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(Chapter - Khonni Aatank 1)
Mujhe mehsoos ho raha tha jaise koi mera peecha kar raha ho. Ek ajeeb si bechaini thi jo andar se mujhe kaat rahi thi. Maine peeche mudkar dekhaākoi nahi tha. Na kisi ki parchhayi, na koi aahat, na kisi ke mann ki awaaz. Sab kuch shant thaā¦ unnaturally shant.
Main dheere-dheere aage badha. Talab ke paas ek bada sa pathar thaāmeri pasandida jagah. Maine bina soche uss par jaakar baith gaya. Thandi hawa mere chehre se takra rahi thi, lekin mere andar ek aag si jal rahi thi.
Maine zor se chillayaā"Masoom! Kaha ho tum? Mujhse baat karo, please!"
Halki si sarsarahat hui, aur phir ek jaani-pehchani awaaz goonj uthiā
Masoom: "Kya baat hai? Kyun pareshan kar rahe ho mujhe?"
Meri saansein tez ho gayi. Yeh wohi awaaz thi jo mere dil ki har dhadkan me basi thi.
Main: "Kya ab meri awaaz bhi tumhe pareshan karne lagi?"
Masoom: "Haan! Mujhe chain se jeene do. Tum wahan apni zindagi jee lo, jaise kaha tha mujhe bhool jao!"
Uski awaaz mein narazgi thiā¦ aur shayad dukh bhi.
Main: "Masoom, kya tumhe lagta hai ki sirf aise keh dene se main tumhe bhool jaunga?"
Masoom: "Aakhir kyun kar rahe ho aisa? Main ab wapas nahi aa saktiā¦ Apni doosri premikaon ke saath pyaar nibhao, mujhe bhool jao!"
Uska har shabd aisa lag raha tha jaise koi nangi talwar mere dil par chal rahi ho.
Main: "Bas ek baar bata do, tumhe wapas kaise la sakta hoon?"
Ek pal ke liye sab kuch shant ho gaya. Masoom ki awaaz aani band ho gayi thi. Maine usse fir bulaya, lekin koi jawaab nahi aaya.
Gusse aur bechaini se maine zor se pathar par mukka maara. Pathar ek zor ke dhmakke ke saath tukde-tukde ho gaya.
Main: "MASOOOOMMM!!!"
Meri cheekh talab ke paas goonj uthi, par koi jawab nahi aaya. Achaanak, mere sharir mein ek ajeeb si garmi daud gayi. Mujhe mehsoos hone laga jaise meri haddiyan todh rahi ho, mera mass phat raha ho. Mere haath, pair sabhi lachakne lage.
Mere shareer par mote, kaale baal ugne lage. Nakhoon tez aur nokeelay hone lage. Dard se main idhar-udhar ladkhadane laga. Achaanak, main zameen par gir gaya.
Tabhi, kisi ke kadmon ki aahat sunayi di. Koi dheere-dheere meri taraf aa raha tha. Andhere mein ek parchhayi dikh rahi thi.
Jaise hi woh aadmi kareeb aaya, chandni roshni mein uska chehra dikhai diyaāRatan Singh!
Usne ghabra kar kahaā"Arre Dev beta, yeh kya ho raha hai tujhe?! Yeh tere sharir par baalā¦ yeh nakhun?"
Main uski taraf dekha, par meri aankhein ab pehle jaisi nahi thi. Duniya mujhe ek alag hi nazar se dikh rahi thi.
Main: "Aaaahhhhhh! Aap yahan kya kar rahe hain? Aapko yahan nahi aana chahiye tha!"
Meri awaaz murmurahat se bhari thi. Ek ajeeb si garaj. Mera face dheere-dheere badalne laga. Mera moonh lambaa hone laga. Daant bade aur nokeelay ho gaye.
Ratan Singh ek kadam peeche hata. Uske chehre par sirf ek ehsaas thaādarr!
Ratan (halki si sitti bhajakar): "TāTāT-Tumā¦ ek MANAVBHEDIYA ho!"
Main dheere-dheere khada hua. Mera poora sharir ab ek wolf ka roop le chuka tha. Andhere mein meri aankhein chamak rahi thi. Ab main ek insaan nahi thaāek 15-16 foot lamba, bhayanak WEREWOLF tha!
Ratan Singh ne ek jhatke mein apni pistol nikaal li. Uske haath kaanp rahe the.
Ratan: "Main kehta hoon, door raho mujhse!"
Main zor se dhadkaar maara. Pistol ka trigger dabaane se pehle hi Ratan Singh ka chehra laal pad gaya. Maine mehsoos kiyaāaaj tak mujhe kisi ke khoon ki itni pyaas nahi lagi thi jitni ab lag rahi haiā¦ aur Ratan Singh ka khoon mujhse bas ek kadam door tha!
Mera dil ab sirf ek hi cheez chahta thaākhoon!
Main dheere-dheere Ratan Singh ki taraf aage badha. Uski saansein tez ho gayi thi. Dar unke chehre par saaf dikh raha tha. Maine ek kadam aur badhaya, aur unhone bina soche mujh par fire kar diya!
BANG!
Ek goli seedha mere seene par lagi, par mujhe koi dard mehsoos nahi hua. Main apni jagah par ruka hi nahi, bas unki taraf aur tez bhaagne laga. Ratan Singh ghabrakar mudhe aur jungle ki gehraiyon mein bhaagne lage.
Lekin main bhi ek pal ke liye ruka nahi.
Unke peecho peeche bhaagta rahaā¦ aur jaise hi unhone peeche mudkar mujhe dekha, main ek hi jhatke mein unke upar kood gaya!
"Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!"
Ratan Singh ki cheekh jungle ke har kone mein goonj uthi. Itni tez aur bhayanak ki gaon walon tak uski aawaaz pahunch gayi.
Maine bina ek pal gavaaye, apne bade-bade daanton se unki gardan pakdiāaur ek jhatke mein tod di!
Khoon ka garam stream mere muh mein behne laga. Ek ajeeb si masti thi is khoon meinā¦ garm, swaadisht, aur mahak se bhara.
Main masti se unka khoon peene laga.
"Aaj tak kyun door raha main iss laal samundar se?"
Khoon peete waqt mere andar ek naya junoon jaag raha tha. Ek bhook, ek pyaas jo ab control ke bahar thi. Ek soch mere mann mein aayiā
"Kaash ab kisi ladki ka sharir mil jaayeā¦ khoon aur sharir ki garmi ka ilaaj ho jaaye!"
( Yeh ek bhediye ki soch thi, ek aise janwar ki jiske mann par ab koi haawi nahi ho sakta tha! )
Maine Ratan Singh ka pura khoon choos liya. Unki laash ek bejaan gudiya ki tarah zameen par gir gayi. Jaise hi maine unka sharir chhoda, unke andar se ek chamak nikal kar hawa mein tairne lagi.
Ek chamkile sone ka tukda aakar mere haathon mein gir gaya.
Maine usse ek pal dekha, fir bina soche talab mein phek diya.
Ab mera sharir ek nayi urja se bhara hua tha. Mera har ang shakti se bhar gaya. Masti mein bhaagte hue, main ek pahaadi ki chhoti par pahunch gaya. Fir maine apna moonh upar uthayaā¦ aur zor se garajne lagaā
"Awooooooohhhhhhhhhh!!!"
Poora jungle mere is ghor garaj se kaanp utha.
Gaon mein log dar ke mare thithak gaye. Sirf meri cheekh ne poore gaon ka mahaul badal diya tha.
Ek aadmi (ghabraakar): "Arre yeh kaisi bhayanak awaaz hai?!"
Ek aurat (darpok lehze mein): "Lagta hai koi khunkhaar jaanwar hai! Shayad kisi aur jaanwar ko maar diya hoga!"
Ek buddha (dhaari se haath ghumate hue): "Yeh kisi jaanwar ki cheekh nahi thiā¦ Yeh ek insaan ki cheekh thi!"
Ab gaon mein halchal mach gayi thi. Sabko samajh aa raha tha ki kuch toh galat ho raha hai.
Ek aadmi: "Humein sabko andar rehne ki chetavni deni hogi!"
Gaon ka mukhiya saamne aaya. Uski aankhon mein ghabrahat nahi thiāsirf ek zimmedari ka bhaav.
Mukhiya: "Haan! Aur kuch aadmiyon ko leke chalo, dekhna hoga ki kaun mara gaya hai!"
Ek aadmi: "Ji, Mukhiya ji! Oye Kalua, Gopiya, Mangua, chal re saare!"
Gaon wale ikatthe hone lage. Lekin ab woh sirf laathi-dande lekar nahi chal rahe the.
Sabke haathon mein bandook thi.
Gaon badal raha tha. Pehle log laathiyon se ladte the, aaj unke haath mein rifle thi.
Mukhiya apni team ke saath jungle mein ghus gaya.
Aur jaise hi unka kadam jungle ke andar pada, aasman mein bijli chamki.
Barish ek baar phir shuru ho chuki thi.
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(Chapter - Khonni Aatank 1)
Mujhe mehsoos ho raha tha jaise koi mera peecha kar raha ho. Ek ajeeb si bechaini thi jo andar se mujhe kaat rahi thi. Maine peeche mudkar dekhaākoi nahi tha. Na kisi ki parchhayi, na koi aahat, na kisi ke mann ki awaaz. Sab kuch shant thaā¦ unnaturally shant.
Main dheere-dheere aage badha. Talab ke paas ek bada sa pathar thaāmeri pasandida jagah. Maine bina soche uss par jaakar baith gaya. Thandi hawa mere chehre se takra rahi thi, lekin mere andar ek aag si jal rahi thi.
Maine zor se chillayaā"Masoom! Kaha ho tum? Mujhse baat karo, please!"
Halki si sarsarahat hui, aur phir ek jaani-pehchani awaaz goonj uthiā
Masoom: "Kya baat hai? Kyun pareshan kar rahe ho mujhe?"
Meri saansein tez ho gayi. Yeh wohi awaaz thi jo mere dil ki har dhadkan me basi thi.
Main: "Kya ab meri awaaz bhi tumhe pareshan karne lagi?"
Masoom: "Haan! Mujhe chain se jeene do. Tum wahan apni zindagi jee lo, jaise kaha tha mujhe bhool jao!"
Uski awaaz mein narazgi thiā¦ aur shayad dukh bhi.
Main: "Masoom, kya tumhe lagta hai ki sirf aise keh dene se main tumhe bhool jaunga?"
Masoom: "Aakhir kyun kar rahe ho aisa? Main ab wapas nahi aa saktiā¦ Apni doosri premikaon ke saath pyaar nibhao, mujhe bhool jao!"
Uska har shabd aisa lag raha tha jaise koi nangi talwar mere dil par chal rahi ho.
Main: "Bas ek baar bata do, tumhe wapas kaise la sakta hoon?"
Ek pal ke liye sab kuch shant ho gaya. Masoom ki awaaz aani band ho gayi thi. Maine usse fir bulaya, lekin koi jawaab nahi aaya.
Gusse aur bechaini se maine zor se pathar par mukka maara. Pathar ek zor ke dhmakke ke saath tukde-tukde ho gaya.
Main: "MASOOOOMMM!!!"
Meri cheekh talab ke paas goonj uthi, par koi jawab nahi aaya. Achaanak, mere sharir mein ek ajeeb si garmi daud gayi. Mujhe mehsoos hone laga jaise meri haddiyan todh rahi ho, mera mass phat raha ho. Mere haath, pair sabhi lachakne lage.
Mere shareer par mote, kaale baal ugne lage. Nakhoon tez aur nokeelay hone lage. Dard se main idhar-udhar ladkhadane laga. Achaanak, main zameen par gir gaya.
Tabhi, kisi ke kadmon ki aahat sunayi di. Koi dheere-dheere meri taraf aa raha tha. Andhere mein ek parchhayi dikh rahi thi.
Jaise hi woh aadmi kareeb aaya, chandni roshni mein uska chehra dikhai diyaāRatan Singh!
Usne ghabra kar kahaā"Arre Dev beta, yeh kya ho raha hai tujhe?! Yeh tere sharir par baalā¦ yeh nakhun?"
Main uski taraf dekha, par meri aankhein ab pehle jaisi nahi thi. Duniya mujhe ek alag hi nazar se dikh rahi thi.
Main: "Aaaahhhhhh! Aap yahan kya kar rahe hain? Aapko yahan nahi aana chahiye tha!"
Meri awaaz murmurahat se bhari thi. Ek ajeeb si garaj. Mera face dheere-dheere badalne laga. Mera moonh lambaa hone laga. Daant bade aur nokeelay ho gaye.
Ratan Singh ek kadam peeche hata. Uske chehre par sirf ek ehsaas thaādarr!
Ratan (halki si sitti bhajakar): "TāTāT-Tumā¦ ek MANAVBHEDIYA ho!"
Main dheere-dheere khada hua. Mera poora sharir ab ek wolf ka roop le chuka tha. Andhere mein meri aankhein chamak rahi thi. Ab main ek insaan nahi thaāek 15-16 foot lamba, bhayanak WEREWOLF tha!
Ratan Singh ne ek jhatke mein apni pistol nikaal li. Uske haath kaanp rahe the.
Ratan: "Main kehta hoon, door raho mujhse!"
Main zor se dhadkaar maara. Pistol ka trigger dabaane se pehle hi Ratan Singh ka chehra laal pad gaya. Maine mehsoos kiyaāaaj tak mujhe kisi ke khoon ki itni pyaas nahi lagi thi jitni ab lag rahi haiā¦ aur Ratan Singh ka khoon mujhse bas ek kadam door tha!
Mera dil ab sirf ek hi cheez chahta thaākhoon!
Main dheere-dheere Ratan Singh ki taraf aage badha. Uski saansein tez ho gayi thi. Dar unke chehre par saaf dikh raha tha. Maine ek kadam aur badhaya, aur unhone bina soche mujh par fire kar diya!
BANG!
Ek goli seedha mere seene par lagi, par mujhe koi dard mehsoos nahi hua. Main apni jagah par ruka hi nahi, bas unki taraf aur tez bhaagne laga. Ratan Singh ghabrakar mudhe aur jungle ki gehraiyon mein bhaagne lage.
Lekin main bhi ek pal ke liye ruka nahi.
Unke peecho peeche bhaagta rahaā¦ aur jaise hi unhone peeche mudkar mujhe dekha, main ek hi jhatke mein unke upar kood gaya!
"Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!"
Ratan Singh ki cheekh jungle ke har kone mein goonj uthi. Itni tez aur bhayanak ki gaon walon tak uski aawaaz pahunch gayi.
Maine bina ek pal gavaaye, apne bade-bade daanton se unki gardan pakdiāaur ek jhatke mein tod di!
Khoon ka garam stream mere muh mein behne laga. Ek ajeeb si masti thi is khoon meinā¦ garm, swaadisht, aur mahak se bhara.
Main masti se unka khoon peene laga.
"Aaj tak kyun door raha main iss laal samundar se?"
Khoon peete waqt mere andar ek naya junoon jaag raha tha. Ek bhook, ek pyaas jo ab control ke bahar thi. Ek soch mere mann mein aayiā
"Kaash ab kisi ladki ka sharir mil jaayeā¦ khoon aur sharir ki garmi ka ilaaj ho jaaye!"
( Yeh ek bhediye ki soch thi, ek aise janwar ki jiske mann par ab koi haawi nahi ho sakta tha! )
Maine Ratan Singh ka pura khoon choos liya. Unki laash ek bejaan gudiya ki tarah zameen par gir gayi. Jaise hi maine unka sharir chhoda, unke andar se ek chamak nikal kar hawa mein tairne lagi.
Ek chamkile sone ka tukda aakar mere haathon mein gir gaya.
Maine usse ek pal dekha, fir bina soche talab mein phek diya.
Ab mera sharir ek nayi urja se bhara hua tha. Mera har ang shakti se bhar gaya. Masti mein bhaagte hue, main ek pahaadi ki chhoti par pahunch gaya. Fir maine apna moonh upar uthayaā¦ aur zor se garajne lagaā
"Awooooooohhhhhhhhhh!!!"
Poora jungle mere is ghor garaj se kaanp utha.
Gaon mein log dar ke mare thithak gaye. Sirf meri cheekh ne poore gaon ka mahaul badal diya tha.
Ek aadmi (ghabraakar): "Arre yeh kaisi bhayanak awaaz hai?!"
Ek aurat (darpok lehze mein): "Lagta hai koi khunkhaar jaanwar hai! Shayad kisi aur jaanwar ko maar diya hoga!"
Ek buddha (dhaari se haath ghumate hue): "Yeh kisi jaanwar ki cheekh nahi thiā¦ Yeh ek insaan ki cheekh thi!"
Ab gaon mein halchal mach gayi thi. Sabko samajh aa raha tha ki kuch toh galat ho raha hai.
Ek aadmi: "Humein sabko andar rehne ki chetavni deni hogi!"
Gaon ka mukhiya saamne aaya. Uski aankhon mein ghabrahat nahi thiāsirf ek zimmedari ka bhaav.
Mukhiya: "Haan! Aur kuch aadmiyon ko leke chalo, dekhna hoga ki kaun mara gaya hai!"
Ek aadmi: "Ji, Mukhiya ji! Oye Kalua, Gopiya, Mangua, chal re saare!"
Gaon wale ikatthe hone lage. Lekin ab woh sirf laathi-dande lekar nahi chal rahe the.
Sabke haathon mein bandook thi.
Gaon badal raha tha. Pehle log laathiyon se ladte the, aaj unke haath mein rifle thi.
Mukhiya apni team ke saath jungle mein ghus gaya.
Aur jaise hi unka kadam jungle ke andar pada, aasman mein bijli chamki.
Barish ek baar phir shuru ho chuki thi.