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Fantasy "DEVANJALI" (Dard Ki Tasvir)

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VIKRANT said:
"DEVANJALI" (Dard Ki Tasvir)

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"DEVANJALI" (Dard Ki Tasvir)

UPDATE ~~~~~~~~ 01

Har taraf bhayanak andhera chhaya huwa tha, is bhayanak andhere ke beech ek jagah dhundhla sa prakaash dikh raha tha, us prakash me ek ladki dhundhli si nazar aa rahi thi, Ladki ka chehra saaf nahi dikh raha tha,

Us ladki ke hath pair lohe ki moti moti janjiro me bandhe nazar aa rahe the, wo ladki jameen par kuch karti huyi aur kuch dekhti huyi nazar aa rahi thi,

Ladki apne dahine hath se jameen par kuch kar rahi thi jo saaf nazar nahi aa raha tha, dheere dheere wo dhundhlapan chhatne laga aur ab kuch saaf dikhne laga tha, jameen par koi tasvir bani thi, jo ladki dwara bani huyi thi, tasvir me sirf chehra tha kisi khubsurat se navjawan ladke ka,

Usi tasvir ko dekhte huye wo ladki bade hi karunayukt swar me kuch kah rahi thi,

Ladki: Tum kab aaoge Dev? Tumhare intzar me shadiya beet gayi magar tum ab tak nahi aaye, tumhari anjali tumse milne ke liye tadap rahi hai Dev, meri saanse sirf tumhari soorat dekhne ke liye hi shesh bachi hain, ab aa bhi jaao Dev, kyo apni anjali ko tadpa rahe ho itna?

Itna kah kar wo fir se jameen par khud ke dwara banayi gayi us tasvir ko dekhne lagi, shayad is ummeed me ki wo tasveer jawaab me usse kuch kahegi, lekin kafi der baad bhi jab kuch na huwa to ladki ki aankho se aanshu chhalak pade,

Ladki(Anjali): Tum kitne kathor ho na Dev? Tumhe meri karun dasa ka bilkul bhi ehsaas nahi hai, tum apni us anjali ko zaar zaar rula rahe ho jiski aankho me aanshu ka ek katra dekhte hi tum sari duniya ko aag laga dene par utaaru ho jate the, magra....

Wah fir rone lagi, us bhayanak andhere aur sannate me uska ye karun krandan bada hi hahakari lagta tha, uske masoor aur khubsurat se chehre par is wakt jaise zamane bhar ka dard tha,

Uski hari hari aankho me aanshuo ka samandar tha, jism par safed libaas kisi pari ki tarah the, uske kaan aam insaano ki tarah nahi the balki uske kaano ka upari hissa thoda bada tha jo upar ki taraf utha huwa tha, sunahre baal bikhre huwe the,

Anjali: Apni anjali ko is bhayanak andhere se nikaal kar apne sath le jaao Dev, ab is andhere me mujhse ek pal bhi raha nahi jata, mujhe yaha se le jaao Dev, main janti hu ki tum bhi mere bina chain se nahi rah pa rahe hoge, har pal tumhari aankhe mujhe hi khoj rahi hongi, magar Dev main to yaha hu is duniya me jaha dusra koi mujhe nazar nahi aaya aaj tak,

Itna kahne ke baad hi anjali uth kar idhar se udhar apne dono hatho ko hawa me chalate huwe badhne lagi, lekin kuch door jane ke baad hi wah ruk gayi, kyo ki uske dono pair lohe ki janjiro me bandhe the, jisse wah utna hi door tak ja paati jitni badi janjir thi,

Anjali: Sab kuch khatam ho gaya na Dev? Na koi raja raha na hi koi rani rahi, aur na hi hamari wo khubsurat duniya rahi, magar main to hu na Dev, tumhari aas me zinda hu abhi, shadiyo se na kuch khaya hai na piya hai fir bhi zinda hu ab tak, sirf tumhare liye dev.....ab aa jaao aur apni is dasi ko yaha se le jaao,

Anjali byakul ho kar idhar udhar jati aur janjiro ke khichaav se gir jati, aur fir uski siskiya vatavaran me goonjne lagti,

"Main aauga anjali....main jaroor aauga aur tumhe us bhayanak andhere se nikaal kar le bhi aauga, mera intzaar karo priye, main aa raha hu......main aa raha hu anjali.....main aa raha hu tumhare paas, aaaaaahhhhhhh"

Ek ladka chehre par dher sara pani padte hi hadbada kar bistar se uth baitha, usne chaaro taraf dekha...uske charo taraf do ladkiya aankhe aur muh faade khadi use dekhe ja rahi thi,

Ladka: Ye need se uthane ka kaun sa tareeka hai???"
Ladki(1): Ye sabse best tareeka hai need se uthane ka samjha na, aur ye bata ki abhi kya badbada raha tha need me.??

Ladka: M Main kaha badbada raha tha Didi.? Aur aapne mujhe itni thand me itna thanda pani daal kar meri jaan hi nikaal li,

Ladki(2): Bhai jhooth na boliye, ham dono kab se aapke room khadi ye sab dekh sun rahi thi, aap need me bade josh ke sath bole ja rahe the....Main aa raha hu anjali....mera intzaar karna...main aa raha hu, ab aap bataiye ye Anjali kaun hai.??

Ladka us ladki ki baat sun kar buri tarah ucchal pada, bola kuchh na bas murkho ki tarah dekhta raha use,

Ladki(2): Dekha aapne Soniya di, aaj chori pakdi gayi na, aur bhai ab kya bolenge bhala,

Ladki(1): Vicky...sach sach bataao ki kaun hai ye anjali naam ki ladki.? Kyo ki jaha tak mujhe pata hai to is naam ki koi bhi ladki tere collage me nahi hai, fir kaun hai ye???

Vicky: Di agar main kuch batauga to aap manogi nahi...fir kuch bolne ka kya fayda, is liye jane dijiye mujhe bahut thand laagrahi hai, Ye Rani ki bachchi ab ja jaldi se garam pani laa,

Soniya(Uchi awaaz me): Maine jo poochha hai pahle uska jawaab do samjhe,
Vicky: Di kya jawaab du, jabki main janta hu aapko meri baat manna hi nahi hai to,

Soniya: Tu bata to pahle, fir main dekhti hu ki kya manna hai mujhe aur kya nahi,

Rani: Mujhe to lagta hai di koi collage ke baahar wali ladki hai ye anjali,
Soniya: Ab tu batata hai ya main fir se tere upar thanda pani daalu???

Vicky(Hadbada kar): Nahi di plzzzz...vaise bhi meri pahle se hi jaan ja rahi hai jab aapne pani daal kar meri need ka satyanaas kiya tha to,

Soniya: Maine nahi Rani ne pani dala tha tere upar,
Vickya: Kyaaaaaa....Ab to main ise chhoduga nahi, aaj ise bataauga ki Vikrant(Vicky) Se panga lene ka kya anjaam hota hai, tu ruk beta abhi batata hu tujhe,

Rani(Chillate huwe): Di bachaaiye mujhe...

Rani daud kar soniya ke pichhe chhup gayi jab ki vicky use pakadne ke liye bistar se chhalaang laga diya tha,

Soniya: Vicky ruk ja nahi to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga,
Vikrant(Vicky): (Aapse bura to vaise bhi koi nahi hai) Man me usne kaha,

Soniya: Kya bola tune..???
Vikrant(Chaunkte huye): Main kya bola di, maine to kuch kaha hi nahi,

Soniya: Kahne ka sochna bhi mat, ab chal shuru ho ja, i mean ki bata ye anjali kaun hai.??

Vikrant: Sach to ye hai di ki main kisi anjali vanjali ko nahi janta,

Soniya&Rani: KYAAAAA....????

Vikrant: Haan di yahi sach hai,
Rani: Fir aap need me ye sab kyo badbada rahe the.??

Vikrant: Main khud nahi janta, aur khud pareshan bhi hu isse,
Soniya: Kya matlab, tu kahna kya chahta hai.??

Vikrant: Ye ek sapna hai di, jo mujhe hapte me 4 din jarur aata hai, aur ye ab se nahi hai balki abhi pichhle ek saal se shuru huwa hai, jab picchle saal mera janmdin tha, usi raat se ye sapna aana shuru huwa tha jo ab tak wahi ek sapna aa raha hai,

Rani: Aap inki baat par bilkul bhi bharosha na karna di, ye ek dam jhooth bol rahe hain, aisa bhi kahi hota hai ki kisi ko ek hi sapna baar baar aye???

Vikrant: Magar ye sach hai soniya di, aur ye baat main aapki aur is rani ki kasam kha kar kahta hu, aap dono janti hain ki main kisi bhi kimat par aap dono me se kisi ki bhi kasam kha kar koi jhooth nahi bol sakta,

Vikrant ki baat sun kar soniya aur rani chup rah gayi, dono ke muh bhaad ki tarah khul gaye the, Avishwaas se un dono ki aankhe fati padi thi,

Vikrant: O hello, ab aap dono ko kya huwa.?? Mujhe aise na dekho jaise ki mere sir me delhi ka kutubminaar aa kar khada ho gaya ho,

Soniya: Kya ye sach hai vicky?? Par tune pahle kabhi ye baat hame kyo nahi bataai??

Vikrant: Mujhe laga ye sab ek sapna hi to hai, isme jyada kya sochna?? Is liye aap logo se nahi bataya,

Soniya: Ye ek sapna maatr nahi ho sakta hai vicky, kyo ki ek hi sapna aam taur par baar baar nahi aata, magar ye to sapna to tujhe pichhle ek saal se hapte me chaar din jarur aata hai, iska kuch to matlab jarur hai vicky,

Rani: Di aap bhi aaj ke samay me in sab baato par yakin karti hain kya?? Sapne ka aana ek normal baat hai, isme jyada kya sochna bhala.??

Soniya: Tu apna gyan apne paas hi rakh samjhi, Okk ham is bare me fir baad me baat karege, vicky tu ja fresh ho ja fir jaldi se neeche aa jana, breakfast ke baad collage bhi jana hai na tujhe,

Vikrant: Yes di, aap chalo main 10 mint me aata hu,

Iske baad soniya aur rani kamre se nikal kar baahar chali gayi, jabki Vikrant bathroom me ghus gaya,

.....

Idhar soniya aur rani neeche jab pahuchi to dining table par unke mom dad baithe the,

Chaliye aap sabko in sabka interroduction de deta hu,

=> ANAND SHRIVASTAV......COMISSIONER OF POLICE,(DAD)(48 YRS)
=> URMILA SHRIVASTAV.....HOUSEWIFE, (MOM)(42 YRS)

=> SONIYA SHRIVASTAV.....FIRST DAUGHTER OF ANAND&URMILA (22YRS)
=> VIKRANT SHRIVASTAV....SON OF ANAND&URMILA (20 YRS)
=> RANI SHRIVASTAV.....2ND DAUGHTER OF ANAND&URMILA (18YRS)

Ye to inki family ka interroduction...Baki aur bhi character's hain jinka parichay aage milta rahega,


Story ki shuruaat kaisi lagi aap sabko ye jaroor batana bhai log.....
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बहुत ही खूबसूरत तरीके से शुरुआत हुई है भाई,,,, कवर फोटो बहुत संदर है,
कहानी का नाम भी सबसे अलग लगा,
उम्मींद करता हूॅ कि आपकी ये कहानी आगे चलकर और भी खूबसूरत होगी।

एक नई कहानी की शुरुआत के लिए ढेर सारी शुभकामनाएं,,,,,
 
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