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Incest Devtaa A story of a hero (fantasy , adultery, horrible)

Do you like the story / baddest story eever I read quite please

  • Yes

    Votes: 24 38.7%
  • No

    Votes: 5 8.1%
  • Superb story

    Votes: 39 62.9%
  • Quite

    Votes: 2 3.2%
  • Quite fast

    Votes: 2 3.2%
  • Stop writing

    Votes: 2 3.2%
  • Narration bakwas hai

    Votes: 2 3.2%
  • Behetreen narration

    Votes: 3 4.8%
  • Story padhna chahte hai ya nahi

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Yes continue

    Votes: 5 8.1%
  • No

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    62
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Naina

Nain11ster creation... a monter in me
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ek baat to saaf hai.... agar us hawas ke pujari master ki niyat kisi ladki par kharab huyi to wo kaise karke us ladki ko hasil karke hi rahega.... us hawas ie pujari master ke liye khudka tharak mitna hi uska mul udeshya hai....
ch aahe iske liye kuch bhi kyun na karna pade ushe....
gaur talab baat ye bhi hai ki uska kala dhandha bahot faila hua hai.... bahot se powerful log uske niche kaam bhi karta hai...
apne paise aur powers ke balboote par jo jee mein chaaheto kar sakta hai, jishe marzi ghar se hi utha sakta hai.... for example vini aur jay... inki haalat dekhke hi pata chale ki aam logo ko kis kadar majboor aur bebas kar deta hai wo hawasi master.....

Yahan thodi confusion hai.... eddi ko jab pata hi hai ki uska hawasi malik kitna powerful hai to wo uske sath dhokha kyun kar raha hai.... ya ye ek chaal hai... jiske chalte vini puri tarah se viswas karne lag jaaye eddi par... phir eddi jo kahe wohi sune vini... shayad ishi bharose ka fida uthake vini ko us hawas master ke sath shaadi karne ko majboor kar de....
Lekin confusion ka kaaran ye nahi balki confusion ka kaaran ye hai ki itna taam jham kyun...? Kisliye....? itna powerful hai to sidha ghar se hi utha ke le jaaye.... ye island jana,wo petter ,ab eddi ki nautanki , aur wo chaar slaves... unke ghise pite dialogues etc :blahblah: ye sab nautanki kyun .... Ye sab karne ki jarurat hi kya hai..... :dazed:

ek aur raaz ki baat ye bhi ki wo deepak & all egency ye bhi us master ke andar hi kaam karta hai....

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arohi se bahot so baatein chupayi gayi hai.... plus uske lover ko priya & gang ne hi mara hai ... isliye us recorder pe goli chalakar uda di priya ne....
Delhi wala mission drop ho gaya.. waise achha hua ki wo dono bach gaye.... warna ye haaraman arohi un dono ke sath jaane kya karti.....

shreya hi wo ek matra ladki hai jo arohi ki shubhchintak haai waha.... lagta hai shreya ko pyar hai arohi se :D

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master, eddi whatever.. in logo ki dar se vini ne saari baatein chupa li apne jaye se..... waise us waqt shayad farz ko pata chal gaya tha ki eddi bhi unke piche piche waha aa gaya hai... isliye usne ema aur kay se doori banaye rakha.....

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So finally John urf jay India wapis aa raha hai.... waise usko dekh uski maa aur behne kaafi khunsh honge....

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sabse jaruri ye ki agar us Master aur gang se khud ko aur apni family ko bachana hai to jald se jald jay ko farz jaise dusro ke mind ko control wale power ko sikhna hoga... Aur yahi ek akhiri rashta hai uske paas..


Khair.....
shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan..
Positive kirdaaro ke mood, mahol aur unke bich rishte ke varnan kabile tarif raha...
kirdaaro ki baatein, khashkar vini ,jon & family & ahmiyat dena ek duje ko...
Kahani ke charitra /kirdaar aur unke bich ke bhaavnao ko kaise barkarar rakhna hai is mamle aap mahir hai...
Jis tarah se jon & family pal,prati pal mann mein uth rahe dard peeda chupaye ek dusre ko santvana de rahe the , update ko bhaavnaatmak banane mein sarathak kar diya hai...

Hamesha ki tarah kirdaaro ke vicharo ka adan pradan jis mul vishay vastu pe hai wo ek lay mein dikhane mein lekhak kamyaab rahe ..

Aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...

Let's see what happens next..

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills... :applause: :applause:
 

Baap Ji

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mamma and dad im sorry maine apka dil dukhaya apko mujhpar sharminda hona pada.
maine un dono ki taraf dekhte hue. Kaha.

shut up abhi marungi maine gusse me kaha im proud of you mere we both proud of you.
mamma aur dad ek sath bolte hai.

acha ham chalte hai apne bhai ko sab khila dena tab tak sone nahi dena.
mamma jate hue boli.

ab age .

agli subah jab aankh khuli to apna sar vini sister ki god me hi paya sar par unke hath chalte hue mehsus ho rahe they ye dekh ke mai fauran utha unke chahere ko dekha to ankhe band thi mai tiktiki lagaye unhe dekhne laga.

vini sis ko jab apne hatho me sar nahi mila to unhone aankhe kholi...

uth gaye jony. Wo ubasi lete hue boli.

kya hua ese kya dekh rahe ho mujhe .mere answer na karne par kandhe se pakad kar wo hilate hue boli.

sari raat ap ese hi mera sar apni god me liye baithi rahi . Maine halke gusse me unki aankho me dekhte hue kaha.

are nahi wo mai abhi ayi thi tumhe jagane ayi to baith gayi..

sis aap ab jhut bhi bolne lagi ankhe dekho sari raat jagne se laal ho gayi hai .maine naraz hote hue kaha

apko bas mera hi khyal rakhna hai apna nahi . Mai bad se uthte hue bola.

are esa kuch nahi hai wo bas .

acha excuse na do sis ab aap so jao .
mai fresh hokar ata hu.
meri baat sunkar wo muskurai.

jab itna hi pyaar karti ho aap mujhse fir kyo dur kar rahi ho khud se.
maine kaha.

wo isliye taki meri un teen behno ko unke bhai ka pyaar mil sake . Ab chup chap jao fresh hokar aao mujhe bhukh lagi hai mai breakfast karke rat ki nind puri kar lungi.

ye bolte hue jaise hi sis bad se uthne ke liye pair sidhe karti hai unki halki si aah nikal jati hai rat bhar ek jaise hi pair rakhe isliye wo sidey nahi ho rahe they mai jaldi se unke pass gaya aur dhire dhire pair sidhe karne laga kuch mintues baad wo chalne ke kabil hui .

aap chal lengi sis. maine pucha.

ha chal lungi tum jao .

unke jane ke baad mere chahere par ek na rukne wali muskurahat aagayi cell ki jitni buri yadein thi vini sis ke love unki care ne sab pal bhar me dur kar di thi mai ye to janta tha wo mujhe bahut pyaar karti hai lekin ye nahi janta ki itna chahti hai ya yun kahu har ek din unki mohabbat badhti jaa rahi thi.


unke jane ke baad mai fresh hua kapde change karke niche aya jahan mamma dad ko breakfas serve kar rahi thi.

agaye beta chalo tum bhi breakfast kar lo .
mamma ki bat sunkar mai bhi dad ke sath baith gaya.

mamma breakfast plate me dalne lagi mai khane laga.

mamma andriya sis kaha hai .maine pucha .

wo jane ke ghar hai rat wahi soyi. Dad bole.

koi baat hai dad .maine nigalne ke baad unki taraf serious hokar dekhte hue pucha.

jab tum cell me they tab tumhare teacher hame chhod gaye. Dad ek dard bhari aah lekar bole.

dad ki baat sunkar mere hatho se spoon chut ke wapas plate me gir gaya mai bhagta hua ghar se bahar aya fir waha se bhagte hue graveyard bhigti aankho se waha teacher ki grave dekhne laga jab grave mil gayi tab meri ek cheekh nikli.

teacherrrrrrrrrrrr...

unki grave se hi chipat kar rone laga unke sath jo lamhe bite wo sab yaad ane laga teacher mere liye mere dad ki tarah they.

jony ye duniya ab bad se badttar ho gayi hai log samajhte hai unhone tarakki ki hai nahi jony logo ke dilo se ehasas mar gaya hai log ye bhi nahi samajhte wo kya aur kyo kar rahe hai tum unki tarah mat banna apni manzil khud talash karna hamesha sach ka sath dena agar tumne burai ko apnaya to ye hargiz na bhulna tumhe uska badla dena hoga.

na jane kitni hi der mai guru ji grave se lipat kar rota raha andeiya sis aur jane mere sath lag kar ro rahi thi .

maine jane ko dekha to wo pehle wali jane nahi thi ab to uski halat bahut kharab ho gayi thi uske pyare se chaherw par gham ke badal chaye they chup to wo pehle bhi rehti thi lekin ab khamosh ho gayi thi.


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eddie ek ginni car se bahut badi builduing me enter hota hai kafi chal ke wo ek bahut bade theater me aata hai.
theater ke andar aakar dekhta hai badi si sceeen par ek live film chal rahi hoti hai jisme..ek ladki ek cage se bandhi thi jo puri nude thi aur jis room me wo bandhi thi wo pura room red roshni se nahaya hua tha.

sidio se eddie utar ke jane lagta hai kafi niche utarkar dekhta hai beech ki seat par ek ladki baithi hui hoti aur uski aankhe screen par jami hui hoti hai eddie bhi pass jakar baith jata hai aur screen me jo chal raha tha use dekhne lagta hai .

theater ke pass hi ek house tha jo isi building me bana tha use hi red house kehte hai usi red house me ek ladki steel cage se bandhi thi usi ladki ke sath ek 8 feet ka aadmi bhi tha jo kisi rakshak ki tarah pratit ho raha tha uske hath me ek chamde ki chadi thi aur bhi bhut si cheeze usi room me rakhi thi tourchre ke liye .

wo admi ghumte hue sar se ata hai jahan ladki ke mooh par tamache barsa raha tha ab wo uski kamar ke najdeek ata hai aur chadi se ek zordar baar karta hai ladki ke ass par .

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh

ek hi baar se ladki tadap jati hai puri ass lal pad jati hai wo aadmi yahi nahi rukta aur bhi bar karta hai ladki lagatar chhod dene ki duhai mangti hai lekin marne wale ko bilkul bhi rahem nahi aa raha hota hai jab ladki maar se behosh ho jati hai to use shock dekar uthata hai .

tabhi uske kano me lagi blutooth me se ek awaaz ati hai.

bas ab buri tarah se fuck karke chhod de jyada tourture karega to mar jayegi ye train nahi hai.




ye to samantha hai na reporter ise kyo yahan layi daizy.
daizy jo abhi us aadmi ko instrution de rahi hoti hai edie ki bat sunkar uski taraf dekhti hai.

isne galti ki usi ki punishment mil rahi hai ise nobody can give me fuck.
daizy pass baithe edie ki taraf dekh ke bolti hai.

edie. Kya galti ki isne.

daizy. Jo blue sea me hua uski reporting karte hue iske pichey barf me do man sex karte hue mare usi ki photo aagayi thi isne bina chek kiye use public kar diya wo viral ho gayi ...ye bata peter ke bare me kuch pata chala.

edie . Abhi tak to nahi lekin yahan mai tujhse kuch zaruri baat karne aya hu .

bol kya baat hai. Daizy gusse me ghurkar puchti hai kyoki peter ki maut se badhkar uske liye kuch aur zaruri nahi tha.

wo miss venessa hai na.

ha maine hi chuna hai use master trinity ke liye .
daizy ki bat sunkae edie ek nazar use dekhta hai kyoki daizy ne bomb foda tha ye batakar use ki venessa ko usne chuna hai aur edie ko car ki recording yaad ati hai jisme peter venessa se kuch aur hi keh raha tha.

puri baat bata kaise kyo kar kab chuna miss venessa ko.

use maine university me dekha tha jab mai waha gayi un logo ke liye jo hame join karna chahte they... tabhi maine ek class me venessa ko dekha pehle soncha use apni slave queen banaungi lekin jab uski detail nikali to wo scorpion nikli fir uski detail maine age bheji waha se master trinity ke pass master ne use apni wife banane ke liye pasand kar liya lekin venessa ek conservative girl hai uski loyality ki fikr thi mujhe..isliye mujhe kaha gaya mai use cult ke liye tapu par laun wahi uske hatho uske bhai ka khun bahaun lekin fir wo hadsa hua fir sab cancel.

daizy ki baat sunkar edie ek nazar dekhta hai use .

ye possible hai ki venessa apne hi bhai ko apne hatho se mar degi .


hahahaha
jo master trinity se ek baar mil le wo sab kuch kar sakta hai .edie ki baat sunkar daizy haste hue boli.

kuch aur bata na master trinity ke bare me .

jitna janti bata diya ...tu bata kya keh raha tha.



edie. kuch din pehle mai us se mila peter ke silsile me jab use dekha to dekhta hi reh gaya uska chahera uski awaz uska mujhe chhuna mai kuch nahi bhul paya hu har lamhe wahi khyalo me rehti hai .

daizy.venessa ki baat kar raha hai .

edie. Ha maine uski thodi help bhi ki hai...fir edie use batata hai kaise usne vini ki help ki.

uske bhai se ache se taftish ki. Daizy gusse me boli.

ha sab pata kar liya wo kuch nahi janta ..tu meri bahen hai na bata na ab mai kya karu kaise venessa ko hasil karu mai use dard bhi nahi dena chahta .

tu badal to nahi raha

edie.nahi esi baat nahi hai wo bas mujhe chahiye.


daizy.agar venessa virgin nahi hui to tu mai dono bahut bure marenge .

edie.fir kya karu .

Daizy.use yahan le aa mai karti hu kuch .

edie. Mai le to aaunga lekin mai nahi chahta use kisi bhi tarah ka dard ho.

daizy.dont worry vaise bhi use train bhi karna hai lana to padega hi naa.


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do din baad

kaha se aa rahe ho beta ye kitabe kis liye.
mujhe mere room me jata dekh mamma pichey se boli.

bas liberary gaya tha wahi se kuch kitabe laya hu . Ye bolte hue mai apne room ki taraf badh gaya .

ye sari books telepathy ki thi mai itna to janta hu meri kisi ne madad ki island par telepathy ke jariye lekin kon ye yaad nahi aa raha khair ab maine faisla kar liya india jakar telepthy sikhunga.


room me akar dekha to sare bags bhare hue kafi saman tha jo venessa sis layi thi meri dusri behno ke liye do bags me unke liye tohfe they ek me mera maine apna wala bag khali kiya aur usme kitabe rakh li jo jo kapde nahi aye unhe lekar andriya sis ke room me chal diya .

jab sis ke room me aya to dekha andriya sis idhar se udhar chakkar laga rahi hai apna bag saman se bhar rahi .

sis ye kuch kapde hai mera bag full ho gaya hai aap apne me rakh lena.

rakh do mai rakh lungi.andriya sis ne mujhe dekhe bagair kaha.

kapde rakh ke mai apne room me akar let gaya ek taraf khusi thi apni waki teen behno aur maa se milunga wahi dusri taraf vini sis mamma and dad se bichadna hoga

kuch der letne ke bad lunch ke liye niche aagaya jahan mamma jane vini sis thi .

mamma lunch.mai chair pe baithte hue bola .

endri ko bula lao fir sath me khate hai .
vini sis ki baat sunkar mai andriya sis ke room me aaya.

sis hui na packing aapki mai kuch help karu.maine room me akar kaha.

nahi bas ho gayi.

chalo aao lunch kare vini sis bula rahi hai.
meri baat sunkar andriya sis mere ssath niche aayi jahan gol wali table par jane ke sath vini sis baithi thi .

sis mai wahan kha lunga.maine badi wali table ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha.

meri baat sunkar vini sis ne gusse me aankhe dikha di majburan mujhe unke sath baithna pada jiske liye mana kiya use to koi fark hi nahi pada fir ham charo ek sath ek plate me khane lage .

khana kha kar vini sis ko pakd kar apne room me le aya .

kya hua ese kyo laye.

baitho .maine bad ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha.

meri baat sunkar wo samajh gayi unhe kaise baithna hai.

unke baithte hi maine bhi apna sar unki god me rakh ke let gaya.

udas ho.unhone pucha.

hmmm bahut.

mai har pal tumhare sath hu samjhe jyada yaad aye to call kar lena.

aap yahan ho niche mamma bula rahi hai.
andriya sis room me ate hue boli jinke sath jane bhi thi.

acha sar hatao mai mamma ki baat sunkar ati hu .
vini sis ne uthna chaha lekin maine na sar hataya na uthne diya.

mujhe jab hilte nahi dekhti to jhuk kar mere chahere par nigah dalti hai jahan unhe meri aankho ansu dikhte hai jinhe wo hatho se pochkar mere forehead par kiss kar deti hai.

kuch hi ghante hu yahan tab tak mere sath raho .
maine dhime se kaha.

mai jati hu mamma ke pass. Jane room se jate hue boli.

aur tum jao sare bags cars me rakho jab jane ka time aayega to mai ise le aaungi.vini sis ki baat sunkar andriya sis bhi room se chali gayi ab ham dono akele reh gaye they unki god me na jane kab nind agayi.

chalo utho jony...ab uth bhi jao..airport ke liye late ho rahe hai .
sis ke jagane se maine aankhe kholi.

time ho gaya . Maine uthte hue pucha .

ha ab jao tayar hokar aao fir hame jana hoga.

unki baat sunkar mai washrrom me chala gaya naha kar aya to bad par sis ki jagah kapde they .

tayar hokar niche aya to sab hall me sofe par baithe they.

chale ab .dad mujhe dekhte hue bole.

sara saman rakh liya na tickets passport sab .mamma boli.

ha mamma sab kar liya .andriya sis ne kaha.

mai chup chap akar car me baith gaya mere sath andriya sis aur dad they meri car me mamma jane vini sis aa rahi thi.

half hour baad hum airport aye hamare sath hi mamma bhi agayi thi abhi bees mintues they flight me.

maine sabko gale lagaya mom dad ki ankho me ansu they lekin wo chupa rahe they .

unse milne ke baad jane ke pass aya soncha tha use sirf bye bolunga lekin usne gale laga liya fir beikteyar maine bhi use baho me bhar liya.

Apna khyal rakhna mere sidhey se bhai.

aap bhi rakhna meri serious sister

jane se alag hokar mai vini sis ke pass aya meri dhadkane badh gayi thi unke pass ate hi fir unhone hi mujhe apne gale laga liya .
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apna khyal rakhna halat kaise bhi ho ab andriya tumhari jimmedari hai .

hmmm aap bhi apna khyal rakhna mai jald hi aaunga.

bhai tumhe late ho raha hai . Vini sis ki awaz sunkar mai alag hua .

mere alag hote hi andriya sis vini sis se lipat gayi.

mamma dad kaha gaye. Dad ko na dekhkar maine pucha.

wo bas aa rahe hai .mamma boli.

ab tumhe hi apne bhai ka khyal rakhna hoga agar kabhi tumhari behne kuch kahe to bura mat manna samajh gayi .

hmmm aap bhi apna khyal rakhna sis i miss you so much.

ye bolte hue andriya sis bhi alag ho gayi itne me dad bhi agaye.

ye lo endri beta ye indian rupees hai 5k dollar hi excange hue hai .
dad andriya sis ko dete hue bole.

ab jao late ho raha hai .

venessa sis ki baat sunkar maine tralli age badha di aur mere sath andriya sis bhi chalne lagi pichey mai apna bahut kuch chhod aya tha .kuch dur akar maine ek nazar pichey dekha to sab ab bhi hame hi dekh rahe they siwaye vini sis ke wo peeth karke khadi thi mai samajh gaya esa kyo hai .

ek nazar dekhne ke baad mai age badh gaya sari formalites ke baad ham log flight me aake baith gaye.

11 hour baad ham mumbai india me they yahan hawa hi badal gayi thi .
india ke bare me soncha tha yahan gaon honge lekin ise mini america kehna sahi hoga specily mumbai ko.

airport se nikalkar bahar aye to kafi taxi Thi .

sis address do jo dad ne diya .meri baat sunkar andriya sis ne apne bag se nikalkar adress mere hatho me diya.

mujje dekhte hi ek taxi wala mere pass agaya .

kaha jana hai sahab. Uski baat sunkar jawab maine hi diya kyoki andriya sis to hindi janti hi nahi thi .

malad shital villa...

baitho sahab wo mere hath se bag lete hue bola .

are mai rakh lunga .
maine kaha.

mere mana karne ke wabajud usne bag le hi liye .

aao sis baitho akar . Maine gate kholte hue kaha .

hamare baithte hi car chal di.

sahab ek baat puchu agar bura na mano . Taxi driver bola.

ha bolo . Maine kaha.

sahab aap dekhne me to videshi lagte ho itni achi hindi kaise bol lete ho .

meri maa indian hai isliye mai bhi .
na jane kitne hi sawal puchne laga mai kuch taal deta kuch de deta.

kuch dur aakar ek bhataka hua .

aur mai samajh gaya kya hua ye tire pinture hone ki awaz thi.

na chahte hue bhi hame utarna pada.

age ke liye taxi mil jayengi .maine pucha.

sahab bas 1 k.m hai jo adress apne diya 5- 10 mintues me paidal hi chale jaoge.

uski baat sunkar maine kiraya diya aur paidal hi sis ko lekar age badh gaya taxi dekhi lekin koi taxi aa hi nahi rahi thi us taxi wale se bhi kya kehta mujhe dekh ke wo bhi kafi sharminda ho raha tha.

sis ap chal lengi ya wait karu taxi ka. Maine pucha.

bags aap sare uthaye hai puch hamse rahe mai to chal lungi aap chahe to wait kar lete hai.

nahi rehne do chalte hai pass hi hoga.

dhire dhire ham log age badhne lage kuch dur akar dekha to ek jagah bheed thi .unhi me se ek se shital villa pucha usne left me mudne ko bola uski baat sunkar ham jaise hi age bade ki tabhi ek shaks mere pass aya aur mere pichey chupne laga.

are kya kar rahe ho dur hato.use hatate hue maine kaha.

sahab is bala se bacha lo bas ham sari umar apka ahsan nahi bhulnge.
wo vinti karte hue mujhe aur takat se pakadte hue bola.

you bloody chor himmat kaise hui mera bag churane ki chhodungi nahi tumhe aaa aa chup mat.
usi bheed se ek doll jaisi ladki mere samne akar boli uski dress dekh ke maine jaldi se mooh ghuma liya.

hey you samne se hato.ladki mere pichey chor ko pakadte hue boli.

ab tum chhodoge ya yahi pitu. Maine chor ko alag karte hue kaha.

sahab ap jitna chahe pit lo lekin is bala se bacha lo na jane kiska mooh dekha savere jo is bala se samna ho gaya mera.
chor gidgidate hue bola .
apna hi dekha hoga.

kya sahab aap bhi maje le rahe ho .
uski baat sunkar mai muskuraya.

hey you samajh nahi aya hato samne se.
ladki fir boli.

ab mai kya karu jab wo mujhe nahi chhod raha hai . Maine bebasi dikhate hue kaha upar se mere dono hath me bag aur ek peeth par.

meri baat sunkar wo ladki jhukkar chor ke baal pakad ke uthane lagi .

sahab bachao mujhe.. are maar dala maaf kar do gori madam ab kabhi apke area me nahi bhatkunga. Chor ki aaho ko nazarandaz karte hue ladki balo se pakad ke khada karti hai chor ke hatte hi mai ek kadam age badata hu mere hi pichey andriya sis aa rahi thi .

aaaahhhhhh .

jaise hi mai age badhta hu mere pichey aa rahi andriya sis ki ek dars bhari aah nikalti jaise hi mai pichey dekhta hu andriya sis bag rakh ke apna face thame hue hoti hai.

hua ye jaise hi mai age badha ladki chor ko khada karke ek hath se use pakad ke dusre se uske mooh par bag marna chahti lekin chor baith jata hai aur bag meri bahen ke lagta hai.

sis aap thik to hai .mai pass jake bola sis ka face lal padh gaya tha pura ek side ka jise dekh mujhe gussa agaya tha.

are you all right actully mai use hit karna chahti ...chatakkkkkk

wo age kuch bol pati usse pehle maine uske mooh par ek tamacha jad diya .

mere hit karte hi chor uski pakad se azad ho ke nau do gyarah ho gaya aur ladki mujhe kha jane wali najro se ghurne lagti hai .

chalo bro ..

mai jana to nahi chahta tha lekin andriya sis ke hath pakad ke le jane se mai unke sath chal diya .

tune acha nahi kiya Meri baby ghar par hi hai jis hath se tune mara usi ko na toda to mere naam.. wo mujhe jata dekh boli.

jo bhi ho jab man kare lekar aajana aur haan Agli baar kapde pure pahen ke ana .mai bina uski taraf dekhe bola .

kya hua sis aap thik hai .sis ko kkasmasakar chalte hue dekh maine pucha.

wo..wo....


wo kuch keh pati meri nazar unke pairo par padhi jisse khun beh raha tha.

bag chhodkar mai jaldi se baitha ye dekhne ke liye ki kaha chot lagi hai lekin mere baithte hi sis ek dam se pichey ho gayi.

kya hua hat kyo gayi aap dikhao kaha chot lagi hai pehle kyo nahi bataya.ye bolte hue jab unke face par nigah dali to chahera pura lal tha unka palke jhuki hui sar niche.

wo wo..mujhe periou...dddd .sis atakte hue boli.

shant ho jao .maine pass jakar kaha .

esa karo mere gale me bahein dal kar meri god me ajao is tarah se mai le chalunga.

mujhe utha loge in bags ke sath .sis jhijhakte hue boli.


haa aap aao..
acha ruko ek minut ..udhar mooh karo .meri baat sunkar jaise hi sis mooh ghumati hai mai ek diwar me lagi sariya par hatheli rakhta hu aur ghuma deta hu uske lagte hi hath se khoon ka fawwara chutta hai .
ye isliye kiya maine kyoki unke kapdo se saaf khun beh raha tha jo bhi dekhta to samajh jata isliye maine ye kiya aur unhe pakad ke la jaunga to har koi yahi samjhega khun mere hatho se nikal raha hai .


sis ab aao .mai chot wala hath pichey kiye bilkul kareeb akar bola .

meri baat sunte hi wo gardan me bahein daal kar pair meri kamar me fasa leti hai fir mai khoon wala hath unki peeth par rakh kar dawa deta hu halke se Aur usse khoon jari ho jata hai jiske nikalne esa malum hota khoon mere hatho se nikal raha hai .

sis ko lekar bags ke pass aya jinhe khachidte hue chalne laga.

kuch dur aakar dekha to hamare ass pass kai villas they unke kareeb se gujarkar mai naam padne laga second villa ko dekhkar mere face par smile aa gayi .


ye meri maa ka ghar tha jo bahut jyada bada tha bahut shandar lag raha tha bahar se dekhne par.
 
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mamma and dad im sorry maine apka dil dukhaya apko mujhpar sharminda hona pada.
maine un dono ki taraf dekhte hue. Kaha.

shut up abhi marungi maine gusse me kaha im proud of you mere we both proud of you.
mamma aur dad ek sath bolte hai.

acha ham chalte hai apne bhai ko sab khila dena tab tak sone nahi dena.
mamma jate hue boli.

ab age .

agli subah jab aankh khuli to apna sar vini sister ki god me hi paya sar par unke hath chalte hue mehsus ho rahe they ye dekh ke mai fauran utha unke chahere ko dekha to ankhe band thi mai tiktiki lagaye unhe dekhne laga.

vini sis ko jab apne hatho me sar nahi mila to unhone aankhe kholi...

uth gaye jony. Wo ubasi lete hue boli.

kya hua ese kya dekh rahe ho mujhe .mere answer na karne par kandhe se pakad kar wo hilate hue boli.

sari raat ap ese hi mera sar apni god me liye baithi rahi . Maine halke gusse me unki aankho me dekhte hue kaha.

are nahi wo mai abhi ayi thi tumhe jagane ayi to baith gayi..

sis aap ab jhut bhi bolne lagi ankhe dekho sari raat jagne se laal ho gayi hai .maine naraz hote hue kaha

apko bas mera hi khyal rakhna hai apna nahi . Mai bad se uthte hue bola.

are esa kuch nahi hai wo bas .

acha excuse na do sis ab aap so jao .
mai fresh hokar ata hu.
meri baat sunkar wo muskurai.

jab itna hi pyaar karti ho aap mujhse fir kyo dur kar rahi ho khud se.
maine kaha.

wo isliye taki meri un teen behno ko unke bhai ka pyaar mil sake . Ab chup chap jao fresh hokar aao mujhe bhukh lagi hai mai breakfast karke rat ki nind puri kar lungi.

ye bolte hue jaise hi sis bad se uthne ke liye pair sidhe karti hai unki halki si aah nikal jati hai rat bhar ek jaise hi pair rakhe isliye wo sidey nahi ho rahe they mai jaldi se unke pass gaya aur dhire dhire pair sidhe karne laga kuch mintues baad wo chalne ke kabil hui .

aap chal lengi sis. maine pucha.

ha chal lungi tum jao .

unke jane ke baad mere chahere par ek na rukne wali muskurahat aagayi cell ki jitni buri yadein thi vini sis ke love unki care ne sab pal bhar me dur kar di thi mai ye to janta tha wo mujhe bahut pyaar karti hai lekin ye nahi janta ki itna chahti hai ya yun kahu har ek din unki mohabbat badhti jaa rahi thi.


unke jane ke baad mai fresh hua kapde change karke niche aya jahan mamma dad ko breakfas serve kar rahi thi.

agaye beta chalo tum bhi breakfast kar lo .
mamma ki bat sunkar mai bhi dad ke sath baith gaya.

mamma breakfast plate me dalne lagi mai khane laga.

mamma andriya sis kaha hai .maine pucha .

wo jane ke ghar hai rat wahi soyi. Dad bole.

koi baat hai dad .maine nigalne ke baad unki taraf serious hokar dekhte hue pucha.

jab tum cell me they tab tumhare teacher hame chhod gaye. Dad ek dard bhari aah lekar bole.

dad ki baat sunkar mere hatho se spoon chut ke wapas plate me gir gaya mai bhagta hua ghar se bahar aya fir waha se bhagte hue graveyard bhigti aankho se waha teacher ki grave dekhne laga jab grave mil gayi tab meri ek cheekh nikli.

teacherrrrrrrrrrrr...

unki grave se hi chipat kar rone laga unke sath jo lamhe bite wo sab yaad ane laga teacher mere liye mere dad ki tarah they.

jony ye duniya ab bad se badttar ho gayi hai log samajhte hai unhone tarakki ki hai nahi jony logo ke dilo se ehasas mar gaya hai log ye bhi nahi samajhte wo kya aur kyo kar rahe hai tum unki tarah mat banna apni manzil khud talash karna hamesha sach ka sath dena agar tumne burai ko apnaya to ye hargiz na bhulna tumhe uska badla dena hoga.

na jane kitni hi der mai guru ji grave se lipat kar rota raha andeiya sis aur jane mere sath lag kar ro rahi thi .

maine jane ko dekha to wo pehle wali jane nahi thi ab to uski halat bahut kharab ho gayi thi uske pyare se chaherw par gham ke badal chaye they chup to wo pehle bhi rehti thi lekin ab khamosh ho gayi thi.


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eddie ek ginni car se bahut badi builduing me enter hota hai kafi chal ke wo ek bahut bade theater me aata hai.
theater ke andar aakar dekhta hai badi si sceeen par ek live film chal rahi hoti hai jisme..ek ladki ek cage se bandhi thi jo puri nude thi aur jis room me wo bandhi thi wo pura room red roshni se nahaya hua tha.

sidio se eddie utar ke jane lagta hai kafi niche utarkar dekhta hai beech ki seat par ek ladki baithi hui hoti aur uski aankhe screen par jami hui hoti hai eddie bhi pass jakar baith jata hai aur screen me jo chal raha tha use dekhne lagta hai .

theater ke pass hi ek house tha jo isi building me bana tha use hi red house kehte hai usi red house me ek ladki steel cage se bandhi thi usi ladki ke sath ek 8 feet ka aadmi bhi tha jo kisi rakshak ki tarah pratit ho raha tha uske hath me ek chamde ki chadi thi aur bhi bhut si cheeze usi room me rakhi thi tourchre ke liye .

wo admi ghumte hue sar se ata hai jahan ladki ke mooh par tamache barsa raha tha ab wo uski kamar ke najdeek ata hai aur chadi se ek zordar baar karta hai ladki ke ass par .

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh

ek hi baar se ladki tadap jati hai puri ass lal pad jati hai wo aadmi yahi nahi rukta aur bhi bar karta hai ladki lagatar chhod dene ki duhai mangti hai lekin marne wale ko bilkul bhi rahem nahi aa raha hota hai jab ladki maar se behosh ho jati hai to use shock dekar uthata hai .

tabhi uske kano me lagi blutooth me se ek awaaz ati hai.

bas ab buri tarah se fuck karke chhod de jyada tourture karega to mar jayegi ye train nahi hai.




ye to samantha hai na reporter ise kyo yahan layi daizy.
daizy jo abhi us aadmi ko instrution de rahi hoti hai edie ki bat sunkar uski taraf dekhti hai.

isne galti ki usi ki punishment mil rahi hai ise nobody can give me fuck.
daizy pass baithe edie ki taraf dekh ke bolti hai.

edie. Kya galti ki isne.

daizy. Jo blue sea me hua uski reporting karte hue iske pichey barf me do man sex karte hue mare usi ki photo aagayi thi isne bina chek kiye use public kar diya wo viral ho gayi ...ye bata peter ke bare me kuch pata chala.

edie . Abhi tak to nahi lekin yahan mai tujhse kuch zaruri baat karne aya hu .

bol kya baat hai. Daizy gusse me ghurkar puchti hai kyoki peter ki maut se badhkar uske liye kuch aur zaruri nahi tha.

wo miss venessa hai na.

ha maine hi chuna hai use master trinity ke liye .
daizy ki bat sunkae edie ek nazar use dekhta hai kyoki daizy ne bomb foda tha ye batakar use ki venessa ko usne chuna hai aur edie ko car ki recording yaad ati hai jisme peter venessa se kuch aur hi keh raha tha.

puri baat bata kaise kyo kar kab chuna miss venessa ko.

use maine university me dekha tha jab mai waha gayi un logo ke liye jo hame join karna chahte they... tabhi maine ek class me venessa ko dekha pehle soncha use apni slave queen banaungi lekin jab uski detail nikali to wo scorpion nikli fir uski detail maine age bheji waha se master trinity ke pass master ne use apni wife banane ke liye pasand kar liya lekin venessa ek conservative girl hai uski loyality ki fikr thi mujhe..isliye mujhe kaha gaya mai use cult ke liye tapu par laun wahi uske hatho uske bhai ka khun bahaun lekin fir wo hadsa hua fir sab cancel.

daizy ki baat sunkar edie ek nazar dekhta hai use .

ye possible hai ki venessa apne hi bhai ko apne hatho se mar degi .


hahahaha
jo master trinity se ek baar mil le wo sab kuch kar sakta hai .edie ki baat sunkar daizy haste hue boli.

kuch aur bata na master trinity ke bare me .

jitna janti bata diya ...tu bata kya keh raha tha.



edie. kuch din pehle mai us se mila peter ke silsile me jab use dekha to dekhta hi reh gaya uska chahera uski awaz uska mujhe chhuna mai kuch nahi bhul paya hu har lamhe wahi khyalo me rehti hai .

daizy.venessa ki baat kar raha hai .

edie. Ha maine uski thodi help bhi ki hai...fir edie use batata hai kaise usne vini ki help ki.

uske bhai se ache se taftish ki. Daizy gusse me boli.

ha sab pata kar liya wo kuch nahi janta ..tu meri bahen hai na bata na ab mai kya karu kaise venessa ko hasil karu mai use dard bhi nahi dena chahta .

tu badal to nahi raha

edie.nahi esi baat nahi hai wo bas mujhe chahiye.


daizy.agar venessa virgin nahi hui to tu mai dono bahut bure marenge .

edie.fir kya karu .

Daizy.use yahan le aa mai karti hu kuch .

edie. Mai le to aaunga lekin mai nahi chahta use kisi bhi tarah ka dard ho.

daizy.dont worry vaise bhi use train bhi karna hai lana to padega hi naa.


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do din baad

kaha se aa rahe ho beta ye kitabe kis liye.
mujhe mere room me jata dekh mamma pichey se boli.

bas liberary gaya tha wahi se kuch kitabe laya hu . Ye bolte hue mai apne room ki taraf badh gaya .

ye sari books telepathy ki thi mai itna to janta hu meri kisi ne madad ki island par telepathy ke jariye lekin kon ye yaad nahi aa raha khair ab maine faisla kar liya india jakar telepthy sikhunga.


room me akar dekha to sare bags bhare hue kafi saman tha jo venessa sis layi thi meri dusri behno ke liye do bags me unke liye tohfe they ek me mera maine apna wala bag khali kiya aur usme kitabe rakh li jo jo kapde nahi aye unhe lekar andriya sis ke room me chal diya .

jab sis ke room me aya to dekha andriya sis idhar se udhar chakkar laga rahi hai apna bag saman se bhar rahi .

sis ye kuch kapde hai mera bag full ho gaya hai aap apne me rakh lena.

rakh do mai rakh lungi.andriya sis ne mujhe dekhe bagair kaha.

kapde rakh ke mai apne room me akar let gaya ek taraf khusi thi apni waki teen behno aur maa se milunga wahi dusri taraf vini sis mamma and dad se bichadna hoga

kuch der letne ke bad lunch ke liye niche aagaya jahan mamma jane vini sis thi .

mamma lunch.mai chair pe baithte hue bola .

endri ko bula lao fir sath me khate hai .
vini sis ki baat sunkar mai andriya sis ke room me aaya.

sis hui na packing aapki mai kuch help karu.maine room me akar kaha.

nahi bas ho gayi.

chalo aao lunch kare vini sis bula rahi hai.
meri baat sunkar andriya sis mere ssath niche aayi jahan gol wali table par jane ke sath vini sis baithi thi .

sis mai wahan kha lunga.maine badi wali table ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha.

meri baat sunkar vini sis ne gusse me aankhe dikha di majburan mujhe unke sath baithna pada jiske liye mana kiya use to koi fark hi nahi pada fir ham charo ek sath ek plate me khane lage .

khana kha kar vini sis ko pakd kar apne room me le aya .

kya hua ese kyo laye.

baitho .maine bad ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha.

meri baat sunkar wo samajh gayi unhe kaise baithna hai.

unke baithte hi maine bhi apna sar unki god me rakh ke let gaya.

udas ho.unhone pucha.

hmmm bahut.

mai har pal tumhare sath hu samjhe jyada yaad aye to call kar lena.

aap yahan ho niche mamma bula rahi hai.
andriya sis room me ate hue boli jinke sath jane bhi thi.

acha sar hatao mai mamma ki baat sunkar ati hu .
vini sis ne uthna chaha lekin maine na sar hataya na uthne diya.

mujhe jab hilte nahi dekhti to jhuk kar mere chahere par nigah dalti hai jahan unhe meri aankho ansu dikhte hai jinhe wo hatho se pochkar mere forehead par kiss kar deti hai.

kuch hi ghante hu yahan tab tak mere sath raho .
maine dhime se kaha.

mai jati hu mamma ke pass. Jane room se jate hue boli.

aur tum jao sare bags cars me rakho jab jane ka time aayega to mai ise le aaungi.vini sis ki baat sunkar andriya sis bhi room se chali gayi ab ham dono akele reh gaye they unki god me na jane kab nind agayi.

chalo utho jony...ab uth bhi jao..airport ke liye late ho rahe hai .
sis ke jagane se maine aankhe kholi.

time ho gaya . Maine uthte hue pucha .

ha ab jao tayar hokar aao fir hame jana hoga.

unki baat sunkar mai washrrom me chala gaya naha kar aya to bad par sis ki jagah kapde they .

tayar hokar niche aya to sab hall me sofe par baithe they.

chale ab .dad mujhe dekhte hue bole.

sara saman rakh liya na tickets passport sab .mamma boli.

ha mamma sab kar liya .andriya sis ne kaha.

mai chup chap akar car me baith gaya mere sath andriya sis aur dad they meri car me mamma jane vini sis aa rahi thi.

half hour baad hum airport aye hamare sath hi mamma bhi agayi thi abhi bees mintues they flight me.

maine sabko gale lagaya mom dad ki ankho me ansu they lekin wo chupa rahe they .

unse milne ke baad jane ke pass aya soncha tha use sirf bye bolunga lekin usne gale laga liya fir beikteyar maine bhi use baho me bhar liya.

Apna khyal rakhna mere sidhey se bhai.

aap bhi rakhna meri serious sister

jane se alag hokar mai vini sis ke pass aya meri dhadkane badh gayi thi unke pass ate hi fir unhone hi mujhe apne gale laga liya .
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apna khyal rakhna halat kaise bhi ho ab andriya tumhari jimmedari hai .

hmmm aap bhi apna khyal rakhna mai jald hi aaunga.

bhai tumhe late ho raha hai . Vini sis ki awaz sunkar mai alag hua .

mere alag hote hi andriya sis vini sis se lipat gayi.

mamma dad kaha gaye. Dad ko na dekhkar maine pucha.

wo bas aa rahe hai .mamma boli.

ab tumhe hi apne bhai ka khyal rakhna hoga agar kabhi tumhari behne kuch kahe to bura mat manna samajh gayi .

hmmm aap bhi apna khyal rakhna sis i miss you so much.

ye bolte hue andriya sis bhi alag ho gayi itne me dad bhi agaye.

ye lo endri beta ye indian rupees hai 5k dollar hi excange hue hai .
dad andriya sis ko dete hue bole.

ab jao late ho raha hai .

venessa sis ki baat sunkar maine tralli age badha di aur mere sath andriya sis bhi chalne lagi pichey mai apna bahut kuch chhod aya tha .kuch dur akar maine ek nazar pichey dekha to sab ab bhi hame hi dekh rahe they siwaye vini sis ke wo peeth karke khadi thi mai samajh gaya esa kyo hai .

ek nazar dekhne ke baad mai age badh gaya sari formalites ke baad ham log flight me aake baith gaye.

11 hour baad ham mumbai india me they yahan hawa hi badal gayi thi .
india ke bare me soncha tha yahan gaon honge lekin ise mini america kehna sahi hoga specily mumbai ko.

airport se nikalkar bahar aye to kafi taxi Thi .

sis address do jo dad ne diya .meri baat sunkar andriya sis ne apne bag se nikalkar adress mere hatho me diya.

mujje dekhte hi ek taxi wala mere pass agaya .

kaha jana hai sahab. Uski baat sunkar jawab maine hi diya kyoki andriya sis to hindi janti hi nahi thi .

malad shital villa...

baitho sahab wo mere hath se bag lete hue bola .

are mai rakh lunga .
maine kaha.

mere mana karne ke wabajud usne bag le hi liye .

aao sis baitho akar . Maine gate kholte hue kaha .

hamare baithte hi car chal di.

sahab ek baat puchu agar bura na mano . Taxi driver bola.

ha bolo . Maine kaha.

sahab aap dekhne me to videshi lagte ho itni achi hindi kaise bol lete ho .

meri maa indian hai isliye mai bhi .
na jane kitne hi sawal puchne laga mai kuch taal deta kuch de deta.

kuch dur aakar ek bhataka hua .

aur mai samajh gaya kya hua ye tire pinture hone ki awaz thi.

na chahte hue bhi hame utarna pada.

age ke liye taxi mil jayengi .maine pucha.

sahab bas 1 k.m hai jo adress apne diya 5- 10 mintues me paidal hi chale jaoge.

uski baat sunkar maine kiraya diya aur paidal hi sis ko lekar age badh gaya taxi dekhi lekin koi taxi aa hi nahi rahi thi us taxi wale se bhi kya kehta mujhe dekh ke wo bhi kafi sharminda ho raha tha.

sis ap chal lengi ya wait karu taxi ka. Maine pucha.

bags aap sare uthaye hai puch hamse rahe mai to chal lungi aap chahe to wait kar lete hai.

nahi rehne do chalte hai pass hi hoga.

dhire dhire ham log age badhne lage kuch dur akar dekha to ek jagah bheed thi .unhi me se ek se shital villa pucha usne left me mudne ko bola uski baat sunkar ham jaise hi age bade ki tabhi ek shaks mere pass aya aur mere pichey chupne laga.

are kya kar rahe ho dur hato.use hatate hue maine kaha.

sahab is bala se bacha lo bas ham sari umar apka ahsan nahi bhulnge.
wo vinti karte hue mujhe aur takat se pakadte hue bola.

you bloody chor himmat kaise hui mera bag churane ki chhodungi nahi tumhe aaa aa chup mat.
usi bheed se ek doll jaisi ladki mere samne akar boli uski dress dekh ke maine jaldi se mooh ghuma liya.

hey you samne se hato.ladki mere pichey chor ko pakadte hue boli.

ab tum chhodoge ya yahi pitu. Maine chor ko alag karte hue kaha.

sahab ap jitna chahe pit lo lekin is bala se bacha lo na jane kiska mooh dekha savere jo is bala se samna ho gaya mera.
chor gidgidate hue bola .
apna hi dekha hoga.

kya sahab aap bhi maje le rahe ho .
uski baat sunkar mai muskuraya.

hey you samajh nahi aya hato samne se.
ladki fir boli.

ab mai kya karu jab wo mujhe nahi chhod raha hai . Maine bebasi dikhate hue kaha upar se mere dono hath me bag aur ek peeth par.

meri baat sunkar wo ladki jhukkar chor ke baal pakad ke uthane lagi .

sahab bachao mujhe.. are maar dala maaf kar do gori madam ab kabhi apke area me nahi bhatkunga. Chor ki aaho ko nazarandaz karte hue ladki balo se pakad ke khada karti hai chor ke hatte hi mai ek kadam age badata hu mere hi pichey andriya sis aa rahi thi .

aaaahhhhhh .

jaise hi mai age badhta hu mere pichey aa rahi andriya sis ki ek dars bhari aah nikalti jaise hi mai pichey dekhta hu andriya sis bag rakh ke apna face thame hue hoti hai.

hua ye jaise hi mai age badha ladki chor ko khada karke ek hath se use pakad ke dusre se uske mooh par bag marna chahti lekin chor baith jata hai aur bag meri bahen ke lagta hai.

sis aap thik to hai .mai pass jake bola sis ka face lal padh gaya tha pura ek side ka jise dekh mujhe gussa agaya tha.

are you all right actully mai use hit karna chahti ...chatakkkkkk

wo age kuch bol pati usse pehle maine uske mooh par ek tamacha jad diya .

mere hit karte hi chor uski pakad se azad ho ke nau do gyarah ho gaya aur ladki mujhe kha jane wali najro se ghurne lagti hai .

chalo bro ..

mai jana to nahi chahta tha lekin andriya sis ke hath pakad ke le jane se mai unke sath chal diya .

tune acha nahi kiya Meri baby ghar par hi hai jis hath se tune mara usi ko na toda to mere naam.. wo mujhe jata dekh boli.

jo bhi ho jab man kare lekar aajana aur haan Agli baar kapde pure pahen ke ana .mai bina uski taraf dekhe bola .

kya hua sis aap thik hai .sis ko kkasmasakar chalte hue dekh maine pucha.

wo..wo....


wo kuch keh pati meri nazar unke pairo par padhi jisse khun beh raha tha.

bag chhodkar mai jaldi se baitha ye dekhne ke liye ki kaha chot lagi hai lekin mere baithte hi sis ek dam se pichey ho gayi.

kya hua hat kyo gayi aap dikhao kaha chot lagi hai pehle kyo nahi bataya.ye bolte hue jab unke face par nigah dali to chahera pura lal tha unka palke jhuki hui sar niche.

wo wo..mujhe periou...dddd .sis atakte hue boli.

shant ho jao .maine pass jakar kaha .

esa karo mere gale me bahein dal kar meri god me ajao is tarah se mai le chalunga.

mujhe utha loge in bags ke sath .sis jhijhakte hue boli.


haa aap aao..
acha ruko ek minut ..udhar mooh karo .meri baat sunkar jaise hi sis mooh ghumati hai mai ek diwar me lagi sariya par hatheli rakhta hu aur ghuma deta hu uske lagte hi hath se khoon ka fawwara chutta hai .
ye isliye kiya maine kyoki unke kapdo se saaf khun beh raha tha jo bhi dekhta to samajh jata isliye maine ye kiya aur unhe pakad ke la jaunga to har koi yahi samjhega khun mere hatho se nikal raha hai .


sis ab aao .mai chot wala hath pichey kiye bilkul kareeb akar bola .

meri baat sunte hi wo gardan me bahein daal kar pair meri kamar me fasa leti hai fir mai khoon wala hath unki peeth par rakh kar dawa deta hu halke se Aur usse khoon jari ho jata hai jiske nikalne esa malum hota khoon mere hatho se nikal raha hai .

sis ko lekar bags ke pass aya jinhe khachidte hue chalne laga.

kuch dur aakar dekha to hamare ass pass kai villas they unke kareeb se gujarkar mai naam padne laga second villa ko dekhkar mere face par smile aa gayi .


ye meri maa ka ghar tha jo bahut jyada bada tha bahut shandar lag raha tha bahar se dekhne par.
Amazing writing skills bro ..aab jony ki apni beheno se mulakaat hogi..lekin work mulakat kya rang layegi ye dekhne wali baat he..jhony kese apni sabhi beheno k dil khus karega ye important he.
Bhai flashback aur kitna update chalegaa?
 

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ek baat to saaf hai.... agar us hawas ke pujari master ki niyat kisi ladki par kharab huyi to wo kaise karke us ladki ko hasil karke hi rahega.... us hawas ie pujari master ke liye khudka tharak mitna hi uska mul udeshya hai....
ch aahe iske liye kuch bhi kyun na karna pade ushe....
gaur talab baat ye bhi hai ki uska kala dhandha bahot faila hua hai.... bahot se powerful log uske niche kaam bhi karta hai...
apne paise aur powers ke balboote par jo jee mein chaaheto kar sakta hai, jishe marzi ghar se hi utha sakta hai.... for example vini aur jay... inki haalat dekhke hi pata chale ki aam logo ko kis kadar majboor aur bebas kar deta hai wo hawasi master.....

Yahan thodi confusion hai.... eddi ko jab pata hi hai ki uska hawasi malik kitna powerful hai to wo uske sath dhokha kyun kar raha hai.... ya ye ek chaal hai... jiske chalte vini puri tarah se viswas karne lag jaaye eddi par... phir eddi jo kahe wohi sune vini... shayad ishi bharose ka fida uthake vini ko us hawas master ke sath shaadi karne ko majboor kar de....
Lekin confusion ka kaaran ye nahi balki confusion ka kaaran ye hai ki itna taam jham kyun...? Kisliye....? itna powerful hai to sidha ghar se hi utha ke le jaaye.... ye island jana,wo petter ,ab eddi ki nautanki , aur wo chaar slaves... unke ghise pite dialogues etc :blahblah: ye sab nautanki kyun .... Ye sab karne ki jarurat hi kya hai..... :dazed:

ek aur raaz ki baat ye bhi ki wo deepak & all egency ye bhi us master ke andar hi kaam karta hai....

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arohi se bahot so baatein chupayi gayi hai.... plus uske lover ko priya & gang ne hi mara hai ... isliye us recorder pe goli chalakar uda di priya ne....
Delhi wala mission drop ho gaya.. waise achha hua ki wo dono bach gaye.... warna ye haaraman arohi un dono ke sath jaane kya karti.....

shreya hi wo ek matra ladki hai jo arohi ki shubhchintak haai waha.... lagta hai shreya ko pyar hai arohi se :D

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master, eddi whatever.. in logo ki dar se vini ne saari baatein chupa li apne jaye se..... waise us waqt shayad farz ko pata chal gaya tha ki eddi bhi unke piche piche waha aa gaya hai... isliye usne ema aur kay se doori banaye rakha.....

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So finally John urf jay India wapis aa raha hai.... waise usko dekh uski maa aur behne kaafi khunsh honge....

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sabse jaruri ye ki agar us Master aur gang se khud ko aur apni family ko bachana hai to jald se jald jay ko farz jaise dusro ke mind ko control wale power ko sikhna hoga... Aur yahi ek akhiri rashta hai uske paas..


Khair.....
shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan..
Positive kirdaaro ke mood, mahol aur unke bich rishte ke varnan kabile tarif raha...
kirdaaro ki baatein, khashkar vini ,jon & family & ahmiyat dena ek duje ko...
Kahani ke charitra /kirdaar aur unke bich ke bhaavnao ko kaise barkarar rakhna hai is mamle aap mahir hai...
Jis tarah se jon & family pal,prati pal mann mein uth rahe dard peeda chupaye ek dusre ko santvana de rahe the , update ko bhaavnaatmak banane mein sarathak kar diya hai...

Hamesha ki tarah kirdaaro ke vicharo ka adan pradan jis mul vishay vastu pe hai wo ek lay mein dikhane mein lekhak kamyaab rahe ..

Aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...

Let's see what happens next..

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills... :applause: :applause:

Naina ji sirf hawas ka hi chakkar nahi hai usse bhi age ki baat hai
Villans ek puzzl ki trh ayenge unko jodna hogaa abhi bas ek aya hii lekin ab end me hi ssbke ssmne ayega.

jald hi herro sikh jayega.

acha ek sawal aapke liye .

hero apni behno mee kiski wajsh se jaldi telepthy sikhega.

mai chahta to jald powerful ho jata hero lekin agar esa hota to fir family scane nhi ate bilkul bhi.

Well thank u for badhiya se padhne k liye jo bhi mistake lage fauran batana
 
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Amazing writing skills bro ..aab jony ki apni beheno se mulakaat hogi..lekin work mulakat kya rang layegi ye dekhne wali baat he..jhony kese apni sabhi beheno k dil khus karega ye important he.
Bhai flashback aur kitna update chalegaa?
20 25 Update bas kam ya jyada bhi ho sakti hai.thank you so much sath bane rahe
iso liye badi badi upadte de raha hu jaldi se khstm ho jaye
 
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