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Aik admi aik bachy ko lay k bhag raha tha us k pichy kuch gundy lagy hovy thy bhagty bhagty wo aik ghar mai ghus k chup gaya gundy us ko dondh rahy thy per wo mill nhi raha tha usy smjh nhi aa rahi thi k wo kia kry akhir us ny aik faisla kia k wo bachy ko wahin chor dy ga jis sy us bachy ki jan bach jay gi wo admi usi bachy ko un gundon sy bacha raha tha bachy ko ghar ki boundry k andr chor k wo bahir nikal aya or bhagny laga



Jaisy hi un gundon ki nazar us admi per pari to wo bhi us k pichy bhagy kuch dur jany k bad unhon ny usy pakr lia



G1.bol kaha chupaya usy



Admi.tum kuch bhi kr lo main kuch nhi btaon ga



G2.bol kaha hy wo bacha wrna yahin kat k phaink don ga



Admi.mar do per main choty malik ka pata nhi btaon ga khud hi tlash kr skty ho to kr lo per mery elaw koi nhi janta k wo kahan hain



G2.esy boss k pass ly chlty hain wohi btayn gy es ka kia krna hy



G1.thek hy ly chalo esy or us bachy ko talash kro agr wo na mila to boss ham ko chory ga nhi



Us k bad wo log us admi ko ly k chaly gay udher wo bacha rat bhar usi ghar mai so raha tha per tha to wo bacha kab tak aisy rehta bhok lagny sy wo rony laga wahin sy aik sharabi guzar raha tha jis ny bachy k rony ki awaz suni to usi taraf chal para jab us ny us bachy to dakha to usi mai kho gaya wo bacha itna pyara tha koi bhi usy dakh k usi mai kho jay us ki light blue eyes ki waja sy or bhi pyara lagta tha usy ny us bachy ko uthaya or waha sy chala gaya



Wahin dur kisi gaon mai aik robdar admi jo kafi aged tha apni havali mai besabri sy ghom raha tha kisi k intzar mai thori dair bad waha aik admi aya



Admi1.kia khabr hy



Admi2. Unhon ny sab ko mar dia hy malik sirf rashid hi bacha hy



Admi1.rashid kaha hy es wakt



Admi2.malik wo un k hath lag gaya hy



Admi 1.agr usy aik khroch bhi ai to aag laga don ga dunya ko



Admi 1 ki aisi awaz sun k admi 2 ki phat gai



Admi 2.g g g malik wo rashid ny choty malik ko kahin chupa dia tha un k hath lagny sy pehly



Admi 1.mujhy mera pota chahiye kuch bhi kro



Admi 2.g malik main khud pata krta hon malik aik bat pochon agr naraz na hon to



Admi1.han pocho



Admi2.un mai khas bat kia hy mujhy lagta to hy k wo alag hain per aisi kia khas bat hy choty malik mai



Admi1.us ki khas bat ya hy k wo shairon (lions) sy nhi dary ga na hi wo usy kuch kahyn gy or ya sab main bad mai btaon ga k aisa Q hy ab jao or pata kro



Last bat unhon ny boht gusy mai kahi Wo waha sy itni jaldi nikla k agr aik sec bhi wo yahan ruka to usy yahin goli mar di jay gi



Uhder wo sharabi bachy ko ly jata hy per kuch din bad hi usy pata chlta hy k bachon ko palna kitna mushkil hy us ki khud ki shrab k paisy pury nhi ho paty thy bachy k lia doodh (milk) kahan sy lay bachy sy chutkara pany k lia wo aik sikander nam k gundy ko bach deta hy


Sikander bachy ko palny laga per apny tareky sy wo bachy ko bhi gunda hi banna chata tha apna kaam barhany k lia or apny dushman sy badla leny k lia us ny socha agr bachy ko shuru sy hi hard training di jay to ya aik acha hatyar ban sakta hy es lia us ny yahi krna behtr laga wakt guzrty pata hi na chala bacha 5 saal ka ho gaya 5 saal ki umer mai hi us ki training start kr di gai us gundy ny us ka naam kashif rakha jo us k apny bety ka naam tha jo us k dushman k haton mara gaya tha



Per kashif wo nhi tha jaisy sikander ny socha tha kashif ko study ka shouk tha per sikander k samny wo bol nhi pata tha 1 saal us ki training chalti rahi 1 saal mai kashif ny himat kr k sikander ko apni study ki bat kr hi di per us ny mana kr dia or usy tyar krny laga mazed 1 saal guzr gaya kashif ki training ko en 2 salon mai kashif ny boht kuch sekh lia tha apni training mai ab wo sikander sy bhi nhi darta tha aik din kashif ny bghawat kr di apni study k lia us ny soch lia tha kuch bhi ho jay wo ab yahan nhi rahy ga aik din wo apny gundon sy bat kr raha tha jo kashif ny sun li



Sikander.aj usy khtam krna ho ga



G1.per boss ap ny jo us per itni mehnat ki hy us ka kia ho ga

Sikander.mujhy pata hy per ab wo nhi suny ga wo parhna chata hy



G2.per boss kia fark pary ga agr wo parh likh jay to




sikamder.agr wo parh likh gaya to usy achy or bury ka fark pata chal jay ga us k bad wo wesy bhi hmary kisi kaam ka nhi



G3.phr usy mar k ham ko kia mily ga



sikander.us ko jo ham ny sikhaya hy us ka agr ham ko koi faida nhi mila to us ko bhi nhi jeeny don ga aj sham ko usy ghumany ly jao or khtam kr do usy or han us ki lash ko jungle mai phank dena kisi ko pata na chlay



Kashif tha to bacha per itna to usy bhi pata tha k us ki jan ko khtra hy 2 saal ki traning mai us ny boht kuch sekha tha



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Mak

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Nice start. Let's see what's gonna happen to Kashif in next update.

Keep writing bhai.
 
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Update 2


2 saal mai us ko fighting or self defence or bhi boht kuch sekha tha or us ki body bhi thori strong ho gai thi normal bachon sy wo alag hi dikhny laga tha dakhny sy saaf pata chlta tha k es bachy mai kuch khas hy



Usi sham ko 2 gundy kashif ko ly k gay unhon ny socha k bacha hi to hi 2 hi boht hain per un ko ya pata nhi tha k 2 saal k hard wokr ny usy en sab ka bap bana dia hy



Jab wo jungle k pass sy guzrny lagy to unhon ny gari rok di peshab k bhany sy kashif ko bhi smjh aa gai k ab kia hona hy us ny moka dakhty hovy un dono ko aik aik kick mari or bhag nikla jab tak un dono ko smjh aati k kia hova tab tak kashif jungle k andr jaa chuka tha



Wo dono bhi us k pichy bhagy thori duri per jab kashif un ko nazar aya to unhon ny apni apni gun nikal k firing krni start kr di aik goli us k bazo ko chu k nikal gai tha to bacha mazbot to tha per itna bhi nhi tha wo smbhal nhi paya or gir k behosh ho gaya achnak girny sy un dono ko laga k goli lagny sy us ki mout ho gai hy esi lia wo wahin sy usy mara hova smjh k wapis chly gay



4 ghnty bad jab kashif ko hosh aya to wo jungle k andr chlny laga usy pata nhi tha k wo kahan ja raha hy per wo chlny laga 10 mint chlny k bad usy samny sy shair aata dikha jisy dakh k usy boht dar lagny laga per jaisy khud hi us k dil sy dar nikal gaya usy laga jaisy wo usy kuch nhi kahy ga kashif wahin khara ho gaya phr bhi dil mai thora khof to tha shair ny bhi usy dakh lia tha wo kashif ki tarf barhny laga jab us ny dhiyan sy dakha to wo shair thora langra k chal raha tha kashif bhi himat kr k is ki taraf chal para kareb ja k us ny dakha to is shair ka aik paon zakhmi tha or us sy khon nikal raha tha



Kashif ko kuch smjh nhi aa raha tha k wo kia kry usy apna dard bhol gaya tha us ny himat ki or apni shirt utar k phar di or us ki pati bana k thora darty hovy shair k kareb hova or us k paon per wo pati bandh di aik or pati bana k us ny apny bazi per bhi bandh di jahan usy goli lagi thi thori dair dono bethy rahy phr himat kr k kashif bola khud sy



Kashif.yar mujhy yahan sy niklna ho ga per jaon kahan kuch smjh nhi aa rahi


Us ki bat sun k shair ny dahaar mari jaisy us ko kisi bat ka jawab dy raha ho ya us ki bat smjh aa gai ho


Kashif.kia hova tum mujhy bahir ly ja sakty ho (phr khud sy) main bhi kis sy poch raha hon tujhy meri bat kahan smjh aa rahi ho gi


Shir ny phr dahar mari jis sy kashif ko laga jaisy ya meri bat sun raha hy



Kashif.kia tum meri bat smjh rahy ho


Shairny han mai garden hila di kashif ko ya dakh k boht kushi bhi hovi or herat bhi k aik janwar kesy us ki bat smjh raha hy


Kashif.mujhy yahan sy bahir ly chalo


Shair ny na mai garden hila di


Kashif.Q


Shair.na


Kashif.main na jaon yahan sy


S.nhi


Kashif.mujhy jana ho ga main yahan nhi reh sakta



S.nhi


Kashif.mainy tumhri help ki es lia tum mujhy nhi jany dy rahy


S.han


Kashif.main manta hon mainy tumhri madad ki hy or mujhy herat bhi hy k tum mujhy kuch nhi keh rahy or meri bat bhi smjh rahy ho per main yahan nhi reh sakta


S.nhi


Kashif.sach kahon to ham insano sy achy to tum janwer ho or pata nhi mujhy lag raha hy jaisy tum mery dost ho mujh sy dosti kro gy



S.han


Kashif.thek hy to main tum ko koi naam deta don jis sy main tum ko bula sakon


Kuch dair sochny k bad usy aik naam acha laga LEO

Kashif.LEO naam kesa hy acha laga


S.han


Kashif.thek hy Leo ab mujhy yaha sy bahir ly jao main tum sy milny aata rahon ga ab tum hi to ho mery dost



Jaisy kesy wo wahan sy Leo ki madad sy bahir nikla kareb ki city tak padal aya or bus stop per chala gaya wahan usy aik aadmi mila



Admi.beta ap kon ho ap k mom dad kahan hain


Kashif.uncle mera koi nhi hy mujhy **** city jana hy per mery pas paisy nhi hain



Admi.Q wahan Q jana hy


Kashif.uncle mujhy kuch gundon ny kidnap krny ki koshish ki per main waha sy bhag gaya yahan mujhy dar lagta hy es lia


Admi.chalo police station report likhwaty hain


Kashif.uncle police kia kry gi mujhy to pata nhi k kon mujhy kidnap krna chata hy agr police bhi un k sath mili hovi to


Admi.batyn to smjhdaron wali krty ho age kia hy


Kashif.7 saal


Admi.lag to aisy rahy ho jaisy 18 saal k ho


Kashif.koi bat nhi uncle main kuch na kuch kr k yahan sy nikal hi jaon ga



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Kalyansurya

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Congratulations for new story Bhai story bhut he khubsurat hai please story continue rakhna yaha phele se bhut se story aduri hai
Aap aisa na karna
Mamta hu roj update dena thoda muskil hai but 2roj se ek big update de denge to accha hai
All the verry best bro
 

The rock

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Congratulations for new story Bhai story bhut he khubsurat hai please story continue rakhna yaha phele se bhut se story aduri hai
Aap aisa na karna
Mamta hu roj update dena thoda muskil hai but 2roj se ek big update de denge to accha hai
All the verry best bro

Bhai ya story meri nhi hy kisi or ny kahin or likhi thi ya puri to nhi hy but main isy pura kron ga mujhy achi lagi to yahan post kar di
 
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Kalyansurya

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Bhai ya story meri nhi hy kisi or ny kahin or likhi thi ya puri to nhi hy but main isy pura kron ga mujhy achi lagi to yahan post kar di
Ok bhai
 

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Bhai 7 saal ka larka 18 ka lag rha hai kuch zada nai hogya bhai fantasy main bhi logic hota hai
 

The rock

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Bhai 7 saal ka larka 18 ka lag rha hai kuch zada nai hogya bhai fantasy main bhi logic hota hai
Bhai ap ki bat bhi thek hy per agr ap thek say dakho to us ki baton ka kaha gaya hy jaisy aik 18 saal k larka bat karta hy jisy har bat ki samajh hoti hy look wise to wo abhi bacha hi hy
 

Damha

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Bhai ap ki bat bhi thek hy per agr ap thek say dakho to us ki baton ka kaha gaya hy jaisy aik 18 saal k larka bat karta hy jisy har bat ki samajh hoti hy look wise to wo abhi bacha hi hy
bhai phir theek se likho na
 
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Nice one
 
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