Fantasy Dharak

[maya1]

Update 2

Flasback ............

RAmpur gauv me sb log kushal the thakur pariwar ki taraf se sb prakar ki madat mil rhi thi ...
Nageshwar ji apne shasan me kisi bhi pr dabav nhi dalte the ki sb uni ki gulami kre sbko smman dete the inhi ke kadmo me chalte hue inke beto me bhi yhi gunn the ....
Inke bete sbhi ka smman krte the aur gauv vale bhi inka smmman krte the dono hi bete bde hi mehnati the ....

Sabhi beto ki padhai gav se hi Hui .....
Dono bhai bhen business se related jankariyan bachpan se hi ghr me milti rhti thi jisse sbka man business me lgne lga .....
Suneel Jo bda tha vo city1(xxx) ke college maharana pratap management and technology se mba krne chala gya...

Anand gav me hi pdh rha tha sath me apni kheti ko bhi dekh rekh me lga hua tha abhi vah 11 th me tha ..

Suneel's point of view

Suneel college me phuch gya admition lene ke bad 1st year nikl gya padhte Hui 2nd year me suneel ki mulakaat Rani se hui aur friendship ho gyi dheere dheere dosti pyar me badalne lgi ....
Dono ko sath rhna axa lgne lga ase hi mba complete ho gya dono ka aur dono apne apne ghar to chale gye pr inke pyar ko parwan ke tar abhi bhi top gear me chal rhe the ......

Rani family


(Somveer shingh - sonpur ke thakur h aur ye apne area me dabdaba rkhte h inke chir pratidvandi nageshwar ji h inki ravelry business me chali aa rhi
Radha- housewife apne baccho ko bhut pyar krti h rani inki ladli h inke do bete ek beti h

Surjan shingh - ye apna pura business sambhalte h inke hotel chain h inke ek beti h aur ek beta
Rupa - apne nam ke jaisi h ye apni beti se bhut pyar krti h
Avni- bhut ki culbuli saitan h Ghar ki ladli h
Rajeev- padhai me brilliant h body bhi kafi katarnak h
Durjan - ye kafi katarnak h ye clothes factories ko smbhalte h jo kafi jagaho pe faili h ...
Madhuri - ye Apne bchoo se kafi pyar krti h inke 1 beti h ek beta h
Sanjeev - bhut ki bahadur aur nidar h apne bhai bhebo ki dal bn kar rhta h
Neelu - kafi sararti aur padhai me bhi top krti h

Rani - rani kafi suljee aur sbko Prem krne Vali h ye mba ki padhai ki h aur suneel se pyar krti h)

Suneel apne ghar pahuch gya aur usne apne pita ke business ko sambhalne lga idhar anand bhi mba kr ke apne business ko badhane lga inka bussiness hotel chain , clothes factories, malls h ........

Dheere dheere samay jata rha aur ab shadi ke rishtey Ane lge suneel ke par suneel ko to Rani se pyar tha .......
Suneel ne apne ghar me btaya ki vah thakur somveer ki beti se shadi Krna chahta h pr nageshwar chahte the vah apne dost ki beti se shadi krai ........
Isi me suneel aur rani ne nirnay liya ki hamare ma bapu ji to rishtey ko manenge nhi ham log bhag ke shadi kr lete h......
Aur fir hua yhi dono bhaag ke shaadi kr li ...
Aur idhar jab somveer aur nageshwar ji ko pta chala to dono hi bhadak uthe....

Nageshwar ji ne to suneel ko apni jaydat se nikal diya aur ye ghoshna kr di ki ab rampur ka thakur mere bad anand hoga....

Idhar somveer ne bhi ailaan kr diya ki rani unke liye mar gyi h...

Suneel aur rani ne curt marriage kr li aur ab vah apne ghar ja nhi sakte the to vah up ko chod kr uttarakhand me ja bse ...
Samay apni raftar se chal rha tha aur suneel Private limited me ek post pe kam krne lga .. aur apne patni ke sang rhne lga . Sadharan jeevan jine lge samay beetta rha aur rani aur suneel apni jeevan ko smbhalte hui naye ayyam pe phuch rhe the.....

Roj rat ko suneel aur rani kee kamkrida hoti aur usi ke falswaroop rani pregnant ho gyi ...
Aise hi 9 months beet gye aur rani ke pet me ek din achanak dard hua aur use hospital me admit kraya gya ......

Aise hi vah subh gahri aa gyi jha apne hero Avinash ka jan hua ........
Nurse opretion theatre ke bahar nikalte hue suneel ko btaya ki apki patni ne bete ko janm diya h .....suneel Aaj kafi kush tha suneel ke dost bhi dekhne aye aur vo bhi kafi kush the kyoki bhatija jo aaya tha....


Suneel friends

(Raju - suneel ka friend sath ki private limited me kam krta tha
Mamta - ye kafi ache swabhav ki mahila h ye rani ko apni bdi bhen manti h)

Dheere dheere samay nikalta gya aur avi bhi bda hota gya suneel ka transfer Jaipur ho gya aur vah Jaipur settle ho gya.

Avinash( avi ) ka admition Jaipur school and College me kra Diya aur vo padhne lga aur isi tarah vo 11 th me aa gya ....

Avinash holidays me apne ma aur papa ke sath kl Manali ja rha tha car se ...

Avinash ke sabdo me chale gi story ab......

Maa - abhi tak so rha hoga use abhi to taiyar bhi hona h Jake dekhu utha ki nhi ...
Mai - mai Aram se bekhbar so rha tha
Maa - mere room ke enter krti h dekho kaisa so rha ek dum masoom h mera beta ....
Avi.. oo .avi uth ja chlna nhi kya
Mom sone do n abhi time h aisa kro aap bhi aa jao aur mom ko luta lete hu ...
Mom - uth ja papa jg gye unhone dekha tu abhi tk so rha gussa krenge
Jaise hi papa ka nam suna jhattt se uth gya aur ghus gya toilet me
Mom hasti hui chli gyi man me sochte hui kitna darta h apne papa se ....
Mom - ajji uth jao apka beta bhi uth gya aap h ki so rhe hme chlna bhi h
Dad - darling tum bhi abhi so jao ya ek round ho jai mja aa jayeyega ma ko apne seene se lgate hui kha tha.....
Mom - dhattt abhi bhi aap vaise hi h...
Dad - tum bhi to lgatar khoobsoorat hoti ja rhi ho ...kaise n mn ho lgta h nichod du ......
Mom - hatto ji sharam nhi ati beta jawan ho gya aur apko Masti sujji rhti h...
Dad - are usme kya apni patni ko pyar bhi na kre ab btao bhi...
Mom - axa ji kiss krne lgi aur kux minute me dono alag hote h
Dad bathroom me chle jate nahane ma bhi bahar aa jati h....

Aur sb log taiyar ho kar niklte h safar pe four wheeler se dad gadi chala rhe the bagal me mom baithi thi peeche Mai tha aur apne safar ka anand lete hue ja rhe the...


Flashback end........

 

[maya1]

Update 3.~~ {1st mission}

Ab tak
Aur sb log taiyar ho kar niklte h safar pe four wheeler se dad gadi chala rhe the bagal me mom baithi thi peeche Mai tha aur apne safar ka anand lete hue ja rhe the...

Ab age
Ghar se nikl ke hm log national highway pe aa gye the aur gadi apni raftar se chal rhi thi khusnuma mahaul holidays mnane ka jonoon charam pe isi tarah hm log hasi khusi age bd rhe the....
Dopehar ka waqt tha hm logon ko bhook lgi thi .....
Avi...dad bhook lgi h aap khi pe rok lena ..
Dad... don't worry beta abhi Jo bhi restaurant ayega whi pe rook jayenge ...
Mom.... Hmm kafi der bhi ho chuki h hm logo ko baithe baithe avi to piche baithe game khel rha tha iska bdhiha h ...
Avi...mom ap bhi aa jayiye squade me khelenge
Ha..ha..ha..
Dad...ye mere sath khelengi squad me kyo ji...
Mom..ohhh Mai apke sath n khel riii
Isi tarah bate ke rhe the ki restaurant dikh gya hme to dad ne side me car lga di aur ander phuch gye hm log . .
Dad...sardar ji jra kadhai paneer lga dijiye..
Sardar ji... Oh kake abhi lg riha h..
Hm log table pe baith gye aur waiter ake service provide krne lga ..
Avi... Ummmmm kya paneer h sardar jii mja aa gya.... Mom ap bhi seekh lo
Dad.... H beta tu shi kh rha
Mom.... Apka matlab h ki mai khana nhi pati..
Dad... Are bhagywan maine aisa kb kha ...ye kh rha tha faltu me fasa diya he bhagwan bacha liyo
Mom... Bhagwan n ane wale bs ap ghar chlo batati hu aur tu avi thaher ja batati hu
Avi ke Kan pakdte hui kha tha..
Avi...mom bakhsh dijiye bacche ki jan logi kya kyu dad shi kha n apki jan kisi dusre ki jan ke sath khilwad kr rhi...
Dad... Hahahaha
Mom... hahahaha..kisi dusre ki jan..
Isi tarah ki bato ke beech dad ne payment Kiya aur hmm log nikal pde Manali ki taraf
National Highway pe gadi de Dana Dan bhag rhi thi aise hi udhamchaukdi machate hui bdhe ja rhe the hmm..
Aur isi tarah hm log Manali enter kr liye the aur hotel ki taraf bdh chale
Dad ne pahle hi hotel book kr rkha tha aur hm log room me pahuch kr shower lene lge..
Fir mai headfone lgai hui mom ko bta ke bahar nikl aya hotel ke ..
Avi ...Mai age ki taraf ja hi rha tha ki honi ko kux aur likha jo ho ke hi rhti h ..isi quote ke madenajar mere sath bhi aisa hi hua ..
Ek baccha rode pe tha aur samne se car aa rhi thi teji se maine dekha aur bache ki taraf jump lga di bache ko to safe kr diya pr khud ko safe n kr Paya aur accident ho gya mera..
Mujhe vha se ladke ki mom ne hospital le gyi aur mom dad bhi pahuch gye the ....
Mom .... Ye kaise ho gya doctor koi jyada serious injury to nhi ayi...
Doctor... Mam injury to h jo hosh me n aye to kux kha nhi ja skta...
Isi tarah 1 din beet gya per hosh nhi aya.
Doctors apni jee Tod kosis ke rhe the pr result abhi tk nhi nikla tha ...
Sab log bahar baithe the aur mere pas bhi koi n tha usi waqt mujhe hosh aya ki tabhi..

[*Ding*....system activated....*ding*]

Avi... Ye awaaz to mere ander se aa rhi per ye kaise possible h kon ho tum samne aao. .
[System... Hello host I am system...]
Avi... Ye kya nam h aur ho kon tum jo ye sb bol rhe ho ....
[System..aap hi koi naam de dijiye mai to universe me se tahal rhi thi ki usi pal apki jan jane wali thi to mai aap me pravesh kr gyi ..]
Avi..huuuiuuuu...
Axa mai nam to mmmmm h yad aya tum ne meri jam bachai h aur aisi chize duniya me hoti bhi nhi to tum pari type ho isiliye tumhara nam pari...
[System...ding..name changed by host ..it's pari]
Avi... Pariiiiii. Ab mujhe ye bhi bta do ki ye system kya kya kar skta h..
[Pari... System apko koi bhi task dega jisko complete krte ho apko points aur currency bhi mile gi jis se ap koi bhi chiz khareed sakoge..]
*Ding*
[System lev1.....]
[Currency skill reward by system it's free
Aur app apna stats bhi dekh skte h..
Bs apko mn me bolna hoga "check stats"...]
Avi....hmmm check stats
*Stats* :
[Strength - 15/100
Intelligence -11/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 9/100]

[Pari.. yar ye stats kafi week h]
Avi...hmm Mai janta hu ...
[Pari .... Are koi tension nhi lene ka mai hu n]
Avi ...thanks pari
Isi tarah ki bato ke beech nurse ayi aur usne dekha ki mai roof ko taaad rha hu ..
Vo bhagti hui gyi doctors ko btaya ki patient ko hosh aa gya... Ye sun doctor mere room ki taraf nikle aur enter kiye mere room me....
Mera check up krne ke baad vah bahar jane lge
Mom .. kya hua doctor ...
Doctor.... patient ko hosh aa gya he is fine
Itna sunte hi daud padi peeche dad aur us ladke ki maa bhi aa gyi..
Mom...Mera laal kaisa h tu meri to Jann hi nikle gyi thi tere bina mera kya hota ..
Avi ...mom relaxe kux hua to nhi n
Lady... Thank you beta tumne mere sahare ko bccha ke upkaar Kiya h mere uper..
Avi... Are aunty thanks kaisa ye mera farz tha...
Dad .. aur nhi to kya mere bete ne apna farz hi nibhaya h isme koi thanks khne wali bat hi nhi h
Lady... Ye to app logo ka badappn h ..
Isi tarah ye bate hoti rhi aur fir wo lady chali gyi thi rah gye to sirf hm log .. kha aye to ghooomne aur aa gye hospital aisa maine bola tha ..
Mom ....jyada nhi bolne lga tu bs theek ho ja axe se khabar loongi...
Dad ... Areee bas bhi kro yr use rest krne do
Fir 2 din bad muzhe discharge mil gya aur is beeeh meri aur pari ki dher sari bate Hui ..
Hmmm log hotel phuche aur fir doosre din ghoomne nikl liye aur poore Manali ko ghooma aur adventure Kiya aur idhar uder ghoom rhe the
Agle din hm rafting krne nikl gye ki tabhi .....

*Ding*
[The old man save rafting accident
Reward- 60 point and 50L
Otherwise you loose system]

Avi... Mai sochne lga isi time ye task ana tha aur kabhi aa jata ... Ab to Krna hi pdega..

*Ding*
[ Navigate ...start
Straight 200m then left 100m then right 200m
And reach destination
Time period 20 minutes ]

Ab mai chal pda jaise jaise pari navigate kiye ja rhi thi vaise ja rha tha ki dekha old man kafi buri tarah jakhmi ho chuke h jo unhe imidiate nhi bachaya gya to he is no more...
Mai age badh kafi massakat se unhe waha se nikal ke medical store pe le ja kr unki marham Patti karai aur vo mujhe dekh rhe aur bs thanks khe ja rhe the...
Avi .... Koi bat nhi dada ji ye to Mera farz tha ..
Old man ... Thanks beta Aaj kal koi kisi ki madat nhi krta waise mai murti...aur beta tumhara kya nam h..
Avi... Avinash nam h par sb log mujhe avi bulate h..
Murti.. avi ye mera card lo kabhi bhi mumbai ana to mere pas jaroor ana...[real estate ka bussiness]
Avi... Ok dada ji mai jaroor aunga axa mai chalta hu ...
Aur vha se nikl jata hu...

*Ding*

[60 points have been rewarded.and 50L created in system acount]

[System has reached Level - 2]

[Congratulations master!!!Woohoo~]

Mere chehre pr khusi saaf jhalak rhi thi.
Avi.. pari inn points ka kya kre ...
[Pari...inse apne stats kam se kam 50 sbko kr lo]
Pari se avi ko 60 point mile the unhe invest Krna tha ab...
Usne 20 points strength me daale, 30 points intelligence aur 10 points appearance me.
Ab uske stats kuch iss prakaar the
*Stats* :
[Strength - 35/100
Intelligence - 41/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 19/100]
In stats ka asar ab agle morning ko hi dikhega..... .. !!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Like kar dena pasand aaye toh!

 

[Sidh]

Update 3.~~ {1st mission}

Ab tak
Aur sb log taiyar ho kar niklte h safar pe four wheeler se dad gadi chala rhe the bagal me mom baithi thi peeche Mai tha aur apne safar ka anand lete hue ja rhe the...

Ab age
Ghar se nikl ke hm log national highway pe aa gye the aur gadi apni raftar se chal rhi thi khusnuma mahaul holidays mnane ka jonoon charam pe isi tarah hm log hasi khusi age bd rhe the....
Dopehar ka waqt tha hm logon ko bhook lgi thi .....
Avi...dad bhook lgi h aap khi pe rok lena ..
Dad... don't worry beta abhi Jo bhi restaurant ayega whi pe rook jayenge ...
Mom.... Hmm kafi der bhi ho chuki h hm logo ko baithe baithe avi to piche baithe game khel rha tha iska bdhiha h ...
Avi...mom ap bhi aa jayiye squade me khelenge
Ha..ha..ha..
Dad...ye mere sath khelengi squad me kyo ji...
Mom..ohhh Mai apke sath n khel riii
Isi tarah bate ke rhe the ki restaurant dikh gya hme to dad ne side me car lga di aur ander phuch gye hm log . .
Dad...sardar ji jra kadhai paneer lga dijiye..
Sardar ji... Oh kake abhi lg riha h..
Hm log table pe baith gye aur waiter ake service provide krne lga ..
Avi... Ummmmm kya paneer h sardar jii mja aa gya.... Mom ap bhi seekh lo
Dad.... H beta tu shi kh rha
Mom.... Apka matlab h ki mai khana nhi pati..
Dad... Are bhagywan maine aisa kb kha ...ye kh rha tha faltu me fasa diya he bhagwan bacha liyo
Mom... Bhagwan n ane wale bs ap ghar chlo batati hu aur tu avi thaher ja batati hu
Avi ke Kan pakdte hui kha tha..
Avi...mom bakhsh dijiye bacche ki jan logi kya kyu dad shi kha n apki jan kisi dusre ki jan ke sath khilwad kr rhi...
Dad... Hahahaha
Mom... hahahaha..kisi dusre ki jan..
Isi tarah ki bato ke beech dad ne payment Kiya aur hmm log nikal pde Manali ki taraf
National Highway pe gadi de Dana Dan bhag rhi thi aise hi udhamchaukdi machate hui bdhe ja rhe the hmm..
Aur isi tarah hm log Manali enter kr liye the aur hotel ki taraf bdh chale
Dad ne pahle hi hotel book kr rkha tha aur hm log room me pahuch kr shower lene lge..
Fir mai headfone lgai hui mom ko bta ke bahar nikl aya hotel ke ..
Avi ...Mai age ki taraf ja hi rha tha ki honi ko kux aur likha jo ho ke hi rhti h ..isi quote ke madenajar mere sath bhi aisa hi hua ..
Ek baccha rode pe tha aur samne se car aa rhi thi teji se maine dekha aur bache ki taraf jump lga di bache ko to safe kr diya pr khud ko safe n kr Paya aur accident ho gya mera..
Mujhe vha se ladke ki mom ne hospital le gyi aur mom dad bhi pahuch gye the ....
Mom .... Ye kaise ho gya doctor koi jyada serious injury to nhi ayi...
Doctor... Mam injury to h jo hosh me n aye to kux kha nhi ja skta...
Isi tarah 1 din beet gya per hosh nhi aya.
Doctors apni jee Tod kosis ke rhe the pr result abhi tk nhi nikla tha ...
Sab log bahar baithe the aur mere pas bhi koi n tha usi waqt mujhe hosh aya ki tabhi..

[*Ding*....system activated....*ding*]

Avi... Ye awaaz to mere ander se aa rhi per ye kaise possible h kon ho tum samne aao. .
[System... Hello host I am system...]
Avi... Ye kya nam h aur ho kon tum jo ye sb bol rhe ho ....
[System..aap hi koi naam de dijiye mai to universe me se tahal rhi thi ki usi pal apki jan jane wali thi to mai aap me pravesh kr gyi ..]
Avi..huuuiuuuu...
Axa mai nam to mmmmm h yad aya tum ne meri jam bachai h aur aisi chize duniya me hoti bhi nhi to tum pari type ho isiliye tumhara nam pari...
[System...ding..name changed by host ..it's pari]
Avi... Pariiiiii. Ab mujhe ye bhi bta do ki ye system kya kya kar skta h..
[Pari... System apko koi bhi task dega jisko complete krte ho apko points aur currency bhi mile gi jis se ap koi bhi chiz khareed sakoge..]
*Ding*
[System lev1.....]
[Currency skill reward by system it's free
Aur app apna stats bhi dekh skte h..
Bs apko mn me bolna hoga "check stats"...]
Avi....hmmm check stats
*Stats* :
[Strength - 15/100
Intelligence -11/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 9/100]

[Pari.. yar ye stats kafi week h]
Avi...hmm Mai janta hu ...
[Pari .... Are koi tension nhi lene ka mai hu n]
Avi ...thanks pari
Isi tarah ki bato ke beech nurse ayi aur usne dekha ki mai roof ko taaad rha hu ..
Vo bhagti hui gyi doctors ko btaya ki patient ko hosh aa gya... Ye sun doctor mere room ki taraf nikle aur enter kiye mere room me....
Mera check up krne ke baad vah bahar jane lge
Mom .. kya hua doctor ...
Doctor.... patient ko hosh aa gya he is fine
Itna sunte hi daud padi peeche dad aur us ladke ki maa bhi aa gyi..
Mom...Mera laal kaisa h tu meri to Jann hi nikle gyi thi tere bina mera kya hota ..
Avi ...mom relaxe kux hua to nhi n
Lady... Thank you beta tumne mere sahare ko bccha ke upkaar Kiya h mere uper..
Avi... Are aunty thanks kaisa ye mera farz tha...
Dad .. aur nhi to kya mere bete ne apna farz hi nibhaya h isme koi thanks khne wali bat hi nhi h
Lady... Ye to app logo ka badappn h ..
Isi tarah ye bate hoti rhi aur fir wo lady chali gyi thi rah gye to sirf hm log .. kha aye to ghooomne aur aa gye hospital aisa maine bola tha ..
Mom ....jyada nhi bolne lga tu bs theek ho ja axe se khabar loongi...
Dad ... Areee bas bhi kro yr use rest krne do
Fir 2 din bad muzhe discharge mil gya aur is beeeh meri aur pari ki dher sari bate Hui ..
Hmmm log hotel phuche aur fir doosre din ghoomne nikl liye aur poore Manali ko ghooma aur adventure Kiya aur idhar uder ghoom rhe the
Agle din hm rafting krne nikl gye ki tabhi .....

*Ding*
[The old man save rafting accident
Reward- 60 point and 50L
Otherwise you loose system]

Avi... Mai sochne lga isi time ye task ana tha aur kabhi aa jata ... Ab to Krna hi pdega..

*Ding*
[ Navigate ...start
Straight 200m then left 100m then right 200m
And reach destination
Time period 20 minutes ]

Ab mai chal pda jaise jaise pari navigate kiye ja rhi thi vaise ja rha tha ki dekha old man kafi buri tarah jakhmi ho chuke h jo unhe imidiate nhi bachaya gya to he is no more...
Mai age badh kafi massakat se unhe waha se nikal ke medical store pe le ja kr unki marham Patti karai aur vo mujhe dekh rhe aur bs thanks khe ja rhe the...
Avi .... Koi bat nhi dada ji ye to Mera farz tha ..
Old man ... Thanks beta Aaj kal koi kisi ki madat nhi krta waise mai murti...aur beta tumhara kya nam h..
Avi... Avinash nam h par sb log mujhe avi bulate h..
Murti.. avi ye mera card lo kabhi bhi mumbai ana to mere pas jaroor ana...[real estate ka bussiness]
Avi... Ok dada ji mai jaroor aunga axa mai chalta hu ...
Aur vha se nikl jata hu...

*Ding*

[60 points have been rewarded.and 50L created in system acount]

[System has reached Level - 2]

[Congratulations master!!!Woohoo~]

Mere chehre pr khusi saaf jhalak rhi thi.
Avi.. pari inn points ka kya kre ...
[Pari...inse apne stats kam se kam 50 sbko kr lo]
Pari se avi ko 60 point mile the unhe invest Krna tha ab...
Usne 20 points strength me daale, 30 points intelligence aur 10 points appearance me.
Ab uske stats kuch iss prakaar the
*Stats* :
[Strength - 35/100
Intelligence - 41/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 19/100]
In stats ka asar ab agle morning ko hi dikhega..... .. !!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Like kar dena pasand aaye toh!

Start to achi hai story ki bhai

 

[Achin_Saha18]

Update 3.~~ {1st mission}

Ab tak
Aur sb log taiyar ho kar niklte h safar pe four wheeler se dad gadi chala rhe the bagal me mom baithi thi peeche Mai tha aur apne safar ka anand lete hue ja rhe the...

Ab age
Ghar se nikl ke hm log national highway pe aa gye the aur gadi apni raftar se chal rhi thi khusnuma mahaul holidays mnane ka jonoon charam pe isi tarah hm log hasi khusi age bd rhe the....
Dopehar ka waqt tha hm logon ko bhook lgi thi .....
Avi...dad bhook lgi h aap khi pe rok lena ..
Dad... don't worry beta abhi Jo bhi restaurant ayega whi pe rook jayenge ...
Mom.... Hmm kafi der bhi ho chuki h hm logo ko baithe baithe avi to piche baithe game khel rha tha iska bdhiha h ...
Avi...mom ap bhi aa jayiye squade me khelenge
Ha..ha..ha..
Dad...ye mere sath khelengi squad me kyo ji...
Mom..ohhh Mai apke sath n khel riii
Isi tarah bate ke rhe the ki restaurant dikh gya hme to dad ne side me car lga di aur ander phuch gye hm log . .
Dad...sardar ji jra kadhai paneer lga dijiye..
Sardar ji... Oh kake abhi lg riha h..
Hm log table pe baith gye aur waiter ake service provide krne lga ..
Avi... Ummmmm kya paneer h sardar jii mja aa gya.... Mom ap bhi seekh lo
Dad.... H beta tu shi kh rha
Mom.... Apka matlab h ki mai khana nhi pati..
Dad... Are bhagywan maine aisa kb kha ...ye kh rha tha faltu me fasa diya he bhagwan bacha liyo
Mom... Bhagwan n ane wale bs ap ghar chlo batati hu aur tu avi thaher ja batati hu
Avi ke Kan pakdte hui kha tha..
Avi...mom bakhsh dijiye bacche ki jan logi kya kyu dad shi kha n apki jan kisi dusre ki jan ke sath khilwad kr rhi...
Dad... Hahahaha
Mom... hahahaha..kisi dusre ki jan..
Isi tarah ki bato ke beech dad ne payment Kiya aur hmm log nikal pde Manali ki taraf
National Highway pe gadi de Dana Dan bhag rhi thi aise hi udhamchaukdi machate hui bdhe ja rhe the hmm..
Aur isi tarah hm log Manali enter kr liye the aur hotel ki taraf bdh chale
Dad ne pahle hi hotel book kr rkha tha aur hm log room me pahuch kr shower lene lge..
Fir mai headfone lgai hui mom ko bta ke bahar nikl aya hotel ke ..
Avi ...Mai age ki taraf ja hi rha tha ki honi ko kux aur likha jo ho ke hi rhti h ..isi quote ke madenajar mere sath bhi aisa hi hua ..
Ek baccha rode pe tha aur samne se car aa rhi thi teji se maine dekha aur bache ki taraf jump lga di bache ko to safe kr diya pr khud ko safe n kr Paya aur accident ho gya mera..
Mujhe vha se ladke ki mom ne hospital le gyi aur mom dad bhi pahuch gye the ....
Mom .... Ye kaise ho gya doctor koi jyada serious injury to nhi ayi...
Doctor... Mam injury to h jo hosh me n aye to kux kha nhi ja skta...
Isi tarah 1 din beet gya per hosh nhi aya.
Doctors apni jee Tod kosis ke rhe the pr result abhi tk nhi nikla tha ...
Sab log bahar baithe the aur mere pas bhi koi n tha usi waqt mujhe hosh aya ki tabhi..

[*Ding*....system activated....*ding*]

Avi... Ye awaaz to mere ander se aa rhi per ye kaise possible h kon ho tum samne aao. .
[System... Hello host I am system...]
Avi... Ye kya nam h aur ho kon tum jo ye sb bol rhe ho ....
[System..aap hi koi naam de dijiye mai to universe me se tahal rhi thi ki usi pal apki jan jane wali thi to mai aap me pravesh kr gyi ..]
Avi..huuuiuuuu...
Axa mai nam to mmmmm h yad aya tum ne meri jam bachai h aur aisi chize duniya me hoti bhi nhi to tum pari type ho isiliye tumhara nam pari...
[System...ding..name changed by host ..it's pari]
Avi... Pariiiiii. Ab mujhe ye bhi bta do ki ye system kya kya kar skta h..
[Pari... System apko koi bhi task dega jisko complete krte ho apko points aur currency bhi mile gi jis se ap koi bhi chiz khareed sakoge..]
*Ding*
[System lev1.....]
[Currency skill reward by system it's free
Aur app apna stats bhi dekh skte h..
Bs apko mn me bolna hoga "check stats"...]
Avi....hmmm check stats
*Stats* :
[Strength - 15/100
Intelligence -11/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 9/100]

[Pari.. yar ye stats kafi week h]
Avi...hmm Mai janta hu ...
[Pari .... Are koi tension nhi lene ka mai hu n]
Avi ...thanks pari
Isi tarah ki bato ke beech nurse ayi aur usne dekha ki mai roof ko taaad rha hu ..
Vo bhagti hui gyi doctors ko btaya ki patient ko hosh aa gya... Ye sun doctor mere room ki taraf nikle aur enter kiye mere room me....
Mera check up krne ke baad vah bahar jane lge
Mom .. kya hua doctor ...
Doctor.... patient ko hosh aa gya he is fine
Itna sunte hi daud padi peeche dad aur us ladke ki maa bhi aa gyi..
Mom...Mera laal kaisa h tu meri to Jann hi nikle gyi thi tere bina mera kya hota ..
Avi ...mom relaxe kux hua to nhi n
Lady... Thank you beta tumne mere sahare ko bccha ke upkaar Kiya h mere uper..
Avi... Are aunty thanks kaisa ye mera farz tha...
Dad .. aur nhi to kya mere bete ne apna farz hi nibhaya h isme koi thanks khne wali bat hi nhi h
Lady... Ye to app logo ka badappn h ..
Isi tarah ye bate hoti rhi aur fir wo lady chali gyi thi rah gye to sirf hm log .. kha aye to ghooomne aur aa gye hospital aisa maine bola tha ..
Mom ....jyada nhi bolne lga tu bs theek ho ja axe se khabar loongi...
Dad ... Areee bas bhi kro yr use rest krne do
Fir 2 din bad muzhe discharge mil gya aur is beeeh meri aur pari ki dher sari bate Hui ..
Hmmm log hotel phuche aur fir doosre din ghoomne nikl liye aur poore Manali ko ghooma aur adventure Kiya aur idhar uder ghoom rhe the
Agle din hm rafting krne nikl gye ki tabhi .....

*Ding*
[The old man save rafting accident
Reward- 60 point and 50L
Otherwise you loose system]

Avi... Mai sochne lga isi time ye task ana tha aur kabhi aa jata ... Ab to Krna hi pdega..

*Ding*
[ Navigate ...start
Straight 200m then left 100m then right 200m
And reach destination
Time period 20 minutes ]

Ab mai chal pda jaise jaise pari navigate kiye ja rhi thi vaise ja rha tha ki dekha old man kafi buri tarah jakhmi ho chuke h jo unhe imidiate nhi bachaya gya to he is no more...
Mai age badh kafi massakat se unhe waha se nikal ke medical store pe le ja kr unki marham Patti karai aur vo mujhe dekh rhe aur bs thanks khe ja rhe the...
Avi .... Koi bat nhi dada ji ye to Mera farz tha ..
Old man ... Thanks beta Aaj kal koi kisi ki madat nhi krta waise mai murti...aur beta tumhara kya nam h..
Avi... Avinash nam h par sb log mujhe avi bulate h..
Murti.. avi ye mera card lo kabhi bhi mumbai ana to mere pas jaroor ana...[real estate ka bussiness]
Avi... Ok dada ji mai jaroor aunga axa mai chalta hu ...
Aur vha se nikl jata hu...

*Ding*

[60 points have been rewarded.and 50L created in system acount]

[System has reached Level - 2]

[Congratulations master!!!Woohoo~]

Mere chehre pr khusi saaf jhalak rhi thi.
Avi.. pari inn points ka kya kre ...
[Pari...inse apne stats kam se kam 50 sbko kr lo]
Pari se avi ko 60 point mile the unhe invest Krna tha ab...
Usne 20 points strength me daale, 30 points intelligence aur 10 points appearance me.
Ab uske stats kuch iss prakaar the
*Stats* :
[Strength - 35/100
Intelligence - 41/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 19/100]
In stats ka asar ab agle morning ko hi dikhega..... .. !!
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Dhanyavaad!
Like kar dena pasand aaye toh!

Nice update

 

[maya1]

Start to achi hai story ki bhai

Thanks bro

 

[maya1]

Nice update

Thanks bro

 

[Naik]

Update 3.~~ {1st mission}

Ab tak
Aur sb log taiyar ho kar niklte h safar pe four wheeler se dad gadi chala rhe the bagal me mom baithi thi peeche Mai tha aur apne safar ka anand lete hue ja rhe the...

Ab age
Ghar se nikl ke hm log national highway pe aa gye the aur gadi apni raftar se chal rhi thi khusnuma mahaul holidays mnane ka jonoon charam pe isi tarah hm log hasi khusi age bd rhe the....
Dopehar ka waqt tha hm logon ko bhook lgi thi .....
Avi...dad bhook lgi h aap khi pe rok lena ..
Dad... don't worry beta abhi Jo bhi restaurant ayega whi pe rook jayenge ...
Mom.... Hmm kafi der bhi ho chuki h hm logo ko baithe baithe avi to piche baithe game khel rha tha iska bdhiha h ...
Avi...mom ap bhi aa jayiye squade me khelenge
Ha..ha..ha..
Dad...ye mere sath khelengi squad me kyo ji...
Mom..ohhh Mai apke sath n khel riii
Isi tarah bate ke rhe the ki restaurant dikh gya hme to dad ne side me car lga di aur ander phuch gye hm log . .
Dad...sardar ji jra kadhai paneer lga dijiye..
Sardar ji... Oh kake abhi lg riha h..
Hm log table pe baith gye aur waiter ake service provide krne lga ..
Avi... Ummmmm kya paneer h sardar jii mja aa gya.... Mom ap bhi seekh lo
Dad.... H beta tu shi kh rha
Mom.... Apka matlab h ki mai khana nhi pati..
Dad... Are bhagywan maine aisa kb kha ...ye kh rha tha faltu me fasa diya he bhagwan bacha liyo
Mom... Bhagwan n ane wale bs ap ghar chlo batati hu aur tu avi thaher ja batati hu
Avi ke Kan pakdte hui kha tha..
Avi...mom bakhsh dijiye bacche ki jan logi kya kyu dad shi kha n apki jan kisi dusre ki jan ke sath khilwad kr rhi...
Dad... Hahahaha
Mom... hahahaha..kisi dusre ki jan..
Isi tarah ki bato ke beech dad ne payment Kiya aur hmm log nikal pde Manali ki taraf
National Highway pe gadi de Dana Dan bhag rhi thi aise hi udhamchaukdi machate hui bdhe ja rhe the hmm..
Aur isi tarah hm log Manali enter kr liye the aur hotel ki taraf bdh chale
Dad ne pahle hi hotel book kr rkha tha aur hm log room me pahuch kr shower lene lge..
Fir mai headfone lgai hui mom ko bta ke bahar nikl aya hotel ke ..
Avi ...Mai age ki taraf ja hi rha tha ki honi ko kux aur likha jo ho ke hi rhti h ..isi quote ke madenajar mere sath bhi aisa hi hua ..
Ek baccha rode pe tha aur samne se car aa rhi thi teji se maine dekha aur bache ki taraf jump lga di bache ko to safe kr diya pr khud ko safe n kr Paya aur accident ho gya mera..
Mujhe vha se ladke ki mom ne hospital le gyi aur mom dad bhi pahuch gye the ....
Mom .... Ye kaise ho gya doctor koi jyada serious injury to nhi ayi...
Doctor... Mam injury to h jo hosh me n aye to kux kha nhi ja skta...
Isi tarah 1 din beet gya per hosh nhi aya.
Doctors apni jee Tod kosis ke rhe the pr result abhi tk nhi nikla tha ...
Sab log bahar baithe the aur mere pas bhi koi n tha usi waqt mujhe hosh aya ki tabhi..

[*Ding*....system activated....*ding*]

Avi... Ye awaaz to mere ander se aa rhi per ye kaise possible h kon ho tum samne aao. .
[System... Hello host I am system...]
Avi... Ye kya nam h aur ho kon tum jo ye sb bol rhe ho ....
[System..aap hi koi naam de dijiye mai to universe me se tahal rhi thi ki usi pal apki jan jane wali thi to mai aap me pravesh kr gyi ..]
Avi..huuuiuuuu...
Axa mai nam to mmmmm h yad aya tum ne meri jam bachai h aur aisi chize duniya me hoti bhi nhi to tum pari type ho isiliye tumhara nam pari...
[System...ding..name changed by host ..it's pari]
Avi... Pariiiiii. Ab mujhe ye bhi bta do ki ye system kya kya kar skta h..
[Pari... System apko koi bhi task dega jisko complete krte ho apko points aur currency bhi mile gi jis se ap koi bhi chiz khareed sakoge..]
*Ding*
[System lev1.....]
[Currency skill reward by system it's free
Aur app apna stats bhi dekh skte h..
Bs apko mn me bolna hoga "check stats"...]
Avi....hmmm check stats
*Stats* :
[Strength - 15/100
Intelligence -11/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 9/100]

[Pari.. yar ye stats kafi week h]
Avi...hmm Mai janta hu ...
[Pari .... Are koi tension nhi lene ka mai hu n]
Avi ...thanks pari
Isi tarah ki bato ke beech nurse ayi aur usne dekha ki mai roof ko taaad rha hu ..
Vo bhagti hui gyi doctors ko btaya ki patient ko hosh aa gya... Ye sun doctor mere room ki taraf nikle aur enter kiye mere room me....
Mera check up krne ke baad vah bahar jane lge
Mom .. kya hua doctor ...
Doctor.... patient ko hosh aa gya he is fine
Itna sunte hi daud padi peeche dad aur us ladke ki maa bhi aa gyi..
Mom...Mera laal kaisa h tu meri to Jann hi nikle gyi thi tere bina mera kya hota ..
Avi ...mom relaxe kux hua to nhi n
Lady... Thank you beta tumne mere sahare ko bccha ke upkaar Kiya h mere uper..
Avi... Are aunty thanks kaisa ye mera farz tha...
Dad .. aur nhi to kya mere bete ne apna farz hi nibhaya h isme koi thanks khne wali bat hi nhi h
Lady... Ye to app logo ka badappn h ..
Isi tarah ye bate hoti rhi aur fir wo lady chali gyi thi rah gye to sirf hm log .. kha aye to ghooomne aur aa gye hospital aisa maine bola tha ..
Mom ....jyada nhi bolne lga tu bs theek ho ja axe se khabar loongi...
Dad ... Areee bas bhi kro yr use rest krne do
Fir 2 din bad muzhe discharge mil gya aur is beeeh meri aur pari ki dher sari bate Hui ..
Hmmm log hotel phuche aur fir doosre din ghoomne nikl liye aur poore Manali ko ghooma aur adventure Kiya aur idhar uder ghoom rhe the
Agle din hm rafting krne nikl gye ki tabhi .....

*Ding*
[The old man save rafting accident
Reward- 60 point and 50L
Otherwise you loose system]

Avi... Mai sochne lga isi time ye task ana tha aur kabhi aa jata ... Ab to Krna hi pdega..

*Ding*
[ Navigate ...start
Straight 200m then left 100m then right 200m
And reach destination
Time period 20 minutes ]

Ab mai chal pda jaise jaise pari navigate kiye ja rhi thi vaise ja rha tha ki dekha old man kafi buri tarah jakhmi ho chuke h jo unhe imidiate nhi bachaya gya to he is no more...
Mai age badh kafi massakat se unhe waha se nikal ke medical store pe le ja kr unki marham Patti karai aur vo mujhe dekh rhe aur bs thanks khe ja rhe the...
Avi .... Koi bat nhi dada ji ye to Mera farz tha ..
Old man ... Thanks beta Aaj kal koi kisi ki madat nhi krta waise mai murti...aur beta tumhara kya nam h..
Avi... Avinash nam h par sb log mujhe avi bulate h..
Murti.. avi ye mera card lo kabhi bhi mumbai ana to mere pas jaroor ana...[real estate ka bussiness]
Avi... Ok dada ji mai jaroor aunga axa mai chalta hu ...
Aur vha se nikl jata hu...

*Ding*

[60 points have been rewarded.and 50L created in system acount]

[System has reached Level - 2]

[Congratulations master!!!Woohoo~]

Mere chehre pr khusi saaf jhalak rhi thi.
Avi.. pari inn points ka kya kre ...
[Pari...inse apne stats kam se kam 50 sbko kr lo]
Pari se avi ko 60 point mile the unhe invest Krna tha ab...
Usne 20 points strength me daale, 30 points intelligence aur 10 points appearance me.
Ab uske stats kuch iss prakaar the
*Stats* :
[Strength - 35/100
Intelligence - 41/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 19/100]
In stats ka asar ab agle morning ko hi dikhega..... .. !!
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Dhanyavaad!
Like kar dena pasand aaye toh!

Apne bhi system bast per kahani shuru ki sahi h
Teen story ho gayi ab iss forum per
Dekhte h AAP kaha tak le jaate ho
Pehla mission Mila complete bhi ho gaya or rewards bhi mile
Dekhte h ab aage kia hota h
Badhiya shaandar update

 

[maya1]

Update 4.~~ {goosebumps...}

Ab tak
Usne 20 points strength me daale, 30 points intelligence aur 10 points appearance me.
Ab uske stats kuch iss prakaar the
*Stats* :
[Strength - 35/100
Intelligence - 41/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 19/100]
In stats ka asar ab agle morning ko hi dikhega..... .. !!

Ab age
Birds ki madur avaje aa rhi murge bang mar rhe aur mai ghode bech ke so rha ..
Ki tabhi mom mere room me ai aur mujhe dekhne lgi ....
Mom...kl tk to aisa nhi tha aaj iska face kafi glow kr rha h avi.. oo ..uth ja bete ....
Avi.... Mom sone do to aap meri neend ki dusman h jao mai aap se bat nhi krta kattti.....
Mom .... Arellleee mera Sona naraz ho gya chal uth ja tumhare dad breakfast krne ke liye taiyar baithe tumhari raah dekh rhe aur tu h ki uth nhi rha....ye to galat h n beta ...
Vaise tu ye bta Aaj kl ye face pe kya lga rha ho itna glow kr rha hmmmmm..
Avi... Are mom casually wash hi krta hu...
Mom... Ye to nainsafi h hmm ladies itna cream lgate h tb to glow nhi hota ....tum logo ka shi h
Avi... Are mom mai handsome hu to ladkiya bhi to lattu hondi..
Kahi aap to nhi ho gyi ....
Mom ...oooooo mai to impress phle se hu....
Avi ...to meri gf bn jaiyiye dad ko chodo
Mom...htttttttttt pagall CHL ja aur jaldi neeche aa
Mai guss gya bathroom me aur taiyar ho ke pahuch gya hall me ...
Dad... Aa gye barkhurdar bdi jldi n aa gye....
Avi ....apna to yhi time h dad
Dad... Bda aya time vala diya abhi ek kan ke niche suder Jana h tere ko ...
Dad... Bhagywan keval apke lad pyar se bigad rha h....
Mom.... Are haaa mera beta bigad thodi rha h mera pyara baccha .....
Avi... Thanks mom meri side lene ke liye ... Dad jalte h hmare pyar se...
Mom.... Tu shi kh rha h ...
Hm logo ne breakfast kiya mast aur fir wha se n uth jata to dad ne le Leni thi meri ....
Fir mai room me ake pari ko awaaz di
Avi...pari check stats...
[Pari...ok master...]

*Stats* :
[Strength - 35/100
Intelligence - 41/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 19/100]

Stats dekhne ke bad mai mom ko bta ke sonu ke ghar nikl liya ....
Raste me nikla aur auto leke pahuch gya sonu ke ghar wha pe aunty aur sonu hi the uncle to hotel chale gye the ...
Sonu... Aaao aaao mahanubhaav bdi kripa kr di jo darshan de diye ....
Avi.... Ha balak mai Manali ghoom rha tha
Sonu... Sale bachchodi n pel nhi yhi gand Tod dunga mujhe nhi bta sakta tha plan .....
Avi .... Are yr tu mama ke yha ja rha tha to Tera trip nhi barbad kiya ... Koi ni agli bar chalenge n sath me ...
Sonu... H jo agli bar n btaya n to Tod tena h ....
Avi ... CHL yr ghar ke ander yhi se bhejne ka plan h kya...
Sonu ... CHL ander vaise bhi ander achhe se khatirdari honi h tumai mujhse se bach gya ab bchna....
Hm ander pahuche hi the aunty ko dekha mere ko lg gya beta tu to gya.....
Aunty.... Sonu ye kaun h .....
Avi... Are aunty meri pyari aunty kahe itna gussa ho rhi ...
Aunty... Kahe gussa ho rhi tu pooch rha h tu nhi janta ....huuuuuuuu
Avi .... Are aunty busy tha fir tour pe chla gya time nhi mila sorry ab mai apse Milne aata rhunga
Aunty... Ata rhunga nhi har week mere pas ana hoga...tbhi tujhe mafi milegi ...bol krta h promise..
Avi .... Promise aunty....
Aunty...CHL ok tum log upper jao mai nasta bna ke lati hu .....
Fir hm log upper room me pahooch ke khelne lge pubg ......
Aur khelte khelte time ka pta hi n chala aunty nasta leke ayi hm logo ne nasta Kiya...
Aaj kafi chilliiiing ho gyi to mai bhi relax tha aur apne ghar ke liye aunty se Vida liya aur nikl liya apne raste ki tbhi....
*Ding*
[Help the police in capture running criminal ]
[ Reward - 100 points and 10 cr , a random skill]
[Other wise you loose 500 points]

Avi... Ye ajeeb lfda h sala mission n success ho to kuch n kuch khona padta h koi n Krna to pdega... Pari .. navigate kro
[Pari... Ok master navigate start....]
[500m straight jaiye master uske bad app right leke 200m chalenge to usi road pe daudta hua ata milega apko ]
Ab mujhe use kisi bhi kimat pe rokna tha to Mai nikal pda pari ke bataye hue raste pr aur apni destination pe pahuch gya aur intzar krne lga dekha to ek middle age ka admi aur uske piche police daud rhi ...
Mujhe to pari ne inform phle hi kr diya ab mujhe use kisi tarah rokna tha jisse vo pakad jaye ...
Aur mai direct use rok nhi skta tha nhi to personal dusmany ho jati isiliye apna rumal face pe bandh diya.. aur mai bhi daudne lga us aadmi ki taraf ....
Mai bhag rha tha udhar se vo aa rha tha aur pass bhi aa rhe the mujhe gali se aise nikalna tha ki use lge ki galti se bhid gye ..
Hua bhi aisa vo jb gali ke pass ane vala tha usi time usne piche dekha ki police abhi kitni door h usi samay mai gali se nikal ke usse bhid gya....
Gunda... Aeeee chokre dikhta nhi kya be...
Avi ...tere ko nhi dikta mere se bhid gya andha h kya be....
Gunda ...CHL nikl ... Time khoti n kr
Mai... Abe kya sale mere se muhchodi ....
Gunda....(Mn me Abe yr mujhe jldi niklna h kha iske muh lg rha) koi n CHL nikl
Mai... Kaise kaise log h ...aur mai dekh chuka tha ki police aa gyi h ye pakad jayega to mai usi gali me bhagne lga..
Utni hi der me jab vo uth pata ki police aa gyi aur vo capture ho gya
mai vha se bhaag nikla patli gali se ....
Jo vo mera chehra dekh leta to dikkat aa jati....
Jb kafi door aa jane ke bad realise hua ki kafi dur aa gya hu to rumal nikal diya.. literary hafff rha tha bhenchod mn me galiya bak rha tha ....
*Ding*...
[Mission successful]
[Reward~100 points and 10cr in bank account]

*Ding*
{Stock predictor. ....}
*Ding*
{ System level 2}
*Ding*
{10 times discount har khareedi pe...}
Mai... Kafi khush ho gya kafi chize mujhe mill gyi maine pari se bad me puchne ka socha aur nikal pda ghar.....
Maine auto vha se Kiya aur nikl pda .....
Ghar ke bahar pahuch ke door bell bjane lga...
*Tink tok*.........
Mom... Kon aa gya.....aur door khol diya ...are aa gya tu.. mil aya sonu se aur sb bdhiya h.....
Mai... Are tham jao mom sab log thik apko yad kr rhi thi aunty....
Mom... Axa CHL ja fresh ho ja ..
Mai nikal gya apne room aur bdhiya shower lene lga ....
Mast nahane kaa mja aa rha tha naha ke nikl ke mirror pe apne aap ko dekhne lga ab meri body pe kafi change the ...
Shorts phn ke bed pe gir pda... Kafi bhagdaud me thak gya tha ....
Lette hi rewards yad aye to socha chalo pari se Jann lete h.....kya bawaaalll h....
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Dhanyavaad!
Like kar dena pasand aaye toh!

 

[maya1]

Khair apun milte hai ab next update mai aagar accha Lage toa batana and be happy !!mai Puri kosis karunga jaldi update Dene ki tata dosto !!

 

[Achin_Saha18]

Update 4.~~ {goosebumps...}

Ab tak
Usne 20 points strength me daale, 30 points intelligence aur 10 points appearance me.
Ab uske stats kuch iss prakaar the
*Stats* :
[Strength - 35/100
Intelligence - 41/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 19/100]
In stats ka asar ab agle morning ko hi dikhega..... .. !!

Ab age
Birds ki madur avaje aa rhi murge bang mar rhe aur mai ghode bech ke so rha ..
Ki tabhi mom mere room me ai aur mujhe dekhne lgi ....
Mom...kl tk to aisa nhi tha aaj iska face kafi glow kr rha h avi.. oo ..uth ja bete ....
Avi.... Mom sone do to aap meri neend ki dusman h jao mai aap se bat nhi krta kattti.....
Mom .... Arellleee mera Sona naraz ho gya chal uth ja tumhare dad breakfast krne ke liye taiyar baithe tumhari raah dekh rhe aur tu h ki uth nhi rha....ye to galat h n beta ...
Vaise tu ye bta Aaj kl ye face pe kya lga rha ho itna glow kr rha hmmmmm..
Avi... Are mom casually wash hi krta hu...
Mom... Ye to nainsafi h hmm ladies itna cream lgate h tb to glow nhi hota ....tum logo ka shi h
Avi... Are mom mai handsome hu to ladkiya bhi to lattu hondi..
Kahi aap to nhi ho gyi ....
Mom ...oooooo mai to impress phle se hu....
Avi ...to meri gf bn jaiyiye dad ko chodo
Mom...htttttttttt pagall CHL ja aur jaldi neeche aa
Mai guss gya bathroom me aur taiyar ho ke pahuch gya hall me ...
Dad... Aa gye barkhurdar bdi jldi n aa gye....
Avi ....apna to yhi time h dad
Dad... Bda aya time vala diya abhi ek kan ke niche suder Jana h tere ko ...
Dad... Bhagywan keval apke lad pyar se bigad rha h....
Mom.... Are haaa mera beta bigad thodi rha h mera pyara baccha .....
Avi... Thanks mom meri side lene ke liye ... Dad jalte h hmare pyar se...
Mom.... Tu shi kh rha h ...
Hm logo ne breakfast kiya mast aur fir wha se n uth jata to dad ne le Leni thi meri ....
Fir mai room me ake pari ko awaaz di
Avi...pari check stats...
[Pari...ok master...]

*Stats* :
[Strength - 35/100
Intelligence - 41/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 19/100]

Stats dekhne ke bad mai mom ko bta ke sonu ke ghar nikl liya ....
Raste me nikla aur auto leke pahuch gya sonu ke ghar wha pe aunty aur sonu hi the uncle to hotel chale gye the ...
Sonu... Aaao aaao mahanubhaav bdi kripa kr di jo darshan de diye ....
Avi.... Ha balak mai Manali ghoom rha tha
Sonu... Sale bachchodi n pel nhi yhi gand Tod dunga mujhe nhi bta sakta tha plan .....
Avi .... Are yr tu mama ke yha ja rha tha to Tera trip nhi barbad kiya ... Koi ni agli bar chalenge n sath me ...
Sonu... H jo agli bar n btaya n to Tod tena h ....
Avi ... CHL yr ghar ke ander yhi se bhejne ka plan h kya...
Sonu ... CHL ander vaise bhi ander achhe se khatirdari honi h tumai mujhse se bach gya ab bchna....
Hm ander pahuche hi the aunty ko dekha mere ko lg gya beta tu to gya.....
Aunty.... Sonu ye kaun h .....
Avi... Are aunty meri pyari aunty kahe itna gussa ho rhi ...
Aunty... Kahe gussa ho rhi tu pooch rha h tu nhi janta ....huuuuuuuu
Avi .... Are aunty busy tha fir tour pe chla gya time nhi mila sorry ab mai apse Milne aata rhunga
Aunty... Ata rhunga nhi har week mere pas ana hoga...tbhi tujhe mafi milegi ...bol krta h promise..
Avi .... Promise aunty....
Aunty...CHL ok tum log upper jao mai nasta bna ke lati hu .....
Fir hm log upper room me pahooch ke khelne lge pubg ......
Aur khelte khelte time ka pta hi n chala aunty nasta leke ayi hm logo ne nasta Kiya...
Aaj kafi chilliiiing ho gyi to mai bhi relax tha aur apne ghar ke liye aunty se Vida liya aur nikl liya apne raste ki tbhi....
*Ding*
[Help the police in capture running criminal ]
[ Reward - 100 points and 10 cr , a random skill]
[Other wise you loose 500 points]

Avi... Ye ajeeb lfda h sala mission n success ho to kuch n kuch khona padta h koi n Krna to pdega... Pari .. navigate kro
[Pari... Ok master navigate start....]
[500m straight jaiye master uske bad app right leke 200m chalenge to usi road pe daudta hua ata milega apko ]
Ab mujhe use kisi bhi kimat pe rokna tha to Mai nikal pda pari ke bataye hue raste pr aur apni destination pe pahuch gya aur intzar krne lga dekha to ek middle age ka admi aur uske piche police daud rhi ...
Mujhe to pari ne inform phle hi kr diya ab mujhe use kisi tarah rokna tha jisse vo pakad jaye ...
Aur mai direct use rok nhi skta tha nhi to personal dusmany ho jati isiliye apna rumal face pe bandh diya.. aur mai bhi daudne lga us aadmi ki taraf ....
Mai bhag rha tha udhar se vo aa rha tha aur pass bhi aa rhe the mujhe gali se aise nikalna tha ki use lge ki galti se bhid gye ..
Hua bhi aisa vo jb gali ke pass ane vala tha usi time usne piche dekha ki police abhi kitni door h usi samay mai gali se nikal ke usse bhid gya....
Gunda... Aeeee chokre dikhta nhi kya be...
Avi ...tere ko nhi dikta mere se bhid gya andha h kya be....
Gunda ...CHL nikl ... Time khoti n kr
Mai... Abe kya sale mere se muhchodi ....
Gunda....(Mn me Abe yr mujhe jldi niklna h kha iske muh lg rha) koi n CHL nikl
Mai... Kaise kaise log h ...aur mai dekh chuka tha ki police aa gyi h ye pakad jayega to mai usi gali me bhagne lga..
Utni hi der me jab vo uth pata ki police aa gyi aur vo capture ho gya
mai vha se bhaag nikla patli gali se ....
Jo vo mera chehra dekh leta to dikkat aa jati....
Jb kafi door aa jane ke bad realise hua ki kafi dur aa gya hu to rumal nikal diya.. literary hafff rha tha bhenchod mn me galiya bak rha tha ....
*Ding*...
[Mission successful]
[Reward~100 points and 10cr in bank account]

*Ding*
{Stock predictor. ....}
*Ding*
{ System level 2}
*Ding*
{10 times discount har khareedi pe...}
Mai... Kafi khush ho gya kafi chize mujhe mill gyi maine pari se bad me puchne ka socha aur nikal pda ghar.....
Maine auto vha se Kiya aur nikl pda .....
Ghar ke bahar pahuch ke door bell bjane lga...
*Tink tok*.........
Mom... Kon aa gya.....aur door khol diya ...are aa gya tu.. mil aya sonu se aur sb bdhiya h.....
Mai... Are tham jao mom sab log thik apko yad kr rhi thi aunty....
Mom... Axa CHL ja fresh ho ja ..
Mai nikal gya apne room aur bdhiya shower lene lga ....
Mast nahane kaa mja aa rha tha naha ke nikl ke mirror pe apne aap ko dekhne lga ab meri body pe kafi change the ...
Shorts phn ke bed pe gir pda... Kafi bhagdaud me thak gya tha ....
Lette hi rewards yad aye to socha chalo pari se Jann lete h.....kya bawaaalll h....
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Update 2

Flasback ............

RAmpur gauv me sb log kushal the thakur pariwar ki taraf se sb prakar ki madat mil rhi thi ...
Nageshwar ji apne shasan me kisi bhi pr dabav nhi dalte the ki sb uni ki gulami kre sbko smman dete the inhi ke kadmo me chalte hue inke beto me bhi yhi gunn the ....
Inke bete sbhi ka smman krte the aur gauv vale bhi inka smmman krte the dono hi bete bde hi mehnati the ....

Sabhi beto ki padhai gav se hi Hui .....
Dono bhai bhen business se related jankariyan bachpan se hi ghr me milti rhti thi jisse sbka man business me lgne lga .....
Suneel Jo bda tha vo city1(xxx) ke college maharana pratap management and technology se mba krne chala gya...

Anand gav me hi pdh rha tha sath me apni kheti ko bhi dekh rekh me lga hua tha abhi vah 11 th me tha ..

Suneel's point of view

Suneel college me phuch gya admition lene ke bad 1st year nikl gya padhte Hui 2nd year me suneel ki mulakaat Rani se hui aur friendship ho gyi dheere dheere dosti pyar me badalne lgi ....
Dono ko sath rhna axa lgne lga ase hi mba complete ho gya dono ka aur dono apne apne ghar to chale gye pr inke pyar ko parwan ke tar abhi bhi top gear me chal rhe the ......

Rani family


(Somveer shingh - sonpur ke thakur h aur ye apne area me dabdaba rkhte h inke chir pratidvandi nageshwar ji h inki ravelry business me chali aa rhi
Radha- housewife apne baccho ko bhut pyar krti h rani inki ladli h inke do bete ek beti h

Surjan shingh - ye apna pura business sambhalte h inke hotel chain h inke ek beti h aur ek beta
Rupa - apne nam ke jaisi h ye apni beti se bhut pyar krti h
Avni- bhut ki culbuli saitan h Ghar ki ladli h
Rajeev- padhai me brilliant h body bhi kafi katarnak h
Durjan - ye kafi katarnak h ye clothes factories ko smbhalte h jo kafi jagaho pe faili h ...
Madhuri - ye Apne bchoo se kafi pyar krti h inke 1 beti h ek beta h
Sanjeev - bhut ki bahadur aur nidar h apne bhai bhebo ki dal bn kar rhta h
Neelu - kafi sararti aur padhai me bhi top krti h

Rani - rani kafi suljee aur sbko Prem krne Vali h ye mba ki padhai ki h aur suneel se pyar krti h)

Suneel apne ghar pahuch gya aur usne apne pita ke business ko sambhalne lga idhar anand bhi mba kr ke apne business ko badhane lga inka bussiness hotel chain , clothes factories, malls h ........

Dheere dheere samay jata rha aur ab shadi ke rishtey Ane lge suneel ke par suneel ko to Rani se pyar tha .......
Suneel ne apne ghar me btaya ki vah thakur somveer ki beti se shadi Krna chahta h pr nageshwar chahte the vah apne dost ki beti se shadi krai ........
Isi me suneel aur rani ne nirnay liya ki hamare ma bapu ji to rishtey ko manenge nhi ham log bhag ke shadi kr lete h......
Aur fir hua yhi dono bhaag ke shaadi kr li ...
Aur idhar jab somveer aur nageshwar ji ko pta chala to dono hi bhadak uthe....

Nageshwar ji ne to suneel ko apni jaydat se nikal diya aur ye ghoshna kr di ki ab rampur ka thakur mere bad anand hoga....

Idhar somveer ne bhi ailaan kr diya ki rani unke liye mar gyi h...

Suneel aur rani ne curt marriage kr li aur ab vah apne ghar ja nhi sakte the to vah up ko chod kr uttarakhand me ja bse ...
Samay apni raftar se chal rha tha aur suneel Private limited me ek post pe kam krne lga .. aur apne patni ke sang rhne lga . Sadharan jeevan jine lge samay beetta rha aur rani aur suneel apni jeevan ko smbhalte hui naye ayyam pe phuch rhe the.....

Roj rat ko suneel aur rani kee kamkrida hoti aur usi ke falswaroop rani pregnant ho gyi ...
Aise hi 9 months beet gye aur rani ke pet me ek din achanak dard hua aur use hospital me admit kraya gya ......

Aise hi vah subh gahri aa gyi jha apne hero Avinash ka jan hua ........
Nurse opretion theatre ke bahar nikalte hue suneel ko btaya ki apki patni ne bete ko janm diya h .....suneel Aaj kafi kush tha suneel ke dost bhi dekhne aye aur vo bhi kafi kush the kyoki bhatija jo aaya tha....


Suneel friends

(Raju - suneel ka friend sath ki private limited me kam krta tha
Mamta - ye kafi ache swabhav ki mahila h ye rani ko apni bdi bhen manti h)

Dheere dheere samay nikalta gya aur avi bhi bda hota gya suneel ka transfer Jaipur ho gya aur vah Jaipur settle ho gya.

Avinash( avi ) ka admition Jaipur school and College me kra Diya aur vo padhne lga aur isi tarah vo 11 th me aa gya ....

Avinash holidays me apne ma aur papa ke sath kl Manali ja rha tha car se ...

Avinash ke sabdo me chale gi story ab......

Maa - abhi tak so rha hoga use abhi to taiyar bhi hona h Jake dekhu utha ki nhi ...
Mai - mai Aram se bekhbar so rha tha
Maa - mere room ke enter krti h dekho kaisa so rha ek dum masoom h mera beta ....
Avi.. oo .avi uth ja chlna nhi kya
Mom sone do n abhi time h aisa kro aap bhi aa jao aur mom ko luta lete hu ...
Mom - uth ja papa jg gye unhone dekha tu abhi tk so rha gussa krenge
Jaise hi papa ka nam suna jhattt se uth gya aur ghus gya toilet me
Mom hasti hui chli gyi man me sochte hui kitna darta h apne papa se ....
Mom - ajji uth jao apka beta bhi uth gya aap h ki so rhe hme chlna bhi h
Dad - darling tum bhi abhi so jao ya ek round ho jai mja aa jayeyega ma ko apne seene se lgate hui kha tha.....
Mom - dhattt abhi bhi aap vaise hi h...
Dad - tum bhi to lgatar khoobsoorat hoti ja rhi ho ...kaise n mn ho lgta h nichod du ......
Mom - hatto ji sharam nhi ati beta jawan ho gya aur apko Masti sujji rhti h...
Dad - are usme kya apni patni ko pyar bhi na kre ab btao bhi...
Mom - axa ji kiss krne lgi aur kux minute me dono alag hote h
Dad bathroom me chle jate nahane ma bhi bahar aa jati h....

Aur sb log taiyar ho kar niklte h safar pe four wheeler se dad gadi chala rhe the bagal me mom baithi thi peeche Mai tha aur apne safar ka anand lete hue ja rhe the...


Flashback end........

Nice start and Congratulations for new story dear
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