Neha: “Didi... mujhe maaf kar do. Please mujhe maaf kar do.”

Saloni ne use hairani se dekha aur uske aansu ponche.

Saloni: “Kya hua Chhoti? Tu kyun maafi maang rahi hai? Tune toh Rudra ko bachaya hai.”

Neha (sisakte hue): “Maine Rudra ko toh bacha liya di, par main unhe nahi bacha paayi... Aap mein se kisi ke bhi aane wale bacho ko main uss waqt nahi bacha paayi thi. Woh bojh aaj bhi mere dil par hai.”

Saloni ki aankhein bhar aayi. Usne bade pyaar se Neha ke sar par haath rakha.

Saloni: “Pagal hai kya tu? Koi baat nahi bacha. Jab tak Dev mere saath hai, mujhe jo milna tha, woh milega zarur. Chahe woh mujhe aaj mile ya 1000 saal baad. Humara pyaar time ka mohtaaj nahi hai.”

Mahoul thoda shant hua toh Pari ke dimaag mein ek sawal aaya.

Pari: “Par Saloni di... aap Dev bhaiya ko asal mein jaanti ho na? Matlab... woh entity kya hai? Unki shakti ka raaz kya hai?”

Saloni (gambhir hokar): “Waise toh Dev ko puri tarah jaan paana kisi ke bas ki baat nahi hai. Par agar humare group mein koi inhe sabse behtar samajh sakta hai, toh woh main aur Pari hi hain.”

Neha: “Kyun didi? Main bhi toh usi 'Diamond' (Source) se nikli thi jisse aap sab log nikle the. Phir main kyun nahi pehchan paungi?”

Saloni ne meri taraf ek sawaliya nazar se dekha, jaise puch rahi ho ki kya ab waqt aa gaya hai sach batane ka? Aur kya room safe hai?
Maine haan mein sar hilaya.

Main: “Fikar mat karo, barrier bahut mazboot hai. Yahan ki ek awaaz bhi bahar nahi jayegi.”

Saloni ne gehri saans li aur sabko dekha.

Saloni: “Abhi tum sabne Dev ki jo memory dekhi, woh sach toh hai, par woh pura sach nahi hai. Woh sirf wo hissa tha jo Dev chahte the ki duniya ko pata rahe. Lekin asliyat kuch aur hai.”

Pari (shocked): “Par kya di? Paheliyan mat bujhao, please bata do na.”

Saloni: “Tumhe kabhi aisa nahi laga ki Dev hum sabko paane ke baad bhi, hamesha kisi cheez ko dhoondhne mein lage rehte the? Jaise kuch missing ho?”

Komal: “Haan... yeh toh sahi kaha aapne di. Maine hamesha notice kiya hai ki Dev ki aankhon mein ek ajeeb si talash rehti thi, sab kuch hone ke baad bhi.”

Saloni ne mera haath kas ke pakad liya, jaise mujhe sahara de rahi ho.

Main: “Koi baat nahi Saloni, bol do. Aaj sab sach saamne aa jane do.”

Saloni: “Riccha... jise hum apni family, apni behen samajhte rahe hain... woh humari koi nahi lagti.”

Kamre mein sannata chha gaya.

Sab (ek saath): “Kya??”

Saloni: “Haan. Riccha ek 'Unwanted Energy' hai. Ek aisi entity jo humara picha karti rehti hai. Woh sirf isliye humare saath thi taaki dusri entities hum par nazar rakh sakein. Woh ek jasood thi, parivaar nahi.”

Sab chauk gaye. Yeh khulasa kisi bomb girne se kam nahi tha.

Main: “Saloni sahi keh rahi hai. Humari family mein jo missing link tha... jise main sadiyon se dhoondh raha tha... woh Riccha nahi, balki Saloni ki judwa behen, Mina thi.”

Neha (aankhein phaad kar): “Mina? Yeh kaun hai? Maine aaj tak iske baare mein kabhi nahi suna! Aur Saloni di ki judwa behen? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai?”

Main: “Iska pata mujhe bhi tab chala jab main 'Narak' (Hell) mein gaya tha.”

Pari ghabra kar mere paas aayi.

Pari: “Kya? Aap Narak gaye the? Aapne aaj tak humko nahi bataya! Hume laga ki aap disturb the isliye gayab the... par aap wahan kyun gaye the? Aur wahan aapko yeh kaise pata chala? Woh sab chhodiye... pehle yeh bataiye ki yeh Mina hai kaun?”

Maine unhe shant rehne ka ishara kiya. Kahani abhi shuru hui thi, aur raaz abhi aur gehre hone wale the.
“Baitho... yeh kahani lambi hai.”

Kamre mein sannata tha. Meri awaaz bhari ho gayi thi jaise main unn purani yaadon ke bojh tale dab raha hoon. Maine Saloni aur baaki sabki taraf dekha aur kahani shuru ki.

Main: “Yeh baat aaj ya kal ki nahi hai... Yeh baat tab ki hai jab Srishti (Universe) apne naye roop mein dhal rahi thi. Dharti par insaano ka raaj nahi tha, balki taqat ka santulan Devtas (Gods) aur Demons (Asuras) ke haathon mein tha.”

Mere bolte hi unke dimaag mein ek visual banne laga.

[Flashback Starts]

Ek aisi jagah jo antariksh (space) aur dharti ke beech kahin sthit thi. Wahan hawa mein ek alag hi thandak aur tanaav tha. Aasmaan do hisson mein bata hua lag raha tha—ek taraf sunehri roshni (Gods) aur dusri taraf gehra kaala dhuaan (Demons).
In dono senaon ke beech mein ek "Celestial Mine" thi. Ek aisi jagah jahan se pure brahmand ke sabse kimati aur shaktishaali Gemstones nikalte the.

Yeh wo patthar nahi the jo aajkal milte hain; yeh wo "Source Stones" the jinme nayi duniya banane ki aur kisi bhi prajati ko amar (immortal) karne ki taqat thi.

Dono taraf ki fauj taiyaar khadi thi. Talwarein khinchi hui thi, mantra padhe ja rahe the. Bas ek ishare ki deri thi aur wahan khoon ki nadiya behne wali thi.

Tabhi, Demons ki sena cheerte hue ek bhari-bharkam aakriti aage aayi.

Woh Detrios tha. The Demon King.

Uska kad 8 feet se lamba tha, sharir par kaale metal ka armor tha jisme se laal roshni nikal rahi thi. Uski aankhein angaron ki tarah dehak rahi thi, aur haath mein ek bada sa 'War Hammer' tha. Uske aate hi zameen hilne lagi.

Gods ki taraf se Indra (ya High Lord) aage aaye.

High Lord: “Detrios! Apni sena ko piche le jao. Yeh pavitra (holy) Gemstones hain. In par sirf divya shaktiyon ka adhikar hai. Tum jaise andhere ke prateek inhein chu bhi nahi sakte.”

Detrios zor se hansa. Uski hansi mein itna ahankaar tha ki baadalon mein garaj paida ho gayi.

Detrios: “Pavitra? Adhikar? Yeh shabd tum Devtaon ne banaye hain taaki tum sab kuch apne kabze mein rakh sako. Lekin yaad rakho High Lord... andhere ke bina roshni ka koi wajood nahi hota.”

Detrios ne apna War Hammer zameen par patka.

DHADAM!

Ek badi daraar dono senaon ke beech ban gayi.

Detrios (Gurrate hue): “Hum yahan bheek maangne nahi aaye hain. Hum yahan apna hissa lene aaye hain. Yeh khadaan (mine), yeh gemstones... yeh shakti ka srot hai. Aur shakti par sabka barabar haq hota hai.”

Usne apni ungli uthayi aur Gods ki taraf ishara kiya.

Detrios: “Mera prastaav (proposal) seedha hai. Is khadaan ko 50-50 divide kiya jayega. Aadhe Gemstones Demons ke honge, aur aadhe tumhare. Agar humein humara aadha hissa mila, toh hum shanti se wapas chale jayenge. Lekin agar tumne humein khali haath bhejne ki koshish ki...”

Usne apni aankhein chhoti ki aur dhamki bhari awaaz mein kaha.

Detrios: “...toh aaj yahan itna khoon bahega ki yeh kimati patthar bhi laal pad jayenge.”

Gods aapas mein fusfusane lage. Unhe pata tha ki Detrios ki maang galat hai, kyunki agar Demons ke haath wo power lag gayi toh wo tabahi macha denge. Lekin wo yeh bhi jaante the ki Detrios ki sena bahut Vishal (huge) hai.

High Lord: “Humein manzoor nahi hai! In shaktiyon ka upyog srijan (creation) ke liye hona chahiye, vinaash ke liye nahi. Hum tumhe ek kan (particle) bhi nahi denge.”

Detrios ka chehra gusse se laal ho gaya.

Detrios: “Toh phir yudh hoga! Aur is baar... main sirf patthar nahi lunga, main tumhari uss sabse kimati cheez ko bhi cheen lunga jiska tumhe sabse jyada guroor hai.”

[Flashback Pauses]

Main (Present mein): “Yahi woh galti thi... uss din Gods ne samjhauta karne se mana kar diya, aur Detrios ne tay kar liya ki woh seedhe raste se nahi, toh chalaki se apna haq lega. Uss yudh ki shuruaat ne hi Mina aur Saloni ki kismat likh di thi.”

Saloni ne darrte hue pucha, “Kyu? Us yudh se humara kya lena dena tha?”

Main: “Kyunki uss khadaan mein jo sabse bada aur shaktishaali 'Diamond' (Source) tha... uske do hisse hone wale the. Ek tum... aur ek Mina.”

 

[sorbobhuk]

UPDATE 35​

The Era of War & The Demand of Detrios

Mahoul behad gambhir tha. Main Rudra ko apne baahon mein uthaye hue tezi se kamre ki taraf badha. Mere piche-piche Neha, Saloni, Pari aur Komal bhi aa rahi thi. Unke chehro par ghabrahat aur sawalon ka tufaan saaf dikh raha tha.
Kamre mein pahunchte hi maine Rudra ko bed par aaram se lita diya. Uski saansein chal rahi thi, par woh behosh tha.

Tabhi Komal, jo ab tak chup thi, achanak bol padi, uski awaaz mein kampan tha.

Komal: “Dev... aakhir yeh sab kya hai? Kaun hai yeh ladka? Aur tum... tum asal mein kaun ho? Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha.”

Maine ek gehri saans li. Ab waqt aa gaya tha ki parde hata diye jayein. Maine apna haath unki taraf badhaya.

Main: “Sawaal bahut hain Komal, aur jawaab zubaan se nahi diye ja sakte. Sab log... mera haath pakdo.”

Mere kehne par pehle Saloni ne, fir Neha, Pari aur ant mein darte hue Komal ne mera haath thama. Jaise hi humara circle pura hua, maine apni aankhein band ki.

Seal.

Mere dimag se ek command nikli aur pure kamre ke charo taraf ek invisible magical barrier ban gaya. Bahar ki duniya ki awaazein shant ho gayi. Aur agle hi pal, meri memories ka ek sailaab unke dimaag mein transfer hone laga.

Woh koi mamooli yaadein nahi thi. Woh pichle janmon ka sach tha, humare rishton ki gehraayi thi, aur woh dard tha jo humne sadiyon se saha tha.

Jaise hi flashback khatam hua, kamre mein sannata chha gaya. Sirf sisakne ki awaazein aa rahi thi. Teeno ladkiyan—Saloni, Pari aur Komal—zameen par baith gayi, unki aankhon se aansu rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the. Unhone woh sab dekh liya tha—humara pyaar, humara bichhadna, aur mera intezaar.

Pari rote hue aage badhi aur Saloni ki taraf dekha.

Pari (rote hue): “Saloni di... aapne dekha? Iss janam mein aapne Dev bhaiya se khoon ka rishta paaya hai... par hum? Hum sab toh wo kismat nahi paa sake.”

Uski baat mein ek dard tha, par saath hi ek ajeeb si raahat bhi thi. Kyunki khoon ka rishta na hone ka matlab tha ki woh mere kareeb aa sakti thi.
Maine aage badh kar Pari ko gale laga liya aur uske sar ko sehlaya.

Main: “Pagal ladki... yeh toh achi baat hai na? Tujhe apna banane ke liye mujhe samaj ke kisi bahane ki zarurat nahi padegi. Tu humesha se meri thi, aur rahegi.”

Meri baat sunkar paas baithi Komal, jo ab tak ro rahi thi, achanak thoda muskurayi. Aansu abhi bhi uske gaalo par the.

Komal (haste hue): “Maine sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha ki main apni sautano (rivals) ko wapas paakar itna khush houngi. Aisa lag raha hai jaise humari family puri ho gayi.”

Tabhi Neha, jo thodi door khadi thi, rote hue Saloni ke paas gayi aur unke gale lag gayi.

Neha: “Didi... mujhe maaf kar do. Please mujhe maaf kar do.”

Saloni ne use hairani se dekha aur uske aansu ponche.

Saloni: “Kya hua Chhoti? Tu kyun maafi maang rahi hai? Tune toh Rudra ko bachaya hai.”

Neha (sisakte hue): “Maine Rudra ko toh bacha liya di, par main unhe nahi bacha paayi... Aap mein se kisi ke bhi aane wale bacho ko main uss waqt nahi bacha paayi thi. Woh bojh aaj bhi mere dil par hai.”

Saloni ki aankhein bhar aayi. Usne bade pyaar se Neha ke sar par haath rakha.

Saloni: “Pagal hai kya tu? Koi baat nahi bacha. Jab tak Dev mere saath hai, mujhe jo milna tha, woh milega zarur. Chahe woh mujhe aaj mile ya 1000 saal baad. Humara pyaar time ka mohtaaj nahi hai.”

Mahoul thoda shant hua toh Pari ke dimaag mein ek sawal aaya.

Pari: “Par Saloni di... aap Dev bhaiya ko asal mein jaanti ho na? Matlab... woh entity kya hai? Unki shakti ka raaz kya hai?”

Saloni (gambhir hokar): “Waise toh Dev ko puri tarah jaan paana kisi ke bas ki baat nahi hai. Par agar humare group mein koi inhe sabse behtar samajh sakta hai, toh woh main aur Pari hi hain.”

Neha: “Kyun didi? Main bhi toh usi 'Diamond' (Source) se nikli thi jisse aap sab log nikle the. Phir main kyun nahi pehchan paungi?”

Saloni ne meri taraf ek sawaliya nazar se dekha, jaise puch rahi ho ki kya ab waqt aa gaya hai sach batane ka? Aur kya room safe hai?
Maine haan mein sar hilaya.

Main: “Fikar mat karo, barrier bahut mazboot hai. Yahan ki ek awaaz bhi bahar nahi jayegi.”

Saloni ne gehri saans li aur sabko dekha.

Saloni: “Abhi tum sabne Dev ki jo memory dekhi, woh sach toh hai, par woh pura sach nahi hai. Woh sirf wo hissa tha jo Dev chahte the ki duniya ko pata rahe. Lekin asliyat kuch aur hai.”

Pari (shocked): “Par kya di? Paheliyan mat bujhao, please bata do na.”

Saloni: “Tumhe kabhi aisa nahi laga ki Dev hum sabko paane ke baad bhi, hamesha kisi cheez ko dhoondhne mein lage rehte the? Jaise kuch missing ho?”

Komal: “Haan... yeh toh sahi kaha aapne di. Maine hamesha notice kiya hai ki Dev ki aankhon mein ek ajeeb si talash rehti thi, sab kuch hone ke baad bhi.”

Saloni ne mera haath kas ke pakad liya, jaise mujhe sahara de rahi ho.

Main: “Koi baat nahi Saloni, bol do. Aaj sab sach saamne aa jane do.”

Saloni: “Riccha... jise hum apni family, apni behen samajhte rahe hain... woh humari koi nahi lagti.”

Kamre mein sannata chha gaya.

Sab (ek saath): “Kya??”

Saloni: “Haan. Riccha ek 'Unwanted Energy' hai. Ek aisi entity jo humara picha karti rehti hai. Woh sirf isliye humare saath thi taaki dusri entities hum par nazar rakh sakein. Woh ek jasood thi, parivaar nahi.”

Sab chauk gaye. Yeh khulasa kisi bomb girne se kam nahi tha.

Main: “Saloni sahi keh rahi hai. Humari family mein jo missing link tha... jise main sadiyon se dhoondh raha tha... woh Riccha nahi, balki Saloni ki judwa behen, Mina thi.”

Neha (aankhein phaad kar): “Mina? Yeh kaun hai? Maine aaj tak iske baare mein kabhi nahi suna! Aur Saloni di ki judwa behen? Aisa kaise ho sakta hai?”

Main: “Iska pata mujhe bhi tab chala jab main 'Narak' (Hell) mein gaya tha.”

Pari ghabra kar mere paas aayi.

Pari: “Kya? Aap Narak gaye the? Aapne aaj tak humko nahi bataya! Hume laga ki aap disturb the isliye gayab the... par aap wahan kyun gaye the? Aur wahan aapko yeh kaise pata chala? Woh sab chhodiye... pehle yeh bataiye ki yeh Mina hai kaun?”

Maine unhe shant rehne ka ishara kiya. Kahani abhi shuru hui thi, aur raaz abhi aur gehre hone wale the.
“Baitho... yeh kahani lambi hai.”

Kamre mein sannata tha. Meri awaaz bhari ho gayi thi jaise main unn purani yaadon ke bojh tale dab raha hoon. Maine Saloni aur baaki sabki taraf dekha aur kahani shuru ki.

Main: “Yeh baat aaj ya kal ki nahi hai... Yeh baat tab ki hai jab Srishti (Universe) apne naye roop mein dhal rahi thi. Dharti par insaano ka raaj nahi tha, balki taqat ka santulan Devtas (Gods) aur Demons (Asuras) ke haathon mein tha.”

Mere bolte hi unke dimaag mein ek visual banne laga.

[Flashback Starts]

Ek aisi jagah jo antariksh (space) aur dharti ke beech kahin sthit thi. Wahan hawa mein ek alag hi thandak aur tanaav tha. Aasmaan do hisson mein bata hua lag raha tha—ek taraf sunehri roshni (Gods) aur dusri taraf gehra kaala dhuaan (Demons).
In dono senaon ke beech mein ek "Celestial Mine" thi. Ek aisi jagah jahan se pure brahmand ke sabse kimati aur shaktishaali Gemstones nikalte the.

Yeh wo patthar nahi the jo aajkal milte hain; yeh wo "Source Stones" the jinme nayi duniya banane ki aur kisi bhi prajati ko amar (immortal) karne ki taqat thi.

Dono taraf ki fauj taiyaar khadi thi. Talwarein khinchi hui thi, mantra padhe ja rahe the. Bas ek ishare ki deri thi aur wahan khoon ki nadiya behne wali thi.

Tabhi, Demons ki sena cheerte hue ek bhari-bharkam aakriti aage aayi.

Woh Detrios tha. The Demon King.

Uska kad 8 feet se lamba tha, sharir par kaale metal ka armor tha jisme se laal roshni nikal rahi thi. Uski aankhein angaron ki tarah dehak rahi thi, aur haath mein ek bada sa 'War Hammer' tha. Uske aate hi zameen hilne lagi.

Gods ki taraf se Indra (ya High Lord) aage aaye.

High Lord: “Detrios! Apni sena ko piche le jao. Yeh pavitra (holy) Gemstones hain. In par sirf divya shaktiyon ka adhikar hai. Tum jaise andhere ke prateek inhein chu bhi nahi sakte.”

Detrios zor se hansa. Uski hansi mein itna ahankaar tha ki baadalon mein garaj paida ho gayi.

Detrios: “Pavitra? Adhikar? Yeh shabd tum Devtaon ne banaye hain taaki tum sab kuch apne kabze mein rakh sako. Lekin yaad rakho High Lord... andhere ke bina roshni ka koi wajood nahi hota.”

Detrios ne apna War Hammer zameen par patka.

DHADAM!

Ek badi daraar dono senaon ke beech ban gayi.

Detrios (Gurrate hue): “Hum yahan bheek maangne nahi aaye hain. Hum yahan apna hissa lene aaye hain. Yeh khadaan (mine), yeh gemstones... yeh shakti ka srot hai. Aur shakti par sabka barabar haq hota hai.”

Usne apni ungli uthayi aur Gods ki taraf ishara kiya.

Detrios: “Mera prastaav (proposal) seedha hai. Is khadaan ko 50-50 divide kiya jayega. Aadhe Gemstones Demons ke honge, aur aadhe tumhare. Agar humein humara aadha hissa mila, toh hum shanti se wapas chale jayenge. Lekin agar tumne humein khali haath bhejne ki koshish ki...”

Usne apni aankhein chhoti ki aur dhamki bhari awaaz mein kaha.

Detrios: “...toh aaj yahan itna khoon bahega ki yeh kimati patthar bhi laal pad jayenge.”

Gods aapas mein fusfusane lage. Unhe pata tha ki Detrios ki maang galat hai, kyunki agar Demons ke haath wo power lag gayi toh wo tabahi macha denge. Lekin wo yeh bhi jaante the ki Detrios ki sena bahut Vishal (huge) hai.

High Lord: “Humein manzoor nahi hai! In shaktiyon ka upyog srijan (creation) ke liye hona chahiye, vinaash ke liye nahi. Hum tumhe ek kan (particle) bhi nahi denge.”

Detrios ka chehra gusse se laal ho gaya.

Detrios: “Toh phir yudh hoga! Aur is baar... main sirf patthar nahi lunga, main tumhari uss sabse kimati cheez ko bhi cheen lunga jiska tumhe sabse jyada guroor hai.”

[Flashback Pauses]

Main (Present mein): “Yahi woh galti thi... uss din Gods ne samjhauta karne se mana kar diya, aur Detrios ne tay kar liya ki woh seedhe raste se nahi, toh chalaki se apna haq lega. Uss yudh ki shuruaat ne hi Mina aur Saloni ki kismat likh di thi.”

Saloni ne darrte hue pucha, “Kyu? Us yudh se humara kya lena dena tha?”

Main: “Kyunki uss khadaan mein jo sabse bada aur shaktishaali 'Diamond' (Source) tha... uske do hisse hone wale the. Ek tum... aur ek Mina.”

Bahut badhiya update Hai Bhai....
To riccha ek jasoos thi jiske wajha se apne aap dev ke life me entry liya....or mina kya wo ladki hai jo hell me dev ko mayajal me fasakar din raat sex karne ke 7ksa rahi thi or hell se wapas jaane rok rahi thi....kya ye wahi mina hai ya koi aur.. Us ladki ka naam mujhe yaad nhi aara hai....liken hell me jab dev tha tab us ladki ko dekh ke dev ye nhi jikar kiya ye ladki to saloni jaisa dikhte hai.... Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai diamond se kaise saloni or mina ka janam kaise hoti hai.....
Waiting for next update

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update