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Thriller DIL,DOSTI AND REVENGE (action,thrill, suspense and romance)(Completed)

Aapko ye story kaisi lag rahi hai jarur bataye.

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Rahul0087@

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Super planing ki thi yar ya aurat or mard ha kon akhir jo itna suspense bnaya hoa ha
Thanks for your support Bhai......



Next update de diya hai........

Bhai un dono ka koi role nhi hai. Bus yahi unka kaam khatam hai. Isliye unke bare me jyada jaankari nhi di hai....
 
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Rahul0087@

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UPDATE 20






Mene usko dekha to uske kandhe se khoon se nikal Raha tha. Tabhi ek or aawaj aayi pechhe ka guldasta toot gaya to Bhai ne turant hi sab ko neeche letne ko kahe or chhupne ko. Kyuki koi goli Chala Raha tha. Or hamare pass keval do gun thi. Bhai ne aage se unper firing Kar di lekin koi target lock nhi tha. Isliye vo bhi yaha baha goli Chala rahe the. Tabhi Bhai ko thoda time mil gaya. Or hame bhi jisse hamne aapni aapni position le li Bhai ne ek khidi ke pass the unhone Bahar dekha to unhe 4,5 bande hato me gun liye dikhe unhone Mujhe bataya. Bhai ne ek dum teen goli Chala I Jo sedhhe 3 aadmiyo ko lagi kyuki unhone abki baar target lock Kar diya tha. Vo log pedo KE pechhe chipe the lekin jaisi hi bo Bahar hue goli chalane KE liye tabhi Bhai ne unper goli Chala di Jo seedhe unko lagi or vo log bahi dher ho Gaye. Or Bhai chhip gaye. Mujhe laga koi peechhe se hamla na Kar de is liye me Bhai ko bol ke chhip Kar pichhle darwaje ki tarf gaya Vijay or Raj to bilkul apni jagah se hill bhi nhi rahe the. Mene peechhe check kiya to peechhe 2 log aa rahe the gate ki tarf or Maine apne target ko lock kiya or fire Kar diya lekin mene 5 goli chalayi jab un dono ko ek ek goli lagi. Mere nishana itna achha nhi tha. Fir bhi vo log mar Gaye fir me bahar aaya or chhip Kar aage ki tarf dekhne laga ki koi or bacha hai kya. Lekin Mujhe koi nhi dikh Raha tha fir bhi Meri 6th Sense keh rahi thi ki ye itni jaldi khatam nhi ho sakta. Fir Maine jhadiyo ki aad me aage bada to Mujhe ek ped par ek sniper dikha. Mene uske pechhe hua or usko bahi se seedhi goli Mari Jo uske bheje me aar paar ho gyi. Tabhi kisi ne mere sar par gun laga di or bola handsup.

maine apni gun neeche gira di or dheere dheere pechhe muda. To pechhe ek hatta katta aadmi khada tha or uske sath 3 aadmi or the. Main apne hath oppar kiye khada tha. Maine unse pochha ki kon ho tum or Kya chahte ho

G1- tumhari mout or Jo tumne hamare aadmi pakad rakhe hai unki rihayi.

Abhi vo itna hi bola tha ki Maine ghoom Kar ek round kick laga di uski gardan per. Jisse bo turant hi neeche gir gaya. Or ye dekh Kar vo abhi goli chalate ki pechhe se Bhai ne ek goli chalayi Jisne seedhe ek ki khopdi ko khol diya. Or vo abhi kuch samjte tab Tak Maine jhat SE ek aadmi ke peeche gaya or uski gardan ko mod diya bo bhi dher ho gaya. Ab bacha keval ek or uski Hawa tight ho gyi thi use kuch samaj nhi aa Raha tha ki Kya Kare jab Tak Bhai ne ek or goli Chalai Jo seedhe uski khopdi me ghus gai.

Ab vo aadmi utha jisko Maine kick Mari thi or Meri tarf dekhne laga abhi vo kuch karta usse pehle hi Bhai ne usko pechhe se jump maar Kar ghutne ko uski Reed ki haddi me de mara. To vo aage ki tarf hua itne me mene uski gardan ko pakad Kar ghuma diya or sab ka kaam khatam ho gaya. Tabhi us Khanna ka phone Baja Jo mere pass tha. Maine call dekha to koi unknown no. Tha Maine call received kiya to udhar se kisi ki aawaj aayi.


Aadmi- kya baat hai maza aa gaya Teri fight dekh kar. Lekin abhi bhi kuch kami hai.

Main- ha Mujhe pata hai ki Kya kami hai lekin tu chinta mat Kar tu Jo bhi hai Tere liye ye Meri aadhi aadhuri fight skill hi kafi hai.

Aadmi-. Sayad… tu mujh per bhari pad Jaye lekin Tera Jo dost Hain na vo Kya naam hai uska ha yaad aaya Vijay uske sath me Kya Kya Kar sakta hu tu soch bhi nhi sakta.

Me uski baat sunke bilkul sunn ho gaya. Or jaldi se Ghar ki tarf bhaga. Or mere peechhe Bhai bhage. Jab me Ghar me aaya to dekha ki Raj ko ek or goli maari gayi Jo uske seene me lagi. Or Vijay ko mene dekha to vo Mujhe pore Ghar me kahi nhi dikha. Itne me phone per Mujhe uski aawaj aayi hasne ki to Maine usko kaha

Main- agar Vijay ko ek kharoch bhi aayi to sale tujhe paatal se bhi dhood Kar usi paatal me jinda gaad dunga or tu ye baat jitni seriously le sakta hai le le. Samjha.

Aadmi- ab Jara phone ko loud speekar par Kar

Maine kiya to usne fir bolna suru kiya.

Aadmi- are Rocky Bhai kaise ho Jara samjhao apne us Bhai ko ki Rana kya cheez hai .


Bhai- rana Mujhe laga hi tha ki ye Tera hi kaam ho sakta hai lekin tu chinta mat Kar ye Tera aakhiri kaam hoga kyuki Surya bhale hi tujhe jinda chhod de lekin me tujhe nhi chhodne Wala.

Rana- are Kya Rocky Bhai aap to naraz lag rahe hai. Chalo koi baat nhi. Aap mere aadmiyo ko chhod do me tumhare aadmi ko chhod dunga.

Main- abe is Khanna ke liye tu khud aaya hai. I can't believe this yaar Matlab Tere bare me jo suna tha sab galat hai Sala chindi chor KE liye dusra chindi chor aaya hai. Ye kehke me hasne laga or sath me Bhai bhi.

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Rana- ab tujhe Jo samajhna hai samajh bus aaj raat me 12 baje Mujhe Mera aadmi chahiye bo bhi sahi salamati. Jagah me tumko sms Kar dunga. Or koi bhi chalaki ki to bhale hi tu mere aadmi ko maar de Mujhe jyada Fark nhi padega lekin agar Maine Tere is so called dost ko maar diya na to tujhe jaroor bahut Fark padega iss liye no hoshiyari ….

Ye keh ke usne phone kaat diya.


Or main or Bhai fir neeche aaye or Raj ki navz check ki to abhi chal rahi thi fir Maine or Bhai ne usko gadi me leetaya or usko hospital ki taraf le Jane lage. Hum hospital pahuche or doctar ne usko dekh Kar seedha ICU me le Gaye. Jaha uska operation hone laga Maine Bhai ko Ghar bhej diya kyuki vo Khanna abhi bhi Ghar par tha. To Bhai chale Gaye. Or me yahi per reh gaya. Thodi der baad Mujhe ek idea aaya to Maine Bhai ko call kiya or unse thodi baat ki to unko bhi idea achha laga. Fir main phone cut karke bahi baith gaya. Abhi saam ke 7 baje the hamare pass 5 ghante the Vijay ko chhudane ke liye. Karib ek ghante baad doctor ICU se Bahar aaye or unhone kaha ki Raj ab khatre se Bahar hai. Thoda uska blood lost hua tha jisse usko kuch kamjori hai jisse bo abhi behosh hai lekin subah Tak hosh aa jayega. Fir Maine hospital ki fees bhari or doctor se kaha ki me raat ko aaoga abhi Mujhe kaam hai aap security ka dhayan rakhe koi bhi mere alawa andar na Jane paye.doctar ne Meri baat maan li. Kyuki jab doctar ne Raj ko admit kiya to vo sath me police ko bulane ka kehne laga tab Bhai ne usko apna I card dikha diya jisse vo shan't ho gaya.

Or doctor ko bye bol ke nikal gaya. Ab chuki gadi to Bhai le Gaye the to Maine texi ko pakad liya or usse hi apne address per pahuch gaya. Jab andar aaya to baha koi nhi tha mene Bhai ko call kiya to unhone Mujhe neeche bulaya. Me neeche gaya to baha par ek scatch artist that or Khanna usko Rana ka scatch Bata Raha tha. Ab aap sochenge ki Khanna ko pata nhi Chala goliyo ki aawaj se ki humper

Humla hua hai to me Bata du ja hum unse baat karke uper Gaye the tab Bhai ne unko fir se behosh Kar diya tha. Jisse unhe kuch bhi pata nhi Chala ki yaha Kya hua hai. Or rahi baat jaggu ki vo kaha hai to jab humne Khanna ko pakad liya tha uske baad jaggu ka koi kaam baki nhi tha. Isliye Bhai ne uska kaam tamam Kar diya tha.

Ab aage.



Karib ek ghante me Rana ka scatch bilkul ready ho gaya tha. Bhai ne bo scatch Khanna ko dikhaya to Khanna ne turant pehchan liya ki yahi hai Rana. Mene us scatch ko dekha to sakal se koi nhi keh sakta tha ki ye itna khookhar criminal hai. Hame in sab me 10 baj Gaye the. Fir Bhai ne us scatch aartist ko bhej diya. Or firse un teeno ko behosh Kar diya. Fir thodi der baad Khanna ke mobile per sms aaya Jo sayad Rana ka hi tha. Usme address diya hua tha ki hame kaha milna hai. Bhai ne vo address dekha to unhe koi idea nhi tha ki ye kaha hai. Fir Maine googla map me us address ko dala to yaha se takriban 1;30 ghante ki rasta thi jo sehar ki dusri taraf tha or hum sehar ki opposite the. Fir Maine Bhai se kaha ki aap van me in teeno ko le jao or rahi weapon ki baat to aap Jo Bahar mare pade hai unke weapon le lo or kuch Mujhe de do. Or main aapka backup rahuga agar koi gadbad hui to me aa jaoga. Saamne. Bhai ko bhi ye idea thik laga. Fir humne un logo ke hathiya utha liye or Maine. Ek sniper rifle bhi le liye or sath me Raj ki pistol to thi hi or ek or badi machine gun le li

or Bhai ne bhi unke pass unki pistal to thi hi sath me unhone bhi ek machine gun le li.

Fir Maine or Bhai ne un teeno ek ek karke gadi me litaya sale behosh Jo the. Uske baad Bhai van se nikal Gaye. Or unse kuch Dori per me chal Raha tha. Hum dono phone se connected the. Taki baha kuch ho to Mujhe pata chalta rahe……….




To be continued…………….
 

Rahul0087@

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Zabardast yar mujhe lagta ha main villain hero ka koi saga rishtadar hoga
Thanks for your support Bhai....



Next update de diya hai......

Aapka manna may be sahi bhi ho sakta hai ya jhoot bhi....Kya pata.....
 
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