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Fantasy "DEVANJALI" (Dard Ki Tasvir)

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** 15 **

Ab Tak......

Soniya di ke mukh se mera naam vicky sun kar maya chaunki, to maine use bataya ki is janam me mera naam Vikrant hai...Vikrant Shrivastav, is liye ab se wo bhi mujhe sabke samne Vikrant ya vicky hi kahegi, yahi aabt maine un chaaro aadmiyo ko bhi samjha diya, maine maya ko ye bhi samjha diya ki wo yaha ki bhasha, pahnava, aur rahan sahan samajh le..taaki baad me koi dikkat na ho jaye jisse hamari poll khul jaye,

Maya ne apni haskti ke prabhaav se yaha ki sari bhashaaye...rahan sahan aur kapdo ka pahnava sab kuch seekh liya, iske baad usne apna huliya bhi rani aur soniya di ki hi tarah badal liya, ab wah dharti ki aam ladki ki hi tarah lag rahi thi, bala ki khubsurat to wo thi hi lekin aam insaano se jyada usme tez abhi bhi dikh raha tha, is liye maine use apna tez thoda uar kam kar lene ke liye kah diya,

Iske baad maine idhar udhar dekha ki koi hai to nahi...jab dekha ki koi nahi hai to apni shakti se ek car prakat ki...ye dekh rani aur soniya di meri taraf hairat se dekhne lagi, khair ek car me wo chaaro baith gaye...unme se ek se car chalana aata tha, idhar main rani soniya di aur maya meri car me baithe aur uske baad maine car ko aage badha diya...mere piche piche wo car bhi chal di jisme wo chaaro aadmi baithe the,

Ab Aage.....

Ghar pahuchte pahuchte shaam ke aath baj gaye the...jaisa ki ham jante the mom dad hamare liye kafi pareshan ho chuke the, ham logo ke sath paanch log ajnabi the jo ab hamare hi sath rahne wale the is liye hamne pahle hi soch liya tha ki un sabke bare me mom dad se kya kahna hai,

Jab ham sab log ghar me enter huye to mom dad dring room me hi pareshaani ki haalat me baithe the, ham teeno bahan bhaaiyo ko sahi salamat dekh kar mom dad ke chehre par raahat aur santusti ke bhaav ubhre lekin ham logo ke sath baaki paanch aur logo ko dekh wo na samajhne wale andaaj me dekhne lage meri taraf,

Main- Dad ye log hame SNEEPHELL me mile hain, ye paancho bechare gareeb hain...waha kuch asamajik logo ne inka ghar baar sab loot kar jala diya tha, ye chaaro bhai aur ye inki bahan hamse kaam maag rahe the...kah rahe the jaisa bhi kaam hoga ham kar karege...bas hame do wakt ki roti aur rahne ka mil jaye bas,

Dad- Wo sab to theek hai bete..lekin tumhe to pata hai ki ye sarkari awaas hai jo hame mila huwa hai..is liye ye log yaha kaise rahenge?? Ek kaam karo...hamne pichhle saal jo naya makaan isi shahar me banwaya tha wahi in sab ko rahne ka intjaam kar do,

Mom- Ye aapne sahi kaha...us makaan me ye log achhe se rah bhi lenge aur makaan ki rakhwali bhi kar lenge,

Main mom dad ki in baato se soch me pad gaya, chaaro aadmiyo ka to theek tha..lekin maya in logo ke sath kaise rahegi?? Wo to mere paas yahi rahna chahti hai,

Soniya di- Mom ye maya hai ye bechari collage me padh rahi thi ab iski padhaayi bhi chhoot gayi, iske chaaro bhai bechare badi mushkil se ise padha rahe the...ab iski padhaayi bhi chhoot gayi,

Dad- Ohh chalo koi baat nahi ham iska daakhila tumhare hi collage me karwa denge...uski tention mat lo, ham baat kar lenge principal se,

Soniya di- Ohh thanku dad...
Dad- Isme thanku jaisi koi baat nahi hai beti...ye ladki agar padhna chahti hai to iski padhaayi par kisi bhi tarah ki rukawat nahi honi chahiye,

Mom- Abhi to lagbhag raat hi ho gayi hai is liye in logo ko aaj raat yahi par khane aur sone ka intjaam kar dete hain..kal inko hamre us naye makaan me shift karwa dena,

Un chaaro aadmiyo ne mere mom dad ka bahut bahut dhanyawaad kiya iske liye..uske baad maine un logo ko guest room me rahne ka intjaam kar diya, mom ne soniya di ko kaha ki wo maya ko apne sath hi aaj raat sula legi, iske baad kuch khaas nahi huwa, sabne fresh ho kar raat ka khana khaya aur sab so gaye, ham sab thake huye the, is liye bistar me jate hi need aa gayi,

Subah meri neend bramh muhoort me hi khul gayi, is liye main nitya karm se farig ho kar wahi kamre ke fars par chataayi daal kar dhyaan lagane ke liye baith gaya, aaj mujhe dhyaan lagane me koi pareshani nahi huyi, iski vajah shayad ye thi ki ab mujhe meri shaktiya mil gayi thi, bhale hi sari shaktiya nahi mili thi lekin jo bhi mili thi unse main bahut kuch badal chuka tha,

Lagbhag do ghante main dhyaan me baitha raha....dhyaan me mujhe koi cheej dikh rahi thi, wo cheej kabhi tez se roshni se chamak uthti to kabhi gayab ho jati, mujhe samajh na aaya ki ye kya hai. Kuch der baad dhyaan me eka ek hi manjar badal gaya...aur is baar jo kuch mujhe dikha usne mujhe hila kar rakh diya....

Lohe ki moti moti janjeero me jakdi anjali ke saamne yakumba khada tha, uske chehre par gusse ke bhaav the...kab ki use is tarah gusse me dekh anjali muskuraye jaa rahi thi, uska shareer bilkul nistez ho gaya tha, aisa lagta tha jaise ab uski saanse kabhi bhi toot sakti thi, bahut kamjor nazar aa rahi thi wah, khubsurat chehra aisa lagne laga tha jaise wah ab buddhi ho gayi ho, aankhe andar ki taraf dhans gayi thi...jaise shadiyo ki bimaar ho wah, use is haalat me dekh kar mere andar ajeeb si byakulta aur bechaini hone lagi...mujhe aisa lagne laga jaise mere seene me kitna tez dard hone laga ho....

Udhar anjali ko is tarah muskurate dekh yakumba aur bhi buri tarah gusse me paagal nazar aane laga tha,...

Yakumba- Agar tu ye samajhti hai ki tera dev aayega aur tujhe yaha se chhuda kar le jayega to tu galat samajh rahi hai, is sab ki aas chhod de tu, maine us janm me bhi use maut di thi aur is janm me bhi use maut hi doonga, magar usse pahle main usse us talwaar ko haasil karuga jiske bal par wah kisi se bhi haar nahi sakta....

Anjali- Tu us talwaar ko kabhi haasil nahi kar sakta yakumba..wo talwaar tujhse sambhaali bhi nahi jayegi...use to wahi sambhaal sakta hai jiska dil saaf ho...jisne paap na kiya ho, tu to paapi hai...maha paapi, tu us talwaar ko kisi bhi keemat par haasil nahi kar sakta,

Yakumba- Main use jarur haasil karuga ladki...main ye sachchaayi janta hu ki wo talwaar bhi ichchhadhaari hai, wo apna roop badal sakti hai, main ye bhi janta hu us talwaar ka naam noori hai..aur wo tumhari tarah hi dev ki bhi premika hai, is liye ab wo talwaar khud hi mere paas aayegi...kyo ki tujhe maarne ke baad main ab dev ko kaid karuga...aur fir us noori se sauda karuga ki agar dev ki jaan ki salamati chaahti hai to meri daasta sweekaar kar,

Anjali- Maine tere jaisa moorkh nahi dekha yakumba...khud hi sari baate soch leta hai aur usi ko hi sach maan leta hai...ye bhi sochta hai ki jaisa tu chahega waisa hi sab kuch hoga, mere dev ko tune chhal se mara tha...agar mard ka bachcha hota to aamne saamne yuddh karta tu, lekin har baar itihaas khud ko nahi dohrayega...is baar tu aur teri ye kaali duniya sab kuch khatam hoga,

Yakumba- Jhoothi ummeed me baithi rah tu...meri kaali shaktiyo ne teri saari shaktiyo ko nigal liya hai, tu ab jyada dino ki mehmaan nahi hai...ab main tujhse ye nahi kahuga ki tu mujhe wo talwaar degi..balki aaj ye batane aaya tha ki ab tere dev ko bhi bahut jald tere paas hi laa kar inho janjiro me jakad doonga,

Anjali- Kosis kar le yakumba.. chahe jitni shaktiya arjit kar le tu magar tu kuch nagi kar payega mere dev ka....

Yakumba ye sun kar aag babula ho gaya....jane kab se wah use apne andhere me kaid kar rakha tha lekin aaj tak anjali ne use talwaar haasil karwane me uski koi madad nahi ki thi...yakumba ke sabra ka baandh toot gaya tha ab,

Yakumba- Ab tu mere kisi kaam ki nahi hai ladki...tune mera bagut wakt barbaad kiya hai...lekin ab aur nahi, ab main apne tarike se khud us talwaar ko haasil karuga, is liye ab tujhe marna hoga, tu dev ka praan hai na...to jaa ab main dev ke praan ko chheen raha hu tujhse,

Anjali- Kosis kar ke dekh le....

Yakumba ki aankhe krodh se laal surkh ho gayi, usne apni aanlhe band ki aur dono hatho ko chehre ke saamne ghumaya aur ek jhatke se anjali ki taraf kar diya, aisa karte hi uske hath se ek tez roshni nikli aur seedha anjali ke jism se takraayi...

Anjali tadap kar rah gayi...waha sare watavaran me uski dard me doobi cheekhe goojne lagi thi...

Dev ne jhat se apni apni aankhe khol di....uski saanse dhaunkni ki tarah chalne lagi thi, chehra paseena paseena ho gaya tha, aankho me ek aag si nazar aane lagi thi,

Maine man me socha anjali ki jaan ko khatra hai...mujhe turant hi kuchh karna hoga, ye soch kar main jald utha aur fresh hone ke liye fir se bathroom me ghus gaya,

Main fresh ho kar jab neeche aane laga to kamre ke darwaje par hi maya khadi dikhi mujhe...shayad wo bhi mujhse milne hi aa rahi thi, maine idhar udhar dekha aur usse puchha ki kya baat hai tum yaha?? To usne kaha ki ab to mujhe dusre wale makaan me rahna padega..jabki uski ichcha thi ki wo yahi rahe, lekin isme main kya kar sakta tha, sirf uske liye main mom dad se ye nahi kah sakta tha ki maya ko yahi rahne dijiye..kyo ki hamne use un chaaro ki bahan bataya huwa tha, is liye jaha uske bhai rahenge wahi uski is bahan ko bhi rahna padega,

Khair maine usse kaha ki ham collage me to roz milenge hi...aur agar milna jyada hi jaruri hoga to shaktiyo ka prayog kar ek dusre ke paas pahuch sakte hain, maine use bataya ki mujhe anjali ko yakumba ki kaid se chhudane ke liye jald hi jana hoga kyo ki uski jaan ko khatra hai,

Maya- Main bhi aapke sath chalugi dev, pata nahi waha kaise halaat paida ho jaye,
Main- Nahi yaar main samhaal looga,

Abhi ham dono baat hi kar rahe the ki soniya di bhi aa gayi..di ne ham dono ko dekha to chaunki,

Soniya di- Vicky mujhe tujhse jaruri baat karna hai akele me,
Main- Okk di....

Maine maya ko jane ka ishara kiya uske baad main aur di mere kamre me aa gaye, di ne kamre ka darwaja band kar diya,

Main- Kahiye di aapko kya jaruri baate karni thi mujhse???
Soniya di- Ab sari baate bata mujhe waha kya huwa tha?? Kyo ki main aur rani dono to behosh the...is liye ham dono hi nahi jante ki waha par kya kya huwa...tu ham dono ko kaise waha se le kar aaya tha,

Maine socha di se kuch bhi chhupane ka koi matlab hi nahi hai...is liye maine unhe sab kuch bata diya ki kaise ukne gayab hone baad maya dragon ke roop me mujhe mili...wahi mujhe le kar us jagah gayi thi...mujhe meri shaktiya bhi mili.. waha par hi mere baaju se nikal kar talwaar mili jo insaani roop dhar sakti hai aur wo meri hi shakti ka ek hissa hai...

Maine di ko ye bhi bataya ki Dev ke roop me pahle se hi meri paanch premikaaye thi...sabse pahle Anjali, Noori(Talwaar), Maya(Dragon) baaki do aur hain....

Meri ye sab baate sun kar di chakit rah gayi...muh faade mujhe dekhe ja rahi thi, fir eka ek hi unke chehre par aise bhaav aa kar jald hi lupt ho gaye jaise unhe kisi baat se takleef huyi ho,

Soniya di- Ye bahut hi achha huwa na vicky...teri to paanch paanch premikaaye pahle se hain, shayad yahi vajah thi ki tune anjane me bhi kabhi kisi ladki ko us nazar se nahi dekha tha,

Main- Bilkul di aap aisa kah sakti hain, ab kyo ki mujhe bahut had tak mere pichhle janm ki baate yaad aa gayi hain is liye mera dil o dimaag ab pahle jaisa nahi raha...mere dil me usi tarah meri un paancho premikaao ke liye bepanaah mohabbat jaag gayi hai jaise ki mere pichhle janm me unse thi, shadiyo se hi meri aatma anjali se judi huyi hai, main uske bina kuch nahi hu, mere dil me uske liye tadap jaag chuki hai di, wo us dust yakumba ki duniya me kaid hai...uski jaan ko khatra aih...mujhe use bachana hoga di, kyo ki agar use kuch ho gaya to fir dare bramhaand ko main khud aag laga dooga,

Soniya di- Tu sach kah raha aih vicky, is wakt anjali ko bachana bahut jaruri iha tere liye, lekin tu ye karega kaise??

Main- Aapko meri help karni padegi di,
Soniya di- Main kya help kar sakti hu bhala??
Main- Aapko maya ka daakhila collage me karwa dena hai...dad ne collage me baat kar li hogi..is liye aap ye kaam karwana..jab ki main udhar se hi anjali ke liye nikal jaauga,

Soniya di- Kya tujhe pata hai ki us daanav ne anjali ko kis jagah kaid kar rakha hai??
Main- Haan di...ab mujhe sab pata hai...aap fikar mat kijiye main jald hi unhe le kar vaapas aa jaauga,

Soniya di- Matlab tujhe apne pichhle janm ka sab kuch yaad aa gaya hai??
Main- Bahut had tak...baki jo bacha hai wo anjali ke milte hi pura ho jayega, kyo ki wo meri sab kuch hai..

Soniya di- Theek hai...samhal kar jana vicky, aur haan jab tu anjali ko vaapas le kar aayega tab tu mujhe apne pichhle janm ke bare me sab kuch detail me batayega,

Main- Theek hai di.....maine itna kaha to di ne mujhe apne gale se laga liya...itna hi nahi mujhe zor se bheench bhi liya, mujhe unka ye pyaar dekh kar bahut achha laga, kuch der baad ham dono alag huye.

Maine dekha soniya di ki aankho me aanshu the jinko unhone turant hi mujhse chhupa liya aur kamre se baahar nikal gayi, mujhe samajh na aaya ki di ki aankho me aanshu kis liye the...shayad unhe meri fikar kuch jyada hi hai,

Uske baad ham sabne naasta kiya....naasta karte wakt hi dad ne bataya ki unhone collage me baat kar li hai, is liye maya ko uske documents ke sath le ja kar waha par daakhila karwa dena, un chaaro aadmiyo ko bhi naasta diya gaya tha, un logo ne bhi khushi khushi naasta paani kiya,

Dad ne mujhe kaha ki maya ka daakhila karwane ke baad usko uske in chaaro bhaiyo ko hamare us makaan me le jana, maine dad ko yes kaha...aur ham sab nikal gaye collage ke liye, rani apne school chali gayi thi, mujhe rani ke achanak se khamosh ho jane se man hi man hairaan bhi tha, kyo ki wo har wakt kuch na kuch bolti ih rahti thi, mujhe laga shayad mujhse kisi baat ke liye naraj ho...is liye maine use manane ke liye soch liya tha lekin usse pahle mujhe anjali ke paas jana tha,

Ham sab collage pahuche, maine raaste me maya ko bhi bata diya tha ki mujhe jana hai...is liye wo soniya di ke sath daakhila karwa le, mere paas samay anhi tha, kyo ki mujhe shaam tak vaapas lautna bhi jaruri tha,

Main un chaaro aadmiyo ko le kar apne naye makaan me le aaya...unko sab kuch samjha bujha kar maine car ko shahar se baahar jane wale raaste ki taraf dauda diya,

Tabhi mere man me kisi ki awaaj aayi...
 
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