Fantasy Dhadkan ( Fallen love ) { Incest , Suspense , Thrill , Romance , Magic }

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Excellent writing bhai.. superb update.. keep writing.. waiting for next update

Ty so much bhai....

Keep smiling...

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Update.... 64

Previous....

Mai Ghabra gya idhar udgar dekhne lga mgr mujhe koi dikhai nhi diya... Rone ki awaaaz itni dardnaak thi ki meri aankhon se aanson behne lge... mujhe kuch samjh nhi aa rha tha yeh kon hai.. tabhi woh awaaaz bnd ho gai...

Di.. ( mind to mind ) Betu... Tumm theekk toh ho...

Mai... haan Di or yeh awaaj kaisi hai mujhe pta nhi kya ho gya tha..

Dil... Yeh toh mujhe bhi nhi pta bhai...

Ab aage...

Abhi mai kuch or sochta usse pehle... mousam badalne lga or achaank se tej tej Hawaiian chalne lgi.... Bijli kadakne lagi... Kuch hi der mai hawa inti tej ho gai ki aas paas kuch bhi dikai nhi de rha tha...

Yeh toofaan kuch hi der me shant ho gya... maine aas pass dekha.... charo trf ped paudhe gire pde the... Maine car se bahar nikl jayja liya toh mahoul ek dum shant ho chuka tha... Sab jgh khamoshi chai hui thi...

Magar hairat ki baat thi ki itni aandhi me bhi meri car tas se mas nhi hui thi abhi mai iss baare mai soch hi rha tha ki aasmaan se mujhe ek tej Roshini neeche ki trf aati dikhai padi...

Di... ( Mind to mind ) yeh kya ho rha hai.. betu mujhe darr lg rha hai.. tu jaldi mere pass aa..

Mai... Mujhe bhi nhi pta di.. lekin dekhna toh padega na aakhir kya hai yeh...

Di... Nhi mujhe pta nhi kyun ghabrahat ho rhi tu please wapas aaja.. ( or rone lgi )

Mai.. Aacha theek h aap roiye mt mai aa rha...

Magar jaise hi maine plt kr car ka gate khola.. Ek tej Roshini ka gola mere aankhon k saamne gira... Roshini itni jayda thi ki mujhse kuch bhi dikhai nhi de rha tha... Or majbooran mujhe apni aankhen bnd krni pdi...

Kuch hi der me sab kuch shant ho gya maine aankh khol kr dekha toh dekhta rh gya... samne ek 20 ya 22 saal ka ladka mujhe dekh kr muskura rha tha... uske chehre pr itna tej tha ki mai murkho ki trh use ghoore jaa rha tha...

Itna khoobsurat aadmi maine aaj tk nhi dekha tha uski woh aankhe... Mai ek tk use dekh rha tha...

Di... Yeeehhhh kooonnn hh beetuuu... Merrraaa.. dilll ghabbraaa rhaa hai... Ttuuu aaagee mttt jaanaa...

Abbi mai kuch bolta usse pehle...

Aadmi... Swaagat nhi kroge humara...

Jaise hi mere kaano me yeh sabd pade mere or Di k muhh se ek sath hairat bhare andaaz se nikla... Shadow....

Shadow... Ha ha ha... Bhut khoob Rakhsak Sahi pehchana... Bhut saalon se tumhari talash thi... jo ab jaa kr poori hui h... Aakhir kaar maine tumhe dhoond hi nikala...

Magr mai abhi bhi hairat se use dekh rha tha..

Shadow.... Aise murkho ki trh mt dekho... Tumhe abhi isi waqt mere sath chalna hoga...

Mai.. ( hadbda gya fir kuch sambhal kr ) mai kaise maan loon tum shadow ho jabki tum toh mujhe koi 20 22 saal ke ladke lgte ho... Khi aisa toh nhi tum mujhe akele dekh mera fayada uthna chahte ho...

Shadow... Chiii chhiii... Mai aise koi shonk nhi rakhta yeh tum dharti waasi hi kro... Upr se 377 bhi htwa kr sab jyaj bhi kr diya... Ab toh sala khule aam mouj chalti h tumhari...

Mai... Dekha tum jhooth bol rhe ho.. tumhe yeh sab kaise pta bhala...

Shadow... Mai poore bramhand ka gyaan rakhta hoon toh tum kon se khet k baigan ho...

Mai... Baigan nhi mooli hota h..

Shadow.... Tu topic mt change kr... tujhe abhi mere sath chalna hoga warna tu jaanta nhi me kya kr hoon...

Mai... Haan haan maloom hai chal apne baap ko mt bta...

Shadow... ( Talwaar nikalte hue ) kya kha tumne...

Mai... Bhai glti se nikl gya jubaan fisal gai meri.. usko andar kr mai chal toh rha hoon...
...

Or mai bhi...

Maine plt kr dekha Sonali Di mere peeche hi khadi thi... . . Unke chehre pr ghabrahat or dar saaf dikh rha tha.. maine kuch bolta usse pehle unhone mujhe bahoon mai bhar liya... Or unki rulai phoot gai...

Mai... ( Aansu ponchte hue ) Kya hua Di mai theek hoon aap sambhalo khud ko...

Di... Nhi betu tu khi nhi jayega mujhe bhut ghabrahat ho rhi hai... Or jayega toh mai bhi sath hi chalungi...
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Mai... Di aap samjhne ki koshish kro.. maa Papa ka khyl rakhne k liye bhi toh koi hona Chahiye na.... Mai jld hi wapas aa jagunga...

Di... ( Or kas kr gale lgte hue ) woo sab mujhe nhi pta mai bhi sath chalungi...

Mai... Aacha theek hai ruko pehle ghar pr phone kr doon.. warna sab pareshaan honge...

Shadow... Uski koi jarurat nhi hai... Mai tumhe jiss time line se le jaa rha hoon usi mai chod jaunga jisse tumhara samay aage nhi badhega..

Mai Or.. Di... ( Chaunkte hue ) kyaa... ?

Shadow... Kanpur me hadtaal hai kya tumhare... Tumhe jiss time line se le jaa rha usi mai chod dunga jisse samay aage nhi badhega or tum isi jgh pr isi samay phunch jaoge...

Mai... Kuch bhi.. bharta samjh rakha hai kya...

Di... ( Sir pr hath maarte hue ) buddhu Woh halwa hota hai... betu tumhe muhavre aate nhi toh kyu bolte ho...

Abhi mai unhe kuch bolta usse pehle...

Shadow... ( Man mai kuch bolte hue ) simsim...

Or aasamaan se ek Roshini humsab pr padi... Di ne mujhe kass k gale lga aankhe band kr li
Or sath mai maine bhi... Kuch hi der mai hum ruke maine aankhe khol kr dekha toh meri aankhe fati ki fati rh gai... Yehi haal Di ka bhi tha...

To be continued...

 

[The king]

Nice update bhai par chota he or ye shadow kon he

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Nice update bhai par chota he or ye shadow kon he

Shadow... Ko janne k liye page no. 141 pr update no. 56 padho samjh jaoge ..
Till then cheers..

Keep smiling...

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Sorry Doston aaj bhut kaam me fass gya tha... Isiliye jitna jo saka utna likhne ki koshish ki kl bhi busy rhunga....
But promise parso... Accha bda update dunga...
Till then cheers...
Isi se kasm chala lo...

Keep smiling...

 

[The king]

Shadow... Ko janne k liye page no. 141 pr update no. 56 padho samjh jaoge ..
Till then cheers..

Keep smiling...

Thanks bhai batane ke liye wese to mene aap ke sare update pahle hi padhe he par lamba time ho gaya he is liye kuch bhul gaya hu or kuch yad he

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Thanks bhai batane ke liye wese to mene aap ke sare update pahle hi padhe he par lamba time ho gaya he is liye kuch bhul gaya hu or kuch yad he

Isiliye bhai me story start krne se pehle...
Character intro diya.. jisse kuch kuch uss baare mai yaad aa jaye....

 

[Sanju]

Mast update bhai ab sayad dusre dimension me inki veerta failagi dekhte hai aage kya hota hai aur konsi no ko lata hai waha se

 

[Acme]

Superb writing bhai.. excellent update.. keep writing

 

[aka3829]

Wah kya update diya he. Kehne ko to rakshak he lekin shadow ne use aise utha liya jaise koi bachha kisi pille ko khelne ke liye utha leta ho. Ur ye sona ke paas teleporting ki power kab aur kaise aa gayi. Waise kuch bhi tha dono ke dialog padke hasi bahut aayi.
Waiti g 4 next update