Fantasy "DEVANJALI" (Dard Ki Tasvir)

[anshuljain]

Superb update Bro

 

[VIKRANT]

Bhai comment mat dekho
Views dekho 45000 se jyada h
Foram pe adhikter reader comment nhi karte....

Bhai views ka main kya achaar daaluga, readers ke comments se hi dil ko tasalli milti hai, unke comments se hi pata chalta hai ki story kaisi likhi ja rahi hai,

Ye sabhi forum ki sabse badi gandi baat hai ki log stories ko padh to lete hain lekin us par koi comments nahi karte, aise me hi writer ka mood kharaab hota hai aur wo story ke update dene me late lapaat karta hai

 

[sonukale]

Lajawab super fantastic story
Keep posting
Keep rocking
Waiting for next update

 

[VIKRANT]

I agreed

Meri story pe bhi Ye hi Hal hain bahin

Story bahut achchi hain apki isliye comment may Dekho update do view hain jyada matlab reader hain comments bhi aa jayege

Har jagah yahi haal hai bro...but kya aapko nahi lagta ki aisa nahi karna chahiye readers ko??? :biggboss:

Views ko dekh kar tasalli nahi ho jati bro...readers ke comments aur unki apni apni raay se hame pata chalta hai ki hamne kaisa likha hai...aur aage ab hame kaisa likhna hoga???

 

[Master4uslave]

Har jagah yahi haal hai bro...but kya aapko nahi lagta ki aisa nahi karna chahiye readers ko??? :biggboss:

Views ko dekh kar tasalli nahi ho jati bro...readers ke comments aur unki apni apni raay se hame pata chalta hai ki hamne kaisa likha hai...aur aage ab hame kaisa likhna hoga???

Bhai comments bhi milege abhi views kaam chalao

 

[VIKRANT]

Bhai comments bhi milege abhi views kaam chalao

Wo to karna hi padega bro... kisi ko force to kar nahi sake comments ke liye, :biggboss:

Koi baat nahi...apna kaam to karna hi hai so lage rahenge

 

[Viraj Raj]

Shandar update bhai

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

awesome faadu update
keep posting

 

[Zas23]

Waiting

 

[Raj]

WAH BHAI ANJALI THEEK HO GAYI .
SHUKRACHARYA KO DHOODHANE ME BRIHASPATI DEV BHI ASMARTH HAIN.DEKHATE HAIN AAGE SHUKRACHARYA KYA GUL KHILAATE HAIN.PARI LOK KE MAHARAJ AUR MAHARANI BHI AAJAAD HO GAYE SATH ME RAJGURU BHI.RIDDHI SIDDHI ABHI APNE MA BAAP KE SATH KUCH DIN RAHEGI.
AB YAHA GHAR ME DEV KYA BOLEGA VERY INTERESTING BHAI.BAHUT SHAANDAAR LOVELY AUR KHOOBSOORAT UPDATE THA BHAI