Fantasy "DEVANJALI" (Dard Ki Tasvir)

[Nevil singh]

Bro yaha par log only sex stories read karte hain. Supernatural powers and without sex wali stories koi read nahi karta. So ye story close kar di thi maine. Mere paas waise bhi time nahi hai likhne ka to is story ko close hi samjho. Time milta hai to dusri stories read karta hu bas.

bade bhai chhota muh badi baat
pahle toh kshama chahta hu aapse

bade bhai ghain baante se badhta hai
ishwer ne aapko itna nirmal man v sarvsreshth kalpnaao me vicharan karne ke liye budhi di hai jo bahut hi kam partibha ke dhani sahityakaaro ko milti hai
aapki lekhni bahut hi utam darje ki hai joh sahitye akadmi se puraskrit avseye hogi
bade bhai jab aapka man ish rachna ko shuru karne ka ho toh kripya sandesh jarur de dijiye
kayoki utam sahitye ki rachna kishi dabav se nahi yeh toh man me jab uthaan hoga ghain ki ganga ka toh swayam ek nirmal dhaara ke sawrup me ish aloukik rachna me fir se praan aa jaayenge
aakhir naayika anjali bhi prem ke vashibhut hoker itni sadiyo se dev ke intjaar me thi
hum bhi aapke shabdo ke maayajaal ke prem ke vashibhut aapka intjaar karenge
joh ichchha sahib ki
ek baar punh aapse maafi chahta hun bade bhai ager mere shabdo se aapko dukh hua ho toh
me toh sirf aapse ish divye rachna ko dobaara shuru karne ke liye aapse anurodh karta hun
baaki joh aapka hridye kahe
saadho waad

 

[Nevil singh]

ish kaalkhand ki sarvsreshth rachnaao me se ek ish aloukik divye rachna ke 100 prishth pure hone ki rachiyta aur sabhi jano ko bahut bahut shubhkaamnaaye.

ummid per duniya kaayam hai
ish vajah se ummid karta hun ki yeh sunheri rachna dobara se shuru hogi aur nirbhadh gati se aage parvahit hogi
baaki hari ichchha

 

[VIKRANT]

Bhai main Chahata hu ki aap mahine mein 2 Update de de to hamare liye bahut hoga baki aapki marji

Time mila to likhuga bro.

 

[VIKRANT]

Wrong opinion hai apka
Just check this two stories
GOD'S AND DEMONS
ATTITUDE
ye dono supernatural storiy hai without any sex scenes jise reader bohot pasand karte hai..

Bro main ye samajhta hu ki yaha par koi bhi story tabhi stop kar di jati hai jab ya to writer ke paas time nahi hota ya fir story me reader's nahi hote.

 

[VIKRANT]

bade bhai chhota muh badi baat
pahle toh kshama chahta hu aapse

bade bhai ghain baante se badhta hai
ishwer ne aapko itna nirmal man v sarvsreshth kalpnaao me vicharan karne ke liye budhi di hai jo bahut hi kam partibha ke dhani sahityakaaro ko milti hai
aapki lekhni bahut hi utam darje ki hai joh sahitye akadmi se puraskrit avseye hogi
bade bhai jab aapka man ish rachna ko shuru karne ka ho toh kripya sandesh jarur de dijiye
kayoki utam sahitye ki rachna kishi dabav se nahi yeh toh man me jab uthaan hoga ghain ki ganga ka toh swayam ek nirmal dhaara ke sawrup me ish aloukik rachna me fir se praan aa jaayenge
aakhir naayika anjali bhi prem ke vashibhut hoker itni sadiyo se dev ke intjaar me thi
hum bhi aapke shabdo ke maayajaal ke prem ke vashibhut aapka intjaar karenge
joh ichchha sahib ki
ek baar punh aapse maafi chahta hun bade bhai ager mere shabdo se aapko dukh hua ho toh
me toh sirf aapse ish divye rachna ko dobaara shuru karne ke liye aapse anurodh karta hun
baaki joh aapka hridye kahe
saadho waad

Nice to see your valuable feedback bro. I'm totally agree with you but mere paas story likhne ke liye time hi nahi hai. Jo time milta hai usme stories read karta hu and then apna feedback de kar chala jata hu. Starting me main yahi try kar raha tha ki story complete karuga but time ki shortness and readers ka better response na milne par maine story close kar diya tha and now likhne ke liye bilkul bhi time nahi milta coz job hi aisi hai meri. Anyways thanks and I'm so happy ki aapne is story ko read kiya and beautiful feedback diya.

 

[VIKRANT]

ish kaalkhand ki sarvsreshth rachnaao me se ek ish aloukik divye rachna ke 100 prishth pure hone ki rachiyta aur sabhi jano ko bahut bahut shubhkaamnaaye.

ummid per duniya kaayam hai
ish vajah se ummid karta hun ki yeh sunheri rachna dobara se shuru hogi aur nirbhadh gati se aage parvahit hogi
baaki hari ichchha

Thanks bro but bata hi chuka ki likhne ke liye time nahi abhi mere paas. In future agar time milega to jarur likhuga.

 

[Ayush2017]

Time mila to likhuga bro.

Thanks bro

 

[Nevil singh]

Thanks bro but bata hi chuka ki likhne ke liye time nahi abhi mere paas. In future agar time milega to jarur likhuga.

aankho ne jarre jarre par sazde lutaye hai,
kya jaane ja chhipa mera pardanashi kahan.

 

[VIKRANT]

aankho ne jarre jarre par sazde lutaye hai,
kya jaane ja chhipa mera pardanashi kahan.

Beautiful poetry bro.

 

[SunPsycho]

Aap galat ho k log yaha sirf sex stories pdhne aate hai. ...maine bahut c pdhi hai. But un ka nsha bahut thode time ka hota hai......yeh jo stories hoti hai ...bahut lmbe sme tak mujhe khus aur better feel krwati hai....... Mann mein chhayi rehti hai ..
Ab aap khud btao...jinn logon ki aap story padh rhe ho . .agr wo aise aapke muh pe story band kr de aur mjaak bna de to. .aapko kaisa lgega