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Luffy

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UPDATE 24

Mai - usse dal dal mat samjho dost to dost hai kaya bura kaya bhala jab tum acchi hokar unke sath buri ban sakati ho to kaya tumhare sath reh kar woh acche nahi ho sakte kabhi socahana
loo tumhara ghar aa gaya

Mai - aisa karo gate sai mat jao

Masoom -toh phir udd ke jaaungi mak

Mai - ruko maine usse apne peth par taang kar pipe sai chad kar usse room mai chhod diya

Mai - accha ai chalata hu ye shirt ab milegi

wo apne kapade le kar bathroom mai gayi aur bhar aakar mere kapade diye

Maine time dhekha - mar gaya

Masoom- kaya hua

Mai - arre pagal 11 : 30 bej gaye maa didi to mar dalegi maine bina khuch soche samajhe uski window sai jump mar di

Masoom khuch bolana caah rahi thi par mai waha sai tuffan ki tarah nikal gaya
ghar pahucha to tino mujhe gher kar

Nilam - etni raat ko kaha ghum raha tha bhoot haj kaya johhh...

Mai - buss karo maa khuch kaam mai fas gaya tha

tulsi - tunne mujhese kaha tha ki jaldi aayega too meri baat nahi manata hu hu
haaa huuu u hu ..........

Lo rona dhona chaalu

Mai - please didi aap rona band kar please

Maine aage bhad kar unke aashu poch diye

Mai - chaloo kaan pakadata hu aage sai kabhi aaisa nahi hoga

Sona -chaloo ye rona dhona band kar aur soo jao kal tumhe jaana bhi to hai

Mai - thik hai chaloo sab so jaao

phir hm sab so gaye

todi dher baad mujhe phir spana aaya

Ladki - kaha chale gaye ho tum mai to tumhare saath sahi sai reh bhi nahi paayi hu kaas mai tumhe bata paati kitna pyar karti hu

""Ye zindgai aakhir hai kaya hai ek dil ka rishata hai ""
""Phhir kyu har pyaar karene wala ess rishto ke duniya mai pisata hai""

""Par tum ho jo ho mere sath Toh chhod du mai apni saase
Meri har ek saas mei aur mere rom rom mei basata hai""


Mera dil yeh sab dehkhar bhut pareshan jo gaya mai uth ke beth gaya kaya ho raha mere saath soo nahi paa raha mai chain sai aakhir kon hu mai jisko log etna yaad kr rahe hai

Mai- yaar kon hai ye dono phele woh aur ab ye

Maine apna hath gaal par rakha mere aasu apne aap nikal rahe the

Mai bathroom mei chala gaya aur mirror mei dhekhene laga mujhe khuch aajeb sa laga maine mirror ko touch kiya

Mai - aare ye kaha aap gaya

Sab taraf keval mirror hi mirror aur unmai keval ladkiyo ki tasvere par jaise koi video chal rahi thi

Maine ek mirror to phir touch kiya mai vapas apne bathroom tha

Mai- Kaya ho raha hai ye sab

Yeh sab meri soch sai jada hai kaya mere andar pehle wo slow motion phir wo lakadi ka talwaar mei badana
aur unn logo ko aise maar dena jaise mai koi killer hu

Meri takwar ke baare mai soch hi raha tha ki wo talwaar mere haath mei aa gayi maine jhat sai usse chhod diya woh gayab ho gaya phir jadi sai naha do kar bhar aap gaya enn sab bachodiyo mai pdin ho chuka thaa mera

Mai bahar aaya to sona

Sona - adhe ghannte kaya kar rahe the

Mai - kuch nahi

Sona - chaloo hakana band karo aur nicche ja kar nasta kar lo jana nahi hai kya

Maine time dhekha 7 bej rahe the

Mai - ha ha chaloo

Phir maine sab me sath nasta kiya aur car ki tarf jane laga tabhi janu

Janu - aye udhar kaha ja rahe ho aaj mujhe bike sai janna hai

Mai - mam wo to aap ke bhai ki hai

Janu - maine kab kaha usse bike wo dhekho sammne usse bike sai jayenge

Sammne ninja khadi thi

Mai - as you wish mam phir bike par janu ko le kar Mai nikal pada

aaj tarrif jada lag rha tha maine red signal dhekh kar bike rok li kaafi lamaba jaam tha

Janu - kya hua

Mai(man Mai )- thik nahi rha kaya dimag sai pagal hai kaya

Mai - mam jaam laga hai

Pass kadi ek Audi ka seesa khula

Ladki - taniya kumar janu ki mausi ki ladki

Taniya - arre waah janu tujhe bhi boyfriend mil gaya mannana padega kafi handsome kaha ja rahi hai esse sath mai

Mai - mai wohhh...

Janu - arre kahi nahi bus school hi jaa rahi hu een sai mil ye hai DD Singh

Taniya - nice name accha kal ki party mei aa rahi hai na ess handsome ko bhi lete aana

Janu - ha thik hai

Traffic khula maine bike aage bhada di

Mai - mam ye sab thik nahi hai

Janu - chup chap apana kaam karoo aur mujhe bhi tum jaise bhikahari ko bf nahi bannana par tum handsome to ho agar tumhare pass paise hote to mai sochati tumahare baare mi

Mai man Mai - ha ab tujh jaise hi ko hi pataunga khoobsurati har chiz nahi hoti jis ladki ke pass saharm aur tamiz na ho wo ladki hai hi nahi meri liye toh nahi aur teri muh sai lalach tapak raha hai

Janu - kaya soch rahe sammne bike dhekh ke chalaoo

Mai - ji mam

phir hum school pahuch gaye wha ka Mahool hi kharab tha kayi bande sab student ko mar rahe the hum canteen mei gaye

Ek addami ( Ramesh ) masoom ke baal pakad ke bol harmjaadi kaha hai mera beta

Mai samjh gaya ye varun ka baap hai

Mai - kaya baat hai masoom sir aap aise kisi student ke sath nahi kar skate

Ramesh - mujhe koi shauk nahi ye sab karne ka par akhiri call mere bete nai esse ki thi abb woh gayab hai

Mai - call hi kiya tha apni gf koi bhi call kar sakata

Ramesh - abe tu apna kaam kar

Principle - sir baaki baccho ko chod do

Ramesh - jab tak mera beta mil nahi jayega sab ke sab esse school mei band rahege oh kale ja gate band kar

usske baad masoom ko chhoda usnai aur wahi beth gaya karib 3 ghante baad police ka phone aaye

Ramesh - nahi aisa nahi ho sakata

wo sabko le kar bahagta hau bahar nikal gaya

Phir principle nai aaj ki chhuti karne ka faisala kiya

sab bacche jane lage mai masoom ke pass ja kar

Mai - tum thik to ho naa

Masoom - ji aap ke rahete mujhe kaya hoga

Janu - kaya matalb

Mai - kuch nabi mam mai bike le kar aata hu

Mai chal gaya

Janu - baat kaya hai masoom aur esse do kodi ke aadami ko etna respect kyu de rahi hai

Etna sunate hi masoom nai ek karara tappad jad diya usske gaal par

Masoom - jise tuh do kodi ka keh rahi hai agar tuh apni puri jayjad bhi becch degi tab bhi aase insan ka saath bhi nahi milega

Janu - tune uske liye mujh kyu mara tappad

Etna karara tha ki janu ke gaal par chaap gaya

Masoom- Etna bezzati honne ke baad bhi kal ussne meri izzat baachayi aur tujhe pata ahhhhh.....

Maine ek tappad masoom par jad diya

Mai - tere himmat kaise hue mam par hath uthane ki

Janu kabhi mujhe kabhi masoom ko dhek rahi thi Mai - mam aap chalo bike ke pass

Janu - mai nhi jaungi phele mujhese esse baat karnai hai

Maine chilla kar - chaloo Jaao sunnayi nahi deta chal jaa bhaag jadi janu ki mere aakhe dhek kat phat gayi woh wha sai bhaag gayi bike ke pass

sab mujhe ghur rahe the

Maine masoom ko utha kar apne rumal sai uske hotho sai khoon poocha

Mai - sorry par tum josh meri sab bakne jaa rahi thi ess liye maine ye kiya

Masoom- sorry meri galti hai
meri ek baat manogi

Masoom- aap bus kah do

Mai - tum ye school chhod do

Masoom- ji mujhe bhi yahi lagata hai

Mai - accha phir chalata hu baad mai milunga fursat mile toh duty sai

Massoom - apna no to de do

maine apna no de diya aur waha sai janu ko le kar ghar aa gaya sidhe
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UPDATE 25

location - shurya villa

janu - roti hue apne room mai bhaag gayi

Shurya - arre esse kaya ho gaya

Mai - pata nahi sir masoom sai kuch baat chit ho gayi hogi

Kaamini - koi baat to he warna yeh roo de aisa ho nahi sakata

Kaamini usse room mei chali gayi

wo bed par pet ke bal let kar roo rahi thi

Kaamini - kaya hua beta bol na

Janu - maa kaya etni buri hu ki koi mujhese pyaar nahi karata

Kaamini - kon hai jis nai meri beti ka dil dhukhya

Janu- nhi maa hi buri hu aaj mere dost nai mujhe meri aukat dhikaha di

Kaamini - beta bata to hua kaya masoom nai aisa kaya kaha

Janu - woh hua ye ki............

Phir phele din sai hue saari baat baata deti janu apni maa ko usski maa bhi thoda shaok thi ki aise usski beti kabhi kuch nahi batati achank etna change

Kaamini phir bhi samabhal ke khushi ko -beta ye tune bhaut galt kara tha kisi ko aise jaleel karana galat baat hai

Janu - maa pata nahi kyu aaj mujhe aapne aap sai nafrat ho rahi hai maine vaakiye bhaut galat chuz ki joh meri dost nai mujhe tappad mara

Kaamini ghabhara gayi - beta tuh aisa mat keh jab apni galti maan li jaaye to syaad woh aapko maffi de de

Janu apni maa ke gale lag gayi

Bhar hum dono ye sab dhek rahe the

Shurya mere samne haath jod kar - bhaut bhaut shukriya tumnai nahi pata meri wife ess din ke liye kitna tadap rahi aaj lag raha hai uske ego mat chhot lag gayi

Maine unka hath niche karte hue kaha- koi baat nhi hai aap toj apne baacho ka saath de rahe hai bus sahi sai samjhane ki jarurat hai

Shurya - tumhari ye baat mai hamesha dhyan rakhunga

Phir mai apne ghar mai aaya to wha aate hi call aayi

Mai - hav kon hai

Ladka - wahi jiska tunne mobile aur card mara hai

Mai - ha bol tere phone ka intazar tha

Mai - tu bata tuh kaya chata hai

Ladaka - mujhe mere paise wapas chaiye

Mai - mujhe kaya milega

Ladka - kaya chaiye tujhe

Mai- mujhe sona ke dad raghav singh ka pata chaiheye

Ladaka - chal mere paise le kar aa jana kal shaam ko es address par woh bhi wahi par hai

Mai - chal thik hai agar dhoka diya too ess baar na bacchega

Ladaka - thik hai

Mai bhagata hua nilam maa ke room mai gaya woh wha nahi thi mai kichen mai thi

Mai unka haath pakad ke ghumane laga

Nilam- ha ha ha ruk beta ruk are kaya hua bada khush hai

Mai - maa dad mil gaye

Nilam - sach sach mazak to nahi kar rha hai

Mai - nahi maa mai sach bol raha hu phir maine sari baat bata di

Nilam- par beta woh keval 25 lakh ke liye mujhe kuch gadbad lag rha hai

Mai - mujhe pata hai wo mujhe jarur marne ka plan banna raha hoga

Nilam dar ke - beta tuh rahene de naa

Mai - aap etna mat socho bus aap ghar janne ki tyari karo

Nilam khush ho kar - chal aaj tere liye gajar ka halwa bannaya

Tabhi sona mere pass bhag ke aayi aur mere gaalo ko chumane lagi essi bich uska lip mere lip mer touch hua mere body mai to current lag gaya yeh kaya thaa bee

Sona dhur hat ke - abb kal ye mat kahana ki dad ko nahi laaye

Mai khushi mai etna tha ki maine galti kar di

Mai - are ye dhekho mujhe marana etna aassan nahi mene apni talwar ko yaad kiya wo mere haath mai aa gayi

Sona aur nilam maa dar gayi

Nilam-ye kaya hai aur aayi kaha sai

Mujhe apni galti ka aehsaas hua

Mai - maa wo mere pass kuch sakti hai

Sona - sakti matlab

Maine apni akkhe band kar ke kholi wo golden colour ke ho gayi

Mai - ye dhehko

Nilam- aare beta to lagata koi chamatkari insaan hai joh humara upperwala ban ke aaya hai

Mai - bus ek aur saabd nahi mai bus aap ka beta hu

Sona - aur khuch dihkhao

Nilam - ye koi joker hai chal apna kaam kar aur beta power ka kabhi galt estemaal mat karna aur aise hi kahi bhi mat use kar lena humare samane toh kar diya

Mai - thik hai maa aab halwa khila do bhut bhuk lagi hai

Nilam - chal jaa kar fresh ho phele

Mai apne bathroom mai aaya tabhi masoom ka phone aaya

Masoom - hello kaya kar rahe ho

Mai - arr janab kaise yaad kiya mai to bus face wash karne ja rha hu

Masoom - kyu mai yaad bhi nahi kar sakti aur bade aache mood mai ho

Mai - Dad mil gaye hai mere aur par

Masoom - par kaya

Mai - jab tumhare pass rahata hu bada sukoon milata mujhe maaff karna usske liye

Masoom- woh to meri galti thi waise kaisa sukoon hai mere pass

Maine aakhe band ki mujhe masoom ek shorts mai bed par leti dhiki aur usnai ek pink colour ke t - shirt pheni hui thi

Masoom- kaha kho gaye

Mai - pink tshirt blue short mai bhaut aachi lagati ho pahana hai kabhi

Masoom hadbada ke uth gayi - tum mere room mai ho

Mai - nhi kyu kaya hua

Masoom- phir tumhe kase pta mai kaya kar rahi hu

Mai- bus aakhe band ki toh tum dikhi ess dress mai

Masoom - mai koi pagal nahi hu jaldi bato kaha sai dekha tumnae

Mai - sach mai

Masoom apne bathroom mai bhaag gayi - abb batoo

aur mirror mai dhikene lagi

Masoom - ab batoo mai kaya kar rahi hoo

Maine saamne dhekha samne mirror mai masoom dhik rahi thi mai samjh gaya ki ye subh wala hi fanda hai maine mirror ko chhua

Masooom - ahhhhhhhh tum yaha kaise

Maine uske muh par hath rakha - chup ho jao pagal ho kaya

Phir dhere sai uska muh khola

Masoom - tum mirror sai kaise bahar aaye

Mai - mujhe pata nahi par tum to mast lag rahi ho

Masoom apne hatho sai ghutnai par hath rak diya

Maine jhatt sai mirror ko touch aur apne batroom mai

Phone par - dd dd kaha gaye

Mai - ha bolo

Masoom - kyu chale gaye

Mai - asse kisi ke bathroom mai jana galat hai naa

Sona - aare kaya kar rahe ho etni dher sai andar

Mai - bye baad mai baat karata hu

Mai bhar aaya - ha kaya hua

Sona - bathroom sai pyar ho gaya hai

Mai - nahi aisa khuch nahi hai chloo niche

Phir sab nai lunch kiya

Mai - maa jara sir ke pass ja raha hu

Nilam - thik hai

Mai bunglow mai aaya sab wahi par bethe the

Arav - are bahi kaya ho raha hai mujhe bhul gaye kaya

Mai - nahi bus busy tha aap sai ek kaam hai

Arav - bol bhai

Mai - ek nazar rakhen wala chaiye expert hona chaiye

Arav - kyu kya baat ho gayi bhai

Mai - kal bata dunga bus aap use abhi ess address par nazar rakhene ko kaho

Arav nai kisi ko phone laga diya

Main janu ki taraf dheha woh ghur rahi thi

Mai uske pass jakar - sorry mam

Shurya - dd pagal ho gaye ho kay mam kyu bol rahe

Mai - ab humari aukat to kutte ki hai to kaya kare kyu mam

Arav - janu kyu karti hai aisa teri wajah sai mere dost mere sai ab milene nahi aate

Janu roote hue apne bhai ke paro mai gir gayi

Arav shocked meri toh muh sai jaban nikal jaati aisa laga

Janu - bhai please mujhe maaf kar please

Arav usse uthate hue - chal ab tera bhai hu bhai par tu hamesha paiso ko apna sab khuch samajhti thi toh aaj yeh sab sorry kaise

Janu - aaj bhai meri ek dost nai baata diya ki dil sai ki gayi dosti patthar ki tarah atoot hoti phir woh do din hi kyu na ho par paisa aur guroor ek na ek din jarur sath chhod denge phir woh saalo sai aap ke saath hi kyu naah ho

Shurya - arre kaha thi ye janu abb tak

Mai family darama shuru hote dhekh waha sai janne laaga

Janu nai aakar mera haath pakad liya

Janu - please aap mujhe maaf kar doo

Mai - ita ok aap ko galti ka aehsas hua woh hi bahut badi baat hai

Janu - ab aap mere friend ho

Mai - parso sai mai saayad yeha nahi rahunga

Sab ek sath - kya kyu
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UPDATE 25

location - shurya villa

janu - roti hue apne room mai bhaag gayi

Shurya - arre esse kaya ho gaya

Mai - pata nahi sir masoom sai kuch baat chit ho gayi hogi

Kaamini - koi baat to he warna yeh roo de aisa ho nahi sakata

Kaamini usse room mei chali gayi

wo bed par pet ke bal let kar roo rahi thi

Kaamini - kaya hua beta bol na

Janu - maa kaya etni buri hu ki koi mujhese pyaar nahi karata

Kaamini - kon hai jis nai meri beti ka dil dhukhya

Janu- nhi maa hi buri hu aaj mere dost nai mujhe meri aukat dhikaha di

Kaamini - beta bata to hua kaya masoom nai aisa kaya kaha

Janu - woh hua ye ki............

Phir phele din sai hue saari baat baata deti janu apni maa ko usski maa bhi thoda shaok thi ki aise usski beti kabhi kuch nahi batati achank etna change

Kaamini phir bhi samabhal ke khushi ko -beta ye tune bhaut galt kara tha kisi ko aise jaleel karana galat baat hai

Janu - maa pata nahi kyu aaj mujhe aapne aap sai nafrat ho rahi hai maine vaakiye bhaut galat chuz ki joh meri dost nai mujhe tappad mara

Kaamini ghabhara gayi - beta tuh aisa mat keh jab apni galti maan li jaaye to syaad woh aapko maffi de de

Janu apni maa ke gale lag gayi

Bhar hum dono ye sab dhek rahe the

Shurya mere samne haath jod kar - bhaut bhaut shukriya tumnai nahi pata meri wife ess din ke liye kitna tadap rahi aaj lag raha hai uske ego mat chhot lag gayi

Maine unka hath niche karte hue kaha- koi baat nhi hai aap toj apne baacho ka saath de rahe hai bus sahi sai samjhane ki jarurat hai

Shurya - tumhari ye baat mai hamesha dhyan rakhunga

Phir mai apne ghar mai aaya to wha aate hi call aayi

Mai - hav kon hai

Ladka - wahi jiska tunne mobile aur card mara hai

Mai - ha bol tere phone ka intazar tha

Mai - tu bata tuh kaya chata hai

Ladaka - mujhe mere paise wapas chaiye

Mai - mujhe kaya milega

Ladka - kaya chaiye tujhe

Mai- mujhe sona ke dad raghav singh ka pata chaiheye

Ladaka - chal mere paise le kar aa jana kal shaam ko es address par woh bhi wahi par hai

Mai - chal thik hai agar dhoka diya too ess baar na bacchega

Ladaka - thik hai

Mai bhagata hua nilam maa ke room mai gaya woh wha nahi thi mai kichen mai thi

Mai unka haath pakad ke ghumane laga

Nilam- ha ha ha ruk beta ruk are kaya hua bada khush hai

Mai - maa dad mil gaye

Nilam - sach sach mazak to nahi kar rha hai

Mai - nahi maa mai sach bol raha hu phir maine sari baat bata di

Nilam- par beta woh keval 25 lakh ke liye mujhe kuch gadbad lag rha hai

Mai - mujhe pata hai wo mujhe jarur marne ka plan banna raha hoga

Nilam dar ke - beta tuh rahene de naa

Mai - aap etna mat socho bus aap ghar janne ki tyari karo

Nilam khush ho kar - chal aaj tere liye gajar ka halwa bannaya

Tabhi sona mere pass bhag ke aayi aur mere gaalo ko chumane lagi essi bich uska lip mere lip mer touch hua mere body mai to current lag gaya yeh kaya thaa bee

Sona dhur hat ke - abb kal ye mat kahana ki dad ko nahi laaye

Mai khushi mai etna tha ki maine galti kar di

Mai - are ye dhekho mujhe marana etna aassan nahi mene apni talwar ko yaad kiya wo mere haath mai aa gayi

Sona aur nilam maa dar gayi

Nilam-ye kaya hai aur aayi kaha sai

Mujhe apni galti ka aehsaas hua

Mai - maa wo mere pass kuch sakti hai

Sona - sakti matlab

Maine apni akkhe band kar ke kholi wo golden colour ke ho gayi

Mai - ye dhehko

Nilam- aare beta to lagata koi chamatkari insaan hai joh humara upperwala ban ke aaya hai

Mai - bus ek aur saabd nahi mai bus aap ka beta hu

Sona - aur khuch dihkhao

Nilam - ye koi joker hai chal apna kaam kar aur beta power ka kabhi galt estemaal mat karna aur aise hi kahi bhi mat use kar lena humare samane toh kar diya

Mai - thik hai maa aab halwa khila do bhut bhuk lagi hai

Nilam - chal jaa kar fresh ho phele

Mai apne bathroom mai aaya tabhi masoom ka phone aaya

Masoom - hello kaya kar rahe ho

Mai - arr janab kaise yaad kiya mai to bus face wash karne ja rha hu

Masoom - kyu mai yaad bhi nahi kar sakti aur bade aache mood mai ho

Mai - Dad mil gaye hai mere aur par

Masoom - par kaya

Mai - jab tumhare pass rahata hu bada sukoon milata mujhe maaff karna usske liye

Masoom- woh to meri galti thi waise kaisa sukoon hai mere pass

Maine aakhe band ki mujhe masoom ek shorts mai bed par leti dhiki aur usnai ek pink colour ke t - shirt pheni hui thi

Masoom- kaha kho gaye

Mai - pink tshirt blue short mai bhaut aachi lagati ho pahana hai kabhi

Masoom hadbada ke uth gayi - tum mere room mai ho

Mai - nhi kyu kaya hua

Masoom- phir tumhe kase pta mai kaya kar rahi hu

Mai- bus aakhe band ki toh tum dikhi ess dress mai

Masoom - mai koi pagal nahi hu jaldi bato kaha sai dekha tumnae

Mai - sach mai

Masoom apne bathroom mai bhaag gayi - abb batoo

aur mirror mai dhikene lagi

Masoom - ab batoo mai kaya kar rahi hoo

Maine saamne dhekha samne mirror mai masoom dhik rahi thi mai samjh gaya ki ye subh wala hi fanda hai maine mirror ko chhua

Masooom - ahhhhhhhh tum yaha kaise

Maine uske muh par hath rakha - chup ho jao pagal ho kaya

Phir dhere sai uska muh khola

Masoom - tum mirror sai kaise bahar aaye

Mai - mujhe pata nahi par tum to mast lag rahi ho

Masoom apne hatho sai ghutnai par hath rak diya

Maine jhatt sai mirror ko touch aur apne batroom mai

Phone par - dd dd kaha gaye

Mai - ha bolo

Masoom - kyu chale gaye

Mai - asse kisi ke bathroom mai jana galat hai naa

Sona - aare kaya kar rahe ho etni dher sai andar

Mai - bye baad mai baat karata hu

Mai bhar aaya - ha kaya hua

Sona - bathroom sai pyar ho gaya hai

Mai - nahi aisa khuch nahi hai chloo niche

Phir sab nai lunch kiya

Mai - maa jara sir ke pass ja raha hu

Nilam - thik hai

Mai bunglow mai aaya sab wahi par bethe the

Arav - are bahi kaya ho raha hai mujhe bhul gaye kaya

Mai - nahi bus busy tha aap sai ek kaam hai

Arav - bol bhai

Mai - ek nazar rakhen wala chaiye expert hona chaiye

Arav - kyu kya baat ho gayi bhai

Mai - kal bata dunga bus aap use abhi ess address par nazar rakhene ko kaho

Arav nai kisi ko phone laga diya

Main janu ki taraf dheha woh ghur rahi thi

Mai uske pass jakar - sorry mam

Shurya - dd pagal ho gaye ho kay mam kyu bol rahe

Mai - ab humari aukat to kutte ki hai to kaya kare kyu mam

Arav - janu kyu karti hai aisa teri wajah sai mere dost mere sai ab milene nahi aate

Janu roote hue apne bhai ke paro mai gir gayi

Arav shocked meri toh muh sai jaban nikal jaati aisa laga

Janu - bhai please mujhe maaf kar please

Arav usse uthate hue - chal ab tera bhai hu bhai par tu hamesha paiso ko apna sab khuch samajhti thi toh aaj yeh sab sorry kaise

Janu - aaj bhai meri ek dost nai baata diya ki dil sai ki gayi dosti patthar ki tarah atoot hoti phir woh do din hi kyu na ho par paisa aur guroor ek na ek din jarur sath chhod denge phir woh saalo sai aap ke saath hi kyu naah ho

Shurya - arre kaha thi ye janu abb tak

Mai family darama shuru hote dhekh waha sai janne laaga

Janu nai aakar mera haath pakad liya

Janu - please aap mujhe maaf kar doo

Mai - ita ok aap ko galti ka aehsas hua woh hi bahut badi baat hai

Janu - ab aap mere friend ho

Mai - parso sai mai saayad yeha nahi rahunga

Sab ek sath - kya kyu
Nice and excellent update...
 

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Arre saala jab thoda swad aane lagta hai tabhi e sasura update phinish jo jaata hai. Ye tum achcha nahi kar rahe Dev the lover . Kya tumhe bhi Jaanu ki tarah khuraak chahiye sudharne ke liye, chahiye to bolo e sasura DD tumhare aas paas hi hoga abhi de dega। Jaanu theek ho gayi, papa milne waale hai, aur DD job se resign karne waala hai. Ab is bechari Masoom ka kya hoga. Nahi Dev the lover tum itne nirdayi nahi ho sakte ho. Kah do ke ye sab jhoot hai. Bhagwaan ye padhne se pahle tune Vishal ke baap ko is dunia se kyon nahi utha liya tha. Sweet, short aur pyas bhadkau update. Saala story naa hui Pepsi ho gayi "ye dil maange more".
Jab janu thik ho rahe toh kay bata baaki log bhi thik ho jayenge kyu sahi kaha naa essmai dd ko kaahe lana
Waise dil maange mor ki baat keh rahe toh maine toh kal pucha hi so nahi rahe toh bolo tuh jawab nahi aaya mai bhi soo gaya

Aur comment bhi aise hi aate ki same yehi bolane kaa man hota tumhe bhi " YEH DIL MAANGE MORE ""
 
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Nice Update.

Yeh story romance and action ka wonderful combination hey.
Shukriya bhai enn umda sabado ke liyee waise thoda saaa suspense kaa credit lena caahunga kyu kaya kehate ho yaa jada hi bol diyaa
 
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UPDATE - 21

udhar gate par kadha wo addami sab sun raha tha uski aanko mai panni aa gya

ladaka - chaloo apna samman le lo

sab saman pack karne lage tabhi uss ladak ka dayan pass pade beg par gaya

ladaka - maa ess beg mai kaya hai

Nilam - beta sona/tulsi ki kitabe hai enn dono ko padane ka kaafi shok hai abhi enka sona (12 ) tulsi (mbbs 1st year ) ka class shuru hui thi ki ye sab ho gaya

ladaka - aap sab kitabe bhi le lo aur bus kapde aur khuch mat lenna

usske baad sab car Mai beth kar uss aadmi ke ghar nikal gye

jab wo car sai utare to ek aalishan bangalon ke samane the jis par likha tha "SHURYA VILLA"

addami - shurya Kumar " owner of shurya construction" 40 year

Arav kumar - shurya son ( 22) private detective agency hai esski jasusi eska passion hai

Jhannavi urff janu - shurya daughter (12th class )18 bhaut hi ghmandi har wakt bus paise aur ameer hone ka ghamand joh usske family mai koi nahi chahata ki ussko ho

Kaamini Kumar - shuraya wife 35 saal kaafi saant swabhav aur hamesha apne bacho ke chinta mai dubi rahati hai

shyaam Kumar - shuray ka bada bahi

Maalini kumar - shyaam ki wife

Lokesh 22 /shalu23/- shyaam ke beta beti

Phir sabhi andar aate hai hai

aur andar aate hi

Janu - chii papa kin garibo ko le kar aaye ho

Shurya - janu tum baat karne ki tamiz bhul gayi hai aur tuh school kyu nahi gayi aaj

Janu per patakte hue wha sai apne room mai chali jati hai

Shurya - kaamini enn logo ko picche wala ghar dhika de aap log esske sath jao aur tum mere saath aao kaya naam hai tumhara

Ladaka - naa.....mera

Shurya - ha bahi aab naam bata Mai Etna kaya sochana

Nilam - esska nam devdutt Singh hai

Sona - ha hum esse pyar sai DD khate hai

Ladaka(Mai ) - dd haa yahi to naam hai mera

Shurya - dd chaloo mere sath

(dev dutt ek random naam hai )

mai - ha chalye

phir hum dono garden Mai aa gye

mai - ha sir kaya baat hai

Shurya- tum mere beti sai to mil Liye ho wo todi naadan hai humare laad pyaar aur paise ka natiza jisnai bus usse paiso tak hi seemit kar diya agar wo tum sai badsaluki kare to bura mat manana

Mai - nahi aasi koi baat nahi hai aap befikar raahe par mai ek saath aapke bete aur beti ko guard kaise karunga

Shurya - usse tumhari jada jarurat nahi hai bus tumahari taakat dhek kar mujhe laga agar wo musibat mai hua to tum usse baacha loge

Mai - kaya karte hai wo

Shurya - jasusi ka bhoot sawar hai uss par

Mai - thik hai mai dyan rakhunga

Shuray - ye lo 30 hazzar rupay advance

Mai - sir bahut bahut shukriya

Phir usske bad mai phichle wale ghar me aa gaya

Nilam - sona tera kangan kaha hai

Sona - maa woh kaho gaya

Tulsi - sacha bata bahane mat banna

Sona - wo maine girwi rak diya hai

Nilam - kyu

sona - wo eelaz ke liye paise nahi tahe to esse liye aur jhutt bola ki dost sai udhar liya hai

Mai - ye sab kiya aapne kyu

Sona - aree aap yaha nahi woh toh bus maine aise hi

Mai - ek anjan ladake ke liye etna sab kiya aap logo nai ye baat ye DD kabhi nahi bhulega

Sona - bus bus rahene do

Mai - accha aap dono( sona /tulsi)mere sath chaloo

Mona - kyu kha jana hai

Mai- maa dhekho na yeh dono meri baat nahi sunati hai

Nilam - tum dono jao ab sai bus esski baat manana

Tulsi - accha ab humari azadi esske haath me hai phir toh

Mai - are bus bhi karo baate aur ab chalo

uske bad mai bhar janne aa
gaya dono ko lekar

Mai - arre mai to bhul gaya ye kon sa state hai

Tulsi - ye Harayana hai

Mai - aacha yaha aas pass mall kitni dhur hai

Sona - 1km kyu

Mai- arre shopping karni hai

Tulsi - par maa nai sehar jane sai mana kiya hai

Mai- arre apne bhai bharosha rakho (mujhe apne par ab toda confidence ho raha tha kyu naa ho 15 min Mai hi ek builder nai apna bodyguard jo bana liya tha)

Sona - mujhe apne friend par pura bharosha hai

Mai- tumhe jo samjhana hai samjho par tulsi meri badi didi

Tulsi - chal chotu jadi chal

Sona - chotu hahahaha

uske baad hum taxi pakad kar mall mai aa gaye thodi bhaut der mai

Mai- chalo aap dono kapde le lo aur Mai bhi le leta hu

dono - thik hai

Phir hum teeno nai mil kar kapde kharide maa aur dada ji ke liye bhi aur restaurant mai aa kar beth gaye aur mai kuch lene chala gaya

Tabhi ek ladke nai sona ke pass aa kar acha to tum dono yaha chupi ho etna bol ke woh ek phone kar deta hai

Ladaka - ha boss wo mil gayi

Boss - le kar aa dono ko mala maal kar dunga tujhe

Ladka - bus abhi laya boss

Aur phone rakh ke

Ladaka - tum dono mere sath chaloo warana aacha nahi hoga

Mai - abe oo langur tujhe koi aur kaam nahi kaya chal nikal yaha sai ess sai pehle ki mai tujhe yaha sai jaane ke kabil na chhodu

Ladaka- yehi to mera kaam hai ladkiya uthawana enn dono ko mai le kar hi jaunga tuh dekhata kaya kar lega

Mai- chal teri aaj ye gandi aadat chhud wata hu aur tum dono yeh dar sai kaapana band karo

Sona darte hue picche esshara karti hai

Maine piche mud ke dekha to wha 5 aadami khade hue the

Ladaka - ab bol enn ko mere hawale karega ki nahi

Mai - tum dono ye ice cream kaho aur maja lo yaha garmi Jada hone wali hai

Ladaka- maroo saale kutte ko

Maine jatt sai kursi utha kar ek aadami ke sir par mari woh wahi chila kar gir gaya sab ke sab logo ka dhyaan meri taraf ho gaya

Ek aadami ne chain phek kar mere gale mai fasa di aur khichane laga

Mai chain ko hath sai pakada aur uss ko apne taraf chicate hue pass laya aur ek mukka uske khande par mara uska khandha hi tut gaya

Baaki ke teeno toh dar gaye

Ladaka - abe dekh kaya rahe jaan sai maro abb

woh teeno pistol nikal lete hai

restaurant mai sab dar ke maare chilla nai lagate hai

Ladaka - tum sab mat daro aur hala band kar bus hume es sai matalb hai

Phir maine dono ladkiyo ko ek side kar liya

Ladaka - abe chutiyo kaya barat mai aaye ho kaya maro bhenchod

Unn tino nai fire kar diya mera heart beat tezz hone ke jagah slow ho gaya maine dekha sab khuch jaise ruk saa gaya haj yaa slow ho gaya hai par meri movement normal thi maine jada khuch na sochate hue teeno bullet ke pass gaya aur unko utha liya

Mai - ye to gazab hai yaar

Phir teeno ko utha kar unn tenno ke muh mai daal kar unn par laat ghuso ki barsat kar phir teeno ko ek sath khada kar ke pass ki table de mari unke Shir par

unke shir par marte hi sab khuch normal ho gaya aur unka shir phat gaya

sab ke sab muh khol kar mere taraf dhek rahe the jaise koi jadui hero dekha ho restaurant ka manager mere pass aaya

Manager - ess tod phod ka paisa kon bharega

Maine aage bhad kar uss ladake ke jeb sir wallet aur phone nikala aur uska coller pakad kar chal atm ka pin code bata

ladka - 5**
aur dard mai chillane laga

Maine wallet mai sai card nikal ke diya aur payment ki

Mai - essmai kitne paise hai

Reception nai darate hue kaha - sir bahar atm hai aap pata kar le wahi

Mai - chlo didi aua sona yaha kaa kaam ho gaya

woh dono to jaise kahi kho gayi thi

Mai hilla kar - chalo kaha kho gayi

woh dono bus uth ke mere picche picche chal di saman lekar

Uske baad hum bahar ek atm par gaye maine card laga kar pin code dala aur account check kiya usmai 25 lakh aur kich rupye the

Mai bhar aaya dono pata nahi kyu mujh sai dar rahi rhi

Mai - are ab kyu dar rahi ho woh bhi mere sai

Tulsi - tumhari aakhe red hai aag ki tarah

Mai - kaya maine pass hi khadi bike ke mirror mai dekha ohh sit yeh kaya hai

Maine aakhe band kar ke kholi to woh normal ho gayi

Mai - aree kuch nahi lagata kich gir gaya hoga aakh mai

Sona - haa par tumnai uska card kyu liya

Mai - taaki wo mera piccha kare aur mujhe dad matalab tumhare dad ka pata chale aur phir tumhare paiso par to ye moj kar rahe hai to apne paise lene mai kaya harz hai

Sona - kuch jada hi tezz dimag chalane laga ek hi din mai bodyguard banate hi ab ghar chalo jaldi

Mai - nahi jaldi sai bank chalo jitnai paise hai nikal sakate hai utna nikal lo uske atm band karane sai pehle

phir hum teeno s***** bank gaye

Mai - sir atm max kitna withdraw ho sakata

Casher- kon sa atm hai aap ka ye toh
ATM-cum-debit card hai online transactions 5 lakh a day ho sakata hai

Mai - aap jara side mai aayenge

Casher - ha bolo

Mai - kaya aap 25 lakh kisi aur account mai transfer kara sakte ho

Casher - ye mister kaya bol rahe ho ye sab galat hai

Mai - 2 lakh aap rakh lena

Casher to fast nikala - 3 lakh

Mai - done par kisi ko pata nahi naa chale

Casher - tum chinta mat karo mai aisa dekha dunga ki jiska ye account hai ussi nai transfer kiya hai par ek problem hai

Mai - kya

Casher - Otp

Mai - mere pass uska mobile hai naa

Casher - phir to ho gya samajho

Phir maine ek account khol kar 21 lakh uss mai transfer kara liye aur 1 lakh le kar unn dono ke sath bhar aa gaya aur 3 lakh uss casher nai le liye

Tulsi - tumhari yadass chali gayi par dimag to kisi jasus ki tarha chala rahe ho

Mai- sara aap logo ka asar hai

Sona - accha bacchu saara elzaam hum par

Mai - haa haa chalo wo dhekho pani puri wala chalo khate hai tl

Tulsi - mere to favorite hai

hume maje sai pani puri khaayi aur phir ghum ghaam ke hum teeno ghar aa gaye aur shurya sir ke pass

Shurya - kal sai tumhe janu ke sath jana hoga school

Mai - ok sir

phir mai aapne room mai aaa gaya picche ke ghar mai

Udhar wo dono nilam ji ko saari ghatana namak mirch laga jar suna rahi thi

Nilam - lagata hai ye hi tumhare papa ko le kar aayega

Tulsi - humare

Nilam - ha ha baba ha

usske baad hum sab nai khana khaya aur soo gaye
par mujhe kaafi der baad need aayi thodi bechani si thi mujhe

Subah meri aakhe khuli to mere baal mai khuch hilata saa malum pada

dekha to tulsi didi apna hath mere baalo mai ghuma rahi hai aur sir unki god mai tha

Mai - arre didi aap yha

Tulsi - kyu apne bhai ke pass nahi aa sakti kaya

Mai - kyu nahi

Maine time dekha - ohh chaloo jao jara tea le kar aao mai tayar jo jau mujhe
duty par jana hai

Tulsi - jao jaldi sai ready ho jaoo

phir mai nahane laga jab naha ke nikala to bhar aaya to maa wha bethi thi

Nilam- beta tu etna gora kaise ho gaya aur body etani......

maine bhag kar mirror Mai dekha to meri body or face glow kar raha tha

Mai - maa lagata hai pehle kabhi sahi sai nahaya nhi tha

Sona - ye kon hai

Mai - arre pagal Mai hi hu tuh bhi na ekdum dahkan hai

Sona - etni jaldi jaldi koi badalta hai

Mai - arre doctor ki baate bhul gayi kaya
sona - arre ha sorry

Mai - chalo Mai nikalta hu

usske baad mai tyar hokar nicche car ke pass khada ho gaya jismai janu ko lekar janna tha

Mai - sir good morning

Shurya - are wah kaafi smart lag rahe ho duty hi karna aur kahi kaamo mai naa lag jana

Mai - arre sir bus aase hi mai kaam pe hi dhyaan dunga

tabhi janu aa gayi waha

janu - ok dad mai ja rahi hu

shurya - beta ye hai DD aaj sai tumhare bodyguard

Janu mujhe ghurate hue - ok dad
Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhai
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