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Thriller DIL,DOSTI AND REVENGE (action,thrill, suspense and romance)(Completed)

Aapko ye story kaisi lag rahi hai jarur bataye.

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Rahul0087@

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UPDATE 88








Kafi der Tak baha khamosi chhai rahi. And fir vo bola.


Vikram- me kaise maan lu. Balki unka to Sara khandaan hi khatam ho Chuka hai. Tum jaroor koi behrupiya ho. Jo Meri hi tarah us jameen ko hadapna chahte ho.


Main-. Ye dekh Mera passport or ye Mera aadharcard. Ye sab original hai. Or hame maarne bale khud margaye. Lekin hame kuch nhi hua samjhe. Us raat bhale hi mere sab pariwar walo ki death ho gyi ho lekin us bhagwan ne Mujhe or mere Bhai ko bacha liya. Samjhe. Or Mujhe ISS jameen me koi interest nhi hai. Lekin jab Mujhe pata Chala ki tu gaon walo per julm karta hai or unko unka haq bhi nhi deta tab Mujhe yaha aana pada. Or ye jameen me aaj hi ISS gaon me rehne walo KE naam Kar dunga. So tu apni khair Mana. Agar tu sahi SE chalta to sayad aaj u sadak per na aaya hota. Lekin tu apne karmo ka fal hi bhugat Raha hai. Jaisa tune kiya ab bahi tujhe bhogna hai.


Meri baat sunke bo fir shan't ho gaya.


Vikram- tu Mujhe itni aasani SE nhi Hara sakta.


Or ye kehke usne ek gun nikal li or mujh per taan di. Mene uski aankho me dekha bina dare. Or bola.


Main- agar bakai tu ek thakur hai to Chala goli. Me bhi to dekhu ki tu Kya karta hai. Lekin ek baat yaad rakhna. Me keval ek galti hi maaf karta hu. Or ye gun nikal Kar tune vo galti pehle hi Kar di hai. Ab Teri mout pakki samaj.


Lekin vo goli chalata usse pehle hi Raj ne uske khopdi me apni gun taan di.

Raj- agar baha trigger dabaya to yaha bhi dav jayega. Or kasam SE aaj tu jinda na bachega.


Main- tehro raj.ye Mera shikar hai. Or ye kehke Mene uski chest per ek laat Mari. Jisse vo sofa sahit neeche gira. Mene usko uthaya or ghasit Kar Ghar ke Bahar le aaya. Or Mene apna belt nikala or uski dhunai chalu Kar di. Mene usko bahut Mara or fir usko bhagne ko bola. To vo bhagne laga. Or me uske peechhe vo gaon KE andar bhag Raha tha. Or me usko belt marte ja Raha tha. Jab gaon walo ne ye dekha to vo sab bhi Bahar aagye. Or ye najara apni aankho se dekhne lage. Ek jagah chourahe per vo gir gaya to me usko bahi apne belt se maarne laga uski haalat bilkul admari ho gyi. Tabhi ek bujurg aage aaye or bole.


Aadmi- beta kon ho tum or inhe Kyu maar rahe ho.

Main- me hu Surya VISWANATH ji ka pota. Or Jay Pratap ji ka beta.


Ye sunna tha ki baha sabhi ki aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi.or me apne kaam me laga hua tha. Usko aaj me jaan SE mar dene Wala tha. Tabhi peeche se kisi ne Mujhe dhakka diya.mene pechhe dekha to baha Sanjay khada tha.

Main-. Teri hi kami thi. Aa pitai me apne baap ma sath de.

Ye kehke Mene usko bhi belt SE peetna suru Kar diya. Usne thoda bahut bachav kiya to Mene apne hath or pav SE uske line me laya and dono ki sutai chalu ho gyi.


Aadmi- Kya tum Sach keh rahe ho beta. Tum hamare anndata raja saheb ke hi pote ho.

Main- ji ye Sach hai. Me unhi ka pota hu. Aap Meri sakal ko dekhiye and pehchaniye.


Unhone Mujhe badi gour SE dekha to. Vo foran pehchan Gaye.


Aadmi- ha beta tumhari sakal me tumhare dada or pita ki saaf chhabi jhalak rahi hai. Tum yakinan raja sahab me bansaj hi ho.


Or ye keh ke bo log sab mere aage jhukne lage. Jo mere liye unexpected tha.

Main- are ye Kya Kar rahe hai aap log. Please khade ho jaiye. Ye sab Mujhe pasand nhi hai.


Meri baat sunke vo sab bapas SE khade ho gaye. Lekin unke Mann me kafi sawal the. Jinka jawab bo chahte the. To Mene unko Bata diya ki us raat me kaise Bach gaya tha. Unko jab ye baat pata chali ki Meri bua Matlab GARIMA ji bhi Jinda hai to vo log unse Milne ki jid karne lage. To badi muskil se Mene unko manaya ki agli baar me jab aaoga tab unko sath leke aaoga.

Main- Kaka me agli baar yaha jaldi hi aana chahta hu lekin. Haweli ki haalat to aapko pata hi hai. To aap ek kaam kariye. Us haweli ki poori marammat karwa deejiye. Jitna bhi kharcha aaye me de dunga. Lekin me us haweli ko dwara besa hi dekhna chahta hi jaisi vo pehle thi.


Aadmi- beta aap bilkul fikar na Kar me iski poori jimmedari Leta hu. Bahut jald us haweli ko bilkul baisa hi bana dunga jaisi vo pehle hua karti thi.


Main- ji behtar. Fir ham uske dwara udhghatan me aayenge. Sab ko leke. Or ye us jameen ke kaagjat hai. Jis per isne apna adhikar Kar liya tha. Me ye sari jameen aap logo ke naam karta hu. Ispe AAP ko Jo bhi karna hai Kare. Ispe Jo bhi kheti karni hai vo Kare.


Ye kehke Mene ek kagaj per sign karke unko de diye. Bus fir Kya tha vo sabhi log Meri Jay Jay kaar karne lage. To Mene unko Mana kiya. Or kaha ki aap jaldi SE haweli ko thik karwa deejiye. Fir ham sab yaha aayenge. Or fir Mene Raj se gun leke bahi sab KE samne undono baap bete ko goli maar di. Jab ye najara in sab ne dekha to. Sab ne apna muh fer liya. Jaise ki unhone kuch nhi dekha. Mene unhi Kaka SE kaha ki Inka antim sanskaar karwa Dena. Or ye baat yahi khatam. Or ye aap sab KE liye bhi seekh hai ki. Agar koi bhi yaha apne gaon ya gaon walo KE sath galat karega to usko Meri adalat me yahi saja milegi. So. Hamesha achha kaam Karo and apne gaon ka naam Roshan karo. Me har kadam per AAP logo ke sath hu. Fir Maine unhi Kaka ko ek check diya or apna no. Bhi diya. Taki agar or jarurat pade to. Bo Mujhe phone Kar sake. Uske baad me baha SE Chala gaya. Un sab ne Mujhe rokne ki kafi kosis ki lekin Mene unko keh diya ki jab haweli complete ho jayegi. Tab rukunga. To unhone jyada jor nhi diya. Uske baad ham sab bpis Mumbai ke liye nikal Gaye. And me Ghar pahucha to bua or Bhai ne pochha.


Bhai- are ye Kya tu to ek din me hi AA gya. Mujhe to laga tha ki Kam se Kam 2-3 din to lag hi jayega.


Main- kya Bhai mujhe or itna time kabhi nhi lagta. Gaya or sab kaam ek hi din me khatam Kar ke bapis bhi AA gya. Bo to aapko lagta hai. Itna time.


Bhai- kya bola tune ruk tujhe batata hu me.


Or. Vo mere pechhe bhagne lage. Or me bua ke pechhe chhip Gaya. Bua ne hame alag Kiya and baha ke bare me jaankari lene lagi. Fir maine unko shuru se sab Bata diya. Ki baha Kya hua. Jise sunkar unhe bhi bahut khusi Hui..or vo bhi jaldi hi gao Jane ki jid Karne lagi. Lekin maine unko samjhaya ki haweli ka kaam poora ho Jane do fir chalte hai ham log. To bo maan gayi. Uske baad ham sab be dinner Kiya and room me Jake so Gaya ………






To be countinue………..
 
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Rahul0087@

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Kiya mast update tha bhai
Sala thaukar ki to surya ny bina tel ky hi maar li
Thanks for your support Bhai..........




Bilkul Bhai uski marna to Tay tha ab aage dekhiye kya maja aata hai......



Keep supporting..........




Next update de diya hai..........
 

Rahul0087@

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Rahul0087@

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Us thakur ki to band baja di bhai well done
Thanks for your support Bhai..........




Uski abhi or bhi bajegi sath bane rahe....




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Rahul0087@

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gjb update hai...

ab uski jamin aur paiso se gaanv walo ka kuch bhala karega surya....

yrr ab ronny, jo ki surya ka bhai hai,(aisa mughe lag raha hai.) ko surya se puri tarah mila dena chahiye kyuki teeno bhai millkar bahut bada kand kar sakate hai....

aur ek baat, sabhi gangs ko to mita hi rahe hai but apni gang ka name bhi rakho taki sabhi gangs ko lage ki koi unse bhi khataranak gang aayi hai...

awesome

keep update
Thanks for your support Bhai...........





Bhai ab Rony or Surya ka agla Milan Aage hi hoga or usme thoda time bhi lag sakta hai......
Or rahi baat team ke naam ki to koi achha sa naam suggest Kare AAP agar pasand aaya to bahi rakh denge......



Keep supporting...........




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