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December ki mahine ki thande si to hme sabhi vakif hai....thande mano aasmane si barash rahi ho...kevale thandi hawao ki awwaz aati hai...... sayen-sayen karti yi sard hawa jaha si bhi gujarti hai ...... use puri mahole ko sunsaane bana deti hai.....mano y awaaz apna samrajya fhela rahi ho.par dine ka shor uski es kosis ko kamyabe nahi honi deta ....uski tamame kosiso ki bade bhi sanatae ko chir kar....uski samrajya ko gira deta hai....lekine y hawae ....haar nahi manti....bhali he y dine ki ujali mai safhale nahi ho saki ...lekine raat ki andhekaar mai.....y kamyaabe hohi jati hai...aur charo tarafe ki vatavern ko sunsaane bana deti hai....har gali...har mahola....viran ho jati hai...charo tarafe sanata chha jata hai....sadki sunsaane ho gati hai.
Aisi hi ek thandi raat jaha na sadak par koi tha aur na hi kisi ghar se roshni aa rahi thi, na koi insan aur na hi janwar raat ki es pahar mai jaag rahi thi... sab is thand ke dar se chipe hue thi aur apne apne niwaas isthan par so rahi thi......par koi tha jo is sard hawa ke sanate si bhari samrajya ko...apni dabi hue awaaj si chir raha tha.....mano vo es samrajya ko chunoti de raha ho.
Chleyi dekheti hai aakhire y kon hai...jo es samrajya ko apne awwaj si chunoti de raha hai....kon hai jo y himakate kar raha hai
Ari y awwaj to ek villa si aa rahi hai.....lekine es awaaj ka shrote kon hai vo nazar nahi aa raha ....chleyi thoda aur aagi bde kar dekhti hai ki aakhir es awaaj ka shrote kon hai
Ari es villa ka naam to Tara Villa hai....lekine abhi bhi hmi es awwaj ka shrote nahi mila...aakhir vo hai kon...chleyi eski leyi thoda aur aagi bde kar dekhti hai
Y awwaz to es kamri si aa rahi hai......chleyi dekhte hai ...ki y kon hai jo apne dabi hue aawaj si sanaate ki es samrajya ko chir raha hai
Ari y to ek ladka hai....jo sukun si so raha hai...lekine soti huvi bhi y badbada raha hai....chleyi sunti hai ki y kya kah rah hai
Ladka- Mujhe chode do.....meni tumhara kya bigada hai....mai to tumhi janta bhi nahi
Lagta hai y sapna dekh raha hai....chlo hme bhi to dekhi aakhire y kya dekh raha hai
Sapne me vah dekhta hi ki andheri raat hai….charo tarf bse santa pasra huva tha ....ki acchanke bhote saari khuti bhokna suru kar deti hai......jenki awwaz uski kaano mai gunj rahi thi..…phir achanak hi andheri raat…ek prakashmaan din me badal jat hai...aur vo ek swimming pool mai hai...aur uski sath uska pura parivaar hota hai....acchanke si prakashmaan din...ek andhire raat mai badal jata hai...aur uski parivaar waali gayaab honi lagti hai....uski parivaar walo ka sharir hawaa mai gayab ho jata hai....aur jis swimming pool mai vo ter raha tha..usmi paani ki jagah khune aagata hai...aur phire aachanke vo khune kesi sharir ka roop le leta hai....aur use ladke si kahta hai...ki "Mai aa gaya meri bhai....abe samye hai tumhari aani ka...jalde aao......mai tumhara intezaar kar raha hu" y kah kar vo sharir gayabe ho jata hai....sharir ki gayabe hoti hi sabe kuch gayabe ho jata hai...na paavo ki tali jamine hoti hai...aur na hi sir par aasmane
es karn vo ek chilata hai....aur uski chilani ki sath hi uski ninde tute jati hai
Ladka(mne mai)- Pata nahi aaj kale y meri saath kya ho raha hai....pichlei ek hafte si mujhe yahi sapna baar baar aa raha hai.....pata nahi kyu....jabsi mai 18 ka huva hu...tabe si y sapna mujhe roj rate ko pareshan karta hai.....lekine kyu...y nahi pata....khire chodo...abe to aadate si ho gae hai...es sapne ki....chlo abe uthe hi gaya hu to...apna assignment pura kar leta hu
Y soch kar vo ladka apne bed si utha aur apna assignment pura karni mai jute gaya
[2 ghanto ki bade]
Ladka- Chlo y to pura huva
Tabhi awaaj aae "Good morning Suryaa...vesi kya pura ho gaya "
Suryaa(Mai- Good morning mom.....kuch khas nahi mera assignment pura ho gaya
Tara(Suryaa's Mom)- Bhote khube beta....lo abe nastha kar lo
Mai- Okay mom.....aap chleyi mai abhi aata hu
Tara- Tke hai beta.....jaldi si aa jao....aur ha Shikha aur Sakshi ko bhi bula lena
Mai- Okay mom....aap chleyi mai abhi unhi bula kar aata hu
Tara- Tke hi beta
Y kah kar Tara room si bhar nikale gae..vahi room ki andar
Mai(angrai lekar)- Chlo ab jaldi si ready ho jata hu....phire nastha bhi to karna hai...aur uski baad school mai y assignment bhi submit karna hai .......bhout kaam hai aaj.....ute suryaa ute esi bethi si kaam nahi chlega
Y kah kar Mai ready honi chla gaya....phire fresh hokar nha dhoo kar mai un dono ki kamri ki aur chle diya
Mai(mne mai)- Pheli keski room ki taraf jaao.....chlo Sakshi didi ki room ki taraf jata hu
Mai(gate knock karti huvi)-Sakshi didi ......oooh ....Sakshi didi.....gate open karna
Sakshi(andar si chilati huvi)- Ha abhi karti hu....bs ek min.
Mai-Tke hai...aaram si aa jaao.....(mne mai)....y sakshi didi bhi na ....ready honi mai bhote time lagati hai
Tabhi Sakshi ni drawaja khola aur boli
Sakshi- Good morning suryaa....(k kah kar meri ki gali lag gae)
Mai-Good morning didi
Sakshi(hse kar)- abe bata aaj subh subh tujhe meri kesi yaade aa gae
Mai(hse kar)- Yaad usi kiya jata hi didi ....jesi hme bhule jati hai....aur aap to meri pyaari didi...hai bhla aap ko mai kesi bhul sakta hu
Sakshi(hse kar)- Baati banana koe tujhesi shekhi
Mai(hse kar)- Vo to hai.....vesi chlo didi abe mom bula rahi hai.....nasthi ki leyi
Sakshi- Chle....pheli use maharani ko bhi bula leti hai.....so rahi hogi....ghodi bech kar
Tabhi ek awwaj aae" Mujhe bhi apani apne jisa samjhe kar rakha hai"
Y awwaj sune kar hmni use disha mai dekha ...to paya ki y awwaj hmari pyari bhen Shikha ka hai
Sakshi(hse kar)- Samjheni si kya hota hai....to hai to nahi na
Shikha(hse kar)- Mai to bhagwaan ka lakh lakh shukrgujaar hu ki mai aapki jesi nahi warna to pata nahi mera kya hota
Mai- My dear didi's ab plzz subh subh suru mate ho jana
Sakshi- Tu kahna kya chahta hai...hme hmesa ladti rah ti hai bole
Shikha- Ha bole...bole na.....bole ta kyu nahi
Mai- Ari mujhe maaf kardo meri pyaari sisters ....meri kahna ki mtlb hai ki aap dono apna prem ek dusri ko bade mai jata dena...abhi hmi nastha karni jana hai...samjhie....so chle
Sakshi aur Shikha ek sath - hme acchi si janti hai tera mtlb...samjha....tke hai abe chle kya pura dine yahi khadi rahna hai
Y kah kar dono nichi dinning table ki aur chle di....aur mai unki piche piche chle diya
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Shukriya aryan malhotra
Saath Bane Rhe aur Shayog karti rahi
Aaapki comment ki leyi aapka shukriya
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Yaaro first update post kar diya hai
Es update si aapki keval do shikayti ho sakti hi
1. Update ki size
2. Starting thodi slow hai
To dono ka reason y hi ki
Y kahani ki starting hai...to kahani ki starting ko connect karti huvi ek laye
Mai lekhine ki karn time jayada lag gaya aur eski karn thoda chota hai
Second .ka reason y hai ki
Starting ko slow rakhni si ek bhumika banani mai aasani hogi
Jes si kahnai thodi aur intresting bnegi
And last me mai apne sabhi yaaro si kahna chahuga
Ki aap sabhi chinta na kari...es kahani si aapkie jo bhi expection hi vo jarur puri hogi
Aakhire mai sabhi dosto ka shukriya
Update de diya hai comment kar ki batana ki kesa hai
Apaka Doste
Suryaa
Es update si aapki keval do shikayti ho sakti hi
1. Update ki size
2. Starting thodi slow hai
To dono ka reason y hi ki
Y kahani ki starting hai...to kahani ki starting ko connect karti huvi ek laye
Mai lekhine ki karn time jayada lag gaya aur eski karn thoda chota hai
Second .ka reason y hai ki
Starting ko slow rakhni si ek bhumika banani mai aasani hogi
Jes si kahnai thodi aur intresting bnegi
And last me mai apne sabhi yaaro si kahna chahuga
Ki aap sabhi chinta na kari...es kahani si aapkie jo bhi expection hi vo jarur puri hogi
Aakhire mai sabhi dosto ka shukriya
Update de diya hai comment kar ki batana ki kesa hai
Apaka Doste
Suryaa
Pta nhi
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Shukriya mass8787
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