Fantasy Dhadkan ( Fallen love ) { Incest , Suspense , Thrill , Romance , Magic }

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Update 61

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Mai usko khoya dekh jor se chillaya jisse woh hosh me aai or fauran car mai baith gai... oR kuch hi der me meri car hawa se baatain krne lagi.. woh pure raaste ek tak mujhe dekh rhi thi magar kuch boli nhi...

Ki Tabhi Car rok maine use utatne ka ishara kiya...

Ab aage..

Magr Woh Abhi bhi mujhe dekh rhi thi.. mai fir chillaya.. toh woh hosh mai aa kr hadbda gai oR fir jaldi se car se utr gai..

Mujhe uski aisi halat dekh badi hasi aai oR pyaar bhi bhut.. jaB merese na ruka gya toh maine aage badh kr use bahoon me kas liya.. pehle usne virodh kiya lekin maine usse nhi choda..

Fir usne bhi haar maan li oR mujhe kass liya apni bahoon me... Kuch der aise hi rehne k baad maine use alg kr uske chehre ko dekha mujhe bhut dukh hua.. uska poora chehra aasun se bhiga hua tha.. oR woh dheere dheere sisak rhi thi..

Maine ek hath aage kr uske chin ko pkd upr kiya.. toh usne ek baar mere trf dekha dir dobara aankhen band kr li.. ise maine ishara samjh dheere dheere apne hoth uske hothon k pass le gya..

Uske horh thar tharane lage.. fiR jaise hi meri saans uski saans se mili mai peeche ht gya oR usko chod diya..

( Pehli baar kisi ladki ka GCPD { like KLPD } hua bhut mja aaya likh kr bhi )

Mujhe kuch na krte dekh jaise hi usne aankhen khol mujhe dekha toh mai side mai khada uski halt pr hass rha tha... Jise dekh woH gusse me meri trf badne lagi...

Awaaj... Betaa.. ab tu gya..

Mai ek baar musra kr use dekha or andar ki trf daud lga di.. mujhe bhaagta dekh woh bhi mere picche baagne lagi...

Kiyara... ( Gusse me ) Ruko bhaagte khan ho mai tumhe chudungi nhi..

Mai... ( Plt kr haste hue ) pehle pkd kr toh dikhao...

Kiyara... Ruko jao ABHI warna tumhari kher nhi..

Mai bina kuch sune bhaagta rha.. oiche se woh mujhe baar baar rukne ko bolti rhi mgr me nhi ruka... oR ek hall me ghuss gya peeche peeche woh bhi mere kamre mai aa gai... Mai ek kusri pr baitha has uski halt dekh hass rha tha..

Poore chehre or baal bikhre hue buri trh haanf rhi h... oR gusse mai dono hath kamar pr rakh mujhe dekh rhi hai...

Kiyara... Ab khan bhaagoge bacchu...

Mai... Please bhagwaan k liye mujhe...

Kiyara... Tum koi cheez thodi ho jo bhagwaan k liye chod doon..

oR dheere dheere meRi trf aage badhne lgi...

Mai... Dekho mujhe door rho warna mai shor macha dunga...

Kiyara... Macha shoR jitnA machana h mchcha... Mai bhi dekhti hoon kon rokta h mujhe...

Or mere pass aakr dono pair idhar udhr kr meri goad mai baith gai... Iss waqt uske chehre pr wohi purani muskaan wapas aa chuki thi... Jise dekh mujhe bhut khusi hui...

Kiyara... ( Mere chehre pr hath ferte hue ) Kab tk apni yeh kaatil jawani humse chupa kr rakhoge jaaneman...

Mai... Khabardaar jo mujhe hath lgaya toh door rho mujhe..

Kiyara... ( Haste hue ) Aise kaise jaane man aaj toh mai sab kuch jhootha kr dungi..

Mai... Chod mujhe kamini tere ghar me baap bhai nhi h kya..

Kiyara... Baap bhi h or bHai bhi.. bass ek khaSam ( pati ) ki jarurat h tu aaja...

Mai... Tumhe kuch sharm nhi aati kya... Bdi hi badtmeez ho..

Kiyara... Kya kre jaaneman sabko aati nhi meri jaati nhi..

oR. Aage badh mujhe kass kr apne hoth mere hothon pr rkh diye.. or jor jor se choosne lgi fir alag hokr..

Kiyara... Aaah haa ha.. kya raseele hoth h tere... Jee krta h inhe kha jaun..

Mai.. kha jaoge toh dobara kaise inhe choos paoge...

Kiyara... Jubaan ladaate ho mujhse..

Mai... Abhi khan ladai hai..

oR uske kuch samjhne se pehle khich kr uske hoth pr hoth rkh diye or choosne lga... Is achaank hue humle se woh hadbda gai.. magr maine use koi mauka na dekr uski jeebh ko pakd choosne lga..

Dhere dhere woh bhi mera sath dene lagi or uske hath mere balon mai chalne lage.. kuch hi der mai hum dono mashoosh ho gye.. or achanak hi mere hath uske narm untouched boobs pr kass gye oR maine unhe masal diya.. jisse kiyara k muh se ssiiiiiiihhh siskaari nikl gai...

Usne aankh khol ek baar mujhe dekha or fir band kr li... Dhere dhere hum dono garam ho gye or mere hath jor jor se uske boobs pr chalne lage... woh bhi madhosi mai khoyi hui apni kamar mere kadak ho chuke lund pr chalane lagi..

Aaahhhh ummmmmhhhh ssiiiiiiii... ABHI......

AAAHHHaa.... UmmmHhhHh..

Kr saiskte hue woh mere kadhe pr gir gai... Or gehri gehri saansen lene lagi... Maine bhi use apne seene se lga liya...

Kuch der aise hi rhne k baad maine use alg kr dekha toh shrm se usne apni aankhen band kr rakhi thi maine aage badh uski naak ko kaat liya..

Usne auccchhh kr ankhen khol di.. oR mujhe hasta paa kr mukko ki barsaat kr di..

Mai.. ( sab ready hai na.. it's show time )

Awaaj... Theek hai... abhi lo...


To be continued...

 

[Sanju]

Mast update bhai but chota laga

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update

Thanks bhai..

Keep smiling...

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Welcome back bhai. Kiyara ko to surprise melga ji milega lekin hume us suspense se chutkara milega jo itande din se humara sir dard kar raha tha. Trisha konkya hua wo kyu aise chup 2 ke dekh rahi he apne hero ko.
Waiting 4 next update

Ty so much bhaiyaaaa... Aapko dekh bhut khushi hui...
Suspence k abhi 2 flash back aayenge.... Toh uske liye keep waiting...
And Trisha k liye.. uodaup 58 padhiye... till then cheers.. keep loving..

Keep smiling..

 

[Acme]

Superb writing... excellent romantic update... keep writing

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Jabardast....
Bhai aapka kya kahna...
Ekdum same flow me update diya he...
Aageka intzaar rahega...
Or is baar bhai agar aap bhag gaye to me aapke dono pero k bichh me jordaar kick maroonga...
Fir mat bolna ki nahi bola....
Me kafi time se ek silent reader ki tarah kahani padta tha lekin aapko wapas aata dwkh badaaa achha laga...
Thank you bhai story ko continue kari...

Are bhai bhai.. ty so much yaara...
Bilkull bhai.. but i have protection to stop it... Or bikill yaar story vonconti chalegi.. bas aise hi support Chahiye aapse meko... Till then keep loving...

Keep smiling...

 

[aka3829]

Wah kya update diya he. Is update ko padh kr laga ki purana abhaysmarty wapas aa gya he. Yaar dil se bol raha hu ki bahut miss kiya tumhe aur tumhari story ko. Kyuki tum un kuch lekhako me se ho jo readers ki ciritisim ko bhi ek chunoti ki tarah lete ho aur agle update aisa detw ho ki wo reader khud tumhari tarif karne ke liye majboor ho jata he. Is update ko thoda aur bada kar sakte the. Sayad time ki kami hogi. Lekin fir bhi is update me ye surprize wala chapter pura karna hi chahiye tha. Pure update me wo GCPD wala sabd bahut mast tha.
Waiting 4 next update

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update ke sath wapsi.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ye baat sahi h ki writing skill thodi hili hui h.
Lekin koi baat nahi , update wakai behtareen tha.
Kuchh to sardard kam hoga ab to.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

Ty so much bhai aapko bhi dobara dekh khushi hui...
Bilkull bhai mai hoon hi crocin.. he he he.. jokes a part...
I know bhai dheere dheere aayegi but aaj ki update me nhi dikhegi aapko.. and kuch nya bhi lagega... till then cheers.. keep loving..

Keep smiling...

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Awsm update bro

Ty bhai..

Keep smiling...

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Super fantastic update bhai... excellent... keep writing.. waiting for next update

Thanks bhai...

Keep smiling...