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Superb story...
Vikrant bhai aap sachme umda writer he...
Jo anjali ke dard ka varnan kiya he vo kabile tarif he...
Aage aur kya kahu..bs itna Hi amazing...
Vikrant bhai aap sachme umda writer he...
Jo anjali ke dard ka varnan kiya he vo kabile tarif he...
Aage aur kya kahu..bs itna Hi amazing...
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UPDATE.........(( 4 ))
Thand mausam me subah subah is tarah kisi ke dwara pani daal dene par gussa to use bahut aayi thi lekin jab kamre me koi na dikha to bechara karta kya.? Halaki use pakka pata tha ki ye harkat uski chhoti bahan Rani ke siva kisi ki nahi ho sakti thi. Kuchh der gusse me baitha raha fir jaldi se bathroom ki taraf bhaga kyo ki bheeng gaya tha aur is haalat me bistar par baithne ka koi matlab hi nahi tha.
Vikrant jab naha dho kar bathroom se nikla to apne kamre me bed par apni badi bahan soniya ko baithe paya. Kuch pal ke liye wah chaunka kyo ki wah sirf towel me tha baaki pura badan nanga tha. Soniya ne sir utha kar vikrant ki taraf dekha to uske hotho par muakan tair gayi aur sath hi apne hotho ko gol karke seeti baja kar kaha.
Soniya: Oye hoye kya body shody bana rakhi hai mere pyare bhai ne..magar is body se sirf ek hi kaam karta hai bas..so sad...no gf..no bf.
Vikrant: Gf bf ki jarurat nahi hai mujhe didi...ye sab bekaar ki chije hain..apna kaam to logo ke hath pair todne wala hai...jisme mujhe bada maza aata hai..aap to janti hain na??
Soniya(Has kar): Haan haan achhi tarah...aur teri vajah se hi aaj tak mera koi ladka boyfriend nahi ban saka. Ek bechare ne himmat karke mujhe propose bhi kiya to tumne uske hath pair tod diye...bechara..kal bhi apne hath pair todwane se bach hi gaya.
Vikrant: Mujhe is baat se koi problem nahi hai didi ki aapka koi boyfriend ho jaye...bas main ye chahta hu ki jo bhi aapka bf ho wo har tarah se aapke kaabil ho and har musibat me aapka nidarta se sath de.
Soniya: Chal chhod is baat ko vicky. Mujhe vaise bhi kisi ko bf banane ka koi shauk nahi hai. Aakhir bahan to teri hi hu...jaise tujhe kisi ko gf banane ka koi shauk nahi hai.
Vikrant: Achhi baat hai di. Vaise bhi in sab chijo se ek tention hi rahti hai..bade jhamele hain bf gf me. Apna to ek hi rule hai...akele raho...aur free raho...no gf bf...no tention.
Soniya: In baato ke chakkar me main ye bhool hi gayi ki main tere paas kis liye aayi thi??
Vikrant: Ji kahiye..kuchh kaam tha kya mujhse??
Soniya: Are nahi re...wo aaj tera bday hai na..is liye puchhne aayi thi ki tujhe kya gift chahiye mujhse???
Vikrant: Is bare me to maine kal hi aapko bata diya tha ki aapko jo dil Kare de dijiyega. Vaise bhi mujhe in sab chijo me koi intrest nahi hai didi.
Soniya: Haan tujhe to aaj kal us anjali me intrest hai na.
Soniya ki is baat se vikrant ek pal ke liye jhemp sa gaya..kuch bola na gaya usse. Fir khud ko normal karte huye bola.
Vikrant: Aisa kuch nahi hai di..aap janti hain ki wo sirf ek sapna hai..jiska hakikat se koi vaasta nahi hai.
Soniya: Chal ye to maanti hu ki wo ek sapna hai..magar ye bhi janti hu ki wo aam sapne jaisa sapna bhi nahi hai. Aam taur par kisi ko bhi is tarah ek hi sapna baar baar nahi aata magar tujhe aata hai...ajeeb baat hai ye.
Vikrant gahri soch me doob gaya.
Soniya: Oye ab kaha kho gaya bhai??
Vikrant: Kal raat mujhe ek aur sapna aaya tha di...pahle wale sapne se hi related tha wo.
Soniya: Kaisa sapna tha wo bata mujhe jaldi..
Vikrant ne use sab kuch bata diya soniya sab kuch sun hairaan rah gayi.
Soniya: Ye sapna to us wale se bhi kamaal ka hai bhai...kya lagta hai tujhe...in sab sapno ka tujhse kya connection ho sakta hai???
Vikrant: Jyada to main kuch nahi janta di lekin ab ye pakka ho gaya lagta hai ki in sapno ka mujhse koi connection jarur hai.
Soniya: Ye dave ke sath kaise kah sakta hai tu ki inka tujhse connction hi hai??
Vikrant: Mere paas mere daave ki kuchh thos vajah hai di...
Soniya: Kaisi vajah mujhe bata jaldi se.
Vikrant: Sapne me jis anjali naam ki ladki ko main dekhta hu uske dono kaan theek vaise hi hain jaise mere kaan hain..aap janti hain ki mere kaan aam insano jaise nahi hain..isi liye log mujhe mere kaano ki vajah se mujhe chidhaya bhi karte hain aur ye bhi kaha karte hain ki main is dharti ka nahi lagta. Aam taur par aise kaan wale insaan is dharti par shayad hi kahi paye jate ho..
Soniya: Ok...aur kuchh??
Vikrant: Mere paas aam insaano se kahi jyada taakat ka hona...matlab main do do teen teen insaano ko ek sath sukhe patte ki tarah utha kar door fenk sakta hu...
Soniya: Ho sakta hai ye taakat daily gym dwara banayi gayi body ki ho??
Vikrant: Nahi di...gym dwara koi bhi insaan chaahe jitni badi ya khatarnaak body shody bana le magar do do teen teen insaan ko ek sath utha kar use door fenk dena kisi bhi haalat me hajam karne wali baat nahi hai..
Soniya: To iska kya matlab huwa??
Vikrant: Main iska matlab nahi janta ki kya hai...maine to wo bataya hai jo main hu ya jo main kar chuka hu..
Soniya: Okk fine...aur kuchh??
Vikrant: Ek important cheej aur hai jiske bare me mere siva koi nahi janta..
Soniya(Chaunkte huye): Ye kya kah raha hai tu...aisi bhala kaun si baat hai..jiske bare me ham log bhi nahi jante??
Vikrant: Mera computer jaisa dimaag..
Soniya(Shocked): Whattt???
Vikrant: Ye sach hai di. Aap janti hain ki maine aaj tak har school collage me top hi karta aaya hu. Lekin aapko ye jankar hairat hogi ki top karne ke liye maine kabhi bhi vaisi study me mehnat nahi ki jaise aam student top karne ke liye din raat padhte rahte hain..
Soniya(Shock): My god vicky ye kya bol raha hai tu??
Vikrant: Main sach kah raha hu di. Yahi sach hai. Aap yu samajhiye ki agar exam se kuch pal pahle main ek baar books dekh lu to books ke andar ki har cheej mere dimaag me chhap jayegi. Aap samajh sakti hain aisi situation me koi bhi insaan har saal top kar lega.
Soniya ki aankhe hairat se fati padi thi. Wah vikrant ko is tarah dekhe ja rahi thi jaise vikrant duniya ka sabse bada ajuba ho.
Soniya: Yakeen nahi hota vicky. Lekin tune itni badi baat ko ham sabse aaj tak chhupata aaya hai..ye achha nahi kiya tune.
Vikrant: Ye sab batane ka koi fayda bhi nahi tha di. Ulta aap log ye soch soch kar pareshan hote rahte ki jane mujhe kya ho gaya hai??
Soniya: Chal koi baat nahi...ab jabki tujhe ye pata chal hi gaya lagbhag ki in sapno ka tujhse hi koi connection hai to ab tu kya karega???
Vikrant: Mujhe khud samajh nahi aa raha di ki kya karu ab??
Soniya: ye bhi sahi baat hai...bhala sirf sapne ke base par koi kya kar sakta hai...anyway chhod in sab baato ko...baad me dekha jayega...tu jaldi se kapde pahan kar niche aa jana sab tera hi wait kar rahe honge.
Soniya itna kah kar kamre se baahar chali gayi aur vikrant kapde pahnne ke baad niche aa gaya jaha par sab log baithe naasta kar rahe the..
Urmila: Happy bday beta...aaja mere paas baith..aaj main apne hatho se tujhe khilaaugi.
Vikrant jakar maa ke paas wali kursi par baith gaya. Urmila ne ek nivala tod kar vikrant khilaya.
Rani: Maa hame bhi apne hath se khila diya kijiye kabhi kabhi....
Urmila: Chup chaap apne hath se kha tu..jyada tanj marne ki jarurat nahi hai...sab samajhti hu maine.
Rani: Maa main kaha tanj maar rahi hu...main to bas..
Urmila: Bas bas...ab khana khaao.
Anand ji(Muskura kar): Janam din mubarak ho bete..
Vikrant: Thanks dad
Soniya: Maa mujhe shoping ke liye jana hai..
Rani: Mujhe bhi jana hai..
Urmila: Theek hai tum dono hi chale jana...ab khaao chup chaap.
Vikrant: Mom ise shoping ke liye bhejne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...isne aaj fir mere upar thanda thanda pani dala tha subah.
Rani(Hadbada kar): Nahi mom maine nahi dala..ye thooth bol rahe hain.
Urmila: mujhe pata hai tu kitni satyvaadi hai...subah dekha tha maine vicky ke room se bhaag kar tujhe niche aate huye.
Vikrant: Jane dijiye mom?? Aaj baksh dijiye kyo ki aaj mera bday hai aur main nahi chahta ki koi rani ko bura bhala kahe..
Urmila: ek kaam karo tum sab chale jana...magar shaam ko jaldi aa bhi jana.
Soniya: Theek hai mom..
Iske baad sab ne shanti se breakfast kiya..
Shaam ko vikrant ka bday hai is loye sab ke man me khushi thi lekin aaj ki raat kuchh hone wala tha...kuchh aisa jiski vajah se halaat badal jane the. In sabke bare me kisi ko kuchh pata nahi tha...
Aaj ki raat ka wait kijiye friendss...
Kya hone wala hai...any adea???
Thand mausam me subah subah is tarah kisi ke dwara pani daal dene par gussa to use bahut aayi thi lekin jab kamre me koi na dikha to bechara karta kya.? Halaki use pakka pata tha ki ye harkat uski chhoti bahan Rani ke siva kisi ki nahi ho sakti thi. Kuchh der gusse me baitha raha fir jaldi se bathroom ki taraf bhaga kyo ki bheeng gaya tha aur is haalat me bistar par baithne ka koi matlab hi nahi tha.
Vikrant jab naha dho kar bathroom se nikla to apne kamre me bed par apni badi bahan soniya ko baithe paya. Kuch pal ke liye wah chaunka kyo ki wah sirf towel me tha baaki pura badan nanga tha. Soniya ne sir utha kar vikrant ki taraf dekha to uske hotho par muakan tair gayi aur sath hi apne hotho ko gol karke seeti baja kar kaha.
Soniya: Oye hoye kya body shody bana rakhi hai mere pyare bhai ne..magar is body se sirf ek hi kaam karta hai bas..so sad...no gf..no bf.
Vikrant: Gf bf ki jarurat nahi hai mujhe didi...ye sab bekaar ki chije hain..apna kaam to logo ke hath pair todne wala hai...jisme mujhe bada maza aata hai..aap to janti hain na??
Soniya(Has kar): Haan haan achhi tarah...aur teri vajah se hi aaj tak mera koi ladka boyfriend nahi ban saka. Ek bechare ne himmat karke mujhe propose bhi kiya to tumne uske hath pair tod diye...bechara..kal bhi apne hath pair todwane se bach hi gaya.
Vikrant: Mujhe is baat se koi problem nahi hai didi ki aapka koi boyfriend ho jaye...bas main ye chahta hu ki jo bhi aapka bf ho wo har tarah se aapke kaabil ho and har musibat me aapka nidarta se sath de.
Soniya: Chal chhod is baat ko vicky. Mujhe vaise bhi kisi ko bf banane ka koi shauk nahi hai. Aakhir bahan to teri hi hu...jaise tujhe kisi ko gf banane ka koi shauk nahi hai.
Vikrant: Achhi baat hai di. Vaise bhi in sab chijo se ek tention hi rahti hai..bade jhamele hain bf gf me. Apna to ek hi rule hai...akele raho...aur free raho...no gf bf...no tention.
Soniya: In baato ke chakkar me main ye bhool hi gayi ki main tere paas kis liye aayi thi??
Vikrant: Ji kahiye..kuchh kaam tha kya mujhse??
Soniya: Are nahi re...wo aaj tera bday hai na..is liye puchhne aayi thi ki tujhe kya gift chahiye mujhse???
Vikrant: Is bare me to maine kal hi aapko bata diya tha ki aapko jo dil Kare de dijiyega. Vaise bhi mujhe in sab chijo me koi intrest nahi hai didi.
Soniya: Haan tujhe to aaj kal us anjali me intrest hai na.
Soniya ki is baat se vikrant ek pal ke liye jhemp sa gaya..kuch bola na gaya usse. Fir khud ko normal karte huye bola.
Vikrant: Aisa kuch nahi hai di..aap janti hain ki wo sirf ek sapna hai..jiska hakikat se koi vaasta nahi hai.
Soniya: Chal ye to maanti hu ki wo ek sapna hai..magar ye bhi janti hu ki wo aam sapne jaisa sapna bhi nahi hai. Aam taur par kisi ko bhi is tarah ek hi sapna baar baar nahi aata magar tujhe aata hai...ajeeb baat hai ye.
Vikrant gahri soch me doob gaya.
Soniya: Oye ab kaha kho gaya bhai??
Vikrant: Kal raat mujhe ek aur sapna aaya tha di...pahle wale sapne se hi related tha wo.
Soniya: Kaisa sapna tha wo bata mujhe jaldi..
Vikrant ne use sab kuch bata diya soniya sab kuch sun hairaan rah gayi.
Soniya: Ye sapna to us wale se bhi kamaal ka hai bhai...kya lagta hai tujhe...in sab sapno ka tujhse kya connection ho sakta hai???
Vikrant: Jyada to main kuch nahi janta di lekin ab ye pakka ho gaya lagta hai ki in sapno ka mujhse koi connection jarur hai.
Soniya: Ye dave ke sath kaise kah sakta hai tu ki inka tujhse connction hi hai??
Vikrant: Mere paas mere daave ki kuchh thos vajah hai di...
Soniya: Kaisi vajah mujhe bata jaldi se.
Vikrant: Sapne me jis anjali naam ki ladki ko main dekhta hu uske dono kaan theek vaise hi hain jaise mere kaan hain..aap janti hain ki mere kaan aam insano jaise nahi hain..isi liye log mujhe mere kaano ki vajah se mujhe chidhaya bhi karte hain aur ye bhi kaha karte hain ki main is dharti ka nahi lagta. Aam taur par aise kaan wale insaan is dharti par shayad hi kahi paye jate ho..
Soniya: Ok...aur kuchh??
Vikrant: Mere paas aam insaano se kahi jyada taakat ka hona...matlab main do do teen teen insaano ko ek sath sukhe patte ki tarah utha kar door fenk sakta hu...
Soniya: Ho sakta hai ye taakat daily gym dwara banayi gayi body ki ho??
Vikrant: Nahi di...gym dwara koi bhi insaan chaahe jitni badi ya khatarnaak body shody bana le magar do do teen teen insaan ko ek sath utha kar use door fenk dena kisi bhi haalat me hajam karne wali baat nahi hai..
Soniya: To iska kya matlab huwa??
Vikrant: Main iska matlab nahi janta ki kya hai...maine to wo bataya hai jo main hu ya jo main kar chuka hu..
Soniya: Okk fine...aur kuchh??
Vikrant: Ek important cheej aur hai jiske bare me mere siva koi nahi janta..
Soniya(Chaunkte huye): Ye kya kah raha hai tu...aisi bhala kaun si baat hai..jiske bare me ham log bhi nahi jante??
Vikrant: Mera computer jaisa dimaag..
Soniya(Shocked): Whattt???
Vikrant: Ye sach hai di. Aap janti hain ki maine aaj tak har school collage me top hi karta aaya hu. Lekin aapko ye jankar hairat hogi ki top karne ke liye maine kabhi bhi vaisi study me mehnat nahi ki jaise aam student top karne ke liye din raat padhte rahte hain..
Soniya(Shock): My god vicky ye kya bol raha hai tu??
Vikrant: Main sach kah raha hu di. Yahi sach hai. Aap yu samajhiye ki agar exam se kuch pal pahle main ek baar books dekh lu to books ke andar ki har cheej mere dimaag me chhap jayegi. Aap samajh sakti hain aisi situation me koi bhi insaan har saal top kar lega.
Soniya ki aankhe hairat se fati padi thi. Wah vikrant ko is tarah dekhe ja rahi thi jaise vikrant duniya ka sabse bada ajuba ho.
Soniya: Yakeen nahi hota vicky. Lekin tune itni badi baat ko ham sabse aaj tak chhupata aaya hai..ye achha nahi kiya tune.
Vikrant: Ye sab batane ka koi fayda bhi nahi tha di. Ulta aap log ye soch soch kar pareshan hote rahte ki jane mujhe kya ho gaya hai??
Soniya: Chal koi baat nahi...ab jabki tujhe ye pata chal hi gaya lagbhag ki in sapno ka tujhse hi koi connection hai to ab tu kya karega???
Vikrant: Mujhe khud samajh nahi aa raha di ki kya karu ab??
Soniya: ye bhi sahi baat hai...bhala sirf sapne ke base par koi kya kar sakta hai...anyway chhod in sab baato ko...baad me dekha jayega...tu jaldi se kapde pahan kar niche aa jana sab tera hi wait kar rahe honge.
Soniya itna kah kar kamre se baahar chali gayi aur vikrant kapde pahnne ke baad niche aa gaya jaha par sab log baithe naasta kar rahe the..
Urmila: Happy bday beta...aaja mere paas baith..aaj main apne hatho se tujhe khilaaugi.
Vikrant jakar maa ke paas wali kursi par baith gaya. Urmila ne ek nivala tod kar vikrant khilaya.
Rani: Maa hame bhi apne hath se khila diya kijiye kabhi kabhi....
Urmila: Chup chaap apne hath se kha tu..jyada tanj marne ki jarurat nahi hai...sab samajhti hu maine.
Rani: Maa main kaha tanj maar rahi hu...main to bas..
Urmila: Bas bas...ab khana khaao.
Anand ji(Muskura kar): Janam din mubarak ho bete..
Vikrant: Thanks dad
Soniya: Maa mujhe shoping ke liye jana hai..
Rani: Mujhe bhi jana hai..
Urmila: Theek hai tum dono hi chale jana...ab khaao chup chaap.
Vikrant: Mom ise shoping ke liye bhejne ki koi jarurat nahi hai...isne aaj fir mere upar thanda thanda pani dala tha subah.
Rani(Hadbada kar): Nahi mom maine nahi dala..ye thooth bol rahe hain.
Urmila: mujhe pata hai tu kitni satyvaadi hai...subah dekha tha maine vicky ke room se bhaag kar tujhe niche aate huye.
Vikrant: Jane dijiye mom?? Aaj baksh dijiye kyo ki aaj mera bday hai aur main nahi chahta ki koi rani ko bura bhala kahe..
Urmila: ek kaam karo tum sab chale jana...magar shaam ko jaldi aa bhi jana.
Soniya: Theek hai mom..
Iske baad sab ne shanti se breakfast kiya..
Shaam ko vikrant ka bday hai is loye sab ke man me khushi thi lekin aaj ki raat kuchh hone wala tha...kuchh aisa jiski vajah se halaat badal jane the. In sabke bare me kisi ko kuchh pata nahi tha...
Aaj ki raat ka wait kijiye friendss...
Kya hone wala hai...any adea???
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