Thank you kane dude .Bahut behatrin updated...
Ismein ek baat toh saaf hai kahin na kahin BALA kuchh na kuchh toh gadbad kar raha hai ho Sakta hai ki maa saath na ho ya fir unhe pata na ho ki BALA ke intention kya hai aur kyunki unki baton se toh yahi lagta hai ki unhe kuchh bhi pata nahi lekin saath hi apne 17 saal se bichhade huye bete se pyar dikhane ki bajay unhe apne businesses partner ki narazgi ki jyada chinta hai toh ho sakta hai ki jaisa sabhi readers soch rahe Hain ki Shital aur Bala ke bich kuchh sambandh ho sakta hai kyunki iske bhi chances hain Bala ne ho sakta hai ki akelepan ka fayda utha liya ho.
Toh iss matter me jyada kuchh nahi kah sakte hain.
Ab baat karte hain siya ki toh vah cute hone ke sath sath jiddi bhi hai jo ki hona bhi chahiye afterall sabse chhoti jo hai uski shaitaniya achchi lagi.
Saath ye bhi hai ki hero kuchh jyada hi conservative type ka dikh raha hai kyunki iss tarah apni chhoti bahan aur sath hi badi bahan ko unke kapdon ko lekar suna dena uski mansikta ko darshata hai ya fir ho sakta hai ki vah apni chudail premika ke shraap se darte huye aisa kar raha ho taki usko apni bahnon ke prati attraction feel na ho....
Overall bahut hi shandaar updated,
Aise hi lage raho ummid ki axi kahani Puri hote huye dekhenge .....
mujhe to laga tha ab tak ki story par revie denge well thanks for this
story me abhi family life hi hai 2upddat aur fir story bilkul badal jayegi.thirill suspence drama kafi dikhega aur fir adventure har kirdar apne aap me uniqe hoga.
hero conservative hai ye shuru se hi story me dikhta aa raha hai america me isliye uski ye life jyada show hui nahi kyoki usme sab uski parwarish ke according tha uski family me yahan diffrent suition hai kuch esa hoga jisse hero badal jayega esi sonch bhi change ho jayegi.
ek baat puchni hai ans jarur karna .
story likhne ka tarika thik hai flow etc. Thik hai kyoki kai readrs jaa chuke hai kafi d motivate hu .